HDTWI - 100 Characters PDF
HDTWI - 100 Characters PDF
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HDTWI: 100 Characters offers examples of how Characters have been introduced in a variety of screenplays.
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Nathalie.
MAN (34)
GARY NORDIN, 34, clinks a greasy knife on his water glass. His neck is
thick, and his Brooks Brothers collar is too tight. [p2]
under her nails. Theres a calmness to her that wasnt there in that wired
girl in the farmhouse. She moves, gently, calmly. [p10]
MAN (30s)
A big hound dog loafs by the bar. Standing behind which, presiding over
it all, chatting with customers is SWEETIE. An affable guy, probably
in his 30s, wholl look much the same in 10, 20, 30 years, simply because
hes happy where he is. [p25]
WOMAN (40)
CAROLYN BURNHAM tends her rose bushes in front of the Burnham
house. A very well-put together woman of forty, she wears color-co
ordinated gardening togs and has lots of useful and expensive tools. [p2]
JENNY, our heroine, is bent over a small desk. Victorian novels, Latin
primers and dictionaires teeter in huge towers either side of her. She
stands and stretches as she turns to us. She is sixteen and beautiful. Shes
also tired and bored. [p1]
DAD (60s)
WOMAN (60s)
Jenny looks nervous. For the first time we see her wearing make-up but
its been inexpertly applied, and she looks gauche -especially compared
to Helen, who is in her mid-twenties, beautiful, and as far from anyones
idea of an aunt as one can get. Shes no more beautiful than Jenny, but
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YOUNG MAN
YOUTH 5
That thing was small bruv. I aint scared.
// MOSES
Pest, got bangers?
// So this kids called PEST. He forages in his pockets. Pulls out a couple of
bangers. [p9]
MAN (65)
The driver is DR. EMMETT BROWN, about 65. He looks like an old
hippie, with shoulder length white hair, Hawaian shirt, faded jeans,
an Indian turquoise around his neck and lively -almost wild- eyes. Hes
full of energy, full of life, talks fast and is immediately likeable for his
eccentricities. [p8]
DAD (47)
MUM (47)
Martys mother, LORRAINE, 47, was once very attractive. Now shes
OVERWEIGHT, in a rut, a victim of suburban stagnation. She has more
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food on her plate that anyone else, and a glass of vodka. [p13]
SISTER (19)
Sister LINDA, 19, is cute but wears too much eye makeup. Brother DAVE,
22, wears a MCDONALDS UNIFORM and is wolfing down his food. [p13]
A YOUNG BLACK GIRL rides her bike down a long dirt driveway toward a
yellow house. She has multi-colored barrettes in her hair and a white
wicker basket attached to her bike.
// This is DESTINY, age 12. Shes adorable. [p1]
WOMAN
This is LAURA PICKLER and her age is none of your business. [p6]
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JASPER PALMER was young in the 60s, and has refused to let go of his
youth ever since. Thick glasses, wispy beard, long hair, he is probably the
coolest 75-year-old on the planet. [p4]
WOMAN (70)
CLOUD ATLAS (2012) by Tom Tykwer, Andy Wachwski & Lana Wchowski
MAIN CHARACTER - MAN (50s)
Zachry (50s) looks old, more weathered than aged, wearing a mix of furs
and strange futuristic armor. [p1]
MAN (35)
MOVING POV ON a trail of footsteps in the sand... being followed by ADAM
EWING (35), a lawyer from the city of San Francisco who appears out of
place on the shore of this Pacific Island [p2]
WOMAN (30S)
LUISA REY (mid 30s), a feminist from the days when it was an ideal, not a
fashion statement, talks into her tape recorder. [p3]
WOMAN
The Archivist sits across from SONMI-451, a young femal replicant, who
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watches him, her magnetic shackles securely locked to the armrests. [p4]
MAN (20s)
ROBERT FROBISHER (early 20s) looks as though he has been up for days.
He places an envelope carefuly on the desk, just above a manuscript entitled
The Cloud Atlas Sextet. [p5]
MAN (32)
MAN
Directly above Lara Lee, on the third floor balcony over hand, out steps...
// STEPHEN
eyeing Calvin and the approaching caravan.
// Whos STEPHEN? Stephen is a very old blackman, who with his bold
pate, and tufts of white curly hair on the sides, looks like a character out
of Dickens - if Dickens wrote about House Niggers in the Antebellum
South.
