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Completing Your Dissertation

Without Tears
Your dissertation is your union card. It is your entry into the
academy. But writing a dissertation can seem overwhelming. Its
scary to imagine writing a work 200 or more pages and submitting it
to distinguished scholars whose opinion of your intelligence and
talent will depend on what you have completed.
But remember: The single biggest obstacle to completion is
psychological. To be sure, a dissertation involves far more research
than you have ever done before. But by the time you begin your
dissertation, youve already written countless essays, lab reports, and
conference presentations. A dissertation is, in the end, simply a
compilation of seminar papersrevised to provide conceptual unity.
Completing a dissertation, then, is mainly a matter of
perseverance.

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It means, first of all, that you must choose a topic that you are
passionate about. As Toni Morrison once said: If there's a book
you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must
write it.

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Also choose a do-able topic. A good dissertation topic is clearly

delimited. A topic that is overly broad, excessively ambitious, or
vague is a recipe for failure. As the clich goes: the only good
dissertation is a finished dissertation.

The Teaching Center offers:

Half a century ago, doctoral students were said to write theses, rather
than dissertations. That is, they wrote manuscripts that addressed a
clearly posed question and provided a compelling argument. Follow
that earlier example. Organize your dissertation, and its
chapters, around questions: substantive, conceptual, and
methodological. Then look at what other scholars have said about
these questions and consider the ways that you agree or disagree
with them.
Take heart. One mentor said: With almost every person whose
dissertation I directed, the first draft chapters were disastrous. Get
your work on paper; then you and your mentor can work together
to get it into polished form.

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1. The task seems overwhelming.

The solution: Break the project into small, manageable units.
2. There are no clear deadlines.
The solution: Work on sub-sections that you can finish in a
predictable amount of time, preferably today.
3. Being overpowered by negative thoughts.
Silence your internal critic.
Ignore or repress self-defeating thoughts.

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 Overcome your feelings of inadequacy.

Break you subject down into manageable subsections.
Refuse to submit to perfectionism.
The solution: You must get material on paper before you can rework it.
4. Becoming isolated.
The solution: Find sounding boards.
5. Becoming overly anxious about your mentors reactions.
The solution: Be a pro. Give each chapter to a mentor for comments.

Yes, You Can Finish Your Dissertation

1. Distill your arguments into a single sentence.
If you can explain your dissertation succinctly, you can write it.
"What I hope to show in this chapter/article/dissertation/book is ________."
Identify the basic questions or issues you are addressing and how your work relates to contemporary
literature. State the overall significance of your work to your field
2 Set small goals.
Take baby steps. Dont ask yourself to Write Chapter Two - instead break it down into tiny do-able steps.
3. Remember the clich: Youre not writing a book. Youre writing five research papers.
Dont scare yourself. Write your dissertation in manageable segments. Dissertation chapters in the humanities
are typically 40 to 60 double-spaced pages.
3. Avoid the mistakes dissertators make.
Choosing a boring or overly broad and ambitious topic.
A good dissertation topic has clear focus and circumscribed limits.
Failure to focus:
Every chapter should have a clear focusan overarching question or issue that it addresses.
Failing to keep references for every quotation or piece of evidence.
4. There are two kinds of research: research on your topic and research relevant to writing.
In addition to collecting data or quotations, look at how other scholars (or even journalists) handle your topic.
How do they structure and frame their arguments? What key phrases do they use?
5. Brainstorm, then organize your ideas.
After you have identified key ideas, organize them into a structure, then work through the ideas one at a time.
6. Write when you dont want to write.
When you dont feel like writing, write SOMETHING.
Spell out a chapters argument. Work on your introduction. Analyze some of your evidence. Work on the
literature review. Write down your ideas. Whatever you do, dont stop writing.
7. Be selfish
Compartmentalize. Forget your other responsibilities and obligations. Find a time period when you can work
and protect it.
8. Find a sounding board
Find someone who you can speak to about your writing. Tell this person what you have accomplished that
day, your arguments, and the challenges you encountered. A sounding board will not only help you

formulate and clarify you ideas, but will also help you make them more sophisticated, logical, and compelling.

