General Comments: Philosophy GA 3: Written Examination
General Comments: Philosophy GA 3: Written Examination
General Comments: Philosophy GA 3: Written Examination
GENERAL COMMENTS
The 2002 examination saw a marked improvement compared to the 2001 results. This was due to:
2002 being the first examination where students who completed VCE Philosophy Units 1 and 2 were examined at
the 3 and 4 level
improved teacher confidence with the material
teachers being more successful in covering all components of the course
good attendances at support sessions offered by the VCAA, LaTrobe and Melbourne Universities.
Generally, responses to Section A and B questions were accurate, detailed and very well expressed. Fewer students
felt the need to give large tracts of irrelevant material (usually biographical). Compared with 2001, fewer students left
sections of the paper unanswered, or responded with we did not study him. The responses in the evaluation and
analyses parts of Section B were a substantial improvement on 2001. Students need to have thought about and be
engaged with the arguments and ideas studied and not just offer a neutral assessment or the phrase is justified in his
arguments because he believes he is.
Teachers were generally successful in getting students to give brief answers in Section A and develop more detailed
responses in Section B; however, the main difficulty were the essays in Section C. It was evident that many students
either did not know how to write a philosophy essay, or had spent too much time on Sections A and B, and as a
consequence, had little time to develop their essays in Section C.
Some students still answered all five questions in Section B where the clear instruction is to do any three out of five.
Students are not awarded extra marks for answering more questions.
Section A
The questions in this section were short answer. In some instances a single sentence answer was sufficient for full
marks. Section A is concerned with the details of the texts. It does not ask for any analysis, evaluation etc. of the
arguments or claims made in the texts. Section A is also the only section where every question is compulsory.
Apart from incorrect responses, some answers were so brief or poorly expressed, that it was difficult to assess what
students actually knew. Answers are supposed to be brief, so long as they are clear and unambiguous.
Question
Marks
%
Response
What does Sartre mean by his claim that existence precedes essence?
Question 1
a
25
0/3
man turns up, man exists
12
1/3
afterwards he defines himself
18
2/3
man is nothing else but what he makes of himself
46
3/3
Quite well answered. Most students had a basic understanding of Sartres reversal of
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Aristotles claim that essence precedes. Often, the first point was given as an
mark
answer. Though rewarded, it is insufficient.
1.85)
What reasons does he give for this claim?
b
0/2
40
there is no human nature since there is no God to conceive it
19
1/2
therefore there is no fixed or given human nature
2/2
41
Students often responded to this question with there is no God. The second part of
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there being no fixed human nature is an important (and essential) part of the answer.
mark 1.0)
Why does Callicles think philosophy is suitable for a young person, but not an
Question 2
a
20
0/3
older one?
27
1/3
in the young, it opens the mind and neglect of philosophy condemns one to a
33
2/3
low estimation of oneself
21
3/3
in the old, any two of:
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- out of touch with human nature
mark
- incapable of undertaking practical activities
1.54)
- little participation in public life (limits development)
- unable to defend themselves in court
Usually answered well, but for 3 marks, students needed to mention three points.
b
0/2
1/2
2/2
(Average
mark
1.02)
Question 3
a
0/3
1/3
2/3
3/3
(Average
mark
2.42)
b
0/2
1/2
2/2
(Average
mark
1.22)
31
37
33
2
7
39
52
26
25
48
Question 4
Question 5
a
0/2
1/2
2/2
(Average
mark
1.42)
b
0/3
1/3
2/3
3/3
(Average
mark
1.27)
a
0/1
1/1
(Average
mark
0.68)
honour is too superficial as it depends on those who bestow it rather than the
honour of those who receive it
possession of excellence could be compatible with inactivity or misfortune in
which case it could not be associated with happiness
wealth is merely useful and for the sake of something else
slaves cannot perform virtuous acts as they are under the control of a master
rejects amusement as valuable to a good man as it is a strange end
rejects pleasure as its less than human (bovine).
Many answered this question quite well. The range of options made it relatively
easy to find some examples.
In The Phaedo what does Socrates say happens to the soul after death?
10
38
52
as the soul is immortal it carries with it the misdeeds of one life into the next
hence, death is no escape from evil
only being good is
Some students confused this question with Socrates defence of philosophy, and
thus responded by saying that it is important to have a pure soul to do philosophy.
32
68
Most students answered this question correctly. A common mistake was that the
test signified that men are machines.
b
0/4
1/4
2/4
3/4
4/4
(Average
mark
1.85)
33
12
15
14
25
Outline two potential objections to the Turing Test that Turing raises. For
each of these objections state one response made by Turing.
Any two of the following objection/response pairs:
Most students gave at least one objection and response of Turings. Apart from not
knowing two objections and responses, the common mistake was to give their (or
someone elses) objection, not Turings.
