Progress Test - English Stage 7
Progress Test - English Stage 7
Progress Test - English Stage 7
English Paper 2
Stage 7
1 hour 10 minutes
Name
INSTRUCTIONS
• Answer all questions.
• Write your answer to each question in the space provided.
• You should pay attention to punctuation, spelling and handwriting.
INFORMATION
• The total mark for this paper is 50.
• The number of marks for each question or part question is shown in brackets [ ].
• Suggestions for how long to spend on each section are given in the booklet.
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Section A: Reading
(a) Why does the writer make the first paragraph a description of different sounds?
[1]
(b) The writer uses a number of literary features to describe the setting.
Complete the table below, describing the literary features the writer uses and giving an
example from the text.
•
personification
•
• heads as grey and furry-looking as
little mice
•
sibilance
[3]
[1]
3 What does the writer mean by ‘less cotton wool than curdled milk’?
[1]
[2]
[1]
5 Explain in your own words how the writer makes Icarus seem like a pleasant place to live.
Give three ways.
•
•
[3]
6 Do you think Masha’s aunt knows Masha better than her uncle? Explain your answer and give
evidence from the text to support your explanation.
Explanation:
Quotation: [2]
•
[2]
[1]
[1]
[1]
9 The text is set in Ukraine, on the edge of Kiev, by the Dnieper River.
Give two other pieces of evidence from the text that tell you the text is set in Ukraine.
•
•
[2]
10 (a) Which of the following do you think best describes Masha’s character? Tick () one box.
irritable
dreamy
lonely
worried
[1]
(b) Which of the following do you think best describe Granny’s character? Tick () one box.
selfish
practical
emotional
adventurous
[1]
•
[2]
Section B: Writing
• the setting
• the characters
• the viewpoint
• how the story develops.
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Birds whistled. Those were the ones with heads as grey and furry-looking as little mice. There
was an endless shushing noise, as if the Dnieper River had slipped the chains of its bank in the
night and lay sighing on the doorstep. The goats in their pen made sleepy bleating sounds.
Faintly, from the car park above, came the banging and scraping of garage doors, the rattle of
engines and the soft squishing of tyres in the sand. The trolleybus wires sang their thin, 5
twanging song.
That was what Masha woke up to every morning. She liked to lie listening before she opened
her eyes; she had a running bet with herself to see if she could predict the weather from what it
sounded like.
‘Get yourself out of bed; the kasha’s burning. You and your cotton wool,’ said Granny, who had
no intention of rewarding even correct weather predictions. Granny knew such things as
instinctively as cows, or crows.
Masha sighed and opened her eyes. Kasha was buckwheat boiled with butter. Filling and
cheap, but boring. Next to it on the table, though, Granny had laid out the remains of Masha’s 15
birthday cake. Feeling her stomach rumble, she hopped out of bed.
It was too hazy to be sunny. Less cotton wool than curdled milk. Thunderstorm weather. How
do you work out the differences like that from sounds, Masha pondered, as she slipped out of
the open door, which was covered with a curtain against mosquitoes, and into the morning air.
Why do the trolleybus wires sing even when there’s no wind, she wondered. She returned to her 20
home: Icarus the trolleybus. Lots of buses that drove around had the name ICARUS written on
their fronts, but there was only one trolleybus called Icarus. And only this one trolleybus was
home to a little girl called Masha and her very old grandmother.
Icarus had not gone anywhere for a long time. He was parked among meadows and allotments
on the very edge of Kiev, by the Dnieper River. With no overhead electric wires to fix onto, the 25
two long spring rods attached to the roof waved in the air like antennae, forever searching for a
new source of power on which to drive away. There were no seats inside any more, and in their
place were two cosy beds, two chairs and a table, and a little cooker which ran off a gas
cylinder. A bookcase was tucked between two windows, and a broom handle strung from the
ceiling made a rack for the two occupants to hang up their few clothes. The floor was covered 30
with a strip of red carpet, and embroidered Ukrainian cloths were draped across the window.
This mid-summer morning he was a cheerful, bright home with the birdsong pouring in through
the open windows.
