ESSAY PRACTICE Globalisation Makes The World A Better Place

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Globalisation makes the world a better place. To what extent is this true today?

QUESTION ANALYSIS

- Kex: listing and polarity


- Ambiguous words: a better place
- Key words: globalization, world, a better place, is this true, today
- Assumptions: globalization has benefitted the world make sure to critique this!

Introduction:

- Context: Brexit, populist backlash, rise of anti-globalisation camp, Trumps take back jobs from
China
- Supporters: globalization engenders greater choice, greater access to goods / services / other
locations, greater opportunities for wealth for countries
- Detractors: cultural erosion, economic disparity / inequality, unemployment, uneven access to
opportunity
- Thesis: globalization has much potential to benefit the world economically and socially but only
if properly harnessed

1st point: globalization has been blamed for ills such as dependency, by favouring (richer) countries with
an economic edge and increasing competition for local businesses. The economic paradigm has changed
due to globalization, in other words

- Nigerias dependence upon Shells patronage (American TNC)

2nd point: cultural hegemonisation, loss of cultural identity, global rather than local citizens. Dilution
of local cultural beliefs and practices

Rebuttal: but globalization can help these cultures survive. People can bring attention to dying cultures.
Admittedly these cultures must be profitable or commercialized first but its better than nothing (e.g.
native American jewellery, local craftsmens trinkets sold in Thailand or Vietnam) (2nd point)

- (1st point) Similarly, it is precisely globalization that allows richer countries to develop / send aid
to struggling countries with more ease through the set-up international governmental orgs such
as the World Bank or UN. Extensive amounts of aid gets sent every year, to the tune of at least a
few million, but they never reach the struggling communities in countries due to corrupt
governments and civil conflicts. Globalisation allows for the exposure of the truth about these
corrupt governments, actually, or expedites this

4th point: greater cultural exposure and awareness

5th point: more choice, more employment opportunities

- Maquiladoras in Mexico

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