Punctuation
Punctuation
Punctuation
What Is Punctuation?
Punctuation is defined as a set of symbols used to separate and clarify the meaning of
sentences and written elements. In other words, punctuation tells readers of your writing where
to pause, what words are quotations and which are clarifications, where words have been
omitted, and more. Read the resources below to get up to speed on commas, hyphens,
semicolons, and all other punctuation marks.
Punctuation Rules
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Comma Splice
Comma Before And
Comma Before Too
Comma After Question Mark
Commas in Dates
Oxford Comma
Quotation Marks in Titles
Quotation Marks Around a Word
Quotation Marks in Dialogue
Capitalization in Quotes
Semicolon vs. Colon vs. Dash
Capitalization After Colons
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1. Comma
What is a comma?
While a period ends a sentence, a comma indicates a smaller break. Some writers think of a
comma as a soft pause—a punctuation mark that separates words, clauses, or ideas within a
sentence.
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There are a lot of technical English words in that list, but don’t worry. We explain everything in
detail below.
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As mentioned above, when you are listing three or more items, commas should separate each
element of the list. However, the final comma—the one that comes before the and—is optional.
This comma is called the serial comma or the Oxford comma.
Example: Simon needs bread, milk, and butter at the grocery store. (With serial comma)
Example: Simon needs bread, milk and butter at the grocery store. (Without serial comma)
Example: I still have to buy a gift, pack the suitcases, and arrange for someone to water the
plants while we’re at the wedding. (With serial comma)
Example: I still have to buy a gift, pack the suitcases and arrange for someone to water the
plants while we’re at the wedding. (Without serial comma)
Whether or not you use the serial comma is a style choice. Many newspapers do not use it.
Many trade books do use it. In your own writing, you can decide for yourself whether to use it—
just be consistent.
Keep in mind, though, that occasionally the serial comma is necessary for clarity.
I dedicate this award to my parents, Jane Austen and Albert Einstein.
The sentence above will almost certainly cause readers to do a double take. Without a serial
comma, it looks like “Jane Austen and Albert Einstein” is an appositive, rather than the second
and third elements in a list. To put it another way, the writer seems to be saying that her
parents are Jane Austen and Albert Einstein. A serial comma eliminates the possibility of
misreading, so even if you’re not using serial commas in your writing, make an exception for
sentences like this:
I dedicate this award to my parents, Jane Austen, and Albert Einstein.
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Commas with and
When correcting a comma splice by adding and—that is, when joining two independent clauses
with and as a coordinating conjunction—put the comma before and.
When you have a list that contains only two items, don’t use a comma before the and.
Incorrect: My dog Charlie is cute, and smart.
Correct: My dog Charlie is cute and smart.
Incorrect: Cleo’s favorite activities are singing onstage, and relaxing in the sunshine.
Correct: Cleo’s favorite activities are singing onstage and relaxing in the sunshine.
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Correct: My wife, whom I love dearly, is a brilliant physicist.
The clause “whom I love dearly” is nonrestrictive because you could remove it and it would still
be clear what person you’re talking—“my wife” is already specific.
A clause that is restrictive adds information that is necessary in order to identify whatever it is
referring to. Restrictive clauses are often introduced by that or who and should never be set off
by commas.
Incorrect: The cafe, that Chester recommended, is a fantastic restaurant.
Correct: The cafe that Chester recommended is a fantastic restaurant.
The clause “that Chester recommended” is essential information in the sentence above. If you
removed it, there would be no way to tell which restaurant you were talking about.
Nonessential appositives
My partner, Angela, is a wonderful cook.
The painter, one of the city’s most promising young artists, began showing his work in
galleries before he was sixteen.
Chocolate, my favorite treat, always makes me feel better after a bad day.
Essential appositives
Edgar Allan Poe’s poem “The Raven” is a classic.
Nick Jonas’s brother Kevin is the most underrated Jonas. The detective Sherlock Holmes
is one of literature’s greatest sleuths.
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Grabbing her umbrella, Kate raced out of the house.
Confused by her sister’s sudden change in mood, Jill stayed quiet.
When an adverbial phrase begins a sentence, it’s often followed by a comma, but it doesn’t
have to be, especially if it’s short. As a rule of thumb, if the phrase is longer than about four
words, use a comma. You can also use a comma after a shorter phrase when you want to
emphasize it or add a pause for literary effect.
After the show, Cleo will be signing autographs.
Behind the building there is enough space to park two limousines.
Without knowing why, I crossed the room and looked out the window.
In 1816 life was very different.
Suddenly, a frightened black cat sprang from the shadows.
But if there is a chance of misreading the sentence, use the comma:
Incorrect: Before eating the family said grace.
Correct: Before eating, the family said grace.
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When multiple adjectives modify a noun to an equal degree, they are said to be coordinate and
should be separated by commas. One way to tell whether the adjectives are coordinate is to try
switching the order of them. If the sentence still sounds natural, the adjectives are coordinate.
That man is a pompous, self-righteous, annoying idiot.
That man is a self-righteous, annoying, pompous idiot.
The sweet, scintillating aroma of cinnamon buns filled the kitchen.
The scintillating, sweet aroma of cinnamon buns filled the kitchen.
If multiple adjectives are used but are not coordinate—that is, if one of them is more closely
related to the noun being modified than the other(s), and thus they sound unnatural if the
order is changed—don’t separate them with a comma.
Incorrect: The adorable, little boy was eating ice cream.
Incorrect: The little, adorable boy was eating ice cream.
Correct: The adorable little boy was eating ice cream.
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An attributive tag is a phrase, like “they said” or “she claimed,” that identifies the speaker or
writer of a quote or piece of dialogue. Attributive tags can come before, after, or even in the
middle of a quote. Use commas to separate attributive tags from quotations.
The professor remarked, “How attentive you have been today!”
“Once you know the solution,” Tiffany said, “the whole problem seems very simple.”
“You have ice cream on your nose,” my friend giggled.
“When you leave the house,” my mother yelled, “don’t slam the door!”
If a quotation before an attributive tag ends in a question mark or exclamation point, however,
there’s no need for a comma.
Incorrect: “You have a spider on your nose!”, my friend yelled.
Correct: “You have a spider on your nose!” my friend yelled.
Incorrect: “Where did that spider come from?”, I asked.
Correct: “Where did that spider come from?” I asked.
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Correct: After opening the new cookie tin, Chester had a hard time replacing the lid.
Correct: After opening the new cookie tin (and eating several of the cookies), Chester had
a hard time replacing the lid.
Incorrect: After opening the new cookie tin, (and eating several of the cookies), Chester
had a hard time replacing the lid.
Incorrect: After opening the new cookie tin (and eating several of the cookies,) Chester had
a hard time replacing the lid.
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You generally don’t need a comma before the connective phrase as well as. However, if you
want the element of a sentence introduced by as well as to be read as an interrupter or a
parenthetical, setting it off with a comma or pair of commas can communicate that.
Please proofread for grammatical mistakes as well as spelling.
Spelling mistakes, as well as grammatical errors, are distracting to readers.
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With few exceptions, a comma should not separate a subject from its verb.
Incorrect: My friend Cleo, is a wonderful singer.
Writers are often tempted to insert a comma between a subject and verb this way because
speakers sometimes pause at that point in a sentence. But in writing, the comma only makes
the sentence seem stilted.
