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No Nonsense
COVER
LETTERS
The Essential Guide to
Creating Attention-Grabbing
Cover Letters That Get
Interviews & Job Offers
Wendy S. Enelow
Master Resume Writer
Arnold G. Boldt
Certified Professional Resume Writer
Franklin Lakes, NJ
Copyright 2007 by Wendy S. Enelow and Arnold G. Boldt
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No-nonsense cover letters : the essential guide to creating attention-grabbing cover
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Contents
Introduction ................................................................................................................................... 7
Chapter 1: Simple Truths About Cover Letters ...................................................9

The 6 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components 10
Truth #2: Cover Letter Writing Is Sales 11
Truth #3: Cover Letter Writing Is All About Strategy 15
Truth #4: Targeted Letters Work Best 16
Truth #5: The Cover Letter Must Match the Resume 18
Truth #6: Each Circumstance Presents Its Own Challenges 22
Chapter 2: Simple Truths About Cover Letter Formatting and Design ................... 2 7
The 4 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Formatting and Design . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 28
Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components 28
Truth #2: Simple Designs Work Best 33
Truth #3: Bullet-Format Letters Highlight Your Skills and Achievements 36
Truth #4: Paragraph-Format Letters Tell Your Career Stories 39
10 Critical Mistakes to Avoid . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47
Chapter 3: Simple Truths About Writing Your Cover Letters ............................... 5 1

The 5 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 52
Truth #1: 4 Key Components Are Essential for Success 53
Truth #2: Its All About Positioning 59
Truth #3: There Are 5 Basic Types of Cover Letters 60
Truth #4: You Dont Have to Write in Order 66
Truth #5: The Language Should Be Different Than in Your Resume 72
Streamlining Your Writing Process . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .73
Chapter 4: Simple Truths About Electronic Cover Letters ................................................ 7 5
E-letters Work in Todays E-search Environment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 76
Capture Your Reader With the Subject Line . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 77
E-mail Letters Are Different Than Traditional Cover Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 78
Creating and Using ASCII Text Files . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 80
Sending Your Cover Letter as an E-mail Attachment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 83
Preparing Your Files for Transmission . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 83
Scannable Cover Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 86
Avoid These Critical Mistakes When Preparing Your E-cover Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 87
Chapter 5: Cover Letters for Accounting, Banking, and Finance Careers .................... 9 1
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 91
Keywords and Keyword Phrases . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 92
Sample Cover Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 93
Chapter 6: Cover Letters for Administrative and Clerical Careers .............................. 103
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 103
Keywords and Keyword Phrases . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 104
Sample Cover Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 105
Chapter 7: Cover Letters for Government Careers .......................................................... 111

Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 111
Chapter 8: Cover Letters for Healthcare and Social Service Careers ......................... 121
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 121
Chapter 9: Cover Letters for Hospitality and Food Service Careers ........................... 131
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 131
Chapter 10: Cover Letters for Human Resources and Training Careers ..................... 139
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 139
Chapter 11: Cover Letters for Law Enforcement and Legal Careers ........................... 149
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 149
Chapter 12: Cover Letters for Manufacturing and Operations Careers ...................... 157
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 157
Chapter 13: Cover Letters for Sales, Marketing, and Customer Service Careers .... 169
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 169
Chapter 14: Cover Letters for Skilled Trades Careers ................................................... 185
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 185
Chapter 15: Cover Letters for Teaching and Education Careers .................................. 195
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 195
Chapter 16: Cover Letters for Technology, Science, and Engineering Careers ......... 209
Success Factors #14 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 209
Appendix A: Cover Letter Writing Worksheet .................................................................... 223
Appendix B: Professional Keyword List .............................................................................. 227
Appendix C: List of Contributors ......................................................................................... 229
Index ........................................................................................................................................... 233
About the Authors ................................................................................................................... 239

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Introduction
Cover letters are often considered the plague of the job search. Most job
seekers spend a great deal of time and effort preparing a winning resume, and
then fail to appreciate just how important cover letters are to their successful
efforts. To ensure that you dont fall into this trap, weve written this book to
share our insider secrets to cover letter writing, design, formatting, and distribution.
If youre currently in the job market, weve got some great news for you!
According to the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, total employment in the United
States is expected to increase by 14.7 percent between the years 2004 and 2014
(www.bls.gov). As the numbers indicate, its a great time to be looking for a job,
whatever your particular situation (such as graduating college student, skilled
tradesperson, mid-level professional, senior-level executive, return-to-work mom,
or military veteran). Opportunities are everywhere, and your challenge is to
position yourself so that you can capture those opportunities and land a great
new job.
Developing a powerful cover letter to accompany your resume is key to
opening doors and generating interviews. Ultimately, cover letters and resumes
do not get jobs; people do. But by creating a set of documents that clearly
communicate who you are, what you can do, and how well you do it, you can
present yourself as a desirable candidate in the eyes of prospective employers.
Equipping yourself with one or more cover letters that complement a powerful
resume will instantly give you a distinct and measurable advantage over your
competition.
To help you achieve that competitive edge, weve created a one-of-a-kind
cover letter book that clearly and concisely guides you through the letter-writing
process. To be sure that this book is easy to use, weve cut through all the confusion
and gotten right down to brass tacks: our no-nonsense approach. Weve given
you the information you need, provided you with the worksheets to assemble
all of your information, demonstrated how and where to use that information,
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8 No-Nonsense Cover Letters
and included more than 100 sample cover letters addressing a wide array of
situations. When youre finished with this book, you should have a cover letter,
or perhaps a set of letters, that are powerful and polishedtrue no-nonsense
cover letters that position you to successfully pursue your career goals.
As you read this book, you will note references to No-Nonsense Resumes,
our companion book (also from Career Press), which provides you with similar
insights into the resume-writing process. We encourage you to consult that book
in preparing your resume and use the two books together in developing an
integrated and powerful approach to your job search documents.
Chapter 1
] Simple Truths About
Cover Letters
There was a time when cover letters were merely letters of transmittal.
They simply alerted the reader that the applicant was enclosing a resume and
was available for an interview. Today, however, as the job market has become
both more sophisticated and more competitive, the importance of cover letters
has changed dramatically.
Covers letters have evolved into a vital part of the package a job seeker presents
to a prospective employer. Well-constructed cover letters must simultaneously
complement your resume, address an employers job requirements, and
communicate your strengths to the hiring manager. In a word, your cover letters
must sell you as the ideal candidate for the job. As with your resume, cover letters
encompass a unique combination of creative language, careful planning and strategy,
and effective execution.
As professional resume writers, we follow a very systematic, no-nonsense
approach to cover letter writing that has helped tens of thousands of job seekers
grab the attention of employers, secure interviews, and achieve their career
goals. Now, were going to share that information with you in the first-ever, no-
nonsense guide to cover letter writing that gives you insider secrets to writing
polished, well-positioned, and powerful cover letters. If you follow the steps,
activities, and strategies outlined in this book, youll be able to prepare cover
letters that work hand-in-hand with your resume to offer employers sharp,
distinctive, on-target presentations that will generate interviews and offers. For
more information and advice on writing your resume, be sure to consult our
companion book, No-Nonsense Resumes (Career Press, 2006).
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The 6 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Writing

As you begin to write your cover letters, there are six key concepts that you
must understand. Professional resume writers live by these truths and understand
how critical they are in crafting cover letters that position applicants as attractive
candidates for the right career opportunities.
Truth #1: Effective cover letters contain 10 key components.
Truth #2: Cover letter writing is sales.
Truth #3: Cover letter writing is all about strategy.
Truth #4: Targeted letters work best.
Truth #5: The cover letter must match the resume.
Truth #6: Each circumstance presents its own challenges.
If you can truly grasp what these concepts mean and how they apply to your
particular job search situation, you will be able to write powerful letters that
will attract an employers attention and lead to interviews. Lets explore each of
these simple truths in much greater detail.
Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components

If its been a while since you have been engaged in an active job search, you
may well be asking yourself, Exactly what goes into a cover letter? What should
I say? Following is a list of the key elements every letter should contain,
followed by an example that effectively integrates all 10 components. Chapter 2
(design and formatting) and Chapter 3 (cover letter writing) deal with essential
format and content issues in much greater detail, but for now, remember to
include each of these items in your letters:
1. Your contact information: Name, phone number, and (personal)

e-mail address should appear at the top.
2. Date: The preferred format: December 12, 2006.
3. Inside address: The name and address of the person who will receive
the letter.
4. Reference line: This line is optional, but when used, should appear
directly below the inside address. It states the title of the position
for which you are applying and may include a reference code or job
number if applicable.
5. Salutation: This is the familiar, Dear Mr. Jones: or Dear Ms.
Smith:. If you dont know the name of the recipient, it might say,
Dear Hiring Authority: or Dear Sir/Madam:.
6. Opening paragraph: Who you are and why you are writing. The
more compelling this is, the better.
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7. Content/main body of the letter: Your unique skills and why you are
an ideal candidate for the job opening in question.
8. Closing paragraph/call to action: Ask for an interview or tell the
recipient that you will follow up soon to schedule an interview.
9. Closing: Sincerely, Respectfully, or another similarly appropriate
closing, followed by your signature.
10. Enclosures: Reference what other documents are enclosed in the
package (for example, resume, reference list, job application, and/
or leadership profile). Do not include anything that was not requested.
Note that this elementenclosuresis optional and does not
necessarily have to be included to make your letter effective.
The example on the following page illustrates the 10 key components of
every successful cover letter.
Truth #2: Cover Letter Writing Is Sales

Just as with resumes, cover letter writing is about sales, marketing, and
brand positioning. Envision yourself as a unique and special commodity: just
the right solution to a problem for employers who need the features and benefits
you have to offer. Your resume should reflect the best plan for marketing yourself
to those employers who have a demand for the skills and qualifications you
offer. If developed properly, your resume should serve you well throughout
your job search. In some instances, you may wish to tweak your resume to
emphasize a particular skillset or highlight an accomplishment especially relevant
to a particular job opening, but by and large, it will remain the same.
By contrast, when you write your cover letters, your goal should be to
demonstrate to a particular employer just how your unique skills and qualifications
relate to that firms specific needs. As such, each cover letter you write will be
unique, depending on the recipient and the specifics of the situation (job
description, your research on the company, or other information youve learned
about challenges facing the employer).
Think of the cover letter/resume package that you present to a prospective
employer as a piece of direct-mail advertising. Not unlike direct-mail pieces
that arrive in our mailboxes, the goal of the cover letter and resume package is
to grab the readers attention and prompt that person to act; namely, by reading
the cover letter and resume, and then offering the candidate the opportunity
for an interview.
The no-nonsense approach to the job search is a bit more subtle than that
used by mass advertisers in direct-mail campaigns. However, the underlying
strategy is the same: specifically, prompting the recipient to read and respond
to the material in a favorable manner. Your cover letter must capture the readers
interest and draw him or her into the resume, ultimately encouraging a decision-
maker (HR director or hiring manager) to decide, I want to speak to this
candidate!
Kno
Knoww Your A udience
The first step in writing your no-nonsense cover letter is to know your tar-
get audience and understand their needs and desires. Try to put yourself in the
employers shoes and recognize how the unique skills and qualifications you
offer will be able to address that employers specific needs. Your cover letter
should focus on your capabilities as they directly relate to the target companys
particular requirements.
If youre applying for a specific position, the job posting should give you a
great deal of information about what skills, knowledge, competencies, and other
qualities are essential. When youre applying to a company in the absence of a
specific job advertisement, you can learn a great deal about the organization,
its needs, and its challenges by researching the company on the Internet. This
will allow you to focus your letter on the skills and experiences you offer that
will help the employer meet those challenges.
Position Your self as T

ourself he Solution
The
In our companion book, No-Nonsense Resumes, we stressed the importance
of writing your resume in the first person. When you write your cover letters,
you still want the focus to be on you, the candidate, and you may use the first
person where appropriate. However, to be optimally effective, your cover letter
should position you as the solution to one or more of the employers challenges.
The prospective employer should feel that you are writing to him or her, that
you know what his or her firm needs, and that you can deliver what you promise.
For this reason, we recommend that you minimize the use of the personal
pronoun, I, especially at the beginning of a sentence or paragraph. The goal
is to highlight your qualifications for the job, while at the same time making the
employer believe that you understand the firms specific needs and can fulfill them.
Take a look at these two examples of opening paragraphs to better understand
what we mean:
Example #1: Overuse of I

Dear Ms. Smith:
I am most interested in the position of Customer Service Representative you
advertised in Sundays newspaper. I believe that I can perform this job very
well, and I have enclosed my resume, which highlights my skills and
qualifications.
Example #2: Same message, with focus on the employer

Dear Ms. Smith:
Your recent advertisement for a Customer Service Representative appears to
be an excellent match for my existing capabilities. My account relations
experience, organizational skills, and careful attention to detail are all consistent
with your requirements for this position, as youll note on my enclosed resume.
Examples 1 and 2 convey the same information, but notice how Example 2
flows much more smoothly and engages the reader more fully by the strategic
use of second-person pronouns (you, your, and so on).
Here are two more examples, from the middle paragraphs of a cover letter,
that also demonstrate the concept of focusing your letter on the employers
needs:
Example #3: Poorly placed first-person pronouns

I expedited customer orders at Medco, where I also resolved billing
discrepancies and tracked shipments. I also advised customers about
new products that were potentially beneficial to their business. I note that
these skills are similar to those mentioned in your job posting.
Example #4: Better sentence structure and use of pronouns

Among my duties at Medco, I expedited orders, resolved billing
discrepancies, and tracked shipments, as well as promoting new products
to existing accounts. All of these functions directly relate to the duties
outlined in your posting.
The goal is to make the reader feel like the focus is on him or her, even
though your objective is to tout your own skills and qualifications.
Taking this concept one step further, your ultimate goal is to sell yourself to
potential employers. Draw the reader into the resume by referencing one or
more of your accomplishments that are clearly relevant to the employers specific
hiring needs. Demonstrate how you can be a solution to a challenge facing the
business. Both of these concepts are demonstrated in this example:
Example #5: Selling yourself into your next job

Youll notice on my enclosed resume that while at Automotive Electric, Inc.,
I was instrumental in reducing scrap and reworks on the armature winding
line by 83%, leading to annualized savings approaching $500K. I
understand that your firm is aggressively pursuing Lean Manufacturing
initiatives driven by cost-reduction programs. My demonstrated success in
achieving tangible results in this area will be an asset to your
manufacturing operations as you seek to advance these goals.
Also inherent in the previous example is the Sell It; Dont Tell It concept,
which is a compelling way to communicate your value and the benefits you can
bring to a new employer. Rather than simply telling your reader what you have
done, you want to sell what youve accomplished and contributed. Here are
some more examples:
Example #6: Sell It; Dont Tell It

( Telling It:
I performed customer service and inside sales duties for a firm
selling hydraulic valves.
( Selling It:
As an Account Manager for Valiant Valves, I maintained a 93%
customer satisfaction rating (second highest in the department)
and was the leader among a 10-member team in selling
additional products and services to my existing account base.
( Telling It:
I handled general ledger, accounts payable, and payroll
functions for a large company.
( Selling It:
In my capacity as a Senior Staff Accountant, I managed
general ledger and accounts payable for a $26 million
manufacturing operation, plus administering payroll for 120
hourly and 14 salaried employees.
Notice how each of the Sell It examples sells the candidates capabilities by
offering quantitative information about the scope of that individuals responsibilities
and measurable results. As you read the later chapters of this book, you will see
numerous additional examples of how this sales principle can be powerfully applied
to virtually any career field.
Truth #3: Cover Letter Writing Is All About Strategy

When we talk about cover letter strategy, its really all about understanding
who your audience is and what approach will be most appealing to a particular
audience. The tone, content, and format of your cover letters will necessarily
change based on what you know about the reader. Is that person a recruiter or
does he or she work for the company? In Chapter 3 we discuss in detail how to
create letters that are appropriate for each of these different recipients. For
now, just know that its important to understand that the message you commu-
nicate and the information you share will differ from one audience to another.
The lions share of cover letters that you will write over the course of your
job search will most likely be directed to companiesthe firms that would
actually employ you, and many of those will be for specific job openings. These
letters should be targeted to the specific opportunity, and you should avoid
sending a generic, one-size-fits-all cover letter in such circumstances.
The best way to approach these letters is to carefully read the job posting
and identify how your qualifications match what the employer is seeking.
Examine how your skills and accomplishments demonstrate your ability to fulfill
the employers requirements as stated in the job description. Then write a cover
letter that sells your capabilities to that specific employer for that specific job.
Generally, bullet points work best when you want to convey a list of specific
qualifications, skills, projects, or achievements. Paragraphs, on the other hand,
allow you to tell one or more brief stories about how your experiences relate to
the employers needs.
Unique Strategies for Writing to Recruiters

Recruiters are generally in a hurry and, with a few exceptions, they only get
paid if they find the ideal candidate for their customer, the employer that they
represent. Note that we said they represent the employer, not the job seeker.
This is a vitally important concept to remember because the recruiters motivation
lies completely in satisfying the hiring company. For this reason, cover letters
directed to recruiters should be succinct and to the point, so bullet-format
letters are often your best choice.
You may also want to include information in a letter to a recruiter that
many experts would advise against including in a letter written directly to an
employer. This might include information about your salary history or salary
requirements, geographic preferences, and availability for travel. That type of
information will help the recruiter match you to an appropriate position and
not waste his or her, your, or the employers time. However, when writing directly
to a prospective employer, offering this information in an initial cover letter
can harm your chances of employment.
Youll read more about the differences in company and recruiter letters in
Chapter 3. For now, just remember that the recruiter is an agent for an employer,
so you should reference your client or your clients firm instead of you
and your company when writing recruiter letters.
During the course of your job search, there are a number of other audiences
you may write to, under a variety of different circumstances. These may include
broadcast letters to recruiters or companies and networking letters to friends
or professional contacts. You will find these covered in detail when you read
about design and format (Chapter 2) and the actual writing of your letters
(Chapter 3). Understanding the different types of letters and how to use them
when writing to various audiences will help you to prepare letters that hit their
target, grab attention, and generate interviews.
Truth #4: Targeted Letters Work Best

Broadcast letters and networking letters are the best examples of cover
letters that are not targeted. Theyre more general letters, written and sent to
more general audiences that may not have any specific job openings. Think of a
radio or TV broadcast that reaches thousands (perhaps millions) of people
with the same message. Similarly, you might send a broadcast cover letter (along
with your resume) to dozens (or possibly hundreds) of potential employers.
However, the vast majority of cover letters you will write are likely to be
targeted toward a specific job opening with a particular company. For these situations,
youll want to create cover letters that respond directly to the employers needs
and convince the hiring authority that you are a strong candidate for that particular
position.
To accomplish this, carefully examine each job posting to identify the specific
requirements of the position and, when possible, research the companys mission
statement and values, its corporate culture, and any critical challenges they are
facing. This information will help you to better understand the employer and
how you can deliver value to that company. Whats more, in todays Internet-
based world, finding that information can be as easy as a few keystrokes!
Once youve identified the key requirements for the jobwhat the employer
sees as most importantyou can develop bullet points, or short paragraphs,
that tie your experiences to the companys specific needs. Here are two examples:
Example #7: Bullet point (employers stated requirement in bold)

Developing and managing budgets: As Director of the Erie County
(PA) Library System, I was accountable for an $18 million annual operating
budget. As Library Director in Meadville, I developed a five-year capital
improvement plan and championed a three-year technology plan.
Example #8: Paragraph style (telling a brief story):
While reviewing information on your Website, I noted that you are pursuing
an array of fund-raising initiatives. Shortly after assuming the role of
Executive Director for the Healing Education & Arts Retreat of
Tonawanda (HEART), I established the Assistant Director of Marketing &
Community Relations role, recruited a talented professional, and charged
her with raising community awareness. Through a series of special events,
we boosted membership, increased program participation, and developed a
strategy for promoting our spacious facility as a meeting venue, creating an
entirely new revenue stream for the organization.
You will find many more examples of bullet points and paragraphs in subsequent
chapters, with samples specific to your career field in Chapters 5-16.
Get Contact Information

Ideally, your cover letters should always be directed to a specific individual.
Hopefully, that persons name and contact information will be listed in the ad
or posting. When its not, some applicants will take the extra step of doing
some detective work to find the name of the appropriate person. Sometimes,
this is as simple as visiting the firms Website and finding the name (and click-
through e-mail address) of the director of human resources, the general sales
manager, the VP of manufacturing, or any one of a number of other individuals
you may want to contact.
There are also directories at the library that list key people at various
companies, or you can call the company and ask the receptionist, Who is the
chief marketing person with your company? What is his or her proper job title?
How would I best direct a letter to his or her attention? This works more often
than you might think, because the receptionist is there to provide information
and be helpful. Should you encounter an automated, menu-driven phone system,
with a bit of persistence you can usually navigate the system to acquire the
information you need.
However, we dont recommend spending all of your time sleuthing for the
right contact at a firm. If you absolutely cant find the name of a specific
individual, youll want to follow the instructions in the job posting or possibly
look for a link to career opportunities on the firms Website. If youre in doubt
about what to use for a salutation, we prefer Dear Hiring Authority, Dear
Recruiter, or Dear Sir/Madam as opposed to the outdated To Whom It
May Concern. Of course, the rest of your letter should follow all the principles
previously mentioned in addressing specific job requirements and connecting
your skills and accomplishments to that employers needs.
Truth #5: The Cover Letter Must Match the Resume

If you followed our advice in No-Nonsense Resumes, you should already
have a resume that portrays the best you for the type of position(s) you are
seeking. Now, your challenge is to write cover letters that complement and
support your resume. Specifically, this means that your cover letters must
match your resume and be targeted to the same types and levels of positions.
Consider this: A senior manager uses different language, tone, and style
when writing his or her resume and cover letter than an engineer or technology
professional does. Likewise, a skilled tradesperson has a different vocabulary
than a school teacher. All must use proper grammar and spelling, while at the
same time staying true to their own experiences and the environments in which
they work.
Your cover letter should also complement your resume without repeating
the exact same information youve already included in your resume. You do
want to connect the reader to your resume by highlighting relevant points, but
try to avoid using, verbatim, the same words that appear in the resume. Read
the examples and youll see exactly what we mean:
Example #9: Paragraph styleovertly directing reader to the resume:

During the 1990s, I led a creative team with Epstein & Partners, LLP,
where I successfully managed PR campaigns supporting the launch of new
consumer products, food products, and business-to-business equipment.
All of these campaigns delivered exceptional results for my clients as
outlined on the attached resume.
Example #10: Bullet stylereferences to past employers subtly encourages

reader to flip the page and read the resume:
Among my experiences directly relevant to your needs are the following:
Full-charge bookkeeping for manufacturing, professional services,
and retail sales firms. (Andrews & Arthur, LLC)
Preparation of sales, income, and payroll tax filings, as well as
consultation with clients on tax-planning issues. (GMPK)
Implementation of automated accounting applications for a variety
of small business clients. (Thomas Williams, CPA)
Keywords Are Critical

Using keywords is one of the best ways to link your resume and your cover
letters. In simple terms, keywords are those buzz words found in each and every
profession. They identify the essential skills, knowledge, and expertise that
distinguish someone in a particular field. For example, keywords for a sales
professional include territory management, account management, sales
presentations, sales negotiations, product management, and many more.
Keywords for a bookkeeper include accounts payable, accounts receivable,
payroll processing, general ledger, tax filings, and more. You probably already
know what the keywords are for your current jobyou use them every day
but theyve become so second nature to your day-to-day activities that you
might not recognize their importance.
The use of the proper keywords in your cover letters will not only help
match your letters to your resume, but will also increase your chances of landing
an interview if your cover letter and resume package gets uploaded into an
electronic database. When this happens, both your resume and cover letter will
be scanned by specialized software that searches for keywords that are relevant
to a particular position. Once the software identifies the right keywords in your
documents, you will be chosen to move on to the next phase in the candidate
selection process.
The Final Presentation

