(Women Writers) Barbara Hill Rigney (Auth.) - Margaret Atwood-Macmillan Education UK (1987)
(Women Writers) Barbara Hill Rigney (Auth.) - Margaret Atwood-Macmillan Education UK (1987)
(Women Writers) Barbara Hill Rigney (Auth.) - Margaret Atwood-Macmillan Education UK (1987)
Women Writers
General Editors: Eva Figes and Adele King
Published titles
Margaret Atwood, Barbara Hill Rigney
Jane Austen, Meenakshi Mukherjee
Elizabeth Bowen, Phyllis Lassner
Anne Bronte, Elizabeth Langland
Charlotte Bronte, Pauline Nestor
Emily Bronte, Lyn Pykett
Fanny Burney, Judy Simons
Willa Cather, Susie Thomas
Colette, Diana Holmes
Ivy Compton-Burnett, Kathy Justice Gentile
Emily Dickinson, Joan Kirkby
George Eliot, Kristin Brady
Sylvia Plath, Susan Bassnett
Elizabeth Gaskell, Jane Spencer
Christina Stead, Diana Brydon
Eudora Welty, Louise Westling
Edith Wharton, Katherine Joslin
Forthcoming
Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Marjorie Stone
Nadine Gordimer, Kathy Wagner
Doris Lessing, Margaret Moan Rowe
Katherine Mansfield, Diane DeBell
Toni Morrison, Nellie McKay
Christina Rossetti, Linda Marshall
Jean Rhys, Carol Rumens
Stevie Smith, Romana Huk
Gertrude Stein, Jane Bowers
Virginia Woolf, Clare Hanson
Women Writers
MARGARET
ATWOOD
Barbara Hill Rigney
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MACMILLAN
©Barbara Hill Rigney 1987
Epigraph 1X
Notes 136
Bibliography 139
Index 143
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Acknowledgements
I am grateful to Deans Michael Riley and John Muste and
to Chairman Morris Beja, not only for the time they
granted me for the completion of this book, but also for
the encouragement they so generously provided. I wish
also to thank Women's Studies Librarian Virginia Reynolds
for her research assistance and Professors Mildred Munday
and Pamela Transue for their proofreading abilities. The help
of my husband, Kim Rigney, was also invaluable.
For Julie
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Editors' Preface
The study of women's writing has been long neglected by a
male critical establishment both in academic circles and
beyond. As a result, many women writers have either been
unfairly neglected, or have been marginalised in some way,
so that their true influence and importance have been
ignored. Other women writers have been accepted by male
critics and academics, but on terms which seem, to many
women readers of this generation, to be false or simplistic.
In the past the internal conflicts involved in being a woman
in a male-dominated society have been largely ignored by
readers of both sexes, and this has affected our reading of
women's work. The time has come for a serious reassessment
of women's writing in the light of what we understand
today.
This series is designed to help in that reassessment.
All the books are written by women, because we believe
that men's understanding of feminist critique is only, at
best, partial. And besides, men have held the floor quite
long enough.
EVA FIGES
ADELE KING
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Epigraph
It is difficult to say where
precisely, or to say
how large or small I am:
the effect of water
on light is a distortion
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1 Maps of the
Green World
'Literature is not only a mirror', Margaret Atwood writes
in Survival: A Thematic Guide to Canadian Literature, 'it is
also a map, a geography of the mind' (18-19). In many
ways, Survival, which Atwood describes as a 'cross between
a personal statement ... and a political manifesto' (13), is
both a map and a mirror of Atwood's own poetry and
fiction as well as of that tradition of Canadian art and
sensibility which is Atwood's heritage. Atwood's subject in
Survival, as it is also primary in her other literary essays,
her six novels, two books of short stories, and ten volumes
of poetry, is an exploration of both the creation and
function of art and the assertion of its relevance in social
and political contexts. For Atwood, art is a moral issue,
and it is the responsibility of the writer/artist not only to
describe her world, but also to criticise it, to bear witness
to its failures, and, finally, to prescribe corrective measures-
perhaps even to redeem.
Atwood teaches mostly through negative example: her
protagonists are not very heroic heroines in the beginning
of their adventures and sometimes not even at the
conclusion. They are not totally reliable narrators; they
may lie to the reader as they sometimes lie to themselves,
or in some instances, they are even a bit mad. They are
often fragmented, isolated, 'seeing poorly, translating badly'
(Surfacing, 91). All are, in varying degrees, failed artists
like those metaphorically paralysed and amputated authors
whom Atwood describes in Survival, cut off from tradition,
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art form she cannot control. In 'Five Poems for Dolls', the
hideously-smiling dolls represent aborted babies, or babies
never conceived. In 'Useless', 'words we never said' are
equated with 'our unborn children' (You Are Happy, 10).
