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The Extraordinary Adventures of the Athena Club #2

European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman

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In the sequel to the critically acclaimed The Strange Case of the Alchemist’s Daughter , Mary Jekyll and the rest of the daughters of literature’s mad scientists embark on a madcap adventure across Europe to rescue another monstrous girl and stop the Alchemical Society’s nefarious plans once and for all.

Mary Jekyll’s life has been peaceful since she helped Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson solve the Whitechapel Murders. Beatrice Rappaccini, Catherine Moreau, Justine Frankenstein, and Mary’s sister Diana Hyde have settled into the Jekyll household in London, and although they sometimes quarrel, the members of the Athena Club get along as well as any five young women with very different personalities. At least they can always rely on Mrs. Poole.

But when Mary receives a telegram that Lucinda Van Helsing has been kidnapped, the Athena Club must travel to the Austro-Hungarian Empire to rescue yet another young woman who has been subjected to horrific experimentation. Where is Lucinda, and what has Professor Van Helsing been doing to his daughter? Can Mary, Diana, Beatrice, and Justine reach her in time?

Racing against the clock to save Lucinda from certain doom, the Athena Club embarks on a madcap journey across Europe. From Paris to Vienna to Budapest, Mary and her friends must make new allies, face old enemies, and finally confront the fearsome, secretive Alchemical Society. It’s time for these monstrous gentlewomen to overcome the past and create their own destinies.

720 pages, Hardcover

First published July 10, 2018

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Theodora Goss

126 books2,105 followers
Theodora Goss was born in Hungary and spent her childhood in various European countries before her family moved to the United States, where she completed a PhD in English literature. She is the World Fantasy and Locus Award-winning author of the short story and poetry collections In the Forest of Forgetting (2006), Songs for Ophelia (2014), and Snow White Learns Witchcraft (2019), as well as novella The Thorn and the Blossom (2012), debut novel The Strange Case of the Alchemist’s Daughter (2017), and sequels European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman (2018) and The Sinister Mystery of the Mesmerizing Girl (2019). She has been a finalist for the Nebula, Crawford, Seiun, and Mythopoeic Awards, as well as on the Tiptree Award Honor List. Her work has been translated into thirteen languages. She teaches literature and writing at Boston University and in the Stonecoast MFA Program.

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1,672 reviews9,178 followers
June 18, 2021
To be blunt, this was a chore. Though the premise was intriguing–the female children of some of book-history’s most villainous men come together as a Society–the execution made it an exercise in perseverance.

But that core idea–so clever! Take the idea of female=uncontrolled=wild=nature=monster, band them together, give them a mission, and surround them with both real and literary figures. But there’s a constant interruption of meta elements, which proves tiresome. The story is ostensibly written by Catherine, one of the young women, as a means of earning money for the group. It is frequently interrupted with discussions among the characters about how they might be portrayed, or objections to what is being shared. Vaguely amusing at the start, it becomes significantly less so the fourth or fifth time it happens. By the time we reach the penultimate scenes, it’s annoying.

“DIANA: I wasn’t petulant! I’m never petulant. What does that mean, anyway? I think you made that word up. Are writers allowed to do that?

MARY: I am certainly perturbable! Catherine, you’re describing me as though I were some sort of female Sherlock Holmes, which I am not, thank you very much.

DIANA: That’s not such a bad comparison, actually. You’re as annoying as he is.'

Justine was sitting on the carpet. All our chairs, she said, made her feel as though she were folding up like an accordion. And Catherine, your author, was standing next to the fireplace, leaning on the mantle, looking particularly jaunty in a man's suit.”

Even more significantly, the pace is wildly uneven, veering back and forth between action and florid detail of who was thinking what, at what time. While the action merits some attention, there’s a level of detail that is truly unnecessary. For instance, take the appearance of a dog whistle:

“It is a common dog whistle,’ said Beatrice. ‘I borrowed it from the Count’s groom, who uses it to signal the wolfdogs. They were first invented by Sir Francis Galton to determine the range of hearing in human beings and animals. Human ears cannot hear it–as the rest of you saw, Mary was not affected at all. But those of a dog can–or a cat, or a vampire. A cat can hear sounds higher than a dog, and a vampire, I conjecture, can hear even higher. We can use it to distract and disable [redacted]. But those of you with particularly acute hearing will have to carry India-rubber earplugs to protect yourself from its sound.”

