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All edits to this page by all editors are now under 1RR. See the link above for details. SirFozzie (talk) 20:00, 5 October 2008 (UTC)

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Male personnel

I intend to remove the non notable members from this section Ronnie Gamble and Roy Marshall. It reads like a vanity piece concerning Gamble with an on line link to the pamphlet he self published. In fact I feel the whole section could be removed as it adds nothing to the article and we already have a list of notable members, any comments from editors would be very welcome. BigDunc^Talk 17:30, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

We probably need an overarchign "Personnel" section, with "Female personnel" as a subsection, and concentrate more on general personnel issues. The list of notable members is probably a bit OTT as it stands, maybe pick out a few fo the most notable, and otherwise have a "See also" link to the relevant category. If we could find some reviews of the book, it would probably be worth keeping mention of Gamble, and although even the ahrd copy of the book was published by the regimental association, there may still be some utility in his writing as a source for day-to-day activities of E Company.— Preceding unsigned comment added by David Underdown (talk • contribs)

As regard to gamble I have searched high and low for a review of his publication it is non notable and as I stated before the British Library dont even have a copy. Do you not feel that maybe the Greenfinches could have a seperate article David as IMO that would be something that could be expanded? BigDunc^Talk 18:18, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

I think we established that it would be more accurate to say taht it doesn't yet appear on the BL catalogue, rather than necessarily that they don't have a copy. On the Greenfinches, yes they probably are notable enough for their own article, but summary style dictates that they also need to be mentioned in this article. David Underdown (talk) 10:02, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

No I am not saying remove them all together just that it could do with an article on them and then trim it down. BigDunc^Talk 14:21, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Military campaign section

This section needs to come out as it reads like an article on the IRA and the missions they carried out only relevence it has to the UDR is that they were targets. BigDunc^Talk 22:31, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, I would not agree to removing the entire section as it gives a good detail of what was occurring on adaily basis. Perhaps the name of the section should be amended as 'Military Campaign' would usuall signify a major battle or similar. What about 'Attacks against the UDR'? Gavin Lisburn (talk) 23:54, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

So what would constitute an attack? Do we add one night billy the loyalist threw a petrol bomb or paddy the republican assualted an off duty member. It is IRA attacks on the UDR and as such is POV. BigDunc^Talk 09:22, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

As usual it's down to sourcing. If there's a good source for numbers of attacks on UDR eprsonnel, on or off duty, the tactics used, and which groups were responsible then it has a place in this article. From all I've seen attacks by Republican groups were far more common than those by Loyalists, which is hardly surprising given the nature of the conflict. Just because the majority of "blame" is pinned on one particualr group doesn't make it POV if there's good evidence to back it up. David Underdown (talk) 10:10, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Notable Members

I intend to revert this section into the 3 sub-categories of Professional Soldiers, Politicians & Others. It is important to place some order into a list like this. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 23:17, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Why? Is it like that in other articles? It is just a list of notable members and doesn't need ordering. BigDunc^Talk 23:20, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

You have left it as just a list of names without a suitable explanation or order. Readers do not want to have to click on each link to see who they are; they need a bit of assistance by the use of sub-categories. Previously, each sub-category had been ordered eg by rank where known etc. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 23:46, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Is that not the idea of linking articles so we have no need to add commentary on each name? Readers then follow the link and get a full run down on the notable member. BigDunc^Talk 09:17, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Some breakdown of the list does help the casual reader to understand why the names are considered notable in this context, are they notable purely as UDR men, or are they really notable in some other field which perhaps also makes their UDR service particularly worth noting. David Underdown (talk) 10:13, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

Reverted. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 00:10, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

You have not given any rational and just reverted while a discussion was taking place could you explain why you made your revert. BigDunc^Talk 01:56, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

I gave notice of an edit I wished to make; there was discussion from interested parties and I made the reversion. If this was the wrong action, please advise how long the discussion should have taken and how would the decision have been taken? Gavin Lisburn (talk) 00:10, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Hi Gavin Lisburn, the process of consensus varies. As to this discussion, I noticed that you addressed none of the issues raised at all really. For example David asks above "are they notable purely as UDR men, or are they really notable in some other field which perhaps also makes their UDR service particularly worth noting" you did not address this at all. Could I ask why you did not think it important enough that you dismiss this without comment? You will notice that David had begun to address the issues raised by Dunc, and you simply reverted? David, Dunc and myself have obtained some experiance of consensus building and from that I can safly say, there was no reasonable discussion in this case. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 18:39, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