In 'Chaos Poem', the speaker 'can hear/death growing in
me like a baby with no head' (You Are Happy, 14). In The
Journals of Susanna Moodie, the speaker shocks us with the
observation that 'unborn babies/fester like wounds in the
body' (42). For the wife in Atwood's short story, 'The
Resplendent Quetzal', her own dead baby is re-created in
the grotesque Christ child she steals from a plaster creche.
The controlling image in Two-Headed Poems is that of
Siamese twins, 'Joined Head to Head, and still alive' (59).
In Surfacing, the protagonist considers that her aborted
baby is her Siamese twin, the other half of her self which
is also her self as artist. The woman artist, Atwood makes
clear at various points in her writing, is herself a kind of
Siamese twin: 'the woman who is a writer who is also a
woman' is like 'Siamese twins pulling uneasily against each
other, the writer feeling suffocated by the woman, the
woman rendered sterile by the writer' (Second Words, 172).
The paradox is inescapable: 'The heads speak sometimes
singly, sometimes/together, sometimes alternately within a
poem./Like all Siamese twins, they dream of separation'
(Two-Headed Poems, 59).
As the fertility myth, in all its manifestations, is central
to Atwood as to much of literary tradition, including
Canadian literature and folk tales, so episodes of drowning,
of becoming submerged, of travelling beneath water or
beneath the earth dominate Canadian tradition and
Atwood's work as well. As in many literatures, such images
imply a rebirth, a return, a 'surfacing', a regeneration, all
leitmotifs for Atwood. In Procedures for Underground, for
example, the narrative voice is again a kind of Alice in an
underground Wonderland, a mythic region of the psyche
where wonders are both bizarre and beautiful yet
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emotional, and, in fact, her life and her future are out of
her control, subject to role prescriptions and the desires of
others. Her only autonomy, she feels, is to direct what she
will eat or not eat. Such eating disorders symbolic of role
rejection are also frequent images in Atwood's later fiction:
Joan Foster in Lady Oracle, for example, can manipulate
her world only by changing the size of her body. By eating
a very great deal, Joan can separate herself from her
domineering mother by refusing to resemble her; in this
way she rejects not only her individual mother but the
maternal role in general. The motivation behind anorexia,
a disease which Atwood sees as so problematic in young
women, is not so much a desire for fashionable slimness, as
an attempt to avoid womanhood, to remain a little girl, in
essence to escape one's very humanity.
Yet another means of escaping one's humanity is, simply,
to abdicate, to think of one's self in terms of a child, an
animal, or even of an inanimate object. Marian's anorexia
is also clearly linked with her vision of herself as an animal,
a prey to the male hunter in the person of Peter. Her own
victimisation is thus mirrored in the sacrificial deaths of
animals for food. Atwood writes in Survival about animal
victims as a theme in Canadian literature, and theorises
that 'the English Canadian projects himself through his
animal images as a threatened victim' (Survival, 80).
Certainly, as we will see in Chapter 3, the protagonist of
Surfacing sees her own victimisation as symbolised by the
crucified heron, even in the fish she herself kills for food.
For Marian in The Edible Woman, the primary identification
is with rabbits, not for their legendary fertility, but for
their vulnerability. She listens while Peter describes a
hunting incident to Len, man-to-man:
the belly and give her a good hard shake and all the
guts'll fall out." So I whipped out my knife, good
knife, German steel, and slit the belly and took her
by the hind legs and gave her one hell of a crack, like
a whip you see, and the next thing you know there
was blood and guts all over the place. All over me,
what a mess, rabbit guts dangling from the trees,
god the trees were red for yards. . . . (70)
remember', Duncan tells Marian; ' ... that's what you get
for being an orphan' (143). At times Marian too must
struggle against the temptation to mother Duncan, to kiss
his wounds: 'you need me' (247), she tells him on the night
of their sexual encounter. Their first kiss takes place in the
'Mummy Room' of the Royal Ontario Museum where
Duncan introduces Marian to his 'womb symbol', the
skeleton of a child in a fetal pose: 'with its jutting ribs and
frail legs and starved shoulder-blades it looked like the
photographs of people from underprivileged countries or
concentration camps' (193). The preserved child is Duncan's
image of himself, but it is also an image of the self for
Marian. Duncan is not Marian's surrogate baby, but her
self as baby. When Duncan finally begins to assume a
sexual role in the hotel room, it is Marian who responds by
curling into a fetal position. Neither is in an emotional
position to 'GIVE THE GIFT OF LIFE', an advertisement
Marian notices on the bus one day. The slogan accompanies
the photograph of a nurse, crisp and competent; from the
beginning of their relationship, Marian has considered that
she ought to approach Duncan as a kind of patient: 'The
situation, she thought, called for stout shoes and starched
cuffs and a leather bag full of hypodermic needles' (195).
