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@SU YIQI Ok. But you should read and reply to comments at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:SU_YIQI . Not all translation is recognized for our class' extra credit - the translation has to be of good quality. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2)LIHAOCHANG

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. Lihaochang678 (talk) 15:05, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) HongGyeongmin

Hello professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. I completed the 'Wikipedia:Training/For students' and enrolled in the dashboard system. Hkm5420 (talk) 04:36, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2) ZHANG LUYA

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check my homework. 장로아 (talk) 06:27, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@장로아 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)HUANG LINGXUAN

Hello, Professor. I am a student of your two classes (Daily Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia). I joined the dashboard system. And completed the training. Ask the professor to check my homework. Hhhlx (talk) 07:45, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:00, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)WANG YIFAN

Hello, Professor. I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice. I joined the dashboard system, completed the training. Please check my assignment . Thank you for your time and guidance. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 12:44, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:00, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)WANG YIFAN

Hello, Professor. I am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure. I joined the dashboard system, completed the training. Please check my assignment. Thank you for your time and guidance. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 12:49, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)WANG YIFAN

Hello Professor. I am a student majoring in Collective Intelligence in Practice. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources,Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 13:01, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)WANG YIFAN

Hello Professor. I am a student studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources. Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 13:03, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)HANYUANYUAN

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:58, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:55, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)CHENZHITONG

Hello, Professor. I am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have joined the dashboard system.and completed the training.Please check my assignment . Thank you for your time and guidance. Orange-1203 (talk) 07:30, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Orange-1203 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:29, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)YANGPEIFU

Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 08:54, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)ZHANG RUIQING

Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).

I have joined the dashboard system1.Everyday Life and Social Structure, 2.Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia]. And completed the training. You can check it. Thank you!Rachel.zrq (talk) 12:21, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)WANG YIHUA

Good afternoon Professor. I am Wang Yihua.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I joined the dashboard system, completed the training.

Please check and have a wonderful day！ 왕예화 (talk) 03:17, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The screenshot of the training is here. 왕예화 (talk) 04:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화: Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2) - LI MENGRU

Good afternoon, professor.

I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.

I have completed the Wikipedia Training course and enrolled in the course here.

Please check it. Thank you！TMXX0818 (talk) 04:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - LI MENGRU

Good afternoon, professor.

I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.

Have a nice day！TMXX0818 (talk) 04:21, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818: Good, and thank you for linking your contributions. Please note that Facebook is not considered a reliable source (it is ok to cite official Facebook accounts, but they should be replaced by non-social media sources if possible). But it was still very good to add references to the unreferenced article - good job. Note I've added the code to display references in the proper place: see here. I recommend using this script to see what references are good or not (bad ones are marked in red, weak are marked in yellow: User:Headbomb/unreliable.js. We will be learning how to install the script in class in the near future, but if you want to get a head start, go to your preferences>gadgets>Install scripts without having to manually edit JavaScript files and then try install the Headbomb script. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)ZHONG XIN

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training[1].

Please check. I would appreciate if the professor could give advice or correction. Zhongxxin (talk) 04:32, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Well done, all looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)CHENG SHIYI

Hello, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training.

Please check it. Thank you！ CHENG SHIYI (talk) 04:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI: Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2) ZHANG LINYUE

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training. Please check it. Thank you！AYAO32269 (talk) 06:42, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)LIU YUNXIANG

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/1eleven0086 and also completed the training https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Please check it. Thank you！ 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:52, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086: Good job! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) Lee yunjoo

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I completed Wikipedia training and enrolled in the dashboard system. Please check it. Thank you！ Leeyj0401 (talk) 06:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week 2) Jang Eunbin

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Eunbini(talk) 06:58, 10 March 2024 (UTC) Eunbini (talk) 07:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Eunbini: Well done!--_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1 (Week 2) Shin Seongmin

Hi professor. I am student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have joined the dashboard system and completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students. I also eddited 2 pages in wikipedia! Please check them! Thank you! https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_(2024)/students/articles/Shinseongmin1917 Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 08:18, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinseongmin1917 Very good! Creating a new article is not an easy task and you are off to a good start, but please note it has been draftified for now as it is too short and needs additional sources, as explained by the reviewer on your talk page: User_talk:Shinseongmin1917#Choi_Dae-zip_moved_to_draftspace . Your addition of information and table to Ansan is very good and I'll award you with extra points for it.

For edits here and here, please add references. We will be learning how to do so in a class soon, but I see you already know how to do this. In your next edits, please add references, otherwise the content you have added ma be removed as unreferenced (see Wikipedia:Verifiability). The reference you added here should be converted to a footnote - ask me in class or during office hours how to do so if you need help.

Finally, please note that the link you added here led to a Wikipedia:Disambiguation page and was fixed by a reviewer.

But as I said - very good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week 2)LIU RUOHAN

Hello, Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure and Course Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the courses. Please check it!Thank you！ Han77720 (talk) 10:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Han77720: Very good! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week 2)WANG SIWEN

Hello, Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the courses. Please check it!Thank you！！Wsw1357 (talk) 11:37, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wsw1357 A good start! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2)QIU PENGYU

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. MouFengcoo (talk) 11:45, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MouFengcoo: Looks good! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) Lee jiyoon

Hello, professor? I'm Lee Jiyoon, taking collective intelligence. I have completed both Wikipedia training and registered on the dashboard. Please check. Thank you!

Jiyoon Leee (talk) 12:38, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week 2)WANG SIWEN

Hello Professor. I am a student studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources. Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. 220.74.81.4 (talk) 12:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Wang Siewn. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)LIU XINRUI

Hello Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed Wikipedia training and dashboard registration.Please check it!Thank you！ 유신예 (talk) 14:14, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki article

Professor, I would like to select 王白渊 as the Wiki article for an “Introduction to Information Sociology”.I want to choose this "Eggy Party" that needs to be expanded as the wiki article for my "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia", is it okay? If it’s too little, can I add another one? Yangpeifu (talk) 05:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu: “Introduction to Information Sociology” does not have a wiki assignment, although wiki edits can be used for extra credits. The topics you selected seem good, please talk to me after class and we will record them in the spreadsheet. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week2) Kwon Jaeeun

Hello professor. I'm a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I took all the required training and enrolled in the course. please check it here. thank you. Cookinu (talk) 05:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week2) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed training and confirmed registration for the dashboard system.[2]Please review, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 06:14, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I also did additional Korean language training for extra credit in here, please check it out. Csiiiyu (talk) 15:25, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2) Kim Seo Eun

Hi professer Piotr K. I am a student of course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed Wikipedia:Traning/For students and enrolled in our course at dashboard system. Also, I did additional training in Korean at 위키백과:길라잡이 for extra credit. I additionally completed the section of Discussions/Additional resources and Special Topics(“contributing images and media files” , “translating articles”)and as many of the Exercises as I can. Please check my wikipedia assignment and my extra credit. Thank you. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 Good. Please include a screenshot showing that you completed those activities for extra credit or implement what you learned in practice by contributing useful images to Wikimedia Commons. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2) Changyeop Jung

Hello professor, I'm Changyeop Jung, taking collective intelligence. I have completed Wikipedia training and enrolled dashboard.

Please check it. thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:51, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919: Very good! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2) kim yeonjun

Hello, I'm Kim Yeonjun. I've completed training[3] and joining the dashboard [4]

please check it. thanks professor. (I hope you understand that I used Instagram because the picture didn't go up well) talk) 09:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 Ok, but please sign again. Your signature should display your username - look at the comments by other students for examples _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2) Chaehyun LEE

Hello professor, I'm Chaehyun Lee who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. and I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).[Basic],[How to refreshers],[5]. so please check it out. Thank you very much. Chaekyo (talk) 12:54, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaekyo: Good job! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2) LI YULUN（Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia）

Hello, professor. I'm LIYULUN.I have completed Wikipedia training and registered dashboards. Please check LIYULUN (talk) 13:09, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:47, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2) Soongki Kim

Hello professor, I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and have additionally completed enrollment in our course dashboard, which you can see verified images of here.

Also, since the registration for the extra class has not been confirmed yet, I am not currently registered in the LMS for the course, so I cannot see the announcement.

If you have already been invited to blog for our course, please let me know!

For all others, I will handle other tasks once extra registration is confirmed, thank you! Soongki (talk) 14:25, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Soongki: Well done. If you provided email for our spreadsheet, then you should be able to access our blog. Pleae let me know if there are any issues - you can stop by my office too. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

I've completed my first and second weeks of weekly Wikipedia edits, totaling over twenty edits recorded.Hoping to get some extra points.Please check：[6]

I would appreciate if the professor could give advice or correction. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good job. I see you are editing Chinese Wikipedia; that's very good but please remember that half of the weekly edits should be done on English Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2) ZHANG QI

Hello professor, I'm ZHANG QI who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and ‘Collective Intelligence in Practice’. And I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).

This is my homepageUser:ZHANGQI1066

And i finished the Wikipedia training and confirmed registration for the dashboard system.https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/

I received the Everyday Life and Social Structure course yesterday, so I apologize for not completing my previous assignments and attendance.

Please check it. Thanks! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066: Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2024 spring collective intelligence week2 Task

Hello sir,I'm MUQING.student ID is 2020073981.I have completed the training, please check it!

This is my homepage:https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Muqing112233

Muqing112233 (talk) 03:30, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good job! Your recent edits seem good as well (adding captions). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2)Soganan/Shao Jianuan

Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, soganan. soganan. I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students and homepage creation and editing, here's my homepage: please check it out, thank you! SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 04:26, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sssnuan Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editing SHAOJIANUAN

Hello, Professor. My name is SHAOJIANUAN and I have edited the article "NINGBO". Please check, thank you.Ningbo: Revision history - Wikipedia SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 04:42, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sssnuan Good start. To make your edits better, please add references next time you edit Wikipedia to your edit here and elsewhere. Content we add to Wikipedia should be referenced - see Wikipedia:Verifiability . We will be learning how to add references in class shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editing SHAOJIANUAN

Hello, Professor. My name is SHAOJIANUAN and I have edited the article "fenghua". Please check, thank you.Fenghua, Ningbo: Revision history - Wikipedia SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 06:36, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editing SHAOJIANUAN

Hello, Professor. My name is SHAOJIANUAN and I have edited the article "jisoo". Please check, thank you.Jisoo: Revision history - Wikipedia SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 06:48, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2)

Hello, Professor! i’m a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. my name is WEN JIAYAO.I have completed all modules of the basics and joined the course. Please check and see if there is anything else I can do. Thank you! Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212: Well done! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1_Liang Yiqiao

Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 08:41, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Liangyiqiao2004 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3)LI HAOCHANG、HANYUANYUAN

Hello Professor. I am Li Haochang. My group member is Han Yuanyuan. Our Chinese translation into English is this (because the Chinese content is a bit sparse, we will also add it after it is translated into English.). The English translation into Chinese is this. thank you professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 11:28, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678: Well done. I have added your project to our spreadsheet. Please add it to the dashboard and let me know who else is in your group. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:20, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extra editing--ZHANG LINYUE

Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you!AYAO32269 (talk) 14:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Good job adding references here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia Deadline 1(Week 2)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

1.I have completed the training https://imgur.com/a/5RwX1JT

2.I edited Wikipedia ten times Xue Changrui

Please check, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:36, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH This looks very good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1_Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, my name is machenxiao，My student number is 2020093790，I completed my Dashboard system. And I also applied for the course 정보사회학입문, but I haven’t registered it in LMS . This is my homepage, professor please check https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Mcx8202229 Mcx8202229 (talk) 10:10, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3)LIU XINRUI、MU QING

Hallo Professor！I am LIU XINRUI and my team member is MU QING.The two articles we chose are English translation into Korean and English translation into Chinese.The link to the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan ，https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexuality_in_South_Korea .Please check it, thank you. 유신예 (talk) 10:11, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 and @Muqing112233 While the topics are good and , please remember that as stated in our syllabus, a group of two will need to write or translate one article in English. You have chosen one article to tranbslat eto Korean, and one to Chinese. The second one can be considered for extra credit, but you need to chose a topic to add to English Wikipedia for half of your main project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, after consulting with the team members, we decided to translate the https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexuality_in_South_Korea article into Chinese.Translate the https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%9D%8E%E5%85%8B%E5%BC%BA%E4%B9%8B%E6%AD%BB&oldid=81826146 article from Chinese to English.Can we choose the two articles for translation？Please check it.Thank you！ 유신예 (talk) 14:55, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Yes, both topics are approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:49, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I've finished my Wikipedia editing duties this week.Here's the link.

Please check it. Thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:29, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 05:43, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I think you left your message in the wrong place. You should add a new one topic. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 06:15, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI @ZixuanHE Indeed. Zixuan, you should create your own section for your message here instead of replying in a section used by one of your collogues. As for CHENG SHIYI, good job, but please take look at the issue raised on your talk page at User_talk:CHENG_SHIYI#Regarding_Baidu_aggregator_news_sources _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:29, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks to your reminder, professor, I have identified my issue. I am trying to find the correct news source. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 08:02, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Very good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:36, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week2) Kim younggyun

Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students [7] [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Kim_younggyun/talk_page_tutorial&action=history} and enrolled in our course at dashboard [8] I also did additional training in Korean at 위키백과:길라잡이 for extra credit. Please check my wikipedia assignment and my extra credit. Thank you.--Kim younggyun (talk) 18:55, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week2) Lee chaeyeong

Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaeyeong09 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(week2) Kim nakyoung

Hi, professor. I’m nakyoung your classs student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. njkcs478. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 03:17, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Kim nakyoung. You need to complete this assignment while logged in. Edits made without logging in cannot be tracked and are not counted for our course. Please try to sign your post here again while logged in. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:38, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I logged in. Please check again. Njkcs478. Njkcs478 (talk) 02:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2) Si Eon Choi

Hello professor, I'm Sieon Choi. taking collective intelligence. I completed training and enrolled dashboard.

thank you! Choisieon (talk) 04:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2) FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have completed this week's assignment. Please take a look, here is the link. Jzhdylb (talk) 05:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Class activities

Hi Piotrus, please advise your students to put more thoughts when commenting on the Village Pump. (zh:Special:Diff/81899480/81901449) These short snippets do not contribute much to the discussions there. Mys_721tx (talk) 05:15, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mys 721tx Thank you for your feedback. I was unable to review some of those in class since I do not speak Chinese and cannot translate their comments to English in classroom quickly. Having reviewed them, they do not seem wrong - many seem constructive to me? However, I'd appreciate further feedback. I am now posting the content of class activities I am asking my students to do at User:Hanyangprofessor2#Collective_intelligence - feel free to suggest tweaks, rewordings, new content, and anything else! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:44, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1（week2）ZHANG BINGYI

Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this https://imgur.com/a/94f9ix1. and registered for course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia~ Thank you Zhangzhang111 (talk) 05:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(Week2) Ha young Kwon

Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Hayoung1 (talk) 05:57, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1: Ok! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) 's selection WANG YIFAN

Hello Professor! Can I choose Animal welfare and rights in China as my translation target? I will translate it into Chinese. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 06:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 Yes, but you need to tell me which class you want this project to be assigned to as you are taking two of my classes. Remember that you will need to translate more than one article for each class; see syllabus for details. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor! In Everyday Life and Social Structure, I will translate Unemployment in China and supplementing Drug policy of China together with Huang Lingxuan.

In Collective Intelligence in Practice, I will independently translate Animal welfare and rights in China and Tattooing in China as my translation target. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 07:25, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 @Hhhlx I see. Translation of Unemployment in China is approved, but Drug policy of China is already long enough - I suggest choosing a different topic to improve in English.

Collective Intelligence in Practice topics are approved as translation to zh for sole work. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(week2) Kim minjun

Hello professor, I'm Kim minjun. I am taking collective intelligence. I completed training and uploaded in my imgur website. Also, i entered Collective intelligence Dashboard. Thank you. Please check it.

KMJ0521 (talk) 06:05, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) Huang Lingxuan&Liu Yunxiang

Dear professor, we have selected our topic ：1 2 May I ask if we can translation for these two articles in to Chinese? Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 06:11, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx The topics are very good, but first, you need to tell me which class you want them assigned to (as you are taking two of my classes), and second, remember that a group needs to translate one article to English. Check the online syllabus for details. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:03, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, we would like to assign these two articles to the assignment for the course "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia".The article translated from English to Chinese is: 1. The article translated from Chinese to English is: 2. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 07:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx I see. Those are good topics to expand. Please tell me who is the other person on your team. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, my other team member is:Liu Yunxiang@1eleven0086. Hhhlx (talk) 11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx Ok - I've updated the spreadsheet with your choices. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(week 2) Jeong Da Yean

Hi, professer, I'm dayean your class student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. Jeong dayean (talk) 06:20, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong dayean Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) YUERONG WANG

Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).

I have joined the dashboard system1. Sociology of Everyday Life , 2.Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia]. And completed the training. You can check it. Thank you! WYRRRR (talk) 06:27, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) Jeong da yean

Hi, professor. I chose the theme of the wave of democracy. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waves_of_democracy I would like to translate into Korean and add to this document about the history of the democratization movement, which is the wave of democracy in Korea. Is it possible? Jeong dayean (talk) 06:56, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong dayean This is a good topic (Waves of democracy to Korean). Please let me know if you are working solo or in a group, and what is your second article that you want to work on. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm doing it solo.

The second work is censorship of Korean movies

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Film_censorship_in_South_Korea

I will translate and edit this document. Jeong dayean (talk) 04:51, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong dayean OK! Approved. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) ZENG WANTING

Hello professor, I’m Wanting Zeng from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 07:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wantiin Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) HUANG YANHAN

Hello professor, I am Huang Yanhan from the Collective Intelligence in Practice course. I have completed the training on Wikipedia, please verify it.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students HYH031277777 (talk) 09:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week2) Seoyoon Jang

Hello professor, I am Jang Seoyoon from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Seoyoon J (talk) 09:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seoyoon J Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editors—HUANGQIHAO

Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you!longquanyi 219.248.199.103 (talk) 10:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear student. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho If this is your edit, please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, professor, and I'll keep an eye out for it in future edits Hkiho (talk) 09:50, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) TIAN XIAOYU

Hello professor, I’m TIAN XIAOYU from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you. Sephyy (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editing ZHANG MINGSHUO

Hello Professor, I am ZHANGMINGSHUO from Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I have finished the extra editing of "Qingcheng Park". Please check it, thank you.Qingcheng Park：修订历史 - Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good start! Please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) Gao xiaoxia

Hello professor, I am Gaoxiaoxia from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Thank you. Babaibiaobin (talk) 10:19, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(week3) TIAN XIAOYU

Hello Professor, I have chosen the topic of esports player (Deft). Could I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Chinese?

Also, if I do my homework alone, could I choose just one Wikipedia translation?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deft_(gamer)?wprov=sfti1 Sephyy (talk) 10:38, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy The topic is approved. But you need to complete two translations to complete the project, so you need to chose one more topic. Also, you need to tell me which of my two classes you are taking you want to assign this article to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor. In my Everyday Life and Social Structure class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles：

From English to Chinese: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deft_(gamer)?wprov=sfti1

From Chinese to English: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%A5%BF%E9%81%8A%E8%A8%98%E5%A4%A7%E7%B5%90%E5%B1%80%E4%B9%8B%E4%BB%99%E5%B1%A5%E5%A5%87%E7%B7%A3?wprov=sfti1#%E5%8F%83%E8%80%83%E8%B3%87%E6%96%99 Sephyy (talk) 04:32, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy Ok - approved for Everyday Life _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:06, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I plan to complete the wiki online assignment alone. The article I chose is this. Please check whether it matches the course theme. And can I edit it. Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 10:39, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu This is a good topic and it is approved. But you will need to chose and complete one more translation to complete this project (see syllabus for details). Also, please let me know what language you want to translate your articles to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I get it, Professor. I found another article here. I will translate these two articles into Chinese. Csiiiyu (talk) 08:02, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Ok! Topic approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2)HUANG QIHAO

Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HUANGQIHAO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Training And I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Hkiho - WikipediaPlease check it out. Hkiho (talk) 10:45, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Very good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional editing HONG JIARAN

Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you! Sichuan Conservatory of Music Redyeoni (talk) 10:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Redyeoni Good start! Regarding your edit here, please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2)ZHANG MINGSHUO

Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, ZHANGMINGSHUO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study TrainingAnd I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Shuo1103 WikipediaPlease check it out Shuo1103 (talk) 11:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:36, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) KIM YUJIN

Hello, professor! I'm Kim Yu-jin, who takes an understanding class of daily life and social structure. Registered to dashboard system. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Huejyi (talk) 11:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Huejyi Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) HONG JIARAN

Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HONGJIARAN . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Traning And I finished editing my personal homepage.User：[[9]] WikipediaPlease check it out Redyeoni (talk) 11:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Redyeoni Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4)LI HAOCHANG

Hello professor. 1. I have added the translation task to the dashboard. Check, please 2. I finished editing outside the sandbox. References and hyperlinks added. Check, please. Lihaochang678 (talk) 13:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678 Good job! Your edits look good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) YUE ZIYI

Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. YZY2233 (talk) 14:16, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)YUE ZIYI

Hello Professor. I am a student majoring in Collective Intelligence in Practice. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources,Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. YZY2233 (talk) 14:25, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week3) Ha young Kwon

Hello, professor. Can I choose yellow journalism as my target? I want to translate it into Korean. Is it possible?

Please understand that the submission has been delayed because it was registered in LMS after going through the course increase period. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:21, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Yes, yellow journalism is a good choice, approved. But please note that you still need to chose a second topic (if working solo, another translation to Korean will be ok). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:41, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. Is it okay to choose The New York Times as the second topic? Hayoung1 (talk) 08:47, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am revising it. Is it okay to translate the New York Times into Korean as the second topic? Hayoung1 (talk) 08:51, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Yes, the Korean article is short and can be expanded. Topic approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the confirmation, and I added 2 topics to the dashboard profile, please check. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:35, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:13, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week3) Chaeyeong Lee

Hello, professor. I would like to translate Beer in Japan into korean. It is possible? 14.7.46.57 (talk) 15:45, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. Please remember to log in before editing Wikipedia in the future. Also, you'll need to choose another topic and let me know which class this is for. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week 2)-LI LINLIN

Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN. I'm taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' 、'Introduction to Information Sociology'and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed deadline 1.

I have completed the [Basic, Special topics, how to refreshers, and some exercises] in the 'Student training module'. Here is the link.
I have entered in our courses 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure '.

Please check it, best wishes! Leeinm (talk) 01:52, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week 3)-LI LINLIN

Hello, professor.

I'm LI LINLIN. I'm taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' 、'Introduction to Information Sociology'and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I want to independently complete the homework for Wikipedia this semester. I want to choose to translate these four article: Women's history; Beer in Japan; Women in South Korea; The Coming Conflict with China; into Chinese. Is it feasible?

Hope you have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 02:20, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Yes, those are all approved. Please let me know which class you want to assign them to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I want to assign Women’s history ; Beer in Japan to class ‘Understanding Wikipedia’ and assign Women in South Korea ; The coming Conflict with China to class‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. Leeinm (talk) 04:49, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm All are approved except Beer in Japan which unfortunately has been selected by another group earlier. How about translating Beer in India instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That's a great propose. I will translate Beer in India instead.

Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 09:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Ok - approved :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:14, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (week2) MU QING

Dear professor, good afternoon. I have finished editing this week, please check it out.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 04:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4)HAN YUANYUAN

1. I have added the translation content to the control panel. Check, please.

2. And outside the sandbox, an edit was made and a reference was added. Check, please. 218.235.241.116 (talk) 07:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Dear HAN YUANYUAN. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account . Only edits I can see at User contributions for Hanyuanyuan613 can be counted. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:35, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Got it professor. (Establish an independent brand company) This is what I made and it doesn’t show up. I made another one and added the quote. Check, please. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 02:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613: I see. Good. However, I have removed the 'social influence' part as it was written in a tone that is too similar to marketing/advertising and not neutral/encyclopedic (see WP:NPOV); it was also sourced to a blog and blogs are not good sources. But you still get full credit for trying - try to be more neutral in your writing in the future, however. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:21, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(week 3) Lee yunjoo

Hello, professor.

I'm Lee Yunjoo. I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'

I will translate these articles:Population growth, Waves of democracy into Korean. Is this possible?