Correct: My friend Cleo is a wonderful singer.
Be especially careful with long or complex subjects:
Incorrect: The things that cause me joy, may also cause me pain.
Correct: The things that cause me joy may also cause me pain.
Incorrect: Navigating through snow, sleet, wind, and darkness, is a miserable way to travel.
Correct: Navigating through snow, sleet, wind, and darkness is a miserable way to travel.
In compound predicates
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A compound predicate is what you have when the subject of a sentence is shared by more than
one verb without being repeated. In a compound predicate that contains two verbs joined by a
coordinating conjunction, a comma should rarely be used between the verbs
Incorrect: Cleo will sing, and play the banjo.
Correct: Cleo will sing and play the banjo.
It’s easiest to make this mistake when the predicate is made up of long verb phrases.
Incorrect: I meant to buy tickets for Cleo’s show, but ran out of time.
Correct: I meant to buy tickets for Cleo’s show but ran out of time.
However, it’s occasionally helpful to use a comma in a compound predicate to prevent
misreading:
Correct: Cleo spotted the man who entered the diner, and waved.
In the sentence above, you need the comma to make clear that it was Cleo who waved, not the
man.
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Between articles and nouns
Don’t use a comma between an article and a noun.
Incorrect: The company managers accidentally scheduled the, meeting for Saturday.
Incorrect: A, bouquet of flowers may be created using more than one type of flower.
Incorrect: I’ll have an, apple.
Correct: The company managers accidentally scheduled the meeting for Saturday.
Correct: A bouquet of flowers may be created using more than one type of flower.
Correct: I’ll have an apple.
When speaking, we often pause while we think of the next word we want to say. In writing,
though, there’s usually no reason to add this pause. If you’re writing dialogue and you
specifically want to convey a pause while someone is thinking, use an ellipsis: I’ll have an . . .
apple.
2. Period/Full Stop
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Period in Punctuation: Rules & Examples
A period, or “full stop,” is a punctuation mark in English that expresses the end of a sentence
and sometimes abbreviations. It is one of the most used punctuation marks and the most
common way to conclude a sentence.
Period usage may seem easy enough, but there are a few rules that can get confusing, such as
where to put periods in quotation marks or how to use them in abbreviations. In this guide, we
explain everything you need to know to use periods like an expert!
What is a period?
A period, also known as a “full stop” in British English, is a punctuation mark that looks like a
tiny circle or dot. It appears at the bottom of a written line and directly follows the preceding
character without a space.
Example: etc.
Periods convey a definitive pause. In spoken English, a speaker will briefly stop talking in
between sentences—the period represents that momentary break in written English. The pause
indicated by a period is a significant one, more pronounced than the pause from other
punctuation marks like a comma or semicolon.
The main use of a period is to express the end of certain sentences, but it can also be used to
show shortened words or removed information. It also has unique uses in mathematics and
computing, as the “dot” in “dot com.”
Periods are one of the most common punctuation marks in English, with one study finding they
make up around half of all punctuation marks used.
End a sentence
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The primary function of a period is to signal the end of a sentence. Periods are one of
three punctuation marks for the end of a sentence , along with question marks and exclamation
points.
You can’t put a period at the end of every sentence, however. Specifically, you only use a period
to end declarative sentences (statements) or imperative sentences (commands).
Indicate an omission
The secondary purpose of a period is to indicate that some information has been removed, such
as letters in a word. In particular, periods are often used in abbreviations, especially Latin
abbreviations like etc., i.e., e.g., c., and et al.
Periods are also sometimes used for initials when only the first letter of a word or name is
present, such as in H. G. Wells. Three periods together make a new punctuation mark called
an ellipsis, which can indicate that some words or entire sentences have been omitted (we
explain more about ellipses below).
Sentences
Periods come at the end of declarative and imperative sentences. These sentences are typically
simple statements, communicating information without urgency. If spoken out loud, the speaker
would use a neutral or calm voice, without excessive emotion.
If, however, you want to add emotion or extra emphasis to a statement or command, you would
use an exclamation mark instead of a period. Exclamation marks represent excitement, urgency,
or yelling in written English. Consider the example:
Binsa wore her sister’s gown to the party.
Because a period is used, this sentence is a basic declaration. There’s nothing right or wrong
about the statement; it’s just communicating a simple, if not boring, fact.
Binsa wore her sister’s gown to the party!
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Because of the exclamation mark, this sentence is now an exclamation—there’s a new layer of
meaning. It suggests that the speaker is outraged, excited, or otherwise alarmed about what’s
going on. Maybe Binsa didn’t ask her sister before borrowing the dress!
Indirect questions
Indirect questions are declarative sentences that talk about a question indirectly, such as
describing a person asking a question. Because these are technically declarative sentences and
not interrogative sentences (questions), they use a period instead of a question mark.
Kendal asked what time it was.
However, if the question is stated directly, use a question mark instead of a period.
Kendal asked, “What time is it?”
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There’s another rule worth mentioning as well. If a sentence ends with an abbreviation that
uses a period, do not add a second period. The period in the abbreviation is sufficient.
Incorrect: They spent the day cleaning their living room, kitchen, bedroom, etc..
Correct: They spent the day cleaning their living room, kitchen, bedroom, etc.
Even so, it’s perfectly acceptable to add a comma, semicolon, or colon after a period, as long as
the period is used for an abbreviation.
Leafy green vegetables such as lettuce, spinach, kale, etc., are an excellent source of
nutrition.
Another common use of periods for abbreviations is with the time periods a.m. (“ante
meridiem”) and p.m. (“post meridiem”). Although periods in a.m. and p.m. are technically
correct, it is becoming increasingly popular to simply write am or pm without periods.
Periods were once common for acronyms as well, however, that usage is not as popular today.
Other uses
Periods are used outside of grammar as well. In mathematics, many countries use periods
instead of commas to separate the decimal part of a number (3.14).
Periods are also used in computing languages to separate elements, such as in URLs
(grammarly.com) or file names (setup.exe).
Sentences
If a sentence is either declarative or imperative, place the period directly after the final word.
It’s customary to leave a single space after a period before beginning a new sentence.
English is not an easy language.
Don’t arrive late again.
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However, there are exceptions to this rule, chiefly if the sentence ends in either of the
following:
a quote that ends in a question mark or exclamation mark
a proper noun that ends in a question mark or exclamation mark
In these cases, no period is necessary.
Incorrect: Robert De Niro’s character Travis Bickle famously asks, “Are you talkin’ to me?”.
Correct: Robert De Niro’s character Travis Bickle famously asks, “Are you talkin’ to me?”
Incorrect: It’s hard to pick just one, but my favorite Taylor Swift song is “… Ready for It?”.
Correct: It’s hard to pick just one, but my favorite Taylor Swift song is “… Ready for It?”
Incorrect: Adelina wanted to become a doctor after watching the anime Cells at Work!.
Correct: Adelina wanted to become a doctor after watching the anime Cells at Work!
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Ellipses
An ellipsis (plural: ellipses) looks like three periods in a row with spaces in between them. There
are two main uses for ellipses. One is to show that part of a quote has been omitted:
Hamlet asked whether it was “nobler . . . to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous
fortune or to take arms against a sea of troubles.”
In the sentence above, the words “in the mind” have been omitted from the quote.
