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Spelling

Can somebody please tell me the Wikipedia stance on British/American spellings? The latest edit here has changed Neighbourhoods to Neighborhoods. Not wanting to be petty, I haven't changed it back. 03/09/2006, Tomkeene

If the subject of the article has a natural affinity to one variety or the other, use that one. (ie write about an American citizen or city or battleship etc in American English). Otherwise, stick to the variety used by the first major contributor. Often, though I try to replace the word with a spelling-neutral one like district or quarter. ROGER TALK 08:30, 11 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Economy

Marrakech seems to have hosted a number of international meetings. Any particular reason? It would also be nice to have general information about the local economy. -- Beland (talk) 05:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Founding?

Was the city founded in 1062 or 1070? Hexmaster (talk) 10:36, 22 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Coming to this many years later but I just noticed that the article says the city was founded in 1062, however the more commonly cited date is 1070. Historical sources apparently cite a variety of dates across a few decades, but Deverdun's volume on the city's history concludes that 1070 is the more convincing date and many authors seem to endorse that conclusion. Still, both dates occur in sources so might as well mention both. Robert Prazeres (talk) 03:17, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History

The end of the history section just fizzles out and reads like an advertisement. Topics that need to be covered include World War II and Independence. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.229.244.146 (talk) 18:52, 21 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

English spelling

I moved the article to "Marrakesh". Marrakech is the French spelling although it's used in English too, but the proper English spelling is "Marrakesh" which was used already in the body of article as many as 29 times prior to the move. "Marrakesh" not only better reflects the transliteration from broth both Arabic (مراكش‎) and Tashelhit language, but is also used commonly in English. Khestwol (talk) 15:36, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Marrakesh" is also used in other Wikipedia articles, like Marrakesh-Tensift-El Haouz. Khestwol (talk) 15:47, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No, the correct spelling is based on Berber which is with a c. 787,000 for Marrakech 295,000 for Marrakesh. I'm moving it back. I intend developing this article shortly.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:08, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No, Marrakech is not based on Berber. The city is spelled Marrakec in the Berber Latin alphabet with a C at the end (not Marrakech). The Berber pronunciation is Marrakesh because its alphabet uses C for ش (IPA: ʃ). The Arabic name has ش /sh/ at the end too. The English spelling "Marrakesh" is correct and is commonly used in English besides the French spelling. Khestwol (talk) 15:48, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes but the real way to decide it is what is most commonly used in reliable sources and its 787,000 for Marrakech vs 295,000 for Marrakesh. I've had similar dilemnas over spelling and always decide it by most hits in google books. Per you could ask User:Al ameer son for input? Anyway I'll dig out my book shortly and begin and expansion. I aim to get this up to GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:23, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This is an issue on the difference between the English and French spellings of Arabic proper names. For Moroccan, Algerian, Tunisian and Lebanese-related articles, there seems to be a tendency to use ch in lieu of sh i.e. Cheikh > Sheikh. Personally, I prefer using the English spellings for all articles since this English Wikipedia, but the sources typically trump preference, unless otherwise specified by MoS-Arabic. --Al Ameer son (talk) 01:42, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Having already done much research in preparing this article I think Marrakech is far more commonly used than Marrakesh, even in English publications. Books by the most reputable sources for travel and indeed websites on the city on places such as "the largest club in Africa" spell it Marrakech. There is a case to be made for spelling it Marrakesh, but i think the decision should be based upon the majority of reliable sources and how they spell it; 3 times as many spell it Marrakech.♦ Dr. Blofeld 08:19, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hm. That's not a proper g-books search. Most of those numbers are "ghost-hits" (non-existent). And you're not even restricting to English language sources. A quick check (removing both Wikipedia llc, English-only restrictions, placing the cut-off at 1980 and trying to wash out g-hits) shows they're both roughly equal - that is 91 pages-worth of references vs. 100 pages-worth. And the latter still includes a lot of French books and French references I couldn't weed out. So it is not "far more commonly used". It's pretty much a toss up. Personally, I have a preference for "Marrakesh", not only for being the English spelling, commonly recognizable and commonly used, but also for yielding a more correct pronunciation in English ("Marrakech" in English will likely end up embarassingly pronounced "Marraketch" by many of the innocent children who will come here.) Heck, even the official Morocco tourism website lists it as "Marrakesh" in English.
Also, I have lot more observations and notes on the history section of this article, which I plan to substantially change. But I will post those later. Walrasiad (talk) 12:02, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The article is not completed yet but if you want to constructively help build it you are welcome so long as you referenced using sfb notes as I've been doing. I intend to take this to GA at some point. Also needs to mention recent events including the 2011 trouble. Actually Marrakesh spelling by page hits only averages about 300 hits a day, Marrakech gets 2200 odd.♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:26, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure what you by hits per day, but I expect a lot of your hits are from French & other sources. But take a closer examination. Just going by the English references already contained in the article, most of the general-interest references you cite use "Marrakesh" - e.g. Bosworth (2010), Clammer (2009), Denby (2004), Gerteiny (1967), Gottreich (2007), Layton (2011), Nanjira (2010), Naylor (2009), Shillington (2005).