Also, I finished editing 10 weekly wiki. Please check it. https://guc.toolforge.org/?by=date&user=Leeyj0401

Leeyj0401 (talk) 09:13, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Population growth is approved but I am afraid the other topic has already been reserved by another student and you will need to choose another topic.

Good job with your first weekly edits! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:52, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Then I will translate this article: Global North and Global South. Leeyj0401 (talk) 08:41, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Ok, topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week 3) Kim Yujin

Hello, professor. I'm Kim Yujin, taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. I decided on the article. Fashion in South Korea(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fashion_in_South_Korea), Yellow journalism (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellow_journalism). I would like to translate two articles into Korean. Is it possible? 61.77.178.20 (talk) 10:53, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Yujin. First, please remember to log in while editing Wikipedia.

I am afraid Fashion in South Korea has already been translated to Korean and Yellow journalism has been reserved by another students just recently, so you will need to reconsidered your topics. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor! I would like to select TikTok censorship (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTok) topic and freedom of speech (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech) topic) and translate it into Korean. Is it possible? Huejyi (talk) 13:11, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Approved in class with one change. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:02, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia Deadline 1(Week 2):BAILINHAN

I have completed the training [10]

please check it Bai0926 (talk) 11:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:56, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week2) Lee Seung Mi

Hello professor, I have enrolled in our dashboard system, and I have completed training courses(https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students). Please check my assignment(deadline 1). Thank you. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 02:34, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Lee Seung Mi. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:22, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor. I'm sure I logged in and carried out the deadline 1 assignment, but I think there was an error. Can you check it again? Seungmilsm (talk) 07:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seungmilsm Now it is correct. Good luck with Deadline 2! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:20, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening, Professor.I've finished my Wikipedia editing duties this week.Here's the link.Please check it. Thank you. AYAO32269 (talk) 15:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1（week2）TIANXIAOYU

Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training. Please check it. Thank you Sephyy (talk) 19:25, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy: Ok! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Discuss your students' edits on Chinese Wikipedia

A related discussion is ongoing about your students' undocumented/unauthorized use of machine-generated content to participate in Chinese Wikipedia editing and discussion. I hope you can understand this discussion and provide your feedback via GPT or machine translator, if not please ask your questions. YFdyh000 (talk) 20:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YFdyh000 Thank you, I'll take a look. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:24, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2 (week3) Seoyoon Jang

Hello professor. I'm Seoyoon Jang from Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just selected the article Korean rock. This article deals with the origin and development of Korean rock. It doesn't translated into Korean yet, so if you allow me, I will do my best. Seoyoon J (talk) 03:04, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seoyoon J Good choice, the topic is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) kim yeonjun

Hello, professor. I am Kim Yeon Jun from Everyday Life and Social Structure. I want to translate Online hate speech into Korean. Is it possible? Kim1357 (talk) 08:37, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 Yes, this is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will choose Mandate of Heaven as an additional topic. Is it possible? Kim1357 (talk) 13:48, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 Yes - topic approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 22:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week2) Lee Wooyeon

Hello professor, I'm Lee wooyeon, taking the class 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. (https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students). Please check my assignment(deadline 1). Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lee Wooyeon (talk • contribs) 08:57, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Wooyeon Good job! And your topic of Cannabis in Japan translation to Korean is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I decided on one more topic. I will translate 'Film Censorship' from English to Korean. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Film_censorship) Is that okay? Lee Wooyeon (talk) 10:26, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Wooyeon Yes, that should be fine. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:49, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week3) Lee Wooyeon

Hi professor. I chose the theme 'Cannabis in Japan.' https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan I would like to translate into Korean and add to this document about Japan's cannabis which is illegal in Korea. And I'm going to do my work alone. Is it possible?

Hello Professor, I have completed the translation, please check it. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lee Wooyeon (talk • contribs) 03:58, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Wooyeon Please link to your translation and I will review it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:30, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(week3)TIAN XIAOYU

Hello, Professor. In my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles： From English to Chinese:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Definitions_of_knowledge?wprov=sfti1#

In China, this software is similar to the function of Wikipedia, so can I research this entry?

From Chinese to English: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AF%B9%E7%99%BE%E5%BA%A6%E7%9A%84%E4%BA%89%E8%AE%AE?wprov=sfti1#

Sephyy (talk) 09:24, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy: Yes, those are very good topics, both are approved. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:49, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everday Life ——MU QING

Hello professor,I completed the training and I have finished editing this week, please review it.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233

In addition, this is my article ready to be translated from English to Chinese

Anti-American sentiment in Korea Muqing112233 (talk) 09:25, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good job. I see you tried to create a new article at User:Muqing112233/2024 Hebei Yanjiao deflagration accident . For help with infobox errors, you may need to ask help at WP:VPT . Otherwise, it looks quite good, but you should check language and grammar again.

The word deflagration is technically correct but is not often used in English. Try to locate a similar article on English Wikipedia and see how it is titled. Look at Category:Gas explosions in China for example.

When linking to Chinese articles that do not exist in English, use Template:Ill. So not 2011 Xi’an Roujiamo restaurant explosion but 2011 Xi’an Roujiamo restaurant explosion [zh].

If you can finish this article successfully, it will be worth a good amount of extra credit points.

As for your translation from English to Chinese, it is approved, but remember to chose one more topic for your main project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:56, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ok sir.I'll try again. Muqing112233 (talk) 13:51, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1——SU YIQI

Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. SU YIQI (talk) 11:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SU YIQI Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:57, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week2) Jeon Jin E

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_(2024)?enrolled=true Thank you. 전진이 (talk) 12:37, 17 March 2024 (UTC)전진이 (talk) 12:37, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@전진이 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:58, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - LI MENGRU

Good evening , professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.

I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.

Thank you！TMXX0818 (talk) 13:10, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818: Good job adding references! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:17, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3)：WU SHUHAN

Hello, Professor. The article I will write is: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . Hope you pass it. I will create an English article about the luxury lady. And I found that the Chinese Wikipedia also lacks the content about the luxury lady, I will try to edit. This is a Chinese encyclopedia about the luxury lady, you can refer to it and make suggestions. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 This seems like a good topic. However, remember to use reliable sources such as books, academic papers or newspapers. Baidu cannot be used as a source on Wikipedia (see "WP:BAIDU), and we cannot copy content from baidu as it would be plagiarism and copyright violation. But you can write the article based on the sources cited on Baidu, as long as you can access them and read/verify their content. Please let me know what is the name of your article in Chinese and English. "the luxury lady" is not a name that the article can be published under. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor, I have read Wikipedia: Reliable Sources/Perennial Sources.I want to create article is Wikidata query: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia .The Chinese woman I chose was luxury lady .Her name is She Ci（舍兹）.Can I use She Ci as a title to create an article? WSH0927 (talk) 06:46, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 It sounds possible. Does she have an article on Chinese Wikipedia? If so, can you link it for me? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry, Professor. I can't find She ci in Chinese Wikipedia. I think there's too little information about her. Not suitable for project work. I picked another Chinese woman who was interested: Tian Xiwei. This is the Chinese Wikipedia about her：田曦薇Can I create an article with Tian Xiwei as the title? WSH0927 (talk) 06:07, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 It is possible Shi Ci or your first suggestion (奢香夫人（约1361年—1396年）) would be fine - you can start by creating an article about her (them) on Chinese Wikipedia for extra credit, then translate it to English. With regards to Tian Xiwei, that article is very short, so while you can translate it to English, it would not be enough for a full project (but it is again totally fine to do it for extra points). Check our syllabus for word counts. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, Professor. I take your advice. Will my weekly progress be based on She Ci's Chinese Wikipedia? It is translated into English at the final stage. I would like to know what the weekly progress of my project should be in the future. WSH0927 (talk) 09:09, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 For your weekly edits, all edits that are not related to your main project will count. So first we need to decide what is your main project. If you are working solo, one English article will be ok. If She Ci does not have an article on Chinese nor English Wikipedia, you can use your weekly edits to create and improve her biography in Chinese and for your main project translate it to English. Please remember that content you add to Wikipedia has to be referenced to reliable sources (academic books, papers, or newspapers) and not Baidu or social media (blogs). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, professor. I understand. I will edit the English article with the title of She Ci as the main project. And She Ci's weekly Chinese article editing. WSH0927 (talk) 01:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - WANG YUERONG

Good evening, professor.

I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.

Have a nice day！ WYRRRR (talk) 13:34, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR: Good job! Here, rather then delete the content, it would be better to move it to a new section called 'Geography' and add a reference. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:25, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2)

Hello professor. I'm sorry that I didn't give you the feedback on the task of deadline 1 until today because the administration department only approved my application for the increase of staff in the course this week. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training. Please check it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 That's ok. Better late then never, as they say. Assignment approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) Kim Sangrok

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Sangrok02 (talk) 02:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC) Sangrok02 (talk) 02:12, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sangrok02 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article translated from Chinese to English-LIURUOHAN

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class.We're students in group six.Below is the article we chose to translate from Chinese to English.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%95%E5%B8%81%E7%A5%88%E7%A6%8FPlease check. Han77720 (talk) 03:08, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Han77720 Ok - topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3)：Kim Sangrok

Hello, Professor. In my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Living_wage From English to Korean https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_culture From English to Korean Sangrok02 (talk) 04:12, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok - topic approved. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:27, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) Jean Jin E

Hello, professor. I've been checked about the wiki topic in class, but please check it one more time. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Media_bias https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class 전진이 (talk) 04:13, 18 March 2024 (UTC)전진이 (talk) 04:14, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@전진이 I have your assignments in our spreadsheet listed as media bias and culture war. .Is this ok? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's my mistake. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Media_bias and https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_war is correct. 전진이 (talk) 05:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok then, we keep it as media bias and culture war. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:16, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1 (Week 2) Jeongha Ahn

Hello professor. I'm a student of 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I completed 'Deadline1', so please check it! I'm sorry for late. Thank you. Jeongha1 (talk) 04:40, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeongha1: - it's ok! --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2 (week3) Jeongha Ahn

Hello professor. I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm a student of 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I chose two themes, 'culture shock'(https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_shock) and 'entertainment'(https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Entertainment). I want to translate these two themes. Is it possible? 218.235.241.132 (talk) 04:52, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeongha1 Yes, translation to Korean is approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:16, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, Professor. I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice. I joined the dashboard system, completed the training. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2024) https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Please check my assignment . Thank you for your time and guidance. Zhuo1221 (talk) 05:14, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221: Well done. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:19, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article translated from Chinese to English-TANGJUNYUE

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Collective Intelligence in Practice class. Han77720 and I （Yue03090616）are on a team.

Below is the article we chose to translate from Chinese to English. 天山大峡谷 - Wikipedia

Below is the article we chose to translate from English to Chinese Astroturfing

Please check. Yue03090616 (talk) 05:26, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yue03090616 @Han77720 Very good - topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:21, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) 's selection YUE ZIYI

Hello Professor! In Everyday Life and Social Structure,I have chosen the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tattooing_in_China and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_psychology_(sociology) Could I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Chinese?I do my homework alone. YZY2233 (talk) 07:47, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 I am afraid the first topic has already been reserved by another student, so you may have to chose another (how about Sailor tattoos?). The second one is approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:27, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you professor for your recommendation! Then I chose Sailor tattoos and Social psychology for translation YZY2233 (talk) 07:30, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3)'s selection Eunbin Jang

Professor, I'm in Everyday Life and Social Structure,I chose https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech and https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fake_news Can I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Korea? Eunbini(talk) 17:22, 18 March 2024 (UTC) Eunbini (talk) 08:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Eunbini Freedom of speech and fake news are approved - good choices _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) Chaeyeong Lee

Hello, professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee , taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. I decided on the article.I chose Beer in Japan(I told you last time) and The New York Times.I would like to translate two articles into Korean. Is it possible? Chaeyeong09 (talk) 09:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaeyeong09 Beer in Japan is approved but The New York Times has already been chosen by another student. How about The Economist instead? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ok. so I chose Beer in Japan and The Economist. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 01:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2_Ma Chenxiao

Hello professor, I chose the encyclopedia Environment of China in this class of 집단지성, translated from English to Chinese

Please check Mcx8202229 (talk) 09:48, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 I am afraid that article is already well translated to Chinese as zh:中国的自然环境. You will have to chose another article - how about Environment of India?. If you are working by yourself, remember you need to chose two translation topics. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, thank you professor for your guidance. Then my choice is Environment of India translated into English into Chinese, and The 三大队 (网络剧)https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%89%E5%A4%A7%E9%98%9F_(%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E5%89%A7)Chinese into English. Is it okay? Mcx8202229 (talk) 08:37, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 That seems fine, topics approved. See if you can add additional reviews to the movie article - currently it may be a bit too short (word count) for our main project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:01, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I know Professor, I will write one more movie article and add all three articles to the dashboard. Thank you Professor for your guidance. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:37, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, Professor, I made a typo. It’s two articles. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:44, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Ok - but let me know here what is the name of your chosen article when you pick one up. It should have at least some reviews or awards to meet WP:GNG policy. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:15, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok professor, my choices are Environment of India and 三大队 (网络剧)https://w.wiki/9YS$, I will add these two articles to my dashboard Mcx8202229 (talk) 04:06, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Topics approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:38, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2（week3）YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor! After you told me last time, I chose to translate "Wang Baiyuan" from Chinese to English in my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, and use "Eggy Party" as my bonus wiki and complete it on time ten times a week. Please check it out, thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 10:07, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Very good. But remember that 10 wiki edits a week have to done on article(s) different from your main project, so you will have to edit articles other than on Wang Baiyuan to get points for that assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. To give you early feedback on your draft: 1) it needs many more sources 2) it needs major copyediting for English (grammar, vocabulary) and 3) it should not be using bullet point style. Compare William Shakespeare _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:19, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - ZHANG QI

Good evening , professor. I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’.I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check it. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:48, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066: This is a good start, but please add references to your edits, like we learned in the class on Monday. Unreferenced content can be deleted from Wikipedia, per WP:V. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:20, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) -ZHANG QI

Hello Professor, I am ZHANG QI and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. My teammate is HUANGYANHAN. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:15, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good, topics approved _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:21, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(week3) - Kim Seo Eun

Hi professor, i am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure. I’ll do it individually. Today I wrote two themes ; Political correctness and Hong Kong independence on our spreadsheet. I added my approved topics to the dashboard too. https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_(2024)/students/articles/Kimseoeun2023079825 please check. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 12:53, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 Well done, topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) ChaeHyun LEE

Hello professor, I am a student taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. In this assignment, I will be working alone and I have been approved to work on the Korean translation of the articles Overexploitation and Lookism. Also, I have written these topics in a spreadsheet today. Finally, I also uploaded these two articles to my dashboard, please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 13:59, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaekyo Well done, topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week3)

Hello Professor！ I am WEN JIAYAO（2023087238）a student of the Everyday Life and Social Structure.WANG SIWEN（2023025414）and I will finished our homework in a group. Our project is to translate a Wikipedia article about the license plate number of civil motor vehicles of the People's Republic of China. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中华人民共和国民用机动车号牌 In addition, We will complete a research on the identity and social status of car owners reflected by Shanghai license plate policy in recent years.！ What do you think, professor? I hope to hear your reply.

.My student numbeWen Jiayao and I finished our homework in a group. Her student number is202308723. Our project is to Wjyy1212 (talk) 06:10, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212 @Wsw1357 The translation topic about Chinese car plates from Chinese to English is approved. Regarding your other topic I am not sure I fully understand it - I'd recommend you instead chose to translate a topic from my list here from English to Chinese: User:Piotrus/Ideas for students . If you are interested in motorization, how about History of steam road vehicles ? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, we have chosen the topic of English translation into Chinese. Do you think it's okay?https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTok Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:57, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212 Ok - topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:05, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor! I have uploaded the translated content to the sandbox! And two photos were uploaded in the Wiki folk photo competition.

This is the link!Do you think it's okay? Professor?

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:江南甜蜜蜜.jpg

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:江南夜市行.jpg Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:09, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212 Very good job with the pictures. For your images, can you add the description in English? You should also add categories (they are like tags). See Commons:Categories .

For example, your first picture should probably be somewhere under the category Category:Food products of China - Wikimedia Commons

Regarding your sandbox translation, please link it here for a review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wjyy1212/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

This is my sandbox link, which contains the content I translated.The description and classification of the picture is a little difficult for me, because it has been uploaded. If you want to change it, you need to use coding. I am not very good at using it. I’m sorry, Professor. Wjyy1212 (talk) 14:14, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212 This is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly to improve your grammar; many sentences are hard to understand. Next, work on adding blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If there are any code issues, talk to me during class or office hours, and I'll help you solve the problems. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:23, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week3)

Hello, professor. We are Gao xiaoxia(2022083990)and Qiu pengyu(2022079825)from Everyday Life and Social Structure. We will finished our homework in a group. We chose "Censorship of TikTok"and"Polyethnicty".All translated from English to chinese.Is it possible? Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:08, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin If you work as a group, you need to chose one topic to translate to Chinese, and one to translate to English from Chinese. Polyethnicity is approved, as the other topic was already reserved by another group. For a list of ideas to translate from Chinese to English see User:Piotrus/Ideas_for_students#To_create_or_improve_on_English_Wikipedia _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:16, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Also, please talk me after class - you need to update the spreadsheet with your wiki usernames. Based on your message I do not know if "Babaibiaobin" belongs to Gao xiaoxia(2022083990) or Qiu pengyu(2022079825). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:18, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor,I'm Gaoxiaoxia.Can we choose this "网络游戏防沉迷系统"https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E6%B8%B8%E6%88%8F%E9%98%B2%E6%B2%89%E8%BF%B7%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F as the topic of translation from Chinese to English? Babaibiaobin (talk) 06:15, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin 网络游戏防沉迷系统 is a good topic but it is rather short. You may need to select another short article to reach the required word length for translation. I'll approve it for now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:28, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

To reach the required size of your translation, I'd recommend zh:家新闻出版署关于进一步严格管理_切实防止未成年人沉迷网络游戏的通知 for your second topic, as it is related to your first choice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, we will choose this as the second topic. Thank you Professor Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:54, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok! Topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:59, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here are my Wikipedia edits for the week, more than 20 in all. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 12:29, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done, your edits look good. Try to learn the skills suggested by the reviewer on your talk page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:19, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week3)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor, I am ZHANG ZEHUA, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

1.I want to complete this article in To create or improve on English Wikipedia Etiquette in China. I hope you can pass it.

2.Here are my ten Wikipedia edits for the week, please check them out Wu_Sha Thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 00:22, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Very good idea - topic approved. Your weekly edits look very good too, well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:22, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week3)：Lee Jiyoon

Hello, professor? I'm Lee Jiyoon, taking the collective intelligence course. I will translate the two articles below. Please check.Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Illicit_activities_of_North_Korea, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beer_in_Japan Jiyoon Leee (talk) 05:06, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Beer in Japan is already reserved by other students for translation to Korean and Chinese. Illicit activities of North Korea has been translated into both Korean and Chinese. I am afraid you may need to choose different topics. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:23, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

So can I have these two articles?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tattooing_in_China , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_hate_speech Jiyoon Leee (talk) 06:31, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee You did not tell me what language you want to translate them to. Tattooing_in_China can be translated to Korean. Online hate speech can be translated to Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:51, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor, I'm Jiyoon Lee and I'm taking a collective intelligence course. As I told you in class, I'll translate the following two articles into Korean. Please check. Thank you.

Funerary art , Cuisine of Hawaii Jiyoon Leee (talk) 05:25, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Ok - topics approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline(week3)：BAILINHAN

I want to complete this article in To create or improve on English Wikipedia Fashion in China . I hope you can pass it. Bai0926 (talk) 09:45, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Ok, topic approved! You can reuse content found at Chinese_clothing#Modern_fashion. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2 (Week 3) Shin Seongmin

Hi professor I added the references in the article Workers' Solidarity. I like to expand korean articles 사회주의의 역사 and 홀로코스트 부정론 by translate History of socialism and Holocaust denial. Thanks! Have a nice day! Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 08:51, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinseongmin1917 Good - topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) HUANG YANHAN

Hello Professor, I am HUANG YANHAN and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' . My teammate is ZHANG QI. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. HYH031277777 (talk) 10:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) Younggyun Kim

Hello, professor.

My name is younggyun kim. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I'm going to do the task alone. (Deadline2, week3)

I want to translate sustainability and working class into Korean.

I've already been approved by email. I'm also posting a Wikipedia talk page! --Kim younggyun (talk) 10:17, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun Yes, topics approved. Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:23, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) : Soongki Kim

Hello, Professor.

I have selected the following two articles as topics for the main wiki project for this semester's 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.

I will be translating the articles Education in India and Education in England from English to Korean.

I would appreciate it if you could check out these two articles and give me some feedback.

Thank you! Soongki (talk) 14:43, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Soongki Good choices - topics approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:23, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) - Kwon Jaeeun

Hello, professor. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I want to translate Promotion of anorexia from English to Korean. please check it out and give me your feedback. Thank you! Cookinu (talk) 17:33, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu That's a good topic - approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate if you are working by yourself. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:25, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Then I would like to translate Film censorship from English to Korean. Cookinu (talk) 13:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu Ok - topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 22:54, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) - Younggyun Kim

Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the Korean translation task. And I registered those articles on my personal dashboard. If you check each document's rivison history, you'll find my editing history. [11] [12] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kim younggyun (talk • contribs) 19:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC) --Kim younggyun (talk) 19:28, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun That's a good start. Please make sure that the content you add is referenced and has sufficient blue links (hyperlinks) that point to other Wikipedia articles.

Content that you translate and add from English to Korean needs to have references, otherwise it can be removed from Wikipedia (Korean just as English). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

And please review the important guidelines at ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the feedback, professor.

As you said, I added the references and followed the translation guidelines. Kim younggyun (talk) 13:29, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) - Gyeongmin Hong

Hello, professor. I'm Gyeomgmin Hong,taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I want to translate [[Dune: Part2]] from English to Korean. please check it out and give me your feedback. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 00:12, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 This is fine, but you will need to chose one more topic to translate if you are working by yourself. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

and i will translate "Wonka(film)" from English to Korean. please check it again. thank you. Hkm5420 (talk) 03:51, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 Approved :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1(Week2)XUE DONGXIN

Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Donghem (talk) 05:37, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Ok. Please try to complete future deadlines on time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2 (Week3) - Changyeop Jung

Hello professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I selected the article about Yang Hee-eun. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 05:57, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 Very good. You will improve her article in English? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes! I will improve her article in English. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:58, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 Very good, I am looking forward to reading more about her! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week 4)-LI LINLIN

Hello, professor.

I'm LI LINLIN, taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I finished the deadline3: add an inline reference, both of the two classes, and I also use the User:Headbomb/unreliable after I add the references to make sure they are feasible. You can check here and here.

Thank u~ Leeinm (talk) 07:14, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. But the url in your first reference needs fixing - https://chn-oversea-cnki-net-ssl.access.hanyang.ac.kr:8443/KCMS/detail/detail.aspx?dbcode=CJFD&dbname=CJFDLASN2024&filename=QBWG202312012&uniplatform=OVERSEA&v=RDrWlXFt6TuV-RHvFBm_bqMO-bgYMz_msVIOLPJX-_5wru1xL5g97ZI6AjwMrEOI does not work for most people, it seems to be limited to some remote hanyang access / CNKI. Please replace it with a link that works globally. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed the url, change it to the oversea link. You can check here. Leeinm (talk) 02:10, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:09, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing-ZHANGMINGSHUO

Good evening, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. Here's my wikivoyage edit assignmentThank you for checking. Shuo1103 (talk) 12:13, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Please note that the Collective Intelligence class does not have a wikivoyage assignment - but the edits can be accepted for our weekly edit assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) : WANG YIHUA,LI MENGRU

Good evening, professor. I am a student participating in the collective intelligence practice class.

@TMXX0818 and I will be working as a team, and we have already informed you of our Wikipedia theme in class.

I would like to inform you again that we have chosen to translate the Chinese article "Controlled Related to Taiwan media" into English，and the English into Chinese as "Health in North Korea".