Occasionally, you might need to leave out part of a quote because it’s irrelevant or makes the
quote hard to understand in the context of the sentence. The ellipsis shows that you have left
something out.
You can also use an ellipsis for literary effect, to represent a dramatic pause or a thought that
trails off. Sometimes, this type of ellipsis is also referred to as “suspension points.”
The bus was supposed to come at 3:00, so we waited and waited . . . and waited.
Wait a minute . . . If you’re not watching Charlie, who is?
I guess we could meet you there later. If there’s time . . .
This usage is fine in fiction, but you should avoid it in formal writing.
Period FAQs
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In American English, periods are placed inside quotation marks, before the closing quotation
mark.
3. Colon
What is a colon?
A colon is a punctuation mark that’s used to connect sentences, put emphasis on a word or
phrase, or introduce a quote or explanation.
The rules for using a colon can change depending on how you use it, and we’ll explain how in a
moment, but the two things it connects (be that a list or sentences) must be closely related.
That is, whatever follows a colon should be connected to what came before it.
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The colon in this sentence signals that you are about to learn the names of the three types of
muscles the sentence already mentioned. We might silently read the sentence this way.
There are three types of muscle in the body (and they are): cardiac, smooth, and skeletal.
Colons are often used with lists, as in the example above. They can also be used to signal further
clarification.
We have two options here: stay and fight, or run like the wind.
One might silently read the above sentence in this way:
We have two options here (and they are as follows): stay and fight, or run like the wind.
1. Lists
Colons are most often used to introduce lists.
Taylor Swift has written a few songs about John Mayer: “Dear John,” “The Story
of Us,” and “Would’ve, Could’ve, Should’ve.”
3. Quotes
Colons can introduce a quotation.
He ended with the immortal words of Neil Young: “Rock and Roll can never die.”
4. Examples
A writer may use colons to illustrate their point by providing certain examples.
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There is one big reason we don’t talk about Bruno: His premonitions frightened
the family.
5. Numbers
Colons are used to separate units of time and ratios.
11:11 a.m.
2:1
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Colon vs. semicolon
Think of the semicolon as the colon’s cousin; they serve a similar purpose but accomplish it in
different ways.
For example, a semicolon can also be used to connect two independent clauses, but it acts as
a conjunction rather than “as follows” or “including.”
I think I’ll go to the mall today; I need new pants and a pair of shoes.
The semicolon here takes the place of a conjunction because the second part expands on the
first part.
Semicolons can also be used to separate items in a lengthy list or if the list contains additional
punctuation that might trip up the reader.
My European football tour will consist of trips to Manchester, England; Glasgow,
Scotland; Lille, France; and Turin, Italy.
Colon examples
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Here are five sentences that use colons in different ways.
There are several grocery stores where you can buy apples: Trader Joe’s, Aldi, and
Kroger, among others.
They’re my ideal partner: outgoing and smart.
It’s like my grandmother said: “The journey is the destination.”
And now it’s time to tell you why I’ve gathered you all here: time-shares.
Computer: A History of the Information Machine
Colon FAQs
What is a colon?
A colon is a punctuation mark that introduces an element or series of elements that illustrates
or amplifies the information that preceded the colon.
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4. Ellipsis
What is an ellipsis?
The ellipsis (pronounced il-LIP-sis) is a type of punctuation that represents a pause or that
something has been intentionally left out. Specifically, it shows that words have been cut from a
direct quote, so the reader knows the original passage has been modified.
In form, the ellipsis is three dots or periods. Different style guides have different regulations for
ellipses, but we prefer the version with spaces between the periods (. . .) from The Chicago
Manual of Style.
In formal writing and journalism, the ellipsis is placed between brackets when used within a
quote [. . .] to show that the editors added the ellipsis, not the original speaker.
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While the ellipsis and the dash both represent breaks in text, the dash—or more precisely,
the em dash—represents an abrupt interruption. The dash can also be used to represent a
pause, but a more emphatic one than the “soft” pause of an ellipsis.
The colon also represents a break in text, although for much more deliberate reasons. Colons
are used to introduce a list, quote, or explanation of what precedes it. However, unlike ellipses
and dashes, they do not represent silence.
Furthermore, neither the dash nor the colon can represent omitted words; only the ellipsis can
do that.
1. Omitted words
In writing, ellipses are used to show the reader that words have been removed, typically
from direct quotes. More often than not, this is done to cut out parts of the quote that
aren’t relevant to the topic or to make the quote more succinct.
For example, if you want to include what a speaker said at the beginning and the end of
a quote, but there’s a part in the middle that’s unnecessary, you can remove that middle
part and replace it with an ellipsis.
[ORIGINAL QUOTE]
It must be obvious, from the very start, that there is a contradiction in wanting to be
perfectly secure in a universe whose very nature is momentariness and fluidity.
[QUOTE WITH AN ELLIPSIS]
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It must be obvious [. . .] that there is a contradiction in wanting to be perfectly secure in
a universe whose very nature is momentariness and fluidity.
—Alan Watts
When using an ellipsis to omit part of a quote, be sure to pick the right spot. It’s best to
remove a part that leaves the remaining sentence grammatically correct, as if nothing
had been cut at all. In the ellipsis example above, the part removed came between two
commas, so the sentence still works fine without it.
Though it’s less common, an ellipsis can also come at the beginning of a quote to show
that the earlier part of a speech or conversation has been cut off. This is an effective way
to open a scene in the middle of a dialogue, where the reader must guess at what the
characters were talking about beforehand.
“. . . and you wouldn’t believe the smell! We spent the rest of the afternoon cleaning it
up.”
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When an ellipsis comes at the end of a complete sentence, it’s usually a dramatic device
to insinuate that there’s more to come. One of the most common examples is the
phrase to be continued . . ., where the ellipsis hints that there’s more to the story.
This can be a great storytelling tool in the right spot. It essentially challenges the reader
to imagine what will happen next, heightening their anticipation and engaging them
more deeply. It works best for cliffhangers and other endings, but be sure to use it
sparingly so you don’t waste its effect.
And then only two remained . . .
Ellipsis FAQs
What is an ellipsis?
An ellipsis is a punctuation mark of three dots (. . .) that shows an omission of words, represents
a pause, or suggests there’s something left unsaid.
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5. Semicolon
What is a semicolon?
What is correct semicolon use? The most common semicolon use is joining two independent
clauses without using a coordinating conjunction like and. Semicolons can also replace commas
when listing items that already use commas, such as listing cities and states.
Semicolons (;) are as basic as a period stacked on top of a comma. Does that mean you can use
it like either one? Don’t get your hopes up. But don’t let this punctuation mark get you down
either.
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1. Use semicolons to connect related independent clauses
You can use a semicolon to join two closely related independent clauses. Let’s put that
another way. The group of words that comes before the semicolon should form a
complete sentence, the group of words that comes after the semicolon should form a
complete sentence, and the two sentences should share a close, logical connection:
I ordered a cheeseburger for lunch; life’s too short for counting calories.
Martha has gone to the library; her sister has gone to play soccer.
The examples above are each made up of two complete, grammatically correct
sentences glued together.
That’s exactly why you can’t substitute a comma for a semicolon. Using a comma instead
of a semicolon in the sentences above would result in a comma splice. And there’s
nothing as painful as a comma splice.
