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More post-modernist rubbish if you ask me. Jmm6f488 03:31, 4 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This article is post-modernist? It looks like an ordinary stubby article to me. If you're commenting on McIntosh or her work, this really isn't the forum. --lquilter 20:15, 18 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Article in The New Yorker

Very interesting article in The New Yorker, but as I hadn't heard of McIntosh before, I don't know wheter it's useful here: The Woman Who Coined the Term “White Privilege”

this article is terrible...

I am writing something the touches on McIntosh's work...

I got say this page blows...I am not trying to hurt anyone's feelings but just look at the article!!!! One example to prove my point

"This film is great because it allows individuals to view this film and focus on their own internalized racism issues.[17] Through the discussion of racism within the borders of the film "Mirrors of Privilege: Making Whiteness Visible", Peggy McIntosh has found a way for people of color to not be discriminated in a discussion pertaining to racism. This film provides a paving mechanism for the interracial relations and have relationships between the racial divide"

the film is 'great'???

The whole article suffers from this and there are further copy edit issues worth fixing, that alone would make this article a lot better...It's just not up to wiki standards...

anyway i am hoping someone will see this post and do redo on this article, factually and referencially it's pretty good someone just needs to re write it a little more 'antiseptic' shall we say

good luck

76.14.70.199 (talk) 04:31, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The use of "Band-Aids" instead of "bandage" shows how rife this article is with ignorance.

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			The use of "Band-Aids" instead of "bandage" shows how rife this article is with ignorance.