What is required is a list of the commanders of the UDR with dates of service as is common for regiment articles. Does anyone have one? Then we can see who else is useful to include. The notable soldiers list contains both commanders and servicemen who are notable for their service with the UDR. Kernel Saunters (talk) 20:00, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

As David has pointed out above, is their service with the UDR all they are notable for? If it is, is that notable in itself? --Domer48_'fenian' 20:08, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

The people are notable in each of the 3 sub categories eg professional soldier (which covers off commanders etc), politicians and others (which includes a civil servant, a military subversive and a member of a family pressure group. The list is still open for all to add to. However, if it is decided to remove the sub-categories, then I still feel that would be moving in a backwards step. The article has improved quite a bit recently and no longer has edir warring. Perhaps it is time to consolidate the articlke and everyone leave be? Gavin Lisburn (talk) 20:20, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

As the list stands at present I would have no problem with it as the listed members are all notable. BigDunc^Talk 20:31, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Thank you and I note your comments earlier. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 21:49, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

Aftercare & UDR Benevolent Fund

Following the deletion of the seperate UDR Benevolent Fund page, I have added it into the Aftercare section in this main article. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 21:10, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Formation

It is my intension to start editing this article over the coming days. I will be adding the following text;

The regiment was formed in 1970 after recommendations from the Hunt Report (1969),which suggested disbanding the part time "B Specials" an all Protestant police force. Their membership had also heavily overlapped with the Orange Order, itself an integral part of the state. It was therefore seen as the strong arm of the "Protestant ascendancy". Nationalists had been "faced by official state forces that regarded them as hostile," and had being "attacked by irregular Protestant mobs, while the RUC and B Specials turned a blind eye," or were "active participants." They were to be replaced according to Hunt, with a force that would be "impartial in every sense and remove the responsibility of military style operations from the police force." ,

I've included the references to assist editors. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 22:37, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

I do not think there is any need to comment on the B Specials within your amended section as a link to that page should be sufficient. A full stop after B Specials in the first line is all that is required. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 23:19, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Hi Gavin Lisburn could you let me know why the Specials should not be mentioned? Why was there a reluctance to join the UDR? Were the concerns about the UDR justified and substantiated? Should we not add the Recruitment to the Ulster Defence Regiment back into the main article? Why was it removed? The proposed wording is a very brief summary and addresses some of the questions a reasonable person would ask when reading the article, would you not agree? Unless you provide a rational other than you don’t think there is any need and show were these issues are addressed in this article I have to disagree with your suggestion. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 15:13, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

I am just concerned that we are adding in B Special info into the UDR article. However, I will await the changes. OK with putting the other section back in as I am not sure why it was taken out. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 01:29, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for that Gavin Lisburn I've added the Recruitment to the Ulster Defence Regiment section back. I've inserted the text proposed above, and will review it now having re-inserted the recruitment section. So of the issues can now be addressed in that section. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 12:43, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

Domer, I am very disappointed that after all the rpevious discussion you have proceeded with adding this text which has previously been the subject of strong objections. You haven't even fixed the detail of references as I have previously suggested. David Underdown (talk) 13:20, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

Eva Martin

I think Eva Martin should have her own article. What do the other editors think? I haven't got the necessary sources on hand to do it, but perhaps an editor with a lot of documentation on the UDR and it's members could write it. Seeing as she was the first Greenfinch to be killed, she is notable. Dunc, Domer, Gavin, what do you think?--jeanne (talk) 14:50, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

I'll have a look at what information I have and get back to you. I think the Greenfinchs should have their own article? --Domer48_'fenian' 15:15, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

I think so as well.--jeanne (talk) 16:35, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Possibly not, otherwise a page would have to be allocated to the first male UDR soldier to be murdered as well (if there is not one already?). Gavin Lisburn (talk) 01:32, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

I haven't found much biography on her, perhaps she could just be included in an article on the Greenfinches, which has been suggested.--jeanne (talk) 07:53, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

The problem with an article on Eva Martin is the lack of solid , referenced biographical information which cannot be located on a Google search. The only info I have on her comes from the Sean O'Callaghan book. One would need to discover her date and place of birth as well as the date she joined the UDR, etc., otherwise the article would look rather skeletal.--jeanne (talk) 08:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Benevolent Fund

The article on the Benevolent Fund, was subject to an Article for deletion and removed. I would suggest that to simply place it here now would have to be discussed first in light of AfD. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 12:46, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

1). The notability criteria you refer to applies to an article, not the material in it. Could you show me the policy/guideline or precedent that shows that it should not be added here please 2). The material is clearly referenced and more references can be applied. 3). The AFD was a conditional close, where admin supplied the contents of the article to an interested user. 4). You have removed material that was NOT the subject of the AFD. 5). Large scale removal of material from articles without discussion is not good editing. I note that there has been large scale edit warring on this article already.

