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:: I've wikilinked the first appearance of the word in the article to [[tariff (criminal law)]], which seems a better option. After all, there are a large number of US legal terms not used in the UK, and I doubt we're going to get bracketed explanations after every mention of those on Wikipedia. Besides, this way avoids unnecessary extra length in the article itself. [[Special:Contributions/86.132.142.207|86.132.142.207]] ([[User talk:86.132.142.207|talk]]) 15:05, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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Confusion over content
im new here so im not sure if you do this here but on this article it says that Brady attempted to strangle John Kilbride but ended up stabbing him and burying his body but in the Myra Hindley article it says Brady attempted to stab him but ended up strangling him so which one is it?? oh and the myra hindley article doesnt mention anything about sexual assualt with John Kilbride but this one does.
i noticed that - one says the string didnt work so the knife was used, and the other is the other way round. this needs clearing up in my opinion, especially because it is such a sensetive subject that some may not feel is given enough...how shall i put it, respect as it needs if there is a mistake.
The victims of the Moors Murders need to be remembered, and so an article is appropriate. The pieces of shit that committed the murders do not need their own articles. The Anome
- A biographical article is not a reward, to be given only to good people. Anyone of historical significance should have a biographical entry in the Wikipedia, in my opinion, whether their significance comes from good deeds, bad deeds, or anything else. Do you think we should also remove the articles on Genghis Khan, Vlad the Impaler, and Adolf Hitler? These people are almost universally agreed to have been bad, too. -- Oliver Pereira 12:04 Nov 17, 2002 (UTC)
- Agreed. There is far too much selectivity in Wikipedia as it is. Everything which needs dealing with encyclopedically should be dealt with.user:sjc
- However, there are serious doubts about the NPOV about the speculative paragraph. We are either going to strive for NPOV or we're not. user:sjc
Evil people such as Genghis Khan, Vlad the Impaler and Adolf Hitler are historical figures, and their deeds deserve articles becuase of their historical importance. The Moors Murders, the public outrage and the legal controversy resulting, deserve an article because of their impact as a British historical event. The Moors murderers are not interesting as people, only as cases of psychopathology: they did nothing of note in their sad and pathetic lives except kill people, and they only need to be mentioned in an article on the killings, in as much as their pathology is of forensic interest. The Anome
While I am sympathetic to what you are saying, Anome, I think the correct procedure in this circumstance is to have a separate article for the Moors Murders and discrete biographical articles relating to Hindley & Brady which fully show their culpability in this dreadful series of crimes. They undoubtedly form a part of British social history; this is incontrovertible since they have occupied a large part of the nation's consciousness for the last 40 years or so. A hundred years hence, without their being dealt with properly by contemporary social historians, and they will be merely shadow figures without context and relevance. You may wish to argue that this is no bad thing and in one way I can accept this. Nevertheless, I would argue strongly and cogently for them to be dealt with on a par with Jack the Ripper, Peter Sutcliffe, Ted Bundy et al: a comprehensive and coherent biographical analysis which sets out clearly their crimes and places those crimes in a fully developed social setting. A failure on our part to do this properly is inexcusable, and is to the disadvantage to those readers who turn to Wikipedia for information. user:sjc
Yep, what he said... If an event or series of events is historically important enough to be included in the Wikipedia, and that event or series of events is inextricably tied up with the lives of a small number of people, then it seems sensible to include biographies of those people, if for no other reason than that the events of their lives would throw light on their actions. One should not let one's emotions get in the way of one's objectivity when writing for an encyclopaedia. I'm not directing that only at Anome - it's something that everyone needs to bear in mind when writing on topics they feel passionately about. -- Oliver Pereira 15:39 Nov 17, 2002 (UTC)
Hindley got a far from glowing obituary in The Guardian, so I guess a wikipedia article is also appropriate in that context. I'm not sure I like the bit about the campaign of revulsion against her being 'tabloid driven'. Read again the description of Leslie Ann Downey's murder and the tapes they made of her crying for her mummy to realise why ALL of the UK population, not just the Sun readers, revile this woman and her memory. quercus robur
Thanks whoever it was for making the change to 'massive'- I was having trouble refreshing the page so didn't see the alteration at first quercus robur
While I can see what you're saying, you should remember these are events which occurred 40 years ago; nearly half the population of Britain was not even alive at the time when the murders were committed and many more were too young to be aware. The point I am making by saying that much of the awareness was largely tabloid-driven (a hard fact) is that had it not been for a mainly gutter-press media campaign the significance of the Moors Murders would have been relegated to the footnote of social history which it should have been. You will also note that the manufacturers of thalidomide which killed and mutilated the lives of many, many more children than Hindley or Brady affected walked off with large pensions without a fraction of the calumnny heaped upon Hindley or Brady (and whilst the facts of the dangers of the drug were firmly in their purview). This is not relativism, merely placing them in some sort of sensible context. Yes, they were evil and unpleasant people; no, there are many worse people than them. user:sjc