Masha eyed her pile of birthday presents from yesterday as she ate breakfast. It was a very
small pile. Nothing at all from her mother, even now she was ten, into double figures: a one as 35
skinny as she was; a fat zero for a peephole onto the world. ‘A good round number,’ Granny
had said approvingly, as if it were an achievement to reach ten.
Masha didn’t want to think about her mother’s missing present. She reached over and pulled a
big glossy book out of the pile. It was an encyclopaedia of animals. Uncle Igor had given it to
her, but she was sure it was not really from Igor at all, but from his wife, Anya. She knew this 40
because she actually liked it – in contrast to Uncle Igor’s second present, a hideous, pink frilly
dress his daughter Anastasia had worn once or twice and then got tired of, or grown out of.
‘Planning your travels?’ Granny said, as Masha opened the book to look through the
Galapagos, where you could ride on giant turtles; the African jungle, full of sleek, patterned
snakes dripping from the trees. Then she got to Siberian tigers, and Granny sighed and turned 45
away.
Looking at the picture made Masha ache faintly inside. But it was not a new ache; it was already
four years old. Her father had grown up beyond Siberia in Kamchatka, thousands of kilometres
away to the east, where the tigers live. He said everything there was twice as big as anywhere
else. 50
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Stage 7
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Section A: Reading
• the opening paragraph is describing all the sounds the girl / Masha can hear
when she wakes up / the girl / Masha has just woken up and is describing /
listing the sounds she can hear / listening before she opens her eyes (trying
to predict the weather) / the story starts in the morning describing what
Masha does every morning when she wakes up.
1(b) The writer uses a number of literary features to describe the setting. 3
Complete the table below, describing the literary features the writer uses
and giving an example from the text.
• Granny doesn’t think it’s clever / is not impressed (because she knows it
instinctively).
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3 What does the writer mean by ‘less cotton wool than curdled milk’? 1
• That the weather was not sunny / the clouds were not fluffy / the sky was
completely hazy / that the sky was not blue with white fluffy clouds but
completely cloudy / white / grey / overcast.
• because they live on a trolleybus and that (Icarus) is the name on the
trolleybus
5 Explain in your own words how the writer makes Icarus seem like a 3
pleasant place to live.
Give three ways.
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6 Do you think Masha’s aunt knows Masha better than her uncle? Explain 2
your answer and give evidence from the text to support your explanation.
Explanation:
• yes / she gives her a present that she knows she’ll like / gives her a book
that suits her daydreaming character / gives her a book about travelling
which she loves / (whereas) her uncle gives her a (pink) dress which she
hates
Quotation:
• she was sure it was not really from Igor at all, but from his wife, Anya. She
knew this because she actually liked it – in contrast to Uncle Igor’s second
present, a hideous, pink frilly dress
• She knows that Masha gets upset when Masha looks at the tigers.
• Masha is always looking / thinking / talking / dreaming about Siberia.
• She knows that Masha is thinking about what her father said about Siberia.
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• to join two closely related clauses / ideas together / to give more information
8(b) Give one subordinate clause. 1
9 The text is set in Ukraine, on the edge of Kiev, by the Dnieper River. 2
Give two other pieces of evidence from the text that tell you the text is set
in Ukraine.
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10(a) Which of the following do you think best describes Masha’s character? 1
Tick () one box.
• dreamy
10(b) Which of the following do you think best describe Granny’s character? 1
Tick () one box.
• practical
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Section B: Writing
Notes to markers
• the setting
• the characters
• the viewpoint
• how the story develops.
Spelling 3
[Total 25]
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Uses adventurous and precise vocabulary. Chronological or logical links help the
development of ideas.
Characterisation is shown through actions
and reactions during the story. Cohesion within and between paragraphs is
achieved using devices such as connectives.
A clear, consistent relationship between
writer and reader is established and
controlled.
Characters are well described with actions Logical sequence with attempts to link ideas
linked to key events, i.e. need to address is evident but not consistent attempts to link
what happens (next). ideas with fitting openings and closings, i.e.
has to be linked to the stimulus.
A clear relationship between writer and
reader is established in parts of the story,
which engages the reader.
