Annotated Bibliography
Annotated Bibliography
Annotated Bibliography
Victoria Post
SC McGriff
07 July 2018
Annotated Bibliography
Research Question: Are extreme sports healthy for young child athletes?
Aubrey, Allison. “Student Athletes Who Specialize Early Are Injured More Often, Study Finds.”
www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2017/07/25/539334374/student-athletes-who-specializ
E-early-are-injured-more-often-study-finds.
The point of this article is that student athletes who specialize early are injured more
often. Study shows that waiting until late adolescence will minimize the risks and lead to
higher likelihood of success rates. The younger you start the higher your percentages
This source seems be very reliable. It quotes its findings by the American Academy of
Pediatrics, senior scientists of universities, athletic trainers, and many more educated
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sources. The goal of this article is to show that dedicating a young child to a sport will
This source does fit into my research. It presents quotes by official sources. I’m able to
use this to support how being a child athlete isn’t always the best choice when it comes
overuse injuries. Most people believe starting young is healthier, but after reading this
article I beg to differ considering the fact that waiting may be more beneficial .
“Concussions: How They Can Affect You Now and Later .” University of Utah Health, 17 Nov.
2016, healthcare.utah.edu/healthfeed/postings/2016/11/concussion.php.
This article informs us about the short term and long term effects of receiving a
dizziness, blurred vision, delayed responses to questions, and so many more side effects.
What the real problem needs to be identified is the long term effects that can affect your
brain in the long run. These symptoms include memory problems, disturbed
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concentration, sensitivity to the exposure of light and noise, depression and many other
psychological problems.
concussion to a person and their brain. It’s helpful by showing there are still side effects
This source is helpful because it gave a further understanding of what happens when
something traumatic happens to the brain and what people experience during a
concussion.
Lee, Janet. “Surprising Health Risks Facing Young Athletes.” Consumer Reports, 25 Sept. 2017,
www.consumerreports.org/skin-infection/surprising-health-risks-facing-young-athletes/.
The point of this article is to inform readers what and how athletes attracting diseases and
health risks, how it spreads, and how to minimize it . Outbreaks such as herpes, athletes
foot, staph infections, MRSA, etc.are being spread by contact. Even if it’s walking
barefoot on the gym floor, you can easily catch an infection. Close contact sports is an
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extreme way to contract personal health related illnesses or diseases with the countless
amount of spores being left exposed to catch the infection. To minimize these risks the
best way is to practice good personal hygiene, do daily skin checks, stay up to date on
immunizations, and in the best way avoid sharp objects that you are unfamiliar with.
This is source is most definitely useful because it explains health risks that are being
exposed to athletes whereas the other bibliographies talk about the negative and positive
side effects of athletes health and the possibilities of physical trauma on their body.
This source was helpful in offering more information on health related illnesses brought
onto an athlete. It states how many of these are transferred through contact and are easily
spread amongst teammates. This article allows me to see that although illnesses can be
attracted from anywhere, 23% of athletes will attract something just from playing.
Maroon, Joseph, and Julian Bailes. "The Health Benefits of Youth Contact Sports Outweigh the
Context,
http://link.galegroup.com/apps/doc/EEAYEC052799645/OVIC?u=lincclin_sjrcc&sid=O
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This article is informing us on the incidents and severities of brain injuries dealing with
youth sports. The author discusses both benefits of playing sports and how there are
improvements being made in safety, specifically football, along with the risks of getting a
concussion. The main argument this article proposes is that although risks are at stake the
This source is useful and reliable considering the fact is addresses the risks of getting a
concussion. It compares with the other sources by, again, speaking of terms opposite of
my argument. The goal of this source was to express both pros and cons of young athletes
This article does not necessarily help my argument but it does discuss other viewpoints
on the opposing side which will reflect the pros and cons style of my argumentative
research paper.
Merkel, Donna L. “Youth Sport: Positive and Negative Impact on Young Athletes.”
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3871410/.
This source displays both positive impacts and negative impacts. The positive impacts
section explains how it could decrease health risks for children preventing obesity. The
negative impacts explain how these sports can affect your growth, decrease flexibility,
coordination, and balance when approaching your adolescent years. Also being included
in the negative side effect section is a childs emotional state when being involved in a
sport. It describes that it can lead to stress, anxiety, and social pressure.
This is a very useful source. Not only does is show the positive and negative side effects
put onto a child, but it is also getting its information through other official documents
such as doctor journals, medical books, research articles. This compares to the other
sources by presenting actual side effects being produced by the negative and positive side
of young children participating in sports. The goal of this source is to inform the readers
about the many possible outcomes that could happen in this particle subject.
that are needed to help support my health risks topic in this paper. This article has shown
me that not only does playing sports bring multiple physical futuristic complications, but
it also has an extreme impact on the emotional state of the athlete. The main opposing
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argument is that participating your child in sports will help improve their health. This
article made it clear to me that although that is possible, the only thing that will help
reduce health risks for your child is not what you participate them in physically, it is what
Office of Public Affairs. “Concussions: How They Can Affect You Now and Later .” University
healthcare.utah.edu/healthfeed/postings/2016/11/concussion.php.
