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A romantic cabin getaway doesn’t go exactly as planned. High up on the windswept cliffs of Pale Peak, Faye and Felix celebrate their new engagement. But soon, a chorus of ghastly noises erupts from the nearby the screams of animals, the cries of children, and the mad babble of a hundred mournful voices. A dark figure looms near the windows in the dead of night, whispering to Faye. As the weather turns deadly, Felix discovers that his terrified fiancée isn’t just mumbling in her sleep – she’s whispering back.Originally a contest-winning story on reddit.com’s horror community NoSleep, Stolen Tongues has received widespread acclaim and has been optioned for film.

320 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2017

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Profile Image for Gabby.
1,534 reviews28.7k followers
October 13, 2021
I freaking LOVED this! One of the scariest horror novels I’ve ever read — I legit slept with the lights on. This has MAJOR something is watching you from the woods vibes, and you can make out a shape but you can’t exactly see it. It’s terrifying. I was so impressed by it, it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time and I was so genuinely creeped out.

Reading vlog where I read it: https://youtu.be/ZuJK4T4tkRQ
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1,139 reviews4,216 followers
September 6, 2021
Of the 20+ reading-related Facebook groups I’m in, the “Books of Horror” community is by far the most active, harmonious, and supportive. One by one, members started reading and raving about Stolen Tongues, Felix Blackwell’s self-published, crowd-funded horror novel that originated as a super popular series of stories titled “My Romantic Cabin Getaway” on the NoSleep subreddit. It’s a viral sensation that’s gone viral again.

It’s also better familiarized me with the term “creepypasta,” which my trusty pal Wiki defines as: “Horror-related legends that have been copied and pasted around the Internet. These Internet entries are often brief, user-generated, paranormal stories intended to scare readers.”

And yes, Stolen Tongues did scare this particular reader. Based on Blackwell’s fiancee’s sleep disorder, the story follows the couple as they visit a snowy cabin in the woods where creepy voices and happenings plague them at night. The prologue itself is near perfection, and I read it twice. I also had a hard time reading the book before bed, because it’s that unsettling. Not in a splatter/gory way, but just spine-tingling.

There’s no escaping the fact that Stolen Tongues is self published though, and the absence of an editor’s polish is noticeable. In many ways it reads like a first draft, but there is a whole lot of promise here.

Finally, for my indie author friends (or aspiring ones), I thought it would be helpful to share parts of a post Felix made in the Books of Horror FB group last month (August 2021):

“Today my novel Stolen Tongues hit 500 ratings/reviews on Amazon. Before it was discovered by Books of Horror, it sat at around 170. This is a huge deal for me, considering that less than 10% of people who buy a book leave a review for it (or so I've read)…

…Authors don't do this very often, but I want to give you some transparency into how your support has directly affected my life as an indie author. About 11 months ago I bought a new bed for me and Faye, and it turns out I bought the worst piece of crap ever because it imploded and became a hammock about a month ago. If you've ever slept in a terrible bed, you know how much it can affect your work ethic, your mood, and your body. We started crunching numbers and trying to decide if we could afford a new one. Books of Horror bought us that new bed, and this time I did the research and got the RIGHT one…

…Your support has also secured several months of the SHOCKINGLY expensive medication I take for a chronic nerve disorder. That feeling of security is invaluable to me, and combined with the new bed, I'm actually able to sleep at night and have the hideous dreams that inspire all my writing…

…I want to share some of the feedback I've gotten on Stolen Tongues, and how I grapple with it. People have said that the book is:

-too long
-too short
-super scary
-not scary at all / boring
-too many info dumps / over-explaining
-classy
-tasteless

and:

-not enough is explained
-the end sucks
-the middle sucks
-not gory enough
-the characters are overwritten
-the characters are underdeveloped

etc.

This cross-section of opinions has really revealed to me that as a writer, you'll never be able to please everyone, so you must write with the goal of telling the story that YOU want to tell.”