By the end of the novel, however, Marian recognises the
manipulative aspects of such an approach: 'the starched
nurse-like image of herself she had tried to preserve as a
last resort crumpled like wet newsprint' (271). Duncan has
warned Marian earlier that 'I bring out the Florence
Nightingale' in women. He recognises the paradox that to
nurse is to render the receiver either infantile or invalid;
therefore Marian should beware: 'You might do something
destructive: hunger is more basic than love. Florence
Nightingale was a cannibal, you know' (102).
Duncan may be a projection of Marian's self, but he is
also her alter-ego: he does point directions; he ultimately
leads her to some form of understanding and frees her
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from her self, or at least from her sense of her self as either
nurse or victim. On the morning after Marian's engagement
party and her night in the hotel with Duncan, he conducts
her through the twisted maze of Toronto's streets and
ravines and brings her finally to a great open pit, a 'gigantic
hole scooped into the ground' (270). Together, they sit in
the snow at the edge of the abyss, which looks like
nothingness, like absence, like death, perhaps. 'It's your
own personal cul-de-sac', Duncan tells Marian, 'you
invented it, you'll have to think of your own way out'
(272). With this exhortation to responsibility, Marian leaves
the ravine, the pit, the burrow, the underground, and
moves back to the street alone, towards reality and,
perhaps, out of her Alice existence. Duncan remains
behind, '. . . a dark shape against the snow, crouched on
the edge and gazing into the empty pit' (272).
Following these events, several abrupt changes take
place. The narrative returns to first person, as it was in the
beginning of the novel, which indicates a quality of self-
direction, of autonomy. Marian returns to her apartment,
takes off the red sequined dress which had made her such a
good 'target' for Peter, washes her dishes, restores order in
general, and proceeds to bake a cake, an elaborate cake cut
and decorated to look like a woman in a bright pink ruffled
dress wearing her hair in 'intricate baroque scrolls and
swirls', just as Marian had worn hers to her engagement
party. 'Her creation gazed up at her, its face doll-like and
vacant except for the small silver glitter of intelligence in
each green eye ... "You look delicious," she told her ...
"And that's what will happen to you; that's what you get
for being food'" (277-78). The cake is, of course, an effigy
of Marian's self and of her identity as a consumable item in
a consumer society. She invites Peter to partake: 'You've
been trying to destroy me, haven't you .... You've been
trying to assimilate me. But I've made you a substitute,
something you'll like much better' (279). Peter is horrified
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and leaves Marian to eat the cake alone, which she does
with great relish, spearing chunks of pink thigh and
plunging her fork 'into the carcass, neatly severing the
body from the head' (280). Duncan, however, is willing to
share in Marian's self-cannibalism, and he sees in the cake
the symbolic significance Marian intended, although he
indicates that her motives are mistaken: 'Peter wasn't
trying to destroy you', he tells Marian, 'That's just
something you made up. Actually you were trying to
destroy him' (287).