Marrakech tends to be only used in specialist books which nativize (i.e. Frenchify) all location spellings (e.g. "Fès" instead of "Fez"), like Davis (2009), Delbecki & co. (2011), Hamilton (2011), Harrison (2012), Hoisington (2004), Pons (2010) and Venison (2005)

(Rogerson uses both - esh in 2000, and ech in 2004)

Of the travel guides it is divided: Fodor's (2007), Lonely Planet (Hardy 2005, Mahyew/Dodd, 2004, Bing 2006/11), and Rough Guide (Jacobs, 2010) use Marrakesh, while Frommer's (Christiani, 2010, Humphrys (several)), Maverick (Searight 1999) and Hedonist (Sullivan) use Marrakech but the latter also nativize everything (again, Fès instead of Fez, etc.)

(the "further reading" sources you cite I can't verify for degree of nativization, but just from the titles, the selection seems pretty balanced (also some sources repeated, this should be pared)).

More importantly, major news outlets (e.g. BBC, [1], New York Times [2]), even UNESCO ([3]) and the Moroccan government (e.g. on official tourism site ["Marrakesh]), which you'd expect to nativize, actually use "Marrakesh" in their English text.

Granted it is not always consistent. But you'll hardly ever see the "Marrakech" spelling paired together with English names like "Fez", but only with French/nativist "Fès".

In SUM: it's pretty clear Marrakesh is the English spelling, Marrakech is the French spelling. And those who use English spelling generally use Marrakesh, while those who use French/nativist spelling generally go for Marrakech.

