Talk For Writing - Y3-Unicorn-F
Talk For Writing - Y3-Unicorn-F
Talk For Writing - Y3-Unicorn-F
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Uncovered
by Jo Pearce
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Welcome to this workbook.
Let me introduce you to your
virtual teacher, Jo. She will
guide you through the
activities.
Hello,
Please read my instructions carefully.
You will need something to write
with, or a computer to type on.
Are you ready to become a unicorn
expert? Have fun!
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Let’s get started!
Legends and stories are full of mythical creatures and fantastic beasts
that are made up of parts of other animals mixed together. These are
called ‘hybrids’. They are fun to explore. For example:
Griffins have the body, legs and tail of a lion and the
wings of an eagle.
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Invent your own mythical beast
To start our unit of work, spend some time making up your own mythical beast. It
could have different parts of interesting animals. Think
about its legs, body and head. It might have a tail,
wings or fins.
I had a go with some pencil crayons in my notebook. As
you can see, I am not brilliant at drawing, but I had a lot
of fun. My creature has the head and neck of a
flamingo, the body and wings of a penguin, the legs of
an elephant and a skunk’s tail. I have called it the
Flamenguin.
If you would like some help with your drawing, there
are lots of really helpful artists and guides online for
drawing animals. Google ‘how to draw an elephant’, for example, and you will be
able to find some help. Make sure you tell an adult what you are doing. Draw yours
here:
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2. Model text
“You can also listen to this model text online here: https://soundcloud.com/talkforwriting/unicorns/s-
kpNjhGRD75A,
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The River Unicorn (Fluvis unicornis)
The River Unicorn is a shy, solitary creature that has been seen only three
times in the wild.
It has a sandy-brown coat, a mane like sea foam, and a transparent horn
that seems to ripple and flow when the light catches it.
The River Unicorn is the same size as a Shetland pony.
Unsurprisingly, most River Unicorns live along the banks of rivers. But you
might be surprised to learn that these animals are reluctant swimmers.
Occasionally, they have been spotted sleeping in dens under the roots of
ancient willow trees. It is thought that the power of the water and the
willow flows through the River Unicorn and enhances its magic.
Much has been written about the River Unicorn’s magic. Typically, the
River Unicorn’s power lies in its horn. When ground into powder and mixed
with the correct ingredients, the horn can heal almost all human ailments.
In addition to this, legends tell us that one drop of the unicorn’s blood can
make a human immortal.
Glossary:
solitary: alone, being the only one
transparent: something is transparent if it lets light through. You can see through
transparent objects like windows and cling film.
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3. Words! Words! Words!
Definition Picture
An organisation where
people can save, borrow,
and invest money.
Sloping, raised land.
Sometimes along the side of
a river.
To fly with
one wing higher than the
other when turning
An amount of something to
be used later e.g. a word bank
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Write a short sentence to match each picture. Make sure you use the word ‘bank’,
‘banking ’or ‘banked’. I have done the first one for you.
Picture Sentence
I felt the plane bank as we circled the city
once more.
I am reluctant to …
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Shades of meaning
3. My final word is ‘occasionally’.
Occasionally means ‘sometimes but not often’. Write some sentences with the word
occasionally in them.
Below is a bank of words and phrases in a cloud. You will also see a scale ranging from
never-to-always to show how often something happens.
Pick a word from the cloud. Decide what it means and place it where it belongs on
the never-to-always scale:
• Is it similar to ‘never’?
• Is it a lot like ‘always’?
• Does it mean something in the middle? If so, where will you place it?
• Can you think of any more words to add to the scale?
sometimes
rarely
often hardly
regularly frequently
constantly
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4. Read and understand
the wild.
_______________
____________
body?__________________
6. Why would a unicorn hunter think that the River Unicorn was special?
1. ______________________________________________________________
2. _________________________________________________________________________
3. _________________________________________________________________________
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5. Spellings
★ Write each word and underline or circle the tricky bit. How will you
remember it?
★ Speed write – how many times can you write the words in one minute?
★ Say the word as it is spelt, not as it sounds. E.g., ‘dis-ap-pear’ for disappear.
3. In __________________to its powerful horn, the unicorn also has magic blood.
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6. Grammar
Let’s work on our sentences! You will need a piece of paper or a note pad, and
something to write with, or a computer.
rusty pink
sea black
dusty grey
creamy turquoise
misty blue
midnight green
smoky red
murky purple
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2. Adding details with a simile
A ‘mane ’is the word used to
describe the long hair at the top
of an animal’s neck. Horses,
unicorns, giraffes and some
monkeys have manes.
Let’s think about other unicorns and what their manes could look like. Can you add
any more ideas? Add more arrows if you need to. You could make up your own
unicorn in the blue circle and add some ideas there too.
A River Unicorn
could have a
mane like…
lightning thunder clouds
A Storm Unicorn
could have a
mane like…
smoke
A Fire Unicorn
could have a
mane like…
blue flames
A _____________
Unicorn could
have a mane
like…
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3. Adding ‘that seems to’ – a relative clause
Using some of the ideas that we have been creating above, finish the sentences by
writing the relative clause in the gap provided. You could explain how the horn
moves, or what it seems to do when you look carefully.