Vocabulary is simple, with some choices to Some attempt to sequence relevant ideas
create interest. logically in relation to the stimulus. Also,
introduction / closing statement may be
At least one event is described, i.e. some evident.
detail about the character’s situation. What
happens (next)? Movement between paragraphs or sections,
may be disjointed.
General features of the genre, if required,
are shown.
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Ideas are mostly relevant to the narrative Some basic sequencing with story ideas
with a simple plot. i.e. involves the main evident.
character in an appropriate setting.
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[2–3] [2]
Some simple sentence structures are used Spelling of high frequency words is
successfully. generally correct, e.g. their/there, when,
were, what, some, etc.
Some variation in sentence openings.
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Name ………………………………………………….………………………. 3
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Additional materials: None
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READ THESE INSTRUCTIONS FIRST
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Answer all questions in the spaces provided on the question paper.
Total
V1
Komodo Dragon
Komodo dragons are the world's heaviest living lizards. They can grow to a length of over
3 metres, with an average length of 2.5 metres and weight of 91 kilograms. Females are
usually under 2.5 metres and weigh about 68 kilograms.
The Komodo dragons’ keen sense of smell, if aided by favourable wind, enables them to seek
out carrion* up to 8.5 kilometres away. Despite their size, Komodos are fast moving and agile. 5
They can climb trees and are good swimmers.
Their teeth are laterally compressed with serrated edges, resembling those of flesh-eating
sharks. They have about 60 teeth that are replaced frequently and that are positioned to cut
out chunks of their prey. Komodos have a highly flexible skull which allows them to swallow
large pieces of their food. A Komodo’s mouth is full of virulent bacteria, so even if their prey 10
survives the original attack, it will die of infection later. In addition, recent research has found
that Komodos have a venom gland which is important in disabling their prey.
Young dragons, up to 0.75 metres in length, live in trees and eat insects, birds, eggs, small
mammals and other reptiles. However, they descend from the trees for carrion.
Glossary
[1]
3 [2]
4 Combine these sentences into one sentence, using ‘so’ and ‘which’. Use correct
punctuation.
A Komodo dragon is a large lizard. It can grow to a length of 3 metres. It is one of the
world’s heaviest living lizards.
[2]
5 Read the sentence beginning ‘Despite their size, …’. (Line 5) What does this tell us? For
Tick () one box. Teacher's
Use
resembling
infection
disabling
[1]
7 There are three sentences in the second paragraph. One of the sentences can be rewritten
using brackets. Rewrite the sentence using brackets.
[1]
8 (a) Find an adverb in the first paragraph which shows that not all female Komodo dragons
are the same size.
[1]
(b) Find a word in the first paragraph which shows that only some Komodo dragons grow
to a length of over 3 metres.
[1]
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Wherever you live, you have probably heard of dragons, and may even assume that all
cultures see dragons in the same way. However, such an assumption is not correct! In some
cultures, the dragon is viewed as a monster, but in others – such as China and Vietnam – the
dragon is perceived quite differently. There, they are valued for their magic and beauty – and
respected. Their anatomy, their behaviour, their symbolism and what they mean to society are 5
viewed with quite different eyes.
In these cultures, dragons are used in ceremonies and parades. Although they may look like
monsters, they actually symbolise heroism – not danger and threat. Indeed, they are
considered more a protector than a villain and are very much a symbol of power. The Chinese
even have a year of the dragon, and it is said that everyone born in this year will be healthy, 10
wealthy and wise – all of the qualities which the dragon is said to represent. The year of the
dragon is said to be a very prosperous year for the people of China!
9 Tick () to show which of these statements, according to the text, are true about how
dragons are seen in Chinese and Vietnamese cultures.
10 Write one word from the first paragraph which shows the writer is contrasting ideas
between two sentences.
[1]
11 Write a summary of 70−90 words to describe the way dragons are viewed across cultures.
Use your own words as far as possible. For
Teacher's
Use
[5]
Section B: Writing
12 Write an article for young children which gives information about an animal.
• use headings to help make the information clear, e.g. Physical characteristics; What they eat;
Where they live; etc.