Perhaps there are as many interpretations of Marian's
symbolic cake and of the ending of The Edible Woman as
there are readers. According to Robert Lecker in 'Janus
through the Looking Glass', Marian has been from the
beginning a 'packaged product of a male-dominated
corporate society', and her rejection of food 'is synonymous
with her rejection of a culture which tends to exploit
women and treat them as edible objects'. Her final act of
eating the cake, according to Lecker, is a form of
reconciliation, a recognition that she is herself 'a mixture of
consumer and consumed'. 6 For Catherine McLay in 'The
Dark Voyage: The Edible Woman as Romance', Marian's
cake represents a 'feast, the celebration of Marian's new
freedom and even rebirth . . . '. She is 'released from the
spell, from her identification of herself with the victim. No
longer isolated and alien, Marian has rejoined society'. 7
Kim Chernin in The Obsession: Reflections on the Tyranny of
Slenderness sees the final scenes in The Edible Woman as
even more highly symbolic: 'By eating up this cake fetish
of a woman's body she assimilates for the first time her
own body and its feelings. It is a re-enactment of the ritual
feast, in which the eating of an animal's flesh, or a piece of
cake shaped like a breast, signifies the coming together of
human and divine, individual with collective . . . a woman
with her own body and feelings'. 8
Atwood herself, however, is not so optimistic about the
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conclusion of The Edible Woman: ' ... in the end it's more
pessimistic than Surfacing. The difference between them is
that The Edible Woman is a circle and Surfacing is a spiral
... the heroine of Surfacing does not end where she
began'. 9 And, in Second Words, Atwood remarks,' ... my
heroine's choices remain much the same at the end of the
book as they are at the beginning: career going nowhere, or
marriage as an exit from it' (370). Perhaps the cake and the
self-cannibalism it symbolises are but another of Atwood's
'self-indulgent grotesqueries', as she herself has
characterised certain of her images in the novel (Second
Words, 369). Certainly, Atwood has incorporated every
relevant fairy tale into the elaborate detective game which
is this novel. (Even Goldilocks and the Three Bears is
invoked at that point when Marian first enters Duncan's
apartment and tries out all the various chairs. Goldilocks,
too, is a consumer, an eater of other people's porridge.)
Surely Atwood would not be so remiss as to ignore other
examples of cannibalism in fairy tales, like those Duncan
cites as a pattern: ' ... the husband kills the wife's lover,
or vice versa, and cuts out the heart and makes it into a
stew or a pie and serves it up in a silver dish, and the other
one eats it' (53). No matter how desperately the reader
seeks for heroism in this novel, Atwood will not permit our
private mythologies to contradict her ironic humour.
Nevertheless, we are tempted to argue with Atwood
about the ending of The Edible Woman, that surely Marian
knows more than she did in the beginning; if she is not, in
fact, celebrating the unity of the 'human and the divine' or
has not changed either her society or her own social
condition, at least she has come to terms with something,
has objectified her situation and apprehended it more
realistically. The cake thus serves as a reflection, a way of
seeing herself as in a mirror, and it expresses a truth not
before perceived. The cake is 'doll-like', and Marian has
previously conceived of herself as a kind of doll. On the
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her wings and reduced to the role of moth ball. Even years
later when Joan sheds her pounds of fat, emerging finally
into the role of butterfly, she is haunted by the ghost of
her fat self, 'my dark twin. . . . She wanted to kill me and
take my place' (279).
The fat lady in the tutu, who works in the same 'freak
show' with the 'dancing girls', also has a double, another of
Atwood's 'dancing girls' who recur throughout the poetry
and fiction in any variety of disguises. Moira Shearer in
The Red Shoes (whose importance as an image for Atwood
is discussed in Chapter 1) also becomes an identity for
Joan, who shares the luxurious red hair of her idol and
who repeatedly attempts to also dance herself to death and
to suffer 'more than anyone' (87). Joan is still Moira
Shearer at the end of the novel when, her entire life in a
shambles, she decides to 'dance for no one but myself':
Both Moira Shearer and the fat lady then merge identities
with that other innocent and victimised heroine, yet another
'dancing girl' identity for Joan, the Little Mermaid of the
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fairy tale who traded her tongue for legs only to find
herself dancing at the prince's wedding to somebody else.
Again, Atwood invokes her familiar paradox of the woman
as artist: to sacrifice art for love is to sacrifice art, love and
the self as well.
