Fearless Confessions: A Writer's Guide to Memoir
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Everyone has a story to tell. Fearless Confessions is a guidebook for people who want to take possession of their lives by putting their experiences down on paper—or in a Web site or e-book. Enhanced with illustrative examples from many different writers as well as writing exercises, this guide helps writers navigate a range of issues from craft to ethics to marketing and will be useful to both beginners and more accomplished writers.
The rise of interest in memoir recognizes the power of the genre to move and affect not just individual readers but society at large. Sue William Silverman covers traditional writing topics such as metaphor, theme, plot, and voice and also includes chapters on trusting memory and cultivating the courage to tell one's truth in the face of forces—from family members to the media—who would prefer that people with inconvenient pasts and views remain silent.
Silverman, an award-winning memoirist, draws upon her own personal and professional experience to provide an essential resource for transforming life into words that matter. Fearless Confessions is an atlas that contains maps to the remarkable places in each person's life that have yet to be explored.
Sue William Silverman
SUE WILLIAM SILVERMAN is a faculty advisor at the Vermont College of Fine Arts and the associate editor of the journal Fourth Genre: Explorations in Nonfiction. Her first book, Because I Remember Terror, Father, I Remember You (Georgia), received the AWP Award in Creative Nonfiction. She is also the author of Love Sick: One Woman's Journey through Sexual Addiction (made into a Lifetime TV movie) and Hieroglyphics in Neon, a collection of poems.
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Reviews for Fearless Confessions
8 ratings2 reviews
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5I hesitated to review this book at first because I see that it gets a lot of 5 star ratings, but I think I am not the only one who thought it was "just okay". As another reviewer said, Sue wants us to take our experiences and get creative with them to write memoir. I'm not sure that's what I am looking for.
Sue William Silverman is a survivor and good for her to conquer her problems and heal. I'm just not sure that her style fits my style. While I am contemplating writing my own memoir I think I will look to other sources for advice on how to do that. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Good explanations of most concepts. Useful exercises. Her samples aren't so great. Interesting chapter on "confessional" memoir.
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Fearless Confessions - Sue William Silverman
Fearless Confessions
ALSO BY SUE WILLIAM SILVERMAN
Because I Remember Terror, Father, I Remember You
Winner of the Association of Writers and Writing
Programs Award for Creative Nonfiction
Love Sick: One Woman’s Journey through Sexual Addiction
Hieroglyphics in Neon (poems)
Fearless Confessions
Sue William Silverman
Published by The University of Georgia Press
Athens, Georgia 30602
www.ugapress.org
© 2009 by Sue William Silverman
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Printed in the United States of America
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Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data
Silverman, Sue William.
Fearless confessions : a writer’s guide to memoir / Sue William Silverman.
p. cm.
Includes bibliographical references.
ISBN-13: 978-0-8203-3166-9 (pbk. : alk. paper)
ISBN-10: 0-8203-3166-x (pbk. : alk. paper)
1. Autobiography—Authorship. I. Title.
CT25.S53 2009
808’.06692 —dc22 2008050248
British Library Cataloging-in-Publication Data available
Selected portions of chapter 9, "Confessional and (Finally)
Proud of It," appeared, in another form, in the Writer’s Chronicle,
Special Commemorative Issue, 2002, published by the
Association of Writers and Writing Programs.
ISBN for this digital edition: 978-0-8203-3606-0
for Marc,
with love
with gratitude and thanks to
the Vermont College of Fine Arts,
a haven for writers
In fact, I sometimes think only
autobiography is literature.
VIRGINIA WOOLF
Life must be understood backwards.
[Although] … it must be lived forwards.
SØREN KIERKEGAARD
Contents
Preface
ONE
The Longest Paragraph
Writing Exercises
TWO
Savory Words: The First Bite of Your Story
Don’t Just State Your Story — Reveal Your Story
Move Readers with Active Words
Following a Sensory Trail
Writing Exercises
A Note on Genre
For Your Reading Pleasure:
Candy Cigarettes,
by Anne Panning
THREE
Writing on Key: A Few Notes about Theme
False Starts
Starting True
The Colors We Choose
Writing Exercises
For Your Reading Pleasure:
Rob Me Again,
by Katherine Jamieson
FOUR
Plotting Your Life
Finding the Arc of Your Story
Motivating Your Plot
Thunderous Plots
The Structure of Plot
Crossing the Finish Line
Turning Real Life into Art
Writing Exercises
For Your Reading Pleasure:
Scavengers,
by Katy Read
FIVE
Between Innocence and Experience: Finding Your Voice(s)
Using Multiple Voices
Your Everyday Voice and Your Literary Voice
Guiding Voices
Writing Exercises
For Your Reading Pleasure:
The Visit,
by Candance L. Greene
SIX
Mock Moons and Metaphor: Crafting Memoir into Art
Finding Your Metaphors
The Metaphoric Memoir
Metaphor: A Window onto the World
Writing Exercise
For Your Reading Pleasure:
Tetanus, You Understand?