Section B
The questions in this section require students to display more detail and depth of understanding than in Section A. The
most common area of concern was answering part c) of each question. In most cases, these parts are either i) a
comparison with another philosopher, or ii) an evaluation of the philosophers position. When offering an opinion as to
the value of an idea or argument, one suggestion is for students to frame their responses by I think Xs view on the
good life is valuable because Even if the reasons are not clear or good ones, the fact that students have given some
thought to the views of a philosopher will be rewarded with some marks.
In most part b) and c) questions, a mark was given for the expression and/or persuasiveness of the response.
What nature approves and sanctions is this: the only authentic way of life is to do nothing to hinder
Question 1
or restrain the expansion of ones desires, until they can grow no longer.
Plato, Gorgias, 491e492a
What desires does Callicles identify as virtues?
a
7
0/3
luxury, excess (pleasures) and licence (freedom) are virtues and happiness; a
27
1/3
sensual hedonism. Everything else is mere convention.
35
2/3
The main difficulty was that the virtues listed were often examples of pleasure at the
30
3/3
expense of mentioning freedom or luxury.
(Average
mark
1.88)
b
0/6
1/6
2/6
3/6
4/6
5/6
6/6
(Average
mark
3.32)
c
0/6
1/6
2/6
3/6
4/6
5/6
6/6
(Average
mark
3.25)
Question 2
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13
12
13
12
16
21
13
10
15
15
14
15
18
Outline an argument that Socrates uses to counter Callicles claim made in the
quote above.
i) the argument of qualified pleasures (the catamite) or,
ii) argument of appetite and thirst, or
iii) the leaky jar simile the general argument is: want and desire are painful; the
sating of desire brings pleasure; hence pain and pleasure are together therefore good
not identical with pleasure, or evil with pain, or
iv) coward feels more pleasure than the brave at the retreat of the enemy. If pleasure
is the good, then this makes the coward very good. This seems a perverse thing to
say.
Most students responded with a satisfactory description of a relevant argument, but
the problem was that the details of this argument were often lacking. Vague, general
answers attracted fewer marks.
Compare and evaluate Callicles view of the good life to Nietzsches view.
similar in both Nietzsche and Callicles in that both thought that excesses and
pleasure (material or sensual) should be indulged, but Callicles argues for a
strict Hedonism and social Darwinism
with hedonism, pleasures may have morally reprehensible consequences
no valuing of social responsibilities
no privileging of any moral framework by Nietzsche.
Most students answered that both would hold very similar views. Whilst correct,
there was little in those answers that would indicate clear knowledge or some prior
thinking on the students part. Some details on the position of each in the students
comparison were essential.
Our states of consciousness differ And if quality of consciousness matters, then anything which
alters consciousness in the direction of unselfishness, objectivity and realism is to be connected with
virtue.
Iris Murdoch The Sovereignty of Good, p. 84.
What argument does Murdoch use to justify the role of art as a means to virtue?
a
9
0/5
art is connected with beauty
16
1/5
the necessary role of authority and hierarchy
11
2/5
it is through beauty that one experiences a selflessness, an ability to conceive
19
3/5
transcendent values because one experiences transcendence
20
4/5
selflessness is the path to virtue
25
5/5
Students who attempted the Murdoch question often had a good understanding of
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her argument. It was the level of detail, and the logical order, in describing her
mark 3.0)
argument that often determined whether a student was awarded high marks.
What similarities, if any, can you make between Sartre and Murdoch in their
biiii
15
0/6
positions on:
7
1/6
a) the origin of moral values
14
2/6
b) responsibility to others
17
3/6
c) the role of emotions in moral decisions
18
4/6
both see man as the origin of moral value
12
5/6
neither believe in a God or teleological system
16
6/6
both have social responsibility/element as part of their ethical systems (man
(Average
chooses for all men: Sartre). Murdoch is more explicit
mark
both insist that emotions are essential in making moral decisions (Sartres
3.18)
example of the student and his conflicting duties)
Most students gave an answer to some of the above, but not with sufficient detail to
warrant full marks, e.g. direct examples from the text would be useful in a question
such as this. Phrases like emotions are important were common (correct, but too
vague to be of any value).
c
0/4
1/4
2/4
3/4
4/4
(Average
mark
2.33)
14
16
21
22
27
Who do you think has the better guide for a moral life, Sartre or Murdoch?
Why?
Question 3
The emphasis in this question was on what the student thought and why. It was
common for the second part of the question to be completely ignored. An answer to
a question such as this that lacks reasons is practically worthless. Whether a student
prefers Murdochs or Sartres guide is of secondary importance. It is their reasons
for doing so which is the important issue.
The European disguises himself in morality because he has become a sick, sickly, crippled animal, who
has good reasons for being tame, because he is almost an abortion, an imperfect, weak and clumsy
thing
Nietzsche, The Joyful Wisdom, p. 352
According to Nietzsche, what is responsible for man becoming a sick, sickly,
a
14
0/3
crippled animal.?