Still another of Joan's identities is also a victim of the
same paradox. The Lady of Shalott sits in her gothic tower
weaving her ornate tapestries, creating her art and watching
the medieval world through a mirror. She is content until
the reflection of the handsome knight appears, at which
point she leaves the tower, the tapestry, and the mirror in
search of love, only to encounter her own death and
minimal attention from the knight who barely notices as
she floats by in her death barge. Joan has the Tennyson
poem in mind, but perhaps Atwood also identifies her with
the Pre-Raphaelite painting by William Holman Hunt of
the Lady of Shalott. An ornate mirror dominates the
painting, and the central figure of a woman is a caricature
of femininity with her baroque and wild red hair (the
colour of Joan's). She wears the costume of a dancing girl,
and she appears to be entangled in the threads from her
own weaving. Like Homer's Penelope or any number of
other weaving or spinning women in mythology and
literature (including Philomela, who, like the Little
Mermaid, also lost her tongue), the lady in Holman Hunt's
painting represents a fearful kind of witch-like power. The
hair, like the weaving, symbolises power of a sexual nature;
it can function to ensnare men, as is also true in the case of
Rapunzel (whom Atwood sees in Survival as a prototype
for Canadian literary heroines), or Circe (another of
Atwood's woman/artist heroines in 'Circe/Mud Poems'), or
even snake-haired Medusa, the original 'girl with the
Gorgon touch' (whose image dominates in Double
Persephone). All of these ultimately doomed women of
mythology, regardless of how powerful they may be in the
beginning, end in sorry circumstances, and thus they
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Leda Sprott alias Eunice P. Revele has one good eye and
one bad eye. Like the rest of Atwood's literary characters,
she is split, multiple, complex. But the truth she has to tell
is one aspect of Atwood's own philosophy of literature and
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And it is also true that every woman has more than one
husband, men being as doubled and multiplied as women
in Atwood's books. Just as the multiple Joan is represented
by the murdered wives of Redmond in Stalked by Love, so
Redmond is a composite of all the men in Joan's life.
Joan's father, whom she perceives as so ineffectual in
comparison to her dominant mother, is ultimately revealed
as a kind of Merlin who, in the practice of medicine,
returns life to people whether they want it or not, and, in
the practice of war, is responsible for the deaths of people
who wanted life. In his role as anesthesiologist, he can
simulate the deaths of living people. 'He was a man in a
cage, like other men,' Joan observes, 'but what made him
different was his dabbling in lives and deaths' (154). One
of the faces of Redmond encountered at the centre of the
maze is swathed in 'a white gauze mask' (377).
Joan is taught in childhood that there are 'two categories:
nice men did things for you, bad men did things to you'
(73). But she soon learns that life, and particularly men,
defy classification. The 'daffodil man' might be the
perverted exhibitionist whom little Joan encounters on her
way home from a Brownie meeting (another version of
Atwood's ubiquitous 'Underwear Man' from The Edible
Woman), or he might be the rescuer who frees her from the
tree to which her malicious sister Brownies have tied her.
Even more disconcerting, perhaps he is both, just as Joan's
Polish count in London is both Paul, the heroic political
refugee, and Mavis Quilp, the author of Lucy Gallant:
Army Nurse. The cloaked figure of the Royal Porcupine,
eccentric artist and romantic lover, hides the identity of
Chuck Brewer, '. . . gray and multidimensional and
complicated like everyone else. Was every Heathcliff a
Linton in disguise?' (300).
Arthur is perhaps less readily understandable than the
other male characters Joan invents for the romance she sees
as her life, but he, too, is multiple:
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a mere plot device: ' ... in any labyrinth I would have let
go of the thread in order to follow a wandering light, a
fleeting voice' (170). Even if she enters the secret room,
she does not confront its significance: 'In a fairy tale I
would be one of the two stupid sisters who open the
forbidden door and are shocked by the murdered wives,
not the third, clever one who keeps to the essentials:
presence of mind, foresight, the telling of watertight lies'
(170).
Truth does not translate into art nor art into truth for Joan,
as Atwood always indicates that it must. Joan resolves at
the end of the novel to abandon her costume Gothics
because 'I think they were bad for me' (379), but she will
make a poor substitution in the form of science fiction,
merely another kind of romance. 'I keep thinking I should
learn some lesson from all of this', Joan says, but the
reader's hopes for her regeneration are not rewarded. Of
her life and her staged death, she says, 'It did make a mess;
but then, I don't think I'll ever be a very tidy person'
(380).
Nor is Lady Oracle intended to be a 'tidy' novel. As
Atwood says, ' ... the book I set out to write was a kind of
antithesis to Surfacing, which is very tight and everything
in it fits and there's not anything that's out of place and no
tangents .... In Lady Oracle I set out to write a book that
was all tangents' .3 If, as many critics have noted and as
Atwood herself has said, Lady Oracle is an 'anti-Gothic'
novel, a satire on the conventions of the nineteenth-century
romances which Atwood discusses in Second Words, then
perhaps the novel's lack of resolution is part of that satiric
intent. Certainly, Joan is a parody of the Gothic heroine
who, according to Judith McCombs in 'Atwood's Haunted
Sequences', is '. . . tempted by male Others whose power
animates and captivates, whose guises enthrall, whose love
spells death'. 4
But Joan is nothing if not a survivor. She may imagine
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demon lovers, but she will run for her life if they actually
appear. Joan's Gothic novels thus function like her other
lies and like her fat lady disguise: they protect her from
'what is in the room', from a reality she wishes to avoid.
