Benutzerbeiträge von „Tigercompanion25“

27. Februar 2016

• 17:4317:43, 27. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +7 K Santal (Volk) Missing word provided: "scheduled tribe of indigenous to" → "scheduled tribe of people indigenous to".

26. Februar 2016

• 19:0619:06, 26. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Bürgerkrieg von Brunei Decapitalzied "p" in an instance of "promised", which is not a proper noun.
• 19:0619:06, 26. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 Bürgerkrieg von Brunei Cleaned up garbled phrasing in a caption.

20. Februar 2016

• 21:4521:45, 20. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −19 Bourekas-Filme Missing comma provided; also changed "maringal" to "marginal", because I'm not sure what else it's supposed to be.

13. Februar 2016

• 18:5518:55, 13. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Filaret Wosnessenski Capitalized the "s" in "soviets" for the same reason mentioned in preceding edit.
• 18:5318:53, 13. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Filaret Wosnessenski Capitalized "s" in "Soviet", as the word is being used in reference to the Soviet Union.

10. Februar 2016

• 17:3117:31, 10. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Schwarze Hebräer Unnecessary comma removed.

9. Februar 2016

• 18:5918:59, 9. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Juliette Benzoni Another missing comma provided.
• 18:5818:58, 9. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Juliette Benzoni Missing comma provided.

5. Februar 2016

• 17:0717:07, 5. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Sudama Capitalized first letter in sentence.
• 17:0717:07, 5. Feb. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Sudama Out-of-place comma removed.

25. Januar 2016

• 17:1617:16, 25. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Byeonhan Added "s" to "appear", as the subject is the singular Byeonhan, rather than the plural Samhan confederacies.

9. Januar 2016

• 00:5300:53, 9. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Muhajir (Volk) Missing comma provided.

8. Januar 2016

• 21:3621:36, 8. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +16 Muhajir (Volk) Clean-up of "1947-1958" for grammar, punctuation, and coherency.
• 19:2219:22, 8. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −2 K Muhajir (Volk) Clean-up of heritage section: Subject-verb agreement issue fixed: "rich heritage... were" → "rich heritage was"; out-of-place comma removed.
• 19:2119:21, 8. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +11 Muhajir (Volk) Clean-up of "Karachi" subsection for punctuation and grammar.
• 19:1819:18, 8. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −95 Muhajir (Volk) Clean-up of "Decline of Mughal rule" section for grammar, punctuation, and tone (terms like "crushing victory" and "Afghan yoke" are not NPOV).
• 19:1019:10, 8. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen −46 Muhajir (Volk) Referring to the Mongol invasion of Central Asia as a "genocide" is original research and someone's opinion. Referring to the Mongol hordes as "barbaric" is also profoundly POV. Added some missing commas.

7. Januar 2016

• 21:4421:44, 7. Jan. 2016 Unterschied Versionen +4 K Muhajir (Volk) Missing definite article provided.

27. November 2015

• 19:3919:39, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −46 Muhajir (Volk) Undid revision 692690705 by WikiBulova (talk) Reverting good faith edit that isn't helpful; changing "partition" to "the independence" or "the Pakistan Movement" doesn't make things clearer.
• 17:1017:10, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −2 Muhajir (Volk) Cleaned up paragraph on Kayastha for grammar and punctuation.
• 17:0817:08, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Muhajir (Volk) Missing period provided.
• 17:0817:08, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Muhajir (Volk) Fixed some section headings: "Origin and Conversion theories" → "Origin and conversion theories"; "Contribution in literature" → "Contributions to literature".
• 17:0517:05, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +124 Muhajir (Volk) Changed two instances of "Urdu speakic" to "Mohajir", which seems to be what was intended; added clarify and citation needed tags to dubious entries in the "Origin and Conversion theories" section.
• 16:5116:51, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −11 Muhajir (Volk) Removal of nonsense phrase "Urdu Speakic".
• 16:4716:47, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +4 K Muhajir (Volk) Missing interpunct provided; out-of-place comma removed.
• 16:4616:46, 27. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −94 Muhajir (Volk) Removed captions for pictures no longer present in infobox; missing space provided between words.