One final word on matching your cover letters to your resume: In order to
present prospective employers with an attractive, integrated package, the fonts
(typestyles) and overall design of your cover letters should coordinate with
your resume. In the example that appears on the following pages, notice how
the graphic design used for the candidates contact information is consistent
between the resume and cover letter. Note, also, that the same distinctive font
(in this case, Bookman Old Style) has been used for both the letter and the
resume, and that bold print and italics have been used to highlight achievements
and notable information in each document.
Whether these documents are printed on fine resume stock (always use the
same paper for both cover letter and resume) or transmitted electronically, the
entire presentation comes together to leave a lasting impression on the reader,
one that will ideally lead to an interview for you, the job candidate.
Truth #6: Each Circumstance Presents Its Own Challenges

There are many different circumstances in which job seekers may find
themselves, and each one carries its own challenges when it comes to writing
cover letters. For some of the more common challenges, weve given you a
few key tips to point you in the right direction. Youll find much more
information about these challenges and others in the 100-plus sample cover
letters throughout this book.
If your challenges are especially unique and you need even more information
to guide you in preparing a strong resume and compelling cover letter, we suggest
you consult the following resources, all of which were authored or co-authored
by Wendy Enelow:
No-Nonsense Guide to Resume Writing (Career Press)
Expert Resumes for Career Changers (JIST Publishing)
Expert Resumes for People Returning To Work (JIST Publishing)
Expert Resumes for Military-to-Civilian Transitions (JIST
Publishing)
Best Resumes and Letters for Ex-Offenders (Impact Publications)
College Grad Resumes to Land $75,000+ Jobs (Impact
Publications)
(You can find all of these books and more at www.wendyenelow.com.)
Career Change
In any career-change scenario, you should be looking forward, not back.
Your resume should focus on your future career objective and how the skills
youve acquired thus far have prepared you for such an opportunity. Likewise,
your cover letters should be written to match your qualifications with your
current goals, featuring your transferable skills and highlighting keywords that
relate to the new career field you wish to pursue.
A common career change is transition from the military to the civilian
workforce. The most important thing in this situation is to think in civilian terms
and characterize your skills and achievements using language a civilian can
understand. Experience making critical decisions under highly stressful
conditions, providing leadership to 30 subordinates in the field, and exercising
independent judgment without direct day-to-day supervision accurately describes
what an infantry officer does in combat. But these same skills are applicable to a
variety of supervisory roles in civilian life.
We suspect that most Military Occupational Specialties (MOSs) are

somewhat easier than an infantry officers to translate into terms a civilian will
find meaningful. Procurement, logistics, fleet maintenance, and facilities
management are all important military functions, and each of them parallels
similar job opportunities in the civilian world.
If your goal is to move from not-for-profit into for-profit, private industry,
or vice versa, remember that fund-raising is sales and sales is fund-raising. Each
requires the same core skill sets (for example, building relationships, presenting,
negotiating, and closing). Likewise, a budget is a budget, regardless of the funding
source, and serving a constituency is really just another name for customer
service. Simply recognize who your audience is and write your letter using the
language and keywords that the reader will understand to be relevant to his or
her particular hiring needs.
Similarly, if you plan to transition into (or out of) a teaching career, recognize
the transferable skills you offer. For example, teaching and corporate training
have strong similarities (whichever direction youre moving), and life experiences
can offer some interesting insights that can be brought into the classroom. Once
again, consider keywords that relate to your new objective and tailor your cover
letters so that they resonate with potential new employers and entice them to
act (offering you an interview).
New Graduate
A new graduate can be a traditional student who progressed directly from
high school to college and is now ready for the real world. A new graduate
can also be someone who just completed a degree while holding down a full-
time job, and who has significant work experience to go along with a freshly
minted diploma. Each scenario has its own special considerations.
If youre a recent graduate with no significant professional experience, make
the most out of any internship, co-op, or summer job experiences youve had.
Highlight on-campus activities that demonstrate your leadership skills (for
example, student government, club officer, or intramural sports). And be sure
to feature your technology skills, as they are relevant to almost any career track
in todays e-based business world and economy.
If youre an adult learner, who worked for several years and then returned
to school, emphasize that you offer the best of both worldsyour recent
education thats up-to-date and leading-edge, combined with your experience
and maturity. You have current knowledge and the wisdom to make the most of
it. This places you in an extremely favorable position in the market.
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For those of you returning to work after an extended absence, dont worry
about addressing employment gaps in your cover letter. Hopefully, your resume
is structured in a way that either camouflages the gaps or effectively deals with
them. Once you get to the interview, there will be ample opportunity to explain
your circumstances and the reasons for any gaps. However, there are individuals
who have been out of the workforce for years and this section is written
specifically for them.
If youve been on the mommy (or daddy) track, but are now ready to
return to the workforce, it may be effective to feature volunteer activities youve
participated in that demonstrate your leadership, organizational, and interpersonal
skills. Highlight things such as serving on the advisory board for a charity or
preschool, as an officer of the PTA, or as a scout leader. Some creative candidates
even use their expertise in managing a household budget as evidence of strong
financial management and organizational skills. Also, dont be afraid to draw
on professional skills developed before you left the traditional workforce, even
if they seem dated.
If youre returning to work after an extended illness, or coping with a physical
disability, focus on what you can do and dont dwell on things you cant do. In
most cases, youll have some legal protection against discrimination due to your
disability and many employers are enthusiastic about employing a motivated
worker who genuinely appreciates the opportunity to work.
Ex-offenders perhaps face the toughest challenge when making the transition
out of prison and into the workforce. Our best advice is that you should not
disclose the fact that you were incarcerated on your resume or in your cover
letter. You may choose to highlight work experience or training completed
inside the fence, but do so in a manner that does not immediately communicate
that you were in prison. Rather, save that discussion for an in-person interview
where you can own up to this life-altering experience and talk about what
youve learned and how youve grown from it. As mentioned earlier in this
chapter, consult Best Resumes and Letters for Ex-Offenders (Impact Publications)
for more advice if youre in this situation.
Relocation
Relocation could mean that youre planning a move to pursue new career
options or simply moving to a better area for personal reasons. It could also
mean that you are the trailing spouse. Your significant other has landed an
opportunity just too good to pass up, and you are the one who needs to find a
new job in a new city.
The key in these situations is to convey to the prospective employer that
you are committed to the new location, either due to family ties, your love of
the area, or recognition of the career potential offered in the new locale. Its
helpful if you have an established address in the new location, even if you have
to use a friends while youre transitioning. That way, it looks to employers like
youre already there, which they will view as a positive.
Laid Off/Fired From Last Job

In this day and age, layoffs, unfortunately, have become common enough
that theres little stigma remaining to being laid off, so dont be self-conscious
about it. Its happened to hundreds of thousands of people, so youre certainly

not alone! On the other hand, a termination is always a delicate situation to
handle. For either scenario, the best approach is to accentuate the positive and
de-emphasize the negative. Your cover letters should focus on your skills and
achievements, and possibly your longevity with the company. In the case of a
termination, its best to save the discussion of how and why you left your last
job for the interview rather than in your resume or cover letter.
Coaching you on how to best deal with these issues in an interview is beyond
the scope of this book. If you do find yourself in this situation, here are some
wonderful resources that we strongly recommend:
Nail the Job Interview (Impact Publications)
The $100,000 Job Interview (Impact Publications)
How To Choose the Right Person for the Right Job Every Time
(McGraw-Hill)
Knock Em Dead (Adams Media)
(You can find all of these books and more at www.wendyenelow.com. For a
copy of Knock Em Dead, visit www.amazon.com or your local bookstore.)
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As recently as 10 years ago, if you spent less than three to five years in one
job, you were considered a job-hopper. By todays standards, five years with
one company qualifies as long-term employment! Consequently, what can be
characterized as job-hopping has shifted over the years, and many professionals
now work in occupations and industries where moving from one company to
another is the norm.
That said, if you perceive that you may be viewed as a job-hopper by
prospective employers, you may want to consider a functional format for your
resume that emphasizes your diverse experience and flexibility. Showing that
you can adapt easily to new work environments can be seen as a positive by
dynamic organizations undergoing significant changes. You may be able to cast
yourself as a change agent, or at the very least as someone who embraces
change. Then, be sure that your cover letters reflect the same messages as your
resume and embrace the same concepts such as adaptability to change.
Summar y
Now that weve explored the six essential truths about cover letters, well
move on to vital information about cover letter design and format (Chapter 2),
cover letter writing (Chapter 3), and the electronic transmission of cover letters
(Chapter 4). Following that, Chapters 516 offer more than 100 cover letter
samples that you can use to create your own winning letters that open doors,
generate interviews, and land great new opportunities.
Chapter 2
Cover Letter Formatting and Design
When developing your cover letters, there are two important considerations
youll always want to keep in mind: format and design. As with your resume,
these elements are essential in preparing your presentation to prospective
employers. If youve chosen a unique design for your resume that gives you a
distinctive presentation, youll want your cover letters to be consistent with
that design choice so that you present a complete and professional package.
To begin designing your cover letters, ask yourself these questions:
1. Which cover letter format is most appropriate for me to use?

Bullet format? Paragraph format?
2. Does the design of my cover letter match my resume? Does the
typestyle coordinate with my resume? Does the visual appearance
of my letter complement my resume?
As you review the cover letter samples in this book, youll see dramatic
differences in presentation, from conservative to avant garde. A banker or
financial analyst would probably design a cover letter on the conservative end
of the spectrum, while a media sales representative or graphic artist might want
to project a more distinctive visual image. As you read this and later chapters,
you should develop a sense of where on that continuumfrom conservative to
very uniqueits best for your cover letter and resume package to be positioned.
This will depend not only on your specific profession (for example, finance,
sales, graphic arts, engineering, logistics, or production), but also the specific
industry that you are targeting (for example, aerospace, telecommunications,
film/television, publishing, or education).
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The 4 Simple Truths About Cover Letter

Formatting and Design
When youre deciding what design and format to use for your cover letters,
youll want to consider these four essential truths. They are critical to competitively
positioning yourself within the job search market by creating letters that are
distinctive and memorable.

Truth #2: Simple designs work best.
Truth #3: Bullet-format letters highlight your skills and
achievements.
Truth #4: Paragraph-format letters tell your career stories.
Now, well explore each of these truths in much greater detail so youll
understand how to integrate these concepts when designing and formatting your
cover letters.
Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components

As we mentioned in Chapter 1, there are 10 key components that should be
part of every effective cover letter, regardless of the particular format and design
choices you make. These key elements include:
1. Contact information: The whole point of sending out your cover letters
and resumes is to convince prospective employers to contact you for interviews.
That being the case, you want to make it as easy as possible for them to reach
you. It is essential to include your name, address, phone number, and (personal)
e-mail address at the top of each of your cover letters (as well as on your resume).
In the typewriter era, your address at the top of the page was neat and
clean, but generally rather bland in appearance. Today, with all the advantages
of modern word-processing software, you can now design a unique and attractive
letterhead for yourself. A very effective approach is to copy and paste the
contact information from your resume onto a blank page and save that document
as a letterhead that you can reuse each time you need to create a new cover
letter. Here are a few examples:
Creating your own letterhead using the heading from your resume
resume::
Example #1:
GARY LUCIANO
716 Wood Lane ~ Rochester, New York 14699
(585) 723-0000 [email protected]
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Example #2:
MICHELLE S. BATES
24 Bramblebury Lane
Rochester, New York 14699
(585) 544-3333
Example #3:
RYAN R. MITCHELSON [email protected]

2140 Endicott Drive Rochester, New York 14699 585-461-8308
2. Date: Your cover letters should include the date the letter is to be mailed,
and the preferred format is as follows: December 10, 2006. The date appears
just below your contact information and above the inside address (which indicates
the recipient of the letter). Depending on the overall format of your letter (see
Truth #2Simple Designs Work Best later in this chapter), the date can be
either flush with the left margin if youre using a block format cover letter (see
Karl George sample cover letter on page 34) or indented 4 inches from the left
margin if youre using an indented paragraph format cover letter (see Thomas
Vincent sample letter on page 35).
3. Inside address: Most frequently, the inside address will include the
complete name, title, and business address of the individual to whom you are
addressing the letter. This is the most common format and the recommended
format when you have all of that information. See example #4:
Example #4: Standard format with complete address:

Mr. Claude Nettles
General Sales Manager
Industrial Supply Associates, LLC
1234 Business Park Road
Roanoke, VA 22334
Dear Mr. Nettles:
In todays job market, however, you will often find yourself frequently
responding to an e-mail address or fax number, without knowing the complete
address. Examples #5 and #6 show best how to handle such situations.
Example #5: When you only know the e-mail address:

Ms. Rose Gardner
Executive Search Consultant
[email protected]
Dear Ms. Gardner:
Example #6: When you only know the fax number:

Mr. Randy Gardner
Hiring Director
Fax: (703) 555-9299
4. Reference line: If you decide to include a line that references the position
or job posting number for which you are applying, place it between the inside
address and the salutation.
5. Salutation: The salutation is the line that says, Dear Mr. Jones: You
can use Dear Hiring Authority: or Dear Sir/Madam: if you dont have a
contact name. Note that its accepted practice to refer to all women as Ms.,
unless someone specifically refers to herself as Mrs.
Following is an integrated presentation showing the inside address, reference
line, and salutation as they would appear together.
Example #7: Inside address and salutation with reference line included:
Mr. Sam Sizer, CEO
Amalgamated Industries, Inc.
22 Chester Boulevard, Suite 1202
Rye, NY 15983
Re: Executive Assistant (Posting #06-123EA)
Dear Mr. Sizer:
6. Opening paragraph: Generally, your introductory paragraph will be short

(one or two sentences) and will communicate why youre writing to that
individual (for example, in response to an advertisement or job posting, to
express your interest in employment opportunities with that company, or to
follow up on a referral). As youll read in Chapter 3, there are a variety of
strategies and tactics you can adapt for writing your own opening paragraph
that will help to distinguish you from the crowd of other candidates.
7. Content/main body of the letter: The main body of your letters is where
youll include the real substancehighlights of your skills, qualifications,
employment experiences, achievements, projects, and more that are most
relevant to a particular position or company. This is the section that you will
use to sell yourself and capture an interview. Much of Chapter 3 focuses on the
strategies and wording that you can use to create powerful letters that encourage
readers to review your resume and extend the opportunity for an interview.
8. Closing paragraph/call to action: The closing paragraph of your letter
should explicitly ask for an interview or state your plan for following up whenever
possible. Examples of both are shown in Chapter 3. However, there will be
instances (for example, blind post office box) in which you will be unable to
follow up. In those situations, all you can do is wait to hear back from the
company or recruiter.
9. Closing/signature: Immediately following your closing paragraph is the
complimentary closing, usually Sincerely, Respectfully, or something
similarly appropriate. Then add three to four line spaces for your signature,
and type your name.
Example #8 shows a closing paragraph and complimentary closing.
Example #8: Closing Paragraph, with complimentary closing and signature:

I am convinced that I can make a significant contribution to your
accounting team and would appreciate the opportunity to discuss how
my capabilities can serve your needs. Please contact me via phone or
e-mail to establish a mutually convenient time for an initial
conversation.
Sincerely,
Martin K. Morrison
(your hand-written signature)
Martin K. Morrison
10. Enclosures: Including the word enclosure at the end of your letter
(two spaces below your typed name) is optional. Whether you mention it or
not, youll be enclosing (or attaching) a copy of your resume, and thats
understood. However, youll find that most people do include the word
enclosure at the very end of a letter. Here are two examples:
Example #9: Simple reference to an enclosure:

Enclosure
Example #10: Detailed listing of enclosures:

Enclosures: Leadership Profile
Reference List
Job Application
An important note about enclosures: Do not include anything that was not
requested. Your resume and cover letter are an introduction to who you are
and the value you bring to an organization. Keep it simple and dont overwhelm
someone with lots of paperwork they did not request. Trust us when we tell you
that this will not work to your advantage!
Now that weve detailed each of the key elements that are essential to the
design and format of effective cover letters, its important to see a visual repre-
sentation. Refer to the next page for a sample cover letter for Dennis Gregory
that you first saw in Chapter 1. Weve repeated this example to illustrate the
specific placement of each of these essential elements in a professionally
designed and formatted cover letter. Use this template as the foundation to
create your own distinctive cover letters.
Truth #2: Simple Designs Work Best

As already mentioned, the purpose of the cover letter and resume package
is to get you noticed by an employer and called for an interview. Thats it and
nothing more. Resumes and letters do not get jobs; only people do! To be sure
that you get interviews, youll want to keep your cover letters inviting, readable,
and not overly designed. Remember, youre not creating a brochure or
advertisement; youre writing a business letter. Keep it professional!
Font Selection
The first consideration is to select a font (or typestyle) that complements
your resume and is easy to read. Most likely, this means using the same font
you used for the body of your resume. Commonly used fonts include Tahoma,
Verdana, Arial, Bookman Old Style, or Times New Roman. All of these styles
are included in the most recent versions of Microsoft Office or have equivalents
in other word-processing applications. As such, you can be relatively certain
that when you e-mail your resume and cover letter, the integrity of the font will
be retained and your e-mail wont come through as garbage.
To be sure that your cover letter is easy to read, we recommend that you
use a type size of 1012 points. Why the range in size? Well, different fonts are
larger than others. For example, 10-point Bookman Old Style is easy to read;
10-point Garamond is a little tougher. Conversely, 12-point Bookman is a bit
too large and too elementary in appearance, while 12-point Times New Roman is
quite readable. You may want to experiment with different fonts and sizes to
see which you like best, which looks most professional, and which accommodates
the text of your cover letter the best. To help you decide which font is right for
you, refer to the Font Comparison Chart on page 49 at the end of this chapter.
Format Selection
The other important consideration to keeping the design of your cover letters
simple is whether to use a block format or an indented-paragraph format. Each is
completely acceptable; your choice really depends on your personal preferences.
Every element of the block-style letter is flush with the left margin, including
the date, signature lines, and opening lines of each new paragraph. In contrast,
the indented-paragraph style will have the date and signature lines indented 4
inches from the left margin, with the opening line of each paragraph indented a
quarter-inch or half-inch, depending on your preference.
On the following two pages are sample cover letters that illustrate a block-
format cover letter and an indented-paragraph cover letter. See which style you
like best and which one best complements your resume design and format.
(Indented Paragraph Format Cover Letter)
THOMAS VINCENT, CPA

616 Penfair Drive x Penfield, New York 14526 x 585-383-8666 x [email protected]
May 6, 2006
Constellation Brands, Inc.

300 Willowbrook Office Park
Fairport, New York 14450
[email protected]
Dear Hiring Authority:
Your recent postings on Monster.com for a Tax Compliance Manager and a Tax Manager are
both of great interest. Capitalizing on over eight years of tax accounting experience with a leading local CPA
firm, I believe my knowledge and expertise are good matches for either of these positions. Therefore, I have
attached for your consideration a resume that outlines my qualifications.
Some key points you may find of particular interest include:
x Supervising tax accounting staff, including scheduling and managing projects,

reviewing a variety of tax filings, and establishing departmental policy and
procedure.
x Ensuring that returns are filed in an accurate and timely manner.
x Advising a broad array of business clients on strategies for minimizing tax

liabilities.
x Dealing with tax issues relevant to corporations operating in multiple states.
x Representing clients interests during IRS audits and tax compliance

proceedings.
x Utilizing leading-edge tax software to address client needs.
In addition, I have distinguished myself as someone who has exceptional customer relations skills and
the capacity to balance multiple projects during the fast-paced tax season at a busy CPA firm. I would enjoy
meeting with you to discuss how I can meet or exceed your needs for either of these positions and encourage
you to contact me to arrange an initial interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you soon.
Sincerely,
Thomas Vincent, CPA
Enclosure
Truth #3: Bullet-format Letters Highlight

Your Skills and Achievements
Bullet-format cover letters have become increasingly popular over the past
decade. In essence, the bullet format is one in which a cover letter is composed of
an introductory paragraph followed by several bullet points that highlight key
information the writer (job seeker) wishes to convey to the reader (HR represen-
tative, hiring manager, or recruiter). One significant advantage of bullet-format
cover letters is that they appear more readable. Employers who are quickly
reviewing cover letters and resumes can zero in on the bullet points and get the
essence of your message, even if thats all they read during their initial screening.
There are two situations in which bullet-format cover letters are most effective.
The first is when you want to briefly highlight a list of achievements or work
experiences that relate to the types of positions for which you are applying. The
second is when you want to respond point-for-point to the specific qualifications
an employer is seeking in a candidate.
The first scenario, listing skills and experiences that you, as a candidate,
have to offer, works well for broadcast or networking letters. Broadcast letters
(also referred to as cold-call letters) are those that you would send to employers
and/or recruiters when you are not applying for a specific opening, but are
broadcasting your availability and key capabilities by sending essentially the
same letter to a mailing list of contacts.
Networking letters are those that you would send to acquaintances (warm
networking contacts) or people youd like to meet (cold networking contacts).
The goal is to advise these contacts of your job search and ask for their assistance.
Here is a set of sample bullet points as they might appear in either a broadcast
or networking letter:
Example #11: Bullet points highlighting skills and experience:

Some of the key talents that I can bring to a position with your firm include:
Experience administering Defined Benefit and Defined Contribution

Pension Plans which include monitoring compliance, tracking
terminations and new submissions, and communicating with plan
sponsors, participants, and accountants.
General Accounting experience that includes exposure to Accounts

Payable, Accounts Receivable, Payroll, and General Ledger. I have also
prepared financial reports and projections, and participated in budget-
planning activities.
Experience coordinating benefits enrollment including processing

applications, communicating with employees on key issues, and resolving
problems for employees.
The other scenario in which bullet-format letters are most useful is when
responding to specific job requirements. Often, a job posting will include its
own set of bullet points, outlining the requirements the employer seeks in a
candidate. In such cases, it works to your advantage to tailor your cover letter
so that it answers each bullet point from the job posting with an example of
your skills, experiences, or achievements that demonstrate your capabilities.
By following this pattern, you can clearly communicate your value as it specifically
relates to the employer.
In the following example, first look at the employers requirements (essential
duties) and then see how bullet points from the corresponding cover letter
answer those requirements. (Note that in this example, only the cover letter
bullet points should be included in the actual letter; not the Essential Duties
as outlined by the employer.)
Example #12: Job PostingEssential Duties:

Plans the annual budget and controls expenses for the department;
enforces cost controls and establishes cost measurements to ensure
budget compliance.
Develops goals and objectives of the department; directs and

administers the work performed by the department; and ensures projects
are completed on time.
Hires, supervises, and assigns work to subordinates; mentors

employees; and evaluates team members performance.
Plans and allocates resources to ensure efficient operation of the

organization.
Establishes long-range goals, objectives, and overall direction for the

department; monitors and reviews strategic plans; ensures that long-
range objectives are met.
Provides information on key issues and trends to community groups,

organizations, and media on a regular basis.
Corresponding cover letter bullet points:

Budgeting and cost controls. Faced with cuts from primary funding
sources, I contained costs by exploring innovative ways of delivering
services and developing revenue alternatives.
Articulating goals and objectives. As Executive Director of the Finger