2. Skip the coordinating conjunction when you use a semicolon between two
independent clauses
A semicolon isn’t the only thing that can link two independent clauses. Coordinating
conjunctions (that’s your ands, buts, and ors) can do that too. But you shouldn’t use a
semicolon and a conjunction. That means that when you use a semicolon, you use
it instead of the ands, buts, and ors; you don’t need both.
Here’s a hint: You know how you can use a comma and an and to link two related ideas?
Think of the period that forms the top part of the semicolon as a replacement for and.
I saw a magnificent albatross, and it was eating a mouse.
I saw a magnificent albatross; it was eating a mouse.
You need a comma plus something to avoid a comma splice. That something can either
be the right conjunction or the period that turns a comma into a semicolon.
A semicolon can replace a period or a comma and a coordinating conjunction to
demonstrate contrast between independent clauses instead of agreement. This is part of
the same rule, but the conjunction in question is but instead of and. In other words:
This is part of the same rule; the conjunction in question is but instead of and.
To summarize, a semicolon links up two related ideas by narrowing the gap between the
ideas of two separate sentences or by replacing a coordinating conjunction between the
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ideas. That goes for showing contrast too: just because two ideas are opposed or
contradictory, that doesn’t mean they aren’t related closely enough to earn themselves
a semicolon.
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This conjunctive adverb rule is similar to the coordinating conjunction rule. In both
cases, check whether the two ideas are independent clauses that could stand on their
own as sentences. If so, then you’re grammatically good to go as far as the semicolon is
concerned.
The semicolon is a good punctuation mark to have in your back pocket. Or on top of
your parenthetical smile. So whether you’re using it to whip up a good complex sentence
or to give someone a wink, now you know how to do it right.
6. Apostrophe
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will)
-’s is He’s (he is), it’s (it is)
I’m I am —
let’s let us —
Contractions are usually considered to be relatively casual. If you’re writing something very
formal, you may want to avoid using them except in cases like o’clock, where the full phrase (of
the clock) truly is rare.
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Charles Dickens’s novels
Kansas’s main airport
No matter which style you use, add only the apostrophe to plural proper nouns that end in s:
Examples: The Harrises’ house
The Smiths’ vacation
Use whichever style matches the style guide you use for your writing. If you don’t have a style
guide, it’s OK to just pick one of the methods, as long as you don’t switch back and forth within
the same document.
Example: Bob and Jim’s bait shop (Bob and Jim co-own a bait shop.)
Example: Ryan, Jessica, and Elinor’s parents (All three have the same parents.)
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When you’re talking about separate things that belong to different people but you’re discussing
the things together, make all the names possessive:
Example: Bob’s and Jim’s bait shops (Bob owns one bait shop, and Jim owns a different
one.)
Example: Ryan’s, Jessica’s, and Elinor’s parents (Each has a different set of parents)
Using possessive personal pronouns in joint constructions often sounds awkward (You have
their and my gratitude). Usually, the best solution is to rephrase the sentence to avoid the joint
construction (You have our gratitude or You have their gratitude and mine).
The one notable exception to this rule is the plural form of lowercase letters, which are formed
with an apostrophe to prevent misreading:
In the second example, take note of the apostrophe at the beginning of ’twas. Apostrophes that
fall at the beginning of a contraction are often mistyped as left-hand single quotation marks,
when the apostrophe is actually identical to the right-hand single quotation mark. Word
processors tend to do this by default, as they assume you are beginning a quote. Keep this in
mind, especially when you are writing about specific decades, such as the ’60s or the ’90s.
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When to check a style guide
Sooner or later, you’ll come across a phrase that sounds fine out loud but looks weird on paper
because of apostrophes. Do’s and don’ts? Dos and don’ts? Do’s and don’t’s? For cases like these,
it’s best to check a comprehensive style guide, such as The Chicago Manual of Style or
the The Associated Press Stylebook (it’s do’s and don’ts, according to AP). A good dictionary may
also be able to offer you some guidance. If you can’t find a precedent, it’s probably best to use a
different word or phrase; unduly creative apostrophe use will inevitably distract your readers.
7. Hyphen
What is a hyphen?
A hyphen (-) is a punctuation mark that’s used to join words or parts of words. It’s not
interchangeable with the various dashes.
Hyphens are often used in compound modifiers when the modifier comes before the
word it’s modifying.
If you’re not sure whether a compound word has a hyphen, check your preferred
dictionary.
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It would be easy to read the above sentence as saying that you shouldn’t take down any load
that is holding up a wall. A hyphen should be inserted between load and bearing to make it
clear that we’re talking about walls that are bearing a load.
Examples: It’s recommended you don’t take down any load-bearing walls when renovating.
This rock-hard cake is absolutely impossible to eat.
We’re looking for a dog-friendly hotel.
She makes one-of-a-kind engagement rings in her studio.
The new house has state-of-the-art features.
Generally, you need the hyphen only if the two or more words are functioning together as an
adjective before the noun they’re describing. If the noun comes first, we usually leave the
hyphen out.
Examples: This wall is load bearing.
It’s impossible to eat this cake because it is rock hard.
Is this hotel dog friendly?
You never use a hyphen when your modifier is made up of an adverb ending in -ly and an
adjective.
Incorrect: Do you expect me to believe this clearly-impossible story?
Correct: Do you expect me to believe this clearly impossible story?
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Fast-acting medication can be useful when one has a headache.
The belt-tightening measures at the company included some layoffs.
I prefer a forward-facing seat on the train.
Don’t use a hyphen when the modifier comes after the noun it’s describing.
Example: This medication is fast acting.
Don’t use a hyphen when you are combining an adverb ending in -ly and a participle.
Incorrect: The room was like a heavily-decorated chocolate box.
Correct: The room was like a heavily decorated chocolate box.
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Hyphens and compound words
Hyphenated compound words are muti-word terms with a hyphen or hyphens between their
component words. Over time, many hyphenated compounds become closed compounds—
teen-ager became teenager, for instance. Check a dictionary if you’re not sure how to treat a
compound. Here are a few examples of common hyphenated compound words:
Examples: Mother-in-law
Half-pipe
Ten-year-old
Six-pack
Foot-pound
[expand]President-elect[/example]
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Real estate
Dinner table
Home base
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Example: The channel got a 90 percent bump in subscribers after the video went viral.
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8. Dash
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Example: After a split second of hesitation, the second baseman leaped for the ball—or,
rather, limped for it.
Example: The rain in the forecast, because it came after a long, unbroken stretch of sunny
days, at a time of year that is usually quite wet, made the gardeners happy
even though they had to reschedule the event.
Example: The rain in the forecast—because it came after a long, unbroken stretch of
sunny days, at a time of year that is usually quite wet—made the gardeners
happy even though they had to reschedule the event.
Colons enable a writer to introduce a clause that amplifies whatever came before the colon.
They are more formal than em dashes. However, em dashes are more emphatic than colons.
When you want to generate strong emotion in your writing or create a more casual tone, use
em dashes. Compare these sentences:
Example: He is afraid of two things: spiders and senior prom.
Example: He is afraid of two things—spiders and senior prom.
Writers and transcriptionists often replace unknown or intentionally omitted letters with em
dashes. In these cases, em dashes appear two or three in a row.
Example: A former employee of the accused company, ———, offered a statement off the
record.
