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30 July 2013

• 16:1316:13, 30 July 2013 diff hist +25 N User:Pengkeu/EditCounterOptIn.js ←Created page with '"Ballad of the Wind Fish"' current

7 August 2011

• 06:1506:15, 7 August 2011 diff hist 0 m National University of Mongolia university is a general (non-proper) noun

13 July 2011

• 07:2607:26, 13 July 2011 diff hist +1 United States →Parties and ideologies: "the party" makes it sound like a one-party system.. replace with "that party"
• 07:2407:24, 13 July 2011 diff hist +20 United States →Parties and ideologies: caption grammar; replace picture with less politically-charged one
• 07:2107:21, 13 July 2011 diff hist −78 United States →Parties and ideologies: Obama's swearing-in has little to do with parties/ideologies - DNC 2008 is much more relevant
• 07:1507:15, 13 July 2011 diff hist −52 United States →Demographics: shorten sentence on "Some Other Race" - to save space
• 07:1207:12, 13 July 2011 diff hist +35 United States →Demographics: saying *Ethnicity* American is redundant
• 07:1107:11, 13 July 2011 diff hist −4 United States →Demographics: developed nations is broader than specific countries / regions
• 07:1007:10, 13 July 2011 diff hist −2 United States →Crime and law enforcement: combine crime info into a single paragraph - now the section reads legal system, laws, and law enforcement --> crime
• 07:0707:07, 13 July 2011 diff hist −551 United States →Crime and law enforcement: The existing historical comparisons were ineffective, as they targeted only selected ranges of ten to thirty years - broad comparisons must look at centuries, not decades
• 07:0407:04, 13 July 2011 diff hist −43 United States →Crime and law enforcement: comparisons with Canada are narrow and inappropriate for an article as broad as this
• 07:0307:03, 13 July 2011 diff hist +1 United States →Culture: distinguish between the two contradictory models
• 06:4306:43, 13 July 2011 diff hist +627 Talk:United States →Two Party System: another response, for further reading
• 06:3306:33, 13 July 2011 diff hist +64 United States →Education: no offense to Saint Anselm College, but in an overview article about the United States, Harvard University is much more mainstream and notable - post on Talk:United States if you disagree
• 06:2906:29, 13 July 2011 diff hist −67 United States →Demographics: not enough room for multiple population figures - the current one is reliable because it comes from the publisher of the official statistic, the U.S. Census
• 06:2706:27, 13 July 2011 diff hist +7 United States →Energy: every word counts, and mentioning the name of the specific incident is not appropriate - remember, the entire presidencies of Kennedy and Johnson are combined into a single sentence!
• 06:2506:25, 13 July 2011 diff hist −286 United States →Transportation: Added highway info to replace marginally-useful info on breakdown by car type - ratio of sedans to SUVs is more microscopic than the country's transportation backbone
• 06:2006:20, 13 July 2011 diff hist +141 National Highway System (United States) world's longest highway system
• 06:1906:19, 13 July 2011 diff hist −5 Expressways of China use the specific name - the National Highway System is the more appropriate measure of the U.S. highway system anyways
• 06:1406:14, 13 July 2011 diff hist +79 Amazon (company) FT.com pegs Amazon.com as the WORLD's largest online retailer - if you have a contradictory evidence, please include it on Talk:Amazon.com
• 06:1206:12, 13 July 2011 diff hist −44 United States →Science and technology: Added info about the sheer reach of American Internet companies, while deleting comparative info that doesn't belong in a broad article like this one
• 06:0806:08, 13 July 2011 diff hist +48 N List of social networks List of social networking websites

12 July 2011

• 17:2317:23, 12 July 2011 diff hist +43 Tsinghua University →Campus: Add a note on proximity to Beida

11 July 2011

• 11:1311:13, 11 July 2011 diff hist +19 Homosexuality in China →Ancient China: homophobia is not a commodity - it is an approach found in both traditional and modern heterosexist cultures

