Car Crash Comments

Very touching indeed, well scripted with outstanding style......10+++

Very sad. Congrats on poem of the day!

Life is kinetic power At the level of breathing, life progresses towards eternity Beliefs show dreams, bring firmness to the rhythm of life Life is one of the carriers of death Death comes not to stop life Rather to think in the opposite way of stopping

And dreamed much..... Not being able to think past Horror to see what was left..... but over and over Of the smashed car........so beautifully stepping ahead the poetic verse; delightful to read though it's delineated a graph of sadness; if I fixed the car as the pace of life then the smashed car is the symbol of death or end of life; and the last two lines here portrayed the hope of life; very good poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

'Who smiled seldom And dreamed much.....' - A dangerous combination! Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

The mother mourning Her only daughter delicate and shy Who smiled seldom And dreamed much.... very fine poem, verses and thoughts. tony

Grief at its heights. However we try we cannot stop the scene of accident and the graves from haunting our thoughts. Congratulations for being featured in POD..10

" Weaponless against death" Powerful.

Weaponless against death.....we all are! Touching!

Touching poem.10 h

A strong, well-expressed poem that brings to life those tragic deaths...

The message sad but the simplicity of the poem and the message beautiful

This is so sad. Your words portray a scary mental picture. Well written.

another graphic poem. Great work. R.