Lakes Collaborative, I established a vision for future development, created a
capital improvement plan that was completed two years ahead of schedule,
and championed a leading-edge technology plan.
Hiring, supervising, and evaluating employees. The selection and

retention of key personnel have always been a vital component of my
leadership success. I have also endeavored to be a mentor and coach to
those under my supervision, helping them achieve their professional
potential.
Planning and allocating resources. As part of addressing budgeting and

funding issues, I have always been mindful of utilizing both physical assets
and human resources to most efficiently deliver services.
Communicating policies, standards, and objectives. Throughout my
career, I have identified both deficiencies and best practices related to
service delivery, and developed strategies for improving processes and
implementing these improvements.
Providing information on key issues to the community. For the past

13 years, my high-profile leadership positions have encompassed a heavy
schedule of public speaking as well as one-to-one communication with key
stakeholders.
One other variation on the bullet-format cover letter is the comparison, or

T-chart, letter. This style shows the employers requirements and the
candidates qualifications side-by-side in a chart. This format is less common
than the others already illustrated, but you may want to use it in certain situa-
tions in which you want to explicitly demonstrate how your skills match an
employers needs. An example of a T-chart appears below:
Example #13: T-chart letter with employers requirements and candidates

skills:
Your Requirements: My Relevant Qualifications:
- Lean Six Sigma Certification - Green Belt Certified; currently

pursuing Black Belt
- Experience with Kaizan Events - Championed four successful
Kaizan events over a three-
year period
- Ten years of Manufacturing - Five years as machine
Experience operator, followed by seven
years as production supervisor
- Proficient in MS Project - Advanced training and
practical experience with
MS Project
- ISO-9000 Experience - More than 12 years in QS-9000
environment (auto industry
equivalent of ISO-9000)
One of the biggest advantages of using bullet-format or T-chart cover letters

is their modularity. In other words, you can easily remove one bullet from an
existing letter and plug in a new bullet to quickly modify it when responding
to a different, but related, position. As youll learn in Chapter 3, when we discuss
writing your cover letters, you may want to create several prototype, or general,
cover letters that encompass the key points you will communicate to prospective
employers. Then, as you respond to specific job postings, you can easily modify
these bullet-format prototype letters to be more relevant to particular openings
by adding, subtracting, and/or reordering the sequence of your bullets. If you
are applying for several opportunities each week, this approach can be very
efficient.
The one disadvantage of the bulleted format is that it can significantly reduce
the amount of information you can include in a one-page cover letter. Your
bullet points must be concise and to-the-point in order to have the desired
impact. If your experiences require more of a narrative, storytelling approach,
the paragraph format may be your best choice.
Examples of bullet-format, indented cover letters are shown on pages 40,
41, and 42.
Truth #4: Paragraph-Format Letters Tell Your Career Stories

There will be instances when either the requirements of a position or the
circumstances of your work history are best presented in a narrative or storytelling
approach. Resume-writing professionals and career coaches frequently advise
their clients to use the Problem-Action-Result (PAR) or Challenge-Action-
Result (CAR) method to develop success stories that can be used in a job
interview, incorporated into a resume, or, for our purposes here, included in a
cover letter.
In such cases, formatting your cover letter in paragraphs, instead of bullets,
affords you the opportunity to sell yourself with examples of your successes.
You can include more detail about one or more specific situations that may be
of particular interest to the potential employer and, ideally, set the stage for
pursuing a dialogue about these successful scenarios during an interview.
In Chapter 3, when we discuss writing your cover letters, we will explain
further how to develop your CAR stories. Briefly stated, youll want to identify
a Challenge that you faced, describe what Actions you took to address that
challenge, and showcase the Results you were able to deliver that resolved the
key issues or delivered the most value. To have the most impact, those results
should be as quantifiable as possible (for example, percentage of increase in
sales, reduction in equipment downtime, or improvement in quality ratings). In
other words, you want to include whatever statistics you have available that
support your individual success stories.
WALTER E. ELLIS
75 Clover Street
Rochester, New York 14610-4261
585-777-9988 (Home) / 585-888-9988 (Cellular)
[email protected]
November 27, 2006
Mr. B. Thomas Golisano

President & CEO
Paychex, Inc.
911 Panorama Trail, South
Dear Mr. Golisano:
Capitalizing on a career that encompasses broad-based experience in brand marketing, public

relations, and customer relations, I am seeking an opportunity to apply these skills in a marketing
communications position that will offer the potential for advancement based on performance. I believe
that I possess knowledge and expertise that can be an asset to your firm and have, therefore, enclosed for
your review a rsum that outlines my professional background.
Some key points that you may find relevant to a marketing communications role with your
organization include the following:
- Identifying target audiences and developing marketing messages that reach

those audiences. In both business-to-business and consumer products settings, I
have been successful in researching potential market segments and creating
strategies that effectively communicate product features and promote brand
awareness.
- Implementing innovative, technology-based approaches to marketing, including
championing e-commerce initiatives that both augment product sales and
afford opportunities to gather information about customers.
- Spearheading public relations efforts that coordinate with marketing strategies
and advance overall business goals. These have included placement of features
in both electronic and print media, participation in high-profile public events,
and implementation of strategic philanthropy initiatives.
- Directing an array of brand management activities, which have encompassed
graphic design, copy writing, and production of collaterals, point-of-sales
materials, and product packaging.
I am confident that my experience, education, and enthusiasm will allow me to make a
meaningful contribution to your ongoing business success. I would enjoy meeting with you to discuss in
detail how my capabilities can best serve your marketing communications needs. Please contact me to
arrange a mutually convenient date and time when we might initiate a dialogue.
Sincerely,
Walter E. Ellis
Enclosure
Paragraph-format cover letters are also effective when you want to tell the
story of your career path. Maybe you were promoted quickly or had a great
mentor who helped you advance your career. Perhaps youve worked or traveled
internationally, giving you experiences that uniquely enrich your capabilities
for a particular job. The paragraph format gives you the opportunity to tell
such stories in a compelling way, which a bullet-format letter just doesnt allow.
Heres an example of the middle paragraphs from such a letter:
Example #14: Unique and compelling story of a candidates career track:

Even though my father owned the company, he was determined that I
learn the business from the ground up. After college, he arranged for me to have
six-month internships with four different companies that were either suppliers or
customers. These experiences, in each case on the shop floor, broadened my
understanding of the products and processes involved in our industry. Because my
coworkers assumed I was just another employee, they treated me as one of the
gang, and I greatly enhanced my ability to relate to and build rapport with diverse
groups of people at all levels.
When I returned to Acme Products, first in a production planning role and

later as an Account Manager, I was able to apply the knowledge and expertise
gained during my internships in ways that enhanced customer satisfaction and
improved both productivity and product quality.
Now that Acme has been profitably sold to Consolidated Industries, I feel
that my unique professional development program has prepared me to assist your
firm in meeting the needs of your customer base, which substantially overlaps that
of Acme.
One other advantage of paragraph-format cover letters is that you can usually
fit more information on the page, but thats a double-edged sword, because
your letter can be perceived as dense if you include too much copy. However,
by writing compelling success stories (such as the one above) and making
judicious use of white space and type effects (bold and italics), you can make
this cover letter format work to your advantage.
On the following pages are two sample paragraph-format cover letters. The
first is prepared in block style (flush-left format); the second uses indented
paragraphs. Either format is acceptable.
Then, on page 46, youll find a chart that compares bullet-format and
paragraph-format cover letters. This chart gives you a quick reference guide to
the characteristics of each style of letter, summarizing when its best to use
each and providing tips on mistakes to avoid.
Comparison of Bullet- and Paragraph-Style Cover Letters
Bulleted Letter s Paragraph Letter s
Audience Recruiters Hiring managers

HR representatives Recruiters
Cold networking Warm networking
contacts contacts
Situation Listing qualifications Relating problem-

solving skills
Responding to specific
requirements in job Describing
posting achievements or
successes
Providing quick
overview of capabilities Demonstrating ability
to address similar
Highlighting special
challenges in new job
projects and
setting
achievements
Summarizing your
career story
Characteristics Direct and to-the-point Tells a story

(challenge/action/
Easy to read
result)
Format/Effects Use bold or italics to Use text effects

make bullets stand out sparingly
Keep letter on one Maintain proper
page amount of white space
Keep letter on one
page
Things to Avoid Too many bullets Text too dense

Not enough white Not enough white
space space
Lengthy bullets Too much detail
10 Critical Mistakes to Avoid

1. Choosing the wrong format. As discussed earlier in this chapter,
bullet-format letters and paragraph-format letters each have their
appropriate uses. Choosing the wrong format for a particular situation
can harm your chances with a prospective employer. This relates
back to advice from Chapter 1 about knowing your target audience
and crafting a document with format and content that will appeal to
that specific audience.
2. Dense copy; overly long letter. If you have too many words crammed
on a page, your letter becomes less readable and may be passed over
by an employer. As with resumes, make strategic use of white space
to keep your cover letter visually appealing. Likewise, limiting the
letter to one page increases the chances that an employer will take
the time to read it. Except for special situations, strive to keep your
cover letters to a single page.
3. A too-tiny font. Resist the temptation to reduce the type size just to
fit more on the page. Stick with 10-point or larger and, if necessary,
edit the content of the letter to keep it to one page. Its much more
important to maintain the readability of your letters and give the
reader an attractive presentation than to strive to squeeze in that
extra sentence or two. Refer to the chart on page 49 for a comparison
of some of the common fonts and how they look in various sizes.
4. Overuse of bold, italics, and underlining. These design elements can
effectively enhance your cover letters, but overuse of them can be a
distraction. As you review the many sample cover letters in later
chapters of this book, take note of how bold, italics, and underlining
are used to improve readability and visual impact without detracting
from the letter.
5. An untidy letter. Dog-eared pages, wrinkled pages, or coffee stains
all detract from your presentation and are completely unacceptable.
6. A poorly reproduced letter. If at all possible, use a laser printer to
print all of your job search documents. It may well be worth visiting
your local library or copy center, where they should be able to provide
you with laser prints for a modest fee. If, for the sake of expediency,
you decide to print your letters on an inkjet printer, set the printer
at its highest-quality setting and make sure the ink is thoroughly dry
before handling your letter.
7. Inappropriate paper. Just as exotic, hard-to-read fonts can nega-
tively affect your presentation, so can the use of paper that has a
bold color or background that makes it hard to read. If your docu-
ments are faxed at some point, either by you or the employer, a
color or patterned background can detract from the quality of the
transmission. As with your resume, your cover letters should be
printed on quality, watermarked paper. A variety of moderately

priced, attractive choices are available at office supply stores or copy
centers. The paper your cover letters are printed on should match
your resume; the best color choices are white, natural white (cream),
ivory, or light gray.
8. Handwritten changes. Handwritten changes on your job search
documents are not acceptable! Presumably, youve spent a great deal
of time writing and formatting a top-notch resume, plus additional
time composing a cover letter targeting your ideal job. Doesnt it
make sense to take the extra few minutes to make the necessary
changes on the computer and print out a clean copy of your letter?
Again, if computer access is an issue, many public libraries offer
free access to anyone with a library card (they may charge for printing
documents for you), and copy centers generally allow access to
computers for a nominal fee.
9. Odd-sized paper. Although many job seekers may perceive this as a
competitive advantage, believe us when we tell you that is not the
case. If youre looking for a position in the United States, be sure to
print your cover letters and resumes on paper that is 8.5 11 inches.
Perhaps if youre an artist or designer, you might come up with some-
thing unique, but thats a rare exception to the rule. Some executives
use an executive or monarch size paper which is slightly smaller
(7.5 10.5 inches), but, again, this is an exception.
If youre applying for jobs internationally, there is a different
standard sheet size, known as A4 (8.27 11.69 inches in the U.S.
system of measurement), which is used in Europe, Australia, and
various parts of Asia. However, if a company is accepting applications
from U.S. residents, its likely that they will accept our standard
letter-size sheet.
10. Typographical errors. Typographical, grammatical, and word usage
mistakes are totally unacceptable. After spending considerable time
preparing your job search documents, it would be a shame to make a
poor impression on an employer by allowing such errors to slip
through. Of course, you should run spell-check as a preliminary
step, but dont count on it to catch every mistake. The classic example
is the misuse of the words, to, two, and too. Each is a properly
spelled English word, but each has a different meaning and usage.
Your computers spell-check cannot reliably detect if youre using
the correct one in the right context. The solution is to proofread,
proofread, and then proofread again. Reread the documents yourself;
set them aside and come back to reread them again; then, have a
trusted friend (with a strong command of written English) read them;
read them aloud to yourself. You only have one opportunity to make
that first impression, and you should do everything you can to make
it a strong and positive one.
Comparison of Common Cover Letter Typestyles and Sizes

Size Roman Bold Italic
10 pt. Arial Arial Arial

Bookman Old Style Bookman Old Style Bookman Old Style
Garamond Garamond Garamond
Tahoma Tahoma Tahoma
Times New Roman Times New Roman Times New Roman
Verdana Verdana Verdana
10.5 pt. Arial Arial Arial

Bookman Old Bookman Old Bookman Old
Style Style Style

Style Style Style
11.5 pt. Arial Arial Arial

Style Style Style

Style Style Style
Chapter 3
Writing Your Cover Letters
Each of the chapters in this book is critically important to writing powerful

and effective cover letters that get you and your resume noticed, set you apart
from the crowd, and entice a prospective employer to offer you an interview.
However, this chapter is perhaps the most important, demonstrating step-by-
step how to write each section of your cover letter. Youll also want to refer to
Appendix A, where youll find a cover letter worksheet that you can use as a
foundation to collect all the information you will need to write each of your
letters. If you need more forms than weve provided, feel free to make copies so
that you have ample materials to see you through the writing process.
Before we begin to explore each of these sections, its important to review
the key conceptsthe simple truthsfrom each of the two preceding chapters.
In Chapter 1, you were introduced to the six simple truths about cover letter
writing:

Truth #2: Cover letter writing is sales.
Truth #3: Cover letter writing is all about strategy.
Truth #4: Targeted letters work best.
Truth #5: The cover letter must match the resume.
Truth #6: Each circumstance presents its own challenges.
If you cant remember the specifics of each of these truths, take a few minutes
to review Chapter 1 again, as these concepts are essential to understand and
apply when you begin to actually write your letters.
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Then, in Chapter 2, you were introduced to the four simple truths about
cover letter design and formatting:

Truth #2: Simple designs work best.
Truth #3: Bullet-format letters highlight your skills and
achievements.
Truth #4: Paragraph-format letters tell your career stories.
Again, if you cant remember the specifics of each of these truths, take a few
minutes to reread Chapter 2, as these concepts are also essential to understand
and apply when you begin to write your letters.
Now that you have a clear grasp of strategic and design considerations for
your cover letters, its time to move on to the critical elements of the actual
writing process. Similar to when you wrote your resume (if you followed the
step-by-step process outlined in our companion book, No-Nonsense Resumes),
writing your cover letters requires a unique blend of art and science, allowing
you to use a creative approach to present factual information about yourself
and your career. A cover letter is no longer simply a transmittal letter that
accompanies your resume. Rather, todays cover letter is a sales document
that should be written to promote the very best you have to offer to a com-
pany. Bottom line: Thats the only goal of your cover letterto grab a hiring
managers or recruiters attention (along with your resume) and help you get
job interviews.
In this chapter, were going to introduce you to the strategies and techniques
that we, as professional resume writers, use to write powerful cover letters with
a simplified and streamlined process. If you follow these instructions, you too
will be able to craft cover letters that portray your very best you!
The 5 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Writing

Just as many other business-related activities, cover letter writing is a process.
In many ways, its much akin to writing a technical report in that the final
document (1) has a very specific purpose, (2) must clearly and concisely convey
a particular message, and (3) must appropriately communicate that message to
its target audience.
With that in mind, its easy to understand that writing cover letters and
other job search communications is not at all like creative writing (for example,
novels, short stories, and poems), for which you stare at a blank piece of paper
waiting for inspiration. Rather, cover letter writing is closer to following an
outline or connecting the dots. With our help, youll be able to connect your
dots and write cover letters using a very methodical and logical process.
Simple Truths About Writing Your Cover Letters 53
Well begin with the five simple truths for writing winning cover letters:
Truth #1: Four key components are essential for success.

Truth #2: Its all about positioning.
Truth #3: There are five basic types of cover letters.
Truth #4: You dont have to write in order.
Truth #5: The language should be different than in your resume.
The remainder of this chapter will explore these simple truths in much greater
detail, and provide you with essential how-to information for writing cover letters
that are intelligent, distinct, and filled with information that will encourage a
recruiter to invite you for an interview. Remember, cover letters do not get
jobs; their only job is to help get you an interview!
Truth #1: 4 Key Components Are Essential for Success

As presented in Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, there are 10 key components of
every effective cover letter:
1. Contact information 6. Opening paragraph

2. Date 7. Contentmain body
3. Inside address 8. Closing paragraph/call to action
4. Reference line 9. Complimentary closing/signature
5. Salutation 10. Enclosures
However, of these 10, there are fourcontact information, opening

paragraph, content, and closing paragraphthat stand out as most important.
Thats what we will focus on in this section.
Contact Information
The very first thing that youre going to include on your cover letter is your
contact informationname, mailing address, phone number(s), and e-mail
address. Here are three standard formats that you can select from:
Format #1: Standard
JOSHUA L. FARMER
22 Glen Cove
Ames, IA 39872
Home (308) 555-2937 / Cell (308) 555-0972 / [email protected]
Format #2: Modified
MARIA FERNANDEZ
987 Derby Run Road (301) 555-9038
Finksburg, MD 20972 [email protected]
Format #3: College Student (similar formatwith two addressescould be

used for relocation or trailing spouse)
SALLY R. SIMMONS
[email protected]
Permanent Address: Current Address:

665 Williamson Road Grayson Hall, Rm. 422
Dover, DE 19903 Hood College
Cell (302) 555-2983 Frostburg, MD 22925
Although including your contact information should be a snap, sometimes

there are unusual circumstances or special considerations. Pay close attention
to these recommendations:
1. If you have a gender-neutral name, consider using one of the following

formats so that someone knows how to address you:
Mr. Lynn F. Gundersen

Ms. Tracey S. Simpson
2. If you have a first name thats difficult to pronounce, or go by a call

name other than your first name, consider using one of the following
formats so that someone knows how to address you:
Ranguswamy Roger Abdellah

Melissa C. Chris Miller
HR people and hiring managers are human, and this approach helps
put them at ease in contacting and communicating with you, and
gives them one less reason to screen you out.
3. If you dont yet have a personal e-mail address, get one! Todays job
search market has gone electronic and many prospective employers
will want to communicate with you via e-mail. However, it is inap-
propriate to use your current work e-mail to conduct your job search.
Rather, get a free e-mail account with Yahoo!, Hotmail, Gmail, or
any one of a number of other providers that will allow you to access
your e-mail account from any computer with an Internet connection.

When setting up your account, be sure to use a professional-sounding
screen name (for example, [email protected]) and not some-
thing cute or unprofessional (for example, [email protected]).
4. Be very careful if you decide to include your work phone number on
your resume, and only do so if you have a direct number. Even in
that situation, its preferable to have people contact you on your
private cell phone or at your home number. Youre not at your
current job to spend your days conducting your job search!
While were on the topic, make certain that your outgoing voice
mail message, whether on your cell phone or home answering
machine, sounds professional (for example, You have reached 555-
1234. Im unable to take your call right now, so please leave a message
at the tone, is much more acceptable than, Hey, dude! You know
the drillif youre a telemarketer, drop dead). One persons humor
is another persons poor taste.
5. If you have an online version of your resume (see Chapter 4 in No-
Nonsense Resumes for more information on creating e-based resumes),
be sure to include the Website address (URL) in the contact
information section of your letter so people can go online to read
more about you and your career.
Opening Paragraph
The opening paragraph of your cover letter serves as an introduction that is
designed to communicate the following:
1. Why youre writing the letter, which is generally either in response

to an advertisement or because youre interested in employment
opportunities with a specific company.
2. Your particular area of expertise, your profession, or your
industry of choice.
3. A brief summary of the value you bring to that organization.
To best demonstrate how to write a strong introduction for your cover

letters, carefully review the following examples:
Example #1: Opening paragraph when responding to an advertisement:

Enclosed is my resume in response to your advertisement for a Public Relations
Professional. In reviewing your specific qualifications for the position, I
discovered that I have precisely the experience that you are seeking in a
candidate. As such, several of my most notable projects are highlighted below.
Example #2: Opening paragraph when writing directly to a company to express

your interest in employment opportunities:
When I joined PRM in 2004, the company was fraught with organizational
challenges and issues. Today, our organization is strong, our cash flow is
positive, our member retention is outstanding, and we are technologically
on the cutting edge. Now, Im looking to make the same contributions to
another company and would be delighted to interview for an executive
assignment with CCM Associates.
Example #3: Opening paragraph when writing to a recruiter:

Currently, I serve as Director of Production Operations for a large chemical
manufacturing facility in Houston, but am ready to make a career change. As such, I
am contacting you about potential opportunities with any of your clients that will
capitalize on my strong qualifications, and have enclosed my resume for your review.
Content/Main Body of the Letter

The content of your cover letterthe text between the opening paragraph
and the closing paragraphis the most vital component of the letter. It is this
section that allows you to briefly, yet comprehensively, communicate the skills,
experiences, and achievements of your career that are most relevant to the
particular position for which you are applying or the specific company you are
contacting. We often refer to this section as the meat of the cover letter.
There are hundreds of examples we could provide that demonstrate how to
formulate the content section of your cover letters. However, the best resource
you have is right in your handsall the letters weve included in Chapters 516.
Be sure to review all those appropriate to your career field to get ideas on how
best to write the content of your letters.
Basically, there are three different formats that you can use to present this
section of your letterthe bullet format, the paragraph format, and the combi-
nation formatand each has its own purpose. If your goal is to communicate
specific information about your skills, achievements, projects, and experiences,
then a bullet-format cover letter will generally work best, because it allows you
to include specific information in a brief and easy-to-read style.
Example #4: Bullet format

With a total of 17 years of experience in construction and facilities
management, I bring to Engelhard excellent skills in:
* All major construction trades including HVAC, electrical, roofing, framing,
concrete forming and finishing, carpentry, ceramic tile, and painting.
* Evaluating project costs and developing accurate project budgets.
* Selecting, negotiating contracts with, and managing project subcontractors.
* Managing projects to comply with state and local building codes and
regulations.
On the other end of the continuum is the paragraph format, which is best
used when you want to communicate a story about your career that might focus
on rapid promotion, unique opportunities, and the overall strength of your
experience. Note that you should keep your cover letters to only two or three
short paragraphs.
Example #5: Paragraph format

Throughout the past 12 years, I have built and profitably managed high-
volume, multi-site retail operations. My strength lies in my ability to
integrate all the finite elements of retailingmost critically, saleswith
marketing, advertising, merchandising, inventory, personnel, customer
service, finance, facilities, and other supporting business infrastructures.
What makes my qualifications so unique is the fact that I have worked in
a number of different retail situationsnew ventures, acquisitions,
turnarounds, and growth operations.
During my tenure with ABC Stores, I have repeatedly demonstrated my
success by providing strong financial results. In one situation, sales grew
to over $40 million; in another, revenues increased at a rate of better
than 35% annually. This has been achieved largely as a result of my
efforts in providing a strong strategic vision and a business structure to
support success.
Between the two extremes of the bullet format and the paragraph format
lies the combination format, which integrates both bullets and paragraphs to
tell a story and highlight the resulting achievements. The following sample is a
perfect example of how to best create this type of letter.
Example #6: Combination format