Example: Carved into the dresser drawer was a faded inscription: “Made for Kristina, by
your de——ted sailor.”
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En dash indicating a connection
The en dash may also be used to indicate a connection between two words. You can use an en
dash in a complex compound adjective when one or both of its elements are already
hyphenated compounds, although it’s also acceptable to use hyphens in these kinds of
constructions—just be consistent.
Example: The pro-choice–anti-abortion argument is always a heated one.
Example: The pro-choice-anti-abortion argument is always a heated one.
When one element of a complex compound adjective is a proper noun made up of two or more
words, however, the proper noun is left open and connected to the rest of the phrase with an
en dash:
Example: The Nobel Prize–winning author will be reading from her book at the library
tonight.
En Dash
An en dash is a midsize dash (longer than a hyphen but shorter than an em dash) that is mostly
used to show ranges in numbers and dates. It can also be used for clarity in forming complex
compound adjectives. The en dash derives its name from the fact that it is meant to be the
same width as the letter N.
To type an en dash on your Mac, type Option + Minus (-). To type an en dash on Windows, hold
down Alt and type 0150 on the numeric keyboard; the en dash will appear upon releasing the
Alt key.
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Keep in mind that if a number or date range is introduced with from, the word to should be
used instead of an en dash to keep the construction parallel. Similarly, when a range is
introduced with between, the word and should be used.
Incorrect: Nelson Mandela was president of South Africa from 1994–1999.
Correct: Nelson Mandela was president of South Africa from 1994 to 1999.
Incorrect: Homer eats between 60–75 donuts per month.
Correct: Homer eats between 60 and 75 donuts per month.
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Google Docs is typographically more basic, but if you use Google Docs a lot, you should take the
time to set up a shortcut like those above by going to Tools>Preferences.
Writers love em dashes. It’s not difficult to understand why—em dashes are versatile tools.
Once you find out about these handy dashes, you may fall in love with them too.
What is an em dash?
Em dashes differ from other hyphens and dashes not only in usage, which we will discuss
shortly, but also in appearance. In fact, the em dash is named after its length—it’s about the
same width as the capital letter m. Its alphabetical cousin, the en dash, is about the same width
as the letter n. Figuratively speaking, the hyphen pulled the short end of the stick.
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Example: While I was shopping—wandering aimlessly up and down the aisles, actually—I
ran into our old neighbor.
Example: An etymological dictionary is one of the few books—no, it’s the only book—you’ll
ever need.
Example: There has recently been an increase—though opposed fiercely by many people—
in alternative education practices.
Example: He was going to call off the project—or was he?—when the client increased the
payment.
Example: Traveling—that is, traveling by public transit—can be a relaxing activity if you
bring music and reading material along with you.
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Example: Crocodiles, alligators—they both look the same to me and they look equally
dangerous!
Example: Chocolate, strawberry, vanilla—all ice cream tastes good, especially on a hot
summer’s day.
Example: Do this, do that, go here, go there—there’s so much to do that I don’t actually
get much accomplished during the day.
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9. Quotation Marks
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When to use quotation marks
It helps to break down rules for quotation marks by their function. So below, we list out the six
main uses for quotation marks.
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instead. You can see a complete list of when to use quotation marks for titles and when
to use italics in our guide “When to Use Quotation Marks in Titles.”
Written by Sylvia Plath, “Tulips” is a sad poem with a happy title.
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When to use single quotation marks
One of the most common points of confusion with quotes is when to use single versus double
quotation marks. In American English, single quotation marks are used only for quotes that
appear inside other quotes. For example, if you’re quoting a passage that already has a quote in
it, use double quotation marks for the main quote and single quotation marks for the quote
within a quote.
“My last boss used to always say, ‘You sell more before lunch than the others sell in a week,’”
Amira mentioned in her job interview.
However, this applies only to American English, which is also used by the majority of Canada,
Australia, and New Zealand. In British English, the rules are reversed: Single quotes are used
primarily for quotes, dialogue, titles, etc., and double quotes are used only within other quotes.
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If the question mark is not part of the quote, and instead the quote is part of a question,
place it outside of the quotation marks.
Did they just say “free pizza”?
This rule also applies to exclamation points.
They just said “free pizza”!
3. Include an opening quotation mark at the beginning of each new quoted paragraph
Some quoted passages are longer than others. If you’re quoting two or more
paragraphs, place opening quotation marks at the beginning of each new paragraph.
However, place closing quotation marks only at the end of the entire passage, not at the
end of each paragraph.
Here’s what the email said:
“It’s been a long time. I hope you’re well.
“I’m writing because I’m coming to Atlanta for work, and I was wondering if you’d
like to meet up.”
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Quotation marks FAQs
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10. Question Mark
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Phrasing a question as an imperative or declarative statement is an emphatic way to express
surprise, doubt, or disbelief.
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Example: The chicken wrote a bestselling memoir called My Road (published abroad
as Who Needs a Crosswalk?).
When the question applies to the whole sentence, put it outside the parentheses:
Example: Will the chicken cross the road again tomorrow (April 1)?
Indirect questions
There is one type of question that never takes a question mark: the indirect question. Indirect
questions are embedded within declarative statements:
Example: The chicken asked whether anyone wanted to cross the road with her.
Example: We all wondered why the chicken was so obsessed with that road.
Sometimes, with one-word questions, it’s hard to decide whether it’s a direct or indirect
question. In most cases, it’s fine to treat it as an indirect question:
Example: As the chicken contemplated crossing the road, she asked herself why.
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11. Exclamation Point
Exclamatory quotations
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Using an exclamation point is usually quite simple—you just put it at the end of the sentence.
But it can get a little tricky when you also have a quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
Here are the rules:
Put the exclamation point inside the closing quotation marks if it applies to the words enclosed
by the quotation marks.
Example: “There’s a spider on my arm!” yelped Jeremy.
If the exclamation point applies to the sentence as a whole, then place it at the very end.
Example: And then the paramedics tried to tell Jeremy it was “only a spider”!
Exclamation abuse
The hardest thing about using an exclamation point is probably knowing when not to use one.
In writing, it’s often hard to convey the emotion and intent behind a simple statement. If you
spoke the words “I can’t believe you threw me a surprise party” aloud, it would be clear from
the tone of your voice and body language whether you meant this as an expression of gratitude
or reproach. An exclamation point can help make it clear by conveying your excitement: “I can’t
believe you threw me a surprise party!”
But using too many exclamation marks makes them less effective. F. Scott Fitzgerald said that
using exclamation marks is like laughing at your own jokes. After a while, your readers will
simply ignore them, or worse, become annoyed by them. On top of that, they’re considered to
be relatively casual, so using them in business or formal academic writing is a no-no. Instead of
relying on exclamation points to convey your urgency or excitement, use more vivid vocabulary.
Instead of “Make sure you finish this by tomorrow morning!” try “It’s crucial that you finish this
before tomorrow morning’s deadline.”
Congratulations! You just learned everything you need to know about exclamation points.
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12. Slash
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To indicate or
Often, when a slash is used in a formal or informal text, it is meant to indicate the word or. The
examples below illustrate this meaning of the forward slash:
Example: When leaving the classroom, the teacher noticed that a student had left his/her
backpack.
Example: College freshmen should bring a mattress and/or cot to sleep on during
orientation.
Example: If/when Mary ever shows up, we can all head out to the party together.