Wishing you a pleasant weekend！ 왕예화 (talk) 12:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Ok - topics have been recorded and approved. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:02, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) - Kim minjun

Hello. Professor. My name is Kim minjun taking the Collective Intelligence class. I'll do the main Wiki project alone. I'd like to ask if it's possible for me to do it alone. Also, i selected the article about String of Pearls (Indian Ocean). I will translate that article to Korean. Please check it. I'll visit you one more time during next week's class to get confirmation on the topic. KMJ0521 (talk) 12:53, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 That's fine but you will need to chose one more topic to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) :ZHONG XIN,CHENG SHIYI

Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

@CHENG SHIYI and I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professor.We've already given feedback to the professor in class today that we plan to translate the article "中国史前文化" into English and then translate the article "Organic food culture" into Chinese.

Please check and let us know if this is feasible, thank you.

Have a wonderful weekend!

Zhongxxin (talk) 13:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin This is good. However, 中国史前文化 is missing many references. Remember that only referenced content can be translated. Fortunately, you can also rely on French fr:Préhistoire de la ChineYo which is good quality and has many references. You can add content from French to Chinese for extra credit, then translate Chinese to English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your suggestion. I will work hard to complete it Zhongxxin (talk) 04:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I am ZHONG XIN, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

I have completed more than twenty English Wikipedia edits this week, please check.

I would appreciate it if you could give me any corrections or suggestions.

Zhongxxin (talk) 16:30, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Deadline2(week3)：MU QING

Dear professor, good afternoon. Here are the 10 Wikipedia edits I made this week. Please review.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 03:45, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good. When you add a reference with Chinese title like you did here, please also add the translated title in English using the translated title parameter. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1 (Week 2) DENGHUICHEN

Hello, professor, I have joined the dashboard system. And completed the training task. Please ask the professor to check it. thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 05:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 Ok! Which training task did you complete? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students DENG HUICHEN (talk) 13:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) DENGHUICHEN

Hello, professor, I have supplemented and explained the article peony on Wikipedia. Please check it, thank you. DENG HUICHEN (talk) 06:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Paeonia_%C3%97_suffruticosa&action=edit&section=8 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 등혜진 (talk • contribs) 07:39, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 Ok. But please remember all content added to Wikipedia has to be referenced (see WP:V). I have removed some content that was unreferenced and not written in correct English. In the future, please use Grammarly or similar tools to check for errors in the content you add. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:06, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

deadline 3(week4) Kim Yujin

Hello, professor! I've finished editing! Please check! I'll add translation work soon, too! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Huejyi Huejyi (talk) 06:30, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Huejyi Good. Please review why your edit was removed here. Your other edits to Tik Tok topics are very good. Keep it up! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:15, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article translated from English to Chinese(DENGHUICHEN)

Hello, professor! I'm DENGHUICHEN,taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.I want to add (Abortion in Japan ) this article and translate it from English into Chinese,thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 08:02, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 Abortion in Japan is a good choice, but you will need to chose one more topic to translate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) :ZHANG MINGSHUO

hello, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. Chinese to English中国近代史 English to Chinese Anak Krakatoa I would appreciate it if you could check out these two articles and give me some feedback.I'll finish it myself. Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 08:58, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 According to the spreadsheet you signed, you are taking Collective Intelligence and Everday Life courses, not Introduction. Anak Krakatoa can be translated to Chinese. zh:中国近代史 can be translated to English, but remember that only referenced part can be translated (see WP:V). Please let me know which course you want to assign those projects to (Everyday Life or Collective Intelligence?) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excuse me, Professor.I am are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. Shuo1103 (talk) 08:00, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 I have added Krakatoa to Chinese. zh:中国近代史 to English for Collective Intelligence. Is your name entry for Everyday Life an error? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry, professor. I may have signed the wrong form. I'm a student of Introductory Course in Collective Intelligence and Sociology of Informationclasses. I don't have daily life. This class is causing trouble for the professor. Shuo1103 (talk) 05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Thank you for the clarification. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week 4) :Lee Yunjoo

Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. I added a reference to this article: History of Korea.

also, I finished editing wiki more than 10 this week. Leeyj0401 Please check it out. Thank you! Leeyj0401 (talk) 09:10, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Very good. But remember that all content we add to Wikipedia should be referenced. For example here I see some content you added that is not referenced. Please add references in your next week edits. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) ：HUANGQIHAO,HONGJIARAN

Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Redyeoniand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Hkiho (talk) 09:13, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Good topics - all approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) ：HONGJIARAN，HUANGQIHAO

Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Hkihoand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Redyeoni (talk) 09:19, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Redyeoni Good - approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:26, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

zh:2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 is not available on Chinese Wikipedia? It was deleted on 1 April 2024. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 20:26, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheLonelyPather The redirects are messed up after some moves and pointless (IMHO) deletions of said redirects, but the article I believe is here now: zh:邯郸初中生杀人案 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:12, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing —WU SHUHAN

I'd like to tell you about my work this week and ask for feedback.

1.I completed Wikipedia edits ten times a week.

2.Published a blog post:W3.1 WSH0927 (talk) 09:20, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Well done. When you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. PS. I am glad you found the story of Michael S. Hart interesting. His biography can be translated to Chinese for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:29, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing -HUANGQIHAO

Hello Professor, I have completed ten edits per week. Please check it. If there is anything I did not do well, please remind me and I will correct it immediately. Thank you! Hkiho (talk) 11:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Good start. Unfortunately your edits were removed from Wikipedia because they were not referenced. Please remember to add only referenced content to Wikipedia - see WP:V . You can restore your edit if you can back it up with reliable sources. Baidu is not allowed as a reference on Wikipedia. See WP:BAIDU _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, professor. Thanks to your reminder, I found the problem. I'll fix it next time Hkiho (talk) 04:27, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 5)LI HAOCHANG HAN YUANYUAN

Hello professor, this is the translation assignment of Han Yuanyuan and Li Haochang. We have completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please ask the professor to check 1 and 2. If there are any shortcomings, please give your suggestions and we will seriously revise it. Thank you, Professor, for your hard work. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 12:08, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link

Regarding your Korean translation, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:35, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 01:28, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(Week4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I translated "Observer Bias" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check. And I found that the second article I selected cannot seem to be edited at the same time as the first article. Should I start editing the second article after the first article is published?Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 13:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Your translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审

I am not sure what you mean about the problem with the second article. You can create another sandbox to work on it - talk to me during or after class if you need help with this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:37, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) ：LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)

Hello professor, we are LIYULUN, SHAOJIANUAN from the eighth group. We discussed the theme of our group with you. English translation into Chinese - Intensive animal farming. Translated from Chinese to English - 开心宝贝Happy Baby. LIYULUN (talk) 16:56, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Good, topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Deadline2(week3)：LIU XINRUI

Hello Professor, I have finished editing Wikipedia this week and blogging weekly.Please check. Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 19:43, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 I am glad you found the story of Michael S. Hart interesting. His biography can be translated to Chinese for extra credit. Regarding your weekly edits, they look fine but remember that half of them should be in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-LI MENGRU

Hello Professor, I am LI MENGRU, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.

I have completed more than ten English Wikipedia edits this week, please check here.

I would appreciate it if you could give me any suggestions. Thank you！TMXX0818 (talk) 06:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Good job! See if you can use more scholarly references in the future. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 23:03, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(Week 3)Sociology of Everyday Life-MU QING

I have finished editing Wikipedia this week.Please check it.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 10:42, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good job. I will also give you additional feedback on your translation at User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student:

there is unnecessary underlinking, for example <u>had been bullying the victim at school</u>. It should be removed.
You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
the incident was covered by international media, including English. Please add some references in English. I recommend sources like CNN, Washington Post, The Guardian, BBC
for your existing references, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter. Ask me in class if you need help). Add other missing medadata (date, names of authors) and fix publisher from url to company name (ex. not www.nbd.com.cn but National Business Daily).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:19, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON

Hello professor, I'm Hayoung Kwon, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I am editing "Yellow Journalism" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. And I also added references and hyperlinks. Please check it. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:46, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Good start. You will need to fix some references - ask me during or after class for help and I'll show you how. Try to use ISBN for books to generate better citations instead of links to worldcat (for example, for Skull in the Ashes). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:24, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I revised the quote number 9. Please check it. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 08:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 It is better. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have corrected it here, please check it, thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 17:25, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Good, outline is accepted. Now try to add missing links and reference content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:01, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Before doing Deadline 5, I have 2 questions to ask.

Q1. May I know once again how to add missing links and reference?

Q2. I added the first 'Yellow Journalism' edit to my sandbox, and I was wondering where I should add the second 'New York Times' edit.

I'm sorry to bother you, and I'll be waiting for your answer. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 04:40, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Regarding 1), ask me in after class or during office hours and I'll demonstrate. Regarding 2), you can create a new sandbox. I can demonstrate. Or you can read the guide here: Wikipedia:About_the_sandbox#Creating_more_sandboxes_in_your_User_namespace _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:42, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your detailed answer. Thanks to you, my second edit is going on here. Regarding the first question, I will ask you in the next class. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:44, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week4) Kwon Jaeeun

Hello, professor. Corrected the wrong reference forSugar (15& album)#Promotions. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 14:52, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu Good job replacing Facebook content with something less social media-ish. Keep it up! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week 4) kim yeonjun

Quote completed. Check it out here [Special:Contributions/Kim1357] Kim1357 (talk) 16:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 The first part of your edit here is good. But for the second one, you need to replace a reference to Korean Wikipedia with a different, more reliable source. Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference, please read about Circular reporting _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I checked this. I'll fix it later. And I'm looking to change the online hot speech allocated to me to Net neutrality#By country. Can you please allow it? Kim1357 (talk) 15:09, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 Yes - we did this in class I believe. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) ——FAN XINRU

Hello,professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.I'd like to expand this article, please check it out, thank you.The link is here. Jzhdylb (talk) 01:15, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb That article is already lengthy. I would recommend choosing a different topic. However, if you have located academic sources, you could use them to improve this article. Talk to me in class or during office hours if you would still like to edit this topic (and show me what sources you would like to use). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Professor. I have decided to change the topic. I would like to create an article with the theme of "Popular Mobile Software in China". Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb I am afraid this topic can be difficult. Instead, how about translating an article (or articles, if they are short) from Chinese to English about popular Chinese software that does not have English article yet? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:12, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello dear professor. Regarding your proposal, I have carefully considered it but have not found any relevant articles on the topic in Wikipedia, so I am unable to complete the translation task for this topic article. If the difficulty of this question is relatively high, I would like to replace it with a new one, such as "Chinese style element trend in China". I feel confident that I can complete its creation task. I hope you can help me with the review. Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 05:16, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb I appreciate your desire to create new topics, but we have to ensure they are correctly named. What is Chinese style element trend in China? Is this about architecture? Fashion? Software? I strongly encourage you to translate content rather than write it from scratch. There are many Chinese Wikipedia articles missing in English. If you want to work on a specific area (software, etc.) but have trouble finding related articles, come talk to me during office hours and we will look for something together. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your suggestion! I think your suggestion is correct. I am planning to change the theme and would like to expand this article or translate this article . I hope you can give me some advice, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:05, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Proto-globalization can be translated to Chinese but you will need to chose one more topic to work. Adding information Voluntary childlessness about Korea and expanding information about China would be a good second choice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week3)__KIM NAKYOUNG

Hi professor. I chose the CHINESE CENSORSHIP ABROAD and ONLINE HATE SPEECH for second project.

Chinese censorship abroad

Online hate speech

I would like to translate these two article into Korean. Is it available? Njkcs478 (talk) 01:58, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Can you check CORRUPTION IN RUSSIA or INTERNET CENSORSHIP IN THE UNITED STATES is available topic instead of ONLINE HATE SPEECH? Njkcs478 (talk) 02:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Njkcs478 Corruption in Russia and Internet censorship in the United States are both available at the moment. I'll reserve the first one for you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(제2주) _김민지

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Minis707 (talk) 02:28, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 Ok! Please try to complete other assignments on time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week4) Sociology of Everyday Life - Shin seongmin

Hi professor! I added some references in article of Chin Jung-kwon notable South Korean aesthetician, critic, and professor and article of Ryu Ho-jeong a South Korean politician Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinseongmin1917 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(제2주) _손서현

Hello, professor. I'm Seohyun Son. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Seohyun S (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S Good. Please try to complete other assignments on time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _손서현

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class.

I chose to translate 'Korean rock' into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_rock Please check it out! Seohyun S (talk) 02:49, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S I am afraid Korean rock is already reserved by another student. You will need to chose a different topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _김민지

Hello Professor, I am taking every day Life and Social Structure class. I chose to translate Film Sensibility in South_Korea into Korean for my 3rd week assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Film_censorship_in_South_Korea

Dear student. Please remember to sign your wiki messages properly. That topic is already reserved for another student and you will need to choose a different one. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _손서현

Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class.

I chose again to translate 'South Korean protest music' into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon.!!

South Korean protest music - Wikipedia

Seohyun S (talk) 04:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. How about Vietnam War protest music? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:32, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _김민지

Hello professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Information overload into Korean for my week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Information_overload

Minis707 (talk) 04:16, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. Also, please talk to me after class as I cannot find Minis707 in our spreadsheet; there are two students with your name 김민지 but they reported two different Wikipedia usernames to me. Please let me know if one of them is yours (but wrong) or if you are a third 김민지 taking my class this year. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:36, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Project operation：WU SHUHAN

Excuse me, Professor. .About my project assignment: Wikidata query: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . As we discussed before, I will create an English Wikipedia with the title She Ci. But I suddenly discovered that her article already existed under another name: She Xiang. Although it has very little content. And here is her Chinese Wikipedia: She Xiang. Can I continue with my original project topic, or can I replace another Chinese woman to create the article? Please tell me your suggestion. WSH0927 (talk) 04:54, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 It is fine to continue - you can expand the Chinese article and the English one, as we discussed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:43, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly edit(extra credit) Kwon Jaeeun

Hello professor, I edit two article. I have additionally translated the shortcomings in the documents here from English to Korean. And added new contents at here. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 04:57, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu: I cannot see any edits of yours in the English superband article you linked (histor)? For the content added to Lucy, please try to add a reference. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:14, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I wrote url incorrectly. You can see the history of superband documentation [| her]e. Cookinu (talk) 02:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu I see it now. Good job, but remember to add references as soon as you can. They are also needed on Korean Wikipedia; see ko:위키백과:확인 가능 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week4) YANG PEIFU

Hello professor,I made at least one edit outside the sandbox and added an inline reference to it inside the sandbox. And the editor of Wikivoyage.Please check it out， thank you！ Yangpeifu (talk) 05:55, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Ok. Please make sure to check the feedback on your draft I provided at #Deadline 2（week3）YANGPEIFU above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:17, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2(Week 3) WANG YUERONG,TIAN XIAOYU

Hello Professor, my friend Tian Xiaoyu and I want to complete the translation work in a team. Tian Xiaoyu registered the translation work last week as a personal project and now wants to cancel the individual project to enter the team work.

Here are the translation topics we have chosen:

Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia："copyfaud" This article was translated from English to Chinese."奇虎360相关争议"This article was translated from Chinese into English.

Everyday Life and Social Structure ："Censorship of TikTok "This article was translated from English to Chinese."豫章书院修身教育专修学校"This article was translated from Chinese into English.

Please help us check whether it is feasible, thank you!

Have a nice day! WYRRRR (talk) 07:55, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR @Sephyy I see. Your friend Tian Xiaoyu previously told me they want to work individually and they have chosen articles they want to translate for Everyday Life (Deft (gamer) to zh 西遊記大結局之仙履奇緣 to en (Cinderella Wonders of the Great Finale)). Is this no longer correct?

They also have chosen other topics for the other class (Collective intelligence): Definitions of knowledge to zh and 对百度的争议 to en (Controversy over Baidu).

For now, I'll approve most other topics you mention for you. Please let me know in class which topics you want to keep and if you are working together or individually.

Censorship of TikTok is already reserved for another student, unfortunately, so you'll need to chose another topic. Translation of 豫章书院修身教育专修学校#立案与审判 to English is approved. Translation of copyfraud to zh is approved. 奇虎360相关争议 to en (Qihoo 360 controversy is approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:26, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I would like to cancel my personal translation project and form a team with my friend WANG YUERONG to complete the translation task.

Thank you. Sephyy (talk) 06:00, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Week 4 - Chang yeop Jung

Hello! I'm taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I deleted dead link and added new Citation. Please check it Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 09:13, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:27, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: week4 - Kim minjun (Collective intelligence)

Hello professor. I’m Kim minjun taking Collective Intelligence class.

I removed the dead link. (Wiki link /I performed it in class today and presented it.).

Dead link: https://www.sksports.net/Wyverns/about/WyvernsMunhakStadium.asp

I also make a new citation to Kbo League(in Korea Wikipedia). Here is it.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/KBO_%EB%A6%AC%EA%B7%B8#cite_ref-28

KMJ0521 (talk) 10:09, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 Well done. When using edit summaries on Korean Wikipedia, it is ok and even recommended to use Korean not English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:30, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 5)YUE ZIYI

Hello! Professor. I am YUE ZIYI, a student majoring in sociology of daily life. This week I translated Sailor tattoos and Social psychology (sociology) in the sandbox. Here's mine User:YZY2233/沙盒2 and User:YZY2233/沙盒 , Please check. YZY2233 (talk) 10:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Your translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) -ZHANG QI

Hello Professor, I am ZHANG QI and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. I have completed the selection of the topic for my Collective Intelligence course. I want to choose the theme of Everyday Life and Social Structure for this course now.The theme I want to choose is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_influence_on_Japanese_culture and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/重庆历史 ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good. I assume the latter means that you will translate the former (Chinese influence...) to Chinese and expand the existing article on History of Chongqing in English? Topics approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:36, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, Chongqing history is an article I want to translate from Chinese to English. Chinese Influence on Japanese culture is an Article I Want to Translate from English to Chinese.These two articles are my own group of articles for the class on 'Everyday Life and Social Structure’ ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:24, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(week4) -ZHANG QI

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Hangzhou Daily" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. I have a question, I have two of your classes with a total of four articles. Does this mean that I have to start preparing four articles at the same time, or can I finish one article before editing the next one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 13:39, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 It is totally fine to finish one before starting on another.

Your draft is quite good. A few sentences need clarification, for example "n March 1992, the folio 4-page "West Lake Weekend" (later expanded to 8 color printing)" is missing a verb. I recommend using a service like Grammarly to double check your prose.

Some content in your draft needs references, for example the paragraph "The Hangzhou Daily now has 8 pages on Mondays, 20 pages on Tuesdays and Wednesdays, 24 pages on Thursdays and Fridays, and 4 pages on Saturdays, Sundays and holidays. The content of the newspaper covers important news, Hangzhou news, district and county (city) news, Zhejiang news, China and international news, economic news, culture and sports news and supplements." If the Chinese version is also missing a reference, you can add it there as well for extra credit.

If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. For example, I'd expect Shenyang Daily to have a zh wiki article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the correction. During this period, I will make good revisions to my article. 218.235.241.135 (talk) 05:18, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4)- Kim Seo Eun

Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 15:17, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 Your reference is good, but in your edit why did you chance "Haemaro" to "Haimarrow "? This seems like an error - please restore the original spelling unless you can explain to me why your version is better. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Umm.. actually it’s not an error. I edited because the company’s official spelling is Haimarrow. Not the Haemaro. You can see here. Also, when you search haemaro in google, you cannot see the company that take over mom’s touch. When you search haimarrow, you can find the official site. Haimarrow and Haemaro, both can read “해마로“, its not a problem in korean, but i think it have to be more correct in enlglish wikipedia.(because it is a korea company, enlgish users can have a problem when they search it.) 210.98.151.244 (talk) 16:09, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 I see. Thank you for correcting me, you are indeed right. I recommend you copy your explanation from here to the article's talk page at Talk:Mom's Touch for extra credit. Other people can be confused like I was and it is good to explain this to them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I copied my explanation to the article's talk page here. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 12:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 Very good. I also recommend using software like Grammarly to improve your English output _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. For extra credit, perhaps you can take a picture of the store (front and inside) and add it to the article? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _손서현

@Seohyun S Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. How about Vietnam War protest music?

I see, professor. I will translate and upload 'South Korean protest music' and 'Vietnam War protest music'. Thank you.

+By when do I have to submit the assignment??? Seohyun S (talk) 12:55, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S Topics approved. Good job. Please see syllabus for information on deadlines. If you cannot find them, ask me in class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4) - Soongki Kim

Hello, professor.

I have done for deadline3 assignment.

You can check out the reference I added through here.

I would appreciate feedback on my reference after you confirm it.

Thank you. Soongki (talk) 15:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Soongki Very good, it looks fine. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia edit：BAILINHAN

Professor, I am a student at Collective Intelligence in Practice: This is my 40th Wikipedia edit this month, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 00:48, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Your edits look quite good, but some further fixes are needed.

In here, one of the paragraphs you added has no reference - this needs to be fixed - see Wikipedia:Verifiability.

In Pegasus 2, there is no need to add the same review to the lead and the body. First, add to the body, then summarize the content in the lead shortly. Baidu is also not an acceptable source (see WP:BAIDU). Some content is also unreferenced; I've removed some empty headings as Wikipedia does not allow empty section headings.

'Evaluate' is not a term that is used in section headings in English. Perhaps you mean 'Reception'. Please study IWikipedia:Manual of Style/Film - I expect you will find it very useful. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(week 3) Choi sieon

Hello, professor. I want to do this topic. This is because although it is widespread in Korea, I have never really looked into it in detail. Please check it.

History of feminism. Choisieon (talk) 00:57, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Good choice - topic approved. But remember to chose one more topic to complete this assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:58, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oops. I choose one more topic. Please check it!

Proto-globalization Choisieon (talk) 08:02, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Ok - topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:37, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week4 ) Choi sieon

Hello, professor. I edited the parts in the list you sent that I liked but were not translated properly. This is a famous Korean idol's song. However, I have a question. I would like to attach their album photos, but is that impossible even if it is for public use?

First off, I didn't use it. Please check it. Choisieon (talk) 01:18, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon I am afraid such images are copyrighted and thus not allowed on Wikipedia. On English Wikipedia one picture (cover art) might be allowed in low resolution per WP:FAIRUSE. For Korean wiki, see ko:위키백과:비자유 저작물의 공정한 이용 and ask on Korean wiki help forum or discord if you want to learn more. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oops. I choose one more topic. Please check it!

Proto-globalization Choisieon (talk) 08:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4):ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor, I am Zhang Zehua from the Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia course. These are the ten Wikipedia edits I completed this week Wu Sha, please check them out, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 01:26, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Excellent job, this looks very nice! Keep it up! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:11, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dead line3(week 4) Seoyoon Jang

Good evening professor. I translated KoreanRock Wiki. You can find my name on edit tab. Have a good night. Seoyoon J (talk) 10:42, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seoyoon J Good, but please remember to add references or content you add may be removed from Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . This also applies to Korean Wikipedia, see ko:위키백과:확인 가능 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:30, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article translation：Xue Dongxin

Hello Professor! After you told me last time, I chose to translate "Ming Dynasty Zheng family" from Chinese to English in my Collective Intelligence in Practice class.Please check it out, thank you! Donghem (talk) 11:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Ok, very good choice, topic approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4) Lee jiyoon

Hello, professor. I'm Jiyoon Lee, taking Collective Intelligence. I deleted the dead external link for this article and added a reference.T-ara Jiyoon Leee (talk) 01:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee I am afraid you linked a wrong article - I do not see any edits of yours there (history). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:33, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I think I left a conversation without making a final update.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cho_Kyu-hyun

I switched to this article, added a reference, and erased some dead links from the external links. Please check. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 13:56, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee I see now, good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:39, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4)WANG YIFAN

Hello Professor, I have attempted the Wikipedia editing task for the course Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia and Everyday Life and Social Structure. Please review😊💐💐 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 10:45, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 Very good.

I noticed your edit for Casablanca film was reverted with an editor citing the WP:UNDUE policy. If you disagree, you can try to explain why your content is due (relevant) by making a comment on the talk page.