Currently, as the Group Account Manager for Excel
Communications and its primary business units (including
emerging online and multimedia technologies), I spearhead a
dynamic media marketing organization. My challenge has been to
expand and strengthen market presence through the introduction of
a diversified portfolio of advertising, business development,
promotional, and strategic alliance initiatives. Results have been
significant and include:
Capture of an 11% gain in overall primetime cable share.
Creation of standardized programming and scheduling to
attract and retain a loyal audience.
Development of innovative multimedia advertising and
promotional strategies.
Expansion into new media applications.
Closing Paragraph(s)/Call to Action

The closing paragraph, as the name implies, is the section that you use to
close, or end, your cover letter. Specifically, it should incorporate a call to
action, and should state either how you plan to follow up (the proactive
approach) a request for an interview (the more passive approach). We strongly
recommend that you take the proactive approach and follow up whenever
possible. Unfortunately, its not always possible if youre responding to a blind
ad or post office box with no company or contact information.
You can also use the closing paragraph to include any additional information
that may have been requested in an advertisement (for example, salary history,
salary requirements, or geographic requirements). And finally, be sure to express
your appreciation to that individual for taking the time to review your resume
and consider your qualifications.
Here are several different examples you can use as the foundation from
which to write your own closing paragraphs:
Example #7: Closing paragraph when responding to an advertisement:

I would welcome the chance to interview for the Sales Associate
position with your firm and can guarantee that the strength of my
financial and operating experience will add measurable value to
MTB Unlimited. Ill follow up next Thursday to schedule an
interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Example #8: Closing paragraph when writing directly to a company to express

your interest in employment opportunities:
My goal is a senior-level management position where I can
direct sales, marketing, and customer service for an
organization in Europequite similar to the responsibilities I
manage today. However, my goal is to affiliate with an
organization offering stronger opportunities for professional
growth, management, and leadership. Please note that I am
conversational in five different languages and have a wealth of
cross-cultural business experience. I appreciate your time in
reviewing my qualifications and look forward to speaking with
you to pursue opportunities with Merrill Lynch.
Example #9: Closing paragraph when writing to a recruiter:
At this point in my career, I am confidentially exploring new professional

challenges and opportunities, and would welcome the chance to discuss any
specific search assignments that are appropriate for an individual with such
an extensive background in the building trades industry. Be advised that I
am open to relocation and that my salary requirements are $60,000+.
Thank you.
As you review all of the sample cover letters in this book, youll find scores
of examples that you can adapt to create the exact wording of your opening
paragraph, main body, and closing paragraph of your cover letterslanguage
that will generate interest and enthusiasm on the part of your new employer.
Truth #2: Its All About Positioning

In Chapter 1, we discussed the concept of positioningof painting a picture
of yourself that you want a hiring manager or recruiter to see. Your goal is to
position yourself in the cover letter as an individual who is well-qualified for the
opportunity you are pursuing.
Consider the following: Suppose that your entire career has been in accounting
(with lots of training and supervisory responsibilities), and you now want to pursue
a career in human resources. If thats the case, you want your letter to position
you as an HR professional and not as an accountant. As such, youll want to
highlight your experience in employee training, development, supervision, and
performance evaluation more prominently than your experience in day-to-day
accounting operations.
Or perhaps youve been a nurse for 10 years and now want to transition into
pharmaceutical sales. Be sure that your letter positions you as an individual
qualified for a sales position by emphasizing your communication skills, ability
to manage relationships with physicians, and your background in working with
pharmaceutical reps to place orders and evaluate new products.
There are thousands of examples similar to these that we could use to
demonstrate the concept of positioning. Perhaps the most important concept is
that of reweighting, or shifting the emphasis away from your current core
responsibilities and focusing on ancillary responsibilities that are more supportive
of your current job objectives.
One word of caution: When you are reweighting your skills and experience,
you must remain in the realm of reality. Dont overstate or oversell your
qualifications if you cannot live up to what you wrote in your cover letter when
you get to the interview. If you have to defend something that you wrote, you
will most likely have lost that opportunity. Trying to back-pedal generally does
not work to your advantage. Honesty and accuracy are essential!
On the opposite side of this discussion are candidates who are seeking a
position within their current occupation or profession (for example, a produc-
tion supervisor seeking a new, higher-level position as a production manager).
In this situation, the issue is not reweighting, but rather heavily weighting the
skills and experiences that you already have so that youre positioning yourself
as an extremely well-qualified production manager in your cover letter. In this
example, the candidate wants to place an equal emphasis on both his or her
production talents and supervisory/management experience so that he or she
paints just the right picture.
As you can see, the concept of positioning is critical to all job seekers,
whether theyre pursuing a similar career path or changing careers for new
opportunities. Think carefully about how you want to position yourself in your
cover letters based on the specific opportunities you are pursuing. Once you
know your position, writing cover letters will be easier and more efficient, and
the result will be cover letters that proudly portray your relevant qualifications.
Truth #3: There Are 5 Basic Types of Cover Letters

As you review the sample cover letters in this book, it may appear that there
are countless different varieties of cover letters. They do seem to come in all
shapes and sizes. However, if you look closely, youll see that there are really
only five distinct types or categories of letters:
] Company Ad-Response Letters

] Recruiter Ad-Response Letters
] Company Cold-Call Letters
] Recruiter Cold-Call Letters
] Referral Letters
Youll find that there are strikingly similar characteristics among these cat-
egories of letters, as well as strikingly different characteristics that clearly dis-
tinguish one from the other. It is imperative that you understand how best to
write each type of letter so that youre well equipped for each situation that may
arise during your job search. In fact, it is quite likely that you and most other job
seekers will use all five of these letters repeatedly throughout your search.
Remember, regardless of the specific category of letter youre writing, you
will always want to heed the information presented in Truth #1 earlier in this
chapter, where we outlined the four key components of every effective cover
lettercontact information, introduction, content, and closing. Now, lets explore
what makes each of the five categories of letters unique.
Company Ad-Response Letters

Company ad-response letters are just what you would imagine; letters written
in response to specific advertisements you might see in a newspaper, journal, or
other print publication, as well as letters that youll send in response to online
job postings.
Unique Characteristics:
] These letters specifically refer to each job title or job announcement,
either in a subject line at the beginning of the letter or in the first
paragraph of the letter. You want to immediately connect yourself
to the position so that it is clear what opportunity you are pursuing.
] These letters often include an introductory paragraph that immedi-

ately communicates your value, skills, and qualifications for that
particular position. For example, if youre applying for a position as
a sales representative, you might consider an opening paragraph
such as:
Building market value is my expertise. Whether establishing a
new market or accelerating sales within an existing market, I have
consistently increased sales revenues and expanded the size of
the customer base. This is the value I bring to the Sales Manager
position at Sims, Incorporated.
Note that this introductory paragraph effectively accomplishes
two things: (1) immediately communicates the value of the candidate
(in building revenues and capturing customers) and (2) identifies
the position for which this candidate is applying.
] Even if an advertisement requests that you provide salary informa-
tion, it is not necessary to do so. In survey after survey, it has been
proven that a company will contact you if theyre interested, regard-
less of whether or not you responded to their request to provide
salary information. If youre comfortable including the information,
then do it. If youre not, then its fine to omit it.
One important recommendation: Rather than tie yourself to a
specific salary number, if youre asked to provide salary requirements,
you might considering providing a range (for example, My salary
requirements are $60,000 to $70,000 a year). This gives both you and
your interviewer some flexibility when negotiating your best salary.
One important insight: Surveys have also indicated that most
interviewers have the authority to negotiate a salary up to 10 percent
higher than what they may have originally told you. Knowing that,
you always want to negotiate. In fact, hiring managers have told us
that they expect candidates to negotiate and are often surprised when
they dont. Take advantage of the opportunity and negotiate for
your very best salary.
Refer to the Abelson company letter on page 67 for an example of a company
ad-response letter.
Recruiter Ad-Response Letters

Just as with company ad-response letters, these letters written to recruiters
are just what you would imagine: letters written in response to specific print
and online advertisements.
] These letters specifically refer to each job title or job announcement,
either in a subject line at the beginning of the letter or in the first
paragraph of the letter.
] As with letters directed to companies, these letters frequently include

an introductory paragraph that succinctly communicates your value,
skills, and qualifications for the advertised position. For example,
looking again at our hypothetical sales representative position, you
might consider this opening paragraph:
Building market value is my expertise. Developing new markets
and increasing penetration in existing markets are capabilities
that I can bring to a Sales Manager role with your client, Sims,
Inc. My track record of consistently increasing revenues and
expanding account bases demonstrates my capacity to address
Sims immediate challenges and contribute to its future growth.
Again, as with the company-directed letter, this introductory
paragraph immediately communicates the value of the candidate
and identifies the position for which this candidate is applying.
] These letters do include salary history and/or salary requirements
as requested in the advertisement. It is important to fully disclose
your salary expectations to recruiters so that youre not wasting
their time or yours. If youre looking for an annual salary of $75,000,
you certainly dont want to spend an afternoon interviewing for a
$45,000/year position! When you share your salary expectations,
youll be helping a recruiter find just the right opportunity for you.
] These letters also include, in the closing paragraph, other personal
information that is important to your search. This may include your
geographic preferences, your need to be in an area with special
medical and/or educational facilities, and other information that may
be pertinent to the opportunities that interest you. Again, dont waste
your time or a recruiters time. Here are two examples:
At this point in my career, it is important that I remain in the
Northeastern U.S. as I have a special-needs child enrolled in a
private residential school in Boston. Obviously, my family and I
want to remain within a few hours driving distance so that we
can continue to visit him on a regular basis.
Currently I serve in a volunteer capacity as the Director of the
Shore Lakes United Way Campaign, a position Ive held for the
past three years and one that I find tremendously rewarding. As
such, I am only available for opportunities in the Southern
California area.
Refer to the Abelson recruiter letter on page 68 for an example of a recruiter

ad-response letter. Note the differences between the Abelson company letter
on page 67 and the Abelson recruiter letter on page 68 (differences are highlighted
in bold print).
Company Cold-Call Letters

Company cold-call letters are written to express your interest in employment
opportunities with a particular organizationnot in response to any particular
position announcement. Theyre known as cold letters that youre using to
introduce and market yourself to the company in anticipation that they may
have an unadvertised opportunity for which you would be an ideal candidate.
] These letters specifically refer to the type of position you are pursing,
generally in the first paragraph of the letter. You want to immediately
connect yourself to a particular career path so that it is clear to the
reader what type of position you are pursuing.
] These letters generally begin with an introductory paragraph that
immediately communicates your value, skills, and qualifications as
they relate to a particular company. For example, if youre interested
in an opportunity in manufacturing operations, you might start your
letter with an opening paragraph such as:
Improving manufacturing output and product quality are what I
do best. Throughout my 12-year career in manufacturing
operations, I have been successful in increasing throughput by as
much as 35% and reducing product rejects by an unprecedented
72%. This is the value I bring to AMN and am hoping you are in
the market for a candidate with precisely my qualifications.
two things: It (1) immediately communicates the value of the
candidate (in building revenues and capturing customers) and (2)
identifies the type of career opportunity the candidate is pursuing.
] These letters never mention salary history or salary requirements.
That discussion is better left for a second, third, or fourth interview,
and is never appropriate to include in a cold-call letter.
] Your only objective in writing this type of letter is to generate interest
on behalf of the employer and get a phone call or e-mail message
offering you the opportunity for an interview.
Refer to the Madras company letter on page 69 for an example of a company

cold-call letter.
Recruiter Cold-Call Letters

Recruiter cold-call letters are written to express your interest in employment
opportunities within a particular profession or industrynot in response to
any particular position announcement. Theyre known as cold letters that
youre using to introduce and market yourself to a recruiter in anticipation that
he or she may have a current search assignment for which you would be an ideal
candidate.
] These letters specifically refer to the type of position or industry
you are pursing, generally in the first paragraph of the letter. You
want to immediately connect yourself to a particular career path
so that it is clear to the recruiter what type of position you are
pursuing.
] These letters generally begin with an introductory paragraph that is
short and to the point. For example, if youre interested in an
opportunity in accounting management, you might start your letter
with an opening paragraph such as:
As a corporate accountant with eight years of increasingly
responsible experience, I am currently exploring new mid-level
accounting management opportunities. Enclosed for your review
is my resume in anticipation that you may have a current search
assignment for a candidate with my qualifications.
Recruiters often receive hundreds of unsolicited resumes each
week. If you can make their job easier by identifying your particular
area of interest, without requiring them to read all of your material,
youll be much more likely to capture their interest and, perhaps,
get an interview with either the recruiter or one of his or her client
companies.
] These letters always mention salary history or salary requirements.
Just as with ad-response letters that you write to recruiters, you
want to be sure to include your salary requirements and any relevant
personal information (for example, geographic preferences and
educational requirements) when writing to recruiters. Remember,
you dont want to waste anyones time!
on behalf of the recruiter and get a phone call or e-mail offering you
the opportunity to interview for a search assignment that the recruiter
may currently have or anticipates in the near future.
Refer to the Madras recruiter letter on page 70 for an example of a recruiter

cold-call letter. Note the differences between the Madras company letter and
this Madras recruiter letter (differences are highlighted in bold print).
Referral Letters
Referral letters are letters that you will write when a specific person refers
you to another person or a company. These letters can be extremely powerful
in opening doors and generating interviews because a third-party referral is a
great testimonial to your qualifications. This, in and of itself, speaks highly of
your skills and performance.
] These letters begin with an immediate mention of the individual
who referred you, in order to leverage that relationship. In fact, that
is principally what distinguishes referral letters from both company
ad-response and company cold-call letters.
] Just as with cold-call letters to companies, these letters specifically
refer to the type of position you are pursing, generally in the first
paragraph of the letter. You want to immediately connect yourself
to a particular career path so that it is clear to the reader what type
of position you are pursuing.
] Following the mention of your mutual friend/colleague, these letters
generally begin with an introductory paragraph that immediately
communicates your value, skills, and qualifications as they are
appropriate to that company. Heres an example demonstrating how
best to write an opening paragraph that incorporates all three of
these essential elements:
John Bower, a close colleague of mine, suggested I contact you
immediately to let you know of my interest in a position as a
Logistics Manager with RDL. John speaks so highly of you and
the organization, and felt that my skills would be a perfect match
for your firm. My resume, highlighting my extensive experience
and successes in logistics management, is enclosed for your
review. Most notable has been my success in increasing the
volume of material that were currently moving at Atlas Equipment
by 24% and reducing our annual vendor expenses by an average
of 18%.
three things: It (1) states the name of the individual referring the
candidate at the very beginning of the letter; (2) identifies the type
of career opportunity the candidate is pursuing; and (3) highlights
the value of the candidate (in increasing product movement and
reducing vendor costs).
] These letters never mention salary history or salary requirements.
That discussion is better left for a second, third, or fourth interview
and is never appropriate to include in a referral letter.
on behalf of the employer and get a phone call or e-mail offering
you the opportunity for an interview.
] Keep in mind that the person to whom the letter is addressed may
not be involved in the ultimate hiring decision. This is fine, because,
hopefully, he or she can introduce you to the right person, or at
least direct your resume to the right person. This is important to

remember, because it may impact the tone of your letter and what
you are specifically asking the reader to do for you.
See the Williams letter on page 71 for an example of a referral letter.
Truth #4: You Dont Have to Write in Order

Give yourself a break! If youre struggling to write a cover letter, consider
writing the letter out of order. This is one of the most valuable insider tips
that we can pass along, a strategy that many professional resume writers use
over and over when they hit a stumbling block.
Often, the closing paragraph is the easiest to write, so start with that. Take
a look back at the sample closing paragraphs earlier in this chapter and youll
see that they generally comprise three key components: (1) a thank-you to the
recipient for taking the time to review your materials; (2) information on how
to best contact you; and (3) information about how you will follow up, or that
youll wait for the recipient to contact you. As stated previously, we strongly
recommend that you, the job seeker, follow up when possible.
Because the closing paragraph is strong and generally factual information,
it should be quick and easy to write. Estimated time for completion: 5 minutes.
Once youve written the closing paragraph, you may find it easier to write
the meat of the letter next. This will be the information that youll include
either in your paragraphs or bulletsthe information about you and your career
that is most relevant to the position or company to which you are applying.
Again, refer to the samples earlier in this chapter to determine how you can
best present your qualifications in a short and hard-hitting cover letter. Have
the position description, job posting, and any other research materials handy as
you write to help expedite the process. Estimated time for completion: 30 minutes.
Now, its time to write the introductory paragraph, which can be the most
difficult. As we discussed earlier in this chapter, its always best to start your
letters with information that will grab a readers attention, rather than the more
traditional, I am writing in response to your advertisement for an Accounting
Clerk as posted on Monster.com. You want your letters to instantly spark the
readers interest and communicate the value you bring to a position or company
within the first few words of your cover letters whenever possible.
Take some time to think about what is most important to communicate to
each specific employer and then use that information as the foundation for your
introductory sentence and paragraph. Estimated time for completion: 20 minutes.
When you write your cover letters from the bottom to the top, you may
find that the writing process is much easier and faster. Next time youre struggling
with a letter, try this strategy and see if it works for you. Once youve written a
few cover letters, the process will get easier (and faster). Plus, as youll see
when you read the next section, your existing letters can serve as a template
or starting point for other letters, saving you significant time and energy.
(Company Ad-Response Letter)

MARCIA ABELSON
2209 Speedway Drive (909) 555-7352
Toledo, OH 40928 [email protected]
July 21, 2006
Elisabeth Suter
President & CEO
Kramer Technologies, Inc.
1000 Kramer Boulevard
Boston, MA 02983
RE: Executive Vice President Product Development & Marketing
Dear Ms. Suter:
To gain a competitive lead in todays technology-driven marketplace requires an executive with a record of
innovation and performance success across the full array of core business functions from organizational design
and leadership to product development and market positioning to global sales leadership to bottom-line financial
results.
With more than 16 years of senior management experience in start-up, turnaround, high growth and
Fortune 500 technology companies, I have created the vision, developed the strategies and executed the tactical
actions to increase revenues and customer loyalty, reduce operating costs, expand market penetration, strengthen
organizational performance and improve bottom-line profits. This is the value I bring to Kramer Technologies.
My success is a direct result of my ability to leverage the strengths of each organizations personnel,
technology and capital resources. Under my leadership, I have been instrumental in:
x Restructuring and revitalizing non-performing organizations to achieve record financial results.

x Establishing best-in-class operations that have been the benchmark for numerous ventures.
x Recruiting and leading top-performing field and corporate teams to unprecedented performance.
x Structuring joint partnerships and strategic alliances to leverage opportunities worldwide.
x Identifying and negotiating corporate and technology acquisitions to strengthen strategic position.
My approach is hands-on, with a true commitment to the success of my team, my organization and the
corporation at large. Never daunted by challenge, I view each obstacle as an opportunity to build, lead and deliver.
Whats more, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to outperform the competition, dominate the marketplace
and accelerate revenue growth beyond corporate, investor and shareholder expectations.
I would welcome the opportunity to interview for the above-referenced position and can guarantee that the
strength of my experience and knowledge of our industry and its major players will add measurable value to Kramer
Technologies. Ill follow up next week to schedule an interview and thank you for your consideration.
Regards,
Marcia Abelson
Enclosure
(Recruiter Ad-Response Letter)

MARCIA ABELSON
2209 Speedway Drive (909) 555-7352
Toledo, OH 40928 [email protected]
July 29, 2006
Drew Montgomery
Technology Recruiter
Lewis & Morton Recruiting
900 Main Street
Boston, MA 02965
RE: Executive Vice President Product Development & Marketing Fortune 500 Technology Company
Dear Mr. Montgomery:
Please accept this letter and resume in consideration for the above-referenced position. I bring a
unique blend of IT leadership talent to the position with my most notable achievements in organizational
design and leadership, product development, market positioning, global sales leadership and bottom-line
financial management.
With more than 16 years of senior management experience in start-up, turnaround, high growth and
Fortune 500 technology companies, I have created the vision, developed the strategies and executed the tactical
actions to increase revenues and customer loyalty, reduce operating costs, expand market penetration, strengthen
organizational performance and improve bottom-line profits. This is the value I bring to Kramer Technologies.
My success is a direct result of my ability to leverage the strengths of each organizations personnel,
technology and capital resources. Under my leadership, I have been instrumental in:
x Restructuring and revitalizing non-performing organizations to achieve record financial results.

x Establishing best-in-class operations that have been the benchmark for numerous ventures.
x Recruiting and leading top-performing field and corporate teams to unprecedented performance.
x Structuring joint partnerships and strategic alliances to leverage opportunities worldwide.
x Identifying and negotiating corporate and technology acquisitions to strengthen strategic position.
My approach is hands-on, with a true commitment to the success of my team, my organization and the
corporation at large. Never daunted by challenge, I view each obstacle as an opportunity to build, lead and deliver.
Whats more, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to outperform the competition, dominate the marketplace
and accelerate revenue growth beyond corporate, investor and shareholder expectations.
I would welcome the opportunity to interview for the above-referenced position and am available
for relocation. As requested, my recent compensation has averaged $175,000 and I would anticipate a new
position would afford me a package well in excess of $200,000. I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Marcia Abelson
Enclosure
Truth #5: The Language Should Be Different Than in Your Resume

Do not repeatword for wordinformation that youve written in your
resume in your cover letters. Its very easy to copy and paste from one document
to the other, but we strongly recommend that you do not do this. Your cover
letter should be written to complement your resume by providing any one (or a
combination) of the following items:
( Additional professional information that you did not mention on your resume
that is particularly relevant to that specific employer.
Example: It may be that you did not include certain information on your
resume because you did not think it would be important for most of the
positions you are pursuing. If and when it does become important to a
particular company or opportunity, then your cover letter is the perfect
vehicle for sharing that information. Heres a great example:
One of the most challenging and rewarding projects I ever worked
on was the back-end design of a new accounting management
and reporting system for Chase Manhattan Bank. This 2-year, $8
million project involved more than 100 team members from IT
departments throughout the organization, with my specific role as
the lead software engineer.
Including this type of additional information is crucial to positioning
yourself as a top candidate.
( A summary of the overall skills and qualifications you bring as they relate
to a particular company or position.
Example: To be effective, your cover letters must focus on the specific
skills, qualifications, and experiences that will be of most interest to a specific
company. Most, if not all, of these will likely have been included in your
resume. Your challenge, therefore, is to restate that information concisely,
without repeating it verbatim. For example,
Over the past 10 years, Ive acquired a wealth of experience
throughout the entire supply management chain, with particular
emphasis on logistics, distribution, warehousing, vendor
management, and long-range quality improvement.
This type of summary sentence allows you to encompass experience
from all facets of your career.
( A summary of your key achievements, projects, and specific contributions
that are most relevant to the position you are applying for or the company
you are contacting.
Example: If youre a sales representative and youve included your notable
sales achievements for each position in your resume, you dont want to repeat
those identical achievements in your cover letters. Rather, summarize the
information by combining your achievements:
Over the past five years, I increased regional sales by an average

of 22% despite intense market competition.
This sentence highlights the candidates average sales performance while
employed with three different companies, totally eliminating the need to
repeat the same statistics already presented on the resume.
( Personal information that is directly related to a specific company, position,
or geographic region that will definitely position you as an even stronger
candidate.
Example: If youre relocating back to an area that youre familiar with,
be sure to highlight that in your letter. Its always a strong selling point if
youre established in a certain region. Heres an example of what you might
write:
I was born and raised in Toledo and, as such, have extensive
contacts throughout the area who will be valuable in building my
network and customer base. My ability to hit the ground running
will allow me to immediately become a productive member of
your team.
This sentence clearly communicates that this candidate is already a part
of the community.
Streamlining Your Writing Process

Just as with any other activity, cover letter writing gets easier and faster the
more often you do it. We recognize its not something that most job seekers do
on a regular basis, so here are a few tricks of the trade that should make writing
your cover letters easier and faster.
1. Write when youre fresh. Professional writers know that they have a
certain time each day when theyre freshest and do their best work.
For one of us, its first thing in the morning. For the other, its late
at night. Determine when your own prime time is and be sure to
write your cover letters then.
2. Write alone. Youll find that it will be much easier to work on your
cover letters if you do it when its quiet and you have no distractions.
Bottom line: Youre going to need to think and think hard about
what information to include, how to include it, where to include it,
and more. The less noise around you, the better. Ignore the phone,
ignore your e-mail, and focus 100 percent of your energies on writing.
3. Be smart and use available resources. This book contains more
than 100 sample cover letters. If youre stumped on how to approach
a cover letter, cant find the right words, or are unsure about which
format to use, youre almost always sure to find a letter that you can
use as an example to inspire your own creativity. And dont restrict
yourself to just this cover letter book. There are other terrific books
available that can give you new ideas and strategies to make your
letters the very best they can be.
4. Write from the bottom to the top. Remember our earlier discussion
about Truth #4You Dont Have to Write in Order? One of the
tricks that many professional writers use is to write letters from the
bottom to the top, starting with the closing paragraph, then the real
content of the letter, and finally the introductory paragraph. Try it
and youll see that letter writing can be much easier and faster.
5. Write one great cover letter and then use it over and over again. If
you take the time to write one great cover letter, you can often cus-
tomize that letter to use when applying to a variety of positions. With
just a few minor edits (for example, adding another achievement,
including a new project, or mentioning a particular skill you have that
is most relevant to a particular companys hiring requirements), you
can often adapt the letter so that its perfect for another opportunity.
Whats more, it should only take you a few minutes!
Chapter 4
Electronic Cover Letters
By now, youve probably spent a great deal of time writing and designing at
least one cover letter, if not more, to accompany your resume. After having
read the first three chapters of this book, you now know the most critical
considerations for a powerful and effective cover letter:
] Identifying your target audience.

