Talk:Thomas J. Hudner Jr./GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:40, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:40, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   Combine the two paragraphs of the first part of the Biography.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Don't capitalize track.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Vehicle referring to an aircraft?

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   This is awkward: Hudner attempted in vain to rescue Brown, before intentionally crash landing his vehicle to attempt to pull Brown from the burning wreck before running to Brown's side and attempting to wrestle him free from the wreck.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Change "In this time," to "During this time,".

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   DMY dates.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Publisher for Alexander.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Standardize dates of retrieval between cites 4 and 7.

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   What is first officer? Executive officer?

   Linked. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   What kind of ship was Helena?

   Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   Brown or Hudner flew 20 missions?

   Both did, from what I understand. —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Made all of the fixes. Thanks again! —Ed!^(talk) 19:41, 6 December 2011 (UTC)