Here, you should make sure there is a reference for the final sentence(s). Right now your reference is in the middle of the paragraph, creating an impression the second half has no reference. In fact, those sentences were quickly removed as unreferenced - see here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok！thank you! I will check my editor immediately😊💗 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 09:50, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1（week2）Chen Gui

Hello, professor, my name is Chen Gui. I am a student of "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I joined the dashboard and completed the training mission. Sorry for the late reply.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students ChenGui (talk) 12:39, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ChenGui Ok - better late than never :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

week4--FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have completed two editing tasks. Please take a look at these,thank you. Here are the links.1.2 Jzhdylb (talk) 13:38, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Well done! However, at Chinese tea the content you added should be moved down to the "varieties' section. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week 3) Chen Gui

Hello Professor, I would like to select the article "When China rules the World" and translate it from English to Chinese. The second article is "South Korean protest music" translated into Chinese. ChenGui (talk) 13:40, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ChenGui When China Rules the World! and South Korean protest music are approved, good choices _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1（week2）Wang Tao

Hello, professor. My name is Wang Tao. I joined the dashboard and completed the training, please check. Thanks https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Wangtao626 (talk) 15:44, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Ok - better late than never :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2（week3）Wang Tao

Hello, professor. I want to select "Corruption in the United States" as the translation task and translate it into Chinese. Wangtao626 (talk) 15:56, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Corruption in the United States is approved for a topic, but if you are working solo, you'll need to chose one more topic. How about Corruption in Canada? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:53, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

certainly. “Corruption in Canada” sounds good to me. thank you professor Wangtao626 (talk) 08:40, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) HUANG YANHAN

Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 19:13, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 This is a good start but you'll need to expand it before I can give you any substantial feedback. When you think you are ready, you can also ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:55, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）

Hello professor, I'm Gaoxiaoxia.I fixed the error in this entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_calligraphy?wprov=sfla1 this week and added some reference links. Please check Babaibiaobin (talk) 02:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin I see. The link to Tatar wingceltis can be red and there is no need to remove it - see WP:RED. The link to Vietnamese painting seems more relevant than to Vietnamese calligraphy, although the latter is an important concept - but it (Vietnamese calligraphy) is linked from the article. Red links are reminders to readers and editors that those topics need to be written about.

If Yang Ningshi has an article on Chinese Wikipedia, we should link it using Template:Interlanguage link so that it looks like this : Yang Ningshi [zh]

I have corrected the article. Good job identifying that 楊凝式 has a Chinese Wikipedia article! Now it is linked from English. Perhaps you'd like to translate his article to English for extra credit? (Athough the zh wiki article, sadly, does not seem to be well referenced) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:03, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2（week3）Lee Sung Mi

Hello, Professor. I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_law From English to Korean https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class From English to Korean. I told the professor the article I chose last week in class, but I'm posting it again here just in case. 166.104.240.147 (talk) 02:41, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Lee Sung Mi. You forgot to sign your message here. Please remember to do it next time. Your projects are approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:05, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week4) Sociology of Everyday Life QIU PENGYU

Hi professor! I added some references in Sejong Institute. Please check it Thank you! MouFengcoo (talk) 03:07, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MouFengcoo Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:06, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4) Hong gyeongmin

Hello, professor. I'm Gyeongmin Hong, taking Collective Intelligence. I completed deadline 3. I fixed the error and added some reference (citation); https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gimbap. Please check. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 04:01, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 I see. It looks ok for our class, but another editor disagreed and removed it here. I suggest you start a discussion on the talk page of that article and ask them for more details on why your edit was removed, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly edit- Changyeop Jung

Hello professor! I did 20 extra wikipedia edit. please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 05:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 I see. You are adding valuable content here, but remember that all content we add has to be referenced. Unreferenced content does not count for our class and it can be removed from Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:10, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week4) Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, I have completed this week's homework, please check Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:23, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 You are adding helpful content, but please remember that all content we add has to be referenced. Unreferenced content does not count for our class and it can be removed from Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability . You can use your next week's edits to add the references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:11, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Deadline3(week4) -MU QING

Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 06:00, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:12, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

weekly edit(week4) DENG HUICHEN

Hello professor, I have made many extra edits, please check it, thank you.

Qingdao#Administrative divisions DENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:08, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 I see. But in (here:, you removed some useful text and code - please restore it (see bottom - the paragraph on "The sub-provincial city of Qingdao has seven..."). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:14, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I get it DENG HUICHEN (talk) 04:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4) -LIU XINRUI

Hello Professor,I finished editing Wikipedia this week.Special:Contributions/유신예 I translated the MZ세대 article in the sandbox and added references. Please check,thank you . 유신예 (talk) 14:52, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(Week 4)Sociology of Everyday Life-MU QING

Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233

And I translated a short article from English into Chinese. Please check

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/迈克尔·杰克逊_(消歧义) Muqing112233 (talk) 05:22, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good. But some of the content you added was removed - please see the edit history here. If you think it should be restored, please start a discussion on its talk page and notify the editor who removed that you wish to discuss it using the Wikipedia:ECHO feature.

Your extra credit translation to Chinese is a good start. But after you publish it, remember that unreferenced content can be removed. See zh:维基百科:可供查證 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:16, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (week 4) Chen Gui

Hello Professor, I have added two references to the article "Nanjing". https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanjing

I uploaded my work in Wikimedia Commons. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:GULOU_Nanjing.jpg

Please confirm, thank you very much. ChenGui (talk) 09:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ChenGui Good job. For your pictures, try to add high quality versions, the image you uploaded seems to be significantly downsized from the original. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:18, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3(week 4) -FAN XINRU

Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I completed this week. Please review it. Thank you. The link is here. Jzhdylb (talk) 10:21, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good, but some of the content you added has been removed here. New World Encyclopedia is not a reliable source - see the linked article for information (it is a website that copies some Wikipedia content and introduces religious bias into the resulting articles). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:20, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주)_김민지

Hello Professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Overexploitation into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will upload the translation assignment soon as well. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Overexploitation Minis707 (talk) 12:53, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 I see. Unfortunately, Overexploitation has already been reserved for Korean translation by another student so you'll need to find a different topic. How about Overgrazing? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:22, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, professor, I'll do it on that topic. Minis707 (talk) 04:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 OK - topic accepted. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주)_김민지

Hello Professor, I'm Minji Kim, I'm taking life and social structure classes every day. I've completed the translation task, so please check it. Thank you.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%3AMinis707%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&action=edit&wvprov=sticky-header Minis707 (talk) 13:07, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 This is a good start. Please work on adding references and hyperlinks (blue links) as well as images next. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:23, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2（week 3）-----ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening, Professor. I have added the group article to my entry.Please check it ,thankyou ！AYAO32269 (talk) 13:20, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:24, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4）-----ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening, Professor. For the history part of Xinxiang, I added the book information related to the history of Xinxiang. Please check it. Thank you！AYAO32269 (talk) 13:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Very good. Please add the title in English using the 'translated title' parameter. If you don't know how, ask me in class or afterward and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:25, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes Professor. I've added the translation title and book page to the message. Please check. Thank you. AYAO32269 (talk) 09:51, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Can you add the page range to your citation? Which pages in that book discuss the events mentioned in this paragraph? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2（week 3）-----JIA MENGZHUO

Good evening, Professor. I have added the group article to my entry.Please check https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2024)/students/articles/Zhuo1221 Zhuo1221 (talk) 13:53, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:25, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4（week 5) Lee Yunjoo

Hello, professor.

I'm Lee Yunjoo. I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'

I'm almost done translating the 'population growth' article from English to Korean. Please give me your feedback and I'll fix it. Thank you. Leeyj0401 (talk) 14:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 The formatting looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4）-----JIA MENGZHUO

Good evening, professor.I'm JIA MENGZHUO. Regarding the section on the history of Henan, I have added information about books related to the famine in the history of Henan.Please check https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Henan&diff=1216356392&oldid=1216028534 Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Very good. Can you add the page range to your citation? Which pages in that book discuss the events mentioned in this paragraph? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good afternoon, Professor. I have added the range of page numbers in the citation. Please check it https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Henan&diff=1216838097&oldid=1216673540 Zhuo1221 (talk) 08:02, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 16:47, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:29, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Good evening, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I've done more than 50% of the translation editing of a single article. It's here.

And I posted a blog about my thoughts after reading Goffman's book "The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life". Please check it out and hopefully I can get some extra points.

In the meantime I inserted a map into wikivoyage 'Nantong', hoping to get some extra points. Thank you very much and have a nice day. Csiiiyu (talk) 17:40, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Good job. To make the map useful, we should have at least one place with GPS coordinates in the article that would display on the map.

Regarding your translation to Chinese, it seems well formatted. I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审

Note that on Wikivoyage one of your edits was undone - see rationale here. If you disagree, start a discussion on the talk page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:31, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - WANG YUERONG

Good evening, professor, I'm translating the article in the sandbox. Please check it.

And I've completed 20 Wikipedia editors. Please check it.

Thank you very much and have a nice day. WYRRRR (talk) 18:45, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR Your Chinese translation is a good start. Try to work on references next. When you are near finished, I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审

Regarding your additions to English Wikipedia, please remember to add references. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:33, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - Seoyoon Jang

Good day professor. I translated wiki and put some references on article. http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/K-rock Seoyoon J (talk) 03:50, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

please check it and have a nice day — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seoyoon J (talk • contribs) 03:50, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seoyoon J Looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:34, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) -Chaehyun Lee

Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Chaekyo (talk) 06:15, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaekyo Looks good! Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:35, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Optional weekly project- Kim seo eun

Hi professor, I’m a student in your class “Everyday Life and Social Structure”. I uploaded my first licenced(free) image to wikimedia commons. This is my work. I’m not sure that if I do this correctly. I need your feedback. Thanks. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:49, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 It looks correct, well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:45, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing -HUANGQIHAO

Hello Professor！I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.This is a change I made on Wikipedia this week, I fixed a lot of errors in the color of the links, please check, and some links still show purple instead of blue, please give a little suggestion thank you for a nice day! Hkiho (talk) 09:24, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Good job. But when you add content to Wikipedia, like you did here, make sure it is referenced. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day！ Hkiho (talk) 17:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".

Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) - WANG YIHUA

Good afternoon Professor. I am Wang Yihua.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have added relevant journals on abortion in China, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 09:47, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good job, using academic references is always very good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:50, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) -MENGRU LI

Good afternoon Professor.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have added relevant journals on abortion in China, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! TMXX0818 (talk) 10:06, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Which language did you do it in? You linked to your English contributions above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry for the mistake in the link. I have added these references as follows. 1 ,2,3,4,5. If there is any problem, please let me know. Thank you very much！TMXX0818 (talk) 00:41, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Good, very good - using academic references is commendable. But please fix the URLs in your first reference. It should link to the specific article. Your first url link however goes to a general Google query. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence. I have the main project topics tracked to my dashboard and have started working in the sandbox. I've also finished adding citations this week. You can check it. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:42, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Good job, but some fixes are needed. Please check if your links work - for example, your reference 34 here seems to be broken (404). In addition, if the original reference has a Chinese title, you should include in the title= field, and add the English translation to the translated title= field. If you do not know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Oh, and here you added just Chinese title but not the English translation. Both should be used. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:58, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing--ZHANGMINGSHUO

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.

Here is my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:02, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good job. But when you add content to Wikipedia, like you did here, make sure it is referenced. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:58, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing--HONG JIARAN

HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it out.

Redyeoni (talk) 11:06, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Redyeoni I am afraid your edits are not acceptable. They were unreferenced and based on copying content from another website. All edits done for our class need to be referenced (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and they have to be reworded (see Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources). Please try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:02, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) - WANG YUERONG

Good afternoon Professor.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have added relevant journals on Chinese knotting, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! WYRRRR (talk) 11:34, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR Good. When you cite a book, please add a page range as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:03, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) - ZHANG RUIQING

Hi professor, I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Everyday Life and Social Structure, and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title.Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 11:46, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Very good. Your third paragraph here appears to need a reference? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:04, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing -ZHANG QI

Hi professor, I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed over 20 editing tasks, but the Chinese Wikipedia I edited does not appear on my homepage. I have placed the historical editing links for these entries here https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%A5%8E%E6%96%87%E5%8C%BA&action=history and https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%BD%8D%E5%9D%8A%E5%B8%82&action=history and here is my homepage. You can see my ID: ZHANGQI1066 in the link. I hope these editors can earn me extra points for both of these classes. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:52, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Well done. Since each Wikipedia is independent, you cannot access your Chinese contributions from the English page. Compare: User contributions for ZHANGQI1066 - Wikipedia to ZHANGQI1066的用户贡献 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 (wikipedia.org) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:07, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

thanks! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 14:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week 4) - WANG YUERONG

Good evening， Professor. I am a student in Sociology of Everyday Life.

I added inline references, please check.Thank you.

WYRRRR (talk) 12:49, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:07, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）—TIAN XIAOYU

Hello professor, this is the quote I added. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Feicheng&action=history Sephyy (talk) 12:55, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:09, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing--WANG YUERONG

HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it .Thank you. WYRRRR (talk) 13:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WYRRRR Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:10, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation assignments on the wiki

Hi professor, I am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure. I edited and added references in here. please check.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wsw1357/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Wsw1357 (talk) 14:15, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wsw1357 That's a good start but the adding a reference activity needs to be completed on a live (public) page, not in your sandbox. Please try to add a reference to an unreferenced content in a real article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:11, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）——TIANXIAOYU

Hello professor, this is the quote I added.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tai'an#cite_note-9 Sephyy (talk) 14:33, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy I see. Your contributions look good, well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:12, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）HUANGQIHAO

Hello Professor！I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.I have already started my translation work, I translated the first paragraph before it could be quoted and inserted, if there is any grammar problem, please give me your opinion, I will change it in time, thank you! Hkiho (talk) 14:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho This is a good start and the grammar is fine. However, as it happens, another of our students has translated this very article without discussing this with me - I assume this was done for extra credit although I have not heard from them yet. See User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student . As such, while you have successfully completed all assignments so far, and I will credit your work as well, I recommend that you change your topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day！ Hkiho (talk) 17:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho

The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".

Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, can I meet the final requirements of the article now, because the previous article others choose, I can change the topic to meet the requirements of the article very few, I hope you can tell me what else to do, thank you very much for your reply Hkiho (talk) 01:59, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho I am afraid I do not understand your question. Just above I told you what you need to do to bring your work up to acceptable quality. If anything I wrote is unclear, please let me know here or you can come to my office hours or talk to me after our class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:30, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - Ha young Kwon

Hello, professor. I'm Kwon Ha-young, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure. I've completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please check it. If there is anything lacking, please let me know. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:03, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Please see my feedback at #Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:25, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）HONGJIARAN

HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I have started to make translation homework Please check it.Thank you! Redyeoni (talk) 15:08, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Redyeoni It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3（week4）ZHANG MINGSHUO

Hello, Professor, I have already begun, my translation work has been translated into, Chinese translation has not been fully completed, please check Shuo1103 (talk) 15:11, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have completed more than twenty edits to the English Wikipedia this week (Week 4) (a total of more than eighty edits to the Wikipedia this month:1 2, as well as five blog post writings). please check.

I would appreciate it if you could give me advice or correct my mistakes! Zhongxxin (talk) 16:41, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Well done. I have removed some stray code here; other than that your edits look good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:30, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) Chaeyeong Lee

Hello professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure. I chose Beer in Japan and The Economist. Please check document allocation. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 02:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaeyeong09 Yes, that is confirmed - good choices. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(week4) Chaeyeong Lee

Hello, professor. I'm chaeyeong Lee, taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. Additional explanation along with citation has been added to the mascot section. Doosan Bears Please check if it has been completed properly. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:47, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaeyeong09 Good. There is one error to correct: the title of the reference should be in the original language (here, Korean). The English translation title should be moved to the translated title parameter. If you don't know how to do it, please ask me during or after class and I'll show you how to do it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:32, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(제3주) _손서현

Deadline 2, I submit the translation task. I wrote the translations of two articles at once. Please check. :)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Seohyun_S/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

Seohyun S (talk) 04:10, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S This is a good start. However, to avoid code errors, each of your articles should be in a separate sandbox. Please move one of them to a new sandbox. If you do not know how to do it, ask me during or after class.

Next, you will need to add references and hyperlinks. Keep up the good progress! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(week5) Hong Gyeongmin

Hello. I'm Gyeongmin Hong, taking Collective intellignece. I act for extra credit. I found a Wikipedia article that should be deleted. I think that article have wrong information. Thus, I modify name of content. It was Sea of Japan after i fixed Donghae.(East sea) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 04:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 I am afraid this was not an error; please read the information under Sea_of_Japan#Names ,

I also note that you have been adding unreferenced content to Wikipedia despite receiving numerous notifications not do so on your talk page, including one from me. Please note that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability.

Unreferenced content is not allowed, and it does not count for extra credit or weekly tasks. If you keep adding unreferenced content, your account may be blocked from Wikipedia, making it difficult for you to complete tasks for our class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4(week 5): Chang yeop Jung

Hello professor, I'm Changyeop Jung, taking collective intelligence. I have completed the outline. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 09:13, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 The structure looks good, the assignment is completed. Now you need to add more text and remember that all content added needs to be referenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

�Deadline4 (week5) : Kim minjun (Collective Intelligence)

Hello. Professor. I am Kim minjun, taking Collective intelligence class. I made my main wiki projects' outline. Here is the link. Please check it.

1st topic : 'String of Pearls' (Sandbox Link)

2nd topic: 'Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine' (Sandbox Link) KMJ0521 (talk) 11:51, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:45, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) Kwon Jaeeun

Hello professor, I summarized the outline of promotion of anorexia, one of the two articles I translate, and the paragraphs by section. I couldn't do all of them, but I translated about 50% of the articles. There is [| my sandbox] Cookinu (talk) 13:42, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) kim yeonjun

I've translated about 50% of the article. Check it out here[13] I'll add more citations later. Kim1357 (talk) 18:00, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 I will but I am afraid you linked to the English article, not to your work in progress. Please try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I sent it wrong, here it is. Kim1357 (talk) 02:39, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim1357 This looks good, but remember that all content we add to Wikipedia needs a reference. If the original content you translate is missing one, you need to verify that it is correct and add a reference.

If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) Hong Gyeongmin

Hello. Professor. I am Hong Gyeongmin, taking Collective intelligence class. I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. Please check it.

@Hkm5420: Please remember to WP:SIGN your talk page messages. The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:48, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening Professor.I am　taking　Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia　class. Here's my sandbox edit, please check it, thankｙｏｕ．AYAO32269 (talk) 09:55, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Chinese Wikipedia Discord server or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:49, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) JIA MENGZHUO

Good evening, Professor. I have created the project outline in my personal sandbox and completed what needs to be done by this deadline, please check it https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zhuo1221/sandbox Thank you. Have a nice day.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) BAILINHAN

1.I've finished my Wikipedia edits for this week, please check it

2.This is my extension for this week, I don't know if this is how it was done, check it out

Thank you. Bai0926 (talk) 06:35, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Well done, your edits at Moon Man look good.

However, your edits to Chinese clothing need improvement and I have undone them. In here, you changed content without providing a reference, and your style is incorrect - Wikipedia does not address the reader like this: "If we examine". "Why did you remove the mention of "Ancient Chinese literature"?

This addition was ok and you can restore it, but the reference should be at the end of a sentence, not in the middle.

This edit added several paragraphs. All but the last one appear to have no reference and the last one was referenced to Baidu. Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia as a reference, see WP:BAIDU

In this edit, you added a reference. But I do not see how the cited source has anything to do with the information in this paragraph?

This reference is fine, but you broke the paragraph in two parts.

Here, you replaced a paragraph with another one, without a reference and with no explanation why you deleted the old paragraph.

While you added a reference in your next edit, the URL appears to be broken, taking me to a 404 error page.

In your next edit, you added some ok content, but you removed, again without explanation, some other content without providing a reason in your edit summary as to why that content was removed.

Please add only content that is referenced to Wikipedia, and if you remove content, you should clearly explain in your edit summary and/or on article's talk why something was removed (was it wrong?). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5) kimseoeun

Hi professer, I'm a student in your class, "Everyday of Life and Social Structure". I translated my first article "political correctness" in my sandbox here. or here. please check if I've done my work well. (i'm not sure if i did it right) Did I complete deadline 4 on time? Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 07:22, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kimseoeun2023079825 Since you are translating to Korean, you should work on Korean Wikipedia (so your second link is good). The outlines look good. Next, add references and blue links. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I added my references here please check if ‘ve done my work. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 02:21, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5)ZHANG QI

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I translated "Hangzhou Daily" more than 50% in the sandbox. And i proved those mistakes that you told me last week. This is my sandbox. Please check it. i have another question in 'Sociology of Everyday Life', the blog is not necessary, right? Is it only an extra point? or do I need to write more blogs? ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:56, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good progress. Some of your content still needs references, ex. all content under 'New Media' section. Once you add the references, you can merge your content (copy and paste) to the public article Hangzhou Daily. There is also content in the infobox that needs to be translated (ex. 机关报、日报). Do you need help adding the interlanguage links to articles that exist on Chinese Wikipedia but do not have an English version?

And yes, the blog is not necessary for that class, it is only for extra points. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:38, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5) Lee jiyoon

Hello. Professor. I am Lee jiyoon, taking Collective intelligence class. I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. User:Jiyoon Leee/sandbox By the way, one of the footnotes says it can only be seen in the English text, do you know why?Please check it. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 03:50, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee The most important thing to do is to move (copy) your draft from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia, since right now it is in the wrong place. The code on English is not the same as on Korean. This is likely relevant to your footnote error - it needs to be fixed after your project is on the correct Wikipedia. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Jiyoon_Leee/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 Jiyoon Leee (talk) 04:30, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I changed the location to Korean Wikipedia. Please check. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 04:31, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Very good. Some links point to English Wikipedia (like for Portuguese sweet bread). Please use ko:틀:임시링크 for such cases. If you are not sure how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3): Lee Seung Mi

Hello, Professor. I am taking an Everyday Life and Social Structure class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class From English to Korean https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_law From English to Korean. Seungmilsm (talk) 04:16, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seungmilsm Ok, projects are approved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:42, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing -ZHANG QI

Hi Professor, I am a student in both Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the editing of 20 Chinese Wikipedia articles.please check it ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:32, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Ok - just remember that the weekly assignment requires that 5 edits each week at minimum should be in English Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:43, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ok! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 04:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing -ZHANG RUIQING

Hello Professor,, I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure,Introduction to Information Sociology. I sorry for the late completion of my weekly editing project for March. Here's the editing page in Chinese and English, you can check it at here. Thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:36, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq

Regarding your edits to English article here, please move your references from headings to the end of relevant paragraph. The headings should be in English, not Chinese. You can provide the translation and Chinese characters in the text body.

Your Chinese translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(week4) - Younggyun Kim

Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the Wikipedia Deadline 3. Please check my editing history through this link. I tried to comply with the citation rules as well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 14:01, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun Good. You should use the translated title parameter to split the English translation of the title from the Korean original. Ask me in class or during office hours for help if you don't know how to do it and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I was going to ask you in person, but I was late to check. I use |trans-title= |, |language= |. I'd like to know if I applied it well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 06:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun Yes, it looks very good now. Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:22, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4(Week 5)-LI LINLIN

Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and

'Understanding Wikipedia'.

I completed the first translated articles for each of the two classes, from English to Chinese, and added them to my Chinese sandbox. You can check it here.

Looking forward to your reply.

Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 14:19, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm This is a good start, but you should split your translations into two separate sandboxes, one for each article. Ask me in class or during office hours if you are unsure how to do this.

For comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've split the translations into two separate sandboxes. You can check from here and here.

And I also try zh:维基百科:同行评 for feedback.

Hope you have a good day~ Leeinm (talk) 06:37, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Very good. Please let me know when you ask for feedback and link to me to the ensuing discussion. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5)- ZHANG RUIQING

Hi Professor. I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, and I'll continue to refine the content and add more references. Please check it, thank you Rachel.zrq (talk) 16:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Well done. Refer to my previous comment about how to get additional feedback for your work in Chinese. Once you get that feedback, and have translated all of the article, you can publish it (move it from draft to the mainspace). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear Professor,

I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia

1. This is my expanded article Etiquette in Asia#China

2. These are my 10 Wikipedia edits this week Huang Changzhou#Career

Please check it out, thank you and have a nice weekend! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:54, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Your edits are good. For the etiquette article, try to find better sources (academic journals or books). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:26, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Project5 : Online wiki assignment - Younggyun Kim

Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have translated sustainability and working class. I translated English into Korean for both topics. Is this enough to finish Project 5? If not, is it okay to proceed with further research about Sport in South Korea?--Kim younggyun (talk) 07:04, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim younggyun Very good. At this point I recommend you ask for feedback regarding your articles here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기

You can work on the Sports.. topic for extra credit and to build up your portfolio - good idea! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:29, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Deadline4(week5) -MU QING

Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 07:48, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, but please note some issues were raised at the talk. In particular, your edit to the deletion discussion had corrupted code, likely to due to the use of an aggressive translation script which you should be careful with.