And this is why it’s a 700 page book: there’s two (plus) extra sentences for every paragraph. Yikes. Trying to pick my words carefully here, I’d say that this might appeal to the sort of reader that likes a lot of detail but minimum effort. But what about the clever allusions, the reviewer wonders? Doesn’t Goss introduces us to a historical figure that provides a bit of free psychological profiling of two of our heroines? Doesn’t that require inference? Oh, but the conclusions are spelled out shortly after, reader, when one of the other characters clarifies it. It’s like that all the way through, and I think that, in part, accounts for a lot of the feeling of disinterest.

What’s good? Goss is not incompetent with her words. The setting was well-realized. A fair amount of things happen, so despite the leisurely pace, it’s not precisely boring. I still love the concept, and the idea of these young women growing in their self-knowledge and owning their own power is a fabulous idea, especially as they band together to rescue other young women like themselves. I like the idea of ‘science’ playing a role. There’s a fair amount of diversity, and attention to class differences. If you can let go of the meta, it’s kind of fun to have guest appearances from famous historical figures brought into the story.

I’d say it’s boilerplate 1890s-ish supernatural with two things setting it apart. One, Girrrl-Power, which is done in an attractive way (although worth knowing that they need resources from other people, both male and female). Two, the idea that Dr. Moreau, Dr. Hyde, Van Helsing and many others are all members of an Alchemical Society that is dedicated to advancing knowledge and mankind through ‘scientific principles.’ ?

Still, there’s no excuse for 700 pages, unless Goss was trying to write Jonathan Strange for the young/new-adult set? Now that I think about it…

Two and a half monsters.
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447 reviews23.7k followers
November 3, 2020
actual rating : 4.5

list of ways to make an already perfect book series even better:
1. add vampires
2. see #1
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1,880 reviews23.1k followers
March 24, 2022
Review first posted on Fantasy Literature:

Theodora Goss’s THE EXTRAORDINARY ADVENTURES OF THE ATHENA CLUB Victorian-era fantasy series brings together a valiant group of women who are the results of men’s scientific experiments: men like Dr. Moreau, Dr. Frankenstein, Dr. Jekyll and others. In this series, the women characters ― several of whom perished in the original nineteenth-century stories ― not only survive but thrive. Calling themselves the Athena Club, Mary Jekyll, her sister Diana Hyde, Beatrice Rappaccini, Catherine Moreau, and Justine Frankenstein have banded together to protect each other and others from the men who lose their moral compass in the name of scientific exploration and experimentation.

In European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman, the worthy but long-winded sequel to The Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter, Mary receives a letter from Lucinda Van Helsing in Austria, begging for the Athena Club’s help: her professor father has been experimenting on her and she is changing in ways that terrify her. When Mary soon after receives a telegram telling her that Lucinda is missing, she, Diana and Justine head for Vienna on the Orient Express train to search for Lucinda, while Beatrice and Catherine (temporarily) stay behind in London to do some investigation there. The courageous women meet new friends and allies … but also some fearsome new enemies.

European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman is a fantasy not only set in the Victorian era but informed by the literature of the time, though with a distinctly modern, feminist take on the role of women. It has a great ensemble cast of characters, supplemented by some intriguing new ones (the addition of the Van Helsing family is a broad hint at the Victorian novel from which Goss is taking inspiration for this novel).

But European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman is extremely long (over 700 pages, and I sensed every one of them) and overly attentive to mundane details. I mean, it’s possible to be inspired a bit TOO much by Victorian novels. Jana (in her review) comments on the glacial pacing, and I completely agree. While I still enjoyed the diverse and unusual characters, their humorous banter and monstrous adventures, the length and pacing issues were too much of barrier for me to be fully engaged by this novel.

I received a free copy of this novel for review from the publisher. Thank you!!
Profile Image for Katie Colson.
740 reviews9,134 followers
April 3, 2021
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE IT

Irene Adler are you KIDDING ME?!
When Mary is jealous and asks Watson who she is and Watson says “the love of his life” I ‘bout wet myself.

Dracula?! Are you DOUBLE DOG KIDDING ME?!
I had no idea what the book would be about going in and I’m so happy I did that. The Dracula and Van Helsing surprises were fantastic.

I adore this audio so much. The accents are superb. I followed along with the book to tab and highlight. And I tabbed the ever loving shit out of it too.
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338 reviews227 followers
October 11, 2022
A lot of criticisms of this book is that it shouldn’t be seven hundred plus pages and I agree, it should be longer. Jokes aside, this is a really, really… REALLY long book. I’m surprised I finished it as fast as I did the first time. Though I think I actually liked it more this time. I mean, what other book manages to combine Jekyll & Hyde, Frankenstein, and Sherlock Holmes (and many others) all into both a cohesive narrative and a fun adventure!? That wasn’t rhetorical, if you know another book series like this, please tell me! And I’ll always love a re-interpretation of a “monstrous creature,” like in Shape of Water… or Shrek. The best part isn’t how the whole story becomes a messy monstrous amalgam like a Frankenstein(‘s monster), but the fact that that’s the point.