The River Unicorn has a sandy-brown coat, a mane like sea foam, and a transparent
horn that seems to ripple and flow when the light catches it.
The Storm Unicorn has a cloudy-white coat, a mane like lightning, and an icy horn
The Fire Unicorn has a burnt-orange coat, a mane like smoke, and a flaming horn
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7. Short-burst writing - poetry
Unicorns are thought to be kind and gentle creatures. They are usually described as being shy,
but when they do meet humans they are often helpful and generous. Sometimes they save lives.
Imagine if you had your very own unicorn to look after you and keep you happy. That would be
very special indeed. That is what this poem is about:
My Unicorn
dreaming.
settling.
imagining.
slowly.
while I watch,
Can you spot the pattern in the poem? You can follow the pattern to write your own, or you
can follow your own pattern. You could also write a ‘free verse ’poem and just let the ideas
flow, following no structure at all. Remember, a poem doesn’t have to rhyme.
My unicorn carries me to the corners of the world, – use a verb here to have the
unicorn do something
while I rest on its back in blankets, – use ‘while I ’to show what you are doing or
thinking
dreaming – use any word here to show a feeling, thought or to give a sense of the mood
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8. Short-burst writing: potion instructions
In our page from Professor Dame Folklore’s book, it tells us that the River Unicorn’s horn
has healing powers: When ground into powder and mixed with the correct
ingredients, the horn can heal almost all human ailments.
Here is a recipe for a magic potion to heal a broken heart. One of the ingredients is the
River Unicorn’s horn.
After you have consumed the potion, return home and have a lovely long sleep. When you wake up
the next day, your heart will be fully restored and ready to love again.
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Can you write a magic potion? What do
you want your potion to do? Make sure
you include the powerful unicorn horn!
When we write, we start by getting all our ideas out. We can then pick the best ones.
Follow these writing tips and you will soon have lots of wonderful ideas to write your
potion.
Writing tip 1.
When I was thinking about my
ingredients, I thought of all the words
related to ‘love ’that I could and jotted
them down. That might be a good place to
start. Write ideas about your potion.
Would you like your potion to heal something such as a broken leg, heart or a help
cure a cold? Or you could think about something positive that you would like to be
able to do like fly, go invisible or speak to animals.
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9. Fun with dens
In our text, it says that the River Unicorn sleeps in a den under the roots of ancient
willow trees.
A den is a secret place where you can hide, rest, read a book or play a game. Have
you ever made a den? Why not have a go? Here are some ideas that might be useful
for you to build one:
• unused boxes and packaging
• blankets and sheets
• bits of cardboard
• battery powered fairy lights (ask an adult)
• old party decorations
• cushions and pillows
• large suitcases
• sofa cushions
You can build dens around larger pieces of furniture like tables and sofas.
Make sure you tell a grown up where and how you are planning to build your den.
They have probably made a den before and will have lots of ideas for you.
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10. Gathering ideas – innovation
You have done some fantastic unicorn research so far. Well done. I think you are
ready to help Professor Dame Folklore write another page for her book ‘Unicorns
Uncovered’. The ‘Introduction’ is also intact, and it lists the following chapters:
10.Storm Unicorn 14.*Unreadable entry*
11.Frost Unicorn 15.Mountain Unicorn
12.Rainbow Unicorn 16.*Unreadable entry*
13.Fire Unicorn
You could write about one of the unicorns from the missing chapters or make up your
own unicorn.
What is your unicorn called? Think about its body, mane, horn and tail. You could
also think about its special features and magical powers. Draw and label your unicorn
below. Unicorns can be hard to draw unicorns so there is an outline provided to help
you. If you don’t want to use this, draw it on separate paper.
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11. Boxing up
INTRODUCTION
What is it?
APPEARANCE
SPECIAL FEATURE
INTERESTING FACT
I am going to choose the ‘Fire Unicorn’ to show you how to plan your new page.
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12. Boxing up the plan
The River Unicorn Underlying pattern Plan for The Fire Unicorn
• shy, solitary INTRODUCTION • rare, hot tempered
• seen 3x • seen once
What is it?
• sandy-brown coat APPEARANCE • burnt-orange coat
• mane like sea foam • mane like smoke
• transparent horn like What does it look like? • flame horn
water • small like a pony
• small like a pony
• river banks HABITAT • volcanoes
• dens in willow tree • likes the cool
roots Where does it live? • dens under burnt trees
• not swimmers
• power in horn SPECIAL FEATURE • power in horn
• healing • poison
• blood makes humans What magical powers • hair from its tail makes
immortal does it have? humans immortal
• can disappear in an INTERESTING FACT • can set something alight
instant Extra, fascinating by pointing its horn at it.
information
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13. Plan your unicorn information page
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14 Write your unicorn information page (hugging the model)
Now it is time to write about your unicorn! You will need a computer, tablet or paper and
something to write with. I’ll give you a bit of help on each section as I write my own.