Well thank you for your patronising remark sjc. I am well aware that the murders happened nearly 40 years ago, I live in England. This does not diminish the evil of what happened. Most of the population of the UK find the act of taping a little girl crying for her mummy while she is being raped and murdered utterly vile beyond belief, however long ago it happened, and whatever paper they read it in. We arnt all Sun Readers, and I find your condesension offensive. And drawing comparisons with the Thalidomide disaster is irelevant and dishonest. I find it very difficult to retain a NPOV over such a matter, and hope that I never become so cold and out of touch with my own humanity that I ever do. quercus robur
This is simply a pathetic argumentum ad hominem and is really beneath my dignity to reply to it. However, since it promulgates a considerably stupid myth, I will. The national media circus have made vast sums of money off the back of the Hindley/Brady story: fact. It sells/sold newspapers better than anything else. Now you may care to ask yourself why this might possibly be. An intelligent person would come to the conclusion that the caring British public are living vicariously on the back of it, and they would probably not be very far wrong. I hope I never end up on the same vacuous level as a Sun reader. user:sjc
The tabloids make money from the moors murderers, of course they do, they also use Hindley and Brady to divert attention from currently relevant issues... How often would Brady or Hindley appear on the front of one of the papers in order to generate some outrage whilst the government were sneaking through some bill or bad news Jo Moore/9:11 style on another page? they are slimey shit rags and I wouldn't wipe my arse with the Sun. That doesn't alter the fact that anybody who continues to find the acts of Hindley and Brady appalling even after 40 years is not automatically a brainwashed Sun Reader who is incapable of thinking for themselves. That is my point, sorry if you consider that a considerably stupid myth or mawkish behaviour. Just what, in your view, is an acceptable point at which the lives of their victims or the severity of their crime ceases to matter beyond being a 'historical footnote', or indeed that it becomes passe to continue to be moved by such events? quercus robur
PS. sjc- i take on board your comments that the tabloids have had a role in fueling public revulsion against H & B. my point however is that the revulsion is no less massive, real and justified for that. Hence I hope you will accept that my current revision is an acceptable compromise, acknowledging that the revulsion is indeed 'massive' and to some extent may be 'tabloid driven' as well. I think this is more NPOV than either of the original texts as they stood. quercus robur
It is an improvement, I can only concur. I would still like to question this allegedly massive repulsion which (speaking only from personal experience) is perhaps not as widespread as you suggest. It was of considerably less interest to Joe Public than the West Ham/Man Utd game or the putative gas attack on the Tube yesterday, judging by the conversations I heard as I was out for my lunchtime pint, I can assure you of that. The word "Hindley" didn't even make the event horizon in the office today. I can only conclude that the adjective apathetic would be more apposite. user:sjc
Maybe it's a generational thing. I certainly remember it from my childhood, and certainly amongst my mother's generation there is still massive genuine revulsion for H & B. However, can we agree to leave the page as it currently stands? quercus robur
It possibly is a generational thing as you suggest and your proposal is fine by me. I think the important thing that should not be side-stepped in this is the significant role played by the media. user:sjc
fair enough quercus robur
I think a redirect from Myra Hindley to Moors Murders is fine quercus robur
- Not if the article is a biographical one on Myra Hindley, which it was originally intended to be, and which it still is. It starts, "Myra Hindley (July 23, 1942 - November 15, 2002) was an English woman". If this article is rewritten as a general one about the murders, then the biographical information specific to Myra Hindley would be better off on a separate page. A biographical page. Entitled "Myra Hindley". -- Oliver Pereira 16:09 Nov 18, 2002 (UTC)
- Don't forget to write biographies of Pauline Read, John Kilbride, Keith Bennett, Lesley Ann Downey, and Edward Evans, then. Or are they less important than those noted historical figures, Hindley and Brady?
- I have no problem with that; they certainly had a tragic role to play in this. But please none of this mawkish and inarticulate bullshit being promulgated by the likes of quercus robur. If you are going to do it, do it properly, they deserve no less. user:sjc
This article was originally about Myra Hindley and it has been modified to be an article about the Moors murders with a redirect for Myra Hindley. This means that the recent death entry now points to this page. I think this change is in appropriate and confusing.
- You are quite correct. The people who are messing around with redirects etc should sort this out now. Clearly the Moors murders is not the same as an article on either Myra Hindley or Ian Brady as is World War II clearly not an article about Adolf Hitler, much as he was largely culpable in it. Exercise some common sense and sort it out people. user:sjc
- Agreed. Move stuff on Myra to Myra Hindley. I would go so far as to say she is more important than the Moors Murders -- most people know her name but not the name of the atrocities she committed. The 60s photograph of her is iconic and will likely remain so for a long time. -- Tarquin 16:56 Nov 18, 2002 (UTC)
Additions Re John Kilbride come from Hansard discussion in the House of Lords about Myra Hindley's application fro release.
