Writing Dialogue
Writing Dialogue
Writing Dialogue
3. A direct quotation is set off from the rest of a sentence by commas. If a direct
quotation is interrupted, commas are placed before and after the interruption. The
comma before a direct quotation falls outside the quotation marks. The comma—or
any punctuation—after a direct quotation falls inside the quotation marks.
Examples:
Ted smiled and said, "I can't wait to get to the ball game!"
"Yes, I am the one who baked the chocolate cake," admitted Granny.
"Jim," she said with a grin, "I'm going to make sure you lose this match."
4. Dialogue is less formal than other kinds of writing. To make your characters sound
natural, you may use short sentences and contractions in dialogue. For academic
papers avoid slang, or clichés such as clear as a bell, etc (refer to pg 133 of
Strategies for Successful Writing for list of common clichés).
6. Be careful not to use the word "said" too often. Use other livelier verbs, such as
"whispered," "yelled,", "mumbled," "cried," and "confessed."
Coutesy of http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/content/2233/2233_fictionchar_dialogue.pdf
PRACTICE QUESTIONS
Punctuate the sentences below correctly:
1. Pearl once said you cannot make yourself feel something you do not feel but you can
make yourself do right in spite of your feelings
1. Pearl once said, “You cannot make yourself feel something you do not feel, but you can
make yourself do right in spite of your feelings.”