1. I like Lanyons' prose and characters, and I'm actually pretty impressed by the worldbuilding in this series. Sure it's not a hard magic system but there's a lot about underground societies and family drama (I LIVE for family drama) and it's all pretty funny and fairly consistent and I'm quite fond of the characters. Cosmos' mom is my favorite. Cosmo would be my favorite if it wasn't for his inexplicable fondness for his asshole of a husband but more on that later.
2. The mystery was also pretty good. Lots of personal grievances and betrayals and entitled assholes. I do love a good entitled asshole takedown it's so satisfying. I'm less sure one what to feel about the whole demonic magic (?) plot hook, but my problems with Lanyon don't have anything to do with her worldbuilding so I'm cautiously optimistic.
3. My problem is the romance. Theres a running gag where people in Cosmo's life tell him repeatedly to divorce John. It's not funny, mostly because all of these characters have a point I absolutely agree with. John is a toxic, unreliable asshole. I put up with his crap for two books. Hell, I even gave him the benefit of the doubt because Cosmo wasn't exactly forthcoming early on in the series but Cosmo's learned to adjust and compromise. John claims very loudly and very often that he's compromising his principles for Cosmo without ever doing anything of the sort.
4. Cosmo. Honeybun. Sugarpie. I don't know how to tell you this, but "I will avoid having anything to do with my life before you came into it because it makes you uncomfortable" and "I will generously ignore the fact that your existence creeps me out so long as you pretend that a significant part of your life is not a thing" are not equivalent compromises. Forget a divorce. I'm rooting for your family and friends to murder the asshole and hide the body, only you'd get upset and that would make them upset. Are you sure you're not under a love spell?
5. You know the thing? Where a very attractive, competent, nice young lady is somehow completely enamored with a beefy handsome alpha male to the point of compromising her life choices for his sake and he eternally takes that as his due and gets upset when she does something he doesn't approve of? It's that, but gay. I cannot say it's any more palatable because it's been queered.
6. It doesn't even have to be this way! I think a John pov would likely help a LOT with smoothing out the relationship inequalities. This is why romance novels have dual perspectives. And Lanyon is a competent writer with a ton of very sweet and compelling platonic relationships under he belt so she could absolutely use this to make the story better. I wish I could say I think this would still happen, but so far I've only seen lampshades and no actual explanations.
1. I like Lanyons' prose and characters, and I'm actually pretty impressed by the worldbuilding in this series. Sure it's not a hard magic system but there's a lot about underground societies and family drama (I LIVE for family drama) and it's all pretty funny and fairly consistent and I'm quite fond of the characters. Cosmos' mom is my favorite. Cosmo would be my favorite if it wasn't for his inexplicable fondness for his asshole of a husband but more on that later.
2. The mystery was also pretty good. Lots of personal grievances and betrayals and entitled assholes. I do love a good entitled asshole takedown it's so satisfying. I'm less sure one what to feel about the whole demonic magic (?) plot hook, but my problems with Lanyon don't have anything to do with her worldbuilding so I'm cautiously optimistic.
3. My problem is the romance. Theres a running gag where people in Cosmo's life tell him repeatedly to divorce John. It's not funny, mostly because all of these characters have a point I absolutely agree with. John is a toxic, unreliable asshole. I put up with his crap for two books. Hell, I even gave him the benefit of the doubt because Cosmo wasn't exactly forthcoming early on in the series but Cosmo's learned to adjust and compromise. John claims very loudly and very often that he's compromising his principles for Cosmo without ever doing anything of the sort.
4. Cosmo. Honeybun. Sugarpie. I don't know how to tell you this, but "I will avoid having anything to do with my life before you came into it because it makes you uncomfortable" and "I will generously ignore the fact that your existence creeps me out so long as you pretend that a significant part of your life is not a thing" are not equivalent compromises. Forget a divorce. I'm rooting for your family and friends to murder the asshole and hide the body, only you'd get upset and that would make them upset. Are you sure you're not under a love spell?
5. You know the thing? Where a very attractive, competent, nice young lady is somehow completely enamored with a beefy handsome alpha male to the point of compromising her life choices for his sake and he eternally takes that as his due and gets upset when she does something he doesn't approve of? It's that, but gay. I cannot say it's any more palatable because it's been queered.
