Talk:Odontogriphus
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Should we taxobox this puppy?--Mr Fink 18:31, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
- Why not? Done Verisimilus T 12:08, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
POV & other question
I am not an expert on this subject, but I have a couple quick questions & observation regarding this article:
- In the lead, the sentence: "One dissident, who has maintained since 1990..." seems POV pushing, or maybe an attack. Maybe this should read, a "small minority" or something to that effect. (Is Butterfield the only one to hold these positions . . .otherwise is their consensus that Butterfield was/is forcing his findings?)
- I wikilinked Wiwaxia in the lead – at its first appearance – mostly to help the neophyte reader (ok, me).
- In the Phylogeny section, I think the issue raised in #1 persists:
- First, I think this section deserves its own "lead." Just a couple sentences explaining Caron findings versus Butterfields to summarize for the reader – similiar to the summary in the lead lead
- The prose reads that Caron's group is "interpreting" findings, while Butterfield is "arguing" and terms like "in his opinion" are used.
- Even the clade chart's seem to suggest a POV issue, based on the Caron group having a cite, whereas Butterfields is "???" – I am reading this correct?
- Would I be correct to assume that following Caron et al 2007, that there has been no formal reply by Butterfield?
I won't tag the article as having a point of view issue, but I was tempted. Let me say scientist arguing like this is great, (eg. the quote: "Many of Butterfield’s misconceptions" is classic), but I'd like to ensure that it is as neutral as possible before I green tick the DYK hook. So if you could help allay a layman's apprehension, I'd appreciate it. Mitico (talk) 02:43, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- I agree that the article does not reflect Butterfield's views very favourably. The nature of science makes it difficult to assess the number of people who agree with Butterfield - papers aren't "put to the vote" etc - but he is certainly not alone in his discontent. Likewise, it is rare to have a sequence of replies continually debating fine points, so the lack of a "comeback" by Butterfield does not mean he's beaten; indeed I think he comments on the issue in passing in a 2008 paper (J of Paleo, "An early Cambrian Radula). I do agree with your points in general, though. Martin (Smith609 – Talk) 08:51, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- The shortage of Odontogriphus fossils (only 1 until about 2005!) limits the number of players, which tends to make it look like a personal battle. Caron et al set an unusually belligerent tone in their reply (2007) to Butterfield (2006) - you should see their intro para!
- Right now "One dissident ... " accurately reflects the sources found so far. Because of the limited number of players, there may not be other published "dissidents".
- Mitico, if you check out Halwaxiid you will see that the sources appear to divide into: Butterfield, who has argued (1990, 2006) that Wiwaxia, which now appears to be a fairly close relative of Odontogriphus (the one thing on which Butterfield and Caron etc. agree!), was a stem-group polychaete; Caron et al (2006), Scheltema et al (2003) and Eibye-Jacobsen (2004), who dispute this and argue that Wiwaxia was a stem-group mollusc; and Conway Morris, who argued (1985) that Wiwaxia was a stem-group mollusc but has since (1995, 2007) sat on the fence. However in the same article I report Porter (2008), whose argument for a close relationship between Halkieriids and Chancelloriidae might upset several cladistic apple-carts.
- Smith609, it would be great if you can provide citations for others who agree with Butterfield as that would mitigate the appearance of a personal battle. I looked through "An early Cambrian Radula" hoping for a bit more representation of Butterfield's views on Odontogriphus and Wiwaxia, but as far as I could see his 2008 article's main text concentrates strictly on description of "the Mahto fossil". -- Philcha (talk) 13:29, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- Wasn't there a bit in the discussion section at the end? Maybe I am remembering wrongly. And I don't think anyone's expressed an agreement with Butterfield in print - mainly because he's been thorough with his arguments and there's not much more to add to them. You don't get in press simply by writing "I agree with that chap" - you need data, which is difficult to come by! Martin (Smith609 – Talk) 13:53, 16 August 2008 (UTC)