User contributions for Objectivesea

9 October 2023

• 09:5909:59, 9 October 2023 diff hist −2 Elliott Van Kirk Dobbie →Education and academic career: in two places, changed "edition" to "volume", since they refer to a muti-volume set which constituted a single published edition current

26 September 2023

• 02:4302:43, 26 September 2023 diff hist 0 m User:Objectivesea Updated edit count

18 September 2023

• 07:5507:55, 18 September 2023 diff hist +11 m Monteiro Lobato →Tributes: added definite article
• 07:5507:55, 18 September 2023 diff hist −15 Monteiro Lobato →Political ideas: stylistic improvements to English
• 07:3707:37, 18 September 2023 diff hist −6 m Monteiro Lobato →Biography: Minor changes to improve English style

12 September 2023

• 20:0020:00, 12 September 2023 diff hist +13 m Nicolle Wallace →Early life: Syntactic fencepost error corrected from "the eldest of four", which then appositionally named the other three; also removed a superfluous hyohen in a non-adjectival compound phrase
• 18:1518:15, 12 September 2023 diff hist +1,661 Old Style and New Style dates →Russia: -- added a section, translated from the Swedish-language Wikipedia, on the calendar problems as it happened in Sweden and Finland.

21 August 2023

• 05:2105:21, 21 August 2023 diff hist +53 m Poul Henningsen →Fleeing Nazism: clarified a muddy sentence

18 July 2023

• 09:2909:29, 18 July 2023 diff hist −20 David Foenkinos disambiguated "Sorbonne"; and, having added four references, from established publications, to the writer (whose works are sold in multiple languages), have removed "Notability" template.

17 July 2023

• 10:2510:25, 17 July 2023 diff hist +1 David Foenkinos →Education and career: added comma
• 10:2110:21, 17 July 2023 diff hist +2,485 David Foenkinos Added information from French Wikipedia, along with footnote references Tag: Disambiguation links added

29 June 2023

• 07:5607:56, 29 June 2023 diff hist +23 m Israel Zangwill n extra→Writings: minor syntax improvements: copula verb, plural; as well as a Wikilink

26 May 2023

• 22:1522:15, 26 May 2023 diff hist +5 m Spitalfields →Administrative history: syntax improvement

13 May 2023

• 10:1810:18, 13 May 2023 diff hist +1 m Diana Gabaldon →Novels: added a comma, removed a hyphen

11 May 2023

• 23:1323:13, 11 May 2023 diff hist +113 Ellis Ross →Career: updated with winner of leadership race, also recast a passive sentence in active voice

26 April 2023

• 22:1722:17, 26 April 2023 diff hist −2 m Executive Council of British Columbia →Cabinet: changed two instances of "Minister for" to "Minister of", as is current standard nomenclature -- https://www2.gov.bc.ca/gov/content/governments/organizational-structure/cabinet/cabinet-ministers

24 April 2023

• 00:4600:46, 24 April 2023 diff hist 0 m Henrik Ibsen →Myths and reassessment: uncles —> uncle; added a comma between two independent clauses

22 March 2023

• 18:1618:16, 22 March 2023 diff hist −13 Rātana →Symbols: changed "substituted for" to "replaced with", to agree with the yellow colour in the image Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:4517:45, 22 March 2023 diff hist +2 Māori electorates →Establishment: Added an indefinite article and a hyphen in 'per-capita,' being used attributively Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 March 2023

• 21:4421:44, 17 March 2023 diff hist +110 m Newfoundland and Labrador House of Assembly added citation-needed request
• 21:0021:00, 17 March 2023 diff hist +67 m Elisheva Bikhovski →Hebrew education: separated long paragraph into three parts, added sub-subheads
• 19:5119:51, 17 March 2023 diff hist +224 Food labelling and advertising law (Chile) added four wikilinks, improved punctuation with hyphens in compound adjectives, NPOV (others utilize it —> others say they utilize it); added another link to a cited publication to avoid so-called "weasel wording"
• 19:0119:01, 17 March 2023 diff hist +1,517 User talk:Objectivesea →February 2023
• 18:2718:27, 17 March 2023 diff hist −2 m User:NUstudent1316/citing sources Corrected the spelling of Ōshima Strait to avoid redirect current