19
1/3
the taming of the beast of prey is responsible; only social man has a need for
29
2/3
morality because it experiences anxiety and ennui
38
3/3
it creates modes of life that have unattainable ideals and man punishes himself
(Average
for not meeting them
mark
European morality suppresses the will to life or power, and extols humility,
1.89)
selflessness and compassion. Nietzsche views these values as weakness.
b
0/8
1/8
2/8
3/8
4/8
5/8
6/8
7/8
8/8
(Average
mark
4.19)
4
8
12
18
14
14
13
9
8
A lack of detail marred some students responses. By giving examples of the type of
morality, or the impossible ideals that man lives under, rather than just say the
suppression of the will to power, then students would demonstrate clearly to
examiners that Nietzsches claim is understood.
Why is Nietzsche excited by the claim that God is dead and what does he say
about the role of religion in moral systems?
with God dead, then Man is free from the burden of having to believe in a
version of morality based on Christianity
exciting possibilities: the re-evaluation of all morals
Religions (Christianity) have been the major influence on European morality.
They (religious leaders/prophets) recognise that Man needs a system of belief;
one that rejects all other systems and holds them as bad or evil.
Religions have made the following contributions to the practice of morality:
they have used routine to dull the mind and natural instincts and reflexes
religion (the desire to belief) is a manifestation; a weakness of will
the role of the priest as a protector and wounder of the herd, ie. that religions
have created an ideal man, one far removed from the real man that is on earth
the creation of guilt in and for man is also one of the consequences of modern
religions. We distrust man
religions also foster the belief that truth is divine; so divine that we recognise
the great lie we have told ourselves for 2 millennia: that there is a God
morality is now about self denial, selflessness, modesty and chasteness.
A question which required a substantial degree of detail and accuracy to be awarded
full marks. The question has two parts, and often students would feel that in
answering the first, they had somehow answered the second, i.e. because of the
liberation from the constraints of morality based on religion (death of God), then
religion can offer nothing to man. This is clearly a misreading of the question.
c
0/4
1/4
2/4
3/4
4/4
(Average
mark
2.13)
Question 4
18
17
21
22
22
From your description in part b), what conclusions can you make about
Nietzsches attitude toward social responsibility?
b
0/6
1/6
2/6
3/6
4/6
5/6
6/6
(Average
mark
3.25)
c
0/6
1/6
2/6
3/6
4/6
5/6
6/6
(Average
mark
2.68)
8
12
17
18
18
12
16
14
17
19
15
14
11
10
the dualism of King is supplemented by his belief that mans moral state is a
consequence of his relationship with God
man is a sinner and until he recognises this, his frustration will continue
for King, man has misused his freedom. Modern man seeks everyone to blame
but himself ie. biological/social factors
man is a rational agent and is free to choose his actions, therefore he is
responsible for his actions
King also recognises the dichotomy in Mans personality: Augustines plea to
be good, but not just yet, or Platos simile of the charioteer
he also makes the point that Man is not meant for evil ALL his life; the parable
of the prodigal son shows that if Man comes home (to God) then he will be
forgiven.
Most students correctly outlined Kings description of Man, but had real problems in
explaining his phrase that Man lives on the low level For a number of students,
Kings What Is Man? is a text studied with a brief acknowledgment of the
philosophical assumptions of his description of man, and why Man is a sinner.
Do you think that Martin Luther King is justified in using religion as a source
of moral values? Why?
Yes as a psychological comfort to explain suffering even if God does not exist,
belief in transcendent values is important for social cohesion, justice and fairness.
No without a scientific/material basis; why would a loving God allow the innocent
to suffer?
Any other reasoned response; use of Murdoch, Sartre or Nietzsche to justify or
amplify their response.
Answers that were exclusively religious, e.g. Gods law is the one true law. were
not accepted. Reasons, not dogma, are essential in answers to philosophy questions.
Many students said that King was justified in using religion as a source of moral
values purely because he was a Christian, and therefore if he believed it, he was
justified. This retreat into a simplistic moral relativism must be avoided.
Question 5
Pleasure is our first and kindred good. It is the starting point of every choice and aversion, and to it we
come back, inasmuch as we make feeling the rule to judge every good thing. Epicurus, Letter To
Menoeceus
What does Epicurus mean by pleasure?
a
18
0/3
pleasure is the absence of pain and trouble in the soul.
16
1/3
It was essential to the answer that the trouble in the soul component be mentioned.
31
2/3
This part was often omitted.
35
3/3
(Average
mark
1.83)
Outline at least three important pieces of advice given by Epicurus to
b
10
0/7
Menoeceus on leading the good life.