// Stephen has been Calvins slave since he was a little boy.And in
(almost) every way is the 2nd most powerful person at Candyland. Like
the characters Basil Rathbone would play in swashbucklers, evil,
scheming, intriguing men, always trying to influence and manipulate
power for their own self-interest. Well, that describes Stephen to a tree.
// The Basil Rathbone of House Niggers. [p91]
// TYLER has one arme around Jacks shoulder; the ohter hand holds a
HANDGUN with a barrel lodged in JACKS MOUTH. Tyler is sitting in
Jacks lap.
// They are both sweating and dishelved, both around 30; Tyler is blond,
handsome, and Jack, brunette, is appealing in a dry sort of way. [p1]
WOMAN
MARLA SINGER enters. She has short matte black hair and big, dark eyes
like a character from japanese animation. [p10]
WOMAN (30s)
JAMES RESTON JNR - (mid 30s) - academic, author and journalist - the
long-ish hair of a liberal intellectual, is being interviewed for a
documentary n 1982... [p4]
WOMAN (30s)
Nicks twin sister, GO, 30s, nerdy-hot, is washing mugs. The bar is packed
with 80s kitsch. Their very own clubhouse. [p2]
smaller than the other guys. Wiry and anxious, Morgan listens to
Chuckies horror stories with eager disgust. [p1]
(A little shuttle airline that flies from Los Angeles to Cabo San Lucas.
Approximate flight time: forty five minutes)
// Jackie stands still as a people-mover slowly inches her through the
airport. The CREDITS APEAR and DISAPPEAR in front of her.
// Jackie Brown is a very attractive black woman in her mid forties, though
she looks like shes in her midthirties. [p1]
// This is OLIVE. She is big for her age and slightly plump.
// She has frizzy hair and wears black rimmed glasses. She studies the
show very earnestly. [p1]
MAN (45)
Woman (40s)
MAN (40s)
GRANDFATER (80)
MAN (23)
DEREK MURRAY, 29, seasons an array of vegetables. Handsome.
In jeans. White T-shirt. Whiter sneaks. Casually, he glances over at her
work. [p1]
MAN (30s)
The doors SWING OPEN to reveal BRIAN, commanding the drivers seat. The
hardworking type with a sly smile. Thirties. [p16]
WOMAN
perspiration on her brow and she stirs and mumbles, in the grip of a
nightmare. She wakes up suddenly, scared and disoriented. [p1]
WOMAN
ELIZABETH
I was born here, in Los Angeles, and I was given up for
adoption on the day of my birth. My mother was fourteen when
I was born. That is all I know about her. My adoptive father died
when I was ten. My adoptive mother and I are not close. My name,
Elizabeth Joyce, is a name that I picked out for myself in junior
high school. Its my legal name now; I dont go by any other. I
live alone; I have since I turned seventeen. Ive never been married
and have no plans to marry. I value my independence above all
things, that way I dont have expectations to fulfill. Other than my
own, which are great enough. [p4]
WOMAN (45)
KATE, 45 years old and attractive, is being lead through an enormous, dark
apartment by a middle aged man, ADAM. [p3]
TEENAGEr (15)
Kate is cooking dinner while her DAUGHTER ABBY, 15, does homework at
the table. Abby is in an awkward stage of development and has a bad case of
acne. [p7]
MAN (42)
ALEX, Kates husband, comes into the room sifting through photos. Hes 42
and attractive despite a pot belly and unkempt hair. [p8]
WOMAN (33)
Rebeccas sister Mary, 33, very pretty with a tense, turned down mouth,
leans into the room holding up a frozen dinner - Beef Medallions.[p10]
REQUIEM FOR A DREAM (2000) by Hubert Selby Jr. & Darren Aronofsky
MAIN CHArACTER - YOUNG MAN (20s)
Harry Goldfarb, young twenties, is an eccentric kid with a seductive
smile.
// He tries to stop his mother, Sara Goldfarb, from locking herself in the
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closet.
MAN (29)
JOHN MILLANEY, twenty-nine, sits at his desk talking on the telephone.
He is dressed very well, sporting real suspenders with his striped pinpoint
oxford shirt and cotton suit. He fingers the wedding ring on his left hand.
