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Dr. Motilal Jotwani is a well known writer in Sindhi, Hindi, and English.
Born in January 1936 at Sukkur, Sindh, he did post-graduate Diploma in Journalism from Punjab
University in 1959, M.A. (English Literature) in 1962 and PhD in 1973 from Delhi University.
Dr. Jotwani is a distinguished poet, fiction writer and research scholar.
Dr. Jotwani received the Hindi Akademi Delhi’s Kriti Award (1988) for his book Niyamit and the
Uttar Pradesh Hindi Santhan Sauhard Award (1990).
He received the Ishwaribai Buxani Life-time Achievement Award, Dubai (2002) and Akhil Bharat
Sindhi Boli Sabha Literary Award Jaipur (2003).
The President of India awarded a Padma Shri to Dr. Jotwani in the fields of Literature and Education in
2003.
Dr. Motilal Jotwani, 72, passed away in Poona, India in 2008 due to heart failure.
Works:
Rishtaa Nataa (novel, 1982)
Koth (novel, 1985;
Aataman Je Naale Mein (autobiography, 1994)
Short stories: Very lonely, She [Akeli Akeli Hoo-a
Very lonely, She (Akeli Akeli Hoo-A)
The short story Very Lonely, She was originally published in Sindhi.
It was translated into English by – Dr. Nandlal Jotwani
This short story is based on an autobiographical incident. Pooran Mausi and Manohar are taken
from life.
Writer wanted to focus on the sense of utter loneliness experienced in old age, and the fine line of
distinction between loneliness and aloneness.
very little happens in the story.
A nephew Manohar on way back to Delhi pays a visit to her Pooran Mausi who is living alone in a
different town.
She recalls a painful remark made by a close young relative.
The nephew discovers that they also have been guilty of neglecting her. There are guilt feelings and
regrets.
The story ends with the nephew reflecting on the web of human relationships and the difference
between loneliness and being alone.
Clearly, most of the action in the story is psycho logical.
The story is told by a third person narrator, Manohar.
The narrative is simple enough.
Manohar breaks journey at Agra to see his Mausi. Which means, he is a decent person who is not
entirely neglectful of relationships. But like everyone else he has got busy with his life in Delhi and
he and his family haven't kept much contact with her.
An event in the family, like death, is generally an occasion for relatives to come together but when
his younger sister, Vimla's husband in Delhi died, they didn't let her know of the tragedy.
Obviously they didn't consider her to be important enough to be informed. Manohar is reminded of
the serious omission on their part when Mausi enquires about Vimla's daughters.
When the truth dawns on him, Manohar feels guilty and he doesn't have the courage to face her.
Pooran Mausi is the main character. But she shares the importance with Manohar. Abandoned by her
husband as Pooran Mausi, she lived with her parents in Agra. But when her parents died, she was left
alone to fend for herself.
She had been running a domestic school for women where she had been giving lessons in tailoring
and embroidery and etiquette.
Latterly , because of old age she sold away the sewing machines and now lives on the income that
comes from rent of a portion of the parental house.
She can't afford to have modem conveniences like a telephone or a television or even a newspaper.
Pooran Mausi leads a lonely life. When Manohar remarks that she must be feeling very lonely, she
responds simply: 'Life becomes the way you mould it.' This suggests that she has come to accept
loneliness as a part of her existence and she has made peace with it.
The short story, Very Lonely, She, though autobiographical in origin.
It makes us realize the weakening of familial bonds taking place in cities and at the same time shows
us the consequences of this weakening in the life an old widow like Pooran Mausi who is trying to
survive with courage and self-respect.