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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Josve05a (talk | contribs) at 15:11, 14 April 2014 (did I make a mistake? Please tell me about it! – per WP:TPL using AWB (10077)). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

BBC Open Space documentary

I have referenced a BBC Open Space dcoumentary, which I remember seeing when it was broadcast, however other than the BFI link that I have added I cannot find further information about it. Other than Linzi Drew, Lindsay Honey and Isobel Koprowski, the only other contributor that I can remember was a vicar, Chad Varah? Does anyone else have more info, or better still a link (I can't find it on youtube and in any case it might fall foul of that site's policy).Silver Barnet (talk) 08:06, 31 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Bad editing and grammar

I want to point out some sloppy grammar, and unambiguous or unintelligible passages from the main article. Hopefully the respective authors can fix these?

  • In the first paragraph: "she and boyfriend Simon Honey (aka or Lindsay Honey)" - I think that should be, "aka Lindsay Honey".
  • In paragraph 4, "She and Dover subsequently split up." - Ok, so who's Dover? This sentence makes no sense, because whoever Dover is, it/he/she is not mentioned before this.
  • In paragraph 5, "Both Linzi Drew and Dover are mentioned in Irvine Welsh's novel" - Again, who is Dover? Why is the reader expected to somehow automatically know who/what Dover is? giggle 19:17, 8 May 2012 (UTC)