For
Teacher's
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Section A: Reading
Read this passage from Escape from Shangri-La by Michael Morpurgo and then answer the questions
in the question paper.
A girl playing her violin notices an old man standing across the road from her house in the
pouring rain.
***
I was ambivalent about my violin. I loved playing my violin, but I had always hated practising,
and in particular I hated being told to practise. Once I could forget that I was practising, once I
could lose myself in the music, then I could play quite happily for hours on end.
I was just beginning to enjoy it, just beginning to feel at one with my violin. I was playing so well
I could feel the skin prickling with pleasure all down my arms. But then the doorbell rang. The 5
magic was broken. I was immediately back to hateful practising. The bell rang again.
I put the violin down on my bed and went to the top of the stairs to see who it was. I heard the
front door opening. There was a shadow down in the hallway, and my mother was standing
beside it, motionless.
The shadow moved suddenly into the light of the hallway and became the old man from across
the road. He was standing there, dripping. ‘I’m sorry,’ he said. ‘I know this is going to sound a
bit odd, but I’m your grandad. I’m your dad’s dad, so that makes me your grandad, doesn’t it?’
I felt my mother take my hand and hold on to it tightly, so tightly it was hurting me.
‘You can’t be,’ my mother whispered, pulling me close to her. ‘You can’t be him. Arthur hasn’t 15
got a father.’ The old man seemed suddenly unsteady on his feet. He swayed and staggered
forward. Instinctively we both backed away from him. He was dripping from his ears, from his
chin, from his fingers too. It was as if his whole body was weeping tears.
The old man was unbuttoning his jacket now, and fumbling deep inside. My mother still held
me by the hand in a grip of steel. The wallet he took out was stuffed full, like some battered 20
leather sandwich. He opened it up with great care, almost reverently. With shaky fingers he
pulled out an old photograph, faded to sepia, torn at the edges and criss-crossed with creases.
He gave it to us. A young man looked at me out of the photograph. Astride his shoulders sat a
small boy clutching his hair with both fists.
‘There’s me with little Arthur, your dad, that is, pulling my hair by the roots. He was always 25
doing that, little rascal. Summer 1950. That was the last summer we were all together.’
I felt a warm shiver creeping up the back of my neck. I looked up into his face. The eyes were
deep-set and gentle. They were blue. He had blue eyes. My father had blue eyes. I had blue
eyes. That was the moment the last doubts vanished. This man had to be my father’s father,
my grandfather. 30
I broke free of my mother’s grasp, took my grandfather gently by the arm and led him into the
warmth of the kitchen.
We sat watching him as he sipped and slurped, both hands holding the mug. He was savouring
it. In between sips he set about the plate of chocolate digestive biscuits, dunking every one till 35
it was soggy all through, and devouring one after another with scarcely a pause for breath. He
must have been really famished. His face was weathered brown and crinkled and craggy, like
the bark of an old oak tree. I’d never seen a face like it. I couldn’t take my eyes off him.
I did all the talking. Someone had to. I can’t stand silences – they make me uncomfortable. He
was obviously too intent on his tea and biscuits to say anything at all, and my mother just sat 40
there staring across the kitchen table at him. How many times had she told me not to stare at
people? And here she was gawping at him shamelessly.
I had to think of something sensible to talk about, and I reasoned that he might want to know
something about me, about his new-found granddaughter. After all, he had my whole life to
catch up on. 45
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Section A © Adapted extract taken from Escape from Shangri-La by Michael Morpurgo. Text copyright © 1998 Michael Morpurgo. Published by
Egmont UK Limited and used with permission; adapted by permission of the author.
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Answer all questions in the spaces provided on the question paper.
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1 From whose point of view does the writer tell the story?
[1]
[1]
Aaron arrives.
4 How does Joanna feel when she first sees the dragon?
[1]
5 ‘The dragon looked at her intently with its bright eyes…’ (Line 19) For
What does the word intently tell us about the dragon? Teacher's
Use
[1]
6 Give a quotation from the passage which shows Joanna was not frightened by the dragon
during the meeting.