] Advantages and disadvantages of bullet-format letters.
] Advantages and disadvantages of paragraph-format letters.
] Strategies for communicating your unique value.
] Differences between letters written to employers and letters written
to recruiters.
] Importance of matching your cover letter to the format and
design of your resume to create an integrated and compelling
package.
] Using the right language and tone to write cover letters that
effectively sell you and your unique skills.
What you have created through this process is a conventional printed

cover letter, which is what you most likely imagine when you think about letters.
Even though it probably exists as an electronic, word-processed document, this
is the version you will mail or fax to prospective employers and recruiters and
use as an introductory and networking tool. In fact, we prefer to call it the
human-eye version because the style, overall format, presentation, and paper
choice are all designed to appeal to readers as they hold the document in their
hands, making that all-important, attention-grabbing first impression.
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Now that youve created one or more powerful cover letters that can be
mailed or faxed to prospective employers and recruiters (along with your resume,
of course), youll also want to think about other versions of your cover letters
that youll most likely need during the course of your job search. This is where
technology enters the picture.
In todays job market, employers and recruiters are relying more and more
on e-mail and other online methods of transmitting and tracking information
about you, the job candidate. Its vital for the soon-to-be successful job seeker
(you) to have the proper electronic versions of your cover letters to complement
your attention-grabbing electronic resume. If you havent had the opportunity
to read our companion book, No-Nonsense Resumes (Career Press, 2006), we
recommend closely reviewing Chapter 4 in that book for detailed information
on preparing resumes for electronic distribution. That advice works hand-in-
hand with the recommendations in the rest of this chapter about the design and
production of electronic cover letters.
E-letters Work in Todays E-search Environment

Electronic job search documents (resumes and cover letters) offer two
distinct advantages over the more traditional, printed cover letter. First, using
the latest technology allows you to get your materials into the hands of the
appropriate hiring authority quickly and efficiently. No need to wait for snail
mail, when you can immediately transmit your information via e-mail and have
it in the hiring authoritys hands within minutes. Whats more, that individual
can then conveniently share your cover letter and resume with others throughout
the organization. For example, a human resources manager can quickly and
effortlessly forward your package to the manager who will ultimately be making
the hiring decision. Use of this electronic approach has streamlined the job
search process and provided all of us with the ability to submit documents to a
prospective employer in real time.
Second, and just as important, e-letters afford you the capability to circumvent
gate keepers and communicate directly with decision makers. When you are
engaged in a job search, we strongly recommend making direct contact with the
hiring manager (the person who makes the ultimate decision, and probably
your boss if you get the job) whenever possible. In todays business world, snail
mail and phone calls are still often screened by support personnel. As such,
your mailed cover letter and resume package may get redirected to human
resources, or your repeated phone calls to Mr. Big or Ms. Important may
result in being told he or she is always in a meeting.
In contrast, most business people, even at the highest levels, read their own
e-mails. This means theres a good chance that if you e-mail your cover letter
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and resume to a key person, they just might see it and read it, especially if your
subject line grabs his or her attention and the opening lines of your cover letter
are compelling.
Before we proceed with our discussion of the actual content, production,
and transmission of electronic cover letters, it is important to note that there
are four basic types of e-letters.
1. E-mail letters
2. ASCII text letters
3. Word-processed letters
4. Scannable letters
The remainder of this chapter will discuss these four types of letters in
detailwhat they are, how to produce them, and how they are transmitted.
First, however, well discuss the importance of the subject line, which is relevant
to whatever type of cover letter youre writing and sending.
Capture Your Reader With the Subject Line

The first step in developing a powerful and compelling electronic letter is to
write a subject line that piques the readers interest, without being so sensational
that it causes the reader to assume its spam. It should be professional and to
the point.
Specifically, the subject line in a job search e-mail should include the title of
the position for which you are applying (and the job/vacancy announcement
number, if applicable). In addition, we recommend that you include the words
Resume of followed by your name. This format immediately alerts the recipient
that youre responding to a specific job announcement and have forwarded
your resume. Heres an example:
VP of Manufacturing (#45893) Resume of Jonathan Johnson
If youre not responding to a specific job announcement and are simply

e-mailing your resume to a prospective employer or recruiter in anticipation
that they may have an opening for a candidate with your qualifications, use a
headline similar to what you may have used in the summary section of your
resume. This clearly identifies who you are and the type of position you are
seeking. For example:
Vice President of Sales / Director of Business Development

E-mail Letters Are Different Than

Traditional Cover Letters
When preparing cover letters to be included in the body of an e-mail
message, the first thing you want to do is consider the medium. Just as spoken
language is quite different from the written word, e-mail messages (and letters)
have evolved into a form that is much more succinct and direct than formal
correspondence, such as cover letters. Were not recommending that you resort
to using slang abbreviations, symbols, or other electronic shortcuts that have
become popular in todays online communities, but we do suggest that you keep
in mind that most people reading e-mail are in a hurry and read quickly.
As such, e-mailed cover letters must be straightforward, to the point, and
instantly communicate your value to that prospective employer. Your goal with
an e-mail letter is to hook the reader and grab his or her attention.
If you choose to use this type of e-letter, you will want to open with a formal
salutation (for example, Dear Mr. Smith:, Dear Ms. Jones:, Dear Hiring
Authority:). Follow that with a brief opening paragraph (briefer than what you
might use in a conventional letter), and then several bullet points outlining how
you match the requirements of the opening (or your targeted position).
Your closing paragraph should reference your attached resume as a
Microsoft Word document. Or if youre particularly tech-savvy, you can include
a hyperlink to an online version of your resume or Web portfolio.
You can compose your e-letter directly in your e-mail window, if you choose,
but we believe that writing the letter first as a Microsoft Word (or other word-
processing) document gives you the chance to more carefully edit the letter and
ensure there are no mistakes before clicking that irrevocable Send Now button.
Following are two examples of cover letters included within the body of an
e-mail message. Use these as samples when you produce your own e-mail cover
letters.
Example #1: E-mail cover letter included in the body of the e-mail message
(applying for a specific opening):
SUBJECT LINE: DRIVER (JOB # A06077) / RESUME OF MIKE KOHL
Dear Mr. Brennan:
Your ad for a Driver at Plum Hollow Independent Living
Center is a superb match for my professional experience and
capabilities:
An excellent driving/safety record, a Class B CDL, and
training as a school bus driver.
Strong knowledge of Niagara Falls / Buffalo and

Niagara / Erie County streets, including the most
efficient routes between key destinations.
Experience dealing with residents and employees
of a leading long-term care facility as a 20-year
employee of St. Matthews Senior Care Community.
Attached for your consideration is my resume (Microsoft
Word document) that outlines my qualifications in further
detail. This document can also be viewed or downloaded at
www.resume.com/mkohl.
I will follow up with you next week to establish a mutually
convenient time for an initial interview. In the meantime,
please feel free to call me at (716) 454-9876. I look
forward to speaking with you soon.
Sincerely,
Mike Kohl
Attachment
Example #2: E-mail cover letter included in the body of the e-mail message
(broadcast/networking letter):
SUBJECT LINE:
REFERRED BY FLORENCE KAY ACCOUNTING / PENSION

ADMINISTRATION
Dear Mr. OShaunessy:
Florence Kay suggested I contact you regarding potential

Accounting and Pension Administration opportunities with
your firm. Some of the key talents I offer include:
Experience administering Defined Benefit and

Defined Contribution Pension Plans including
monitoring for compliance, tracking terminations
and new submissions, and communicating with
sponsors, participants, attorneys, and
accountants.
General Accounting experience that includes

Payables, Receivables, Payroll, and General
Ledger. I have also prepared financial reports,
forecasts, and budget projections.
Experience coordinating benefits enrollment

including processing applications, communicating
with employees, and resolving problems.
Strong computer literacy and excellent customer

relations / interpersonal skills.
I believe that I can be a valuable asset to your firm and

would enjoy speaking with you further to discuss the
possibilities. My professional portfolio, including a
downloadable resume, may be viewed at www.jannelcopeland.com.
I have also attached a Microsoft Word version of my resume.
Should mutual interest exist, please call me at 315-585-3233
to arrange a meeting. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Jannel Copeland
www.jannelcopeland.com
Regardless of the general advice we have just given you, always follow the
specific instructions the employer provided in the job posting. Some employers
require you to attach your resume as a Microsoft Word document; others may
require that the resume be submitted as ASCII text pasted into the body of the
e-mail. (Youll read more about ASCII text files in the next section of this
chapter.) There are various technical reasons why an employer (or recruiter)
may insist on a certain format. Suffice it to say that if they spell out in the
posting which method they prefer, its important for you to comply with their
request, whether or not its consistent with our specific recommendations and
preferences.
Creating and Using ASCII Text Files

As e-mail technology has evolved over the past few years, you may be able
to simply copy and paste your letter directly into the e-mail window without
losing the format or typestyle. However, you cannot assume this will always
work, so we recommend that you send a few test e-mails to friends to see what
happens. The more foolproof approach is to convert your cover letter into an
ASCII text file before copying and pasting it into your e-mail message. This will
ensure that the integrity of your letter is maintained (for example, characters,
spacing, and basic format).
In addition, some recruiters and employers may insist on receiving an ASCII
text version of your documents (cover letter and resume). If this is the case,
pasting the ASCII text version of your documents into an e-mail message is the
only way to send it electronically to those organizations.
Whats more, ASCII files are also useful when you are applying through a
job board (for example, Monster.com, CareerBuilder.com, and HotJobs.com)
or directly to a companys employment Website. In such cases, you may be
asked to paste your cover letter and resume into an online job application. By
having the ASCII text version of your documents ready to go, you can save a lot
of time by not having to retype information into the boxes on the online form.
Instead, you can simply cut and paste. Its quick and easy, and will save you a
lot of time during your search.
To ensure that you create an ASCII file that is readable and correctly
formatted, follow these simple steps (for Microsoft Word and similar word-
processing programs):
( With your document open on the screen, choose Save As from the File
menu.
( Select text only, ASCII, or plain text as your choice in the Save As
option box. You may want to give the file a slightly different name (for
example, Smith-textletter.txt) to differentiate it from your word-processed
version (for example, Smith-ltr.doc). When you click Save, you will get a
message warning you about losing content or formatting by saving the file in
ASCII format. Ignore the message and click on Yes or OK (whichever
your computer displays).
( Close the file and then reopen it. You will see that your document has been
stripped of all formatting and design enhancements, and appears as left-
justified text in the Courier font.
( Now set both the left and right side margins at two inches. This will center
the text on the screen and optimize its readability when the file is reopened
at a later time. This will also allow you to recognize and fix any unusual line
breaks that lead to awkward changes in format or spacing.
( Carefully proofread the document for any glitches that may have occurred
during the file conversion. You may wish to print your letter and proofread
from a hard copy at this point. You may see that many characters, such as
quotation marks, dashes, or apostrophes, may now appear as question marks
or some other characters. Simply replace these by typing in the appropriate
character from your keyboard.
( Be sure to save the corrected version of your document.
( Proofread again, preferably after some time has passed, to ensure that you
havent missed anything.
On the following page is an example of a cover letter for Alan Johnson
saved as an ASCII text file. Be sure to note that the letter is in the Courier font,
has no type enhancements, and is clean and easy to read.
ALAN JOHNSON
847 Indian Landing Road
585-555-1234
[email protected]
November 20, 2006
Mr. John Joseph

Operations Manager
Citizens Communications
1234 Telephone Road
Re: Call Center Director
Dear John,
After a successful 10-year track record with Finger Lakes Telecomm, I

am confidentially exploring new career possibilities that will
capitalize on my call center operations, account management, and sales
management capabilities. Your posting for Call Center Director appears
to be an excellent match for my existing skill sets. Accordingly, I
have enclosed for your reference a resume that outlines my
capabilities.
My key areas of expertise relevant to this position include:
* Managing call centers with up to 99 representatives and addressing

functions that include inbound and outbound telesales, lead
generation, order entry, and customer care.
* Assessing needs, defining project parameters, and developing
specifications for providing services to corporate clients.
* Recruiting, training, and developing high-performing call center
teams that have delivered multi-million dollar revenues with high-
profit margins to my employers.
I am convinced that I can contribute to Citizens continuing success,

and would appreciate the opportunity to speak with you about this Call
Center Manager opportunity. I will call you early next week to arrange
a mutually convenient time for us to meet. Meanwhile, please feel free
to contact me sooner at my home phone or e-mail address shown above.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to speaking with you soon.
Sincerely,
Alan Johnson
Enclosure
Sending Your Cover Letter as an E-mail Attachment

Although anyone can read an ASCII text file, its always to your advantage
to send your cover letter and resume as e-mail attachments (Microsoft Word
files) whenever possible. This means that your recipient will receive the nicely
formatted, word-processed, print version of your letter rather than the bland
ASCII version. This, in and of itself, can give you a distinctive edge over your
competition. Remember, people are meeting a piece of paper; not you.
Whatever you can do to distinguish yourself from the crowd and appear more
professional will definitely serve to your advantage.
To improve the likelihood that your cover letter and resume documents
arrive in an attractive and readable format, we strongly recommend that you
prepare both documents in Microsoft Word, or a format compatible with it.
Then, follow these guidelines:
] Use 0.75-inch margins on all four sides of the page.

] Choose a common font. Times New Roman and Arial are virtually
universal to most versions of Microsoft Word currently in use. That
doesnt mean that you cant use other typestyles for your printed
documents, but for the best chance of compatibility with those
reading your e-mailed cover letter and resume, use one of these two
recommended fonts.
] If you use word-processing software other than Microsoft Word,
consider saving the file in Rich Text Format (.rtf). In most word-
processing applications, this is a choice in the Save As menu, and
the .rtf suffix generally appears at the end of the file name when the
document is saved. This more universally accepted file format is
compatible with most word-processing software currently in use
today.
] Send the e-mail attachment to yourself and to friends who are aware
of your job search. This gives you the opportunity to see what your
documents look like when downloaded and opened, and you can
make adjustments to correct any problems prior to sending your
resume and cover letter to employers or recruiters.
Preparing Your Files for Transmission

When preparing a cover letter to accompany your resume as an e-mail
attachment, you have two distinct options for how to attach the document. The
firstand the quickest and easiestis to simply attach your cover letter to your
e-mail message, just as youll attach your resume. Then, youre all set to go.
However, we recommend a different strategy that ensures your cover letter
and resume are transmitted as one complete package. Specifically, we suggest
you save your cover letter as page one in your resume file. That way, the recipient
has to click on only one document to get all of your information and, just as
important, he or she only has to send one attachment in order to forward your
complete information to someone else in the organization.
If youre not certain how to do this, just follow these easy instructions:
1. Open your cover letter document; go to Edit; Select All; and

then Copy. This will copy the entire text of your cover letter.
2. Open your resume document and make sure the cursor is at the
very top of the first page, probably to the far left of the first letter
of your first name in most instances.
3. Select the Insert; Page Break command in Microsoft Word; it
will give you a blank page before the beginning of the resume.
4. Place the cursor at the top of this new, empty page and go to
Edit; Paste to paste your letter into this document with your
resume.
5. Save this new, combined document under a new name (for
example, Smith-Resume & LetterIBM, 11-15-06).
6. Adjust margins and eliminate any extra blank lines or page breaks
that may appear, in order to make sure the format of the letter and
resume are maintained. Dont forget to click on Save one more
time to make sure any additional adjustments are captured.
Once your cover letter and resume have been prepared for electronic
transmission, you can send them just as you would any other attachment. Simply
open your e-mail program, create a message, attach your resume, and send the
e-mail message with the document attached. Its that easy and only takes a
minute. Remember, however, what we said about the importance of the subject
line earlier in this chapter, and be sure to take the time to write a subject line
that either states the name (and number) of the position for which you are
applying or includes a brief statement identifying who you are. And because
youve included a detailed cover letter in your attachment, your e-mail message
can simply include a brief statement such as this example:
Senior Lab Technician (#A06-1234) Resume of Randy Smith

Please see the attached cover letter and resume detailing my 10+ years
of experience as a Lab Technician for Dow Chemical Company.
Following on page 85 is an example of Alan Johnsons cover letter prepared

in Microsoft Word for transmission as an attached file to his e-mail message.
Scannable Cover Letters

If a prospective employer or recruiter asks you to provide a scannable resume,
you may decide that its to your advantage to also include a scannable copy of
your cover letter. This way, its more likely that both your resume and your
cover letter will be scanned into the companys resume database.
As with a scannable resume, all of the fancy typestyles, use of bold and italic
type enhancements, and any other graphics such as borders, underlining, or
unique symbols, are stripped away to create a plain-Jane version of your letter.
The goal is to make your letter easily read and interpreted by the scanning
software many employers and recruiters use to upload and file your cover letter
and resume in a database for later retrieval.
To maximize the likelihood that your cover letter will upload accurately,
follow these guidelines to preparing a scannable version:
] Choose an easy-to-read font such as Times New Roman or Arial.

] Avoid using bold, italic, or underlined type.
] Stick to type sizes of 11-pt. or larger (12-pt. is optimal).
] Make sure that only your name appears on the top line of the letter,
followed by your contact information.
] All of the text should be left-justified with a ragged-right margin.
] Be careful about using abbreviations and acronyms. B.A. for Bachelor
of Arts or OSHA (Occupational Safety & Health Administration) are
fine to include in your cover letter because they are so widely used.
However, if you have any doubt about the proper interpretation of an
abbreviation or acronym, be sure to spell it out in full.
] Eliminate borders or graphics, including horizontal or vertical lines,
tables, and columns.
] Use common keyboard symbols (for example, *, -, and >) in places
where you would use a bullet in your printed cover letter.
] Instead of using characters such as % or &, spell out the words
(percent or and).
] If slashes (/) are used, make sure you leave a space before and after
each slash to ensure the scanner wont see it as a letter and misinterpret
the word or phrase.
There may be situations in which youll be e-mailing the scannable version

of your cover letter and resume, and youll simply attach the scannable
documents to your e-mail messages. In other instances, you may be actually

mailing the documents. If you are sending them via snail mail, be sure to:
] Use a laser printer and print your document on smooth, white

paper, rather than paper with any kind of texture, color, or
pattern. White photocopy paper that you can purchase at any
office supply store is fine for this purpose.
] Always use a paper clip; never staple the pages together.
] Use a 9 12-inch envelope, so it wont be necessary to fold your
documents.
Scannable cover letters and resumes are becoming less and less necessary
as technology continues to evolve, but they are still requested by some recruiters
and employers. As such, they are an important tool in your job search tool kit.
It is important to note that an ASCII text document can serve double duty
as a scannable document. However, if youd prefer to prepare a scannable ver-
sion of your cover letter and resume in a font other than Courier (your only
option in an ASCII file), you may wish to create a separate scannable document
using Times New Roman, Arial, or one of the other common fonts available (for
example, Tahoma, Verdana, Georgia, Bookman Old Style, or Garamond).
On the following page is an example of a scannable cover letter for Alan
Johnson prepared in Arial. Note how different this scannable letter looks when
compared to the ASCII text version of the same cover letter on page 82 and the
Microsoft Word version of the letter on page 85 earlier in this chapter.
Avoid These Critical Mistakes When

Preparing Your E-cover Letters
1. Inappropriate e-mail subject lines. In this context, the simplest is
also the best. Stick with the formats recommended earlier in this
chapter and dont write long, wordy subject lines that dont
immediately communicate why youre contacting the recipient.
2. Improperly formatted attachments. If your attachments are not
downloadable, or cant be easily read after they have been downloaded,
a prospective employer or recruiter will most likely delete your
e-mail message. Thats ityouve lost that opportunity. Be sure to
follow the formatting recommendations outlined throughout this
chapter to be certain your documents transmit accurately.
3. Getting caught by spam filters. Be careful that your subject lines
and e-mail messages dont contain information that the recipients
e-mail might misinterpret as a spam message (for example, words
such as free, limited opportunity, or call now).
4. Cute e-mail addresses. It may be fun to communicate with friends

using [email protected] or [email protected], but
for your job search, try to stick with something more professional (and
logical), such as a variation of your name: [email protected] or
[email protected]. Also, be aware that an e-mail address such
as [email protected] might be filtered out as potential spam,
because the characters before the @ symbol are not a recognizable
word or name.
5. Inappropriate auto signatures. Many people enjoy using cute graphics
(such as smiley faces) or including famous quotes in their auto
signatures. Others get very creative with fonts and colors. The risk
is that they wont transmit properly and will result in gibberish at the
recipients end, or that some quotation or citation that may be
meaningful to you may be a turnoff for the recipient. Keep it simple
and professional. If you use an auto signature for job search e-mails,
simply include your name, phone number, and e-mail address.
6. Patterned or colored backgrounds. These can make the e-mail
unreadable for the recipient or can take far too long to download
when someone opens an e-mail message.
7. Hard to read or colored fonts. As with backgrounds and auto signa-
tures, colors or unusual fonts may not transmit properly, leading to
a completely unreadable e-mail message. Keep it simpleuse Times
New Roman or Arial, 10- or 12-pt., with judicious use of bold and
italics for emphasis, as appropriate.
Electronic Cover Letter s - Design Considerations

Word-Processed Cover ASCII Text Cover Scannable Cover
Letters Letters Letters
Font/ Crisp, clean, distinctive Courier Stick to the basics:
Typestyle (See recommendations Times New Roman,
in Chapter 2). Arial.
Typestyle Bold, italics, and CAPITALIZATION CAPITALIZATION
Effects underlining are all is the only is the only
acceptable and enhancement enhancement that
recommended. available. will scan reliably.
Type Size 11-pt. or 12-pt. for body 12-pt. 11-pt. or 12-pt.
of the document. Use preferred.
larger sizes (14, 16, 18)
for name.
White Use to optimize Separate sections to Use liberally to
Space readability. enhance readability. maximize
scannability.
Electronic Cover Letter s Production Considerations