6. It doesn't even have to be this way! I think a John pov would likely help a LOT with smoothing out the relationship inequalities. This is why romance novels have dual perspectives. And Lanyon is a competent writer with a ton of very sweet and compelling platonic relationships under he belt so she could absolutely use this to make the story better. I wish I could say I think this would still happen, but so far I've only seen lampshades and no actual explanations....more
Plot: There really isn't much of one. It's a series of scenes of people interacting.
Prose/Ease of flow: The descriptions are concise. The dialogue isPlot: There really isn't much of one. It's a series of scenes of people interacting.
Prose/Ease of flow: The descriptions are concise. The dialogue is snappy. Most importantly the feelings are well thought out and make rational sense rather than going in an endless loop of unwarranted bullshittery.
Worldbuilding/Setting: This is very different from what Regency Era England was probably like, but there is no inconsistency in the manufactured microcosm.
Individual Characters: I love everyone. There is exactly one named character who gets speaking lines onscreen who's possibly not explicitly queer, and that's only because she's like six.
Relationships & Interactions: The absolute best? Everything is about the different forms of love and how people can be happy in all sorts of unconventional relationships. It features exes who are friends working through trauma, one plot moppet, two gratuitous canines, gleefully made-up historical arguments and copious amounts of traumatic backstory.
There is also an ace character and a gay character who decide they really like each other and decide to get married and never go to bed together and make plans to raid an orphanage at the earliest opportunity? I love them so much? I would have liked the whole book to be about them actually because Amelia and Syd were perfectly fine but Lex and Georgiana are my favorites.
Merged review:
Plot: There really isn't much of one. It's a series of scenes of people interacting.
Prose/Ease of flow: The descriptions are concise. The dialogue is snappy. Most importantly the feelings are well thought out and make rational sense rather than going in an endless loop of unwarranted bullshittery.
Worldbuilding/Setting: This is very different from what Regency Era England was probably like, but there is no inconsistency in the manufactured microcosm.
Individual Characters: I love everyone. There is exactly one named character who gets speaking lines onscreen who's possibly not explicitly queer, and that's only because she's like six.
Relationships & Interactions: The absolute best? Everything is about the different forms of love and how people can be happy in all sorts of unconventional relationships. It features exes who are friends working through trauma, one plot moppet, two gratuitous canines, gleefully made-up historical arguments and copious amounts of traumatic backstory.
There is also an ace character and a gay character who decide they really like each other and decide to get married and never go to bed together and make plans to raid an orphanage at the earliest opportunity? I love them so much? I would have liked the whole book to be about them actually because Amelia and Syd were perfectly fine but Lex and Georgiana are my favorites....more
1. Protagonist who can communicate with ghosts gets recruited by vampire to look into a mysterious death/disappearance. In the proc04 Mar 2022 DNF @30%
1. Protagonist who can communicate with ghosts gets recruited by vampire to look into a mysterious death/disappearance. In the process, she presumably (I mean, it's strongly hinted but I stopped reading at 30%) stirs up (a) supernatural things left alone, (b) her own Mysterious Past & Powers (TM), and (c) an increasing number of hot supernatural guys all invested in protecting her. For some reason.
2. Look, I swear it's not that I object to harem narratives in principle. I've read enough harem manhwa to make that claim reliably. But within the first few chapters (30%!) we are introduced to four potential love interests and absolutely none of them are more than a stereotype. My softest spot was for the Vampire (I am a sucker for the suckers pun fully intended) but there's only so much suave annoyances can do for me before they too get old.
3. The protagonist is somehow even worse. Ava is this baffling combination of "I WILL look into this incredibly dangerous thing" and "I have no interest in knowing anything at all that will allow me to survive this incredibly dangerous thing" that is just... ugh. I can tell why there's a whole ass rotating shift of protectors hovering around her- she clearly needs them.
4. Just- sigh. I was hoping for more. But it's pretty clear I'm better off picking up another book.
Merged review:
04 Mar 2022 DNF @30%
1. Protagonist who can communicate with ghosts gets recruited by vampire to look into a mysterious death/disappearance. In the process, she presumably (I mean, it's strongly hinted but I stopped reading at 30%) stirs up (a) supernatural things left alone, (b) her own Mysterious Past & Powers (TM), and (c) an increasing number of hot supernatural guys all invested in protecting her. For some reason.
