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New curriculum, new textbooks, and the new college entrance exam are putting pressure on high school English teaching in China. This document provides a design for integrating reading and writing instruction. It gives an example of having students write a letter of advice on the topic of losing weight. The letter should provide specific, convincing, and relevant advice. It then evaluates sample student responses based on how well they meet these criteria.

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New curriculum, new textbooks, and the new college entrance exam are putting pressure on high school English teaching in China. This document provides a design for integrating reading and writing instruction. It gives an example of having students write a letter of advice on the topic of losing weight. The letter should provide specific, convincing, and relevant advice. It then evaluates sample student responses based on how well they meet these criteria.

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新课标 · 新教材 · 新高考

高中英语读写整合教学设计
应用文写作
M1U1 Reading for Writing : Write a letter of advice

温州第二高级中学 王旭碧
Talk and lead in

Advice ： How to lose weight ？


Tip1: Advice should be specific ( 具体化 ).

I suggest that you should better I suggest that you should sleep
pay attention to losing
weight.
? early and do more exercise.

Lily Jojo
Read and understand

What is Worried Friend's


problem?

What is Susan Luo's advice?


Whatdid
Why do Susan
you think of Susan's
mention （提及） advice?
the other information?
Tip2: Advice should be convincing ( 有说服力 ).
specific

I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual
for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the
online world. But spendingreasons
too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very
difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to
the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should
encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem
together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Analyze and practise

• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，


写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下：

• ⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点）。

• 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。字数 80 左右

• 词汇：适应 adapt to
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向
你寻求建议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下
⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点）
Dear Peter,

A. Knowing that you have come to China recently, I’m writing with delight to
show my warm welcome to you.

B. Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm writing
to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向
你寻求建议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下
⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点）
Dear Peter, specific convincing
Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm
writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.

A. You are supposed to get used to life in China.

B. You are supposed to make more Chinese friends.

C. You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you
whenever you’re in trouble.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向
你寻求建议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下
Tip3: Advice should be relevant( 相关
⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点） specific convincing
性 ).
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm
writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you
whenever you’re in trouble.
A. It's a good idea to know the environment.

B. It's a good idea to take part in some activities, which will help you get used
to the life here easily.

C. It's a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建
议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下
⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点）
★ Is it specific?

Dear Peter, ★ Is it convincing?


Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm
writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel. ★ Is it relevant?
You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you
whenever you’re in trouble. It's a good idea to take part in some activities,
which will help you get used to the life here easily.
Is there any other advice?
I recommend that you should take a tour around this place so that you’ll
have a better understanding of where you live.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向
你寻求建议。请你用英文给 Peter 回邮件。内容要点如下
⑴ 表示理解；⑵ 提出建议（不少于 2 点）
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm
writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you
whenever you’re in trouble. It's a good idea to take part in some activities,
which will help you get used to the life here easily. I recommend that you
should take a tour around this place so that you’ll have a better
understanding of where you live.
A. Looking forward to your reply.
B. I hope you will find my advice useful.
Think over coherence

Dear Peter,
Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment, I'm writing to
offer my advice as I understand how you feel.
Firstly
___________, you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you
Besides
whenever you’re in trouble. ___________, it's a good idea to take part in some
Above all
activities, which will help you get used to the life here easily. ___________, I
recommend that you should take a tour around this place so that you’ll have a better
understanding of where you live.
I hope you will find my advice useful.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Practice and write
假定你是李华，你的国外笔友 Ann 最近因为父母工作的关系转到新的班级，她在
交朋友方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交朋友的方法。内容包括：
1. 表示理解； 2. 提供建议。
注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ;
2. 字数 80 左右。

Dear Ann,
___________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________
__________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,
Evaluate and improve

• After reading the first paragraph, I know/understand


• ★ what the problem is Yes/No
• After reading the ending, I find it
• ★ appropriate Yes/No
• After reading the second paragraph, I know
• ★ what the advice is Yes/No
• After reading the advice, I find it
• ★ specific Yes/No
• ★ convincing Yes/No
• ★ relevant Yes/No
• Total:_________★
Evaluate and improve

• After reading the first paragraph, I Dear Ann,


know/understand Knowing that you have trouble making
• ★ what the problem is friends, I’m writing to give my advice as I
know your feeling.
• After reading the ending, I find it
First, you should make more Chinese
• ★ appropriate friends. Besides, you’re supposed to make
• After reading the second paragraph, friends with those who share the same hobby
I know with you. Lastly, I recommend that you
• ★ what the advice is should join some clubs so that you can meet
• After reading the advice, I find it more people.
• ★ specific I’ll be glad if you find my advice
• ★ convincing helpful.
• ★ relevant Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
• Total:_________★
Evaluate and improve

• After reading the first paragraph, I know/understand


• ★ what the problem is Yes/No
• After reading the ending, I find it
• ★ appropriate Yes/No
• After reading the second paragraph, I know
• ★ what the advice is Yes/No
• After reading the advice, I find it
• ★ specific Yes/No
• ★ convincing Yes/No
• ★ relevant Yes/No
• Total:_________★
Homewor k

• 1. Invite another partner to evaluate your letter according to


the checklist;

• 2. Polish your letter of advice according to your partner’s


evaluation.
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