by Ellen Morris Prewitt
SEVEN
Writing in Style
Your Story, Your Style
The Muscular Sentence
More Than Just And
Not To Be
Dialogue in Memoir
Past or Present Tense?
These Boots Are Made for Writing
Writing Exercise
For Your Reading Pleasure:
The Man behind the Shower Curtain,
by Julie Mullany
EIGHT
Marketing Your Memoir
Getting Started
Publishing Outlets: Pros and Cons of Each
How to Decide What’s Best for Your Book
Promoting Yourself as a Professional Speaker
Web Opportunities for Your Memoir
The Importance of All Our Voices
Writing Exercises
NINE
Confessional and (Finally) Proud of It
Western Civilization in an Eggshell
One Secret, One Word, at a Time
Word by Word
The Courage to Show This to Your Mother (Penance Optional)
Truth and Memory in Memoir
What Readers Understand about Memoirs
What the Media Doesn’t Understand about Confessional Stories
A Hysterical [sic] History of Criticism
Writing Exercises
APPENDIX ONE
The Meandering River: An Overview of the Subgenres of Creative Nonfiction
Port of Call 1: Biography
Port of Call 2: Autobiography
Port of Call 3: Immersion
Port of Call 4: Memoir
Port of Call 5: Personal Essay
Port of Call 6: Meditative Essay
Port of Call 7: Lyric Essay
Toward the Sea
Waters Ebb and Flow
APPENDIX TWO
Three Confessional Essays,
From Process to Product: Using Print-on-Demand to Publish,
by Lynn C. Tolson
Gazing: Writing from the Womb,
by Karen Salyer McElmurray
The Weight of a Word,
by Michelle Otero
APPENDIX THREE
For Your Reading Pleasure: Four Full-Length Essays
Independence Day, Manley Hot Springs, Alaska,
by Lisa D. Chavez
After the Dash,
by Michael Hemery
The Beautiful City of Tirzah,
by Harrison Candelaria Fletcher
The Pat Boone Fan Club,
by Sue William Silverman
APPENDIX FOUR
Reading List of Contemporary Creative Nonfiction
Works Cited
Biographical Notes
Preface
In Fearless Confessions, I invite you to accompany me as I look back at what I learned on my path toward becoming a writer, hoping to assist you with your own journey. When I first began to write, I struggled through numerous false starts and made many mistakes before gradually understanding how to plot and focus a memoir, find an authentic voice, shape imagery into metaphor — all the elements needed to craft raw experience into a fully formed story. Fearless Confessions also contains exercises and examples to help you cultivate the courage to send your own words out into the world.
Why the title Fearless Confessions? Critics frequently belittle the entire genre of memoir, especially books by women, by labeling memoir confessional.
I initially conceived of this book as a way to redeem the notion of confessing
for silenced women. Additionally, I’ve come to realize that the lives of a whole host of us — rebels, dreamers, anyone considered other,
regardless of gender — have been marginalized. Many critics don’t yet understand that when we confess
we seek the commonality of our experiences, thus adding to the full range of what it means to be intensely human. Fearlessly writing memoir allows us to understand our own life narratives, as well as to learn from those others.
The more artfully we write, the more difficult it is to ignore or dismiss our stories. Fearless Confessions is intended to help ensure that our voices are heard.
Fearless Confessions
Chapter One
The Longest Paragraph
You should write your own story," Randy, my therapist, says to me.
I’ve been in therapy about a year. I slouch on the blue couch in Randy’s Atlanta office, lean my head back, and stare at the ceiling, nervous to meet his gaze. I put my feet, in red leather Reeboks, on his coffee table. This table, this couch, his office — they’re all designed to comfort his clients.