At Giant panda, your edits were reverted since 1) there should be no image above the infobox and 2) the reference you added does not seem relevant to the sentence you added it to. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:37, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Commons:Photo challenge-CHENG SHIYI

Good afternoon, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I attended Wikimedia Commons for the monthly competition.

Please check it out. Can I get extra bonus points? Thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 08:01, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Yes, well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:38, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article translation-Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, this week I roughly completed the translation of the first article. The next step is to adjust and polish it. Please check it out. Mcx8202229 (talk) 08:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Please link your work here, then I will give you more feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Here is my link please professor check Mcx8202229 (talk) 12:38, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move and some other content like images or references may display problems.

It is important to understand that Chinese Wikipedia is not the same website as English Wikipedia (zh =/= en). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Professor, I have translated the article to Chinese Wikipedia. This is the link https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

So correspondingly, should I also translate Chinese-English articles into the English Wikipedia sandbox? Mcx8202229 (talk) 06:08, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 This is correct. Chinese-language articles should be at Chinese Wikipedia. If you work on an English-language article, it should be at English Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:03, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5)Gaoxiaoxia

Hello,profrssor,I added one of the article translation in the sandbox.Please check it out.Thank you.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Babaibiaobin/sandbox Babaibiaobin (talk) 09:56, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin This is a good start. You have completed the current deadlines well.

Feedback for the future: For articles that exist on Chinese but not English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. Your reference 1 needs to be changed a to a more reliable one, as WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. Many other references will need to be corrected for missing metadata (author, date, title/translated title, publisher, etc.). There is some content that is unreferenced - remember that each paragraph needs to have one more references that verify its content, including at the end. Lastly, please use a service like Grammarly to double check your English prose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor.We have corrected the errors in the work, is this correct?Another question is, if we do the homework in groups, should we just do one sandbox, or should we both do it？ Babaibiaobin (talk) 05:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin If you work in a group, one sandbox will be enough (for one article). There is no need to duplicate a sandbox.

You will still need to fix the wrong metadata, including the now-incorrect description of publisher of one of your references as Baidu. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I finished my Wikipedia edits this week, which totaled over 20 edits. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 12:28, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5)HUANGYANHAN

Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 12:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good progress. The formatting looks good. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:47, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5) : Soongki Kim

Hello professor.

I finished translating two articles for the wiki project for the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.

You can check drafts of my translated articles through my sandbox.

I would appreciate it if you could give me feedback after checking.

thank you! Soongki (talk) 14:00, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Soongki Your sandbox is very elegant :)

Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it.

You can also ask for extra feedback on your articles here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:52, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5)-LIU XINRUI

Good evening, Professor, this is the task I completed this week:

1.Editing 10 times Wikipedia .

2.I translated 50% of Generation MZ's articles in the sandbox.Please confirm if the task I completed is correct, Thanks for your patience. 유신예 (talk) 16:30, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Your edits look good but there are some fixes needed. If you review your edits here, you will see that one of your additions near the end is not referenced. Your book references need page ranges (which pages contain the information that is being referenced)? And the academic reference (with DOI 10.1017/S0261143001001271) was not formatted well. Talk to me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to quickly fix it.

Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:56, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4(week 5) - WANG YIHUA

Good morning Professor, I am a student of the Collective Intelligence course.

I have translated all the English versions of North Korean health into Chinese as 50% of my total. Please check and have a wonderful day! 왕예화 (talk) 17:40, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:57, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As a swing-by comment, the Chinese translation looks good! Please make sure it is referenced. I find it helpful to use the source editor and copy every "ref" tag. You should use other templates in the original article, such as "see also". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, this is my educational assignment. So far, I have only roughly translated it. I will add the references later and further improve it. thanks 왕예화 (talk) 09:17, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits - WANG YIHUA

Hello professor,I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

So far, I have edited English Wikipedia 60 times, Chinese Wikipedia 46 times, and six blogs. Please check,

Wishing you a wonderful day. 왕예화 (talk) 18:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good. Keep in mind that content we add to Wikipedia needs to be referenced, so try to add references to your edits like this one. Unreferenced additions may be removed (per Wikipedia:Verifiability) and will not count for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) LI MENGRU

Good evening Professor.I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, please check it, thank you！TMXX0818 (talk) 10:39, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Good progress. Please use a tool like Grammarly to check your prose. A lot of the content is hard to understand due to poor translation quality.

Some references in the translated article will need to be replaced with betters sources. For example, reference 71 is to a fan-wiki (Fandom (website)) and cannot be accepted. YouTube is also not accepted as a source unless we are linking to reporting by major news stations. , so references 31, 32, 55 and 60 will likely need replacing as well.

Some other sources do not appear very reliable either, for example this looks like a blog: Taiwan's news, I've seen it tired of... @ Idlers Hub :: Plankbang :: (pixnet.net)

Due to poor referencing, I expect we may have to drop some parts of the content you translated (no worry, you will still get full credit from your work). I'll ping an experienced volunteer interested in Chinese topic who may be able to provide more feedback on some sources used and other issues: User:TheLonelyPather _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, @Hanyangprofessor2, and thank you @TMXX0818 for your effort.

TLP's thoughts

Possibility of merger

How much does this article and Mass media in Taiwan overlap? It is possible that some of this can be added into "Mass media in Taiwan", instead of being a stand-alone article.

Poor sourcing

if we writing about "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources (preferably academic sources) that systematically examine the controversies regarding Taiwanese media. Right now, a large proportion of this article stops at the phenomenal part of the subject and becomes an indiscriminate collection of information-something that Wikipedia is not (see WP:INDISCRIMINATE). We should also be avoiding WP:original research.

Let me be a bit more clear about this point: if we want to talk about how "Business purpose" is a part of the "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources that systematically analyses the topic, such as the prevalence of commercialisation in the news industry of Taiwan. It is not enough to list a bunch of examples (news reports that are of very bad quality) as "evidence" and claim that commercialisation is a problem of Taiwanese media. That constitutes original research.

Unfortunately this is the case of the "Business purpose" section (and many similar sections), where we have a 15-ref-long WP:overcitation, all of them are news of poor quality that the original author of the Chinese Wikipedia page "uses" to "prove" their point of "Business purpose". None of them are WP:reliable by content: they prove the point by their existence, rather than their content, which is a sign of original research.

On the other hand, the original article has some good sources. Maybe listing them could demonstrate what I mean by "sources that systematically analyses the topic".

Lin, Zhaozhen. "當前台灣近似媒體觀察組織的幾個盲點" [Several blind spots in Taiwan’s current similar media observation organizations]. 新聞學研究. 60: 171–176.
Chen, Zongyi (2006-09-01). "新台灣新聞週刊 - 假自由真侵擾新聞公害猖獗" [False freedom is really intrusive, and news pollution is rampant]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
Wu, Tingwei (2017-08-28). "從《獨家腥聞》看台灣主流媒體：一場「即時新聞」與「爆料文化」的腥風血雨 - The News Lens 關鍵評論網" [Looking at Taiwan's mainstream media from "Exclusive News": A bloody storm of "instant news" and "explosive culture"]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
He, Qinglian (2019-06-27). "紅色滲透：被中國買下的台灣新聞｜何清漣／獨評讀好書｜獨立評論" [Red Penetration: Taiwan News Bought by China]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.

Format: The original article has bad formatting. Specifically, it uses a lot of "note" templates, which I think is used to support blatant original research in the original article. They need to be discarded.

I am sorry for possibly being critical and sounding harsh, but these are my conclusion and my suggestions for potential improvement. In the future, please make sure the original article is good enough to translate. I will update User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator accordingly–you might find it useful too.

Let us see how many these "good" sources we can obtain. If we have enough, then this topic merits a stand-alone article. Regarding the translation, I am afraid that the poor quality of the original article is detrimental to everything that follows. If this is to be published, a lot of extra work is needed, and a lot of the original information needs to be discarded. The original article was tagged with "Inappropriate tone" two years ago. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:01, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheLonelyPather Thank you for the feedback, TLP, with which I fully agree. There are some good parts in the original article, but yes, a lot of the low quality information needs to be discarded per your analysis.@TMXX0818: It is fine if the resulting article is short; short and good is better than long and bad. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-LI MENGRU

Good evening, I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class.

Here's my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thank you!

Have a nice day!TMXX0818 (talk) 10:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Good. Please note that DBpedia copies information from Wikipedia and as such is not allowed as a source (see Circular reporting problem) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:12, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5)WU SHUHAN（Collective intelligence）

Good evening, Professor. My article has been outlined in the sandbox. You can check it. And I wrote a blog post this week, and it's here. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:08, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 This is a good start. Things to keep in mind: 1) the beginning of the article (WP:LEAD) should be a summary of concepts mentioned elsewhere. Right now your lead mentions many facts not repeated (and referenced) later, such as that she had a son An Di.

You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information.

In the 'Cultural image' section, the Chinese title needs to include, well, the Chinese title, right now it has only the English title(s).

You should also run all of your text through a service that will improve the grammar (such as Grammarly or ChatGPT). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikimedia Commons competition - CHENG SIYU

Good evening, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I attended Wikimedia Commons for the monthly competition. You can check it. Hope I can get extra points for this, thank you.

Have a great weekend. Csiiiyu (talk) 15:42, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Good, your new uploads qualify for extra point. However, one of your images will likely be deleted - see commons:Commons:Deletion requests/File:中国女装.jpg . If you think this image should be kept, you should explain it in the discussion by addressing why it is in the Public domain. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:04, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Extra Credit Photography Challenge - WANG YIHUA

Hello professor,I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I participated in two photography competitions in April, the first one was about vertical and the second one was about flames. Please check.

Have a nice day 왕예화 (talk) 06:42, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Very nice. Try to add a category for the locations - we will also practice this in the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) Choi sieon

Hello professor. I am translating the first topic, proto-globalization. Citations and references are being revised. Please check.

초기 세계화 Choisieon (talk) 10:23, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Good start. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5)TIAN XIAOYU

Hello Professor, this is my translation this week，

Everyday Life and Social Structure：User:Sephyy/Yuzhang Academy Self-cultivation Education School

Collective Intelligence in Practice：抄袭欺诈

please check ，thank you。 Sephyy (talk) 12:33, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sephyy Good start. Remember that your translations will need to have references for all content. I will provide more feedback on the English translation once there are references; your prose seems fine. You will also need to add more blue links (see WP:BTW).

Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:37, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4 (week5) Kim Yu Jin

Hello professor, I have finished some translation of sensship by ticktok. Please check it. https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=TikTok%EC%9D%98_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4&oldid=prev&diff=36694066 Huejyi (talk) 13:22, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Huejyi Good progress. Regarding your Korean translation, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:38, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (week4) Lee Seung Mi

Hello Professor I'm Seungmi Lee and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've completed adding inline citations. Please check. Here's the Wiki link I added citations. [14] and [15]. Seungmilsm (talk) 13:30, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seungmilsm Unfortunately, I do not see any citations at the linked (English) articles. Perhaps you have done so in another language? Please try to link the correct article, preferably with Help:Diff _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:39, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I think there was an error in the link.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B3%84%EA%B8%89 and https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B2%95%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99

This is the right link. Seungmilsm (talk) 13:32, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seungmilsm Ok - now I see your work, it looks good, well done citing academic sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:45, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (week 4) Wang Tao

Hello professor. I have added references for the article "Anhui".https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anhui

please check thank you Wangtao626 (talk) 02:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 (week 4) Chen whiting

hello professor.i'm Chen zhitong from everyday life and social structure class.i have added references for the article zhongshan pleas check it.thank you. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Orange-1203 Unfortunately, your edit was not correct and has been removed. You did not add a WP:REFERENCE (which should be in a footnote format - see also our video on the LMS how to do so); instead you added unnecessary Wikipedia:External links .

Your second external link, while in the right section, was accompanied by a text that is not understandable in English ("SunWen XiLu WenHua LvYou BuXingJie).

You also changed the bullet points to less common number list without providing a Help:Edit summary.

Please review the linked materials and try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:45, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) BAILINHAN

This is my sandbox outline about Fashion in China

please check it

Bai0926 (talk) 10:12, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 It looks good but remember that all content we add to Wikipedia needs to be referenced to reliable sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:51, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 （week4）-FAN XINRU

Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I have completed. Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:38, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Well done. One remark: one of the sources you used (123helpme) does not seem reliable. Who is the author of that essay? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1(week2) Kim minji

Hello Professor Piotr K. I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I enrolled in Training/Students, Wikipedia's dashboard system course. Also, I learned courses such as 'Special Topics', 'Exercise', and 'Discussion' for additional credits, so please check. Also, I took classes after the correction period and learned about the existence of deadlines late. So I am sorry for learning too late. I will do my assignments quickly and participate more actively from now on. Thank you. Kaldwl (talk) 10:53, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kaldwl Better late then never. Please chose a topic for your wiki assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:54, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 (Week 4) ZENG WANTING

Hello professor, I finished an edit outside the sandbox in here, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 08:45, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wantiin It looks good, well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:55, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly Wikipedia Editors：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia, here are my ten weekly Wikipedia edits for this week Shi Yuhao, please check it out, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Excellent job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(week4) - Kim sangrok

Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the Wikipedia Deadline 3. Please check my editing history through https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%9D%ED%99%9C%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88 , https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99 Sangrok02 (talk) 16:37, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sangrok02 Good job adding references. But pleasecheck whether the last one you added is reliable - it is to a Naver blog. Blogs are usually not seen as reliable sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:07, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sign in question

Hello professor, I did not successfully sign in for 23624_집단지성 today. How should I remedy the situation? Mcx8202229 (talk) 06:30, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 If this is about attendance, please ask me after the next class and I will fix it for you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:07, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks.

Have a great weekend. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:28, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done. When adding translated titles, you do not need to put "en:" in front of them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 (week6) :MU QING(Collective Intelligence)

Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.

乔治·福姆比George Formby Muqing112233 (talk) 03:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, but remember to add references to your extra credit translation. Content without references may be deleted and will not count for extra credit work. See zh:维基百科:可供查證 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:49, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I added two references, please check if they are correct. Muqing112233 (talk) 03:25, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 It is better now. But please note that the article has a warning message:

此條目没有列出任何参考或来源。 (2024年4月13日)

維基百科所有的內容都應該可供查證。请协助補充可靠来源以改善这篇条目。无法查证的內容可能會因為異議提出而被移除。

It was added here. Contact the editor who added it and ask them if the situation is sufficiently resolved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week6（Weekly Editor）-LIU XINRUI

Good evening, professor. This is my editor of the week. Please check it .Thank you for your time！ 유신예 (talk) 16:50, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Good, but try to use more reliable references. WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. YouTube is also not a good source - unless we link to official videos. There are many bad (fan-made) videos which are not reliable. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:03, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4 (Week5): ZENG WANTING&ZHANG RUIQING

Hello professor, this is our group translating project in class Everyday Life and Social Structure, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 04:49, 14 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wantiin Your Korean translation is progressing well, all the formatting looks good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. After receiving feedback you can publish your translation once all content is translated. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 6) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - MU QING

Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.You can check it.

[16]乔治·福姆比George Formby Muqing112233 (talk) 05:00, 14 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good - see my feedback above for what you need to fix next (references). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:05, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) _Son Seohyun

I submit 2 translation assignments. I'll attach each link. Thank you.

사용자:Seohyun S/연습장 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

사용자:Seohyun S/연습장2 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org) Seohyun S (talk) 02:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Seohyun S This is a good start for the outline. Next you need to add references and blue links to relevant Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)

If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2(Week3) _김민지

I have completed the second translation task. Please check it.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Minis707/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52 Minis707 (talk) 02:28, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minis707 This is fine for the outline, but please remember that before publication you need to add blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크). If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extra credit - Kwon Jaeeun

Hello professor, I edit article. I have additionally translated https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC#%EC%82%B6 the from English to Korean. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 03:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cookinu Well done, this will count for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:17, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 6)-BAILINHAN

1.This is my weekly wiki edit， please check it

2.This is my sandbox edit, I quoted reliable sources, please check

Bai0926 (talk) 04:06, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good job with your extra edits. Regarding your sandbox draft, your middle reference is not reliable (see WP:BAIDU).

The other two sources are ok to start with but you should use scholarly sources like the ones seen here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Good evening Professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

Let me report to you on my editing status on the wiki last month, except for the sandbox. This is my edit on English Wikipedia. In addition, I inserted the picture of the inner-painting pot on the Chinese Wikipedia, added content and added references. Wish I could get extra points.

Have a nice day. Csiiiyu (talk) 14:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Good. In here, try to use Template:Interlanguage link to link. If you don't know how to do it, stop by my office and I'll show you. And remember we need a reference as well.

You should also add reference(s) to the end of the first paragraph and second here here.

You will get extra credit certainly if this activity is for the Everyday Life class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor, I have made the modifications as you suggested. Not sure if what I linked is correct. I've added more references here. Please check. These activity is for the Everyday Life class. Have a good week. Csiiiyu (talk) 02:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Well done. If the reference is in Chinese, then the title of the reference should be in the Chinese (ex. 羊肉是热性还是凉性吃羊肉不能吃什么), while the English translation title (Is mutton hot or cold? What should not be eaten when eating mutton?) should go to the "translated title" parameter. If you do not know how to do this, ask me and I'll show it to you after class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:49, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor,thank you for pointing that out. I have modified it, please check it. Csiiiyu (talk) 05:58, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: week4 - LI YULUN (Collective intelligence)

Hello Professor, I have completed additional editing outside the sandbox in this article, please check it out LIYULUN (talk) 16:25, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Well done. You should proofread your article (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). Some errors may not be caught by AI - please check yourself. For example, the second paragraph talks about the TV series premiere in the future tense, but it already happened. You also need to proofread your 'evaluate' section (which should probably be renamed to 'Reception'). It reads ok until "; the structure of the novel" - there is something unclear about that sentence, missing word/verb; please check with Grammarly. Also, what is "Douqi Continent"? Douqi is not in English. Is this a Chinese concept? Does it have a Chinese Wikipedia article?

Your 'game' paragraph is missing content, it is just an unfinished sentence. If there is a related game, you should provide information - what kind of game, who published it, what are the reviews.

For your references, some are missing English translated title. Others may be missing other metadata like author name, date, publisher, etc.

It would be good if you could find more reviews / reception (more sources). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:27, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-LI YULUN (Collective intelligence)

Hello professor, this is my weekly extra edit from the beginning of the semester so far, please check, thank you.

Good. Please remember to sign your comments. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4(Week 5) ：LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)

Hello, Professor, this is our project, almost half finished, please check

English Wikipedia User:LIYULUN/sandbox 用户-开心宝贝 Happy Baby

Chinese Wikipedia https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LIYULUN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_-Intensive_animal_farming_%E9%9B%86%E7%BA%A6%E5%8C%96%E7%95%9C%E7%89%A7%E4%B8%9A LIYULUN (talk) 16:58, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Regarding your translation of the Happy Baby, what is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works.

See for example The_Witcher_(TV_series)#Reception or My_Hero_Academia#Reception

Regarding your Chinese translation, I see good progress. When you are done translating all the content, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline（Week2）LI PEIYU

Hello professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. Kikolipu (talk) 13:41, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Better late then never. Please note that completing assignments after deadline results in reduced grade. You will need to do more extra credit edits to compensate for not completing assignments during the first half of the course. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:35, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese.Please be sure. Thank you. History of human rights History of Sino–Korean relations. ZixuanHE (talk) 00:08, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZixuanHE You should leave your future messages in your own sections, not under those started by another student. Your topics are good and have been approved. Good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:37, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you.Electronics right to repair. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차 218.235.241.134 (talk) 00:08, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electronics_right_to_repair JINJINYAN (talk) 00:10, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JINJINYAN You should leave your future messages in your own sections, not under those started by another student. The first article linked was Korean, not English, but if you meant Gender pay gap then it is ok. Your topics are good and have been approved. Good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (week3) ZIXUANHE

Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese.Please be sure. Thank you. History of Sino–Korean relations History of human rights . ZixuanHE (talk) 00:15, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZixuanHE Good, see my reply above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline (Week3) YANJINJIN

Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you. Electronics right to repair https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차 JINJINYAN (talk) 00:15, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JINJINYAN Good, see my reply above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 (Week 3) selection LI PEIYU

Hello Professor! I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. Can I choose Female infanticide in China as my translation target? I will translate it into Chinese. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_China Kikolipu (talk) 04:13, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu The topic is fine, but you have never signed my spreadsheet in class. Please see me after class to add your name to it. You will also need to chose another topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHANG QI

hello professor! I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. I have been finished weekly edits.please check it and here is chinese edits. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . If this is not easy, ask me in class and I will show you how do use this tool. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 7)

Dear professor, I have completed the preliminary translation of the Chinese-English article. Next, I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox linkUser:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 (talk) 09:28, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good start. Please use a tool like Grammarly to go over your text for vocabulary and grammar.

What is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works. You have a good start under "evaluate" section (which needs to be renamed to Reception), but you will need more. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:45, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 7)：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia

1.This is my expanded article [17]

2. Here are my ten Wikipedia edits this week Shi Yuhao [18]

Please check, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:26, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Well done. Double check the English prose added with a tool like Grammarly - there are small errors (ex. in the sentence " You must not eat anything in your mouth, or say anything unrelated to the salute while bowing" or "*Number of seats The seating order is). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation of the article—ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have completed 80% of my Chinese to English article translation assignment (中国史前文化). In addition,based on your suggestion,I have made a lot of additions to the original Chinese text of this article as well as the references, and I would appreciate if I could get some extra points.

Here is my sandbox, please check it.

Thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 19:33, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Your work is progressing very well. Here are some comments:

Please note that the title should be "Prehistory of China" not "Prehistory in China"

If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. For example, the Donggutuo site should be linked like this: Donggutuo site [zh]

Some references do not have any blue links to ISBN or websites. For example, reference 5 (" "Stone Age," Microsoft Encarta Online Encyclopedia 2007 Contributed by Kathy Schick, B.A., M.A., Ph.D. and Nicholas Toth, B.A., M.A., Ph.D."). Can you find if the original articles exist online? Here is a link for your reference 11: World's Oldest Ritual Discovered -- Worshipped The Python 70,000 Years Ago | ScienceDaily _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have completed over eighty Wikipedia edits this month (weeks 4-7), please check.

I would be grateful if you could give me suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:25, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good, but please double check the url (links) in your references. While looking at this,

I've noticed that http://tez.gov.cn/col1/col1_4.html does not work, and neither does http://www.tezgc.com _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:40, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good afternoon, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia edit for the week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:27, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Good. Here, it would be good to find a better reference then WP:BAIDU, which is not allowed on Wikipedia (see link for reasons). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline56(week7) :MU QING(Collective Intelligence)

Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check.MUQING

Muqing112233 (talk) 07:39, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, but remember that half of your weekly edits should be in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". My student number is 2023025414. the 3.29 assignment you assigned has both mp4 and pdf options for submission. I have prepared the manuscript format as well. In your lesson plan, there is a note that Form B can also be submitted for assignments. I sent the recorded video. I would like to ask what the problem is? Because the marks are really worrying. Wsw1357 (talk) 14:23, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wsw1357 Dear student. Since this is not an issue that concerns our Wikipedia assignment, please talk to me after our class, during our office hours, and I will review your case there. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week7（Weekly Editor）-LIU XINRUI

Hello professor, this is my editor of the week and a dozen additional edits.I'd appreciate it if I could get your confirmation. 유신예 (talk) 17:59, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Good. I recommend using a tool like Grammarly to double check grammar and vocabulary. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 5)：Chen Gui

Hello professor. I have completed a full translation of the " When China Rules the World" article, https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChenGui please check it .Thanks

ChenGui (talk) 09:56, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ChenGui Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 (Week 7)：DENG HUICHEN

Hello professor, I have finished the translation of The Coming Conflict with China article from English into Korean, please check it, thank you. This is my sandbox link(User:등혜진/sandbox) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 Your translation looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation of the article—CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article (80%), in addition, I added the missing literature of the original article(Organic food culture) in the Chinese article. Here is my sandbox, please check it out.