Given this is a general interest English encyclopedia, for the general public rather than specialists, with a preference for common usage rather than specialized usage, the default should be the common English spelling: "Marrakesh". If even Cote d'Ivoire is (perplexingly, IMO) is forced to be Ivory Coast here, I don't see why Marrakesh article shouldn't use the English spelling. (And it has the further advantage (as I already noted) of yielding the correct pronounciation for English-speakers, and not letting the children reading -ech slip into "Marraketch" or "Marrakek".) Walrasiad (talk) 01:22, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I disagree. The Collins world map in front of me, Marrakech. My National Geographic atlas which always tries to choose the "most correct" spelling for places spells it Marrakech. The most reputable books on Marrakech and local institutions spell it Marrakech. Where possible we should use the name most popular locally/nationally. Fès instead of Fez seems more appropriate too. A Pronounciation Marrak-esh can be added to the intro, hardly an argument.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:15, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not about "most correct". It is about "most common"/"least surprise". Maps are a poor guide, since many nativize wholesale. I got a supposedly English atlas with Munchen and Moskva instead of Munich and Moscow. Most general English-speakers wouldn't recognize Fès at all. Walrasiad (talk) 16:27, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • " It is about "most common"/"least surprise". True, more sources spell it Marrakech than Marrakesh, fact.
  • "Maps are a poor guide". Actually, no, they usually try to be politically correct and as accurate as possible. National Geographic is a fantastic resource for geography and maps, and Collins is one of the world's most reputable institutions on language and spelling and they spell it Marrakech.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:31, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I can see with my own eyes that national Geographic has Munchen and Moskva, Torino and Wien in their Atlas. That's not most common usage. I can also see with my own eyes that the searchable map they use on their main map page has "Fez" and Marrakesh". Try another angle. Walrasiad (talk) 16:43, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You have an answer for everything don't you? Feel free to open an RFC or village pump post about what we should name the article. I'm convinced Marrakech is more popular than Marrakesh, Highbeam research (English language newspapers mainly) also confirms it 5000 odd for Marrakesh [4] 8150 for Marrakech [5] ♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:52, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yet ngram says it ain't. Again, I'm not seeing dominance you're claiming in number runs, but pretty much a toss-up, as mentioned before. As a result, I think reasonable expectations should play a larger role in consideration. A big marker to me is that I simply don't find Marrakech-Fez pairings, but only Marrakesh-Fez or Marrakech-Fès, which indicates to me that Marrakech is used only in English texts which take the extra effort to nativize all spellings. It is not a huge surprise - the visual difference between Marrakech & Marrakesh is slight and can be glazed over. But the difference between Fez and Fès is huge and the latter would surprise and befuddle most general readers. Given that no Marrakesh/Marrakech spelling dominates it seems to me the pairing issue should be given higher priority, as many Morocco-related articles here naturally contain both cities, and to introduce an inconsistency in spelling that is not found in any text (i.e. no Marrakech-Fez pairings), we'd be introducing a new anomaly. As Marrakesh is English spelling, correct pronunciation, preponderant in general rather than specialist/nativist texts and common enough (even if not overtly dominant), there is little lost and much gained by it. But if you still believe you see some Marrakechi dominance somewhere I don't see, perhaps more eyes should be brought to bear. An RM and/or RFC should indeed be introduced to decide on both articles simultaneously (Marrakesh-Fez), not merely one individually. But it will likely delay approval of the DYK nom. If you don't mind the delay, that can be done. Walrasiad (talk) 17:49, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

We could always move it to Marrakesh (Marrakech)...♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:52, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

That's probably the unhappiest of solutions. I'd be more interested in hearing your positive arguments for Marrakech (outside the number runs, which I hope you agree are inconclusive). That is, what advantages are gained by it. Walrasiad (talk) 18:35, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Believe it or not but the issue does not concern me as much as you think. I'm only going by my gut instinct having already a lot of research for this.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:49, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Dr. B asked my opinion, though I can not imagine why he thinks I'm an authority. FWIW, which is very little, the spelling I recognize is Marrakech. English spelling is notoriously not phonetic both for English names and for names in other languages, so proper phonetic transliteration has nothing to do with it. IMO, the best guide to current English spelling is the usage of major newspapers. The NYT & London Times use Marrakesh. The WSJ uses Marrakech. Official sources are also useful. The US Dept. of State uses both, but Marrakech twice as often. This leaves it completely ambiguous. At least, unlike many naming disputes, this one has no political connotations. DGG ( talk ) 20:29, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There are a greater majority of hits for Marrakech in both google book and English language sources in High Beam as well as US Dept of State using Marrakech twice as often. Add to this that most specialist books on it spell it Marrakech and local institutions and Moroccan government seem to recognize it as Marrakech there is a reason why I'm leaning towards Marrakech and I think that justifies this spelling.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:42, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

We should trust Google Books Ngram Viewer which shows "Marrakesh" is used more commonly in English books. Khestwol (talk) 21:23, 19 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