For those wanting to hear more from Felix (and see him), he also made this video to thank the group: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBwpK...

Stolen Tongues is available as an ebook (included in the Kindle Unlimited program - no audiobook option) and in paperback.

Blog: https://www.confettibookshelf.com/
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93 reviews8 followers
January 25, 2024
the prologue got me thinking this could be 5 stars... but how are you going to be so self aware about exploiting native people in fiction that you... exploit native people in your fiction? the author explicitly said he didn't like how native people were used for their information, history, and folklore to bring depth to white stories yet... here's an author doing just that. blackwell uses a native american 'boogyman' to create atmosphere and tension, only using native people in the story as educators and spiritual guides to the extent that the only deaths in the novel are 2/3 of the native people mentioned. the two white main characters are saved by literally just speaking the truth about what the female protagonist forgot as a kid and then the bad guy goes away... meanwhile the two native people, a father and son (who only exist to help the MCs and have decades of experience on this 'haunted mountain'), are the only people to die to the creature... nahhhh
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Profile Image for Tim.
477 reviews787 followers
April 30, 2022
A romantic weekend in a cabin on Pale Peak sounds like a wonderful opportunity for Felix and Faye to celebrate their engagement. Unfortunately things do not go as planned. Something in the snow is watching them, listening to their very dreams and takes a great interest in the pair… something that wants to know everything there is to know about them.

This book has been coming highly recommended from multiple sources and frankly, I was all about it. It started off a "Creepy Pasta" on the No Sleep Reddit board, and I do have a love for those internet horror stories. Whenever one becomes a full fledged novel, I feel a little bit of joy (the Patient and Pen Pal for example)… and I must say, I understand why this one gets some love.

This has, without a doubt, one of the most chilling openings I've ever read. I'm a pretty seasoned horror reader, but I had goosebumps and was looking at the pages just going "oh shit." Had it just been that as a short story I would have called it an all time great.

It was not a short a story though, and as things stand it is still an enjoyable novel, but sadly not the masterpiece of terror that it started with.

The biggest problem with this book is that it feels so repetitive. We keep going through the same motions. Fall asleep, weird things in the night, tall figure running away… keep repeating with some variation on the same thing. As a reader, after a while, what was frightening became overdone and a touch boring. I was more than halfway through the book at the beginning of the month, but set it down and read several other books because I was tired of the repetition and needed something else for a bit. It really hurt the story for me, and honestly I think the book would have been better had it been cut down to more of a novella length.

Complaints aside, it's a fairly enjoyable read, and given the overwhelmingly high ratings among my friends, this likely doesn't bother many readers as much as it did me. I absolutely suggest horror fans give it a shot, and I do hope it works well for you. As for me, it's an enjoyable read, but I wished it would have hit me more consistently. 3/5 stars
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149 reviews17 followers
December 2, 2021
I’m going to start by saying it baffles me to see people label this “ The Scariest book I ever read!” It wasn’t scary at all. There is barely any build up, tension, dread, anxiety or anything really to these scares. The scares are popped into certain parts of the story and over in literal seconds. Almost the equivalent to a tacky jump-scare in an Indie horror film. I guess I can see this book scaring my child or someone who is easily frightened.

It’s extremely repetitive and I contemplated not finishing it. I read a review on here that mentioned how disappointed they were with the ending so I continued to see if I felt the same way and I have to agree. I don’t understand how “the hollow one” completely backed off the second she said “Enough” We’re talking a creature that literally stalked and haunted this girl to the point of obsession and demented love and it ends that abruptly?? It is definitely rushed. As an author, you should leave readers with answers. Thorough explanations or at least some type of foreshadowing or hint at what could be the reason for things. It’s lazy writing at best.

Character development is almost non-existent. Even the setting isn’t fleshed out or descriptive enough to paint a picture in the reader’s mind.

The word “suddenly” was used so often that it’s burned into my mind. Adverbs are not your friend when writing a novel.