Three of the following (with some detail in explanation) are necessary:
7
1/7
12
2/7
seek wisdom because it is good for the soul (reflection)
12
3/7
always direct yourself toward happiness
11
4/7
God is an immortal and blessed being; what must be worshipped is his
13
5/7
immortality and blessedness
13
6/7
death is not to be feared by the wise
21
7/7
no terror in life for those who feel no terror in ending life
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healthy body and security of mind lead to a blessed life
mark
sober reasoning and moderation in pleasures is necessary for a happy life
4.06)
DO NOT accept friendship: not in the advice given to Menoeceus by Epicurus,
c
0/5
1/5
2/5
3/5
4/5
5/5
(Average
mark
3.06)
10
11
14
17
21
26
Section C
(Average mark 4.0/Available marks 10)
The answers are suggested ones only as the questions are deliberately left open and general; students may focus on one
particular argument and may not have covered all of the criticisms mentioned.
This was the section where most students had trouble. The main reasons were:
a) students ran out of time
b) students wrote a summary of ideas without examining the question.
A solution to the first problem can be to attempt the essay question first, then Section B, then Section A. If a student
has difficulties with managing their time, then it might be better to sacrifice some marks in Section A than up to 20
marks in Section C. As for the second issue, planning and addressing the question are essential elements in a philosophy
essay.
Question 1
The view known as dualism holds that the mind (or soul) and the body are two different things, though they may
be somehow related. Outline and critically evaluate one or two arguments for dualism.
Possibilities include the following:
Descartes argument from doubt and certainty
clear and distinct ideas of mind/body means there must be distinct mind/body
Descartes argument from divisibility and indivisibility.
explanatory gap between possession of brain (and its physical states) and the experience of these states subjectively
ie. why should I experience melancholia if synapse A is activated?
support for Armstrongs materialism
example of computers in confirming materialist/reductionist view of mind
Kuhns alternative explanation of consensus in Science (guided by community).
This was not a particularly popular question, but those who answered it did quite well because the question had clear
requirements, and most students found it easy to write a relevant response; one that addressed the two parts of this
question. They understood Armstrongs case for materialism (i.e. why we should treat this argument seriously) and
then, his version of materialism. This distinction is important. One critical mistake by some students was that they said
that Armstrong accepts materialism without reservation.
Question 3
To what extent does science give us knowledge? Answer with reference to the views of at least two of the
following: Plato, Newton, Popper, and Kuhn.
Answers should include the following as relevant points:
Plato True knowledge concerns the permanent and unchanging realm of reality, accessible only to the intellect, rather
than the world of the senses. (Refer to one or more of the images of the Sun, the Line and the Cave.). Knowledge as
justified true belief.
Critical questions: Can the existence of this realm be established? What does it contain? How are we to be sure that we
understand it correctly?
Newton the science of mechanics is not necessarily inexact and imperfect, but potentially as accurate and rationally
demonstrable as geometry.
Critical question: Do observations of the world (of gravity, levity, elastic force, etc.) really allow the same degree of
objectivity and certainty as the abstractions of geometry?
Popper a theory is scientific only if it is falsifiable, i.e. there are conceivable observations which would show it to be
false. Einsteins theory of gravitation passes this test; astrology and the psychoanalytic theories of Freud and Adler do
not, for whatever happens is claimed to fit the theory. Unfalsifiability is not a strength in a theory, but a weakness.
Confirming evidence should count only if it results from risky predictions, i.e. ones which are improbable apart from
the theory.
Critical questions: Does Poppers account allow the establishment of positive scientific knowledge, as opposed to the
negative knowledge that a given theory is false? What is confirmation, and is it the same as proof? Is the qualifying rule
for confirming evidence too restrictive?
Kuhn the emergence of a new scientific theory is often due to a crisis the persistent failure of puzzles to be solved
in the terms of the old theory. New theories involve the replacement of previously standard beliefs or procedures a
paradigm shift. Examples include Copernican astronomy, Lavoisiers oxygen theory of combustion, and Einsteins
theory of relativity. When puzzles under the new paradigm become intolerable, a new shift may be required. Scientific
progress is a matter of evolution, but not toward a fixed truth.
Critical questions: Arent some scientific theories true, or at least truer than others? Does Kuhns view really allow for
scientific progress, as distinct from mere change?
This was the most popular essay question. There was enough material in this question for students to concentrate on just
two different philosophers. A common problem was that students tried to cover too much ground and ended up giving a
summary of Platos, Poppers, Turings, and Kuhns ideas. These essays were little more than four long paragraphs
that were not tied together with an argument or considered opinion. The question asks if science gives us knowledge. A
good place to start is if indeed this is true. The next part is to show (demonstrate) why this is so (or not). The material
used is only as good as the argument it is supporting.
More successful essays usually contained a good comparison between the empiricism of science, and its subsequent
characteristic that truth is not permanent, and Platos concept of knowledge as infallible and timeless.