“You know, I think Irene was right-this really is the best costume. It hides firearms and makes men uncomfortable. A perfect combination.”
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Author 5 books4,541 followers
October 6, 2019
This is a very comfortable and comforting read, assuming:

A: You're a big fan of all the classic Victorian (or nearby) Horrors, SFs and Fantasies of the day.

B: You love it when minor female characters get catapulted into the limelight in frankly feminist adventures with cultured justice in mind.

C: You love roadtrip novels.


Me? I love roadtrip novels of all kinds. We even got an actual horseless carriage in this one! But mostly it was trains (Orient express!), back-country inns, and a full European vacation package.

The tangential tellings of these women's stories are delightful. And a lot less tragic. And they no longer resemble cardboard cut-outs of people! Yay!

For the literary part of me, I chortled at all the new or recurring character references. Now including a much wider cast of Dracula!


One thing I ought to mention: this is a very long novel, and while I really loved nursing a baby vampire back to sanity and enjoyed the final plot resolution a great deal, the real core of this novel is all about the JOURNEY. Like any kind of roadtrip novel. :) I took it easy and enjoyed all the sights, smells, and the spilling of blood.

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Author 18 books11.3k followers
September 28, 2023
How does the author make reading about what the characters pack or eat for lunch on a long train journey so enjoyable to read!?
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2,458 reviews176 followers
August 28, 2018
Well that took [looks at calendar] literally three weeks. And not even because I spent a lot of time actually reading the book because oh boy did my skimming skills get put to use here, but more because I just could not bring myself to keep picking it back up. I finally powered through the last 30% last night because I just couldn't stand it anymore. Anyway, I gave it two stars in the most 'A for effort' rating that I have ever doled out because while it was the most boring thing ever, it did not necessarily inspire the level of loathing that I save for those rare one star books.

Look, this is a really great idea to meld a lot of classic stories together and also give women a voice in them, but my god it just drones on and on and on and there was barely enough story in here for a book half this length. Honestly at this point Diana is almost the only character I can stand because at least she just DOES things instead of talking about each and every step she wants to take for ten pages. There was one point where Cat said she likes writing from Mary's POV because 'Justine is too philosophical and Diana is too chaotic and a narrative does need to move forward after all' and I just about LOST IT because moving the narrative forward is NOT this book's strong suit.

Speaking of the POVs, why why why does she not just write shorter chapters and alternate POVs as if each girl is writing their own section. The constant asides are absolutely infuriating at this point and do nothing to move the plot forward. Also they keep telling you to buy the first book [for only two shillings!] in the asides and like it was funny the first time and MAYBE the second time but by the literally NINTH time I was over it I wanted to scream.

There's a few good things in here still. Like I said, I do like most of Diana's scenes and she is definitely my favorite character. This book also introduced more adult characters from the actual source material like Mina Harker, Irene Norton, and Carmilla which was cool but ultimately not enough to make up for how frustrating everything else was. Also it looks like the next book is going to be more focused on the Sherlock Holmes mythology but unfortunately I just cannot continue this series. The first book was only okay but this was one just such a struggle.
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2,103 reviews455 followers
August 22, 2019
***2019 The Summer of Sherlock***

The second book of this series is every bit as delightful as the first one was. This is the continuing adventure of Mary Jekyll, Diana Hyde, Justine Frankenstein, Catherine Moreau, and Beatrice Rappaccini. The delight, for me, came with all the late Victorian references that the author throws into the salad. I’m starting to wonder which ones I overlooked out of sheer ignorance of the literature of the time period.

Needless to say, since She: A History of Adventure is one of my all time favourite books, I was thrilled when Ayesha, Leo Vincey, and Horace Holly made their appearances. Of course, the men need to be taken down a peg or two, as Goss is very determinedly puncturing the inflated egos of the men of the era.

Of course, the Athena Club (consisting of our main female characters) is bent on rescuing Lucinda Van Helsing, another young woman being experimented on my her hubristic scientist father. This firmly connects the Dracula novel to this story line, as was begun in the first volume. Also expect to see Le Fanu’s Carmilla and historic figures such as Sigmund Freud.

Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson appear at the beginning of this story, but are rapidly left behind when the action moves to the continent. I’ll put money on them being more involved in the third novel, which comes out this October. I for one will be looking for it and I’m considering adding more late Victorian literature to my reading docket so as to be better able to recognize the references that Ms. Goss throws into her fiction.
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411 reviews1,275 followers
February 6, 2023
I really enjoyed this, it was so nice to be back with the girls. I forgot how much I love Diana's chaotic energy, she's fantastic. Definitely excited for the final book.

I did find that this dragged a little bit though and I got a bit frustrated with how often Catherine mentioned that she is a puma. But otherwise, I loved it.
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1,322 reviews259 followers
October 20, 2019
The further adventures of the Athena Club continuing from The Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter (two shillings from reputable booksellers).

The members of the Athena Club travel to Eastern Europe to rescue Lucinda Van Helsing, a young dutch woman who's been experimented on and imprisoned by her father. On the way they encounter more opposition from the Société des Alchimistes as well as encountering a variety of other famous figures of the period, both real and imagined. Mary Jekyll, Diana Hyde and Justine Frankenstein are the first group to depart on the Orient Express to attempt a rescue and Catherine Moreau and Beatrice Rappaccini also have a role to play.

I'm forced to compare this to the recent Deep Roots by Ruthanna Emrys. It also is the second in a series about a found family that plays with historical fantastic literature, and in both cases the second book is much longer than the first. Also, both books are something of a talkfest, with most of the focus being on conversation and characterization. I think this book executes the concept much better than the Emrys one, mostly by including a fairly interesting and relatively fast-moving plot. The travelogue of Dracula's Europe is also a lot of fun, and the wonderful writing brings the settings of Budapest and other Eastern European locations to life brilliantly.

The stars, of course, are the "monstrous" women of the club, with the interactions of Diana and Mary being particularly great. The framing conceit of interjections from the "real" characters into the dramatized narrative written by Catherine continue to be brilliant, offering a lot of insight and humor across the board.

The series continues to be brilliant, and I'm very much looking forward to the next one based on the teaser that this book ends with.
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713 reviews907 followers
September 12, 2018
This book is 700 pages. It could have been 300. Way too long and excessively padded on the word count. Otherwise I loved the story just like I loved the first one. But seriously why wasn't this edited down?
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1,191 reviews324 followers
May 25, 2019
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“I stop listening when academics start mixing their Greek and Latin roots, that never leads anywhere productive.”

Theodora Goss you excel at finding, and creating, remarkable historic female characters. They are unique, usually harmonious, and a pleasure to spend time with.

Which is fortunate as it was a very long journey and short on action.

The leisurely pace is redeemed through the sheer novelty of bringing together Sherlock Holmes, Dracula, Frankenstein and making them secondary characters! Goss uses the world building/plots but keeps her focus on the women of The Athena Club.

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1,308 reviews221 followers
November 7, 2018
4.5*

Considering I read this book back in August but wasn’t able to write a review at the time, it speaks that I still have it clearly in my mind.

We’re back with the characters of the Athena Club, introduced in The Strange Case of the Alchemist’s Daughter, and what a bunch this is! This was one of the things I loved in that book, how Goss took female characters from famous Gothic and Victorian novels, and subverted the whole thing. Each is fascinating in her own right in this new ‘version’, but when you put them together, sparks fly - entertaining sparks :O) And this is what she does here once more, building on the relationships as well as adding to the mix to great effect, this time bringing to the scene Irene Adler (from Sherlock Holmes) and Carmilla (LeFanu’s Carmilla).

The story starts when it comes to the group’s attention that a Lucinda Van Helsing has been kidnapped, and off they go across Europe to the rescue, not without some adventures on the way! It is a long book but truthfully I didn’t notice, being so involved in our intrepid, intelligent, women and their tribulations, from the travel aspects, very well described, to the mysteries and mad rescue plans. Made me want to go off travelling, especially at the mention of all the appetising food (cakes, cakes, cakes!!).

The narration is still in the same style as the first book, with all the characters interrupting the flow to add their opinions. This admittedly will not be to everyone’s taste but to me it worked brilliantly, especially as an audiobook! And yes, Diana and Mary do kind of steal the show... Can’t wait for the next book :O)
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Author 144 books282 followers
July 17, 2018
European Travel for the Mostrous Gentlewoman was preposterous, contrived, way too long, shamefully propagandistic, and not the sort of book that respectable people should be caught anywhere near. And I loved it.