She prefers Arthur as Linton rather than as a ' ... cloaked,
sinuous and faintly menacing stranger'; she is safe, she
rationalises, because '. . . cloaked strangers didn't leave
their socks on the floor or stick their fingers in their ears or
gargle in the morning to kill germs. I kept Arthur in our
apartment and the strangers in their castles and mansions,
where they belonged' (241). Thus, largely because of Joan's
talents for survival, Lady Oracle is essentially a comic
work. According to Clara Thomas, who sees Joan as an
archetypal 'fool-heroine', the novel is ' ... written with a
light touch and to analyze it in other and academic language
is inevitably to desecrate it. This is a funny book and we
are carried along on the crests of its fun with all the
buoyancy of swimming in salt water'. 5
However, like all great comedy, Lady Oracle has a dark
side, an aspect recognised by Robert Lecker who writes
that its function is to 'corrupt the prototypical romance
movement from descent to ascent by demonstrating that
the upper world is merely a reflection of the lower world of
darkness, ambiguity and isolation' .6 Joan remains isolated
in her tower of false art, victimised by her self-created
mythologies. Finally, she is helpless to extricate herself
from the threads of her own tapestry, nor can she accept
that reality which the mirror reflects. Her only recognition
of consequence is that she is 'an escape artist . . . the real
romance of my life was that between Houdini and his ropes
and locked trunk; entering the embrace of bondage,
slithering out again. What else had I ever done' (367). But
even this recognition is perhaps an illusion: Joan does not
escape her own greatest enemy, which is herself. Funny as
she is, Joan shares the essentially tragic position of the
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* * * *
and I am dragged to the mind's
deadend, the roar of the bone-
yard, I am lost
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not exist. It's the next best thing to being invisible' (10). As
the heroine of Surfacing prays to be made invisible, as Joan
Foster in Lady Oracle regards her excess weight as 'a magic
cloak of invisibility', and as Marian in The Edible Woman
seeks to disappear by refusing to eat, so Lesje in this novel
finds it convenient to temporarily eliminate herself.
Invisibility in Atwood's terms, is a complex symbol: at
times, it represents a refusal to deal with reality, a means of
escape from a necessary confrontation, but invisibility is
also the prerogative of the artist. Atwood writes in Second
Words that one of the things she used to wish for when she
was very young 'and reading a lot of comic books and fairy
tales', was 'the cloak of invisibility, so I could follow
people around and listen to what they were saying when I
wasn't there . . . '. This is what novelists do, says Atwood,
'every time they write a page' (Second Words, 429). But,
like Joan Foster and Marian McAlpin, Lesje may have the
soul of an artist, but she misuses and misinterprets her
talents. Like other of Atwood's heroines, she is a
'failed artist', solipsistic and incapable of translating the
imagination into language. To remain invisible in the green
world is to escape 'real life', adulthood, the sexual
recognition that implies, and the moral implications of the
role of artist as well.
For Lesje, 'men replaced dinosaurs, true, in her head as
in geological time; but thinking about men has become too
unrewarding' (11). The men in Lesje's life are in fact
remarkably unrewarding. At first she lives with William,
who is a double to Peter in The Edible Woman, a 'good
man', theoretically safe but unutterably boring. 'William
Wasp', as Lesje thinks of him, is 'pink-cheeked' and
'hairless' (20), and an incurable optimist who believes that
'every catastrophe is merely a problem looking for a
brilliant solution' (19). William, he and Lesje both believe,
will save the world in his professional capacity as a specialist
in environmental engineering, translate 'sewage disposal':
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then make her like it, that was the greatest power'. Finally,
Atwood advises her selfless and nameless woman of this
poem, 'watch yourself. That's what mirrors are for, this
story is a mirror story which rhymes with horror story,
almost but not quite'. Men are powerful, Atwood concludes
the poem, because they have the 'last word', they have, in
fact, 'the word' (Murder in the Dark, 52).