[p2]
WOMAN
CYNTHIA BISHOP, Anns SISTER, opens her door to reveal the freshly coifed
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John Millaney. They kiss passionately and begin to disrobe. Cynthia bears a
slight resemblance to Ann, but is not as overtly attractive. She does,
however, have a definite carnal appeal and air of confidence that Ann lacks.
[p4]
SHORT TERM 12
MAIN CHArACTER - WOMAN (20s)
Warm water shoots down from an aging shower head. GRACE PETERSON,
20s, sits on the bathtub floor, naked and beautiful, chin on her knees,
surrounded by bouncing droplets.
// She stares down at her toes, picking at the corner of her thumb with her
pointer finger, nervously, repeatedly, violently.
// She purses her lips and lets a glob of spit fall from her mouth to her feet.
The water washes it away.
A MAN, late 30s, is bent over the toilet, PUKING his guts out. He raises his
head, LOOKS at himself in the mirror--
// Meet TEDDY DANIELS.
// Square-jawed, strong build, a born fighter with something WARY around
his eyes. He wears a clean-cut SUIT, but theres a sense of DANGER to im;
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MAN (30s)
A TALL, GANGLY MAN in his mid-30s stands at the railing, watching the
dark water race by beneath the prow.
// Hes dressed like Teddy, crisp but government-bland suit and hat, the
buldge of a GUN at his belt. This is CHUCK AULE. [p2]
PAT SOLATANO stands in the middle of his room, his back to camera. [p1]
20s. Short black-dyed hair - pierced eyelid - tattoo of a wasp on her neck.
probably several more under her black leather jacket - black t-shirt, black
jeans, black Caterpillar boots. [p6]
WOMAN (40s)
Erika Berger is about Blomkvists age, and - like the IKEA furniture - sends
a mixed message: a feminist in a mini-skirt. [p4]
MAN (40s)
Dragan Armansky, 40s, who looks more like a boss of a New Jersey crim
family than a CEO of a high-tech security firm, sits behind his desk, waiting
with an older client. [p5]
HISTORICAL FIGURES
WOMAN (22)
ROMINA GUTIERREZ, twenty-two, Hispanic; sits in the bleacher seats,
watching the spectacle. Enraptured. [p2]
Present day. Post-match. Randy, pushing 50, still with the same long, dyed-
blond mane, sits on a bench in the boys locker room of a Wilmington, Dela
ware high school.
// CHYRON: 20 YEARS LATER
// He pulls off his purple spandex wrestling tights. Lime-green rams horns
run up the sides. Theyre the same kind of tights as in the 80s picsand
may well be the actual same pair.
// Naked except for a jockstrap, Randy takes a breath. Achy, sweaty, saggy,
exhausted. A battered warrior. Scars all over his body. Despite the rough
shape hes in, its clear hes just given it his all in the ring. He swigs down a
few pills with a beer. [p2]
MAN (44)
WOMAN (36)
Randy peeks through the curtain. Inside, he sees CASSIDY (36), a sexy,
tattooed, aging rocker chick in a white spandex dress. With her are six
hair-gelled, goombah-wannabe BACHELOR- PARTY DUDES (early 20s). The
BACHELOR is sitting in a chair in the middle.[p20]
A few (six) years later. He is dressed well now. slight show of some wealth.
overcoat, haircut, clean shaven, etc. We see nothing but him as he speaks.
[p7]
GROUP OF MEN
DANIEL is working again in a large field with some MEN. There is:
CANBURRY (30s), an OLDER MAN (50s) and a YOUNG MAN (around 15)
and a mining acuqaintance: H.B. AILMAN (30s) and nearby, kept in the
shade in a small bassinet, is a ONE YEAR OLD BABY, Ailmans son (H.W.)
[p4]
FAMILY
Standing, waiting outside is the SUNDAY FAMILY:
// MOTHER SUNDAY (50s) RUTH SUNDAY (aged 12) MARY SUNDAY
(aged 7)
// and a very skinny, man/boy, the son: ELI SUNDAY (aged 18) [p21]
WOMAN (20s)
Down the hall, a WOMAN rises from a chair. Ashen. HANNAH LINSON, late
20s. Tolerant, kind, and cool -- always hoping for the best in Sam. [p3]
WOMAN (50s)
This is LILLIAN HARPER: once extremely beautiful, in her fifties shes still
very striking with an almost soldierly quality of anythings possible when
youre in control. [p8]
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