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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Wdl24.146.23.84 (talk | contribs) at 01:54, 3 November 2008 (Created page with '[edit] copyediting I have just added the copyedit template to this page. I understand that Wdl24.146.23.84 is currently doing heavy editing of the page, and for now...'). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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[edit] copyediting I have just added the copyedit template to this page. I understand that Wdl24.146.23.84 is currently doing heavy editing of the page, and for now the quality and cohesiveness of some sections have suffered, in particular some paragraphs have turned into a lot of short disjoined sentences. I will have a go at improving this myself in the near future, of course anyone is welcome to beat me to it ;) StealthFox 23:54, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

i deleted a lot of stuff that was foggy and caried a lot of not true implications . i am sure most people are beter writers than me.but engineering and physics fact should be adhered to first.i am looking forward to improvements.anything is better than it was.look at diesel cycle as an example what it is trying to do.tops^2! i believe diesl eng shoud be kept basic with refs to use for people with more and deeper interest.i got email.what is your background? Wdl24.146.23.84 (talk) 01:50, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

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