2. Look, I swear it's not that I object to harem narratives in principle. I've read enough harem manhwa to make that claim reliably. But within the first few chapters (30%!) we are introduced to four potential love interests and absolutely none of them are more than a stereotype. My softest spot was for the Vampire (I am a sucker for the suckers pun fully intended) but there's only so much suave annoyances can do for me before they too get old.
3. The protagonist is somehow even worse. Ava is this baffling combination of "I WILL look into this incredibly dangerous thing" and "I have no interest in knowing anything at all that will allow me to survive this incredibly dangerous thing" that is just... ugh. I can tell why there's a whole ass rotating shift of protectors hovering around her- she clearly needs them.
4. Just- sigh. I was hoping for more. But it's pretty clear I'm better off picking up another book....more
1. Read sometime in 2021; I was deep in a manhwa hole and not keeping track of stuff.
2. An emperor gets a mistress. The empress, a woman un10 Jan 2022
1. Read sometime in 2021; I was deep in a manhwa hole and not keeping track of stuff.
2. An emperor gets a mistress. The empress, a woman unused to taking shit from anyone, is not pleased (to say the least). There's a lot of drama where the Empress is cold and the Emperor dotes on his mistress. The Empress meets another country's prince and starts to fall for him. When she finds out that the Emperor plans to divorce her, she agrees to marry the Prince. The Emperor, to put it mildly, is unhappy with this. Politics happen. There are many werebirds.
3. The relationship between Navier (Empress) and Heinly (Prince) is pretty cute. They get along well, they can talk to each other, and they are always respectful of each other. I'm sure I wouldn't have liked the story I was reading as much if Navier didn't have someone to turn to in her time of distress. Navier is also one of those hyper-competent cold and collected ladies who know exactly what they want and not gonna lie that really does it for me. Heinly is mostly pretty sweet at this point, with a few sharp edges (none of which he actually shows to Navier). But they go well together. Even if I'm not sure why all the werebird stuff is even here. Seems kinda random, except as a meet cute setup.
4. This is a manhwa with a lot of plot elements, so uh- antagonists tend to be kinda complex. But complex in the most frustrating way possible, where they start off as rounded characters and then gradually lose their competence.
There's the foreign envoy who falls in love with Navier and then grabs hold of the idiot ball and never lets go. Even thinking about his actions makes my head throb because... why. From what angle do they make sense?
There's Rashta (the mistress) who actually has an interesting backstory and is in many ways one of the most sympathetic characters in the story, but who loses more and more of what little brain she has as the story goes on. Also, I'm getting really uncomfortable with how people treat the revelation that she was a slave. I mean yes- different times, settings, and values but really? Kinda tone deaf there, author. To say the least.
Then there's Krista, whose introduction and conflict (popular queen dowager in a kingdom whose king has now married an enemy-ish queen!) was great, but did we really have to have her (view spoiler)[be in love with Heinly? (hide spoiler)] I thought that cheapened her character a lot and made a compelling and understandable motivation and grievance into something a lot more tawdry.
5. But whatever. I don't actually read the stories for any of the protagonists or the minor antagonists. No, my favorite character in this hot mess of a romantic relationship is Soveishu. The scumbag ex-husband Emperor, and by far the most fascinating person in this whole story.
Soveishu is the one antagonist who reverses the 3D to 1D rule. He starts off as a scummy asshole (and to be fair, always remains a scummy asshole, bless his heart), but he's a scummy asshole with depth. He's infuriatingly entitled, well aware of his flaws, in some form of self-destructive love with Navier, and an actual competent person outside of his ridiculous love life. He's also a pragmatic asshole, (view spoiler)[immediately playing Rashta like a puppet the moment she actively tries to manipulate him. (hide spoiler)]
Just... this fascinating mess of entitlement and guilt and competence and self-destruction. It is fascinating. I need to see more of this trainwreck of a man. Fuck, I need to see more of this trope.
6. Anyway, I came in here mostly to babble about how Soveishu is excellent (as a character, not a person) and how I would like more characters like him so if anyone has any suggestions hit me up. (I have no problems if the character is a scumbag; he just needs to be a scumbag in a trainwreck of his own making. Female versions would be good too, but I get they feeling they may be an even rarer trope.)...more
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