If there are any problems, please let me know and I will make the changes right away, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 13:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

MU QING(Collective Intelligence)

Hello, professor, this is an article that translates English into Chinese instead of the editor. I have added some citations. Can I get an extra score?

乔治·福姆比 Muqing112233 (talk) 07:26, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Yes. good job. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Think you, sir.Wish you have a wonderful day! Muqing112233 (talk) 08:02, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation of the article-chen zhitong

Hello Professor , I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". this is my English to Chinese translation of the Wikipedia sandbox of Anarchism in Korea .Is it okay for me to continue to complete this translation assignment as I am doing now?Thanks for the reply.my sandbox. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:49, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Orange-1203 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LIU XINRUI--Weekly Editor

Hello professor, this is my 10 English Wikipedia edits this week, and an additional 10 Chinese Wikipedia edits.I'd appreciate it if you could confirm! 유신예 (talk) 18:02, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Good. When you add a reference to a Chinese page in English, you should provide both the Chinese and English translated title (so not just "Different styles of second-hand roses, is it rock or northeast two people turn? ", but also 风格迥异的二手玫瑰，是摇滚还是二人转？). If you don't know how to do it - ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take note of that next time. Thank you for your guidance, professor. 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:47, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation of the article-LI PEIYU

Dear professor, I have completed the preliminary translation of the Chinese-English article. Next, I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikolipu/sandbox Kikolipu (talk) 07:26, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:13, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (week9): ZENG WANTING and ZHANG RUIQING

Hello professor, Our group in Social and Everyday life have finished our English to Chinese translation project, this is my sandbox link, can we publish it? Please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 09:46, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wantiin Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.

One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). For example, this would affect links to Pūkorokoro Miranda Naturalists' Trust (普科罗科罗-米兰达自然保护者信托基金会) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikimedia Commons- LIU XINRUI

Dear Professor, here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions, I hope you can check if they are correct.Hope I can get extra points for this.Thanks for your patience！ 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:43, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Good job, it looks good - I just removed one unnecessary category. Another user already removed another one. Only the most specific category is needed. See File:Chengdu Zhong Dumpling(Zhong Jiaozi).jpg: Revision history - Wikimedia Commons _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)

Dear Professor, I'm ready for review This is the linkUser:Mcx8202229/sandbox andhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Mcx8202229 (talk) 17:34, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good job. Things to fix in your English article:

your article should have (in the lead and in the infobox) the name of the movie in Chinese. Compare your article to, for example, No More Bets or The Knockout (Chinese TV series)
File:3-2312251Q553329.png (image) will soon be deleted because it is not correctly licenced - there is no proof the image is free. You can upload such images to English Wikipedia, but not Wikimedia Commons, and you have to fill in the WP:FAIRUSE template. If you need help with that, stop by my office hours and I will show you how to do so.
Some references used are not reliable and should be replaced (3, 5-9). You can see this if you install the script we used in Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class: User:Headbomb/unreliable . Please install it and check your references - red ones should be replaced.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:31, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)- LIU XINRUI、MU QING

Good evening professor.Two translations of our group have been basically completed.

1. English to Chinese "Sexuality in South Korea" article has been posted to the Wikipedia page and will continue to add new references. Here is the link to the article.

2.Chinese to English“李克强之死”.The article is basically finished, here is the link to the sandbox.

I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience！ 유신예 (talk) 11:42, 27 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. For comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 .

Regarding your English project, good job, but there are still things to fix:

Please proofread everything, including the title, using a tool like Grammarly. The title is not correct (see different meanings of "pass").
There are also factual errors. For example, you write that "The "English Tiger News" reported, citing Weibo sources," - what is "English Tiger News"? You cite The Standard (Hong Kong). And it does not mention Weibo, but WeChat.
You should link concepts like 20th Central Committee of the Chinese Communist Party instead of bolding them. Another term that should be linked would be 14th National People's Congress.
You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (when citing Chinese sources, keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information. For example, your reference 43 (""Hong Kong politicians recall that Li Keqiang is approachable and conscientious, Liang Zhenying posts condolences"") should also display the Chinese title ("港政界忆李克强平易近人做事尽责梁振英发贴哀悼")

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: Week 9 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link, please check it out, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:07, 27 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good job citing academic sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - MU QING

Hello, professor. This is my final article for this class, an English-Chinese translation. It has been published in my sandbox, please check it.

韩国的反美情绪

Also, I've finished editing this week, please check it out.

link Muqing112233 (talk) 17:55, 27 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good. Remember that at least 5 of the weekly edits should be in English Wikipedia.

As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)-ZHANG RUIQING

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have translated the English article <Pension policy in South Korea> into Chinese and have posted the translated Chinese article on Wikipedia. Please check it, thank you! Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 07:25, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Lee Yunjoo

Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I've finished translating the two articles assigned to me. Global North and Global South, Population growth

I'll keep adding references if possible. Please check. Thank you Leeyj0401 (talk) 11:13, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Well done. The formatting looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback regarding translation quality from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 14:59, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI They are good. Keep up the good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9) DENG HUICHEN

Hello,professor,I finished the translating of the three articles.please check it .Thank you!(User:등혜진/sandbox) I have you two classes. DENG HUICHEN (talk) 02:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 I see, ko:한국의 영화 검열 and ko:다가오는 중국과의 갈등 look good. I recommend you ask for feedback regarding translation quality from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server

I cannot locate the third article - can you link it here? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:39, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Planning for project 2

Hello, We are a group of three people (Chaehyun Lee, SeoEun Kim, and NaKyung Kim). we are student in your course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. Since we were unable to attend your in-person class today, we uploaded it to blog. This is our plan for Project 2. Please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 06:11, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaekyo A library in Suwon is an acceptable place. You can get extra credit by writing about the place on Wikipedia and uploading photos to Wikimedia Commons :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:48, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9) Choi sieon

Hello, professor. Translating the topic was a difficult process. However, I enjoyed the process of learning about topic I didn't know anything about. Studying the proto-globalization helped me a lot academically. I will upload one more topic soon!

If there are any problems, please point them out. I will edit it. Thanks.

proto-globalization Choisieon (talk) 07:24, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Well done. Double check references - there is one minor error. If you don't know how to fix it, ask me during office hours or in class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:56, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) WANG YIFAN

Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 08:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 Your Chinese translatio looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) WANG YIFAN&HUANG LINXUAN

Hello professor, we are students of Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is our assignment 1 and assignment 2. we have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time.😊 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 08:22, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIFAN2024 Good. Regarding your Chinese project, note that a merge has been suggested - you may want to comment on that.

Regarding your English project, it reads well. When citing assessments like "As a successful example of Chinese dialect research, it has enriched" you can add attribution to the author or authors (ex. "According to professor Jon Smith from University of Washington", etc.).

For extra credit and review, you can try to nominate your work for front page exposure (see WP:DYK). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) Changyeop Jung

Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in practice: Understanding Wikipedia. This is my main project. I'm almost done writing this article. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:55, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 Good, but some content is unreferenced. Please add references for those parts. Only content that is referenced and verifiable counts for our class project (see also Wikipedia rules: Wikipedia:Verifiability).

Another minor issue to fix: your Korean language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)ZHANGQI

Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation hangzhou daily and translation 中国对日本文化的影响. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time.I have another article, and once I finish uploading these two articles, I will start translating the third one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:05, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.

Regarding the English translation, I do not understand the meaning of the sentence "The comprehensive strength of this newspaper ranks among the top in the national vice provincial city party committee organ newspapers". New Media section needs references. Once you have added the references, please merge your content (copy and integrate) into the existing article on Hangzhou Daily. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:29, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5（Week9）YANGPEIFU

Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation Wang Baiyuan and I have expanded another article "Eggy Party", please check it out. Thank you, professor! Yangpeifu (talk) 13:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Regarding your first article (the biography), some content needs references (for example, second paragraph of 'stay in Japan' or 'Japanese authorities'). You also need to remove bullet points - content should be in prose format, not bullet point. You also need to proofread this for grammar and vocabulary (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). A number of sentences are in first person (ex. "during m stay in Japan". The entire heading 'Trivial matters and rumors' is strange - 'Trivial matters and rumors' are not encyclopedic (see WP:TRIVIA). Consider what can be merged into his biography and remove the "trivia". _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor! I have revised everything according to your requirements, please check! Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 03:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu I have reviewed your recent edits. This is good, but I am afraid there are still many errors. Second sentence of biography repeats the same content: "he met Xie Chunmu, with whom he later collaborated with whom he would later collaborate". A few sentences later, "After graduation, she taught at the" - is the subject a female? Please read your article carefully to remove such obvious problems.

I also asked you to integrate the "trivia" section into the biography - this has not been done. Wikipedia articles cannot have trivia sections. If some content does not belong to his biography, consider what sections can be created. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Biography.

Does Xie Chunmu has an article on Chinese Wikipedia? If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. From what I see, your article needs dozens of such links to Chinese Wikipedia - there are many people, places, organizations andconcepts mentioned that should be linked, and I expect they are linked in the Chinese article.

Finally, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). This is another item that I mentioned before ("Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English") that you have not done. So, no, you have certainly not "revised everything according to your requirements" - but you still have time to do so now. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor! I also translated the Xie Chunmu. Wang Baiyuan also modified it, please check it. I'll see you in the office on Monday and ask again. Yangpeifu (talk) 14:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Well done, this will count for a good amount of extra credit. Please pay attention to consistency; that article mentions in some places "Hsieh Chun-mu" - is this the same person as "Xie Chunmu"? Please copyedit the article for grammer; the sentence that continues from " doing As he was about to set off" is very hard to understand. I certainly cannot understand if this is a joke or something else. The sentence "Xie Chunmu slept and ate together with Wang Baiyuan" implies that they had a romantic relationship. Is this what you meant? There are many errors in the paragraph in the section "After going to China" Please use a service like Grammarly or some AI tools to correct such errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:33, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheLonelyPather You may enjoy reading those articles and/or reviewing them when you have the time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:35, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2 Thank you. I am quite busy in the next 30 days or so, but I have made a request at WikiProject Taiwan (see Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Taiwan#These_two_articles_may_be_of_your_interest).

Let me reiterate a principle from my essay that if the original article is not ideal, one must do extra work and make sure it fits into the criteria of English Wikipedia. @Yangpeifu I encourage you to cut down sections like "Comments from contemporary people and later generations" and "Other people's evaluations" because, long story short, English Wikipedia does not use this format or style. You should also be concise in writing your biographies. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 12:28, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5(Week9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

Let me report to you about my sandbox editing. Currently two of my articles are translated and ready for review. They are at 1 and 2 respectively. At the same time I posted a comment in "Wikipedia:Peer Review" to let other editors correct my problem. I will check and modify it in time. Please check.

Have a nice week. Csiiiyu (talk) 13:38, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Very good. Please let me know in a week or so whether you have gotten any reviews; if the are none I'll ask some people to prioritize your request. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:54, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Classroom (Week8)Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I'm sorry that I didn't attend the class last Friday because I wasn't feeling well. So regarding the classroom issues at that time, I drew pictures and published them on my blog. Wish I could get extra points. Please check. Thanks. Csiiiyu (talk) 11:44, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Ok, I will award an extra point for that, good job. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation of the article-ZHANGMINGSHUO

Good evening, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article.Here is my sandbox, please check it out.Ask the professor to check and if there are no problems, I will post it to Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 16:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHANGMINGSHUO

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. Shuo1103 (talk) 16:32, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Please see the message on your talk page regarding your edits. Remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and only such content counts for our class' credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5（Week9）HUANG LINGXUAN&LIU YUNXIANG

Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. This is our assignment 1 and assignment 2. we have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. Hhhlx (talk) 01:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx I did miss your message (post) here last time, apologies. Here is your feedback:

your Chinese translation looks fine, but please monitor it every week for the next few weeks to double check if Chinese volunteers leave any feedback or suggestions
regarding your expansion of Chinese clothing in English from early April (seen here), most of it lacked references and was removed or will be removed shortly. Each paragraph requires a reference (even if identical to a reference used in another paragraph). You can restore or save the content you added, but please ensure it has references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment. In addition, please double check your vocabulary. You talk about "deep clothing" but it seems you mean Deel (clothing)? There are also unencyclopedic sentences in what you wrote, such as "Let's delve deeper into the various characteristics and cultural symbols of deep clothing together." Please read the guide at WP:PRONOUN

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok we understand.But if we re-edit the previously deleted content and add references now ,our score will count as a normal score or as a late score Thank you. 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:58, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor. Shen Yi is not deel, It's Shenyi, I have corrected the mistake. Please check and correct. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 08:50, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 @Hhhlx Your score will count as regular score; you completed the assignment on time. Errors can be fixed now - do not worry. If you can complete the assignment by the late June, your score will be very good.

However, your content was again removed; please see Chinese clothing: Revision history - Wikipedia .

All content you add needs to be referenced. Baidu is not allowed due to how many errors it has, see WP:BAIDUBAIKE _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I have added reference in article please check! Thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 15:38, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 The reference looks good. Please add page range or ranges that support the information cited, and the translated title using the translated title parameter (do not remove the Chinese title). If you need help, stop by my office and I'll show you how. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) HongGyeongmin

Hello professor, i'm taking collective intellignece. This is currently two of my articles are translated and ready for review.

Dune2, Wonka

Please check, Thanks. Hkm5420 (talk) 04:09, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 Good. Regarding your Korean translations, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHANG RUIQING

Hello professor,I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I've completed my weekly wiki edits assignment for April, which you can check out here, please check it out, thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:00, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki editors-LI PEIYU

Dear professor

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice . I have completed the Chinese translation of this article on Chinese Wikipedia,I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikolipu/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link：

https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%BC%B5%E6%84%9B%E7%8E%B2&action=history

I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience！～～～ Kikolipu ( talk ) 2024 年 5 月 1 日 08:25 (UTC)

Dear student (User:Kikolipu). Please communicate using English. Thank you, --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:01, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Thank you for translating your message. In the future, pleae also WP:SIGN your messages correctly.

Regarding your Chinese translation, when you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.

Regarding your edits here, they look good but you should add references. See Wikipedia:Verifiability or in Chinese, zh:维基百科:可供查證 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:01, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)-LI LINLIN

Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and

'Understanding Wikipedia'.

I have completed the translation of all the articles for the two courses. In addition to the two articles reported to you in Week 5, here are the other two articles, which you can check here （trs Women in South Korea into zh)and here (trs Women's history into zh).

Hope u have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 12:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:05, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)—CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I have finished the English to Chinese translation of Organic food culture, here is my sandbox,Please check that. If there is no problem, I will post the article.

If there are any problems, please let me know and I will make the changes right away, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:33, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits—CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 18:11, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done adding references and related content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:07, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)-Lee jiyoon

Hello, professor. I'm Lee jiyoon, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I've finished translating the two articles assigned to me. here is my sandbox Jiyoon Leee (talk) 23:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Very good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. After addressing the feedback, you can publish your articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:08, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4 (Week5)_Kim sangrok

Hello professor, this is my translating project in class Everyday Life and Social Structure, please check it, thank you! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%9D%ED%99%9C%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88 2001:E60:9373:C250:302E:7E33:33B0:15FA (talk) 04:55, 2 May 2024 (UTC) h[reply]

@Sangrok02 Your expansion is a good start, but remember to add references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment (unreferenced content can be removed from Wikipedia).

Also, please remember to log in while editing Wikipedia (including leaving messages); edits that are logged out will not count for the class credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:34, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have finished the translation of Chinese Academy of Cultural Heritage, here is my sandbox, please check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 09:11, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Well done, your article looks good. After you proofread everything (I recommend a tool like Grammarly) please publish it.

PS. There are few minor things to fix. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . There is no need to include French name in English. In the infobox, change China Academy to Chinese Academy. In the lead, the name of the organization is repeated twice (after the French name). Once is enough. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)---ZHANG LINYUE

Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG LINYUE, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have finished the translation of Classical Chinese poetry,here is my sandbox,please check it.Thankyou!AYAO32269 (talk) 09:35, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AYAO32269 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed 70 additional edits to wikivoyage, please check them out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 I see. It is good you are editing Wikivoyage - I see you have received some feedback on your talk page. I'll also add that you should try to add information (listings) of things that tourists may want to see (museums, parks, monuments) rather than listing for hotels, which are not as useful and therefore will not receive as much credit as a well written entry on a museum or such would generate.

Nice job adding useful information here. I would recommend adding some see and do listings there. Why should tourists visit that location? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:55, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)---XUE DONGXIN

Hello, professor. I'm XUE DONGXIN, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I completed my task of translating my Wikipedia article.This is my article Ming Dynasty Zheng family, please check it.Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 13:15, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Your translation is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly and AI to proofread it. There are many incomplete sentences, starting with the first sentence in lead, which ends in a comma, and the last in the lead, which is clearly missing a verb, if not more. There are some very awkward translations like "The extent to which he covered the sky with one hand can..." which do not make sense in English.

You should also double check the links from Chinese Wikipedia. Some have articles in English, such as the "Zheng Chenggong's family" which should link to House of Koxinga . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link

Some of the references you use have incomplete metadata, or content only in Chinese. Please add missing metadata (author's names, titles, dates, etc.). If a title is in Chinese, please accompany it with an English title using the 'translated title' parameter in metadata. If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during my office hours. In other cases, you translated a title of a reference without leaving the Chinese original, ex. "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou" - there is no such work. Please use both English and Chinese titles. If it is a book, it should have an ISBN number.

Finally, remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia. Some of the content you added is not referenced - please add references to it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I will correct it. Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 05:11, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki edits

Hi professor as you suggested before I made an article of the book Postwar World written by V. Tihanov also known as Pak Noja who is very famous russian-korean scholar in south korea and professor of the University of Oslo. It is about Ukraine War and critcism to Leftist who sympathize Putin. I think you would be interested in my article so I leave the message. Thank you! Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 13:25, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinseongmin1917 Excellent job, as we discussed in the class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)---HUANGQIHAO

Hello professor, this is a famous Chinese tokusatsu TV series I have chosen. Please correct any grammatical mistakes. Thank you！ Hkiho (talk) 17:09, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Good, I've provided feedback to you above at #Deadline3（week4）HUANGQIHAO _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)—ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have almost finished translating the article "中国史前文化" (Chinese to English：Prehistory of China).

Please check it. I would be grateful if you could give me suggestions or correct any mistakes. Zhongxxin (talk) 18:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Well done, your article looks ready to be published. I recommend you do so, and nominate your work at Wikipedia:Did you know for Main Page exposure and extra credit (please monitor the review there). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. For main article, please use {{main}} - see how I fixed the code here. Do not use html small code tags, they are not used on Wikipedia. All text should be regular size. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I have completed 10 ditional edits to wikivoyage,please check Zhuo1221 (talk) 05:25, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Ok - see my feedback above at #Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUO _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)LIHAOCHANG HANYUANYUAN

I did the English to Chinese translation. Check, please. My team members did the translation from Chinese to English. Check, please. Thanks for checking. We will make changes to your suggestions. Thank you for your hard work, Professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 05:34, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.

Regarding the English article, it shows good progress. Try to add more blue links - for example to Yellow River or Queshan County or State Council of the People's Republic of China. Some content in your article is unreferenced and will need to be referenced. For example, the first and third paragraphs in 'Origin' are missing references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).

References 3, 5 and 6 are to low quality sources and should be replaced by more reliable sources. See Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES and WP:CGTN. If you keep them, content used from them should be clearly attributed ("According to Global Times "). I will ping a friendly expert on Chinese sources on whether they think we can keep those sources in this article (the topic does not seem controversial): @TheLonelyPather

There are some minor grammar issues, for example in the sentence "During the Iron Flower performance, a six-meter-high double-layered flower shed was set up in an open space." why is the past tense used? The last sentence of that paragraph also has a number of errors which make it hard or impossible to understand ("he iron flower ignites fireworks and firecrackers, and then adds " The performance of "Dragon Wearing Flowers" is a spectacular scene, thrilling, festive and lively.") Try to use a tool like Grammarly or a more advanced AI tool to proofread your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:50, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2 Global Times and CGTN indeed should be specified. @Lihaochang678 Some more thoughts: please see Dashuhua–there is quite some overlap between the two activities, although it seems that Dashuhua happens in Hebei, whereas Datiehua (or "iron flower") happens in the Henan and Shanxi provinces.

The article's lede needs to be clarified and strengthened. Describing it as "a traditional folk firework" is not accurate–please use a detailed description, such as "creating a firework by hammering molten iron". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 20:24, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your valuable comments. Lihaochang678 (talk) 01:19, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

professor. Thank you very much for your help and advice. Lihaochang678 (talk) 01:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (week 9 ) Kim minjun - Collective Intelligence

Hello, Professor. I am Kim minjun taking a Collective intelligence class. I have completed my main wiki translation project . Please check it.

'String of pearls' to 인도양의 진주목걸이' :https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B8%EB%8F%84%EC%96%91%EC%9D%98_%EC%A7%84%EC%A3%BC%EB%AA%A9%EA%B1%B8%EC%9D%B4
'Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine' to '러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위정보: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%9F%AC%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84%EC%9D%98_%EC%9A%B0%ED%81%AC%EB%9D%BC%EC%9D%B4%EB%82%98_%EC%B9%A8%EA%B3%B5%EC%97%90_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C_%ED%97%88%EC%9C%84_%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4

KMJ0521 (talk) 06:46, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 Good. Please review why one of your articles was declined for publication (now at ko:초안:러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보). It seems an experienced Korean volunteer has concerns about quality of your translation: LR0725 talk contribs 러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 초안:러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보 문서로 이동했습니다: 번역 . Please contact them on their talk page at ko:사용자토론:LR0725 and ask them for clarification if needed, improve the quality of your translation, and when they accept your work, publish it again and let me know. (Friendly ping to @LR0725) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521: Please, don't use content-tranlsation tool if you are not familiar with tool. Actually, former page also has so many grammatical errors that it could be moved to draft page. Please proofread your pages one more time. LR0725 [ Talk | Contribs ] 08:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (week 9 ) WU SHUHAN- Collective Intelligence

Hello, Professor. I finished my project essay. This is my sandbox, please check it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:23, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Good progress! Only one paragraph needs references now, the one beginning with "In 1390 (the 23rd year of Hongwu), ..."

Other things to fix:

it is good to have many blue links, but you link the same terms multiple times. This is called Wikipedia:OVERLINKING. Please ensure that there are no duplicate links outside the lead (introduction). You can use this tool to help you identify unnecessary links: User:Evad37/duplinks-alt
your article should mention the subject's name in Chinese. Compare your lead to that of, for example, Jiao Yu or Wu Cheng (philosopher)
while your article is written reasonably well, there are small grammar/vocabulary issues, for example - why is the word "Bridges" capitalized in the lead? I recommend using a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article. Similar small errors can be see in sentences "1375 (the eighth year of Hongwu in the Ming Dynasty) She" or "Ai Cui died. Because of her son's young age, she Xiang assumed". They need to fixed before the article can be published.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:21, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello Professor, I have modified my project article based on your suggestions. Are there any other errors I need to fix? Can I publish articles from the sandbox? WSH0927 (talk) 10:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (week 9 ) HUANG YANHAN- Collective Intelligence

Hello, Professor. I finished translating my project. This is my sandbox, please check it.In the course of my project, I found that a lot of content is not available in Chinese Wikipedia, so I used hyperlinks from English Wikipedia. And I didn't translate it completely, because I think his description is very strange, so I searched for content from other related Wikipedia and translated it instead of the original content, I don't know if it's OK. Please let me know if there is any problem, I am looking forward to your guidance, thank you, Professor. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:10, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good progress. If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi).

Also, remember that content we add (including translations) should be referenced (see zh:维基百科:可供查證).

Regarding the quality of your translation, when you think you are ready, you can also ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 .

After addressing feedback, if any, you can publish your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:26, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10)

Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I reviewed a 'Dune: Part 2' article by a Hkm5420 student, and left a small suggestion on his talk page.

Thank you. Leeyj0401 (talk) 07:29, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeyj0401 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9) — WANG YIHUA

Good afternoon Professor,

I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

I have translated the English version of Health in North Korea into Chinese. Here is my sandbox, please check it.