Word-Processed Cover ASCII Text Cover Scannable Cover
Letters Letters Letters
Text Use centering, indents, Everything strictly Everything strictly
Format and so on, to create an flush-left. flush-left.
appealing presentation.
Preferred Generally, one page. Length doesnt Length doesnt
Length matter. Converting matter. Converting
the cover letter will the cover letter will
undoubtedly make it undoubtedly make
longer than the it longer than the
printed version. printed version.
Preferred White, ivory, or light Not applicable. Bright white or
Paper gray are most preferred. cream (natural). No
Color patterns or shading
that might interfere
with scanning.
Chapter 5
] Cover Letters for
Accounting, Banking, and Finance
Careers
Your cover letter presents an excellent opportunity to show prospective
employers and recruiters how the skills and accomplishments documented on
your resume relate to their specific hiring needs. Each industry and profession
presents unique cover letter writing and design challenges. If you are interested
in pursuing an accounting, banking, or finance career, be certain to include
highlights of these important success factors in your cover letters:
S Success Factor #1
Be as quantitative as possible when listing your accomplishments.
Accounting and finance professionals understand and respect numbers, so
whenever possible, integrate numbers, percentages, and statistics into your
cover letters to support your achievements.
S Success Factor #2
Highlight your specific accounting and financial management skills and
competencies as they relate directly to the targeted position. Be specific and
dont assume anything. If a company is looking for a candidate with
experience in X, Y, and Z (and you have that specific experience), be sure
to include it prominently in your cover letter.
S Success Factor #3
Demonstrate your value by emphasizing your diverse portfolio of skills.
Documenting these capabilities will illustrate the breadth and depth of your
experience, and help to position you favorably against other qualified
candidates.
91
S Success Factor #4
Showcase your technical skills and qualifications. What accounting,
financial analysis, mortgage processing, or budgeting software do you use?
This expertise is essential in todays electronic information age, and it also
shows your ability to adapt and learn new things.
Keywords and Keyword Phrases

Keywords and keyword phrases are critical components of every successful
job seekers cover letter. By using just one or two words, youre able to communicate
a wealth of information about your skills, qualifications, and experience. Whats
more, keywords are the basis for scanning technology and are therefore critical
to every job seekers campaign in todays electronic-based job search market.
Following are the top 20 accounting, banking, and finance keywords, some
of which may reflect your skills and some of which may not be appropriate for
you at this time. Use these words as the foundation for developing your own list
of keywords on the Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Accounts Payable & Receivable Financial Analysis & Reporting
Asset Management Foreign Exchange
Auditing Internal Accounting Controls
Budget Control & Administration Investment Analysis & Management
Cash Management Lending & Loan Administration
Consumer & Commercial Lending Mergers & Acquisitions
Corporate Treasury Profit & Loss Analysis
Cost Accounting Project Accounting
Cost/Benefit Analysis Risk Management
Credit & Collections ROI & ROE Analysis
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for careers in

accounting, banking, and finance.
Cover Letters for Accounting, Banking, and Finance Careers 93
HARRY STRONG
900 Starling Lane Cell: (505) 5552837
Indianapolis, IN 98019 [email protected] Office: (505) 5553399
January 25, 2007
Donna Parkerson
Recruiting Director Accounting & Finance
Martin Shaw Recruiters
22 N. Ambrose Parkway, Suite 1190
Chicago, IL 60693
Dear Ms. Parkerson:
Like many recent graduates, I am eager to begin my career in finance. Unlike others, I realize that a new
bachelors degree is not enough to qualify in todays highly competitive market. As a result, I have worked
diligently to supplement my college education with hands-on experience in financial environments, equipping
me with a wide range of skills as a Financial Analyst. Through my employment and educational training, I have
developed the qualifications that Im sure will make me an asset to one of your client companies:
Financial Skills and Experience

More than two years of experience in a corporate environment as a financial advisor along with a solid
background in financial analysis, reporting, budgeting, negotiating, and business/financial planning. Apply
financial tools to identify, manage, and maximize investment funds.
Keen Research, Analytical, and Quantitative Skills

Adept in reviewing, analyzing and synthesizing financial data as well as viewing challenges from different
perspectives to arrive at creative solutions.
Computer Software Tools

Demonstrated proficiency in learning new applications quickly; I am skilled in using Microsoft Word, Excel and
Access database software. I also utilize Morningstar extensively to research data on mutual funds.
Proven Communications, Organization and Interpersonal Skills

My collective experiences have enabled me to hone both my interpersonal, written, and verbal communications
skills, which include developing financial reports, interfacing with internal and external customers, and delivering
presentations. Cultivating and maintaining positive relationships with a wide range of personalities have resulted
in a large referral network from satisfied clients. Another strength is my ability to efficiently organize and
manage my day-to-day responsibilities for maximum productivity.
I am open to relocation anywhere in the U.S. and am flexible in my salary requirements. I know that your
recruiting practice specializes in placing recent graduates, so Im hopeful you can be assistance to me. Thank
you.
Sincerely,
Harry Strong
Enclosure
Written By: Louise Garver

Font: Tahoma
Written By: Loretta Heck

Font: Bookman Old Style
Written By: Jennifer Rushton

Font: Georgia
Written By: John Femia

Font: Times New Roman

Font: Arial
LISA HILLIARD
555 N. Windset Avenue Chicago, IL 60605 708-555-2291 [email protected]
February 21, 2007
The Community Foundation

P. O. Box 569
Chicago, IL 60605
Dear Hiring Professional:
In response to your search for a Vice President of Finance and Administration, I bring over 20 years of
extensive experience in all areas of Finance and Administration, as well as Information Technology and
Human Resources.
I am an extremely high-energy and innovative manager who leads by example. I consistently produce strong
results with a high degree of integrity, dedication, and strong communication skills. My track record speaks
for itself; I have been involved in virtually every area of an organization, and have made substantial
contributions wherever I have been. One of my former bosses had this to say about me in a review:
Lisa is at the high end of the exceptional scale. She has top-flight management skills,
intelligence, and people skills. She has done an exceptional job in a wide variety of
areas. She is extremely capable as an individual and as a manager and leader. Her
entire group exudes a can-do enthusiasm.
I spoke with Jim Maynard, a Board Member Emeritus of The Community Foundation about the position and
my interest and excitement about it. I know Jim from my volunteer work at the Unity Church, as he is
President of the Church Board. He, too, was enthusiastic about my potential fit with your organization and
thought that I could help you reach your goals.
My interest in moving to the non-profit world is genuine; I have spent years in corporate environments, and
since I went back to school, have had a chance to better define where and how I want to contribute my talents.
I have become very involved both in my church and as a volunteer in the bookstore, technology and
fundraising committees, and on the technology and finance task forces of the organizing/steering committee
for the Illinois Institute of Sciences.
My resume provides further details of my accomplishments. You will note that I have progressed in
responsibility levels throughout my career. I look forward to discussing this exciting career opportunity with
you, and will contact you next week to arrange a meeting so we may discuss the organization's needs in
greater detail.
Sincerely,
Lisa Hilliard
Enclosure
cc: Jim Maynard
Written By: Gail Frank

ALFREDO BHONI
[email protected]
th
8292 West 104 Street, #202B Home: 212.555.1872
New York, NY 10001 Work: 212.555.8212
October 10, 2006
Mr. Lester R. Maddox

Human Resources Manager
The Bank One Corporation
22 Wall Street
New York, NY 10022
Dear Mr. Maddox:
I have but one professional goalto continue to build high-growth private banking programs targeted specifically
to high net-worth Italian investors. Its where my career has focused for the past 10 years and where I have delivered
outstanding performance results:
x Currently with Mellon Banks International Division, I created an entirely new market segment of
Italian investors that currently have more than $300 million in invested and deposited assets with
Mellon.
x During my tenure with one of Italys largest and most diversified financial institutions, I
personally brought more than $100 million in assets to the bank over four years.
x While working with Barnes and Company, I was one of only three finance professionals
responsible for establishing the companys initial market presence throughout Italy. First-year
results exceeded expectations by over 120%.
I bring to the Bank One Corporation a strong blend of business development, marketing, sales and customer
management expertise. Combine that with my solid financial, investment, portfolio management, asset management and
analytical skills, and I guarantee my ability to produce. My only interest in leaving Mellon (its been a great experience for
five years!) is that I am ready for new responsibilities, challenges and opportunities.
If you are interested in a candidate with my qualifications and objectives, I would welcome a personal interview at
your earliest convenience. Be advised that I am open to relocation and extensive travel as may be required.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Alfredo Bhoni
Enclosure
Written By: Wendy Enelow


Font: Arial

Font: Tahoma
Chapter 6
] Cover Letters for
Administrative and Clerical Careers

in pursuing an administrative or clerical career, be certain to include highlights
of these important success factors in your cover letters:
S Success Factor #1
Focus on the contributions you have made to the overall success of your
employers (for example, increasing revenues, reducing costs, upgrading
technologies, managing key projects, or improving productivity and efficiency).
S Success Factor #2
Highlight the vast array of skills, qualifications, competencies, and talents
that you offer which, for most administrative professionals, is quite extensive
due to the varied nature of the work you perform.
S Success Factor #3
Demonstrate your value by emphasizing the number and types of people
and organizations you have supported to give further depth to your ex-
perience. And dont forget your customer service skills, even if your
customers are internal.
S Success Factor #4
Showcase all of your technical skills and qualifications. Word processing,
spreadsheets, accounting software, and customer databases all can be im-
portant. They are essential in todays electronic world of work!
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Keywords and keyword phrases are critical components of every successful job
seekers cover letter. By using just one or two words, youre able to communicate a
wealth of information about your skills, qualifications, and experience. Whats
Following are the top 20 administrative and clerical keywords, some of which
may reflect your skills and some of which may not be appropriate for you at this
time. Use these words as the foundation for developing your own list of keywords
on the Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Budget Administration Meeting Planning
Business Administration Office Management
Clerical Support Policy & Procedure
Client Communications Productivity Improvement
Confidential Correspondence Project Management
Contract Administration Records Management
Corporate Recordkeeping Regulatory Reporting
Document Management Resource Management
Efficiency Improvement Time Management
Liaison Affairs Workflow Planning/Prioritization
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for administrative

and clerical careers.
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ROSEMARY REILLY
1954 West Highland Avenue Elmwood Park, IL 66666
Home (847) 987-6543 Cell (847) 234-5678 [email protected]
July 13, 2006
Hiring Committee
Jones Manufacturing, Inc.
9087 Walker Road
Franklin Park, IL 66903
Dear Hiring Committee:
With a diverse background that encompasses office management, process improvement, benefits
administration, and facilities management, I am currently seeking a challenging and rewarding position
where I can continue to contribute to office efficiency and productivity. I would welcome an opportunity
to discuss the mutual benefits of an employment partnership at your earliest convenience.
For the past 20 years, I have worked for Casman Incorporated and have grown professionally during this
period as the company expanded and launched new ventures and limited partnership organizations.
Originally, my role was managing a one-person office, and has now evolved into managing all office
operations with five back-office employees and 140 commodities traders.
My responsibilities encompass a wide range of functions, including systems development, process

improvement, facilities management, human resource and benefits administration, regulatory compliance,
and staff training and development. Among my strengths are meticulous organization, attentive listening,
articulate communication, diplomacy, and level-headedness under the most stressful situations.
After reviewing my attached resume, please contact me to discuss opportunities with your firm. I look
forward to speaking with you soon, and thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Rosemary Reilly
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LOUISE E. APPLETON #404 - 6382 EASTPOINT DRIVE, VANCOUVER, BC V6N 4H8

(H) 604.491.9172 (W) 604.685.1967 (C) 604.278.9336 (F) 604.685.1962 [email protected]
January 12, 2007
Progressive Law Corporation

Suite 2001927 Williams Avenue
Toronto, Ontario M5C 3K8
Attention: Mr. Rick Callaway, Director of Administrative Services

Re: Office Administrator/Bookkeeper employment opportunity (#2005-OA2)
Dear Mr. Callaway:
I am a proactive, dedicated Office Administrator/Bookkeeper who knows the job, requires minimal training, and
would be quick to assist with other areas of your business. People describe me as well-organized, effective,
comfortable with others, and having a great sense of humor. My highly professional manner, positive attitude, and
enjoyment for administrative work really help me to consistently deliver quality results.
As a highly experienced Office Administrator with approximately 20 successful years working in a legal
environment, I have the skills required to meet the needs of your practice in a very short time. I perform well for
my current employer and have also found numerous ways to improve operations. Here are a few reasons why I
would make a good addition to the Progressive team:
x My experience in both legal and administrative activities began as a legal secretary and later
continued on in office administration, making me very familiar with the activities of both
jobs. My administrative work has encompassed both financial/accounting and human
resources aspects, and this has given me a strong grasp of current methods and guidelines.
x My extensive people skills have come from years of working with a wide variety of different
people, including lawyers, clients, support staff, and suppliers. Besides frequently supervising
others, I make it my business to both humor and motivate them. A dedicated team player, I
enjoy working with my colleagues to create order out of chaos.
x Finally, my solid personal work ethic enables me to stay punctual, focused, organized,
reliable, and able to handle whatever tasks come my way.
Thank you for reading my resume. I will follow up with you in two weeks to set up a meeting to discuss the fine
details of what you seek in an Office Administrator and how I might help you streamline your operations. Please
contact me at anytime if I can provide you with any additional information. I look forward to talking with you
soon!
Sincerely,
Louise E. Appleton
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ELAINE BROOKS
23 Mountain Road Monsey, NY 10952 (914) 237-1883 [email protected]
May 6, 2006
Ms. Laurie Dern, Principal

Ringwood Township School
200 Main Street
Ringwood, NJ 08825
Dear Ms. Dern:
Your opening for a secretary captured my interest as it seems an ideal match for my experience, talents,
and interests. As a highly regarded administrative assistant with excellent interpersonal skills, a lifelong
love of working with students, and a demonstrated commitment to service, I would like to explore the
possibility of putting my talents to work for you.
As you can see from the enclosed resume, my background includes a wealth of administrative
experience, 20 years of which were spent in school settings. Conscientious, organized, and effective, I
established a long-standing reputation as a productive and effective staff member during my career.
Perhaps more important, though, is my devotion to the students. I take pleasure in my ability to build
rapport with students, and treasure the special bonds I enjoy with them. Of particular note, I am proud
to say that I was honored by the Kingwood Place Schools graduating class of 2005 with a yearbook
dedication, marking the first time in the schools 70-year history that a staff member was so honored.
Among my other strengths, you will find that I am a resourceful individual and a fast learner who is
always quick to become the office go-to person. I am friendly and easygoing with outstanding
interpersonal skills, so students, parents, and faculty members alike find me to be approachable and
accommodating. With a passion for providing top-notch service, I have proven to be a valued employee
in every position I have held. With a record of success behind me, I am confident that I will be an asset
to your staff as well.
I would be pleased to have the opportunity to discuss future employment, and look forward to speaking
with you. Please feel free to contact me at the address and phone number listed above to arrange a
meeting.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Elaine Brooks
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Chapter 7
] Cover Letters for
Government Careers

in pursuing a career in government, be certain to include highlights of these
important success factors in your cover letters:
S Success Factor #1
Often when applying for a government position, you will be requested
to submit a resume along with other documentation. This might include
statements of Key Skill Areas (KSAs), responses to specific questions,
information about your particular competencies, and more. If this is the
situation, the best advice for writing your cover letter is to include information
that is unique to you and your experience, and that makes you stand out
from other applicants.
S Success Factor #2
Some postings will use the term Letter of Interest instead of Cover
Letter. Show your interest in the position by showcasing how you will use
your skills and experience to address the challenges of that particular position.
S Success Factor #3
Use your cover letter to explain any special circumstances that arent
covered in the resume. These might include your desire to relocate (and why),
reasons for a career change, or special accommodations for a disability. (Note
that a candidate with a disability may be sought after by hiring officials, due to the
governments desire to fulfill EOE/Affirmative Action goals and objectives.)
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S Success Factor #4
Some agencies offer the choice of submitting a paper application or an
electronic application. In many instances, the electronic application process
does not allow you to include a cover letter. For this reason, consider using
the paper application process, whenever possible, to take advantage of the
opportunity to sell yourself with a powerful cover letter targeted for that
specific position.

Following are the top 20 government keywords, some of which may reflect
your skills and some of which may not be appropriate for you at this time. Use
these words as the foundation for developing your own list of keywords on the
Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Briefings & Trainings Liaison Affairs
Budget Planning & Allocation Lobbying
Congressional Affairs Press Relations & Media Affairs
Cross-Cultural Communications Procurement & Acquisitions
Cultural Diversity Program Design & Management
Foreign Government Relations Public Advocacy
Governmental Affairs Public Works

Inter-Agency Relations Regulatory Reporting
International Trade & Commerce SEC Affairs
Legislative Affairs Zoning & Compliance
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for government

careers.
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PETER LAWRENCE
67 Downey Street West Milton, CT 08875 203.788.2133 [email protected]
September 2, 2006
Mayor John R. Grossman

Town of West Milton
100 Main Street
West Milton, CT 08876
Dear Mayor Grossman:
During my 10-year career as a public official, I have acquired broad experience and honed diverse skills that I
believe will be of interest to the Town of West Milton. My background, highlighted in the enclosed resume,
demonstrates that I possess the necessary strategic planning and financial, project, and people management
capabilities that would qualify me to serve as your communitys Town Administrator.
What do I offer?
More than 10 years of municipal government experience as a Selectman and Chair governing
the Town of Southington, which is complemented by private sector management experience.
Proactive leadership with proven ability to inspire cooperation, communication, and
consensus among personnel and other groups.
Development and administration of $10 million budget as well as planning and overseeing
multiple projects to meet community needs.
Contributing to economic development by building strong public/private partnerships and
negotiating agreements.
Examples of my accomplishments:
Leadership of several town revitalization projects providing key services.
Negotiating Tax Incentive Financing Agreements for retaining and attracting employers.
Sound fiscal management that includes improved benefit programs without cost increases.
Fostering a work environment that builds team spirit and energizes employees to perform at
their best. As a result, our staff is recognized for exceptional responsiveness and positive
community relations.
This position as Town Administrator is particularly exciting to me for several reasons. As a native of the
community, I am familiar with the areas demographics and general issues facing West Milton. In addition, I
still consider the community my home as I have extended family living in the area, am a property owner, and
would love to be a resident of the community once again.
I have always had a passion for municipal government service and would enjoy making it my full-time career.
Therefore, I welcome the opportunity to discuss my qualifications and the contributions I would make as your
communitys Town Administrator. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Peter Lawrence
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Chapter 8
] Cover Letters for
Healthcare and Social Service
Careers
in pursuing a career in healthcare or social services, be certain to include
S Success Factor #1
Show your diverse experience by including the different types of patients/
consumers you have treated or served. Including this information demon-
strates your versatility and sensitivity to individuals with varying needs.
S Success Factor #2
Be sure to mention relevant healthcare procedures you can perform or
equipment you can operate. Dont assume your current job title equates to
the same job duties in a new organization. By documenting your skills, you
ensure that your next employer will see what you can do and how you add
value.
S Success Factor #3
List your credentials at the top of your letter. Include either the appro-
priate initials after your name, or spell out your licenses or certifications
and place them near the top of your letter. This is critical information
and immediately communicates that you have the right qualifications for
a particular position.
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S Success Factor #4
Highlight your participation in any research projects or in the develop-
ment and/or introduction of new procedures or techniques. Even though you
may believe your role was relatively minor, your exposure to leading-edge
treatments and protocols could be a point of interest for a new employer.

job seekers cover letter. By using just one or two words, youre able to
communicate a wealth of information about your skills, qualifications, and
experience. Whats more, keywords are the basis for scanning technology and
are therefore critical to every job seekers campaign in todays electronic-based
job search market.
Following are the top 20 healthcare and social service keywords, some of
which may reflect your skills and some of which may not be appropriate for you
at this time. Use these words as the foundation for developing your own list of
keywords on the Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Ambulatory Care Human Services
Behavior Modification Inpatient & Outpatient Care
Case Management Insurance Administration
Chronic Care Integrated Service Delivery
Client Advocacy Patient/Client Relations
Community Outreach Practice Management
Crisis Intervention Protective Services
Diagnostic Evaluation & Intervention Regulatory Affairs & Reporting
Healthcare Administration Risk Management
Healthcare Delivery Vocational Rehabilitation
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for healthcare and
social services careers.
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Chapter 9
] Cover Letters for
Hospitality and Food Service
Careers
in pursuing a hotel or food service career, be certain to include highlights of
these important success factors in your cover letters:
S Success Factor #1
If youre in the food service industry, mention the types of cuisine with
which you are familiar. If you worked at a restaurant, was it a four-star
establishment? If you worked at a hotel, what kind of guests did you cater
to and what types of facilities did you have (for example, spa, golf course,
or tennis club)?
S Success Factor #2
Do you plan, prepare food, or set up for banquets or large-scale recep-
tions and parties? How many people attend these events? As you well know,
a banquet for 500 people is an entirely different function than the day-to-day
operations of a medium-sized restaurant.
S Success Factor #3
If you have studied or worked under a famous chef or at a renowned
restaurant, hotel, or resort, be sure to mention it prominently, including
any training or apprenticeship programs that were involved.
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S Success Factor #4
Include any administrative functions for which you have been respon-
sible, such as purchasing, inventory control, food and labor cost controls,
sales, customer service, or facilities. Dont forget to include these important
roles and the contribution they represent to your employers success.

Following are the top 20 hotel and food service keywords, some of which
Top 20 Keywords
Back-of-the-House Operations Inventory Planning & Control
Catering Services Labor Cost Controls
Conference & Meeting Planning Menu Planning & Pricing
Corporate Dining Room Operations Multi-Unit Operations
Customer Service Management Occupancy Management
Food & Beverage Operations Portion Control
Front-of-the-House Operations Property Development
Guest Service & Satisfaction Resort Management
Hospitality Management Revenue Planning & Reporting
Housekeeping Operations Special Events Planning
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for hospitality and
food service careers.
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Chapter 10
] Cover Letters for
Human Resources and Training
Careers
in pursuing a career in human resources or training, be certain to include
S Success Factor #1
Show your diverse skills by mentioning the different aspects of human
resource management with which you have experience (for example, benefits
administration, recruiting, payroll, employee relations, and training).
S Success Factor #2
Mention initiatives you have developed or implemented to improve
employee satisfaction and retention. This might include counseling individual
employees on professional development or introducing employee incentive
programs recognizing peak performance.
S Success Factor #3
For trainers, include activities such as needs assessment, curriculum plan-
ning, course design, online instruction, classroom training, and instructional
materials design.
S Success Factor #4
Include detailed information about your familiarity with technology-
based human resource management systems (for example, timekeeping,
payroll, benefits administration, and manpower planning). These technical
skills are critical in todays tech-based HR environment.
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Following are the top 20 human resources and training keywords, some of
Top 20 Keywords
Benefits Design & Administration Manpower Planning
Change Management Organizational Development
Employee Assistance Programs Performance Incentives
Employee Communications Performance Reviews & Appraisals
Employee Relations Recruitment & Selection
Employee Retention Staffing
Grievance Proceedings & Arbitration Succession Planning
Human Resources Administration Training & Development
Labor Contract Negotiations Union Relations
Leadership Development Wage Administration
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for human resources
and training careers.
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CARLOS RAMIREZ
86 Howland Avenue, Easton, PA 18042
November 14, 2006
Mr. David Lewis

Human Resources Manager
Textron Business Services, Inc.
1200 Arch Street, 4th Floor
Philadelphia, PA 19103
Dear Mr. Lewis:
The posted opportunity for an Assistant Manager of Corporate Training is an excellent match with my
experience. My career includes more than eight years of progressive responsibility in training, marketing, and
customer service.
Highlights of my strengths include:
Program Development. Design and deliver training materials for technical and business skill
development, including a creativeand successfulplan to increase training opportunities for customer
service reps in a call center environment, without taking away from their phone time.
Skills Assessment. Analyze and interpret quality-monitoring data to best enhance workplace
productivity, office functionality, and employee performance. Proposed and facilitated peer feedback
sessions in which employees with varying strengths were grouped so that participants benefited by learning
from each other.
Coaching Techniques. Develop and utilize effective one-on-one coaching methods. Co-created a
thriving in-house model for coaching customer service reps on results of their monitoring. Easily
remembered acronym identifies the stages of a session in which the coach guides the employee in identifying
his/her own strengths and areas for further development. Created related training module and employed
technique in actual coaching sessions.
Currently exploring new opportunities, I am confident in my ability to make an immediate and lasting
contribution to your organization and would welcome an interview at your earliest convenience.
I look forward to speaking with you soon.
Sincerely,
Carlos Ramirez
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Chapter 11
] Cover Letters for
Law Enforcement and Legal
Careers
in pursuing a law enforcement or legal career, be certain to include highlights
S Success Factor #1
Credentials and certifications are key. Prominently mention firearms,
special tactics, or special investigative credentials. For attorneys, list the
courts and states in which you are admitted to practice.
S Success Factor #2
In addition to credentials, include other professional training in areas
relevant to the position you are pursuing. Law enforcement and legal pro-
fessions place a heavy emphasis on professional development, so be sure to
include yours.
S Success Factor #3
Be sure to mention any measures of performance. Whats your success
rate in cases youve tried as an attorney? As a police officer, how many
arrests have you made or how has the crime rate been reduced because of
your actions?
S Success Factor #4
Remember to include information about the administrative aspects of
your job, especially if youre interested in advancing into supervisory or
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management positions. This may include personnel training and supervi-

sion, record-keeping, report preparation, regulatory review and compliance,
and a host of other functions.