The book is not as tightly plotted as The Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter, but it has the same approach to its subject matter, which is to create an absolutely ridiculous story out of bits and pieces of Victorian novels (most of which take themselves way to seriously) and never fall into the same trap. One never gets the sense that the author is doing anything other than having fun. The basic moral of the story is something like "don't try to cook in God's kitchen"--which is the basic moral of pretty much all of the stories represented in the pastiche: Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, The Island of Dr. Moreau, "Rappaccini's Daughter," and Frankenstein. With a fair bit of Sherlock Holmes thrown in for good measure.

But the real moral of the story is that all of these ridiculous Victorian novels written by men used women as plot devices rather than actual characters and, in the process, deprived them of their story--which Ms. Goss is determined to tell her own way, which (I think) is a pretty good way. With the women in charge, the stories change--but every time the book is in danger of taking itself too seriously, Goss brings in the device of the characters sitting around and writing the book together in a narrative future. This is an important device because it keeps the focus of the book on having fun.

This volume brings in two new Victorian novels into the mix: Dracula, who is teased through the presence of Renfield and Seward in the first volume, but is fleshed out substantially in this one; and Ryder Haggard's wonderful novel She, about which I will say very little to avoid spoilers. The cast expands almost, but not quite, to the edge of the reader's ability to keep track of stuff. And there are plenty of loose ends to be tied up in the inevitable sequel.

I loved it. I stayed up all night reading it. But, as I am a respectable English professor, I did fairly hate myself in the morning.

550 reviews37 followers
May 11, 2020
So...this took me a LONG time to finish. I absolutely loved the first book in this series, and was eagerly awaiting the sequel. Unfortunately, this didn’t quite live up to my expectations. This could’ve been two hundred pages shorter and nothing would’ve been lost. There were SO many unnecessary details in this, from what the countryside looked like to every single the thing the girls were eating to the extremely detailed furnishings of houses. I don’t need any of that, and a lot of it was extremely repetitive. I get it. Catherine is a puma, they need to sell books, Mary lives in London. And I can’t tell you how little I care about green hills and the different assortment of pastries there were.

I was annoyed much more in this book with the girls’ interruptions, and didn’t find it funny or cute anymore when they kept saying I had to read the first book. Obviously I had to read the first book- why the hell else would I pick up a sequel before I read the previous one? Also...if you loved Mary in the first book, be prepared for her suddenly turning into a dumb ass. I’m not sure why she became such a naive idiot in this book, but she did, and I hated it. She was so brave and strong in the first one, I’m not sure why anyone thought she had to change. I only cared about the actual things that mattered, and when I was reading about those, I enjoyed the book. But there was a lot of lulls and pointless backstories that I just skimmed over.

I’m really disappointed in this and I wish so much had been taken out. This was a poor imitation of the first book and I felt like the only thing I read that was interesting was about Lucinda and Carmilla, and that’s because I took a vampire class in college and I loved how she incorporated the stories. Take this sequel with a grain of salt if you were enamored with the first.
August 21, 2019
You may remember I recently gushed over the first book in the Athena Club series, The Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter.

Today I'm bummed to report that while I enjoyed book two, it didn't hold my attention nearly as well as the first book!

The members of the Athena Club have fallen into somewhat of a routine in the three months since they met and helped Holmes and Watson solve the Whitechapel Murders.

When Mary receives a telegram that Lucinda Van Helsing has been kidnapped, the Athena Club hatch a plan to rescue another woman subjected to transmutation experiments at the hands of her father.

The plan unravels from the beginning when Diana stows away to join Mary and Justine's journey.  The three are able to locate Lucinda thanks to a new ally introduced by Sherlock Holmes, however, something is not right with the young woman.  She drinks blood and appears to be losing her mind.  What has Professor Van Helsing done to his daughter?

Meanwhile at 11 Park Terrace, Beatrice and Catherine receive an alarming telegram that Mary, Justine, and Diana have not arrived at their next destination and are feared kidnapped by Professor Van Helsing and his associates.

Soon all the members of the Athena Club are headed toward Budapest and the next official meeting of the Societe des Alchimistes where they hope to report Van Helsing's illegal activities and set forth new research protocols so that no experiments can occur without consent. 

Once Beatrice and Catherine finally catch up with Mary, Justine, and Diana, they're able to share information they discovered aboard the Orient Express concerning Van Helsing's plot to overthrow the current president of the society so he may continue his horrific experiments.

Oh, and did I mention we're also introduced to the infamous vampires Carmilla and Count Dracula, meet up with old enemies, and finally come face to face with the members of the secret society?  Not to mention that Mary's scullery maid Alice is kidnapped and both Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson are now missing.