[1]
Suddenly, thoughts like small silver sparks were flickering across her mind. ‘Dragon Flyer’
they cried, and were gone, only to return brighter and faster. (Lines 23-24)
[1]
8 Which verb in the fifth paragraph shows that the woman took the dragon quickly?
[1]
10 There is a word in paragraph six and another word in paragraph seven which can mean the
same. Write the two words.
2 [1]
[2]
12 Give one reason why Joanna does not want to tell Aaron about the dragon.
[1]
13 What do the words ‘still wrapped up’ suggest about Aaron? (Line 40)
[1]
14 The writer uses italics on words throughout the passage, e.g. ‘Aaron was always later than
they had agreed’. (Line 4) Why does the writer use italics?
[1]
2 [2]
16 Joanna’s feelings change from the beginning to the end of the passage.
(a) How does she feel at the beginning of the passage? Write a word or a short phrase.
[1]
(b) Using your own words, write a sentence to describe how her feelings have changed at
the end of the passage.
[1]
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Section B: Writing
17 In the passage you have read, Joanna met a dragon. Write a fantasy story of your own
where a girl or a boy meets a dragon.
For
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English Paper 2
Stage 7
V1
Section A: Reading
Read this passage from Dragon Racer by Margaret Bateson-Hill and then answer the questions in the
question paper.
‘Come on, Aaron!’ Joanna Morris complained impatiently to herself as she looked up the busy
high street for her older brother. ‘Five o’clock on the steps of the town hall, you said, so where
are you?’ She threw her school bag onto the bottom step and leaned against the wall. Aaron
was always later than they had agreed. It was alright for him; he enjoyed his after-school
football club, AND he was always chosen to play in the team. Joanna wished she could find 5
something she really liked too. She’d recently started going to basketball but the only times
she ever got chosen for the team were when they were short of players. ‘And I’m as good as
half the girls there!’ she’d told her mum.
‘Don’t worry, next September, when you start secondary school, there’ll be loads of new clubs
for you to try,’ had been her mother’s rather unhelpful reply. 10
Joanna looked up at the clock on the town hall to check the time. Ten past five. If Aaron didn’t
come in five minutes she’d go home without him. She stood staring up at the clock as if by
staring she could make the giant hands move. Suddenly, a movement caught her eye;
something on one of the statues near the clock.
‘There’s a large pigeon,’ thought Joanna. She looked again, more carefully this time. It was 15
far too big for a pigeon – what was it? And then all she could do was stare up at the clock-
tower in utter amazement. Crawling down the wall straight towards her was a small silver
dragon!
The dragon stopped and looked at her intently with its bright eyes shining like two small
bonfires. Joanna stared back. She could see herself reflected in the dark pupils, only instead 20
of her school uniform, she seemed to be wearing a fitted leather jacket, the sort motorbike
riders wear. The dragon’s face was now so close she could feel its hot breath on her cheeks.
She reached up to touch it. Suddenly, thoughts like small silver sparks were flickering across
her mind. ‘Dragon Flyer’ they cried, and were gone, only to return brighter and faster. Now her
head was spinning and she had to lean against the wall of the town hall to stop herself falling. 25
She looked up just in time to see a woman scoop the dragon up into the thick folds of a
blanket. It happened so quickly that it took Joanna a couple of seconds to realise that the
woman with the blanket was already disappearing through a side door. Joanna ran after her,
but at the same moment she heard her brother calling her.
‘Jo! Wait,’ and Aaron came running up. ‘Mr Wentworth wanted to sort out the details for the 30
match tomorrow. Guess who’s captain? And then Matt and I needed to discuss tactics... Hey,
Joanna, you’re not listening. Are you alright, you look a bit funny?’
‘I don’t know, I feel a bit strange,’ replied Joanna, adding silently, ‘you might too if you’d just
discovered a dragon waiting for you!’ Because she was sure it had been waiting for her...
As they walked home all Joanna could think about was the dragon’s face and its round fiery 35
eyes. But, however amazing, there was no way she was going to tell Aaron what she had
seen. If she said she’d seen a dragon crawling down the wall of the town hall he would either
laugh at her, or worse, want to hang around and see for himself! And she certainly didn’t want
that. This was her secret and one she needed to think about before she told anyone. Luckily,
Aaron was still wrapped up in all the details of his football match so he wasn’t paying much 40
attention. They walked slowly up the road together...
