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He corrected his postion, he has recently stated lebron to be the GOAT. This should be corrected in the opening page header [[Special:Contributions/2600:1700:6062:2480:753:C35A:AF25:3F97|2600:1700:6062:2480:753:C35A:AF25:3F97]] ([[User talk:2600:1700:6062:2480:753:C35A:AF25:3F97|talk]]) 01:02, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
== Ambiguous wording ==
Please reword the info regarding Lebron James' new record: "With 38,387 points, Abdul-Jabbar remained the NBA all-time leading scorer until February 7, 2023, when he was surpassed by LeBron James in Los Angeles, and he won a record six MVP awards." ... with the insertion of the Lebron info, the second part of the sentence is now unclear with regard to *who* won the MVP awards.
Suggest: "Abdul-Jabbar won a record six MVP awards, and with a career-record of 38,387 points, he remained the NBA all-time leading scorer until February 7, 2023, when he was surpassed by LeBron James." ... not sure "Los Angeles" detail matters in the context of this page. [[Special:Contributions/70.162.40.89|70.162.40.89]] ([[User talk:70.162.40.89|talk]]) 01:40, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
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