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✅PHẦN III: WRITING
Topic: Education
I. Vocabulary
1. well-rounded education
Nhiều người cho rằng các trường THPT nên cung cấp cho học sinh một nền giáo dục toàn
diện.
2. learn valuable skills

Ngoài các tiết học thông thường, học sinh còn học được những kỹ năng quý báu từ việc
tương tác với bạn bè cùng trang lứa
3. extracurricular activities
Tham gia vào các hoạt động ngoại khoá là một cách tốt để mở rộng mạng lưới xã hội
4. hands-on activity
Nhiều giáo viên lên giáo án cho các hoạt động thực hành để học sinh tham gia nhiều hơn
vào bài học.
5. group assignment
Bài tập nhóm là một cách hiệu quả để xây dựng niềm tin giữa các học sinh
6. build a strong character

Trau dồi phẩm chất quan trọng hơn bất cứ thành công nào về học thuật hay tài chính
7. personality development
Việc phát triển nhân cách ở bậc mầm non hướng tới việc giáo dục trẻ cách tương tác với tư
cách là thành viên cuả một nhóm
*hướng tới = be geared towards
8. peer pressure
Áp lực mang tính tích cực từ bạn bè đồng trang lứa có thể được ứng dụng trong học nhóm
để giúp học sinh thúc đẩy lẫn nhau
9. learning process
10. cheat on tests
11. a quality education
12. specialize in
13. heavy competition
14. well-cultivated
Cách làm bài advantages and disadvantages + Cấu trúc bài
Topic
In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school.
Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages ?
Outline
Model Answer - Band 6
In some places, teenagers are encouraged to take part-time jobs even while they are still in
school. Working while studying can have both advantages and disadvantages. However, I
believe that for many teenagers, the disadvantages of part-time jobs are more serious than
the advantages.
Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages):
One benefit of teenagers working part-time is that they can gain important life skills. For
example, they can learn how to manage money, cooperate with others, and solve problems
at work. These skills can help them prepare for their future. Another advantage is that they
can earn their own money, which gives them a sense of responsibility and independence.
Many teenagers feel proud when they do not have to depend on their parents for money.
Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages):
On the other hand, working part-time can create problems for teenagers. They might not
have enough time to focus on their studies. For instance, if they spend too many hours at
work, they may not have time to finish homework or prepare for exams, which can cause
their grades to drop. Also, teenagers are still learning how to balance their time, and working
while studying can be too stressful for them. This stress might affect their mental health and
make it hard for them to enjoy their teenage years.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, while part-time jobs can help teenagers learn skills and gain independence,
the disadvantages such as poor academic performance and stress are more serious.
Therefore, I think teenagers should focus on their education instead of trying to work while
they are still in school.
Model Answer - Band 7
In various regions, it has become common for teenagers to take on part-time jobs while still
attending school. Although this practice offers several benefits, such as promoting financial
independence and teaching valuable life skills, I believe that the drawbacks, including its
negative impact on academic performance and mental well-being, outweigh the advantages.
Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages):
Admittedly, working part-time can be beneficial for teenagers in several ways. First, it allows
them to develop essential life skills, such as time management, teamwork, and
problem-solving, which will be invaluable in their future careers. For instance, handling
customer complaints in a part-time retail job equips teenagers with communication skills that
are highly transferable. Additionally, earning their own money fosters a sense of
independence and responsibility. Many young individuals take pride in being able to
contribute financially to their families or save for personal goals, which can boost their
confidence and self-esteem.
Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages):
However, the disadvantages of part-time work for teenagers tend to outweigh these benefits.
One significant drawback is the potential decline in academic performance. Adolescents
often lack the advanced time-management skills needed to balance work and study
effectively. For example, long working hours may leave them with insufficient time to
complete homework or revise for exams, resulting in poorer grades. Furthermore, the stress
of juggling school and work can take a toll on their mental health. Teenagers are still in a
critical stage of emotional development, and excessive pressure from multiple
responsibilities can lead to anxiety or burnout, which may hinder both their academic and
personal growth.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, while part-time jobs offer teenagers opportunities to gain practical experience
and financial independence, their detrimental effects on education and mental well-being
make them less advantageous overall. Therefore, it is crucial for teenagers to prioritize their
studies during this formative stage of life to ensure a brighter future.
Homework
1. The Impact of Technology in Education

With the increasing use of technology in classrooms, such as online
learning platforms and interactive tools, what are the advantages and
disadvantages of integrating technology into education?
Outline
2. Studying Abroad
Many students choose to study abroad for their higher education. What are the advantages
and disadvantages of studying in a foreign country?
Outline
3. Homework in Education
Prompt:
Some educators believe that homework is essential for reinforcing knowledge, while others
argue that it places unnecessary pressure on students. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of assigning homework to students?
Outline
4. Private Schools vs. Public Schools
Prompt:
In some countries, parents prefer to send their children to private schools instead of public
schools. What are the advantages and disadvantages of attending private schools?
Outline

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✅PHẦN III: WRITING

2. learn valuable skills

6. build a strong character

11. a quality education

13. heavy competition

Cách làm bài advantages and disadvantages + Cấu trúc bài

Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages ?

Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages):

Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages):

Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages):

Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages):

1. The Impact of Technology in Education

4. Private Schools vs. Public Schools

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