I suggest that the issues here are taken for a third party opinion for a way forward given the above ASAP Kernel Saunters (talk) 13:29, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Kernel Saunters for your reply. On your first point, the section removed was an exact copy of the article removed under the AfD. The closing Admin did suggest that "if someone thinks they can show notability" they should do so. The references to date, did not show notability based on the above rational. I have removed material that was the subject of the AFD, and there has not been any edit warring recently on this article. If you would like to provide references which establish notability please do so, and as the AfD clearly show, I did make some efforts in that direction. I agree with your suggestion on third party opinion, but would simply suggest that we provide the additional references prior to any third opinion otherwise it will be based on references which did not establish its notability in the first place? Thanks again, --Domer48_'fenian' 15:38, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Did you note that your revert removed material that was not recently added, i.e. material not copied from the Benevolent Fund page? I've asked the closing admin to take a look at this. Worth pointing out that notability applies to an article not to sections of articles Kernel Saunters (talk) 15:44, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Closing admin popping in here. First, I just want to say that I have not looked at the material added / deleted in this article, nor do I intend to. Instead, I'll just comment on the close and closing comments, so no one is putting words in my mouth (keyboard?). :)

The deletion nomination itself suggested that anything useful in the UDR Benevolent Fund should be added here. The delete !votes centered on notability of the article as a whole, not whether bits and pieces should or should not be added here, but both delete !voters indicated they felt anything useful was already here. However, the discussion centered on deletion, not merger, so I don't think we can really gauge any consensus about merger from that discussion.

The reason I offered to userfy the article if someone felt they could do something with it was that while notability for the article wasn't shown, there was also no assertion that an extensive search had been done and come up empty. Since Wikipedia doesn't have a time limit, I don't have a problem helping someone rescue valid work if notability turns up later.

My suggestion as a disinterested party would be to weigh any additions here as if the UDR Benevolent Fund article had never been created (and therefore never had an AfD) -- does the material add to this article in an encyclopedic manner, and can it be properly sourced? If so, I doubt neutral party would have a problem with it. If not, it probably shouldn't be added.--Fabrictramp | talk to me 16:01, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for that User:Fabrictramp, seems logical, clear and reasonable. --Domer48_'fenian' 16:24, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

OK, so what is happening. I understand the editor in the seperate article suggested deletion or movememnt into th emain article. I accepted the suggestion of replacing it into the main article and said so on 18/12/2008 above. No further comments until now; 2 weeks later. So I ask again; is the text going to be replaced? Gavin Lisburn (talk) 19:32, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Hi Gavin Lisburn, I think the User:Fabrictramp sums it up well above, "does the material add to this article in an encyclopedic manner, and can it be properly sourced? If so, I doubt neutral party would have a problem with it. If not, it probably shouldn't be added." Now Kernel Saunters has suggested above that more references can be applied, and hopefully they can show notability. If I could just point out again my comments on the AfD, it is none notable because "Little is known of the make up of the Trustees," and "It is not known how the fund is financed at the present moment." Could these two points be addressed first, thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 21:31, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Domer, I'm re-adding the material concerning the aftercare provisions as opposed to the benev fund. I have at least six solid sources inc bbc and newspapers, Any objections to this material being added? Kernel Saunters (talk) 22:00, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Hi Kernel Saunters, I've no objection to material being added all I would ask is "does the material add to this article in an encyclopedic manner, and can it be properly sourced? Why not post it here, and allow editors such as Gavin Lisburn, BigDunc and myself a chance to look at it. Thanks for that, and for taking the time to sourse information, --Domer48_'fenian' 22:45, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Summary style and re-adding info to this article

I think we need to think carefully about the structure of this article before addin back large amounts of info into this article. Probably the splits should have been preceded by more discussion, but it's certainly true that this article is very long, and the general idea of applying summary style, is a good one. Treating every aspect of the UDR over it's 30 year history is bound to lead to an overwhelmingly large article.