Myths about Writing

Certain myths and misconceptions make writing problems worse and discourage you from incorporating writing into
your teaching.
Myth 1: Skilled writers write effortlessly.
Every writer procrastinates, gets anxious, and loses focus. The Pulitzer Prize winning historian Richard Rhodes
offers a simple, if crude, piece of advance: Keep your ass to the chair.
Model writing on weight loss: Strive for small, daily advances rather than attempting to do everything all at once.
There is only way to write: write a lot.
Myth 2: Skilled writers write from carefully plotted outlines.
There is nothing wrong with brainstorming and carefully organizing your ideas. But in fact writing is messy. It is
not a linear process.
Writing is thinking. It is during the writing process itself that you will come up with your best ideas.
Myth 3: There are two stages to the writing process: writing a draft and then editing it to correct grammar and
delete typos and extraneous words.
There is no writing, only re-writing. And re-writing generally requires significant re-organization and rethinking.

General Advice about Writing

1. Writing is dialogic
Dont write in isolation. When you write, you enter into a conversation, a debate, a controversy.
Therefore, you must first understand and identify an existing debate. Then you can intervene and contribute
to that debate.
In discussions of ____, controversy has swirled around _____.
2. A dissertation is not a survey. It addresses a problem or a question.
A dissertation advances an argument. It stakes out a thesis and supports it with evidence and logic.
Your argument should grab the readers attention. It debunks a myth, corrects a misconception, enters a
debate, or challenges a popular interpretation. Be prepared to explain the significance of you topic
succinctly and compellingly.
My dissertation will address the following question: ____.
It will fill the following gap in the literature: ____.
3. Writing is a social activity.
Dont hesitate to find a sounding board. Talking out your arguments helps to make them more logical,
concise, and persuasive.
4. Learn the tricks of the trade
Every writer needs to acquire the secrets of written argumentation
What are the secrets? They are a series of formulas that ensure complex thinking.
a. You must explain the significance of your topic:
I am studying ___________, because I want to find out what/why/how ___________ in order to
help my reader understand ___________
b. You must engage others who have studied the topic:

I think X is mistaken because she overlooks ___________ .

Xs theory of ___________ is extremely useful because it sheds insight on the difficult problem of
___________
Whereas X provides ample evidence that ___________, Y and Zs research on ___________ and
___________ convinces me that ___________ instead
c. You must effectively integrate quotations into your argument:
Evidence never speaks for itself. Evidence always needs to be interpreted and explained.
Signal the importance of what the author is saying: Basically, X is saying ___________
Use quotations for your own purposes: I agree with X that ____, and would add ____
d. You can easily make your writing and argument more sophisticated by explaining how you agree or
disagree with other peoples ideas.
Although it is often said that ____, I claim ____.
Group X argues ____ , and I have mixed feelings about it. On the one hand, ____.
On the other hand, ____.
I used to think ____. Now, however, after ____, I have come to see ____.
Debates over ____ tend to dominate discussions of ____. But these debates obscure the far more
important issue of ____.
At this point you will probably object that ____. While it's true that _____, I still maintain____.
"Of course the problem is far more complicated than ____,"

Dealing with Common Challenges

1. Ive got nothing to say
Academic writingwhether this is an essay, a lab report, or a problem solving exercise-- involves taking
part in an argument, conversation, and debate. Your job is to persuade a reader that your position is
appropriate and sensible take on the issue.
The first step is to identify the larger conversation surrounding an issue. Try to figure out how whatever
you're writing aboutan event, text, experiment, finding or whateverfits into your larger subject or field.
Then problematize the conversation: Look for questions, tensions, and unresolved issues. These provide
openings for something new to say.
Develop a thesisa distinctive stance within the conversation.
Have an angle--a slant that gives your paper focus. Advance a provocative thesis that speaks to
larger controversies.
How do you do this? Use the magic formula: Become part of a broader conversation or
controversy.
Refute an argument
Refine an argument
Reveal a gap
Fill a gap
Ask a new question or refine an older question