But I don’t feel comfortable. I want to say to him: Write about myself? You’re the one who must be crazy! Why would I want to write about myself? I want to say to him: I don’t have anything to say about myself. Nothing. I don’t have any earthly idea how to write about myself … I mean, even if I wanted to!
I want to say: No, no, no!
Well?
he says, waiting.
I glance at him, at his blue eyes — blue — the peaceful color of the couch, of the walls of his office. But as he raises his eyebrows, inquiring, I look away again.
The plant in the corner by the window seems dry, brittle. I want to tell him to water it. Maybe we can spend the session discussing horticulture. I lean forward and retie my left sneaker, even though the knot is perfect. I want to do anything but respond to what surely must be, if not a crazy idea, then clearly an impossible one.
I don’t have anything to say about myself,
I answer.
You sound angry,
he says. Why don’t you want to write about yourself?
He knows I’ve been trying to write novels for years. So what he really means is: Why don’t I stop writing fiction and write a true story?
A true story.
On this day in his office, I’m sure that the official word, memoir, isn’t in my mind. How could it be? Back then, in the early 1990s, I hardly even knew the title of one.
I want to say: None of my writing teachers ever suggested I write about myself. So why would you? I want to say: Who’d even want to read a story about me?
A story about me.
He means: Why don’t I write a story about a woman whose father, when she was growing up, sexually molested her? He means: Why don’t I commit to paper secrets I’ve hidden for years, secrets about both my childhood and my current disarray—that I’m in therapy for sexual addiction and anorexia?
Which means, in my mind, that I’d be writing a story about a woman whose life is embarrassing, humiliating, shameful.
Why would I want to do that?
It’s true that last week I did write about myself — but only as a therapeutic exercise, and only for Randy to read. I wrote a short, unmailed letter to my father about growing up as his daughter, living in houses that felt like prisons.
That letter I wrote is now in Randy’s hand.
That’s all I have to say about myself.
I nod toward the letter.
I know you think that,
he says. But I don’t think that’s true.
Periodically, over the next few years, Randy continues to say, Write about yourself.
I always respond, I have nothing to say about myself. Nothing at all.
Now, today, for the first time, he includes a new word, the word safe, in his statement. He says that maybe now I’ll feel safe enough to write about myself because just last week both my parents died: my mother from lung cancer, my father from a stroke. I am relieved they are dead. I am sad they are dead. I am angry they are dead, angry because they died without once, even on their deathbeds, acknowledging the incest. They never apologized. Nothing. I also feel stunned to realize that, within six days, I have suddenly become an orphan.
Yet I’ve always felt like an orphan, anyway, haven’t I?
Randy would probably say that if I wrote my story, I’d find out why I always felt like an orphan; I’d also better understand the relief, the sadness, the anger.
I stare at an Ansel Adams photograph hanging on the wall across from me. I see it. I don’t see it. Images, snapshots of my childhood seem, for a moment, more real, as if I’m watching a slideshow or leafing through pages of a photograph album.
No one would want to see these photographs—photos of me and my father — would they?
I’ve told Randy facts and feelings about my childhood. I’ve cried. I’ve raged. I’ve also sat in his office silent. Speechless.
But I’ve never described these snapshots in my head, these images. I’ve never talked about sensory details, what it sounded like, looked like, to be me, growing up. Maybe it is a narrative comprised of this imagery that must be written.
A book to help me understand my childhood … and a book, Randy frequently says, to help other women as well.
But a book sounds too daunting. Maybe something shorter. An essay?
Finally, after years of Randy’s urging, I whisper, "Okay, maybe I’ll write a paragraph about myself. But that’s all I have to say."
A short paragraph, I want to add, but don’t. A very short paragraph. Three sentences. Four at the most. A paragraph just to humor Randy. A short paragraph so he’ll stop bugging me. A very short paragraph so he’ll see that he’s wrong. So he’ll understand, once and for all, I have nothing to say.
But even if I did, hypothetically, have something to say about myself, who’d want to read it? Maybe there aren’t any other women like me. No one would be interested in my messy life — that story.
No one, except Randy and my husband, even knows my secret.
On that particular day, driving home to Rome, Georgia, from Atlanta, about an hour and a half away, I try to reassure myself: I’ve written hundreds and hundreds of pages of fiction. Surely I can coerce one small paragraph of nonfiction from myself just to show Randy I tried.
