Discursive - Boxing Passage

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[1] There is no doubt that boxing is a very violent activity which


polarises opinions, with prominent members of the medical
profession strongly condemning the sport while boxing fans are
equally passionate in supporting it. I find myself in the ironic
situation of sympathising with those who say it should be
banned yet wishing the sport to continue because I believe it
has genuine benefits. Furthermore, I find myself enjoying
watching it whenever I have the opportunity.

[2] I am certainly aware of all the powerful arguments against


boxing. It is the brutality and infliction of physical damage that
is the principal reason which has led to calls for the sport to be
banned. By definition, boxing is a gruesome athletic contest
between two persons, each of whom uses fists to try to knock
the other unconscious or to inflict enough punishment to cause
the opponent either to quit or to be judged beaten. Boxing
matches are conducted under established rules and
procedures and have a referee, judges, and timekeeper. The
primary aim of each participant is to strike a blow to the front of
the head and body of the opponent that will knock down and
render the boxer incapable of rising to a standing position and
defending himself within ten seconds.
[3] As a result, the sport has witnessed many unsavoury
incidents throughout its history. Gerald McClellan, former
American middleweight champion, suffered extensive brain
damage and lost the ability to walk, in addition to losing his
sight and most of his hearing. Muhammad Ali ‘s boxing-related
Parkinson’s disease is well-known and there are even extreme
cases where a boxer has nearly died in the ring as happened
in September 1991 when Michael Watson fought Chris
Eubank. Is it any wonder that the British Medical Association
has campaigned against the sport? One medical figure, Dr Jeff
Cundy, has described the devastating effects in graphic terms
that everyone can understand: “Blows to the head cause the
brain to move in the skull like jelly in a bowl”.

[4] However, boxing is not only a health issue but a sociological


one, as many argue that it promotes violence. In the Seoul
Olympics, some years ago an element of hooliganism caused
chaos during and after the fights, leading to the President of
the Olympic Games forecasting the boxing would eventually be
forced out of the Games. To many, it seems inconsistent to
condemn violence in society and at the same time allow a sport
which glorifies it. If a man were to go out into the street and
punch someone in the face he would be arrested and most
likely be charged with assault. Why, then, are sportsmen able
to beat each other up in the boxing ring and get away with it?

[5] Valid though these points are, I nevertheless feel that there
is another side to the issue. It is simply not true to portray
boxing as nothing more than a form of uncivilised behaviour.
Famous boxers follow highly disciplined regimes and lifestyles
and, in many cases, have strong religious beliefs. Mike Tyson
is a Muslim; Frank Bruno a Christian. Some boxers even claim
some kind of divine inspiration. These men are certainly not
controlled by their basic instincts but are civilised individuals
who are perfectly capable of controlling their potentially violent
natures.
[6] The point could be put even more strongly: many boxers
consider that boxing is not just a sport but an art. The famous
American boxer Sugar Ray Leonard once said that “Boxing is
the ultimate challenge. There's nothing that can compare to
testing yourself the way you do every time you step in the ring.”

[7] Furthermore, whether we like it or not, aggression is part of


human nature and boxing provides a means of channelling that
aggression in a controlled and supervised way. There are
many examples of boys from underprivileged backgrounds
who, instead of becoming involved in street fights and gang
warfare, have found a more worthwhile outlet for their instincts
through boxing.

[8] This point has been convincingly argued by journalist


Charlotte Leslie in The Guardian. “Boxing”, she claims,
“engages with young people on their own terms and recognises
that frustration and aggression that is so often the hallmark of
teenage years. It reaches into the underground, anarchical
world which engulfs so many school drop-outs, which many
other forms of social engagement cannot penetrate.”

[9] Above all, boxing provides hope for many young people who
lack self-esteem. They may have failed in other areas and have
come to see themselves as dropouts from society. As Leslie
puts it, “They no longer feel that they have to pick fights, but
can walk away. Boxing gives them the confidence to give
school a go and to make job applications. I have seen young
boxers turn from outcasts to role models.”

[10] It seems to me that humans have a natural instinct to fight;


we have used it to evolve to where we are today, and no doubt
it contributed to the “survival of the fittest”. If boxing channels
that instinct into something positive rather than something
destructive, and provides hope for youngsters whose lives lack
direction, then I believe we should fully support it.