For me its a question of practical experience and convenience in usage. Wikipedia is for general readers, not specialists, and general not specialist books are the guide to nomenclature. Someone who picks up a dedicated book on Morocco isn't surprised when nativist spellings are thrown at him - he is mentally prepared for it, indeed, he expects it. But a general reader isn't. That is, someone who is researching another topic and picks up a book on, say, the general history of Africa, or Portuguese imperialism, or the Italian gold trade, or Medieval art, or Islamic legal schools, or Jewish migration, or textile weaves, or a children's atlas, is not expecting it and will be "surprised" by nativist spellings. It is exactly for such general readers that Wikipedia is designed. And it is for this reason the Moroccan government uses "Marrakesh" on its tourist sites. I write a lot of historical articles, many of which touch on Moroccan history, where surprise spellings can startle and arrest the smoothness of the prose, particularly for a general reader. Marrakesh/Marrakech isn't the worst of them - eyes can glaze over. But Fès/Fez is impossible. Common recognizable phrases like the Maghrawa Kingdom of Fez, the Marinid palace of Fez, the Malikite scholars of Fez, the Ghana-Fez gold route, etc. become unrecognizable and startling when forced into "Fès".
It is without doubt that Marrakesh is English spelling, and Marrakech is French spelling (as Bosworth notes). The question is whether the French spelling has dominantly displaced the English in common usage in general works. And I don't see that. I see it displaced only in specialist works, or works which go the extra effort to nativize everything - which is why Marrakech-Fez pairings aren't found, only Marrakech-Fès or Marrakesh-Fez. In my experience, the Marrakesh-Fez pairing is the most common found in general works, simplest, natural and straightforward which won't cause head-scratching and wonder by general audiences. It is more likely to be used in other Wiki articles and more likely to stay stable - that is, you're likelier to get people changing from "Marrakech" to "Marrakesh" thinking the spelling is a non-English mistake than people changing "Marrakesh" to "Marrakech". Not only here, but particularly when used in other articles. Walrasiad (talk) 21:48, 19 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually page views show by far more editors search for Marrakech than Marrakesh..♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 11:41, 28 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Just in case there anyone failed to follow my note in Dr. Blofeld's talk page upon creation of History of Marrakesh", let me replicate it here:

OK. But I object to the title. It really has to be "Marrakesh", not "Marrakech". I don't know if you saw my citations in the original article to numerous books clearly and explicitly noting that "Marrakesh" is indeed the common English spelling. To replicate: Cenival (in Bosworth, 1989: p.588), Cornell (1997: p.xv), Pennel (2000: p.xxxiv), Gottereich (2007: p.xv), Hoffman and Miller (2010: p.xi), Schroeter (2002: p.xix-xx). The French version may be the preference of some authors (and if they're serious authors, they'll note they're making a francophone deviation from the common English spelling, e.g. [6]). But "Marrakesh' is clearly the common English spelling, and the one used in generalist works not narrowly dedicated to Morocco alone. I write a lot of North African-history related articles here, and that is what I've seen, what I've used and what I plan to stick with. So, if you don't object, I'm going to move that to "History of Marrakesh" for now. We can RM a longer-term resolution later. Walrasiad (talk) 11:46, 28 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

To summarize: while usage my be mixed in google searches, reliable references explicitly identify "Marrakesh" as the common English spelling. Final decision can be put up to RM, but a decision had to be made in extracting the "History of Marrakesh" article. Walrasiad (talk) 17:36, 28 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

History spinoff?

OK, so I just revamped the history section. It tapers off horribly at the end - the 20th C. city certainly needs more work. But I've pooped myself out for the moment and need a break. I still have to paste in the refs, but besides being momentarily tired, before I do so, I'd like to canvass opinion whether this section should be spinned off into its own article. Looking at it now, it's kinda large for a city article, and I wonder if it should perhaps be moved to a "History of Marrakesh" article? I am not sure how much to retain here - perhaps reverting back to the older smaller history, or taking a new summary from this one? Or just leave it as it is for now? (+ refs). Walrasiad (talk) 23:06, 26 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Agree. History section should move into its own article. The history section in this article should be summarized based on what we currently have rather than reverting back to what was. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:21, 27 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Indeed, I'll condense it shortly, splitting done, tremendous work Walras.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 11:39, 28 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Etymology

The article says "The probable origin of the name is from the Berber (Amazigh) words mur (n) akush . . . which means "Land of God". The word mur is used now in Berber mostly in the feminine form tamurt." But of the two words, mur and akush, which means 'land' and which means 'God'? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Linguistatlunch (talk • contribs) 11:43, 23 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemurbaby (talk · contribs) 03:24, 24 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments

  • Hi Bloefeld, I'll be reviewing this over the next few days. Thanks for bringing such an important African city article up for GA. If you have your own African city GA review itch to scratch, I'd be glad for your experienced eyes on my Ambohimanga World Heritage Site article. Back to you hopefully tonight. - Lemurbaby (talk) 03:24, 24 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Reserved yours for review, probably best I review that when you've done this! Yes this article has been extremely well-researched and I'm confident that it does the city justice.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 15:12, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! And feel free to take some time to review Ambohimanga. I'm actually going to be in Madagascar from June 30 to July 14 (and taking photos / gathering archival info for articles when not hitting the beaches and hiking for lemurs!) so I won't be able to respond to that article's review until mid-July. Lemurbaby (talk) 19:32, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I see, can we get this review done before you go then?♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 06:00, 27 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • Remove the two references from the lead to include them (and the info they cite) in the body of the article
  • "the city became known for its "Seven Saints"" - beginning around what century?
  • Done