The point of this article is to discuss the short and long term effects of having a
concussion. It also states what a concussion is and how many people are affected by it.
Research shows that symptoms should resolve within a few weeks. Only about 20% of
people might suffer from post-concussion syndrome, where they continue to experience
symptoms after 6 weeks. However, the more concussions you get, the more likely you are
to suffer long term consequences, especially if you don’t give your brain enough time to
The goal of this article is to inform the reader. This is a useful source because it does
show both the short and long term effects along with their symptoms. It compares with
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quotes by medical doctors with their Phd. This source is reliable considering the fact that
it only presents you with facts rather than a biased opinion on concussions.
This source helps me with my argument by allowing me to quote medical doctors which
proves as a reliable source. I can use what the doctor said in my argument by expressing
how concussions can lead a change in behavior, depression, and even suicide.
www.healthychildren.org/English/health-issues/injuries-emergencies/sports-injuries/Page
s/Preventing-Overuse-Injuries.aspx.
This article informs us on how prevent overuse injuries in young athletes. An overuse
without allowing time for the body to heal. According this source the best way to prevent
this from happening includes preparing yourself, playing smart, rest, and train your body
properly. The worst thing to do to a young athlete is burn them out. A burn out consists of
mental, physical, and hormonal changes that can affect the child's performance.
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This source was very useful as is relates to my research explaining how to prevent these
overuse injuries that could eventually lead to more painful outcomes in the future if not
I can use this source in my research by correlating it with my overuse injuries section. It
talks about how emotional and physical distressed a young athlete can become when they
get to a certain period of overusing their joints in muscles, especially using them in the
incorrect motion. When using them incorrectly as a child you can stunt your growth
plates causing you to need reach your full capacity in height. What this source will
mainly be used for in my paper is how the overuse injuries can lead to unnecessary
Tuso, Philip J, et al. “Nutritional Update for Physicians: Plant-Based Diets.” Advances in
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3662288/.
After doing a study on multiple candidates suffering from high blood pressure, obesity,
heart diseases, and diabetes, all candidates found breathtaking improvements in their
physical and mental health after starting a strict plant based diet. The physicians proved
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the major benefits for patients who decide to start a plant-based diet are the possibility of
reducing the number of medications they take to treat a variety of chronic conditions,
lower body weight, decreased risk of cancer, and a reduction in their risk of death from
This source is useful and gives more information on how to properly nourish your body.
None of the other articles talk about the nutritional value needed to continue an active
lifestyle. The goal of this source was to inform readers by showing the outcomes of
people who were dealing with medical problems and how they reversed that by simply
This is extremely useful to shape my argument by showing it is not involving your child
in a sport that will help them stay in shape and prevent them from becoming obese and
catching medical conditions. The real problem is what you are feeding your child. This
article proves that if you change your eating habits to a plant based diet, it will lessen
your likely of getting cancer, contracting heart diseases, reduce those who are
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overweight,and so much more. This action involves consuming the proper nutrition that
your body is meant to have and all together cleanses and heals you as a whole.
Umansky, Diane. “New Study Sheds Light on Long-Term Effects of Childhood Concussions.”
www.consumerreports.org/concussion/new-study-sheds-light-on-long-term-effects-of-chi
ldhood-concussions/.
This article tells of research on adults who started playing football before the age
of 12 and those who started after. There research exhibited that Chronic traumatic
encephalopathy appeared more progressive in those who started playing before 12. The
depression. This article also talks about why it is important to study the expansion of
concussions. According this article, it is important to understand this subject so you can
better understand what the factors are that are causing problematic trauma to the brain,
This source is most definitely useful because it says something a little different than the
other articles. It talks about chronic traumatic encephalopathy, which could be brought up
in later years because of the physical activities of a child too young in age getting damage
to their brain.
Encephalopathy Center. It states quotes by highly educated men and women with a
Zimmerman, Jonathan. "We Must Stop Risking the Health of Young Football Players."
http://link.galegroup.com/apps/doc/VWETBE693994308/OVIC?u=lincclin_sjrcc&sid=O
The main argument of this article is expressing how even though officials have tried to
modify games, the rate of injuries have continued to stayed constant. The author explains
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that roots set in rugby have changed but the outlying effects still show smashed, broken,
dislocation, and fractures bones still being documented at a massive amount. The author
also adds forward passing, helmets, increased risks to the face, and money to enhance the
argument that changes will not fix the amount of injuries faced.
This source does show some biased opinion, but it is trustworthy considering the fact
that it implies actual scenarios that have been used to “decrease” these injuries, but still
show constant numbers of injuries. This source compares with other sources by using
secure, rather than just ruling out the pros and cons of this subject.
This source was helpful offering sufficient amount of scenarios that will help my
argument. It clarifies even when rules and regulations are changed it doesn’t always help
the purpose it is being put into effect for. This articled allowed me to see although minor
changes made in a game have partially decreased the numbers in harm, it does not