Example: Burgers or pizza for dinner? Yeah, either/or is fine with me.
To form abbreviations
Slashes can also be used to form some abbreviations or shortened forms of words or phrases,
although these shouldn’t be used in formal writing.
Examples: w/o = without
w/ = with
c/o = care of (used when posting a letter or parcel)
a/c = air conditioning
Notice that in these cases, no space is necessary after the slash.
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Space before and after slash
Many people wonder whether to use a space before and after slashes. It depends. When a slash
signifies alternatives between only two words, don’t use spaces before or after.
When using slashes to signify alternatives between phrases or multi-word terms or compounds,
a space before and after the slash makes text easier to read. Another time it’s acceptable to use
a space after a slash is when breaking up lines of a poem, song, or play. In this case, a line break
should be made after the slash.
Example: Add chili flakes and/or black pepper to the recipe.
Example: World War I / First World War
Examples:
Mary had a little lamb /
Its fleece was white as snow
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13 & 14.Parentheses and Brackets
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Parentheses with an e is plural, referring to both curved lines or more: ( ).
Parentheses examples
Parentheses are used to add extra information that isn’t necessary but is still helpful.
Marilyn Monroe (born Norma Jeane Mortenson) was as iconic as her life was tragic.
This extra information often includes defining acronyms, especially the first time they’re used in
a text.
There was political pushback during the initial proposal of NAFTA (North American Free
Trade Agreement).
The European Space Agency (ESA) has its headquarters in Paris.
Less commonly, an author of a text may use parentheses to add personal commentary, as if
speaking directly to the reader.
The newly elected CEO said that things will be different this time. (Isn’t that what they
all say?)
In special situations where a word can be either singular or plural, add an s in parentheses at
the end of the word.
Any question(s) you have should be answered in the next chapter.
Parentheses in a sentence
Parenthetical information should not be necessary to the rest of the sentence. The number one
rule for using parentheses is: If you remove the text in parentheses, the sentence should still
be complete and correct.
Incorrect: Mom wants (us home before 3 p.m.).
In this example, if we remove the text in parentheses, the sentence doesn’t make any sense.
What does mom want? Because want is a transitive verb, it needs a direct object outside of
parentheses.
Correct: Mom wants us home (before 3 p.m.).
Here, if we remove the text in parentheses, the sentence still makes sense. Some details are
missing, but the main idea is the same, and the sentence is grammatically correct.
By extension, this means the text in parentheses is often a sentence fragment. It also means
that subject-verb agreement should ignore anything in parentheses.
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Incorrect: The teacher (and all the students) were late to the field trip.
Correct: The teacher (and all the students) was late to the field trip.
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Brackets look similar to parentheses but have squared corners instead of curved lines. They are
also used to set aside complementary information, but they serve different functions too.
Brackets are not as common as parentheses and are generally used only for quotations.
Specifically, brackets show that new information, usually from the author or editor, was added
to the original quote. If you ever need to put parentheses within parentheses (this usually only
happens in bibliographic citations), you use brackets for the second set. Brackets can also be
used in place of parentheses, but this occurs mainly in bibliographic citations.
Brackets in a quote
Brackets are often found inside quotations to show text added to the original quote. When
referencing someone else’s work, it’s best to use only the passages that are relevant to your
topic. Because of this, an important word or phrase may be missing from the passage you kept,
in which case you could add the missing context in brackets.
We’ve included some examples of brackets so you can see what we mean.
[Original] “My first year at the company was full of ups and downs. I met most of my
goals, but not without some concessions. All in all, I’d say it went well.”
[Abridged] “All in all, I’d say [my first year] went well.”
Notice how the text in brackets was not part of the original quote but provided context to help
the reader understand what was being discussed by defining the pronoun it. When using
brackets, it’s important to replace the original text with words or phrases that still make the
sentence grammatically correct.
Another common use of brackets is when you want to capitalize the first letter of a quotation
that is not capitalized in the original. As long as the part of the sentence you’re using is not a
sentence fragment, you can use brackets around the first letter to capitalize it.
[Original] “Try not to become a man of success, but rather try to become a man of
value.” —Albert Einstein
[Abridged] “[T]ry to become a man of value.”
If you want to show the reader you omitted part of a quotation, especially in the middle of a
sentence or passage, add an ellipsis between brackets.
[Original] “If most of us remain ignorant of ourselves, it is because self-knowledge is
painful and we prefer the pleasures of illusion.” —Aldous Huxley
[Abridged] “If most of us remain ignorant of ourselves, it is because [. . .] we prefer the
pleasures of illusion.”
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Lastly, you may have seen a strange word in brackets: [sic]. This is used in quotes to show that
the original quotation included an error, which the secondary writer or editor acknowledges,
but they kept it for posterity.
To use [sic], put it directly after the error; the word sic should be in italics, but the brackets
should be in the same style as the rest of the sentence. For example, in An American
Tragedy author Theodore Dreiser famously misspells “ships” as “chips.”
“[. . .] harmoniously abandoning themselves to the rhythm of the music—like two small
chips [sic] being tossed about on a rough but friendly sea.”
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Punctuation Rules
Comma Splice
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Now look at the group of words after the comma.
Example: They are marsupials
This group of words can also stand by itself as a complete sentence. It’s another independent
clause.
When you have two independent clauses, a comma is not strong enough to glue them together.
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Are you getting the hang of it? Here are a few more examples of comma splices and possible
corrections.
Incorrect: I’m thinking of skipping English class, it’s really boring.
Adding a conjunction like and or but after the comma in the sentence above doesn’t really make
sense. But there does seem to be a close, logical connection between the first independent
clause (I’m thinking of skipping English class) and the second independent clause (it’s really
boring). This is the perfect situation for a semicolon.
Correct: I’m thinking of skipping English class; it’s really boring.
You could also break those two independent clauses apart and make them separate sentences.
Correct: I’m thinking of skipping English class. It’s really boring.
Let’s try another:
Incorrect: Daniel was late, we left without him.
In this case, the conjunction so fits the bill.
Correct: Daniel was late, so we left without him.
Or you could use a semicolon.
Correct: Daniel was late; we left without him.
Or you could make two sentences, especially if you want to sound blunt.
Correct: Daniel was late. We left without him.
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Example: Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of
day . . .
That’s it! Now you’re ready to get out there and use your commas with confidence.
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By the way, this punctuation rule applies to lists of three or more items. You should not use a
comma before and if you’re mentioning only two qualities.
Incorrect: The dog is well-trained, and good-natured.
Correct: The dog is well-trained and good-natured.
This is true for proper names, ordinary nouns, verbs, or anything else.
Incorrect: Sam, and Sarah take excellent care of their pets.
Correct: Sam and Sarah take excellent care of their pets.
Incorrect: The dog barks, and plays.
Correct: The dog barks and plays.
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But wait! There’s an exception. (Isn’t there always?) When you have two independent clauses
joined by and, most style guides say that it’s OK to leave the comma out as long as the two
independent clauses are very short and closely connected. Here’s an example:
Example: Arthur cooked and Melvin cleaned.
It’s not wrong to add a comma before and in the sentence above, but doing so might make the
sentence a little choppy.
Want to learn about other ways to use a comma? Check out our general guide to comma usage.
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Example: I like bananas too.
Example: Some people in town who were opposed to the new regulations attended the
meetings and sent letters too.