Also, I don’t understand how the prologue reeled people in for being absolutely “terrifying.” It’s odd to me how the prologue was focused on the parrot but the parrot is only mentioned one or two other times in the story.

The meaning behind the number “5” is predictable and honestly a let down. I wanted something mind blowing but instead I was left with confusion. Why is it important to “the hollow one?” I feel like a lot of elements of the story are never explained. Why was the wedding ring so significant? What about the dream catchers?” Side note: dream catchers are meant to protect against nightmares, so I’m unsure how the spin on them in this story even makes sense. What about the basement and whatever broke out of there?

The afterword blew my mind. Blackwell goes on to talk about the exploitation of Native American culture, stories, characters etc, only to do the very thing he spoke against. Two major Native American characters are killed off when they should be the ones with knowledge to defeat this “spirit”/“creature” considering its native to their land. Yikes.

I may get jumped here by all the “fans” for this negative review but if I purchase something, I have the right to review it so I don’t really care about the hate I’ll get for my review. If it should be titled anything it should be “Stolen Time”
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740 reviews9,134 followers
November 27, 2021
This hit the ground running and didn't stop. Problem is, after a while the adrenaline wears down and you realize you've been running for 3 hours but can't remember why or where you're going.

The beginning is a banger for sure. I was hooked. But the rest didn't live up to that potential. I wasn't submerged in this skin walker/monster storyline. It had the backbone of a Goosebumps book. Just no legs to hold it up. All action and no attachment.

It became very repetitive. Quick gruesome scene after quick gruesome scene. Just flashes of gore. But we didn't stop long enough to see the characters losing their sh*t. Which they should have been doing. Like this book is horror for sure.

I don't understand why the author has the same name as the main character. I'm sure he explains it somewhere but I haven't found it. If the book is supposed to come across like it's a true story told by the author, it is not told through the text in any way.

I don't know. This is fast paced and fun in certain ways but you're gonna find it hard to make it to the end.
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Author 5 books1,250 followers
July 14, 2024
This was a rather pleasant, shudder-inducing story. I wouldn’t say anything was necessarily scary, but it had a lot of creepiness to it. The suspense it built up before each big reveal or occurrence was written masterfully, and for a 300 pager, kept my interest longer than most others would have. For some reason, books on certain topics, ie ghosts, exorcisms, and hauntings, just don’t peak my inner horror fanatic. That’s not to say that I won’t read those types of books, but it takes a lot of convincing for me to do. I tend to navigate grisly real world horror, or something with at least one creature running around. The reason that I’m drilling this into the ground is much a compliment to the author here, especially as I read this over two days. Fans of the aforementioned horror subgenres will absolutely adore this story. I do feel that it dragged on at several points, but not too much to hurt the story or characters, which it balanced well. All in all this was enjoyable, and I can definitely see why it is being developed into a movie.
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194 reviews46 followers
March 13, 2024
This book was everything I wanted it to be. The atmosphere was incredible and was easily the best part of this book. That added a creepy feel to everything that happened, make me feel unease when I was reading it in all the best ways.

The characters were likable and flawed. The author also did a great job, given good representation of the indigenous community.

The only thing I didn’t wake up about this book and this really isn’t a complaint. is that some of the scenes and in the throughout but a bit rushed. On one hand, I would’ve loved to have moments and weld on a little longer, and experience them to their fullest, rather than just a quick summary of moving onto the next thing. On the other hand, it’s great to leave the reader want more. Under the edge of my seat, and never board about what’s going on.

A lot of times, I say a book could’ve been shorter, and it would’ve been better for it. This is when the few times where I think a book could’ve been longer, it would’ve been better.
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188 reviews179 followers
September 16, 2021
In all my years of reading horror, this was the first and only book that has actually scared me and made me want to sleep with the light on. Everything from the atmosphere to the imagery made this book a horror masterpiece. PLEASE go read this book.
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488 reviews271 followers
April 10, 2022
Took ages to read this, I know. But in actuality I read it in two sittings because I was away visiting Scotland for the first time in two years and it was amazing to see family and explore some nature.