What's currently labelled as the Criticism section (and the existing daughter aritcle which is now almost entirely duplicated here in the main article) might be better focussed on the subversion isue, with more general criticism better integrated into the article as a whole - criticism articles and sections are generally perceived as being an indication of point of view problems: either the article is otherwise not properly balanced; or there is an attempt to insert fringe views which are not covered in the best available sources (I don't mean to imply that this is the case here). David Underdown (talk) 13:30, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

Reversion

I've reverted to Maul's copyedit as over-attribution, as noted on other articles, makes the article difficult to read and is unnecessary as we have footnotes. Only where something is disputed or an element of theorising is this useful. So Maul in this case would seem more correct. Kernel Saunters (talk) 09:55, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Potter is not a neutral source and his word can't be taken as gospel. Far to much emphasis is placed on this book and we need secondary sources for what he states. BigDunc^Talk 10:05, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Atrribution in WP articles is properly done via the <ref> footnotes, to maintain readability. If Potter isn't a reliable source then the article needs to be appropriately restructured. Putting "Potter says" and "he notes" in every second sentance is a total mess. Most of the points so afflicted are points of fact - either they are suitable cited, and therefore should just be presented (with footnotes) or they aren't, and shouldn't be in here. Mauls (talk) 13:45, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

If we start by outlining what we agree on, this should be easy enough. Potter is a self published source, and as such generally not regarded as reliable as there is no editorial oversight or fact-checking. His views are promotional in nature and based on his personal opinions. That is not to say it can’t be used because it can. However when Potter presents unpublished facts, arguments, ideas, statements, and neologisms; and any unpublished analysis or synthesis of published material that appears to advance a position then it must be attributed. In this edit here Potter appears to advance a position on Catholics in the UDR, and presents an analysis or synthesis of published material and is therefore attributed. If however it is supported by secondary or third party sources a footnote will suffice. On the book itself this says the book was denounced by Britain's Ministry of Defence, likewise here and here. It also say that This book is not an official history..., and also here?--Domer48_'fenian' 15:12, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

I do not think we can take the comment "... Denounced by Britain's Ministry of Defence, this book ..." as entirely correct as it appears in a book commentary on an internet book site. Who wrote it; what are his motives and is there a citation from the MOD stating this viewpoint? Gavin Lisburn (talk) 16:03, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, but all those "Potter notes" etc. are just really poor grammar, even without going into the rest of it. It is an inappropriate and quite unreadable style. Mauls (talk) 23:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

The grammar can be addressed, so please lets go into the rest of it. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 23:25, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Well I've not got an answer on the reliability of this book, but it seems to me that if it's not up-to-grade for direct usage then it should be reorganised as a section specifically about the book, rather than as a normal part of the article. Mauls (talk) 02:42, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Pen and Sword are a publishing house Kernel Saunters (talk) 23:37, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

The "denounced by the MOD" is seemingly part of the publisher's official promotion, not just a book reviewer.--Domer48_'fenian' 18:01, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

So he's not self-published then Kernel Saunters (talk) 09:41, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Potter is a self published source, and as such generally not regarded as reliable as there is no editorial oversight or fact-checking. The "denounced by the MOD" is seemingly part of the publisher's official promotion, care to comment? --Domer48_'fenian' 11:45, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Where are you getting the information that Potter is a self-published source? His publisher is Pen & Sword, a well-known military publisher Kernel Saunters (talk) 11:52, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

What evidence / citation proves the book was denounced by the MOD? It is my understanding that Potter had access to official records at all levels. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 12:42, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

(outdent) A disclaimer in the book states that The manuscript of this book was submitted to the MOD prior to publication. At their request, some changes were made to the text in order to protect the work of, and those who served in, the UDR. However this does not imply MOD endorsement of any part of this book, nor those unofficial sources refered to. BigDunc^Talk 13:24, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Sounds like a standard disclaimer not a "denunciation." Valenciano (talk) 20:40, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

The "denounced by the MOD" is seemingly part of the publisher's official promotion, care to comment?--Domer48_'fenian' 22:28, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Publishers are trying to sell books, controversy sells. It certainly seems like a standard disclaimer to me also, and it's certainly not self-published by any common definition of the term. I'd likewise agree that direct attribution is only required when sourcing an opinion, or if sources disagree over objective facts. David Underdown (talk) 11:27, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Formation 2

The “Formation” section appears to contain a number of POV statements.