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Question 1
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Question 2
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Question 3
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Question 4
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Question 5
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Question 6
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Question 7
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Question 9
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Question 10
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Question 11
1 • use of own words and not copying • Many/most cultures have dragons.
text too much
• Different cultures perceive
1 • organisation of ideas dragons differently.
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Some conventions of text Paragraphs are used to A range of sentence A range of punctuation is A few spelling errors,
type are evident and organise the text. Links structures are used, used; errors do not mostly of more difficult
generally appropriate for between paragraphs are including complex. Some impede meaning. words.
purpose and audience. clear. variety of sentence Evidence of commas
subjects. A variety of used correctly to mark
Viewpoint is generally Some cohesive devices connectives are used to clause divisions.
sustained, with content are used to link clarify ideas.
developed in some detail. sentences.
Some awareness of text Writing is not consistently Sentence structures are Some punctuation A number of errors OR
type and audience may organised into paragraphs. limited or repetitive, with evident, but a number of simple vocabulary spelt
be shown, though not Links between paragraphs little/partial use of errors/omissions, correctly.
always sustained. are not always helpful or complex structures. including misuse of
clear. Frequent use of ‘and, commas.
There is evidence of a then, so’.
viewpoint but content Pronouns and/or repeated
lacks detail. words largely used to link
sentences.
2/3
2/3 2/3 2/3 2
Little understanding of Little understanding of Sentence structures are Generally erratic use of Many errors, including a
conventions of text type, how to structure a text or largely additive, and often punctuation marks. range of simple words.
purpose or audience. link sentences/ideas. grammatically incorrect.
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Question 1
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Question 2
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Question 3
Aaron arrives. 4
Total 1
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Question 4
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Question 5
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Question 6
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Question 7
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Question 8
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Question 9
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Question 10
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Question 11
1 Character
gets very involved and enthusiastic
about things he enjoys
Quotation
Aaron was still so wrapped up in all
the details of his football match that
he wasn’t paying her much attention. /
Matt and I needed to discuss tactics
Character
sporty / good at sport
Quotation
he was always chosen to play in the
team
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Question 12
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Question 13
Total 1
Question 14
Total 1
Question 15
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Question 16
She feels she now has something of Accept any suitable answer.
(b) 1 her own that is important to her.
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6/7 5 5 5 4 4
Narrative features Paragraphs are used A range of sentence A range of Vocabulary chosen A few spelling errors,
(character, plot and to organise the text. structures are used, punctuation is used; carefully and for mostly of more
setting) are in Links between including complex. errors do not impede effect. difficult words.
evidence and of paragraphs are clear. Some variety of meaning. Evidence
some interest to the sentence subjects. A of commas used
reader. Viewpoint is Some cohesive variety of connectives correctly to mark
generally sustained. devices are used to are used to clarify clause divisions.
link sentences. ideas.
Literary or linguistic
devices are
sometimes used
effectively.
4/5 4 4 4 3 3
Sufficient information Writing is not Sentence structures Some punctuation Some evidence of A number of errors OR
is given for a reader to consistently are limited or evident, but a number vocabulary chosen simple vocabulary
understand the organised into repetitive, with of errors/omissions, for effect. spelt correctly.
characters, plot and paragraphs. Links little/partial use of including misuse of
setting described. between paragraphs complex structures. commas.
Viewpoint is are not always Frequent use of ‘and,
established, but lacks helpful or clear. then, so’.
appropriate detail
and/or credibility. Pronouns and/or
repeated words are
Literary or linguistic largely used to link
devices are used, but sentences.
not always
successfully.
Some basic attempt Little understanding Sentence structures Generally erratic use Simple, generally Many errors,
to engage, but little of how to structure a are largely additive, of punctuation marks. appropriate vocabulary including a range of
understanding of text or link and often used – limited in range simple words.
narrative devices or sentences/ideas. grammatically but relevant.
viewpoint. incorrect.
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