This is such an eerie, tense atmospheric read and is written in a detailed way.

The fear of the unknown has a continuous rhythm in this one and the author does not waste time with unnecessary descriptions and details.

Highly recommend to horror fans.
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1,881 reviews6,112 followers
September 12, 2024
This is a tough book to rate and review because my feelings on Stolen Tongues are a bit scattered at the moment, so bear with me, folks.

If I rated Stolen Tongues solely on the horror element, it would be a 5-star read. There are descriptions in this book that gave me chills, had me looking over my shoulder at night, and made me nervous to peek out the window (especially because my windows all face the woods!). Felix knows how to tap into the primal elements of what freaks us out, and I'm impressed by how well he kept it up — despite a few slow moments, for the most part, I was unsettled from start to finish.

That said, I can't rate an entire novel solely on the creep factor. Most of the characters in this book felt flat and uninspired, as well as frequently self-contradictory. There are a great number of plot threads that are left loose in the end, and I was left with more questions than answers.

The most frustrating element of Stolen Tongues, however, was the Native American representation. I'd read social media posts where the author discussed his desires to provide positive, nuanced characters and to avoid making the mistakes that we see so often, so I went into this with a (mostly) open mind. That said, I can't help but feel like Felix ultimately made the exact same mistakes he preached against: the Native American representation lacked depth, felt halfway stereotypical, and — spoiler alert, click the spoiler tags at your own risk —

Representation: three side characters are Native American (see review for notes on this)

Content warnings for: possession, being stalked by an entity; spoiler-y warnings:

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469 reviews471 followers
February 9, 2023
What makes 5?

Felix Blackwell (who also happens to be the author of this book) and his fiancé Faye celebrate their engagement at Faye’s family cabin on Pale Peak. A storm soon ensues, leaving them stranded. They begin to hear strange noises coming from the surrounding woods and a dark figure watches them from the window. When Faye begins to have nightmares, sleepwalks, and whispers to the creature outside, they abruptly leave the cabin. However, after returning home, It is obvious that something is wrong with Faye. What actually happened to Faye in the cabin? Can she be cured?

This creepy, atmospheric, and haunting story has recently been the subject of much horror book buzz. Some readers say it’s super scary and others say that is not. Naturally, curiosity got the best of me. When I saw the audiobook available on Hoopla, I jumped at the chance to listen to it.

The audiobook is perfectly narrated by J.S. Arquin. He really captures the eerie tone which adds to the macabre and ominous plot.

The prologue is BRILLIANT and probably one of the creepiest things I have ever read. It instantly grabbed my attention and I couldn’t wait to read more.

But, while the rest of the plot was ominous and disturbing, it unfortunately did not measure up to the 5 star prologue.

I mostly had a problem with the reason why Faye is haunted by the creature. While trying to avoid spoilers, it just didn’t seem plausible for her to be that disturbed by the trigger event. I wish that “5” referred to something more profound.

However, Blackwell successfully explores many Native American myths and legends, which according to the author’s note, is the inspiration behind this book.

So, is it scary? No, just creepy and disgusting (a lot of vomit)!

4/5 stars
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559 reviews631 followers
December 16, 2021
Faye and Felix are celebrating their engagement at her parent's cabin up in the snowy mountains. Suddenly strange things begin to happen. Unexplainable things. The faint cries of babies can be heard coming from in the woods behind the cabin. A dreamcatcher of bones and skin hanging in a tree. Soft whispering is filtering out from the tree line and to Felix's horror his wife is whispering back. What is stalking Faye? Can Felix undercover long ago buried secrets of her family to save her soul?