14 March 2023

• 08:4308:43, 14 March 2023 diff hist −5 m Convention on the Rights of the Child →States party and signatories: fixed a verb tense

18 February 2023

• 16:3116:31, 18 February 2023 diff hist +3 m Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) omitted pronoun
• 16:2916:29, 18 February 2023 diff hist +707 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) →Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia): Reply Tag: Reply
• 16:1916:19, 18 February 2023 diff hist +8 m Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) →Shepherd’s Village liquidation proceedings: punctuation
• 16:1716:17, 18 February 2023 diff hist +1,959 Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) Added information about the Shepherd’s Village financial scandal and liquidation proceedings
• 15:2615:26, 18 February 2023 diff hist +205 m Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) →Church demolition and temporary location: added another publication source
• 15:1015:10, 18 February 2023 diff hist +978 Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) added a paragraph on Redeemer's missionary and refugee activities.
• 15:0915:09, 18 February 2023 diff hist −136 m Canadian Lutheran World Relief removed a few unnecessary subheads
• 15:0615:06, 18 February 2023 diff hist −321 Canadian Lutheran World Relief passive voice changed to active; NPOV, added wikilinks
• 13:5313:53, 18 February 2023 diff hist +1,087 Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) →New Building: added more information and several wikilinks respecting the integral seniors facility
• 12:5112:51, 18 February 2023 diff hist +1,746 Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) updated with some of the history from 2012 and 2016, with additional reference to contemporary newspaper article
• 12:0912:09, 18 February 2023 diff hist −8 m Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) more redlinks
• 12:0812:08, 18 February 2023 diff hist −890 m Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) removed some redlinks, added a few wikilinks
• 11:5811:58, 18 February 2023 diff hist +10 Redeemer Lutheran Church (Victoria, British Columbia) updated with a wikilink to ''Lutheran Church–Canada'', recast some older information in a historical tense

14 February 2023

• 11:0311:03, 14 February 2023 diff hist +35 m Lola Dewaere →Early Life: clarified relationship
• 11:0111:01, 14 February 2023 diff hist 0 m Lola Dewaere →Biography: fixed a malformed wikilink
• 10:5910:59, 14 February 2023 diff hist −8 m Lola Dewaere punctuation, tightened syntax
• 10:5710:57, 14 February 2023 diff hist +2,640 Lola Dewaere Added five paragraphs based on the French Wikipedia.

11 February 2023

• 21:4321:43, 11 February 2023 diff hist +2 m Wachita Mountain two commas
• 21:3621:36, 11 February 2023 diff hist 0 m Salix nigra →Reproduction and Growth: form —> from
• 08:2608:26, 11 February 2023 diff hist −13 m Nelumbo nucifera →Traditional medicine: deleted two words to clarify a muddy sentence

5 February 2023

• 21:1221:12, 5 February 2023 diff hist −85 Opelousas, Louisiana simplified a sentence about the declining population

1 February 2023

• 21:4221:42, 1 February 2023 diff hist +12 m Grand-Pré National Historic Site added comma; inserted "might have" to qualify that the "threat" posed by the Acadians prior to their expulsion to the British was less real than conceived

25 January 2023

• 20:2120:21, 25 January 2023 diff hist +7 m Masnavi →Creation: removed an unnecessary "the", improved syntax in sentence about the inconclusive ending of the 6th book

23 January 2023

• 00:1300:13, 23 January 2023 diff hist −4 m Xerxes I Corrected a reference and supplied an online link.

18 January 2023

• 00:5700:57, 18 January 2023 diff hist +1 m History of Ghana explained first instance of "stool" as a throne, to prevent misunderstanding; improved English syntax