However, if a writer wants to emphasize the word too at the end of a sentence, it’s not incorrect
to include a comma before it; since commas denote a pause, reading the sentence aloud and
listening for whether you naturally pause there may be helpful. Here are a couple of examples
of sentences in which you might choose to include a comma before too:
Example: I’m going to call and tell my council member what I think about these
regulations, and I’m going to make sure they understand my frustration, too!
Example: It’s important to plan for the future, but I want to enjoy my life in the present,
too.
In cases when a question mark is used, there is no need to use a comma as well; instead, the
attributive tag should come immediately after the closing quotation marks. Consider the
example below:
Incorrect: “Do you want to come to the movies with us?”, Mary asked.
Correct: “Do you want to come to the movies with us?” Mary asked.
The comma between the quote and the attributive tag is not required, and should be removed.
The same rule applies to exclamation points. See the examples below:
Incorrect: “I am trying to sleep here!”, my roommate yelled.
Correct: “I am trying to sleep here!” my roommate yelled.
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Commas in Dates
Commas in Dates
When writing a date, a comma is used to separate the day from the month, and the date from
the year.
Correct: July 4, 1776, was an important day in American history.
Correct: I was born on Sunday, May 12, 1968.
But if you’re writing the date in day-month-year format, you don’t need a comma.
Correct: The project will commence on 1 June 2018.
Do use a comma if you’re including a day of the week with the date. Note the use of the comma
after the date when it appears in the middle of a sentence.
Correct: On Friday, October 28, at four o’clock, we’ll have a small gathering in the office
kitchen to celebrate Mark’s birthday.
Correct: Please come out on Saturday, April 15, 2017, to show your support for the
marathon runners.
When you’re giving only a month and a year, you don’t need a comma.
Correct: I haven’t seen this much snow since January 2002.
Notice how in our examples above, the dates are expressed as cardinals, not ordinals—as in,
there’s no th, rd, or nd after the numeral: April 15, 2017 instead of April 15th, 2017. In formal
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writing, always express cardinal numbers in dates, even though when we might say a date out
loud we express it as an ordinal: “January third.”
If you use a construction with of, it is OK to use an ordinal number. It is also acceptable to use
an ordinal number when referring to a specific day without referring to the month.
Correct: Xiomara gave birth on the 10th of June.
Correct: Xiomara’s baby was born on the tenth.
When you’re expressing a date in this way, with the ordinal before the month, you don’t need a
comma.
Oxford Comma
Both style guides are through with capitalizing internet and web
Associated Press editors made this move last year, and the Chicago Manual has now followed
suit. Not to make anyone feel old, but if you remember the sound of a dial-up modem, you’ve
witnessed the arc of these terms trending from exotic to mundane. Same goes for this one:
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It’s now email, not e-mail
Chicago Style lagged a few years after the AP made this shift, but it’s now unanimous—no
hyphen required. Similarly:
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Whither the Oxford comma?
No discussion of warring stylebooks would be complete without considering the Oxford
(or serial) comma. For the uninitiated, that’s the last comma in a list of three or more things, as
in this example:
“My goals for the coming year are to learn how to use commas like a champion, to run a half-
marathon, and to get good at poaching eggs.”
Whether that last comma is necessary is hotly debated.
Chicago style recommends its use in almost all instances, while AP style leans somewhat against
it. The AP’s position is squishy, though, as it recently noted in a series of tweets that began “We
don’t ban Oxford commas!” Rather, they say you should use it when it adds clarity and ditch it
when it’s nonessential.
As AP Stylebook lead editor Paula Froke told a roomful of colleagues this spring, “The stylebook
doesn’t ban the use of a serial comma. Whether you put it in at all times is a different debate.”
That’s hardly a hard-and-fast declaration, but the Oxford comma is divisive, as anyone who’s
served as a copy editor at a student newspaper can attest. Brittney, Grammarly’s resident style
maven, puts it this way:
Brittney notes that Grammarly is pro-Oxford comma, in part because many long-timers (“the
OG Grammarly users”) have voiced fondness for it. “It’s really carried over into our blog, social
media, emails,” even in settings where AP style might be more typical: “We’ve kept the Oxford
comma just to keep things consistent.”
And consistency, alongside clarity, she says, should be more important than pitting one stylistic
tribe’s abstract symbols against another.
“When it comes to AP vs. Chicago style, I think a lot of people forget the importance of the
word style. The important thing to remember is when the style isn’t working for you, you should
do what works.”
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Quotation Marks in Titles
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Some types of work italicize titles, and some use quotation marks, but how do you know which
is which? Here’s a quick list of what kinds of works use each.
Journal:
“A Policy Framework for the Growing Influence of Private Equity on Health Care Deliver”
(Journal of the American Medical Association)
Newspaper:
“Sonoma County Board of Supervisors to consider sewer rate increase”
(The Press Democrat)
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“E.U. Approves Microsoft’s $69 Billion Deal for Activision”
(The New York Times)
Poem:
“A Dream Deferred”
(Langston Hughes)
Short story:
“Everything that Rises Must Converge”
(Flannery O’Connor)
“A Lonely Coast”
(Annie Proulx)
Songs:
“(Sittin’ On) The Dock of the Bay”
(Otis Redding)
“Think About Things”
(Daoi Freyr)
Chapters:
“The Wolves”
(The Wild Robot Escapes)
“The First Tee”
(The Match: The Day the Game of Golf Changed Forever)
Lectures:
“The Danger of a Single Story”
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(Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie)
“Creativity in Management”
(John Cleese)
Podcast episodes:
“The Lives of Others”
(This American Life)
“Alone@Work: Miles To Go Before I’m Me”
(Rough Translation)
Web page:
“Responsible AI”
(Grammarly.com)
“Volleyball”
(Wikipedia.com)
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music albums
apps
video games
operas and long musical compositions
classic art like paintings and sculptures
dissertations
legal cases
large vehicles such as ships, aircrafts, and spacecrafts
When to use quotation marks for titles for each style guide
While the basics are the same—italics for the titles of long works and quotation marks for the
titles of short works—some minor details may vary. Here’s a quick rundown of when to use
quotation marks in titles for the APA, MLA, and Chicago styles.
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pamphlets
maps
serialized cartoons and comic strips
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quotation marks most of the time and double quotation marks are used only within single
quotes. Keep that in mind if you’re ever reading a British piece of writing.
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Quotation Marks Around a Word
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For further information on using quotation marks, check out our article Quotation Marks:
Grammar Rules.
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When writers become confused about quotation marks, it usually has to do with where to put
other nearby punctuation. Below is an example of a conversation between two characters, with
their dialogue correctly punctuated.
Martin said, “I’m going over to Jennifer’s house for a few hours.”
“You can’t be serious!” cried Fauntleroy.
“Oh, but I am,” Martin replied.
“How will you get there?” Fauntleroy asked.
“I thought I’d take the bus.”
“And,” Fauntleroy continued, “exactly how long is ‘a few hours’?”
“Probably two or three.”
“Well . . . fine. Tell Jennifer I said hello.”
In the first sentence, Martin makes a declarative statement that ends in a period. The period
goes inside the quotation marks. Treat anything within quotation marks as separate from the
rest of the sentence you’ve written, and make sure it has its own correct punctuation. If the
quote is a full sentence, it must begin with a capital letter, even though it is within the larger
structure of another sentence.