I enjoyed this story and the new characters we're introduced to but this book certainly needed some editing.  It regularly strayed from the plot to give pages of unnecessary detail and the narrative interruptions I found charming and witty in book one became tedious in this second installment.  I'm glad I stuck with it because overall the story is a fun one, though I had to wade through lots of details that had nothing to do with it.  

If you enjoy sci-fi and classic retellings, this is a series worth checking out.

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563 reviews68 followers
July 13, 2019
I love this series. The second was even better than the first. The writing, plot, characters, setting were all done impeccably. I love how witty and clever the dialogue is and also just the structure of the story itself. I was captivated and engrossed all the way through. The fact that she is able to make classic characters in literature fresh and exciting is so impressive to me. I cannot wait for the third book to come out.
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Author 4 books10 followers
July 17, 2018
I LOVED the Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter, and I couldn't wait for the second book in the series to come out. So I was hugely disappointed to find that it didn't stand up to the excellence of the first book.
I still liked most of the main characters, but I had big problems with Mary and Cat. Why has Mary suddenly turned stupid??? She was smart and brave in the first book, but in this book she has suddenly become completely dense. The number of times she 'had no idea what was going on' when it was obvious to everyone else in the room what was about to happen. For example, having spent 4 days with Lucinda feeding her blood, why on earth did she stand there wondering over and over again what Hyde was about to do when he said 'We're going to feed Lucinda, here is a girl who has volunteered and here is a sharp knife'. Obviously Agnes is going to give Lucinda blood. Why on earth does Mary have to wonder for four paragraphs what is about to happen, and not realise until Hyde cuts Agnes' arm? And when Adam shows up again, Mary recognises the voice, sees Justine's reaction, but 'has no idea what is going on'. The author makes a point of saying that Mary works with Holmes and she was so clever and took so much initiative in the first book, but all of that has vanished in this book. She has become the thickest of bricks and it's hugely disappointing. There are few things more irritating than a main character who hasn't got a clue what's going on when the reader has figured it out pages ago.
One of the things that is more irritating? The constant ads for the first book and mentions that Cat is a puma. Seriously, I think the word 'puma' was in this book at least eleventy-seven times. We get it. She's a puma. And enough with the ads. It was funny the first couple of times - the 10th time it was incredibly irritating.
My other main gripe with this book was that it rehashed so many emotions, characters and scenarios from the first book. Did no one actually die in that fire at the end of book 1? There was some point in Prendick escaping, since we hadn't properly had the showdown between him and Cat, and the situation felt unresolved. But we had the big scene between Adam and Justine. We had Mary realising that Hyde was her father and meeting him again. Time to move on to something new. But instead, we are just getting the same villains and the same emotions all over again. Except this time we are getting them with Mary being an idiot who has lost all her initiative. It's a poorer rehash of the first book and it feels like either the author wasn't happy with the first book, or else had no new ideas for the second book.
Very disappointing for a series that had so much promise.
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771 reviews17 followers
October 8, 2018
European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman... ... ... I don't even know what to say about you. Except maybe, why were you so monstrously long?? 300 pages could have been removed and still achieved the same effect. For all the enjoyment I had while reading this tome, I should have given it a 1 Star rating. But I save 1 Stars for books that make me mad on all levels of reading. I wasn't mad... just bored.

Things I liked:
1. Diana. She actually got things done instead of talking them to death.

Things I didn't like:

1. Length and Plot.
This book was 706 pages long. Most of this was meandering descriptions (mostly about food and clothes) and the constant interruption of character commentary (which added nothing). And normally I wouldn't mind reading a long book... BUT NOTHING HAPPENED!! All of the descriptions and the numerous character additions squashed out the plot. Not to mention the repetition. Why was everything stated over and over and over again. Catherine is a puma. Beatrice is poisonous. Diana is a wild child. We get it! Then, after reading all of those pages, it even had the nerve to end on a cliffhanger. Why couldn't we focus on the many climaxes that happened in this book (which fizzled and amounted to nothing), instead of worrying about the next book? Also, the adverts to buy The Strange Case of the Alchemists Daughter weren't funny the first time, let alone the other NINE times.
2. Mary.
Mary as the main, main character was a terrible choice. I mean, she wasn't amazing in the first book, but at least she sort of had relevance to what was going on. In this one, Mary did nothing and contributed nothing. Plus, all of a sudden, she's dumb as a rock. Then Goss tries to justify her being a monster in a monster club, but all it did was highlight how exceptionally ordinary and uninteresting she is.
3. No growth or development because of too many characters.
As I said in my last review, there are too many characters in this series. But Goss took the already-too-large cast from the first book and shoved even MORE characters into it. It didn't leave room for anyone to do anything. Lucinda was a plot device. Beatrice and Mary could've been cut out entirely. I never developed a connection to any of the characters.
4. The plot repeats itself three times.
The girls travel, get into trouble, and are rescued by a woman who happens to have a household of eclectic servants who just happen to have skills needed to help the girls on the next stage of their journey.