Mr. Blackwell has an unique writing style. Once you adjust to that you are in for a frightening read. I loved how he incorporated Native American history into the plot. The only complaint is there was some unfinished plot threads. Other then that a lovely horror book.

🐱🐱🐱🐱
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374 reviews141 followers
July 1, 2021
The door rattled gently in its frame, as if someone had pressed an ear against it. The silence was only broken when Faye whispered, "Don't open it."

Stolen Tongues follows a couple on a vacation in a remote snow-bound cabin. When they hear voices outside calling to them, they realize they're being stalked, not by someone but by something.

Her movements were not cute and clumsy, like those of a sneaky child on Christmas eve. They were robotic. Inhuman. She moved down the hall like a meth-addicted zombie ballerina and stopped at the stairwell.

This book is chalked full of creepy fun! The author does an amazing job creating distinct and spine-rattling visuals that will simultaneously make you cringe away and turn to the next page. The characters are likeable and empathetic. The writing is fast-paced and easy-to-read. This is a book that I'm sure will stay with me long after I'm done.
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28 reviews
July 20, 2021
This would have been better as a short story. It was super creepy and effective...the first time. But then the author goes on to describe the same events another dozen times, and it loses a lot of the horror. Also, was anyone else bothered by the constant repetition of "my fiancee"?

And finally - some books are better without closure. I would have traded the answers for an ending that didn't feel quite so pat and flat.
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1,038 reviews343 followers
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July 27, 2021
Unfortunately I will not be finishing this story. I am in the major minority on this one as there are lots of people that gave it four and five stars. The story starts out great with lots of spooky atmosphere, but then it kind of goes downhill for me as there is too much repetition of what is happening within the story.

I will give just a small taste of what happens without giving away spoilers:

Felix and his wife Faye go to a cabin in the mountains to get away from it all, but while there they start hearing voices in the woods and all around the cabin. Faye has always had trouble with sleep walking and even talking in her sleep, but things become strange when she starts talking in her sleep to whatever is outside their cabin.

That is about all I am going to give on a small taste but the problem with the story was that it continues to be that way with her talking in her sleep every night with the voices that are outside of the cabin. Even after they leave the cabin and go back home - whatever was there at the cabin seems to follow them and she continues to talk in her sleep to the voices.

I was up to the 49% mark and it was the same thing throughout with the sleep talking. I just do not like a repetitive story. The writing style was great though so I might see what else this author has out there and try another book he wrote. It was interesting though how the author wrote the book in first person and wrote himself into the story as he is the main character, Felix. Other readers might like this book, but it was just not for me. Since this book is a "dnf" I will not be adding stars as I don't rate books I don't finish.

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601 reviews114 followers
March 25, 2024
What Makes Five?...

STOLEN TONGUES by Felux Blackwell

3 1/2 stars. There will be spoilers at the end, but I'll give ample warning before you get there...

Deep in the Rockies...

Atop a peak howling with wind, sits a lone cabin with no neighbors around for miles...

Felix and Faye are house-sitting for friends who are honeymooning and caring for their two dogs and parrot in the snow-bound cabin...

The parrot was very intelligent...

He learned many words as well as the appropriate use of the words...

One night, after retiring to bed...

The parrot began saying: knock, knock, which was the parrot's way of saying someone was at the door...

Felix got out of bed to see what had disturbed the parrot so late at night. As he went downstairs, the parrot began saying:...

Warmer! Warmer!...

Seeing nothing outside in the darkness, Felix climbed the stairs to go back to bed, and the parrot began screaming:...

Colder! Colder!...

The bird became fixated on the glass slider door, and now the dogs were agitated and pacing...

Looking again out the glass door...

Felix saw only blackness... the bird was now cowering at the bottom of his cage and shaking...

The dogs started snarling at the slider door, and the door began rattling in its frame. Felix flew to the door and yanked it open while the frightened parrot screamed:...

Warmer! Warmer!

At the first rays of sunlight, Felix and Faye, shaken, packed up, took the animals, and fled the cabin for home...