• “Their membership had heavily overlapped with the Orange Order, itself an integral part of the state”. – it is POV to say that the OO was an “integral part of the state” – a much-exaggerated claim – do the two references support this statement?
• “Nationalists had been "faced by official state forces that regarded them as hostile," and had being "attacked by irregular Protestant mobs, while the RUC and B Specials turned a blind eye," or were "active participants."” – should this not refer to “some nationalists”, or “protesting nationalists” – it reads as though there was a general attack on all nationalists.

Can we agree to amend these? Mooretwin (talk) 13:44, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Hi Mooretwin, the statements are supported by the references. I will be adding to this section in the near furture to include references to Michael Farrell's book Arming the Protestants, which was approved of by Paul Bew. I will add referenced text to the OO and B Specials articles to support all this information. Thanks --Domer48_'fenian' 18:30, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

The statements may be supported by the references, but they are still POV. Mooretwin (talk) 23:09, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Mooretwin like I said, I’m going to have to place information across a number of articles to make it all consistent. If it’s an issue of POV, I will of course attribute to the relevant authors. Most of the information will be referenced to Government sources, I'm just waiting for copies to be sent to me from the Linen Hall Library. --Domer48_'fenian' 23:49, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Re. the first example, the bit which says about the OO "itself an integral part of the state", should be removed. It's POV and not relevant to this article. If someone wants to know about the OO they should be able to click a link from here to the OO article. If the source says the membership overlapped with the OO, then I am content with that part of the sentence. Mooretwin (talk) 22:15, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi Mooretwin, you raise two issues, POV and weather it is relevant. Of the two, I can only deal with the second part, the first would have to be explained, like how is it POV. I will quote some sources later today, and you can tell me if you thing it is relevant. Thanks --Domer48_'fenian' 00:43, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Please explain how it is POV?--Domer48_'fenian' 20:58, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Because saying the OO was "an integral part of the state" is a point of view. Objectively, it was not part of the state: it was an independent, voluntary organisation. Objectively, most Government members were also members of the OO, and it exerted influence on Government, but that is not the same as being an "integral part of the state".

Further, someone's opinion about the OO's relationship to the state is appropriate for the OO article and not the UDR article. It is sufficient here to mention overlapping membership between OO and B-Specials (assuming there is a reputable source for the claim). Mooretwin (talk) 09:48, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

I've removed the contentious clause as no justification for it has been provided. Mooretwin (talk) 23:22, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

The contentious clause was added in again, still with no justification. Hence I have removed it. Mooretwin (talk) 11:56, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

At least explain what you feel is POV instead of reverting. It is sourced content. BigDunc^Talk 13:02, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

At least read the discussion before making kneejerk reverts in support of your colleague. Try reading 9.48am, 3rd February. Just because it's sourced doen't make it appropriate. An author's contentious view about the relationship between the OO and the state is appropriate for the OO article: it is not appropriate for the UDR article. Mooretwin (talk) 13:10, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

I also raised this during the mediation attempt. To say integral to me implies a legal status it didn't have, unlike say the Communist Party in the USSR. There are ways of phrasing that would make this clearer, and would be equally true to sources. Membership of the Order was obviously highly important in "getting on" in politics, and even in tryign to get a job, but was not legally enforced, more of a cultural norm. David Underdown (talk) 13:16, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Have removed the clause again for reasons stated above, and in absence of any sound reason to include it. Mooretwin (talk) 21:35, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

With all due respect, you've offered nothing other than your own opinion. You have failed to explain how it is POV, and continue to remove referenced text. Please stop, --Domer48_'fenian' 22:33, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Please do not tell lies: I have explained how it is POV. But the pertinent point is that it is unnecessary and inappropriate in this article to be citing somebody's view that the OO was an integral part of the state. Whether or not it is referenced is irrelevant. People's views about the OO's relationship to the state are not relevant to this article: add them into the OO article instead. You seem to think that you can add anything to an article so long as it is referenced. Mooretwin (talk) 16:26, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

I've added a footnote and in adition to the references already cited support this statement? Any additional discussion should be based on referenced sources and not just opinions of editors. Should additional sources still prove nessary, I will be more than happy to include quotes from both Bates and Nixon, but I don't think that will be nessary. --Domer48_'fenian' 10:06, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Contextual information

As I've said previously, some contextual information is needed here, this article should be reasonably standalone. I had previously raised issues over some of the statements, and as I've writen above was very disappointed to find that Domer had inserted this text exactly as he had originally proposed, despite all our previous discussions on the issue. David Underdown (talk) 11:31, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