Tariff?
This article repeatedly uses the word tariff in relation to prison sentences. This must be British usage, since it is not used in that context in the USA. Here it usually means a government-imposed fee. Is it the "minimum sentence?" If so, it would be good to say "the tariff (minumum sentence) was..." Thanks Edison 22:19, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
- That works for me. LeyteWolfer 22:58, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- I've wikilinked the first appearance of the word in the article to tariff (criminal law), which seems a better option. After all, there are a large number of US legal terms not used in the UK, and I doubt we're going to get bracketed explanations after every mention of those on Wikipedia. Besides, this way avoids unnecessary extra length in the article itself. 86.132.142.207 (talk) 15:05, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
Duplication
I removed the repeat of the opening paragraph, and photo, from under the 'Victims' section. I don't know why it was duplicated in the first place. 83.67.23.194 20:26, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
Dog hair?
It remains uncertain whether Evans was actually a homosexual or if Brady was merely trying to make a slur on the young man's character (homosexuality was still illegal in Britain at the time). However, the forensic examiner did find hair from Myra Hindley's dog on the inside of Evans' trousers, indicating that he had probably engaged in some kind of sexual activity before being killed.
Is there a source for this? The connection between the dog hair and "some kind of sexual activity" isn't exactly clear to me, unless the implication is that he actually had sex with the dog. 217.155.20.163 21:54, 1 November 2006 (UTC) I've read about that before. I thought that the hair of the dog was thought to be the proof that Evans was sexually abused. Dogs can be trained to do many things, even to rape people. It's not unheard of - it was apparently one of the methods of torture in Chile under Pinochet. Nightandday 23:48, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
Re Dog Hair
Just to suggest that the presence of dog hair actually inside someones trousers would be a sign that they had been removed, implying sexual activity. (Passer by 7/6/2008) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.64.214.242 (talk) 13:11, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
Didn't they record all of their victims?
I heard somewhere that all the victims' screams were recorded on tape instead of just the one. Is this true?
I've only ever heard of it being Lesley Ann Downey that was recorded, but I could be wrong - I wasn't around at the time. I was thinking, though, what do people think to the current rumour that Myra hindley did not in fact die but has been released under a new identity? The reasoning seems to be that she is still so hated here that no-one dare openly sanction her release. Plus she would be in an awful lot of danger if her release was actually made known.Janeybee 21:30, 15 March 2007 (UTC)
These murders are the most disturbing and unsettling killings I've ever read about. -Yancyfry
Best way to link to my thesis on Moors Murders and Myra Hindley
I submitted a Thesis for the degree of Master of Letters in a UK University in 1995 which I have since made suitable for publication as a book (making formatting changes and such) at lulu.com.
I keep adding it as a link to the Moors Murders article and it keeps being removed. One person objected on the grounds that it was vanity publi--Ariane5 (talk) 21:13, 23 February 2008 (UTC)shed, and claims it cannot be an academic thesis since it not published by an academic publisher. It doesn't matter whether it was published by an academic press.
I spent many many years researching the Moors Murders case and 3 actually working full-time on the thesis, so it is a reliable source of factual information about the case. I believe that it will be of interest to people reading the Moors Murders wiki and would like them to know that it exists. I see no reason why it cannot be included as an external link, with text explaining that it's a thesis, or under the heading of "further Reading". I couldn't even link to it if it were free, so the fact that it can cost money to buy a copy is irrelevant. It would cost you a lot more to make a copy of the original in the University library.
How can I add a link to my thesis to the wiki without it being removed, within seconds if certain people are online!--Ariane5 (talk) 15:35, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- I can't see how it would ever be acceptable, since it will always fall under self-promotion, especially since people would have to buy it if it's on lulu. Exploding Boy (talk) 16:43, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
I did point people to a free version of the thesis, and this too was removed. If someone else added a link to my thesis, it would not be self-promotion, but I know that also would be removed. It seemed to be the linking to the thesis that was causing the problem with the people who were removing the links, but then the so-called "advertising-like text" wasn't in the form of a link. Some people just appoint themselves as gatekeepers for their pet wikis and nothing, but nothing that they don't want to get on the page, will get on it. Thanks for your input. Hopefully the lack of a link but the mention that the thesis exists will be allowed to remain. I'm in the business neither of advertising nor promoting my work. I am merely trying to find an acceptable way to inform people that it's out there. They don't have to buy it.--Ariane5 (talk) 21:13, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
Okay, now I get it. I should not just provide a link to an external resource. Wiki articles themselves are not improved that way.--Ariane5 (talk) 21:53, 23 February 2008 (UTC)