Do not recommend.
Will not be continuing with the series. I'm out.
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4,304 reviews233 followers
September 29, 2018
The Mary and Diana Show hits the road as the monstrous gentlewomen head off to save another of their newly discovered and imperilled "sisters", Lucinda Van Helsing. This time, the Athena Club is split as they head up separate but linked investigations into activities of the Societé des Alchimistes. It was interesting watching the two groups function with members that would not automatically have gravitated together (Mary and Justine (and of course Diana), and Catherine and Beatrice.) The interpersonal dynamics are a little different, but there's still humour and plenty of support, despite the bickering. We get to learn more about their individual characters (though, admittedly, Diana is pretty easily understood and apparently annoys everyone.) I like the introduction of more female fictional characters (Irene Adler and Carmilla,) which makes this series such a hoot.

Theodora Goss ends the book with a new situation for the Athena Club to handle; I am so glad there are more adventures coming for these bright women.
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621 reviews130 followers
January 5, 2023
3.75

I enjoyed this instalment in the series a lot, but it definitely has its flaws. I think I perhaps idealise these novels in my head to an extent they can't live it up to it properly in reality. I just wish they would push the concept a little further, be little 'weirder', if that makes sense. This book in particular also suffers from being too long. There are a lot of long, long conversations dumping backstory, which, while interesting to read the first time, gets tiresome quite quickly. I also felt it took an unnecessarily long time to get going, with convoluted barriers to starting the plot. That being said, I really like the concept of this series, and the characters are interesting - I love their little comments on the text; I just wish there was more of a balance of perspectives between them because my favourite characters are Justine and Beatrice, and yet it sometimes feels like we hear from them the least (besides perhaps Diana), whereas the main perspectives, Mary and Catherine, I tend to find less interesting/sometimes a little grating. But I really enjoyed the fun plot line and the new characters introduced and I look forward to completing this series.
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3,345 reviews156 followers
August 30, 2020
The one reason it took me this long to start this book, after enjoying the first book in this series a lot, was the fact that it's quite a big book. Nothing against big books, but it's quite hard to read them within one day, which I prefer. But, thanks to the reading challenge I'm doing I was finally sort of forced to pick it up. And where I feared I'd need quite some time to read this, I eventually finished it within 48 hours.

This story is just so amusing and entertaining! Especially if you've read some classics (in this case especially Dracula) and can fit some pieces before the characters can. In a really original way Goss connects a lot of classics and history. And it's quite surprising how well they work together and how well the different storylines fit into one bigger story line without having to change the source material too much.

In this book we get to see and learn quite a lot about that bigger storyline. And although a part of it is sorted and solved, there's more than enough left for the next book in the series. In a brilliant way this book turns characters into scientists, if they're not already, and turns heroes into villains and the other way round. The way the conflict between ethics and science is portrayed is so interesting, although our judgement is quite clouded.

Because the true stars of this series are the heroes of this story. The daughters of those famous scientists, among them Mary Jekyll and Diana Hyde, are amazingly well written. Each of them is very unique in their own way and although they keep on seeing themselves as monsters and failed experiments, it's hard to not like them, to not root for them and to not see them as special and unique as they are.

Nice side note: The writing really fits the time period, without becoming hard to read, and the characters, in between the story, commenting on their own actions, descriptions and thought processes, makes it a perfect read to introduce high school readers to the classics! If they can get past the fact that it's quite a big book, that is.
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586 reviews202 followers
July 27, 2021
At the end of the world, they encountered monsters