8 July 2011

• 09:3109:31, 8 July 2011 diff hist −12 United States →Civil War and industrialization: correct plink
• 09:2809:28, 8 July 2011 diff hist +35 N Free and slave states Slave and free states
• 09:2809:28, 8 July 2011 diff hist −1 United States →Cold War and protest politics: grammar
• 09:2609:26, 8 July 2011 diff hist +4 United States →Government and politics: link to judicial review
• 09:2309:23, 8 July 2011 diff hist +14 United States →Foreign relations: Reduce POV - America has large GNI that must be contextualized, and private giving doesn't need to be compared with public giving ("in contrast" is a value judgment)
• 09:1709:17, 8 July 2011 diff hist −251 United States →Military: (1) Remove statements possibly intended to introduce POV by excessive comparison (2) Put commander-in-chief statement in better location
• 09:1109:11, 8 July 2011 diff hist +1,015 Talk:United States →POV Issues: response
• 08:5708:57, 8 July 2011 diff hist −30 United States →Economy: naming specific countries with higher productivity is not within the scope of this article (again, see Talk:United States)
• 08:5308:53, 8 July 2011 diff hist +131 United States →Economy: add sentence about U.S. dollar as reserve / trade currency
• 08:5008:50, 8 July 2011 diff hist +51 United States →Religion: Add in the small portion who are unsure about religion
• 08:4708:47, 8 July 2011 diff hist −48 United States →Religion: Converting ARIS references to Pew references (consistency for current data, so figures add up to 100% and there's no picking-and-choosing data), while ARIS is used for comparative trends
• 08:3508:35, 8 July 2011 diff hist +13 United States →Religion: better comparative analysis - use fractions like a-tenth and doubled
• 08:3208:32, 8 July 2011 diff hist +58 United States →Religion: Including historical data alongside current figures risks POV - instead, include trends in a separate sentence analyzing overall religious shifts
• 08:2608:26, 8 July 2011 diff hist −25 United States →Family structure: day care is more pertinent to this section than educational attainment
• 08:2108:21, 8 July 2011 diff hist +348 United States →Crime and law enforcement: Shorten up phrasing to clear up room - add section on drug/alcohol/tobacco policy
• 08:0808:08, 8 July 2011 diff hist −72 United States →Crime and law enforcement: USMS is not as notable as FBI --- FY 2011 USMS budget of $1.207 billion --- FY 2011 FBI budget of $8.265 billion
• 08:0108:01, 8 July 2011 diff hist −465 United States →Culture: rearrange and rephrase - give appropriate consideration to both the benefits and the downfalls of American class ideology/hierarchy - see discussion on Talk:United States
• 07:5407:54, 8 July 2011 diff hist −60 United States →Culture: Although American social mobility might pale compared with that of Canada, ''relative'' measures do not prove or disprove the ''absolute'' American Dream theory
• 07:4607:46, 8 July 2011 diff hist −8 United States →Popular media: In purely commercial terms, Harry Potter series and Avatar are biggest series/film respectively - if you have a better metric explain on Talk:United States
• 07:3907:39, 8 July 2011 diff hist −37 United States →Measurement systems: listing specific countries for comparison is unnecessary - three is small, no matter which countries they are
• 07:3307:33, 8 July 2011 diff hist −53 United States →Food: economy of space: explaining the marketing tactics used to popularize certain drinks is not within the scope of this article
• 07:3207:32, 8 July 2011 diff hist −1 Good faith rm. space
• 07:3007:30, 8 July 2011 diff hist +161 United States →Food: Dedicate a paragraph to fast food, one of the most iconic aspects of American "cuisine"
• 07:2707:27, 8 July 2011 diff hist 0 Drive-through →McDonald's: correct link
• 07:1807:18, 8 July 2011 diff hist −91 United States →Philosophy and the arts: remove wordy explanation about classical composer - economy of space means that we can name-drop Elvis and Madonna in a single sentence - must use space efficiently
• 07:1207:12, 8 July 2011 diff hist +114 United States →Popular media: Introduce popular media and media conglomerates, then explore movie and music