But...

The being in the mountains followed them home. The local Indians knew the creature as the hollow one...

... because he is formless like water until he fills a vessel and the creature seems obsessed with Faye and what makes 5...

Now you might read this review and think this sounds like a very scary story, and in parts, it was so terrifying that I actually slept with the lights on, but there were a few problems with it.

SPOILER ALERT: There were loose ends; the major loose end for me was a lead-up to what might be in the basement of the cabin, but it was never addressed by the book's end.

I found it annoying that Felix used the term "my fiancée" instead of Faye too often. Faye was acting like a possessed person, but Felix stayed with her anyway when most rational people would have called it quits.

Finally, the reveal, which took pages and pages to lead up to, was anticlimactic, leaving me feeling like there had to be more than this lame explanation.

The book was scary in parts but a slog to get to those parts.
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Profile Image for Melanie (TBR and Beyond).
517 reviews453 followers
December 10, 2021
This was honestly a hard rating. If I was going by the first part of this book - it would be 4 or 5 easily. I am pretty much never scared of horror anymore, but there were parts in this story that legit scared me. The prologue was top notch scary. Well done Felix on that.

The first 100 pages are completely worth reading, I wish it had been a short story. It would've been much more effective but the author decided to throw in all kinds of poor Indigenous rep and confusing plots that went nowhere.

I'm heading into spoiler territory now, you've been warned.

I probably would've given this book three stars, just on the scares alone until I got to his little essay on why he felt, as a white man, that he could write Indigenous rep and then I got real salty. He goes on and on and onnnnnn about how little Indigenous rep there is in popular literature and Hollywood and goes on about the tropes and problematic elements when it is there and how he wanted to do something that was better and then completely disregards everything he says and writes stereotypical Indigenous characters and throws them away half way through the story in a completely pointless fashion. Yep, he kills both of the indigenous characters off, but don't worry the main white guy mourns them so I guess it's ok? Yikes. They have their faces removed for the creature to wear their skin, but he actually says the creature scalped one of them. Really? Couldn't have just said he took off their skin? Scalped is the word you choose to use? Yikes again. But, tell me again how you are writing more positive and inclusive indigenous rep. *bangs head on desk*

The second half of this book was honestly a mess. You really start to realize how one dimensional the main characters are when you have to spend way too long with them - there just wasn't anything to them. It would've been fine for a short story but for something that clocks in at 300 pages, no. WHAT THE HELL WAS THE POINT OF THE CELLAR? Oh yeah, there was none. What is the lead up to the number 5? A bunch of who cares... I kept thinking they were going to throw in some big revelations about the number 5 and I would be shocked but it never happened, it was just a bland reveal. The ending was a lot of meh as well.

Why is this getting a 2 and not a 1? Because the scares in the first were excellent. The author just didn't follow through on a lot of the things he was throwing at us in the story and then fell into the poor representation trap after telling us how he wouldn't. It also got fairly repetitive by the end.

I know this is a VERY popular book in the horror community and I'm sure I'll make some people cranky with my review, but that's ok.
February 10, 2022
Terrifying!!

I’m a huge fan of folklore tales and stories, and ‘Stolen Tongues’ by Felix Blackwell, is a terrifyingly great book. I had been looking forward to reading this, as I’d seen and heard awesome reviews. I don’t scare easily but I was truly creeped out reading this. It had the hairs on my arms standing up, and my eyes were watering with fright. This was thoroughly enjoyable, and I give it 5 stars, just on the fear factor alone. I highly recommend!!
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Author 13 books435 followers
December 31, 2022
Where to begin. First, I loved the writing style. It flowed from the beginning and didn't get dragged down by unnecessary filler. I can't say I was scared reading this, as it is where my brain resides mostly anyway. However, it was intriguing and I didn't want to stop reading. At times I felt like the author had gotten into my head and paused at some strange coincidences. Because I lost my daughter, Kyla, to cancer, those parts about Jennifer/Kayla hit home particularly. I also felt like Felix handled writing about native culture without it becoming trope-y or disrespectful. The story definitely kept me on edge and I believe the ending shows how the small doors in our brains can let in the biggest monsters.