Following are the top 20 law enforcement and legal keywords, some of which
Top 20 Keywords
Arbitration Judicial Affairs
Arrest & Prosecution Legal Research & Analysis
Civil Law Proceedings Legislative Review & Analysis
Corporate Law & Representation Litigation
Courtroom Proceedings Public Safety & Administration
Criminal Investigations Regulatory Affairs
Depositions & Discovery Risk Management
Due Diligence Search & Seizure
Intellectual Property Trademark & Copyright Law
Interrogations Workers Compensation
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for law enforcement
and legal careers.
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Reynaldo T. Martinez
145 West 67th Street, Apt 21C y New York, NY 10023 y 212-531-0731
[email protected]
December 15, 2006
Mr. Michael Gray, Esq.

Associate General Counsel
Early Dispute Resolution Group
Lehman Brothers
3 World Financial Center
New York, NY 10080
Dear Mr. Gray:
Recently, I met with Peter Morris of Lehman Brothers legal department, whom I have
known for several years. He suggested contacting you about a possible position with Lehman
Brothers, and I have enclosed my resume for your review. After meeting with Mr. Morris, I am very
interested in working for your firm.
With over five years of experience in corporate and securities law, I am well-versed in
drafting and reviewing contracts in such areas as corporate finance, employment, real estate, and
commercial and intellectual property. I am also knowledgeable in the registration and reporting
requirements under the Securities Exchange Act of 1934.
Particularly relevant experience from my background includes working as an attorney in

the Alternative Dispute Resolution Unit for New York Life Insurance Company, analyzing
complaints made by policy owners against their agents, concerning agents sales tactics to determine
compliance with company guidelines and state insurance department regulations. I reviewed
allegations, interviewed agents, and made determinations of liability and relief.
My skills and experience will make a valuable contribution to your legal department. I
would be pleased to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications may lead to a career
with Lehman Brothers.
Please contact me at (212) 531-0731 to set up an interview at your earliest convenience.
Very truly yours,
Reynaldo T. Martinez
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10 Olden Drive
Bridgewater, NJ 08807
L IN K IM P ARK 908-725-0001 [email protected]
September 13, 2006
Ms. Linda Pearl

Uptown Legal Partners
150 Riverside Drive
Newark, NJ 07102
Dear Ms. Pearl:
As a recently certified paralegal with a diverse professional background and a strong work ethic,
I believe I am someone who would be a welcome addition to your staff. Knowing that your firm is
recommended by the career center at Fairleigh Dickinson, I would like to explore the possibility of
putting my skills and experience to work for you. Among my strengths, I offer excellent administrative
skills, a love of learning, a passion for the law, and an unrelenting commitment to achieving goals.
As you can see from my resume, I earned my paralegal certification from Fairleigh Dickinson in
May 2005, and have experience as a paralegal for a title company, as well as an intern for the Superior
Court of New Jersey. In a short time, I have established a reputation as a hard-working individual who
effectively manages the demands of working in busy environments. In fact, while with the title company,
even though the newest paralegal, I was entrusted with handling transactions for real estate cases that
were deemed the most challenging. Prior to entering the paralegal field, I enjoyed a challenging and
rewarding career in high-level administrative roles for Johnson & Johnson, providing a backdrop for my
developing paralegal career. I believe my breadth of practical knowledge, strong skills, and the wealth of
administrative experience that I have accumulated will make me an asset to your office.
Throughout my career, I have achieved success through my resourcefulness, persistence, and

ability to communicate effectively with people at all levels. Among my other strengths, you will find that
I am organized and thorough and show good judgment in making decisions. Service-oriented, I consider
myself a team player who is willing to do whatever is necessary to get the job done, and I pride myself on
my ability to take on challenging assignments and see them through to completion.
This combination of skills has served me well in the past, allowing me to make significant
contributions while establishing a reputation as an efficient and effective employee. With this solid
record of accomplishment as the basis, you can be confident that I will do the same for you.
I would be pleased to have the opportunity to discuss your needs and how I might be able to
meet them. Please feel free to contact me by phone or e-mail to arrange a meeting. I look forward to
speaking with you soon and will follow up with you next week.
Sincerely,
Lin Kim Park
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Chapter 12
] Cover Letters for
Manufacturing and Operations
Careers
in pursuing a career in manufacturing or operations, be certain to include
S Success Factor #1
Highlight your experience and training in principles and methods such
as Lean Manufacturing, Six Sigma, Just-In-Time inventory, TQM, SAP,
and ISO standards.
S Success Factor #2
Showcase information about your contributions to process improve-
ments, scrap reduction, or other innovations that increase operating effi-
ciency or reduce production costs. Use dollar figures or percentages to
quantify results, and, when possible, relate these results to the prospective
employers needs.
S Success Factor #3
Demonstrate the diversity of your skillset by mentioning the various
operations and processes with which you have experience (for example, cell
manufacturing, assembly line, fabrication, stamping/molding, or clean-room
operations). Emphasize those experiences that are most relevant to the needs
of the targeted employer.
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S Success Factor #4
Include statistics about quality and customer interactions. As domestic
manufacturers compete in the global market, delivering defect-free prod-
ucts and being attentive to customers are critical for success.

job seekers cover letter. By using just one or two words, youre able to
communicate a wealth of information about your skills, qualifications, and
experience. Whats more, keywords are the basis for scanning technology and
are therefore critical to every job seekers campaign in todays electronic-based
job search market.
Following are the top 20 manufacturing and operations keywords, some of
Top 20 Keywords
Budget Planning & Administration Operations Re-engineering
Continuous Process Improvement Plant Management
Cost Reduction & Avoidance Process Automation
Efficiency Improvement Productivity Improvement
Facilities Engineering Quality Assurance & Control
Inventory Planning & Control Resource Planning & Management
Logistics Supply Chain Management
Manufacturing Technology Technology Integration
Multi-Site Operations Management Workflow Optimization
Occupational Health & Safety Workforce Planning & Management
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for manufacturing

and operations careers.
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ZACHARY MONTANA (home) 271.684.2853

2346 Clearwater Way, Kitimat, BC V9R 6T1 [email protected] (mobile) 406.883.2974
September 13, 2006
Forestall Wood Products

Suite 22001575 Chamberlain Street
Nanaimo, BC V7L 4C6
Attention: Mr. Larry Cuthbertson (Vice PresidentSawmill Operations)

Re: Sawmill ManagerNanaimo Operations
Dear Mr. Cuthbertson:
I am a 28-year veteran of the coastal BC sawmilling industry and have spent over 24 of those years handling
steadily increasing supervisory and management responsibilities. Most of my career has been on Vancouver
Island, and for the last nine years I have been employed in Kitimat as a Plant Superintendent. Now I would like
to move back to Central Vancouver Island and manage a sawmill there.
With my lengthy experience as a mill worker, supervisor, manager, and superintendent, I have worn all of the
hats and have a solid set of skills to meet the challenges of a fast-paced Sawmill Manager position:
Health and safety focus: This is an area in which I am most proud of my achievements.
Through my initiatives as the Safety Prevention Officer for my current employer, I have
turned around what was once a terrible safety and absenteeism record to one that is
exemplary for the sawmilling industry.
Experience in mill planning and upgrading: Over the years, I have led several projects
to plan new mills and upgrade existing facilities. From a hands-on perspective, I have
worked with practically all of the machinery and tools used in sawmills.
Operations expertise: Regardless of whether Im dealing with a production, personnel,
safety, organizational, or any other issue, my ability to quickly size up situations and
gather information enables me to make timely, effective decisions.
Proven talent in marketing and sales: Frequently, I have had the opportunity to market
my employers wares and work with clients to learn their requirements, help them
discover profitable opportunities involving our products, and provide them with
exemplary customer service. I am particularly experienced in working with Asian and
American clients.
Thank you for reviewing my resume. I am very keen to share with you my ideas about how I could efficiently,
safely, and profitably lead your Nanaimo operations. I will contact you in two weeks to arrange a meeting; in
the meantime, please dont hesitate to get in touch with me if I can provide any further information. I look
forward to talking with you soon.
Sincerely,
Zachary Montana
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GORDON JIMENEZ E-mail: [email protected]

5251 North Decorah Road Residence: (262) 334-4078
West Bend, WI 53095 Mobile: (414) 313-8365
September 21, 2006
Clifford Johnson, President

Manufacturing Recruiters
600 Ventura Boulevard
Inglewood, CA 90301
Dear Mr. Johnson:
Building organizational value and profitability is my expertise. Throughout my tenure with

Midwest Manufacturing, currently as National Director of Operations, we have pioneered
innovative solutions to improve installation cycle times, reduce operating costs, enhance customer
satisfaction, and accelerate top-line revenue.
With more than 15 years of leadership experience in operations and production, I bring a
strong track record of performance:
Strategic vision and leadership of a manufacturing division that we grew

from $460 million to $550 million in less than four years with a 50% cycle
time reduction, a 50% improvement in forecasting, and a five-point increase in
our customer satisfaction index.
Training, development, and leadership of high-performing, multi-discipline

professionals in Production Operations, Logistics/Supply Chain, Engineering
Project Management, and Installation Service.
Direct P&L accountability for multi-million dollar operations: $5 million to

$550 million, with teams ranging from seven to 650.
Demonstrated ability to impact positive change and strengthen profitability as

a change agent.
My goal is another senior-level position with an organization in need of strong, decisive,

and visionary leadership. For the right opportunity, I am open to relocation and am anticipating a
compensation package well into the six figures.
Thank you for your time and your consideration. I look forward to meeting with you to
discuss specific opportunities with your client companies.
Sincerely,
Gordon Jimenez
Written By: Michele Haffner

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Chapter 13
] Cover Letters for
Sales, Marketing, and Customer
Service Careers
in pursuing a career in sales, marketing, or customer service management, be
certain to include highlights of these important success factors in your cover
letters:
S Success Factor #1
Use statistics to quantify your achievements whenever possible. Show
percentage increases in revenues, your top ranking among other sales
associates, or the number of new accounts youve closed to demonstrate
how youve added value. If youre a marketing professional, how much
was market share or sales volume increased based on the campaign(s) you
recommended?
S Success Factor #2
Demonstrate how your work history has prepared you to meet the
specific needs of the prospective employer at this time. Show your versatility
in representing different product categories or serving various types of
customers (for example, business-to-business and business-to-consumer).
S Success Factor #3
Highlight consultative selling and relationship-building skills. In todays
environment, connecting well with customers, expertly assessing their needs,
and recommending the right solutions are highly valued qualities in sales
and customer service professionals.
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S Success Factor #4
Mention your technology skills, especially presentation software or con-
tact management applications that help sales professionals do their jobs
more efficiently. For customer service people, experience with various order
entry/tracking software is important.

Following are the top 20 sales, marketing, and customer service keywords,
some of which may reflect your skills and some of which may not be appropriate
for you at this time. Use these words as the foundation for developing your own
list of keywords on the Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Brand Development & Launch Multi-Channel Marketing
Competitive Market Intelligence Multimedia Marketing & Promotion
Contract Negotiations Product & Market Positioning
Corporate Communications Product Lifecycle Management
Customer Relationship Management Public Relations
Customer Service & Retention Sales Administration
E-Commerce Sales Presentations
International Trade Sales Training
Key Account Management Solutions Selling
Media Affairs & Press Relations Time & Territory Management
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for sales, marketing,
and customer service careers.
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Written By: Edward Turilli


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Written By: Michelle Mastruserio Reitz

Written By: Susan Hoopes

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Jane A. Simmons
9007 Rainor Road Chapel Hill, NC 65540 Home: 436-.997.0668 Mobile: 436.997.3378 [email protected]
Having worked with Jane in May 1, 2006

a very dynamic and fast-paced
environment, I was always Joe Albertson
impressed with her ability to President & CEO
look straight at the goal and Armada Technologies, Inc.
help guide the team to the PO Box 1109
objectives. This ability was Raleigh, NC 22093-1109
invaluable to the group
when working with various Dear Mr. Albertson:
organizations, people, and
processes, to build As a business and marketing leader in program management and process
cohesive business and improvements that result in increased revenues and reduced costs, I can offer a
marketing plans spanning the wealth of knowledge to Armada Technologies. My expertise in leading companies
entire worldwide through periods of growth and change has prepared me for any number of
organization. Jane has the challenges that Armada may be facing.
leadership to build a common
understanding of the customers Highlights of my achievements during my rapid growth at Center Technology, Inc.
and the marketing include:
organization, as well as to
assist the organization in As Marketing Manager for the global business unit:
defining strategies and
programs to address this x Led a global team of marketing and product managers to redefine the
market. program scope, which increased revenue by more than $50 million
incrementally in 6 months.
Fred Jones, VPMarketing
Center Technology, Inc.
As Marketing Manager for the hardware program:
Jane could be counted on to x Directed the reduction of over 120 marketing programs with a $13 million
take an assignment, project, or quarterly budget down to eight marketing programs with an $8 million
complex problem and pull the budget.
right resources together (people x Implemented promotions and extensive training programs to increase cross-
and funding) to drive to sell of PCs and support services by over 25% annually.
success. She works to
understand the customer needs, As Business Planning Manager:
requirements and pain points,
and then addresses those in x Leveraged the companys global account organization and sales force to
creative new ways. She drives increase global accounts revenue by more than 12%.
her team and her projects with x Improved relationships between the Americas regional business and
great independence and with marketing teams through the implementation of best practices.
an eye for quality, ultimately
delivering exceptional results If you need a strategic marketing executive with strong business acumen and out-of-
on behalf of the end-user the-box problem-solving talent blended with extraordinary team leadership and the
customer and our company. ability to execute tactically, then I am your candidate. I would welcome the
She is an extraordinary team opportunity to discuss how my vision, creativity and skillsets could benefit your
player and one of the most organization. May we meet?
talented individuals I have
had the pleasure to work with Sincerely,
in my 18 years.
Ellen Lawrence, Worldwide
VPMarketing
Center Technology, Inc. Jane A. Simmons

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D AVID M ADISON, LUTCF, CLTC, CFA

Cell: 203-599-0308 Office: 203-981-2213 [email protected]
May 16, 2006

George Ramey, Partner
Ramey, Rather and Smyth Partners
1000 Chimney Branch Road
Boston, MA 01909
Dear Mr. Ramey:
Delivering stakeholder value through effective leadership, marketing and business development is my forte.
For the past 20 years, I have played a pivotal role in creating and managing successful financial operations for
two industry giantsMassMutual and MetLife. During this time, Ive not only been recognized as a top
performer, honored with numerous industry and corporate awards, but I have also been a catalyst in
helping to ignite the careers of many other top-flight sales professionals. Im hoping that you can help me
find a new and equally challenging executive assignment.
I am at my best when I face a new set of challenges and am known for my ability to shatter corporate sales
records through both my own initiatives and by developing high-octane teams of sales professionals. The
opportunity you have right now seems to present a win-win situation for both of us. Highlights of what I can
offer include:
Expertise in developing and overseeing highly successful operations. Created a robust
financial services practice from the ground floor up that, within two years, ranked in the top 10
out of 350 in sales, profitability and customer satisfaction.
Unique ability to distill corporate barriers, cut through red tape, and effectively
manage systems and resources to achieve an organizations mission. Track record of
consistently outperforming sales goals by executing practical and appealing sales strategies
and kindling a strong team spirit.
One-of-a-kind marketing campaigns that deliver highly profitable results. Piloted an
outreach initiative that was the first of its kind in the financial services industry. Developed a
storefront marketing program to attract Hispanic clients that was endorsed by community
leaders in Hartford, CT. Resulted in a 40% revenue increase within that market segment.
Magnetic networking, client relationship and customer retention abilities. Headed up
a retention program at MetLife with brokers and affiliates that curbed the loss of clients and
protected over $5.6 million in assets under management.
Innate ability to champion professional excellence through staff recruiting, training
and mentoring. Pioneered a new financial services sales training Boot Camp program that
increased the revenue performance of sales representatives by 39% in just eight months.
I would welcome the opportunity to speak with you about your current search assignments appropriate for an
individual with my qualifications. I am open to relocation and would anticipate a total compensation package
well over $200,000 annually. Thank you for your time. Ill follow up with you in a few days.
Sincerely,
Dave Madison
1 Montgomery Place West Hartford, CT 06117
Written By: Jill Grindle

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Chapter 14
] Cover Letters for
Skilled Trades Careers

in pursuing a career in the skilled trades, be certain to include highlights of
these important success factors in your cover letters:
S Success Factor #1
Be sure to highlight specific training programs, internships, or apprentice-
ships youve completed that relate directly to the position for which you are
applying. Then, be sure to highlight any additional certifications or licenses
you have earned (for example, welding, HVAC, and so on).
S Success Factor #2
Show your range of experience. For example: framing, roofing, finish
cabinet work (carpenter); 120-volts, 480-volts, network cabling (electrician);
pneumatics, hydraulics, and high-pressure lines (plumber).
S Success Factor #3
Remember to mention special skills that set you apart and that directly
relate to the stated needs of the prospective employer (for example, con-
duit bending, fiber optic installation, EDM processes, or compound and
progressive die building/repair).
S Success Factor #4
Highlight your familiarity with the latest technology. Do you use CAD/
CAM software, CNC programming, or other technology tools and aids? If
so, be sure to include them. Theyre a great asset for you in your job search.
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Following are the top 20 keywords for careers in the skilled trades, some of
Top 20 Keywords
Blueprints & Drawings Project Scheduling & Documentation
Contract Administration Project Specifications
Crew Supervision Regulatory Compliance
Customer Relations Residential & Commercial Projects
Electrical, Plumbing & HVAC Scope-of-Work Documents
Fault Isolation & Analysis Security Systems Installation
Maintenance & Repair Testing & Troubleshooting
Material Management Tools & Equipment Control
Preventative Maintenance Training & Apprenticeships
Project Management Work Site Safety
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for skilled trades
careers.
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Written By: Christine Robinson

Written By: Brian Leeson

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Mackenzie Mac Michaels

515 Brandywine Drive (585) 383-4321
Pittsford, New York 14534 [email protected]
December 2, 2006
Seneca Nation Casinos, LLC

[email protected]
Your recent posting for a Stationary Engineer is an excellent match for my existing skills, and I
believe I can be an asset to your organization in this role. Therefore, I have enclosed a resume outlining
my qualifications.
Considering your requirements, the following points may be of particular interest:
As a licensed Stationary Engineer (City of Rochester, New York), I have

qualifications and experience operating steam boilers, turbines, and steam
generators.
As an Operating Engineer for a 26-story office building, I have experience

maintaining and operating a wide array of electrical, plumbing, and fire
control systems.
In my current position, I am accountable for purchasing parts and supplies,

and maintaining parts/supplies inventory.
I have experience operating computerized environmental controls, including

Johnson Controls Metasys.
In addition, I believe that my 10 years of experience at Mapledale Party House gives me special
insights into the unique challenges faced by large facilities hosting special events on a routine basis.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet and discuss how my capabilities can address your needs.
Please contact me to arrange a mutually convenient time for an initial interview.
Sincerely,
Mackenzie Michaels
Enclosure
Written By: Arnie Boldt


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FREDERICK VINCENT
999 Ridge Road (585) 872-9999
Webster, New York 14580 [email protected]
February 19, 2007
Human Resources Department

Delphi Fuel Systems
PO Box 1009
Honeoye Falls, NY 14472
As an experienced Plant Maintenance Mechanic with 10+ years of experience in an ISO-9002

manufacturing facility, as well as years of experience in successful entrepreneurial pursuits, I can offer your
company a well-rounded background defined by drive and integrity. My resume is enclosed for your
consideration.
Some of the key qualifications I can bring to a position with your firm include:
Trained and experienced NYS Journeyman Maintenance Mechanic. Over the last
15 years, I have advanced both my knowledge and responsibility in a role that
encompasses installation, repair, preventive maintenance, and relocation of large
industrial machinery and equipment. I was elected by my peers to serve as a
Group Leader with oversight of 17 employees. Additionally, I am routinely called
upon to assist with hoist relocation projects, based on my expertise in that area.
Hands-on experience operating, rebuilding, and maintaining heavy equipment.

Over the years, I have purchased and refurbished numerous pieces of
construction equipment for resale or personal use.
Successful 12-year ownership of a retail business, as well as 11 years as a landlord

of residential rental properties, all of which demonstrate strong business sense,
professionalism, and a firm commitment to succeed.
I am open to both supervisory and hands-on opportunities that will capitalize on my project
management, team leadership, and technical skills. I would be pleased to speak with you in person about
what I can contribute to the future success of your organization. Please feel free to telephone me to arrange
an interview.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Frederick Vincent
Enclosure

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Chapter 15
] Cover Letters for
Teaching and Education Careers

in pursuing a career in teaching and education, be certain to include highlights
S Success Factor #1
List your credentials/certifications prominently, possibly right after
your contact information. Principals and administrators want to see right
away what subject areas or grade levels you are qualified to teach and/or
administer.
S Success Factor #2
Mention the classes you have taught, including grade levels and sub-
jects. Include any information about special lesson plans or field trips
related to a particular subject area to illustrate your ingenuity and creativ-
ity in bringing the subject matter alive for your students. Relate these ac-
tivities to the particular needs of the school or school district to which you
are applying.
S Success Factor #3
Highlight any committees you have been a member of or student activi-
ties for which you have served as an advisor (for example, Science Curriculum
Committee or Olympics of the Mind Advisor).
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S Success Factor #4
Include travel or other enriching activities that contribute to your abil-
ity to bring additional value to the classroom. A social studies teacher who
has spent extensive time exploring Europe or Native American cultures in
the Southwest can be a much more fascinating candidate than someone who
hasnt had similar experiences.

