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Eberhard-Karls-Universität Tübingen

S: Written Communication
Dr. McColl
Summer term 2022
Naim Al Baqain (5731608) 06.07.2022

Essay Draft
“If one gets rid of these habits one can think more clearly, and to think clearly is a necessary
first step toward political regeneration […]” Orwell sees language as a problem of control; it
not only distorts people's thought processes but also directs them. In his work "Politics and
the English Language" he lists some of these language habits. He warns against using
outdated metaphors, similes, jargon and political terms, confusing expressions, meaningless
words and ready-made phrases. These hinder the reader's ability to think clearly and
critically. Of course, it could be argued that his statement seems biased, and one could think
that Orwell also wants to eliminate good language habits. Nevertheless, for Orwell, clarity
falls under the category of "good" language and can therefore itself be counted as a habit. It
was not his intention to abolish good habits, but rather to motivate people to use them to
better express themselves and to keep control over language.

Counter argument: Orwell does not clearly express wether the habits are only bad or also
good language habits. It is subjective what one sees as a good or bad writing habit.

If we accept the argument presented above, we could further assume that Orwell has a
clear idea of what can be seen as a good or bad language habit. Clear writing is one of the
skills that should be trained and thus becomes habitual in writing. To quote David
McCullough, an American author: "Writing is thinking. To write well is to think clearly. That's
why it's so hard." The way we write therefore depends on the clarity of our thoughts. Many
writers are thoughtful and have many ideas they want to implement. However, they do not
take the time to sort out their thoughts and discard unnecessary ideas. The result is
complicated and incomprehensible thought processes that leave the reader with more
questions than answers. Through practice, everyone can control their thoughts. Over time, a
routine can develop that enables one to sort them out and eliminate the excessive. The
counterpart to clarity is vague language. An author who uses vague formulations only lets
the reader guess what his intentions are and leaves them to reveal the hidden opinion
themselves. A good habit of language should not be discarded in any case. On the contrary,
good language is directly linked to clarity and should be trained in one's own thoughts.

A clear and uncomplicated style of writing is noticeable when reading. So do the bad
language habits. These habits outweigh the clear structure in any text and are therefore
more perceptible. Orwell says that "Modern English, especially written English, is full of bad
habits spread by imitation [...]" (Politics 128) One example he gives is "prefabricated
phrases", where a given and already formulated sequence of words or sentences are used
again. "Modern writing at its worst does not consist in picking out words for the sake of
their meaning and inventing images in order to make the meaning clearer. It consists in
gumming together long strips of words which have already been set in order by someone
else and making the results presentable by sheer humbug."(Politics) This does not
encourage creativity and prevents the writer from expressing himself clearly. In some cases,
this can also lead to writing things that were not intended. This has a strong influence on the
perception of the text and for the reader, it is more confusing than understandable. This
habit educates the exact opposite of "good" language. It does not follow the model that
thoughts control language. Here, the pre-written sentences or outdated metaphors
influence the flow of reading.

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