Etymology

  • "interregnum of Mohammed Ben Aarafa" - add when this was
  • Done

History

  • "cousin of Yusuf ibn Tashfin" add a title or other reference to briefly inform the reader who ibn Tashfin is
  • Clarified
  • The explanation provided is still not clear for me. Can you explain here who this person is and why he's important, and maybe we can try together to find the right way to phrase it in the article?
I added that he was an Almoravid king
  • "Yusuf ibn Tashfin completed the mosque" - which mosque?
  • The first mosque built by his father is given now
  • Could you add the name of the mosque into the sentence cited above please?
  • this looks good
  • "As a trading center, Marrakesh had once influenced political polarization of the western Maghreb." - I'm not quite clear what's meant here
  • Clarified
  • I still don't understand why or how Marrakesh influenced political polarization - in what sense was there polarization?
  • I'm removing this. The information might fit here if it is explained differently.
  • "The Portuguese had installed trading posts in numerous Muslim towns in the south including Azemmour in 1486 and Safi in 1488 and others, later." I'd recommend more explicitly explaining how this relates to Marrakesh.
  • With your changes, I still don't see how this relates to Marrakesh.
I'm getting a sense that Marrakech had a role to play in the establishment of the Western Sahara as a political entity, but it's not clear. I'm removing this whole section until it can be developed further.
  • The section on the seven saints is a bit unclear. I'd recommend a little more background on how many Muslims in Morocco traditionally venerated particular mystics and make pilgrimages to their tombs, then explain the relationship (if any) that these particular seven saints had to Marrakesh (did they live and preach there in their lifetimes?). Mention when Moulay Ismail reigned to help give a timeline, and also discuss which saints were moved there and when. You have six saints listed - can you add the seventh?
  • I have done the needful. But no data on number of visitors is available.
  • We still need a sentence or two to explain the importance of saints and pilgrimage in Moroccan Sufi Islam. What are the dates used here? Some are a single year and others are date ranges.
This is still light on explanation, but I've made some changes that I think will make it easier for the casual reader to understand the importance of this tradition.
  • "Europeans were not permitted to enter the city" - was this because of its holy status? If so, this line could be moved to the end of the preceding paragraph
  • Clarified
  • It's still not clear why this restriction was in effect. What was the reason?
  • While we still don't know why, the way its worded now makes that less important. I assume it is for religious reasons and moved the sentence to the end of the previous paragraph because it didn't seem related to the information in the paragraph where it was before.
  • "the victory of the Mangin column over the al-Hiba forces" - It would be good to clarify whether the Mangin column was French
  • It was the French column. Made changes.
  • "France, who agreed to terminate its Moroccan Protectorate" - in what year?
  • Elaborated
  • We still need the year when the protectorate ended
  • I added this
  • "disastrous situation in Indochina" - I'd recommend replacing this subjective description with a brief summary of what exactly was going wrong there
  • Word "disastrous" has been replaced by war and internal link to Indo China War has been made and also clarifications provided
  • Regarding the bombing, it would be good to mention who claimed responsibility (or that no one did, if this is the case) and the reason given, if any
  • This information could not be located in any reference
  • I found it in two seconds on Google. Please add the information as requested.
  • Added

Geography and climate

  • Here you describe what the High Atlas is - it would be good to explain this on the first appearance of the term
  • Elaborated

Economy

  • "Despite the financial crisis..." - are you referring to the global crisis since 2008, or one within Morocco? Clarify location and starting year
  • Changed to economic crisis in the world
  • "as of April 2012 it was about 45% complete" - is there more recent information on this?
  • No further information is available

General

  • Make sure all dates use consistent formatting, either month-day-year or day-month-year
  • Verified.
  • I found an instance of this - please check again