Following are the top 20 teaching and education keywords, some of which
Top 20 Keywords
Accreditation Parent-Teacher Relations
Academic Advising Research & Publishing
Academic Standards School Administration
Classroom Management Student Advisement
Course Design Student Placement
Curriculum Development Student Recruitment
Educational Services Administration Student Relations
Higher Education Teacher Training & Instruction
Instructional Materials Testing & Evaluation
Multimedia Learning Methodologies Textbook Review & Selection
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for teaching and
education careers.
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Written By: Julie Rains


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Written By: Susan Guameri

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Written By: Diane Burns

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Chapter 16
] Cover Letters for
Technology, Science, and
Engineering Careers
in pursuing a career in technology, science, or engineering, be certain to include
S Success Factor #1
Technology, science, and engineering careers all require knowledge of
technical equipment, computer systems and software, and much more. Be
sure to mention relevant technical knowledge (for example, scientific/labo-
ratory equipment, computer software and hardware, operating systems,
and networks) to clearly communicate your qualifications and technical
competencies.
S Success Factor #2
Document any research papers, studies, or patents in which you have
participated. Elaborate on projects relevant to the targeted position to
demonstrate your keen interest in the subject matter.
S Success Factor #3
Highlight projects on which you have worked and discuss how your
participation contributed to the success of those projects (for example, under
budget, ahead of schedule, exceeded customer expectations, or upgraded
organizational capabilities).
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S Success Factor #4
Showcase all of your extra professional activities, which may include public
speaking, professional affiliations, publications, or teaching/training. If any
of these are directly relevant to the opening youre targeting, highlight those
in even more detail.

Following are the top 20 technology, science, and engineering keywords,
some of which may reflect your skills and some of which may not be appropriate
for you at this time. Use these words as the foundation for developing your own
list of keywords on the Professional Keyword List form in Appendix B.
Top 20 Keywords
Applications Development Project Planning & Management
Capital Projects Prototype Development & Testing
E-Commerce Research & Experimentation
Engineering Design Scientific Methodologies
Fault Isolation & Analysis Systems Engineering
Information Services Management Technical Writing
Information Technology Technology Transfer
Multimedia Technology Integration User Training & Support
Network Design & Technology VOIP Technology
Performance Optimization Website Design & Management
Following are some excellent examples of cover letters for technology,

science, and engineering careers.
Cover Letters for Technology, Science, and Engineering Careers 211
Written By: Denyse Cowling

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THOMAS S. STROMBERG
3489 East Main Street Home (678) 992-2776
Mainstream, IL 60107 [email protected] Office (678) 786-4532

Font: Times
Written By: Diane Burns

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Written By: Arnie Boldt



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Appendix A
] Cover Letter Writing Worksheet
Use this worksheet as a guide for gathering the critical information you will
need to develop each of your cover letters. In fact, we suggest you make copies
of this form so that you can use it each and every time youre preparing a cover
letter.
Who You Are Applying To:

NAME: TITLE:
COMPANY:
ADDRESS:
CITY: STATE: ZIP:
FAX #: E-MAIL:
Type of Letter :
[ ] Company Ad-Response Letter
[ ] Recr uiter Ad-Response Letter
[ ] Company Cold-Call Letter
[ ] Recr uiter Cold-Call Letter
[ ] Refer ral Letter (Referral: )
POSITION: JOB #
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Related Educational Credentials or Licenses:
Critical Information To Include:
EMPLOYERS #1 KEY REQUIREMENT (or need identified from your research):
YOUR SKILLS/ACCOMPLISHMENTS THAT MATCH REQUIREMENT #1:

Cover Letter Writing Worksheet 225

(Use additional sheets, if necessary, to capture more of your skills and accomplishments.)
Appendix B
] Professional Keyword List
Each cover letter example chapter in this book (Chapters 516) has a list of
keywords relating to the particular career field or profession covered in that
chapter.
Use this form to highlight all the keywords and keyword phrases that
accurately reflect your skills, qualifications, and experience.
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Appendix C
] List of Contributors
The following professional resume writers have contributed their best cover
letters to this publication. All have years of experience in professional resume
and cover letter writing; many have earned distinguishing professional credentials,
which include:
Bcomm Bachelors in Communications (Canada)
CARW Certified Advanced Resume Writer
CCM Credentialed Career Master
CCMC Certified Career Management Coach
CCTJ Certified Career Transition Jumpmaster
CDP Career Development Practitioner
CEIC Certified Employment Interview Consultant
CEIP Certified Employment Interview Professional
CERW Certified Expert Resume Writer
CIC Certified Interview Coach
CIS Certified Interview Strategist
CJCTC Certified Job & Career Transition Coach
CJST Certified Job Search Trainer
CLTMC Certified Leadership & Talent Management Coach
CMP Certified Management Professional
CPBS Certified Personal Brand Strategist
CPC Certified Personnel Consultant
CPCC Certified Professional Career Coach
CPRW Certified Professional Resume Writer
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CTMS Certified Transition Management Seminars

CTSB Certified Targeted Small Business
CWDP Certified Workforce Development Professional
FJSTC Certified Federal Job Search Trainer & Counselor
IJCTC International Job & Career Transition Coach
JCTC Job & Career Transition Coach
MA Master of Arts
MBA Master of Business Administration
MCDP Master Career Development Professional
MS Master of Science
NCCC Nationally Certified Career Coach
NCRW Nationally Certified Resume Writer
RPR Registered Professional Recruiter
Carol Altomare, CPRW Diane Burns, CCMC, CPCC,

World Class Resumes, Flemington, N.J. CLTMC, CPRW, FJSTC, IJCTC,
[email protected] CEIP
www.worldclassresumes.com Career Marketing Techniques, Boise,
(908) 237-1883 Idaho
[email protected]
Paul Bennett, BComm, CPRW
www.polishedresumes.com
TARGET Career Services,
(208) 323-9636
Vancouver, BC, Canada
[email protected] Clay Cerny, Ph.D.
www.targetcareerservices.com AAA Targeted Writing & Coaching,
(888) 782-7438 / (604) 876-9980 Chicago, Ill.
[email protected]
Laurie Berenson, CPRW
(773) 907-8660
Sterling Career Concepts, LLC, Park
Ridge, N.J. Denyse Cowling, CIS, CPC, RPR
[email protected] Career Intelligence, Inc., Burlington,
www.SterlingCareerConcepts.com ON, Canada
www.careerintelligence.ca
Anne Brunelle, Career Transitions
(866) 909-0128
Coach
Making Changes, Toronto, ON, Canada John Femia, BS, CPRW
[email protected] Custom Resume & Writing Service,
www.makingchanges.ca Altamont, N.Y.
www.customresumewriting.com
(518) 872-1305
List of Contributors 231
Gail Frank, NCRW, CPRW, JCTC, Rosemary Fish Justen, CPRW, CEIP
CEIP Creative Communication Services, Inc.,
Frankly Speaking: Resumes That Schaumburg, Ill.
Work, Tampa, Fla. [email protected]
[email protected] www.ccsresumes.com
www.callfranklyspeaking.com (847) 490-8686
(813) 926-1353
Erin Kennedy, CPRW
Louise Garver, MA, CMP, CPRW, Professional Resume Services,
CEIP, MCDP, JCTC Lapeer, Mich.
Career Directions LLC, Enfield, Conn. [email protected]
[email protected] www.proreswriters.com
www.careerdirectionsllc.com (206) 339-2876
(860) 623-9476
Myriam-Rose Kohn, CPBS, CCM,
Jill Grindle, CPRW CCMC, IJCTC, CPRW, CEIP
Resume Inkstincts, Agawam, Mass. Jeda Enterprises, Valencia, Calif.
[email protected] [email protected]
www.resumeinkstincts.com www.jedaenterprises.com
(413) 789-6046 (661) 253-0801
Susan Guarneri, NCCC, CCMC, Brian Leeson, MS
CPBS, CERW, CCTJ, CPRW Vector Consultants Pty Ltd,
Guarneri Associates, Three Lakes, Wis. Echunga, South Australia, Australia
www.resume-magic.com www.vectorconsultants.com.au
(866) 881-4055 +61 8 8388 8183
Michele J. Haffner, CCMC, CPRW, Linda Matias, JCTC, CIC, NCRW
JCTC CareerStrides, Long Island, N.Y.
Advanced Resume Services, Glendale, Wis. [email protected]
[email protected] www.careerstrides.com
www.resumeservices.com (631) 387-1894
(888) 586-2258
Melanie Noonan
Loretta Heck Peripheral Pro, LLC, West Paterson, N.J.
All Word Services, Prospect Heights, Ill. [email protected]
[email protected] (973) 785-3011
(847) 215-7517
Don Orlando, MBA, CPRW, JCTC,
Susan Hoopes, CJST, CJCTC, CWDP CCM, CCMC
Cuyahoga Valley Career Center, The McLean Group,
Brecksville, Ohio Montgomery, Ala.
www.cvccworks.com (334) 264-2020
(440) 746-8260
Julie Rains, CPRW Billie Ruth Sucher, MS, CTMS,

Executive Correspondents,Clemmons, CTSB, JCTC
N.C. Billie Ruth Sucher & Associates,
[email protected] Urbandale, Iowa
www.workingtolive.com [email protected]
(336) 712-2390 www.billiesucher.com
(515) 276-0061
Michelle Mastruserio Reitz, CPRW
Printed Pages, Cincinnati, Ohio Edward Turilli, MA, CPRW
[email protected] AccuWriter Resume, Writing &
www.printedpages.com Career Services, Bonita Springs, Fla.
(239) 948-7741
Christine Robinson
North Kingstown, R.I.
Lima, N.Y.
[email protected]
[email protected]
www.resumes4-u.com
www.CreativesMarketing.com
(401) 268-3020
(585) 624-4232
James Walker, MS
Jennifer Rushton, CARW, CEIC,
Serco, Inc., Fort Riley, Kans.
Keraijen Certified Resume Writer
[email protected]
Sydney, NSW, Australia
(785) 239-2278
[email protected]
www.keraijen.com.au Daisy Wright, CDP
+ 61 2 9994 8050 The Wright Career Solution,
Brampton, ON, Canada
Barbara Safani, MA, CERW, NCRW,
[email protected]
CPRW, CCM
www.thewrightcareer.com
Career Solvers, New York, N.Y.
(905) 840-7039
[email protected]
www.careersolvers.com
(866) 333-1800
Janice M. Shepherd, CPRW, JCTC, CEIP
Write On Career Keys, Bellingham, Wash.
[email protected]
www.writeoncareerkeys.com
(360) 738-7958
Index
text format for using, 80-81

A attachments,
accounting, improperly formatted, 87
cover letters for, 91-102 sending cover letters as, 83
keywords for, 92 attention, grabbing, 52
sample cover letters for, 93-102 attorneys, cover letters for, 149-156
success factors of cover letters for, audience,
91-92 knowing your, 12
administrative positions, target, 13
cover letters for, 103-110 audiences, writing to different, 17
keywords for, 104 auto signatures, 89
sample cover letters for, 105-110
success factors of cover letters for, 103 B
ad-response letter, 60
characteristics of an, 60-61 backgrounds, using, 89
recruiter, 61 banking,
recruiter, characteristics of an, cover letters for, 91-102
61-62 keywords for, 92
adult learner, cover letters for an, 23 sample cover letters for, 93-102
ASCII text cover letters, 77 success factors of cover letters for,
ASCII text files, 87 91-92
creating, 80-81 block style cover letter, 33
font for, 89 bold, overuse of, 47
preferred length of, 90 broadcast cover letters, 16-17
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234 -
No-Nonsense Cover Letters
bullet format, 27 cover letter, block style, 33

characteristics of, 46 creating a, 78
comparison of, 46 critical mistakes of, 87-89
effects of, 46 cover letters for
example of, 56 accounting, banking, and finance
job posting and the, 37 careers, 91-102
situations for, 46 administrative and clerical careers,
skills and the, 37 103-110
things to avoid in, 46 government careers, 111-120
using the, 36-38 healthcare and social service
bullet points, 16, 17 careers, 121-130
bullet style,19 hospitality and food service
buzz words, see keywords careers, 131-138
human resources and training
C careers, 139-148
law enforcement and legal careers,
CAR stories, 39 149-156
career change cover letters, 22-23 manufacturing and operations
change, career, 22-23 careers, 157-168
changes, handwritten, 48 sales, marketing, and customer
clerical careers, service careers, 169-184
cover letters for, 103-110 skilled trades careers, 185-194
keywords for, 104 teaching and education careers,
sample cover letters for, 105-110 195-208
success factors of cover letters for, 103 technology, science, and
closing paragraph, 11, 58-59 engineering careers, 209-222
creating the, 30-31 critical mistakes, 47-48
cold-call letters, 63 customer service,
characteristics of, 63 cover letters for, 169-184
recruiter, 63 keywords for, 170
recruiter, characteristics of, 64 sample cover letters for, 171-184
combination format, example of, 57 success factors of cover letters for,
components 169-170
for success, 53
of formatting, 28 D
contact information, 10, 28, 53-54
getting, 17-18 design, 27-49
content, 11, 55-56 elements of, 27
creating the, 30 simple, 33
contributors, list of, 229-232
cover letter E
types, 60
writing worksheets, 223 education careers,
cover letters for, 195-207
keywords for, 196
Index 235
sample cover letters for, 197-207 keywords for, 132

success factors of cover letters for, sample cover letters for, 133-138
195-196 form, sample, 223
electronic cover letters, 75 format,
e-letters, choosing the wrong, 47
advantages of, 76-77 selection of, 33
critical mistakes of, 87-89 formatting, 27-49
designs for, 89-90 components of, 28
differences of, 78 elements of, 27
e-mail addresses, choosing, 89
e-mail, 77 G
attachments, 83
cover letters, differences of, 78-80 government careers,
employer, focusing on the, 13 cover letters for, 111-120
enclosure, reference to the, 31 keywords for, 112
enclosures, 11 sample cover letters for, 113-120
engineering careers, success factors of cover letters for,
cover letters for, 209-221 111-112
keywords for, 210 graduate, new, 23
success factors of cover letters for, 209 H
example cover letter, 12
ex-offenders, letters for, 24 healthcare,
F keywords for, 122
files, preparing, 83-84 success factors of cover letters for,
final presentation, 19-22 121-122
finance, hospitality careers,
cover letters for, 91-102 cover letters for, 131-138
keywords for, 92 keywords for, 132
sample cover letters for, 93-102 sample cover letters for, 133-138
success factors of cover letters for, success factors of cover letters for,
91-92 131-132
fonts, human resource careers,
choosing, 86 cover letters for, 139-147
examples of, 49 keywords for, 140
hard to read, 89 sample cover letters for, 141-147
importance of, 19-22 success factors of cover letters for, 139
selection of, 33
too-tiny, 47 I
food service careers,
cover letters for, 131-138 I, using, 13-14
information, gathering, 223
inside address, 10 marketing careers,

interview, getting an, 52-53 cover letters for, 169-184
italics, overuse of, 47 keywords for, 170
J success factors of cover letters for,
170-171
job market, todays, 76 Microsoft Word, 78, 80, 83
job posting, 13 Military Occupational Specialties, 23
job search, conducting a, 16 mistakes,
job-hopper, letters for a, 25 avoiding critical, 47-48
critical e-letter, 87-89
K MOS, see Military Occupational
Specialties
key components, ten, 10
keyboard symbols, using, 86 N
keyword list, professional, 227
keywords, critical, 19 negotiation, salary, 61-65
networking letters, 36
L new graduate letters, 23
language, use of, 72 O

law enforcement,
cover letters for, 149-156 opening paragraph, 10, 54-55
keywords for, 150 creating the, 30
sample cover letters for, 151-156 order, writing in, 66
success factors of cover letters for, 149 overselling, dangers of, 59
layoffs, cover letters for, 24-25
legal careers, P
keywords for, 150 paper, choosing the right, 48
sample cover letters for, 149-156 paragraph format, 27
success factors of cover letters for, 149 characteristics of a, 46
letterhead, comparison of, 46
creating, 28-30 effects of, 46
using your resume, 28-29 example of, 57
situations for, 46
M things to avoid in, 46
using the, 39-43
manufacturing careers, type effects and, 43
cover letters for, 157-167 paragraph style, 17, 18-19
keywords for, 158 paragraphs,
sample cover letters for, 159-167 flush-left, 43
success factors of cover letters for, indented, 43
157-158 personal pronouns, 13-14
preparing files, 83-84
Index 237
presentation, final, 19-22 keywords for, 210

printing a letter, 47 sample cover letters for, 211-221
professional keyword list, 227 success factors of cover letters for,
prototype letters, 39 209-210
signature, creating the, 31
R simple truths, six, 10
skilled trades careers,
recruiter ad-response letters, 61 cover letters for, 185-193
characteristics of, 61-62 keywords for, 186
recruiter cold-call letters, 63 sample cover letters for, 187-193
characteristics of, 64 success factors of cover letters for, 185
recruiters, spam filters, getting caught by, 87
employees and, 17 spouse, trailing, 24
job seekers and, 17 strategy, writing, 15
writing to, 17 streamlining the writing process, 73-
reference line, 10 74
referral letters, 64 style, paragraph, 17
characteristics of, 65-66 subject line, creating a, 77-78
relocation letters, 24 success factors of cover letters for,
resume, complementing your, 18 131-132
resumes, matching the, 18-19 summary, creating a, 72-73
return-to-work letters, 23-24
reweighting, 59 T
Rich Text Format, 83
target audience, 13
S identifying your, 75
targeted letters, 16-17
salary negotiation, 61-65 T-chart, 38
sales careers, modules of the, 39
cover letters for, 169-184 teaching careers,
keywords for, 170 cover letters for, 195-207
sample cover letters for, 171-184 keywords for, 196
success factors of cover letters for, sample cover letters for, 197-207
169-170 success factors of cover letters for,
sales, cover letters and, 11 195-196
salutation, 10 technology careers,
scannable cover letters, 77, 86 cover letters for, 209-221
components of, 86-87 keywords for, 210
font for, 89 sample cover letters for, 211-221
preferred length of, 90 success factors of cover letters for,
text format for, 90 209-210
science careers, trailing spouse, 24
cover letters for, 209-221 training careers,
cover letters for, 139-147 V

keywords for, 140
sample cover letters for, 141-147 voice mail message, appropriate, 55
success factors of cover letters for, 139
transition, career, 22-23 W
truths, cover letter writing, 52-53
word-processed cover letters, 77
type effects,
font for, 89
overuse of, 47
preferred length of, 90
using, 43
text format for, 90
types, cover letter, 60
worksheets, sample, 223
typestyles, examples of, 49
writing in order, 66
typographical errors, 48
writing strategy, 15
writing, creative, 52
U writing,
U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, 7 key components to, 10
underlining, overuse of, 47 sales and, 11
six simple truths to, 10
tips for streamlining your, 73-74
About the Authors
] Arnold G. Boldt
After experiencing his own downsizing in 1994, Arnie Boldt explored a
number of options before partnering with his wife, Gail Smith Boldt, to form
Arnold-Smith Associates, which has helped thousands of job seekers who have
found themselves in transition. Since then, he has honed his skills to become
recognized as one of the premier resume writers in the country, contributing to
more than 30 different books by eight different authors, including numerous
titles by No-Nonsense Resumes co-author, Wendy Enelow.
In 2004, he was nominated for two prestigious TORI Awards (presented by
Career Directors International) in the categories of Best Creative Resume and
Best Cover Letter. He has spoken on resume-related topics to groups in the
healthcare and manufacturing fields, as well as delivering presentations geared
to the older worker and to executives in transition.
Mr. Boldt holds a Bachelors degree in Technical Communications from
Clarkson University and is a Certified Professional Resume Writer and Job &
Career Transition Coach. He prides himself on his experience working with the
broadest array of clients, ranging from tradespeople and new graduates to
corporate executives. A lifelong resident of upstate New York, he makes his
home with his wife and two Chihuahuas in a suburb of Rochester.
] Wendy S. Enelow
Wendy Enelow is a well-known and well-respected authority in resume
writing and career coaching, and has been in private practice for more than 25
years. To date, she has guided more than 5,000 professional, management, and
executive clients to achieve their career goals by providing them with best-in-
class resumes, cover letters, and job search strategies. In addition, she has
239
authored more than 20 books on resume and cover letter writing, job searching,
key words, interviewing, and more.
Ms. Enelow is a frequently requested speaker at national conferences and
workshops including the International Career Development Conference, Career
Masters Institute Annual Professional Conference, National Employment
Counseling Association Annual Conference, Presidents National Hire Veterans
Committee, Professional Association of Resume Writers Annual Conference,
Venture for Enterprising Women, and many more. In addition, she has been
interviewed by major media outlets nationwide and has more than 100 articles
published on various Internet sites.
Ms. Enelow holds a Bachelors degree in Psychology from the University of
Maryland. She is a Credentialed Career Master, Master Resume Writer, Job
and Career Transition Coach, and Certified Professional Resume Writer. Ms.
Enelow currently resides with her husband and pet menagerie in southwestern
Virginia.

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What is the book about?

What is the book about?

What are the simple truths discussed in the book?

What are the simple truths discussed in the book?

No Nonsense

NO-NONSENSE COVER LETTERS

The Career Press, Inc., 3 Tice Road, PO Box 687,

Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data

Chapter 1: Simple Truths About Cover Letters ...................................................9

Chapter 3: Simple Truths About Writing Your Cover Letters ............................... 5 1

Chapter 7: Cover Letters for Government Careers .......................................................... 111

Appendix A: Cover Letter Writing Worksheet .................................................................... 223

Appendix B: Professional Keyword List .............................................................................. 227

Appendix C: List of Contributors ......................................................................................... 229

Index ........................................................................................................................................... 233

About the Authors ................................................................................................................... 239

The 6 Simple Truths About Cover Letter Writing

Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components

1. Your contact information: Name, phone number, and (personal)

Truth #2: Cover Letter Writing Is Sales

Position Your self as T

Example #1: Overuse of I

Example #2: Same message, with focus on the employer

Example #3: Poorly placed first-person pronouns

Example #4: Better sentence structure and use of pronouns

Example #5: Selling yourself into your next job

Example #6: Sell It; Dont Tell It

Truth #3: Cover Letter Writing Is All About Strategy

Unique Strategies for Writing to Recruiters

Truth #4: Targeted Letters Work Best

Example #7: Bullet point (employers stated requirement in bold)

Get Contact Information

Truth #5: The Cover Letter Must Match the Resume

Example #9: Paragraph styleovertly directing reader to the resume:

Example #10: Bullet stylereferences to past employers subtly encourages

Keywords Are Critical

The Final Presentation

Truth #6: Each Circumstance Presents Its Own Challenges

We suspect that most Military Occupational Specialties (MOSs) are

Laid Off/Fired From Last Job

about it. Its happened to hundreds of thousands of people, so youre certainly

1. Which cover letter format is most appropriate for me to use?

The 4 Simple Truths About Cover Letter

Truth #1: Effective cover letters contain 10 key components.

Truth #1: Effective Cover Letters Contain 10 Key Components

RYAN R. MITCHELSON [email protected]

Example #4: Standard format with complete address:

Dear Mr. Nettles:

Example #5: When you only know the e-mail address:

Example #6: When you only know the fax number:

Fax: (703) 555-9299

6. Opening paragraph: Generally, your introductory paragraph will be short

Example #8: Closing Paragraph, with complimentary closing and signature:

Example #9: Simple reference to an enclosure:

Example #10: Detailed listing of enclosures:

Truth #2: Simple Designs Work Best

(Indented Paragraph Format Cover Letter)

THOMAS VINCENT, CPA

Constellation Brands, Inc.