The second sentence begins a new paragraph because a different character is speaking.
Fauntleroy responds with an outburst, ending with an exclamation mark. When an exclamation
mark belongs to the sentence inside the quotation marks, it goes before the closing quotation
mark.
In the third sentence, Martin is making another declarative statement. This time, however, the
statement is followed by the dialogue tag Martin replied. In dialogue, when a sentence that
would normally end in a period is followed by a dialogue tag, the period becomes a comma. It
should go before the closing quotation mark.
In the fourth sentence, Fauntleroy’s query ends with a question mark. As with exclamation
marks, a question mark goes before the closing quotation mark when it belongs to the sentence
inside the quotation marks.
In the fifth sentence, Martin is speaking, but there is no dialogue tag. Writers often omit
dialogue tags when the context of a conversation makes it clear who the speaker is.
In the sixth sentence, the dialogue tag Fauntleroy continued appears in the middle of
Fauntleroy’s sentence. Notice the placement of the commas after And and continued; commas
go before quotation marks. This sentence also contains a quote within a quote, which is
enclosed with single quotation marks. Fauntleroy is repeating Martin’s words a few hours.
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The final two sentences of the conversation also omit the dialogue tags, because it’s clear which
character is speaking in both instances.
Non-dialogue quotations
In nonfiction or academic contexts, you may want to quote someone without styling it as
dialogue. The same rules for where to put other punctuation in relation to the quotation marks
apply. But you should also take care to construct your sentence so that the quoted words fit
within it grammatically.
Correct: The mayor said his two golden retrievers were “the best dogs in the world” and
added that he was not a cat person.
Incorrect: The mayor said his two golden retrievers were “the best dogs in the world. I’m
not a cat person.”
In the second example, the sentence begins in the third person and past tense but abruptly
switches to the first person and present tense halfway through the quote. The result is jarring
for the reader, and sometimes hard to follow.
Scare quotes
Occasionally, writers enclose certain terms they wish to distance themselves from in quotation
marks. Quotation marks used this way are commonly called scare quotes or shudder quotes. It’s
a way of implying that you’re using a term in an unusual way or that you don’t necessarily
approve of it. For example:
Silicon Valley has fully embraced the “sharing economy.”
The scare quotes around sharing economy suggest that it’s not a fully accepted term. Perhaps
the writer feels that it’s jargon or just doesn’t like it. But, unless you’re writing for an audience
who is totally unfamiliar with the subject, it’s better to leave the quotation marks out and
instead provide enough context to make the meaning of the term clear. Overusing scare quotes
will quickly annoy readers, so reserve them for terms that truly require them:
For too many people, “computer security” is an oxymoron.
In the sentence above, the scare quotes are needed to indicate that the writer is not talking
about computer security in general, but rather the term itself.
Because scare quotes usually suggest a sniff of disapproval or sarcasm from the writer, you
should never use them purely for emphasis or decoration. A sign outside a restaurant that
proclaims Best “Flapjacks” in Town will make people stop and wonder why the flapjacks need
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the scare quotes. Are they really flapjacks? Or are they some kind of inferior imitation? Likewise,
if you write someone a note that says I “love” you, the recipient will probably assume that you
meant the exact opposite!
Capitalization in Quotes
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Correct: William Butler Yeats said that education should not be passive and dull, but that
it should be seen as “. . . lighting a fire.”
Correct: When accused, Richard Nixon maintained that he was “not a crook.”
Ah, the old debate: semicolon vs. colon vs. dash. Which punctuation is the right one for the
sentence you’re writing? How do you know? Is it a clear-cut choice where one is correct and the
others are wrong, or is it more of a stylistic decision, like using the Oxford comma?
The confusion surrounding semicolon versus colon versus dash is understandable, but once
you’ve learned the basics, the answer is usually clear. There’s rarely a situation where either a
semicolon or a colon can be correct; it’s typically one or the other. The same goes for dashes—
unless you’re purposely breaking punctuation rules for a stylistic reason (like writing poetry,
writing a character’s unique dialogue, or breaking convention to grab readers’ attention), there
are right ways and wrong ways to use a dash.
Not sure when to use a dash or whether a colon or semicolon is the way to go? No worries—we
break it down and make it easy-peasy.
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Now let’s discuss the details on when and how to use each and where the dash ( — ) fits in.
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When do I use a semicolon?
A semicolon looks like this: ;
As we mentioned above, a semicolon joins two independent clauses together to create a
detailed sentence. Take a look at this example:
My favorite meal is rigatoni with bolognese sauce and crusty bread; these foods remind
me of my grandmother’s cooking.
You’ve got two distinct sentences there, but when they’re joined by a semicolon, they paint a
fuller picture than they would if kept separate. The semicolon communicates a deeper
relationship. Think of it as shorthand for a conjunction. Another way to write our example
sentence is: My favorite meal is rigatoni with bolognese sauce and crusty bread because these
foods remind me of my grandmother’s cooking.
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The en dash (–) is slightly shorter than the em dash, but still longer than a single hyphen. Unlike
the versatile em dash, the en dash has just three jobs:
Replace the word to in ranges and scores
Create complex compound adjectives
Represent conflict or connection between two nouns
Compound adjectives are two-word adjectives, and when the two words in a compound
adjective aren’t hyphenated, like light gray, or when both words are hyphenated, like in record-
breaking two-week period, an en dash between the adjective and the noun it’s describing
makes the sentence clear.
For example: I’ve recently started dabbling in dark academia–style fashion.
And you’d use a double hyphen (⸗) when you use a hyphenated word at the end of a line of text
and the second half of the word is split off and starts the next line. Generally, non-hyphenated
words are given hyphens in this situation to show the reader that the word continues on the
next line. When the word already has a hyphen, a second one is added to show it’s both
hyphenated and split across two lines—and that second hyphen creates the double hyphen.
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When a semicolon is part of a list, it’s between items in the list, rather than at the beginning.
You’d use a semicolon in a list to clearly separate items, especially if the items already
contain commas.
For example: When I traveled through Asia last year, I stopped in Tokyo, Japan; Osaka, Japan;
Seoul, South Korea; and Bangkok, Thailand.
Colon
To make a Shirley Temple, you need three ingredients: ginger ale, grenadine, and a maraschino
cherry.
It was a beautiful day: The sun was shining and the flowers were in full bloom.
Semicolon
The semifinalists included Bob from Chicago, Illinois; Jessica from New York, New York; Karen
from Seattle, Washington; and David from Camden, New Jersey.
My cats love to harass my dog; they spent all afternoon chasing him through the house.
Em dash
I drank my coffee—as I do every day—on the porch.
Please call my sister—Amy, not Rebecca—to find out the best time to stop by.
HP, Dell, Apple—we sell every kind of computer here.
Hey—oh wait, never mind.
The suspect is believed to be a minor named — — —, who lives in the same building as the
victim.
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En dash
I have to work from 10 a.m.–6 p.m. today.
She’s a brand-new Pulitzer Prize–winning journalist.
Our San Diego–San Francisco road trip will take about eight hours if we don’t make any stops.
Double hyphen
At the museum, I had the opportunity to see a well⸗preserved specimen of a beetle in amber.
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sentence. Colons provide a way of expounding upon information in such a way that connects
the ideas in two or more sentences.
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