We can write it together, bit by bit. I will show you how to hug closely but you can read a
text later that has moved away from the model – we call this ‘shaking hands with the
model’. You just take the idea and run with it in your own way.
Section 1 – Introduction
Use your boxed-up planner to help you. Look back at the model text to help you too.
In this section I want to:
★ Introduce the unicorn to the reader by saying a little bit about it.
The Fire Unicorn
The Fire Unicorn is a rare, hot-tempered creature that has only been
spotted once in its natural habitat.
Read it through and check it makes sense and flows.Then check your punctation and spelling. Have you
remembered your full stops? Have you remembered the comma after your first adjective if you’ve used two
together?
Section 2 – Appearance
Use your boxed-up planner to help you. Look back at the model text to help you too.
In this section I want to:
Read it through and check it makes sense and flows. Then check your punctation and spelling. Have you
remembered your full stops? Are there capital letters after the full stops? Have you remembered the
comma after your list items?
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Section 3 – Habitat
Use your boxed-up planner to help you. Look back at the model text to help you too.
In this section I want to:
★ Add a bit of detail about how the habitat gives the unicorn power
Unsurprisingly, most Fire Unicorns live on volcanoes. But you might be surprised to learn that
these unicorns prefer the cool of the shade. Occasionally, they have been spotted sleeping in dens
under the branches of burnt, blackened trees. It is thought that eating the soot and embers
around the volcano enhances the Fire Unicorn’s magic.
Read it through and check it makes sense and flows. Then check your punctation and spelling. Have you
remembered your full stops? Have you remembered the comma after your fronted adverbials?
Read it through and check it makes sense and flows. Then check your punctation and spelling. Have you
remembered your full stops? Have you remembered the apostrophe if you have written unicorn’s horn?
★ End with a statement about how popular / sought after the unicorn is.
Another interesting feature of the Fire Unicorn is its ability to set things on fire. Just like striking
a match, all it has to do is point its horn towards the target and that object will burst into
flames. Therefore, it is often viewed as the most dangerous of all the unicorn species.
Read it through and check it makes sense. Then check your punctation and spelling. Have you remembered
your full stops? Are there capital letters after the full stops? Have you remembered the comma after your
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14a. Write your unicorn information page (shake hands with the model)
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The Fire Unicorn (example of shaking hands with the text)
Did you know there is a rare type unicorn with fire in its belly and flames
in its horn? You probably have not heard of it because there has only ever
been one sighting of this beast in its natural habitat. But, after reading
this page, you will know all about this rare, combustible creature, The Fire
Unicorn.
Smaller than most unicorns, the Fire Unicorn has a burnt-orange coat, an
ashy mane of smoke and a horn that looks like a thousand flames dancing
in the wind. When it gets too close to water, a hissing sound begins and
the unicorn’s hoofs sizzle and smoke.
Typically, the Fire Unicorn’s power lies mainly in its horn. It is thought
that, due to the toxic atmosphere, the horn is full of deadly poison. For
centuries, this has been highly sought after by prince and poor man alike,
for the purposes of enemy eradication. In addition to the horn’s power,
the Fire Unicorn’s hair can grant humans immortality. For this reason, it is
often used to make wands for powerful witches and wizards.
The most fascinating thing about the fire unicorn is its ability to set
things alight. It need only point its horn at something – or someone – for
that thing to spontaneously combust. Many believe that more than one
person has spotted a Fire Unicorn in the wild, but only one survived.
That one lucky survivor is the author of this page. How did I survive?
Well, that’s a story for another time.
I hope you have enjoyed finding out about this wonderful, deadly, animal.
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Well done!
Thank you for working with me. Have you enjoyed writing
your unicorn page? You could make your very own ‘Unicorns
Uncovered’ book. Or you could add it to your troll writing
and begin your own mythical creature anthology!
Now that you have a new page, why not publish it? Below are
some simple instructions for making a mini book from a
piece of A4 paper.
If you have access to the Internet, type this into Google:
https://cutt.ly/QtvAkwq
Here, you can watch a mini-book being made and follow the
instructions.
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Answers
3. Words! Words! Words!
Definition Picture
An organisation where people
can save, borrow, and invest
money.
Sloping, raised land. Sometimes
along the side of a river.
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4. Read and understand
1. The River Unicorn has only been spotted three times in the wild.
2. Most River Unicorns live along the banks of rivers.
3. River Unicorns do not like swimming: TRUE
4. The River Unicorn’s horn is see-through: TRUE
5. Which is the most powerful part of the unicorn’s body? Its horn.
6. Why would a unicorn hunter think that the River Unicorn was special?
Give three reasons from a possible 5:
5. Spellings
Put the correct word in these sentences:
1. The River Unicorn can disappear in an instant.
2. Occasionally, the unicorn has been spotted sleeping in its den.
3. In addition to its powerful horn, the unicorn also has magic blood.
4. The River Unicorn is magical and unique. Therefore, it is often hunted.
5. It is thought that River Unicorns are reluctant swimmers.
6. Transparent means ‘see through’.
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Jo Pearce, is a former headteacher who now works with Talk for Writing to help
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