I'm utterly speechless. What a sequel! European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman is the adventurous, wild sequel to The Strange Case of the Alchemist's Daughter. Goss takes us to Vienna and to Budapest with the Athena Club as they split up to search and rescue Lucinda Van Helsing. I don't think I could've asked for a better sequel if I'm being honest. Again, Goss introduces us to some of the most infamous characters of Gothic literature: Carmilla and Laura, Dracula, Mina Murray and Van Helsing. It was so thrilling to see these famous characters interact with the Athena Club - I definitely screamed when Carmilla and Laura were introduced! Goss' writing is superb and I never doubted it, and the commentary from the Athena Club, Mrs Poole and Alice never fails to make me laugh. The one word to describe this book is vampires. The way vampirism was discussed scientifically in this book was so intriguing, and the way it was portrayed was familiar yet felt unique to the story. Count Dracula was a romantic boi and I loved it. All I could imagine was Gary Oldman from Coppola's 1992 Dracula with the moustache and top hat. I absolutely adored this book, and even though it took me longer than I thought it would, I enjoyed every second of it. The cliffhanger has me very excited to get to The Sinister Mystery of the Mesmerizing Girl next month.
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395 reviews244 followers
March 21, 2023
4.5⭐

The sheer amount of joy this series brings me is unparalleled.

I already adored this found family, but I just love them more and more as time goes on. I want to be part of the Athena Club!!!

Although there was significantly less Sherlock in this one, I definitely think it was made up for with the introduction of Irene Adler, sapphic vampires and Count Dracula. This book also touched on so many interesting topics - like how nothing is ever just black and white, and how easily religion can be corrupted and used to control people.

As always, I loved the feminist commentary, the humor, and each and every one of my precious monstrous girls!!!
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490 reviews60 followers
September 28, 2018
This one was a lot of fun and it was great to be back with the gang again. This is one big mystery intertwined with several other mysteries and it includes a couple of very good action scenes and a whole lot of adventure. And quite a lot of kidnapping. I hope I’m not spoiling anything by noting this one involves vampires. If you know the name ‘Van Helsing’ then you should have already been aware of the possibility. That being said, the reason I’m mentioning it is because I have a certain weakness for stories involving vampires. As soon as I saw what was on the horizon, I was boarding the train for this adventure. Gimmie those sweet, sweet vamps–choo choo!

The story moved pretty fast despite it being such a long novel. Having the group split up and focusing on the different stories helped a lot with the pacing, especially when much of it was action and adventure oriented. You would think that when being introduced to new characters and learning their stories (and this happened quite a few times), this process would slow the pace down as it did sometimes in the first book, but the backstories were pretty engaging this time around and I found myself actually being interested in how these characters came to be where they are at present. I also think it helped that these new characters, while intriguing, were not expected to become part of the gang. The Athena Club, while new, is still established–everyone else are sort of outsiders, even if they are friends. They’ll never really have the same bond as the women of the club.

There were a few issues I had with it, but nothing major. First off, it is a very long book. It’s fast paced because of all the stuff going on in it, but I do feel like it still would felt better as a slightly shorter novel. There were so many descriptions of things, which were great, but I think some of these could have been trimmed down. I admit to having skim read through some of that so it didn’t bother me as much as it could have. I do also think some of the reveals were a little convenient. I am all for tying things together, but it was a tad excessive here, especially near the end. Still, the story is very aware of itself, even in this, and remarks are made to lamp-shade this by one of the characters. The thing is, I don’t know if lamp-shading always works. Just because you point out something you did and even mock it a bit, doesn’t make it automatically work within the story as a whole. It still has to make sense. I just felt like certain things being made to fit together didn’t feel organic to me. Even so, this didn’t take away much from the story in the grand scheme of things and is more of a nit-pick of mine than anything.

One of the things I look for most in books is the character arc, or in this case arcs. I like to see growth. And over the course of this book we do see some of that, but it’s very gradual. For the most part our characters are set in who they are, and their traits are constantly remarked upon by the others. ‘Oh, but you’re the dependable one’ or ‘You’re the slightly unhinged one’ etc. Like I said, I don’t think the character growth isn’t there, I just think it’s a very slow thing. And most of it is done through watching how the characters interact with others, both outside of their group and within it. Mary is very conscious of her own personality traits and even has some doubts as to whether her behavior has even been ‘normal’. It’s good now and then to see her lose a little restraint, but it would be great to see her lose a lot more. I hope we get to see that in the third book. Still, all of the characters here played to their strengths and their weaknesses, which was something I enjoyed a lot. Showing them both at their best and their most vulnerable really does help to show that gradual growth along the way.

Overall, this was a really fun read. If you liked the first one, you’ll probably like this follow up as well. There’s a LOT going on in this book–plot-wise there are a ton of different plot points intersecting, you have a bunch of new characters introduced on top of an already large cast we need to keep up with, and then the whole style in which its written with the 4th wall being broken constantly. And yet, somehow it all manages to work. I enjoyed this a lot, and am really looking forward to the third book.  4/5 stars.
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