6. November 2015

• 18:5218:52, 6. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +17 Hari Singh Added "not in citation given" tag to reference from Daily Pioneer, which makes no mention of Hari Singh.

3. November 2015

• 19:1319:13, 3. Nov. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −16 Priyanka Bose Replaced redundant phrase "Active on stage, doing theatre, and in films" with "Active on stage and in films".

3. Oktober 2015

• 18:5918:59, 3. Okt. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −80 Pakistan Movement Removed Zafarullah Khan from the section about non-Muslims who supported the Pakistan movement. Khan was an Ahmadi; Ahmadis are Muslim. They self-identify as Muslim. I know this is controversial to some people, but that doesn't change the facts.
• 18:5518:55, 3. Okt. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +3 Pakistan Movement Cleaned up garbled sentence.

13. September 2015

• 16:2216:22, 13. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Sakaka Out-of-place comma removed.

8. September 2015

• 18:0418:04, 8. Sep. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +155 Voula Zouboulaki Clean-up of the last paragraph for punctuation, grammar, and word choice. Also tagged a phrase that said she won an award in 1921, before she was born; it's a typo, but I don't have the correct date.

23. August 2015

• 18:5318:53, 23. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Mariem Hassan Out-of-place comma removed.

22. August 2015

• 19:5719:57, 22. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +16 Ratu (Fidschi) Clean-up of the intro for grammar.

14. August 2015

• 17:5017:50, 14. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Om Prakash Munjal Out-of-place comma removed.

11. August 2015

• 19:3919:39, 11. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Chief Keef Out-of-place comma removed.

4. August 2015

• 18:0418:04, 4. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −2 K Akhtar Mansur Two extra spaces removed; comma-splice resolved by replacing comma with semicolon.
• 18:0318:03, 4. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +16 Akhtar Mansur Rephrased unwieldy sentence.

2. August 2015

• 23:1123:11, 2. Aug. 2015 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Jun Hong Lu Typo fixed: capitalized first letter of sentence.

29. Juli 2015

• 17:4217:42, 29. Jul. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −1 K Suniti Solomon Extra space removed.
• 17:4117:41, 29. Jul. 2015 Unterschied Versionen 0 Suniti Solomon Copy-editing.

2. Juli 2015

• 00:4100:41, 2. Jul. 2015 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Yang Kyoungjong Decapitalized the "c" in "colonel" which, when not a part of a specific title (i.e., Col. Smith) is not capitalized.

28. Juni 2015

• 23:3523:35, 28. Jun. 2015 Unterschied Versionen −56 Yang Kyoungjong Minor rephrasing of a few sentences to avoid the repetition of the fact that Yang was sent to a POW camp in Britain, which was mentioned twice within just a few sentences, the second time as if we'd never heard it before.

25. April 2015

• 17:4817:48, 25. Apr. 2015 Unterschied Versionen 0 K Sabeen Mahmud Resolved comma-splice by replacing comma with semicolon.

18. April 2015

• 17:5417:54, 18. Apr. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Hagley Park Castle Missing semicolon provided.
• 17:5217:52, 18. Apr. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +1 Hagley Park Castle Minor subject-verb agreement issue rectified: "the floors has" → "the floors have".

28. Februar 2015

• 18:4918:49, 28. Feb. 2015 Unterschied Versionen +3 Die Lyrik Maya Angelous Missing word provided.

31. Dezember 2014

• 00:0300:03, 31. Dez. 2014 Unterschied Versionen −3 K Pferdekult Out-of-place word removed: "during in" → "during."

26. Dezember 2014

• 00:5000:50, 26. Dez. 2014 Unterschied Versionen +1 K Staatliches Sacharia-Paliaschwili-Theater für Oper und Ballett Typo corrected, grammar issue addressed.