Royal palace

  • Explain the meaning of the term zellij
  • Explained

Bahia palace

  • "Upon the death of Bou-Ahmed" in what year?
  • Details provided

Ben Youssef Mosque

  • "rebuilt by Saadian Sultan " when?
  • Mentioned now.
  • "are also replicated in the Ben Youssef Madrasa" - the citation at the end here needs a page number
  • Done

Saadian Tombs

  • briefly explain why Ahmad al-Mansur is important
  • Done
  • I don't see what explanation's been given here
I added that he was a sultan

Seven Saints Tombs

  • "The spiritual tour... al-Suhayl." Please reword this - the wording and organization of this section are unclear
  • Reworded

Dar Si Said Museum

  • "brother of Bou-Ahmed, Sisi Said" - explain why these people are important
  • Done.

General

  • Please review the entire article and apply a consistent standard for italicization of foreign language words. Either italicize them on every occasion, never, or on the first instance only, but apply the same system throughout.
  • Hopefully done
  • I found an instance of a non-italicized foreign word - please check again
  • Please write out numbers from zero to nine, and use numerals for numbers 10 or higher
  • Done
  • Please remove over-linking throughout: link a term only on its first use in the lead, first use in the body and first use in an image caption
  • Done
  • Please review all the references to make sure p= is used for single pages and pp= is used for page ranges
  • Some of the references have been reformatted and page numbers are indicated as suggested
  • Looks good

Points have been addressed I believe.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 09:37, 1 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • I have addressed all the additional issues raised by you. If there are any left it would be by oversight. Pl mention them so that correction can be done. Thanks.--Nvvchar. 21:19, 1 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for being so responsive, Nvvchar. I'm now in Madagascar where I have intermittent access to internet. I will most likely complete the review early next week. Thanks for your patience. Lemurbaby (talk) 06:23, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • File:El_Badi_Palace_by_Adriaen_Matham_1640.jpg needs US copyright info
Not sure which image you are referring to, if it's problematic please remove it.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:03, 10 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I removed it.
  • There are many references that don't have corresponding anchors. This is probably a matter of not consistently using the "harv" reference format, or else inconsistency in reference info. For example, ref 4 is listed as Searbright in the references section and Seabright in the bibliography section. Here's the full list of refs with "anchor problems": 4, 7, 12, 16, 19, 21, 27, 29, 32, 36, 41, 43, 44, 56, 58, 69, 75, 76, 86, 90, 91, 92, 93, 96, 102, 107, 110, 111, 114, 115, 118, 118, 121, 122, 123, 127, 128, 129, 131, 139, 142, 144, 147, 148, 151, 152, 153, 155, 157, 159, 160
I believe Nvv and I added those by mistake in the early days of us using sfn and not knowing that you have to add a | between each surname in the sfn note. For double authors Nvv place a | between the surnames in the sfn notes. When you click the author and page note in the refs it should anchor to the books further down. Remember this for future articles and chek to see that when you click the sfn note it takes you to the book, will save time later that way! Sorting now.
The other issue seems to be SFN refs without a year, and inconsistent years or spelling of the author's name between the citation and the SFN. I'm going through the remaining 15 or so that are still coming up as errors and adding/fixing the year and fixing the spelling of the authors' name to ensure the consistency. This would be another detail to check on the Paris article before nominating it. Lemurbaby (talk) 05:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a page number to the reference following this quote: "a drum that beats an African identity into the complex soul of Morocco."

If you google that quote you'll find that the page number isn't available in the Marrakech: the red city - Barnaby Rogerson, Stephen Lavington book.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:03, 10 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • A page number is also needed for the ref after the sentence: "Marrakesh is one of the great citadels of the Islamic world."
Again not available, same book
  • What is "Shifa"? - "Kadi of Cueta (1083-1149), a theologian and author of Shifa"
Again I can't locate it because you haven't structured these latest comments, if its problematic please remove.
  • Thanks for your edits
  • "until the designated sultan Abd al-Aziz became of age" - is there an article for this person? The current link is to a general article about the Arabic name, not a specific person
Can't find the sentence but the person I believe is Abu Faris Abdul Aziz I of Morocco, please pipe this.
Thanks for making the fix
  • "many European, Arabic and Indian film stars" - page number for this ref?
Again, not available
  • Thanks for verifying
  • "Tajines may also be basted with a Moroccan ghee that has a flavor similar to blue cheese." let's add a ref for this
Added.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:03, 10 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • We also need references for the sister cities
Can't find a reliable source on that one.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:16, 10 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'll hide it for now, until the information can be verified