Unlike a legal brief, an academic argument must be fair-minded and balanced, based on evidence and
taking account of alternate interpretations and counter-arguments.
2. Awkwardness
Wed like our writing to be original and elegant and their arguments nuanced and sophisticated, but often
wed be happy if our writing was clear. Instead of writing with concision, short active verbs, and a smooth
flow of sentences, too often writing is wordy, filled with the passive voice and with arguments that are
jumpy and undeveloped.
You can gain clarity by:
Breaking sentences into easier-to-understand pieces.
Simplify. Cut out excess nouns, adjectives, and adverbs.
Using active verbs and attaching verbs to clearly identified actors.
Minimize the use of the words was, were, and is.
Avoiding nominalizationsactions expressed as nouns.
Examples include argument instead of argue; analysis instead of analyze; performance instead of
perform.
Using transition phrases and words
Transitional phrases:
I will begin by...
Before I say what is wrong with..., I will first...
At this point, we need to consider the following objection...
Although I have shown..., I still need to...
Next, I will offer support for what is perhaps my most controversial claim, that...
Further support for this claim comes from...
Having argued that..., I need to consider rival views...
Transitional words.
To give multiple reasons: In addition, Also, In the first case
To explain: Because, Given, Since
To conclude an argument: Therefore, Hence, Consequently
To illustrate your argument: A case in point, To illustrate
To provide a specific example: Specifically, Namely
To intensify: Above all, Moreover, Furthermore, More importantly
To emphasize: Of course, Indeed, Certainly
To compare: Similarly, Likewise
To contrast: However, On the other hand, Even so
To speculate: Lets assume, Lets suppose
To concede an argument: Of course, Doubtless, While recognizing that...
Using tenses consistently.
Establishing an academic tone.
The student must establish a reasonable, open-minded tone that promises honest consideration of a
question.
Be careful about the beginnings and ends of paragraphs.
These are natural emphasis points.
3. So what?
An argument can be clearly written yet trivial. The question it grapples with may be insignificant and the
argument can be simplistic. Here are some suggestions for making arguments more powerful and
persuasive.
Engage the reader.

The opening paragraph must grab the readers attention.

Crystallize the argument in a single sentence.
A paper must present a strong argument. But too often the thesis is weak, absent, or confusing.
Remember the power of 3.
In classical rhetoric, this is the tricolon. Lists are more powerful when they contain at least three
items.
Dont sweep contrary evidence or alternate interpretations under the rug.
Engage the counter-arguments. Use words like admittedly, clearly, at first it may seem, in fairness.
4. Misusing quotations
Misuse of quotations in rampant in undergraduate papers. Sometimes, students quote too muchor too
little. Sometimes, they blur their voice and those of the sources they quote. Often, they assume that
quotations speak for themselves. Make sure when you use quotations that you:
Explain the quotations point.
Integrate the quotation into the text.
5. Gripping introductions and strong conclusions
Journalism schools teach reporters to begin their stories with a lede: a gripping anecdote, a telling statistic,
a provocative quotation, a surprising research finding. Ledes grab readers attention and set the stage for
your distinctive take or angle on a topic. A powerful introduction functions just like a lede. It captures
the readers attention and it allows you to then present your thesis or argument.
In oratory, the peroration is the conclusion of a speech or discourse. It is the place where the speaker
recapitulates the argument and presses it a final time with renewed vigor. It provides an opportunity to
remind, to reflect, to inspire, to leave the listener with a bit of wisdomto sum up with panache. Mediocre
essays simply recapitulate the papers argument. Strong endings provide a larger vision or context, and
broaden the implications of the papers argument. They provide a fresh twist or a broaden the perspective.
Often, they close the circleconnecting to the papers introduction.