Wishing you a pleasant weekend. 왕예화 (talk) 08:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 The formatting looks good.. For feedback on quality fo the translation, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 When you think you are read (when you have gotten the feedback, if any) you can publish your article (move it to mainspace). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5（Week9）—BAILINHAN

Hello Professor, this is my sandbox creation on fashion in China , I've roughly finished it, please check it 61.77.61.247 (talk) 08:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Please remember to log in before making edits to Wikipedia (only edits that are made while logged in are counted for class credit).

Regarding your article, it looks like you have made good progress. Your article is well written (as far as English grammar and vocabulary are concerned) and reasonably comprehensive. There are however a number of issues to fix:

some paragraphs are unreferenced. Make sure that each paragraph has a reference, of more if necessary to support all the claims made in it
your article is underlinked (it needs more links to other Wikipedia articles). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.
please add pictures to illustrate various types of clothing. You should be able to find them following the instructions from our module on adding media (see Assignment 5 in particular)
there are small parts which have not been translated, like "襦襦skirt"
please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If the source is in Chinese, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter in metadata. Ask me in class if you need help).
reference 7 may be unreliable, see WP:BAIDU. If you think it is reliable, please tell me why - maybe it is a reprint (copy) or an article from a more reliable outlet?
the link to the English(?) reference 3 seems broken, please double check it and fix it so that it works ("The ideological background of ancient Chinese clothing culture". )
It would be good to expand on the new fashion (section 'Since the founding of New China(1949 to present)')

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:50, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, as per your suggestion, I have added content, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 13:01, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Very good. Can you add something about the most recent times - since 1990s? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:37, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5(week9) : Soongki Kim

Hello Professor.

I'm about 90% done with the wiki main project.

Except for the remaining 10% (temporary links), I think I can create the translation page.

You can check my translated articles here.(Education in India / Education in England)

Thank you. Soongki (talk) 13:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Soongki Well done, you are close to finishing. One of your articles has an untranslated quotation that needs to be translated to Korean. In addition, If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크) - if you do not know how to use it, ask me for help during class or office hours and I will demonstrate.

If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server.

After resolving feedback from Korean reviewers, if any, you can move your work the mainspace (publish it). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:14, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: Week 9 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have completed the initial draft of the expansion task for this article, added a section about China, and established a relevant section for South Korea. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Unfortunately, most of your additions have been removed from Wikipedia due to concerns over plagiarism and/or copyright violations - please see the information you received on your talk page. Content that is added to Wikipedia cannot be copied from other sources, but needs to be sufficiently rewritten and/or summarized to avoid being identical or significantly similar. The source you used link) is fine but you need to read it and summarize it, not copy paste content from it.

Please read the linked guides and instructions carefully. If you have trouble understanding them, please stop by my office hours and I will explain them more.

When you add further content to Wikipedia, please do it in your sandbox, not directly the public article. I will review it and let you know if it can be copied over to the public article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:20, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay professor, I will correct the editing methods and add them to the sandbox. Thank you for your guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I expanded the selection of articles in the sandbox.We have expanded the section on "China" and "Korea", please check it out, thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 07:18, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good job, your expansion looks good. Please use a tool like Grammarly to double check for English errors - there are some minor issues with vocabulary and punctuation. After you fix them, you can add your content to the main (public article). For references 2 and 3, please add translated English title and other missing metadata (author, publisher). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:37, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I have added the expanded content to the public article according to your suggestion. Please check it out. Thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 08:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have completed over forty edits to Wikipedia (week 8 + week 9), please check:[19]

I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 17:56, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good job, the edits look fine! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:21, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (week 9 ) ZHANG BINGYI

Hello, Professor. I finished my project essay. This is my sandbox, please check it.Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case#Complete the timing

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 11:41, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 Good. The article seems to have many good references and the structure and language are mostly sound. There are however several issues to fix:

please change the name of the subject from Lin Zhijian to Lin Chih-chien as this is the name his main biography exists under on English Wikipedia
please ensure all paragraphs have a reference (or more if necessary)
there may be some overlinking - please read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking and ensure important terms are linked, but no more then once (not counting the lead/introduction)
the explanatory note section does not seem correctly formatted - if they are notes, they should work as notes. Please stop by my office hours and I will show you the code to fix this
please proofread your article for English vocabulary and grammar; I recommend tool like Grammarly. I see numerous errors such as unfinished sentences ex "National Taiwan University announced on July 6, 2022, that from that day, all master and doctoral students must use the original comparison of text similarity before leaving the" or unclear sentences such as "Of the 173 students, only five were in public electronic full text " that are hard to understand; another problematic sentence is the very long one here (it needs to be split into several, it is too confusing and hard to understand, and likely has several errors in vocabulary and grammar that further affect it): "The school received a report containing Lin Zhijian copying Yu Zhenghuang, Yu Zhenghuang copying Lin Zhijian, and two people copying each other three; according to the school rules, the Academy of Social Sciences approved the report on the July 17 approval committee, the dean of the Academy of Social Sciences Su Hongda convener, based on the information provided to the committee of the information, and the accused to the committee replied data approval (but not including the parties not submitted to the committee, data published in other places)"

Perhaps @TheLonelyPather would like to offer some additional feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am overwhelmed by this article and I am afraid I don't have enough time to give a comprehensive review. Piotrus, very sorry for the late reply. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 13:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheLonelyPather No worries (btw I am pinging you because I don't know of anyone else who might be interested in reviewing student works in Asian topics - if you know, do let me know). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:39, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I received the following message regarding this article. I don’t know what to do. Please help me!! professor,Thank you.

The news is at this link:The content is described as follows: User talk:Zhangzhang111

Hello Zhangzhang111, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

While your contributions are appreciated, I wanted to let you know that I've started a discussion about whether an article that you created, Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case, should be deleted, as I am not sure that it is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia in its current form. Your comments are welcome at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case.

Deletion discussions usually run for seven days and are not votes. Our guide about effectively contributing to such discussions is worth a read. The most common issue in these discussions is notability, but it's not the only aspect that may be discussed; read the nomination and any other comments carefully before you contribute to the discussion. Last but not least, you are highly encouraged to continue improving the article; just be sure not to remove the tag about the deletion nomination from the top.

If you have any questions, please leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|Remsense}}. And don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~ . Thanks! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 00:46, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 You should comment at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case and address the issues raised. In particular, you should answer this: Which parts of the article are well referenced but too detailed to be merged into the main biography of the subject? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:18, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON

Hello Professor, I have finished the first Wikipedia edit here, and the second Wikipedia edit is going on here. Please check it out. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 16:12, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 I see. I think your translations need more blue links, preferably to Korean Wikipedia articles, but you can also link English ones like this: If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)

I also think that Korean Wikipedia translates names of people and organizations to Korean, instead of leaving them in Latin characters. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose and translation, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Once you address said feedback, if any, you can publish your articles in the mainspace. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week10) - Hong Gyeongmin

Hello, professor. I'm Hong Gyeongmin, taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I reviewed a <Global North and Global South> article by a @Leeyj0401, and left a suggestion on her talk page. Thank you Hkm5420 (talk) 02:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadlines (Week9) HUANG LINGXUAN&LIU YUNXIANG

Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.you have not yet reviewed the report on Week 9 for me and my team members.please check. Thanks☺️.Hhhlx (talk) 05:36, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx You are correct. I have left you feedback there - you can check it now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment tasks and English Wikipedia edited——HUANG LINGXUAN

Hello professor, I have completed the comment task and edited 115 edits on the English Wikipedia. Please check it out.Thank you😊. Hhhlx (talk) 06:25, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.

As for our weekly edits, please remember that the edits on your main project (here, Chinese clothing) do not count. Neither do edits such as leaving me messages, outside the very first weeks. Please see the syllabus for the details. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

About Deadline 5

Professor, This is an article that you couldn't check because there was a problem with the upload before. Now, I uploaded my article through translation correction, please check it.

Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine to KR.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%9F%AC%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84%EC%9D%98_%EC%9A%B0%ED%81%AC%EB%9D%BC%EC%9D%B4%EB%82%98_%EC%B9%A8%EA%B3%B5%EC%97%90_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C_%ED%97%88%EC%9C%84_%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4 KMJ0521 (talk) 10:28, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 Well done, it looks good. If you feedback on your prose and translation, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week10) - Lee jiyoon

Hello, professor. I'm Lee jiyoon, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.

I reviewed a 'Wonka (film)' article by a Hkm5420 student, and left a small suggestion on her talk page.

Thank you. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 10:28, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week10) YANGPEIFU

Dear professor, I have reviewed the article "Ming Dynasty Zheng Family" by Donghem and left feedback. Please take a look, professor.Thak you！ Yangpeifu (talk) 13:25, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week10) WU SHUHAN（Collective intelligence）

Hello, Professor, I have reviewed another student's article: User:Bai0926/User:Bai0926 fashion in China .I left my suggestion, you can check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 05:47, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:04, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) YUE ZIYI

Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. YZY2233 (talk) 06:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Good progress. Both articles need more hyperlinks (blue links) to another article. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.

You should also translate the remaining reference and add (copy) pictures. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I added a lot of new hyperlinks Please check it. This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. Thank you for your time. YZY2233 (talk) 10:45, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Well done. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9) LI PEIYU

Hello Professor! I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. Can I choose Anti-Chinese sentiment in Korea as my translation target? I will translate it into Chinese.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-Chinese_sentiment_in_Korea

I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link：https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%AE%8B%E5%BA%86%E9%BE%84&action=history

I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience！ Kikolipu (talk) 06:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Yes, that topic is fine, but you have already reserved two other topics:

History of human rights to zh

History of Sino–Korean relations to zh

As for your weekly edits, please remember that at least 5 should be done in English. See also feedback you received in Chinese at zh:User_talk:Kikolipu _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 Ma Chenxiao

Dear Professor, I have finished preparing the article on The Longly Warrior (Chinese: The Three Brigades). How should I move this article to my personal homepage?

This is the linkDraft:The Longly Warrior Mcx8202229 (talk) 09:30, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 I think you did not see the review I provided for you last week. See #Deadline 5 (Week 9) above.

Also, you removed the image - why? I restored it for you on May 5, but now that you removed it it was deleted. You will have to re-add it again (I recommend asking for it to undeleted at Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion); otherwise you will have to reupload it again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor, I have re-uploaded a more suitable poster, please check it out Mcx8202229 (talk) 07:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 I think it is the Lonely warrior, not the Longly warrior. Please see [20] or this China Daily article [21]. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 13:31, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

oh! Sorry, Professor, this was my oversight. I have already solved this error. Mcx8202229 (talk) 04:56, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good. Let me know when you fix the other issues I mentioned in my earlier review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:45, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, I have changed all the problematic links. I want to delete the poster uploaded to Wikimedia Commons because I re-uploaded a new poster for the article in Wikipedia, but my current article is not in the sandbox. , what should I do?The Lonely Warrior#External linksThis is the current link Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:07, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 You are doing well. A poster is non-free media and cannot be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. The poster at File:The Lonely Warrior poster.jpg should be enough. You should thank volunteer @Salavat who added a proper fair use explanation (thank you). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Kim minjun

Hello, professor. I'm Kim minjun, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.

I reviewed an article by a Choi sieon student, and left a small suggestion on his Talk page.

Please check it. Thank you.

KMJ0521 (talk) 09:47, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KMJ0521 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:46, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)-LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)

Hello Professor, these are the two articles translated by our group, they are almost finished, please check them.

开心宝贝 Happy Baby

Intensive animal farming 集约化畜牧业 LIYULUN (talk) 07:58, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Well done. Your Chinese article about intensive farming is almost ready to be published - try to ensure all content is referenced.

Regarding happy baby, please double check interlanguage links as they seem to point to ch wiki instead of zh wiki.

You don't need to link to unimportant concepts like characters that will never have their own article ("Happy Superman, Sweetheart Superman, Playboy Superman, Careless Superman, Caution Superman, Jialuo and the big monsters and little monsters").

Please ensure that the first letter of any heading is capitalized. Do not capitalize unnecessary words. What do you mean by "Division Introduction"? I do not understand this concept. It seems you mean "Episode summary"? Most of your other headings contain errors - please review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film which will tell you how your headings should be named.

Please ensure all content is referenced (in particular, in section about related works).

What is missing is a section on critical reception, summarizing reliable reviews. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:54, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor. We have modified our article according to your suggestion, please check if it can be published. LIYULUN (talk) 17:49, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Your article structure is fine now, but you need to rewrite your work to be in understandable English. For example, the first paragraph of 'Douban Movie' section is next to impossible to understand. Please proofread your text carefully with tools like Grammarly, AI tools or ask for help from someone fluent in English.

Lastly, Chinese name of the movie should be mentioned in the lead and infobox. Compare your article to other articles on Chinese movies and series on English Wikipedia, ex. The Wandering Earth or Meteor Garden (2018 TV series) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:28, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Changyeop Jung

Hello, professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.

I accepted your feedback and added a reference to everything, and added a translated title to the reference title in Korean. Please check it. And I gave feedback to another student's article. Please check it. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.

Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. For example, this sentence contains errors: "After democratization in 1987, Yang's banned songs were all lifted and reevaluated as outstanding musicians." Songs cannot be lifted nor can be musicians. Many other sentences contain similar errors, in some cases making them impossible to understand (ex. " she became poor due to the tilt of her joining forces"). If your article has too many errors, the content you added may be removed due to being impossible to understand. One more example: " At the time of the release, the music label gave up promoting it because it was too heavy" - what does it mean for music to be "heavy"? I don't think she was doing heavy metal... _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)—LIU RUOHAN/TANG JUNYUE

Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.

Here are two articles we translated. 1 2 Please check it .Thank you！ Han77720 (talk) 12:34, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Han77720 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.

Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. Right now there are too many errors in the article for it to be published, starting with the strange title ("Invest in coins to pray for blessings"). Other examples include phrasing such as "the eyes of money" or "enough to watch the Taoists spend a year" which make no sense in English.

Next, ensure that all content is referenced. A number of your paragraphs have references in the middle but not at the end, suggesting that their final parts are unreferenced.

However, there is a very major problem with your article. Many references used are bad or do not support claims made. For example, the section on 'India' has a pointless reference to a dictionary entry on blessing, then to Britannica on 'American Indians', then to a dictionary on disinfectant. In fact, from what I see, vast majority of the references used in your article are fake or unreliable. I am afraid I have never seen so bad collections of references - at this point I believe not a single reference you have is usable. This is particularly puzzling as the article you are supposed to be translated, zh:投币祈福, has many good references. Instead of using them, it seems you added links to random websites. Can you explain to me what happened? Where you using some AI tool?

Lastly, please double check your blue links. There are some strange errors in linking; for example why did you link the common word "fundamentally" to University of Wisconsin–Madison? Another link in your article links the word "illegal" to Illegal drug trade. Please ensure all your links point to correct articles and remove links to common words; see WP:BTW. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:13, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)—LIU RUOHAN/TANG JUNYUE

Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.

Here are two articles we translated.

1. 用户:Yue03090616/沙盒 - Wikipedia

2.User:Yue03090616/sandbox 111 - Wikipedia

Please check it .Thank you！ Yue03090616 (talk) 13:23, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yue03090616 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.

However, your English project has a major error, identical to the issues I describe just above regarding another project by your groupmate. All your references are fake and need to redone. Please tell me how did this error happened, I've never seen anything like this in my life and I am very curious (zh:天山大峡谷 has correct references).

In addition, you need to redo your internal links (hyperlinks); there are major issues of overlinking and linking to common (unnecessary) or wrong terms (such as the word various linking to Various Positions, a music album). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking. You should remove all links and re-add them one by one, probably replicating the link structure from the original (Chinese) article.

It also would be good to add illustrations. Please see Assignment 5 in our module on adding media (Collective Intelligence) class on tips. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:21, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia editing assignments for the week, totaling more than 20. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 16:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:29, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 9)—Gaoxiaoxia/Qiupengyu

Hello,professor,these are the three articles translated by our group.Plase check it,thank you https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E5%A4%9A%E6%B0%91%E6%97%8F%E6%80%A7 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Notice_of_the_National_Press_and_Publication_Administration_on_Further_Strict_Management_and_Effective_Prevention_of_Minors%27_Addiction_to_Online_Games https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Babaibiaobin/sandbox Babaibiaobin (talk) 10:24, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin

Regarding your Chinese translation, please make sure to complete it (right now it is missing references).

Your first draft contains numerous references to Chinese Wikipedia. Please replace them with references to reliable sources; Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference.

Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles.

If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:34, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 and 6 ——LI MENGRU

Good afternoon Professor,

I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence course.

I have completed the translation from Chinese to English in my sandbox. I checked the grammar using Grammerly and removed the non neutral parts of the article, as well as modified and deleted references that did not meet the requirements. Please check it.

I reviewed a <Organic food culture> article by @CHENG SHIYI , and left a suggestion on her talk page.

Looking forward to your reply, thank you！TMXX0818 (talk) 10:29, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Well done with your review.

As for your article in English, it is better than it was, but there are still issues raised in the last review that need replying. Have you read comments by TheLonelyPanther, concerning for example the section on 'Poor sourcing' at #Deadline4(Week5) LI MENGRU?

Some of my comments have not been addressed as well (ex. the blog pixnet is still used as a source). Reference 57 is to YouTube. Please remove all references to social media sites and blogs.

Much of the content in the bullet section ('Type and instance') seems like original research. This entire section is so poorly written and chaotic that I think it needs to be deleted wholesale. This is true for much of the article, which is often based on primary sources.

I am afraid that as I said before, much - most - of the article needs to be deleted as not meeting standards of English Wikipedia. As a rule of thumb, anything that is not cited to an academic journal, book, or major newspaper should likely be removed. You could use reliable sources like Zhaozhen (which is missing a url? how can I read it?) to expand the article instead.

Some parts of your article lack references and need to be removed if references cannot be found. Some references are in wrong / broken format (the ones that say note, like [note 13]). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:50, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry I couldn't find any academic references or major newspapers. Because I have referred to the original Chinese Wikipedia and the references cited seem to be original content. And I found that most of the content in the original text was based on personal comments posted on the internet, so my translation work was very difficult and it was difficult to prove that every sentence had reliable references. I am considering whether it would be better for me to change my article.

If possible, could I start my work again with a new article? Could I translate this article into English? Thank you for your reply!TMXX0818 (talk) 14:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry I didn't link to this article. I want to translate it into English. Looking forward to your reply.Thank you. TMXX0818 (talk) 14:14, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 Certainly, you can translate that other article. You will get credit for both projects, so I am sure your grade will be good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:28, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TMXX0818 This other article has better references. Thank you in advance for your work. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 22:55, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week10) ——ZHANG QI

I have completed this week's task. My team members （Huang Yanhan） and I evaluated each other's translated articles. Please check it. Thank you. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:09, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (Week 10)-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I reviewed a <Prehistory of China> article by @Zhongxxin , and left a suggestion on her talk page.Please check, thank you.

CHENG SHIYI (talk) 13:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10) HUANG YANHAN

Hello professor, I have commented on my companion, please check it out. HYH031277777 (talk) 13:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10)—ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor. I have read LI MENGRU( @TMXX0818 )'s article and left some suggestions on her talk page, please check it. [22] Thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 13:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10) Choi sieon

I read other's topic and left feedback. Please check.

String of Pearls(Indian Ocean) theory was quite interesting.

Choisieon (talk) 14:41, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Choisieon Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:11, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6: Week 10 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I completed this week, please check it out, thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:07, 12 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good. Remember that all paragraphs need a reference; I see for example the first two paragraphs in the "Hsi Shih's hometown" section you added are missing references - please add references to them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:13, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 week10 WANG TAO

Hello Professor, here is a Wikipedia article I translated, please check it out, thanks. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Wangtao626/sandbox&action=edit Wangtao626 (talk) 02:48, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 I am afraid the link to the article is broken. Please try to link it again and this time double check the link works, and I'll review it then. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:17, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor this is the new link.Corruption in the United States（美国的腐败） Wangtao626 (talk) 11:58, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Good progress. Please remove broken code ({{Use American English|date=April 2017}} found at the top of the article, and |group="Note" found in one reference.

Next,, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:31, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(Week10) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I posted here seeking opinions on "Observer bias" & "Women's clothing in China". But after two weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks.

Have a great week. Csiiiyu (talk) 02:55, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu I will ask some Chinese volunteers I know to take a look. If you receive no feedback in two weeks, you can publish your articles in their current form. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:28, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(Week10) ZHANG BINGYI

Dear Professor, I have reviewed the article " Wang Baiyuan " by Yangpeifu and left feedback. Please take a look, professor. Thak you！ Zhangzhang111 (talk) 04:12, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:11, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5)_Chaeyeong Lee

Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Completed 50% of the assignment for Deadline 4, “Beer in Japan” Please confirm. here Chaeyeong09 (talk) 13:16, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Chaeyeong09 The formatting looks good. Once you are finished, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. Once you address that feedback of if you receive no feedback in two weeks, you can publish your articles in their current form. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5(Week9)_Chaeyeong Lee

Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.I have completed the assignment corresponding to Deadline 5. (Beer in Japan) Please check and provide feedback. here Chaeyeong09 (talk) 14:42, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I replied to you above (same article). Good job, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikimedia Commons - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

Regarding the assignment of Project 2 Public Space Observation, I uploaded the images I took during the observation to Wikimedia Commons in the hope of gaining extra points. thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 04:17, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Well done, the pictures look good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Week 11--MUQING

Good afternoon Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 03:47, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, but please not that Baidu Baike is not an acceptable reference on Wikipedia, so some of your edits were reverted. You can restore them if you can locate more reliable reference to verify the claims made. Read more at WP:BAIDUBAIKE. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (week 10) - Hayoung Kwon

Hello Professor. I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on her talk page, please check it. Hayoung1 (talk) 02:03, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hayoung1 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life - MU QING

Good morning Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 02:46, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, see my comment above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG

Hello professor, this is my translation assignment after correction. It has been corrected according to your requirements. Please check it for me. If there are any deficiencies, I will correct it immediately. Thank you, Professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 I see some progress, but you need to follow my previous instructions. For example, I don't see that you have acted on my review from March (at #Deadline 4 (Week 5)LI HAOCHANG HAN YUANYUAN), later repeated at #Deadline 5 (Week 9)LIHAOCHANG HANYUANYUAN. Please reread my earlier feedback and act on it. You added references and rewrote one sentence, but many other errors I identified before remain (lack of links, lack of interlanguage links, poor reference formatting). The article still has unreferenced parts, and many strange grammar or vocabulary errors ("iron juice"?). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:48, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week 10)-LIYULUN(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)

Hello professor.I read other students' posts and left feedback, please check out.User talk:ZHANGQI1066#Feedback-LI YULUN LIYULUN (talk) 04:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@LIYULUN Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week11:ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

I am Zhang Zehua, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia

1.This is my expanded article on Chinese etiquette [23]

2. Here are my 30 Wikipedia edits Lin Shan (diver)

Please check it, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 12:34, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Well done, your edits look fine. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(week10)-Gaoxiaoxia

Hello,professor I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on other student talk page.Please chack it https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:YZY2233#Feedback Babaibiaobin (talk) 17:56, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (Week 10) LI PEIYU

Hello Professor! I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Kikolipu

I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience！ Kikolipu (talk) 06:50, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good afternoon, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 09:31, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week 10)-ZHANG RUIQING

Hello professor.I read other students' posts and left feedback, you can check out at here. Thank you. Rachel.zrq (talk) 14:15, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have finished editing Wikipedia for week 10 + week 11 (more than 40 edits in total), please check it, thank you! Zhongxxin (talk) 13:42, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good. Please double check your edits with tools like Grammarly to ensure there are no issues with English grammar or vocabulary. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits- WANG YIHUA

Good morning professor，

I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.

Have a nice day！ 왕예화 (talk) 16:29, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly.

Also, references (footnotes) should not be added in headings. You need to add at least one sentence to the body of the heading and move your reference there. For example, if it is a list of stations, you should say so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6(Week 10)- WANG YIHUA

Good morning Professor.

I have read the posts of other students and left feedback,

you can check them here.

Have a nice day！ 왕예화 (talk) 16:36, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.

PS, Please copy your message to their talk page, it should be at User talk:Zhongxxin not User talk:Zhongxxin/sandbox.