When I arrive home, I change into professional
clothes to prepare for the evening class I teach at a community college. I wash my face. Apply makeup. All traces of the wrinkled cotton sweatpants and scuffed red Reeboks are removed. I fix my hair so none of my students will suspect that I’m in therapy, will suspect that, at times, I’m a physical and emotional wreck. Any visible residue of a chaotic childhood is rinsed away. I don a skirt, starched shirt, and blazer. To enter a classroom with thirty students, I must appear to be in perfect control, adult.
I sit at my desk while the students bend over their blue books, composing their final in-class essays before summer vacation. Outside the windows of this cinderblock structure, dusk shadows magnolias. A sheen of chartreuse pollen from loblolly pines dusts the windows. Even though it’s a beautiful evening, I prefer to be in here. I love being with my students — even knowing most of them would rather be outside.
Ironically, here, they are the ones who believe they have nothing to say, nothing to write. Most of them hate English class, hate to write. Nevertheless, week after week, I encourage them to place sentences on pieces of paper. You can do it!
I simplify the indecipherable rules in the Harbrace College Handbook into easy-to-follow instructions for them. This is a comma splice. This is a run-on sentence.
Before they can pass English Composition 101, they must successfully complete an essay exam required by the Georgia Board of Regents. All semester I prepare them for it. I want them to do well. I glow when I’m able to convince even one student to not hate English.
I glow brighter when I’m able to convince even one student about the power of language. I felt breathless when Marci changed her major from dental hygiene to English, after an offhand comment I made one day when asked by a student why I liked to teach English.
I guess because I love words,
I replied.
After class, Marci, a timid young woman, waited for the rest of the students to leave the room. Alone, she finally approached me. Quietly, she said, I didn’t know you could love words. I love words, too, but I’ve never told anyone before.
She feared her friends and family would make fun of her. Here in rural north Georgia, she told me, education, reading, writing, weren’t valued. This was her secret.
Oh, yes,
I say. It’s fine to love words. And you’re a good writer. If you’d like to write extra essays, I’d love to read them.
She turned in an extra essay about a place in the woods where she hid, where she read books, where no one would find her. No one had ever discovered her secret.
On that evening back then, I did not fully comprehend that what I wished for Marci was, in many ways, what Randy wished for me.
Now in the classroom, as my students write, I finish grading their essays from last week, and I read — oh, dear — many abstract thoughts, many wayward sentences. I read, I loved my grandmother because she was kind and loving.
And I write in the margin that I want to know how she was kind and loving. Give concrete examples,
I write. "What details and images show her kindness? Be specific."
Many of these students are the first in their families to attend an institution of higher learning. Most are either older women or single mothers training to be nurses, dental assistants, something practical. They take this class because it’s required. But toward the end of the semester, even as some continue to write about their favorite pet or loving grandmother, others, tentatively, go deeper. One student explores how uncomfortable she feels when entering a store because, as an African American, she believes white shopkeepers watch her, certain she’ll shoplift. Another student describes a fishing expedition with her grandfather, urging the material into a more meaningful nature essay than I expected from such a familiar topic. Others write about abusive husbands or boyfriends. Alcoholic fathers. Secret abortions. In tiny letters at the bottom of their essays they write: Please don’t let anyone see this.
Of course I don’t.
In the margins of their papers, I praise their courage. And I wonder whether some students trust me with their words because — even as I try to hide all traces of my own past — they sense I haven’t always been this in control, this professional. Maybe this is why some share their tentative words, their secrets, with me.
After the semester ends, I’m alone in my house, my husband at work. Next to my computer is a stack of over three hundred pages of my most recent unfinished novel, a novel about child abuse (sort of). But the protagonist isn’t quite me; the story isn’t quite mine. I riffle the paper. All these chapters, all these pages, all these paragraphs, all these sentences, all these words … why do they not say what I want?
I must be stupid.
In fact, my own high school as well as my undergraduate educational background is extremely shoddy — another secret. Which must prove I’m stupid. A failure. I will never be a writer.
I am procrastinating.
I think about Marci, all my students this past semester brave enough to place secret words on pieces of paper, courageous enough to show them to me.
The cursor on my computer blinks.
I type the word Preface.
I write a long paragraph about my father’s career, his numerous professional accomplishments. Before I realize it, I’m at the bottom of the page. I’ve already finished the one paragraph that I promised Randy!