What text would you propose? Mooretwin (talk) 12:55, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi again David Underdown. David if I remember right you had a problem with the reference format of the web site links. I was not sure what you were looking for, and asked you to do one, to illustrate this, and I would do the next. I the mediation still locked, or can we still access the discussion. In the mean time I'll add another reference to the text under discussion. --Domer48_'fenian' 13:04, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

I had problems with the reference formatting, but also with the content of what you were wishing to insert, as it seemed somewhat unbalanced, and putting in strings of quotes from various books, which inevitably loses some of the context from which they came. The content of the mediation has now been restored. David Underdown (talk) 09:29, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks David I found our past discussion. Could you possibly fix the reference formatting on the Cain links, not sure how to do it my self. On the issue of balance, that can be addressed by adding additional sourced material that disputes or challanges the information presented. Using quotes is the only way to address the challanges to the information. If you wish to re-word it so that it reflects exactly what was being said please have a go. Post your revised wording here, and we can work through it together. Thanks, --Domer48_'fenian' 16:17, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Quotes really shouldn't be necessary, or at least not to the same extent, if we can stick to a general description of the issues at the time. Off the top of my head this would give us something like:

Unemployment rates were higher amongst Catholics, and housing conditions generally poorer, particularly in areas like Derry. This was as a result of discrimination against Catholics, eg many employers requiring their employees to be members of the Orange Order (which did not admit Catholics), gerrymandering of ward boundaries, combined with the fact that local authority voting was based on property qualifications, led to their being little representation of Catholics, and those who were elected had often stood on a Republican, abstentionist, ticket, not acknowledging any validity of the Northern Irish state. Educational attainment also generally lower amongst Catholics as the state education system was exclusively Protestant, and the Catholic run schools did not have the same level of funding, though by the 1960s, post-war educational reforms were leading to the emergence of a better-educated Catholic middle-class, with more young Catholics such as Bernadette Devlin going to university. Nationalist events often banned on the grounds of public order, particularly if a Unionist counter-demonstration threatened. Bans enforced by the Police and B-Specials, themselves largely made up of Protestants.

Obviously that's very rough and ready, and would need references adding, but trying to give an objective overview of what was actually going on at the time seems to me to be far more in the spirit of NPOV, and gives people a far better feel for why people felt as they did, rather than seeking out quotes from one source or another and trying to trade them off against one another. David Underdown (talk) 16:52, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

CGC Category

I have re-added the category "Recipients of the Conspicuous Gallantry Cross" as the action was correct. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 01:01, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Revert by Kernel Saunters

Could any editor re insert the sentence that was removed by Kernal, "Despite being off duty UDR men all had personal weapons". I have the source here just need someone to add the text back for me thanks. Also as an aside instead of reverting would it not have been better to place a citation tag and not to be a smart arse about a typo I made in edit summaries. BigDunc^Talk 17:24, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Having a bad day? Please watch your civility and your language Kernel Saunters (talk) 17:37, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

So will you self revert so I can add the source instead of still being a smart arse. BigDunc^Talk 17:45, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Can you lose the attitude please. Post it here and I will take a look. Kernel Saunters (talk) 17:47, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi Dunc, I'll add some text later referenced as per norm, and with much more detail. --Domer48_'fenian' 19:13, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Domer plenty of sources in any way. BigDunc^Talk 19:19, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi Dunc, I've added some text and a reference, feel free to add additionl reference if needs be. Looking a the text that was removed, that was referenced to Potter. Why was it removed in the first place? --Domer48_'fenian' 20:27, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

See my comments above. BigDunc^Talk 21:04, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

This statement "Despite being off duty UDR men all had personal weapons" is incorrect, inaccuarate and too general. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 22:06, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Well dont fret about it, it is not in the article. And it is not incorrect as I have a reliable source which states the same. BigDunc^Talk 22:11, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi Gavin Lisburn, you say the information is inaccuarate and too general. I can if you wish expand upon it, which will address the too general bit, but you'd need to address the inaccuarate portion. If it is disputed please place that information in the article, with the correct references. Thanks --Domer48_'fenian' 22:15, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

I doubt very much that there is accurate MOD proof that all UDR personnel were issued with personal weapons as from my experience, this just did not happen. Also, if 40k served, were all weapons stolen? Just not right. Gavin Lisburn (talk) 22:20, 19 February 2009 (UTC)

Hi Gavin Lisburn, are you suggesting I should expand on this information, adding additional information to support it? --Domer48_'fenian' 22:23, 19 February 2009 (UTC)