Same problem as above - @Hhhlx - please copy your message too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:35, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I have made the necessary modifications，Please review 왕예화 (talk) 15:59, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good, now it is in the right place. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:30, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(week10)-YUE ZIYI

Hello,professor I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on other student talk page.Please chack it User talk:Csiiiyu and User talk:Babaibiaobin YZY2233 (talk) 04:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6-Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, I have completed the feedback, please checkUser talk:ZHANGQI1066#Feedback-Ma Chenxiao Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:13, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:54, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(Week10) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU

Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I read other people's articles and posted my suggestions on the talk page, please check it out.

And I received a reply to my message in the Wikipedia: Peer Review/Proposal area, and also received suggestions from friends on the my talk page. I made changes, please check again. 1. 2.

Hope you have a great week. Csiiiyu (talk) 06:05, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Csiiiyu Well done with your reviews. And since you got feedback and acted on it, I think you can publish your articles on Chinese Wikipedia - good job! Do monitor the Peer Review section to see if more comments appear there over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 (Week 9)ZHANG BINGYI

1.Hello Professor, my main Wikipedia Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case, received comments like the following: This article was nominated for deletion. The discussion was closed on 20 May 2024 with a consensus to merge the content into the article Lin Chih-chien. If you find that such action has not been taken promptly, please consider assisting in the merger instead of re-nominating the article for deletion. To discuss the merger, please use the destination article's talk page.

But I am not very good at merging the content into Lin Chih-chien . I am requesting your help, or if possible, I would like to go to the office and ask the professor for help.

2. In addition to my main task, I also completed Draft:Su Hongda for extra points and asked the professor to check it.

Thank you and have a nice day~~ Zhangzhang111 (talk) 02:34, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 We can discuss the merge in my office; but the short version is - you have to identify the most important elements of your translated to be merged article that are missing from the target merge article and copy them over.

Regarding your draft, please shorten the too long heading ("He said the Palace Museum's transformation policy was to eliminate the Palace Museum transfer"). And note that another experienced editor, User:Saqib, expressed concerns that your article reads too promotional. As they have not provided any specific details, please ask them on the article's talk page or their talk page for such details and then try to address the issues they raise. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:24, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (Week 10) LI HAOCHANG

I have completed the evaluation of another classmate. Ask the professor to check. Lihaochang678 (talk) 13:49, 21 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678 Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:29, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12) Changyeop Jung

Hello, professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.

I accepted your feedback and fixed it. please check article. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 04:43, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 I am afraid you did not see my message at #Deadline 6 (week 10) - Changyeop Jung or did not act on it. There are still many errors, including in specific sentences I mentioned, and other sentences you attempted to fix are still incorrect. Please use tools like Grammarly, AI tools or ask for help from someone fluent in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:31, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Piotrus at Hanyang I fixed my article by using AI grammar tool. But Among the sentences you pointed out, "Yang's banned songs were all lifted" translates as "were all removed" or "were all revoked," indicating that a specific restriction or regulation has been removed. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:00, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ckdduq0919 That would make sense. You can say that restrictions or bans on her songs were removed (lifted would be ok too). Restrictions or bans can be lifted, songs cannot be lifted.

You are making good progress - almost all grammar and vocabulary issues are fixed, and the article is now well written. Please clarify " various dictatorships in Korea". Was there more than one dictatorship? It would be better to clearly name the particular "dictators" or relevant governments.

After that, please read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking and add more blue links to important concepts, such as Korean War or Sogang University. Or Morning Dew (Korean song). Or Ovarian cancer. Or Myeongdong. If a topic exists in Korean but not English (perhaps Ha Deok-gyu?, or the names of many songs and albums) , please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office hours or ask in class and I will demonstrate it.

For Korean songs/albums/novels and such that do not have an English article, please provide the name in Hangul, like we learned in class yesterday (User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/MoS). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:02, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN

Hello Professor, I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it, thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:02, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:32, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LI HAOCHANG

As per your request I did a peer review please check.And also added this topic to my talk page. Check, please. Lihaochang678 (talk) 03:20, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lihaochang678 Good job asking for the review, please check it in few days to see if there is feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:33, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 (Weeks 11-12) - HongGyeongmin

Hello, professor. I am HongGyeongmin, taking Collective Intellignece.

I accepted you and other students feedback and fixed it. please check. Dune2 / Wonka Hkm5420 (talk) 04:00, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkm5420 Good job. Check in your articles every week to make sure there is no feedback from Korean reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

collective intelligence Week 11--MUQING

Good afternoon Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:用户贡献/Muqing112233

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good. But remember that 5 edits each week should be at English Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks.

CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:39, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Good job! All Chinese articles should have Chinese characters in their leads. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6(Week10) - Sociology of Everyday Life - YUE ZIYI

Hello professor. I'm YUE ZIYI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I posted here seeking opinions on "Social psychology (sociology)" & "Sailor tattoos". But after a weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks. YZY2233 (talk) 04:29, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Can you link to the place you posted your requests for opinions? I am afraid your message above has no link for me to review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:35, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry professor, I have re-added the link, please check："Social psychology (sociology)" & "Sailor tattoos". YZY2233 (talk) 13:03, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Since nobody else replied, I think you can publish your articles. You can also ask User:Ericliu1912 who left a short comment there if they'd like to say something more. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly Editor- LIU XINRUI

Good afternoon, Professor. Here are my 20 Wikipedia edits this week. Pleaes check.Hope you have a nice day！ 1.241.68.131 (talk) 08:22, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

week 12 DENG HUICHEN

Hello professor. I left a comment on another classmate's homepage for you to check. please check it out thanks.(https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:ZHANGQI1066) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 09:35, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@등혜진 Well done. I hope it is useful for them _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-WANG YIHUA

Good evening, professor，

I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it,

Have a nice day. 왕예화 (talk) 14:04, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:39, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7(week11-12)--LI LINLIN

Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and

'Understanding Wikipedia'.

I further changed the format of the translated article based on comments from other Chinese Wikipedia users and double-checked my translation.

You can check it out Article 1、Article 2、Article 3、Article 4. If there are no major problems, may I publish the articles ?

Looking forward to your reply:) Leeinm (talk) 14:13, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Well done. I think your article 3 needs more blue links (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking / zh:维基百科:格式手册/链接). Other than that, yes, you can publish your work - well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've add more blue links in my article3, plz check here.

Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 03:38, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor.

I have published article 1.2.4 and added translation code to the discussion page of the article in accordance with Wikipedia's rules. It has also been edited in wikidata to link the translated article to the original article.You can check it here.

Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 07:53, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Excellent! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. There is a minor error in two of your articles as indicated by the error message at top - some contain links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I fix the contain which have linked to English Wikipedia.

Thank you ~ Leeinm (talk) 06:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. But I see that here you removed the content linking to English Wikipedia. It would be better to restore it and link it properly using the interlanguage tool I linked above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor.

I have fixed the contain links to English Wikipedia . You can check it out here.

Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 09:10, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6--LI LINLIN

Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and

'Understanding Wikipedia'.

I have read other's article and left some suggestions on his talk page, please check it.

Have a nice day :)

Leeinm (talk) 14:27, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Your comment should be at their talk page, not their sandbox talk page. Please move it from User talk:Hanyuanyuan613/sandbox 打铁花 to User talk:Hanyuanyuan613 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:41, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have moved it to User talk:Hanyuanyuan613. You can check it here.

Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 05:04, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:50, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WUSHUHAN-Collective intelligence

Hello, Professor. I finished the project essay. Can I publish it？ WSH0927 (talk) 01:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Please use a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article or ask for help from someone fluent in English. There are some grammar and vocabulary errors resulting in sentences that are hard or impossible to understand, for example " Guizhou female Shui Xi soil department during the Ming Dynasty" or

"and developed into an Ai Cui moral wife" or "As she cohabitated with her spouse, She Xiang progressively enhanced the regent director's political acumen".

Or "She Xiang regency, just caught up with the Ming Dynasty and the Yuan army of the Yunnan war".

In " The man was well-known for his proficiency across several Shui West departments, adored by the clansmen, and recognized as "Tho Mu" (King chief)." - who is "the man"?

Please note that those are just examples from the beginning of your article. The errors continue later, ex. "She absorbed a lot of nutrients in Sinology"

There are too many errors in your article for it to be published in English (every second or third sentence is impossible to understand).

A different issue to be fixed is the lack of images. There are modern related entities such as She Xiang Museum - can you find freely licenced images of it or similar places to add to the article? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

BAI LINHAN

Professor, I've created all the contents of the sandbox. Please check it Bai0926 (talk) 07:46, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good progress. There are several issues that need to be fixed:

Please review our module on writing the lead (introduction): User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/Lead. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article, ex. about Dompamine style. Please move such content to the relevant section(s).
please review the guideline on which terms should have blue links (Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Your article contains many important terms that are not linked. In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok . This is not a problem in the lead, many other terms are not linked in other parts of the article (ex. Genghis Khan). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
Is the international fashion week you mention the same as China Fashion Week?
Use AI tools or Grammary to double check for errors, such as repeating of "On the one hand" twice in the lead
Please ensure all content is referenced. There is no reference for the first paragraphs of 'Wei and jin dynasties' or 'Sui and tang dynasties' sections, for example
Please try to add more pictures, particularly for the modern fashion you discuss (remember to add only pictures already found on Wikipedia, or your own - see User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/6)
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). See User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I modified the article please check. Thank you!

Here is my answer to the question about World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week. World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week are not the same. China Fashion Week is an event organized by China Fashion Designers Association, abbreviation: CIFW. Bai0926 (talk) 08:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Regarding "China international fashion week", please ensure the name is properly capitalized. Is there a Chinese Wikipedia article for it, or for the China Fashion Designers Association? If not, please provide Chinese names in the right places, just as when we learned in the recent module on Manual of Style in class.

Please review my remarks above. You have not addressed majority of the issues raised. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. You have added some links, but more are needed. I've listed specific examples above ("In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok") and you have not improved them. There are still unreferenced paragraphs; the references still have missing metadata, etc. Please address ALL of the issues I've raised CAREFULLY (not A FEW of the issues haphazardly), then ask me for the review again.

Please check whether the links are correct. For example, Zhongshan suit should probably link to Mao suit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Translation

Hi professor I finished translating these three english wiki articles into korean. 1985 (Dalos novel), György Dalos and Leila Khaled. Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 09:31, 29 May 2024 (UTC) Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 09:52, 29 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinseongmin1917 Excellent, thank you for teaching about the 1985 novel, it seems quite interesting, I'll add something to that article (in English) shortly :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:52, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Week 11 ---FAN XINRU

Sorry Professor, I made a mistake in submitting the link last time and now resubmit it on this page.This is the Wikipedia article I edited, please check it out ,thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:15, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Well done, your expansion looks good. . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . You can see how I did this here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, professor, I will learn how to use it. Thank you for your guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:50, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (Week 10)----JIA MENGZHUO

Good afternoon, Professor. I have read others posts and left some suggestions on his discussion page, please check it out. Have a great day!Zhuo1221 (talk) 08:12, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Well done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUO

Hello, professor. I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. In May, I completed 80 additional edits on Wikipedia, check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 You are doing very well. I also see you learned about disambiguation from the message on your talk page. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good evening, professor. I have reviewed the feedback and made corrections based on the comments provided on the feedback page.Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits---LI PEIYU

Hello, professor. I'm LI PEIYU, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class, I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it, Special:Contributions/Kikolipu

Have a nice day. Kikolipu (talk) 07:44, 1 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Good but please remember to add only referenced content (some of your work was removed here), and when uploading pictures, only upload your own works. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life——MU QING

Hello professor, this is the article I chose for this class. It has been posted on the page, please check it.

韩国的反美情绪 Muqing112233 (talk) 07:09, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good job. If you need help with the issue templated on top, stop by Chinese Discord or discussion forum. The categories seem to have been fine, there was just a stray nowiki code. Stop by my office if you need help. I am also not sure if you need to remove the links you have removed. They seem fine to me. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:10, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

professor，I have revised it. Thank you for checking it again. Muqing112233 (talk) 06:22, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG

Hello Professor, I have made the changes as you requested, please check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 07:56, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good job adding interlanguage links, but not all changes were done. See my feedback above. For example, I told you to add a blue link to the State Council of China - this has not been done.

There are still language and vocabulary errors, some new. In the second sentence you repeat "national intangible cultural heritage" (perhaps you did not delete the content while adding the interlnauge link). The heading 'value meaning' is not understandable - please look at similar articles and see how this can be written in English. I do not understand what you mean by 'value meaning'.

All headings (sections) should begin with a capital letter. See Mos:headings . _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 14:49, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done, your edits look good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week 13 WANG TAO

Hello professor, this is my translated article "Income inequality metrics" please confirmhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%94%B6%E5%85%A5%E4%B8%8D%E5%B9%B3%E7%AD%89%E6%8C%87%E6%A0%87&action=edit Wangtao626 (talk) 02:53, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Good. Next, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 . Please monitor your article for the next few weeks to see if any issues are raised on it through templates. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:19, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, my two articles are finished, please check them.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox，https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Mcx8202229 (talk) 06:46, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good. Regarding your English article, when you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. (If you don't know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours).

After that you can publish your article (move it). After moving it, please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, professor. Where should I move to? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 13:09, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I have published both articles on the corresponding Wikipedia and added cross-language links. I also decorated my personal homepage and changed my signature. Below are the two articles.

The Lonely Warrior，https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/印度的环境 Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 07:15, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Well done. For your Chinese article, as you can see, there is one small problem tagged with a warning template at the top of the article. This is because your article has links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:33, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Your English article should also use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles like zh:李乃文 .

It should look like this: Li Naiwen [zh] _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:36, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, my Chinese article has been revised.And my English article, am I right to revise it this way? Please help me point out the problem, professor. I would be very grateful. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 05:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Please revise the links in the English article as follows: if an article exits in Chinese Wikipedia but not English Wikipedia, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles like zh:李乃文 . It should look like this: Li Naiwen [zh] .

Please let me know if this is clear or not. If not, ask me in class next time and I will demonstrate to you how to do this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, professor, I probably know, but I don't know what else I need to change right now. I'll ask you next Monday Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 12:07, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 (Week 11)——LI PEIYU

Good afternoon Professor,

I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses. I have translated the English version of Anti-Chinese sentiment in Korea into Chinese. Here is my sandbox，

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. Kikolipu (talk) 09:44, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kikolipu Good job. Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:37, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the Final Manuscript---JIA MENGZHUO

Good evening, Professor. I have completed my translation article. I hope you can help me check if there are any areas that need improvement. Please take a look.Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:20, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Well done, you are almost done. Please check my feedback from few day ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---JIA MENGZHUO regarding references and metadata; some still are missing information, such as ""前进中的中国文化遗产研究院". 世界遗产: 144. 2014." which has no English title, etc. You can publish your work anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:41, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing----JIA MENGZHUO

Good morning, Professor. I have completed the 60 additional edits on Wikivoyage for this week. Please review them.Zhuo1221 (talk) 02:23, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhuo1221 Good job, that'll give you nice amount of extra credit, but remember to make some edits to English Wikipedia too :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:42, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life——XUE DONGXIN

Hello professor, I am xuedongxin. I have completed the translation task of Wikipedia and revised the question you asked. Check, please. Thank you. Ming Dynasty Zheng family Donghem (talk) 05:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Well done, you are almost finished. Please double check my review from few days ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---XUE DONGXIN . Some references still need more metadata (such as English title in "台湾硏究所, 厦门大学; 编辑部, 中国第一历史档案馆 (1987). 郑成功滿文档案史料选译 (in Chinese). 福建人民出版社. pp. 55–58. ISBN 978-7-211-00169-9."; the English title should be in addition and not replacing the Chinese one. Please let me know if you need help adding it and I'll showy you ow to do so.). You can publish your article (move it to mainspace) anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ps. Also, please ensure that all books in Chinese have a Chinese title, and/or ISBN. For example, Chinese title and/or ISBN are missing from this ref: "Zheng Xurong, "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou", Chaoshan Historical and Cultural Research Center, 2007, pp. 390-391" _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:46, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor. Thanks for pointing out the errors, I've fixed them. And I have published my article. Thank you so much.Ming Dynasty Zheng family Donghem (talk) 05:07, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Good. Please link your articles to from other articles to address the Wikipedia:Orphan issue that has been tagged. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WU SHUHAN-Collective intelligence

Hello, Professor. I have finished the final draft of the project article. Please review it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 12:00, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Well done. Now we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:47, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Collective intelligence----LIU XINRUI、MU QING

Hello Professor, this is our translated article, which has been peer reviewed. Please check it.

This article is translated from Chinese to English.Death of Li Keqiang

This article is translated from English into Chinese.韩国的性 Muqing112233 (talk) 02:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good, but there is more needed. The English article you translated does not contain all the content from the Chinese article, as noted by the review message at the top. I can see that most of the content from the 'Resigned from party and government positions' section is missing. There are other omissions, for example reaction from Taiwan in your translation only covers that of DPP and not that of MC, and is unreferenced. Please ensure all content is translated and referenced. Also, add categories (see Wikipedia:Categorization). Here I will also ping User:Oblivy who reviewed your article during recent AfD discussion and mentioned it is in the need of cleanup - feel free to tell my student what else should be improved (TIA).

Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the ping. As I said at the AfD discussion, it is a well sourced article and I have no concerns about keeping it, but it needs some revision.My concerns were very general but I can give a few examples for improvement:

the lead paragraph contains too much detail about his career and positions - he has his own article, in case anyone needs to know
check "location" in the infobox - there are red links and lack of proper word spacing
there is nothing called "English Tiger News" - the paper can be called the Hong Kong Standard or The Standard (HK).
the article has two sections - background and process - describing in detail his declining health, death, and announcement. This should be one shorter section. It also contains unnecessary details like the prevalence of heart disease among diabetes patients, and him waving to tourists during a visit to Dunhuang
many news sources and official sources appear in bold type which is usually limited to the article subject and related terms
there is a lot of overlap between "farewell ceremony" and "memorial events" and this could perhaps be collapsed into a single (shorter) section highlighting official events and spontaneous ones
I find the long "reactions" section to be a bit pointless but I understand why it's included and don't have a good reason to say it doesn't belong in the article
there were two more "process" sections at the end - one was a copy of material in "reactions" and the other was blank; I've gone ahead and removed them along with an extra paragraph that was a copy of material elsewhere

I hope my comments above help. Oblivy (talk) 06:00, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ok,I understand, I'll try to modify it.Think you. Muqing112233 (talk) 02:18, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have modified it as you suggested, maybe you can check it again?

Death of Li Keqiang Muqing112233 (talk) 07:15, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 If you want someone other than me (here) to see your reply, please WP:ECHO them like this: @Oblivy

Regarding your edit here. First, you should make sure your edits do not create errors, for example there is now a word (missing space): "MedicineDongyuan"

Second, if an article exits in Chinese Wikipedia but not English Wikipedia, use " Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles. So instead of removing a link to the "Shuguang Hospital Affiliated to Shanghai University of Traditional Chinese MedicineDongyuan District" you should use the tool (template) linked above so that it looks like this: Shuguang Hospital Affiliated to Shanghai University of Traditional Chinese Medicine [zh]. Note the zh link at the end. PS. I do not understand where the "Dongyuan" is coming from; the article mentions the location (for this hospital) as Huangpu District. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Collective intelligence：ZHANG ZEHUA

Dear professor

1.This is my expanded article on Chinese etiquette Etiquette in Asia

2. Here are my 20 Wikipedia edits Pang Wei

Please check it, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 07:02, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Good progress.

Regarding your work on the English article, consider adding some links (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link

the first paragraph in the section 'Ancient Chinese sacrificial rituals' needs a reference; and so does the content in the introduction ("In most Chinese restaurants, there is no tip required unless it is explicitly posted. Tea is almost always provided, either in advance of the diners being seated or immediately afterward. A verbal "thank you" (谢谢; xiexie) should be offered to the server pouring the tea.") _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:00, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor, I have added some links, please check them Etiquette in Asia#China, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 14:32, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANG0822ZH Good. But you should try to link more complex terms, such as sacrifice, and do it the first time they are used (you actually link to sacrifice, but only upon this term third or fourth use - please move the link to the first use). And remember to add missing reference(s). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly editing - ZHANG RUIQING

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice, Sociology of Everyday Life and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out. Thank you. Rachel.zrq (talk) 04:25, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rachel.zrq Remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and only such content counts for our class' credit. You need to add references to your recent (and older) edits if you want them to count for our class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:02, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 — WANG YIHUA

Good afternoon Professor, I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

I have translated the English version of Health in North Korea into the Chinese version and released it，Please check

Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 07:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good job. Please monitor your Chinese article for the next few weeks to ensure any issues raised by Chinese reviewers are addressed. You are doing good job so far! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 —ZHONG XIN

Hello, Professor,

I'm ZHONG XIN, a student in your Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia course.

I have finished adding content to the Chinese article “中国史前文化”, as well as the English translation of the article, and have posted it.

However, when I posted it, I realized that the title of my original translation “Prehistory of China” had already been taken, so I changed the title of my article to “The Prehistoric Culture of China".

Please check it and I would be grateful if you could give me any suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 11:43, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhongxxin Good. I've asked admins to move your article to the proper name (Prehistory of China).

Please use Template:Main for linking "main articles"; see how I've done it here. Please also add correct WP:CATEGORIES to the article (check which ones exist in Chinese Wikipedia and try to add similar to your article; some may exist on English Wikipedia - check their interwiki links; if there is no identical category, try to add one or more of the relevant parent categories; if you don't know how to do so, ask me in class and I'll demonstrate). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:54, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)—CHENG SHIYI

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

I have finished adding the content of the English article ‘Organic food culture’, as well as the Chinese translation of that article, and have posted it.

Please check, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:25, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHENG SHIYI Well done. Please monitor your Chinese article for the next few weeks to ensure any issues raised by Chinese reviewers are addressed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC) PS. For extra credit, you can consider adding to that article (both in Chiense and English) a section on organic food culture and trends in China. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:01, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly wiki edits-WANG YIHUA

Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 17:10, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@왕예화 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 (Week 10)-LIU XINRUI

Dear Professor, this is the feedback I leave in other people's user suggestions.Please check it.Thank you! 유신예 (talk) 17:51, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Collective intelligence----MU QING

Good afternoon, professor.I have completed ten edits this week, please check.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233

Muqing112233 (talk) 07:28, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Muqing112233 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:03, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sociology of Everyday Life——MU QING

Good afternoon, professor.I have completed ten edits this week, please check.

Special:Contributions/Muqing112233 Muqing112233 (talk) 07:28, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok - see above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:06, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 — Lee jiyoon

Hi professor I published translating these two english wiki articles into korean. here and here Jiyoon Leee (talk) 08:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiyoon Leee Good but please revise your work with regards to Korean grammar and vocabulary; one of your articles has already been tagged for translation issues due to possible overreliance on machine translation and lack of proofreading. Please try to improve the prose of your translations to address such issues. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 -----ZHANG LINYUE

Good evening, Professor. I have checked the progress of another member's work and commented on it. Please check it, thank you.AYAO32269 (talk) 12:35, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Project 3 submission failed

I am Wang Siwen, a student of everyday life and social structure.My school number is 2023025414.Professor, my home network is not good, the submission of homework was postponed to 12 o'clock sharp, but when I submitted the homework, it was 11:59, I finished this homework.Just because the network is delayed by a minute without committing.But I did my homework carefully, and there were documentation and video formats.It has been sent to your Google and LMS mailboxes to demonstrate that job submissions failed at exactly twelve o'clock due to network delays.I'm really anxious.Please check.Thank you! 220.74.81.4 (talk) 15:32, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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 ==Deadline 6 -----ZHANG LINYUE==
 Good evening, Professor. I have checked the progress of another member's work and commented on it. Please check [[User_talk:Zhuo1221|it]], thank you.[[User:AYAO32269|AYAO32269]] ([[User talk:AYAO32269|talk]]) 12:35, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
+== Project 3 submission failed ==
+I am Wang Siwen, a student of everyday life and social structure.My school number is 2023025414.Professor, my home network is not good, the submission of homework was postponed to 12 o'clock sharp, but when I submitted the homework, it was 11:59, I finished this homework.Just because the network is delayed by a minute without committing.But I did my homework carefully, and there were documentation and video formats.It has been sent to your Google and LMS mailboxes to demonstrate that job submissions failed at exactly twelve o'clock due to network delays.I'm really anxious.Please check.Thank you! [[Special:Contributions/220.74.81.4|220.74.81.4]] ([[User talk:220.74.81.4|talk]]) 15:32, 7 June 2024 (UTC)