Except I haven’t yet said anything about me. A memoir should probably be about me, right? So hurriedly, almost before I realize what I’m writing, my fingers type: My father is also a child molester. I know, because he sexually molested me.
Yes, this is the truth. This is what happened. I had a father. He had a successful career. But behind closed doors, when no one watched, when no one saw, he sexually molested me.
This is what happened to me.
Straight facts. Unadorned truth. I’m not a fictional character such as those in the novels I write.
I was born on Southern Avenue in Washington, D.C., in a white, two-story duplex across from a cemetery, and in that house …
I am writing the story of living in that house, writing about a little girl named Sue.
A girl who is me.
I am on page ten or so before I realize: I don’t know how to write a memoir.
Up until then, I only wrote and read short stories and novels.
I print out the ten pages and read what I’ve written. Fact by fact, I’ve set down what it was like living in that white house on Southern Avenue. I’ve just completed a scene in which my father is teaching my mother to drive a car for the first time. There I am, a little girl, with my father, mother, and sister in our black Chevy, driving down quiet roads in northern Virginia.
But the inside of the car is not quiet — my angry father is yelling at my scared mother: Turn the wheel left, shift into third gear, give the accelerator more gas.
And because of my father’s rage and my mother’s temerity, we slide onto the shoulder, roll down a short incline, and end up in someone’s front yard. The woman in the house rushes to our car, helps us out, helps me, gently checking for broken bones.
I wrote this scene. I set the facts down on paper. I reread it. And I think to myself: so what? We had a car accident, but who cares? Loads of families have accidents, many much worse than ours. No one, after all, is hurt. Why would anyone care?
There must be more to the story, more to the scene, than this. There must be a reason why I even recall it so vividly.
Then, as if I’m following a whisper—a whisper because I must listen closely, carefully—I write what I now know to be true. I write what I now, years later, understand to be the significance of this scene. Which isn’t only the car accident — that’s just a straight fact. More significant is this unknown woman who touches me with a hand that’s soft and caring. The strange woman gently touches me to determine if I’ve broken any bones.
Why is it important?
I hear this whisper as I write: Her touch is meaningful because it is so different from my father’s touch. This woman is a stranger, yet she touches me more gently, more carefully, than my own father.
I rewrite the scene, crafting all the details to show what I now know to be true about this episode in my own personal history.
Did I know this at the time of the car crash? No, not at all. I was a little girl. I could never have understood this then. It is only now that I, the adult writer, understand.
So a memoir, I realize, is only partially about writing recollected facts of what happened. The other part requires a more authorial observation and understanding of events. This part is written through the viewpoint — and with the insight — of the author sitting at her or his desk trying to figure out what it all means. Crafting this scene, I come to realize that writing memory, writing what we remember, is a creative act. We interpret facts about the past in order to reclaim them, make sense of them.
With this realization the words, the sentences, the paragraphs, the pages, the chapters fall out of me. What I was sure would be one paragraph — the story of me and my father in one short, short paragraph — evolved into three hundred pages.
Three hundred pages in three months.
I write as if with a brain fever. I barely stop. I hate when I must pause to eat, to sleep, to shop for groceries. All I want is to return to my room, close the door, and write, write about me and my family from the time I was born in Washington, D.C., until the time I first stumble into Randy’s office exhausted, needy, defeated. I write to explore, to decipher who I am, who I was in that family of mine, seeking clues in words and images. I write as if following a path through a forest — a narrow path — but one that goes deep into the discovery of me, of what living with that family of mine meant.
At the end of summer, before the fall semester begins, I present those three hundred pages to Randy. He beams.
WRITING EXERCISES
For some of us, it can be scary to confront our deepest, most intimate secrets — even alone in the privacy of our writing rooms, and even if no one reads what we write. But let’s get started, knowing you can proceed at your own pace, as slowly or as quickly as you like.
1. Write a short paragraph about a secret you’ve never told anyone, except maybe a therapist.
2. Is there a memory that has always haunted you? Write it down. Try to discover why it has such power.
3. Write a letter (not to be mailed) to someone you love or hate, fear or enjoy—but to whom you never told your feelings. Explain the moment that person first made you feel this way.
Chapter Two
Savory Words
The First Bite of Your Story
I begin writing my first novel while living in Texas, several years before moving to Georgia—before therapy with Randy. One afternoon, I simply set up a card table in my apartment in a restored Victorian iron-front building