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353 reviews81 followers
April 23, 2023
Stolen Tongues by Felix Blackwell is a gripping and terrifying horror novel that draws on folkloric elements.

'There is a brief moment at night when the brain is neither awake nor asleep, but somewhere in between. In that moment, I sometimes hear things – distant voices or odd sounds.'

This story follows Faye and Felix, a newly engaged couple who decide to spend some time in a secluded cabin in the woods, only to encounter sinister voices and malevolent forces that threaten their lives.
I was hooked by this novel from the start, as it created a palpable sense of dread and suspense. The author did a great job of building up the atmosphere and the mystery, making me feel like I was in the cabin or home with the characters. I also liked how the novel explored themes of identity, memory and trauma, and how they affect our relationships.
However, I have to say that the second half of the novel did not quite live up to the expectations that the first half set. I felt like some of the scenes became repetitive and predictable, and some of the twists and revelations were not as shocking or satisfying as I would have liked or expected them to have been. I also thought that some of the character's actions and motivations were not as convincing or consistent as I had hoped early on. This could have easily been a five-star read if only for it being edited a little harder and therefore a slight reduction in its page count.

'I heard voices up on that mountain. I didn’t dream it. Someone was out there, walking around in the freezing dark, calling out to my future wife.'

Overall, I enjoyed this novel a lot, but I wish it had maintained the same level of quality and intensity throughout.
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28 reviews2 followers
July 6, 2022
Initially, this novel starts out with a fantastic short story that works as a preface for the book. It’s spooky and leaves you with questions. I think as far as short stories (5-20 pages) goes, Blackwell has a talent for that.
However, novel length (what I call long-form writing, though I have no idea it that’s a real term or the right term) stories don’t seem to be his foray.
It started off fine, and to be fair, their are some pretty creepy descriptions, but it became increasingly monotonous, describing basically the same things over and over, night after night. We get it. By now we’re basically getting a tiresome overview of their continued creepy nighttime happenings and I personally have lost interest.
Blackwell also switched back and forth from referring to Faye as either “Faye” or “my fiancée” far, far too much. There were points when he could have referred to her as her sisters “sister” or other things, but it was constantly “my fiancée” to the point where it seemed that she was his possession. His and only his. While he talks about his love for Faye, and works to try to help her in any way he can, this story is overwhelmingly about him.
Now, let me say that that is totally okay, because, if written well, hearing the story of someone witnessing and experiencing a loved ones trauma can be powerful and important. Sadly, I didn’t feel that with him.
I felt that he thought himself to be her savior and that she was incapable. She was “His Fiancée” and she was just the basic catalyst for his heroic behavior. It’s a narrative that’s been done to death and when it’s also badly written, it’s pretty unbearable.
Everyone was always keeping things from Faye even though she was described as sort of vaguely strong, apparently she couldn’t handle certain truths.
I found myself rolling my eyes at certain family revelations that I thought were just sort of cliche dramas that are also somehow sort of unlikely. More of an easy way out, an easy explanation, rather than something that felt real, visceral and shocking.
Even the characters were underdeveloped and information about them was often just sort of clunkily divulged. The banter seemed forced and fake.
While we all crave answers, it’s important to base the supernatural stories in a realistic foundation in order for the reader to be able to suspend their disbelief to the more mystical/otherworldly aspects. And there is an important thing that some writers don’t understand and it’s a tricky line: some stories need explanations while others don’t. You should never be lazy and uncreative, giving your audience no answers because you, the writer, had none. It should be a conscious decision to better the story. The same goes for explanations and closure. Some things in life simply cannot be explained and if it isn’t realistic that the character would get answers, sometimes we, as readers, shouldn’t get them. It’s terrible writing to have everything fall into place in a “as luck would have it” or “we stumbled across the very things we needed” way. That’s not how life works. Sometimes we get closure, sometimes we don’t.
And this writer had a whole lot of “as luck would have it” moments.
No thanks.
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407 reviews59 followers
July 12, 2023
Omg this was scary as hell! This would probably give me nightmares for a week! Damn!