And through her experiences in the prison and her first-
hand apprehension of outrage, Rennie, too, comes to see
men in the light of the power they wield, through violence
as well as through language: 'She's afraid of men and it's
simple, it's rational, she's afraid of men because men are
frightening (290). Only in the light of such a recognition
can Rennie free herself of their power and come to terms
with her own male-identified tendency to reject other
women because she sees her own weaknesses mirrored in
theirs. Female bonding is not a concept that comes easily
to Atwood's heroines, even in connection with their own
mothers, as we have seen in previous chapters. But those
who do discover such a source of strength are the true
survivors in Atwood's fiction and poetry. Again, it requires
the most dire circumstances to force Rennie to realise and
then accept that her cellmate, Lora, is more noble in her
acts of prostitution than is Rennie in her fastidious virtue.
Lora is, in fact, a sister in the real sense, who pays for
Rennie's survival with her body and, finally, perhaps with
her life. It is surely a form of salvation or a redemption, a
secular pieta, when Rennie huddles in a corner of her cell,
holding the battered Lora in her arms, licking the encrusted
blood away from the ruined face with her own tongue.
Here Rennie reverses her lifelong practice of the lesson
learned in childhood; she finally touches and doesn't look.
The images are of giving birth as Rennie strains and pants,
trying to push Lora back into life, but the actual birth is
Rennie's own. Only in this unspoken declaration of
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woman: the woman with her face sewn shut, and her
mouth closed 'to a hole the size of a straw' (True Stories,
50). Similarly, in 'Notes Towards a Poem that Can Never
be Written', Atwood describes the tortured and mutilated
woman who is '. . . dying because she said. I She is dying
for the sake of the word./It is her body, silent/and
fingerless, writing this poem' (True Stories, 67).
Atwood does not write pleasant 'feminine' poems; neither
is she tolerant of that masculine collective, 'They', as I
have noted in Chapter 1. Atwood's most frequent weapon
against her critics, particularly those who accuse her of
being 'mean to men', however, is humour. Women authors
in general, including Atwood herself, she indicates, are on
the whole kinder to men in fiction than male authors are to
men. In her essay, 'Writing the Male Character', Atwood
catalogues the 'heroes' of past literature, including Hamlet,
Macbeth and Faust. 'How about the behaviour of the men
in Moll Flanders', she asks; 'Is A Sentimental Journey about
the quintessential wimp?' (Second Words, 421). Although
Atwood states that her intention is to depict men fairly and
realistically, that women should 'take the concerns of men
as seriously as they expect men to take theirs, both as
novelists and as inhabitants of this earth' (Second Words,
428), she also concludes that the critics are insatiable, that
they demand an unrealistic portrayal of male characters:
'Captain Marvel without the Billy Batson alter ego; nothing
less will do' (Second Words, 420).
Atwood's other sin as defined by numerous critics is a
general pessimism, a negative outlook on the world.
Atwood, however, considers herself a realist rather
than a pessimist: 'What you think is pessimistic depends
very largely on what you think is out there in the world'
(Second Words, 349). In 'Witches', she promises a year's
free subscription to the Amnesty International Bulletin to
the next critic who accuses her of pessimism. The world as
Atwood sees it is in fact a dangerous and hostile place, and
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the writer's job is to define and judge that world, not to see
it through rose-coloured glasses. In an early review of
Margaret Avison's poetry, Atwood justifies Avison's
'realism': the subject of poetry ought not to be '. . . a
chocolate-covered poetic pill, guaranteed to taste nice, go
down easily, and eliminate all need for effort' (Second
Words, 22). What the critics, booksellers, and the 'media
bunnies' would like, Atwood says in 'An End to Audience?',
is an 'entertainment package', money-making and film-
producing fiction written, not by authors with political
views, but by 'elements', ciphers who lend their words to
slogans on T -shirts, who provide 'writing to suck your
thumb by' (Second Words, 355). Atwood prefers truth to
lies and realism to romance; her intention is not to
communicate pessimism, but to inform and instruct and,
finally, to provide hope: 'Writing, no matter what its
subject, is an act of faith ... it's also an act of hope, the
hope that things can be better than they are' (Second
Words, 349). Words themselves, Atwood reiterates
throughout Murder in the Dark, constitute the defeat of
pessimism:
Notes to Chapter 2
1. Nina Auerbach, Romantic Imprisonment: Women and Other Glorified
Outcasts (New York, Columbia University Press, 1985), p. 133.
2. Ibid., p. 138.
3. Ibid., p. 140.
4. Ibid., p. 164.
5. Sherrill Grace, Violent Duality: A Study of Margaret Atwood
(Montreal, Vehicule Press, 1980), p. 59.