Thank you for such a vigorous review of this. Normally I would consider it rather picky, but given that I think this has FA potential I see your review as a positive thing and Nvv and myself much appreciate the time you've spent on this. I believe everything has been addressed now, aside from the one or two minor things I couldn't locate and ask you to fix.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:20, 10 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Blofeld, I appreciate you and Nvv putting so much time and effort into this article. I saw you two were thinking of tackling Paris next. I'd suggest requesting a copy edit before nomination since this one did need some prose and grammar fixes that a copy editor could make, which would speed up the GA. Lemurbaby (talk) 05:58, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thankyou! Well, my articles usually do get several pair of eyes reading over them, and without meaning to blow my own trumpet, I often get requests to copyedit the work of others before nominating for FA which has produced a number of FAs in the past so my writing skills can't be that awful!♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 06:21, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I know you're a solid editor, and you've contributed so much great work on Wikipedia. This was one of those articles that had bits and pieces contributed by many people, and it was very long, so it's only natural for it to be susceptible to some bits here and there that could stand to be improved. The Paris article will be the same way. It's certainly no comment on the quality of your contributions that these types of articles (or most, for that matter) benefit from a copy edit. I'm grateful for the work you and Nvv have done and continue to do here... really critical and high quality work. Please keep it up! Lemurbaby (talk) 19:27, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Timeline of Marrakesh

What is missing from the city timeline? Please add relevant content. Thank you. -- M2545 (talk) 11:22, 19 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Another article for Medina of Marrakesh

There is a need for creating another article about the Medina of Marrakesh which is now a world heritage site. It is strange that there is such an article in other languages and not in English wikipedia. 17:54, 4 November 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdeaitali (talk • contribs)

Condense/summarize "landmarks" sections?

The "landmarks" and "museums" sections are virtually duplicated at the Landmarks of Marrakesh page, which partly undermines the usefulness of that second page since most of the content is already here. This creates at least a partial content fork (WP:CONTENTFORK), which among other consequences makes it harder to keep information consistent across several pages, because any fixes or improvements needed on one page may need to be applied to the other page(s) too -- while nonetheless sorting through minor differences (as I recently had to do to fix some mistakes about the Royal Palace). Since this is a general page about the city and since these sections take up quite a bit of space here, I'd like to suggest that they be condensed to short summaries. For example, I'd recommend condensing the "Mosques" section to just one or two paragraphs which link to the relevant main pages, instead of having multiple subsections about individual monuments. The same can be done for "Palaces and riads", "Tombs", and "Museums". Future details can be added to Landmarks of Marrakesh instead, or to the relevant main pages of individual monuments, etc.
Since this would be a significant change, I wanted to see if other editors agree with this? R Prazeres (talk) 08:44, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I think this is a good idea. This article is currently a bit long (~64kb readable prose size), so it would benefit from some condensing. WeirdMatter (talk) 17:51, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, I finally have time to come back to this so I'll start doing some of that now. R Prazeres (talk) 18:39, 26 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 31 March 2022

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Not moved. (non-admin closure) Garnarblarnar (talk) 00:07, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Marrakesh → Marrakech – Marrakech gives 248 million search results on google whilst Marrakesh gives just 21.6 million. The common name seems to be Marrakech, what do you think? Jishiboka1 (talk) 02:37, 31 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes it is. "Marrakesh" is the English spelling, "Marrakech" is the French spelling (as explained e.g. here). It is true some English sources choose to use French spelling, but those same sources also tend to Frenchify/nativize all locational spellings, e.g. sources which spell "Marrakech" instead of "Marrakesh" will also spell "Fès" instead of "Fez". So you will either find Marrakesh-Fez pairings or Marrakech-Fès pairings, but you won't likely find Marrakech-Fez pairings. As for ngrams being tied, well, I reported that ten years ago (oh dear, it's been that long?) Walrasiad (talk) 22:44, 31 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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