One more reason not to go camping in the woods or spend my vacation in a cabin miles away from anyone. No, sir. I'd rather stay in a hotel or somewhere crowded, you know, with people!

This book would totally bring unwelcomed chills to anyone. The mortifying presence of the hollow, the mimic, the voices, the darkness of it all is too much to bear I had to look away from the book a few times because it felt like the words would turn into my own personal monster.

One word: Terrifying! I just wish that it wasn't overly repetitive, there are times when I thought that I was reading the same chapters because nothing is really happening. Also, the big revelation about the "five" isn't really memorable.

Still, this is good
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524 reviews504 followers
October 20, 2021
3.5 stars

Started out with a stellar bang but the rest didn't quite live up to its potential, Stolen Tongues contains frightful imagery, empathetic portrayal of individuals in distress, as well as a very sensible depiction of Indigenous people and their culture (make sure to read the author's notes regarding his writing process), but it's also sadly about 100 pages too long.

The first chapter of Stolen Tongues is a horror storytelling perfection; one can almost read it as a standalone short story (and I highly encourage doing so). In retrospect, the remainder of Stolen Tongues is desperate for some additional POVs; told solely from Felix, the husband's perspective, the narrative quickly falls into a monotonous repetition of 'experiencing a creepy event, discussing with someone about the said event (and reaching no substantial conclusion)'—the absence of variation and withholding most of its reveals till the very end makes the middle portion a perpetual drag, with very little new information along the way enticing readers to propel forward.

Stolen Tongues has a beyond-amazing opening, excellent writing, great general concept, and a decent closure, but its throwaway middle spoiled the overall tension for me. There is slow-burn, and then there is spreading the plot too thin—and unfortunately Stolen Tongues is the latter. Still, this is overall very polished for an indie release; if you're looking for a creepy tale involves a cabin in the woods, you might find something to enjoy here!
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239 reviews19 followers
June 14, 2021
What a great creepy horror story! It was definitely a page turner and very well written. If you haven’t read it, and you love spine-chilling horror, you should absolutely pick it up and read it!
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582 reviews200 followers
October 25, 2022
Stolen Tongues was such a nice surprise. I had only heard good things about this book, so I think I had high expectations about it when I first started reading it and it certainly delivered. The first three pages packed a punch - they were fun and creepy. The story continued in the same trend. Perhaps what I enjoyed the most about this book was its pacing. We’re all too used to horror books that dedicate 50% of the book to just hint to you that ‘maybe something is going on’, Blackwell did this in two pages and then it just showed you what was going on.

It’s creepy, it’s fast-paced, it has fun banter, and great characters. What’s not to like?

This book could have easily been a 5-star read for me if it weren’t for its length and the ending. I will obviously not talk too much about the ending and I’ll keep this spoiler free, but lest to say it’s an interesting idea with a sad resolution. In regards to the length, I think it was sort of obvious where Stolen Tongues came from: Reddit’s r/NoSleep. The first 45%ish of the book was great and it felt fast-paced because it all was interesting and each chapter ended perfectly, this is probably because they had been interconnected short stories originally. The rest felt like the author had decided to actually write it as a novel rather than following the same structure, and it just was guilty of being a horror book: characters would do stupid things and not communicate to add an extra 100 pages.

Alright, I’m done whining. This was a creepy read and it’s definitely one of my Top 3 of the scariest books I’ve ever read. I so wish this was a 5 stars UGH. I highly suggest eye-reading this to let your brain imagine what happens freely.
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