6. Robert Lecker, 'Janus Through the Looking Glass: Atwood's First
Three Novels', The Art of Margaret Atwood: Essays in Criticism, eds
Arnold E. Davidson and Cathy N. Davidson (Toronto, Anansi Press,
1981), pp. 179-80.
7. Catherine McLay, 'The Dark Voyage: The Edible Woman as
Romance', The Art of Margaret Arwood: Essays in Criticism, eds Arnold
E. Davidson and Cathy N. Davidson (Toronto, Anansi Press, 1981),
p. 138.
8. Kim Chemin, The Obsession: Reflections on the Tyranny of Slenderness
(New York, Harper & Row, 1981), p. 71.
9. Linda Sandler, 'Interview with Margaret Atwood', The Malahat
Review, 4 (January, 1977), p. 19.
Notes to Chapter 3
1. Graeme Gibson, Eleven Canadian Novelists (Toronto, Anansi Press,
1973), p. 29.
2. Ibid., p. 22.
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Notes to Chapter 4
1. Linda Sandler, 'Interview with Margaret Atwood', The Malahat
Review, Vol. 4 (January, 1977), p. 19.
2. Jerome H. Rosenberg, Margaret Atwood (Boston, G. K. Hall, 1984),
p. 116.
3. Ibid., p. 112.
4. Judith McCombs, 'Atwood's Haunted Sequences: The Circle Game,
The Journals of Susanna Moodie', and Power Politics, The An of Margaret
Atwood: Essays in Criticism, eds Arnold E. Davidson and Cathy N.
Davidson (Toronto, Anansi Press, 1981), pp. 36-37.
S. Clara Thomas, 'Lady Oracle: The Narrative of a Fool-Heroine', The
Art of Margaret Atwood: Essays in Criticism, eds Arnold E. Davidson and
Cathy N. Davidson (Toronto, Anansi Press, 1981), p. 173.
6. Robert Lecker, 'Janus Through the Looking Glass: Atwood's First
Three Novels', The An of Margaret Atwood: Essays in Criticism, eds
Arnold E. Davidson and Cathy N. Davidson (Toronto, Anansi Press,
1981), p. 203.
Notes to Chapter 5
I. Linda Hutcheon, 'From Poetic to Narrative Structures: The Novels
of Margaret Atwood', Margaret Atwood: Language, Text, and System, eds
138 NOTES
Notes to Chapter 6
I. Sherrill Grace, Violent Duality: A Study of Margaret Atwood
(Montreal, Vehicule Press, 1980), p. 67.
2. Jerome H. Rosenberg, Margaret Atwood (Boston, G. K. Hall, 1984),
p. 92.
3. Judith McCombs, 'Atwood's Fictive Portraits of the Artist: From
Victim to Surfacer, From Oracle to Birth', Women's Studies, Vol. 12
(1986), pp. 69-88.
4. Margaret Atwood, 'Surviving the Critics', This Magazine is About
Schools (1973), p. 33.
Notes to Chapter 7
1. Sherrill Grace, Violent Duality: A Study of Margaret Atwood
(Montreal, Vehicule Press, 1980), p. I.
2. Frank Davey, Margaret Atwood: A Feminist Poetics (Vancouver,
Talonbooks, 1984), p. 153.
3. Ibid., p. 1.
4. George Woodcock, 'Bashful but Bold: Notes on Margaret Atwood as
Literary Critics', The Art of Margaret Atwood: Essays in Criticism, eds
Arnold E. Davidson and Cathy N. Davidson (Toronto, Anansi, 1981),
p. 237.
5. Ibid., p. 241.
6. Frank Davey, op. cit., p. 163.
7. Philip Stratford, 'The uses of Ambiguity: Margaret Atwood and
Hubert Aquin' Margaret Arwood: Language, Text, and System, eds
Sherrill E. Grace and Lorraine Weir (Vancouver, University of British
Columbia Press, 1983), p. 113.
8. John Wilson Foster, 'The Poetry of Margaret Atwood', Canadian
Literature, Vol. 74 (1977), p. 5.
9. Jerome H. Rosenberg, Margaret Arwood (Boston, G. K. Hall, 1984),
p. so.
10. Karla Hammond, 'An Interview with Margaret Atwood', The
American Poetry Review, Vol. 8, No. 5 (September/October, 1979), p. 29.
Bibliography
Primary Works
(All references are to the following editions. Paperback
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Poetry
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140 BIBLIOGRAPHY
Non-fiction
Second Words (Toronto, Anansi, 1983).
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Secondary Sources
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