User contributions for 174.54.144.242

19 June 2013

• 17:0417:04, 19 June 2013 diff hist 0 Defiance (TV series) →Votans: 2nd para, 2 instances: correct name of one of the Votan suns is "Sulos" not "Solus"

6 June 2013

• 16:5116:51, 6 June 2013 diff hist −1 Glastonbury →Notable people: minor edit, typo: "...directed her to take on S. Govan *has* her teacher" → "has" to "as"
• 14:5514:55, 6 June 2013 diff hist 0 Glastonbury Abbey →Modern history: minor edit - typo - 'turst' to 'trust'

21 January 2013

• 17:3317:33, 21 January 2013 diff hist −4 Variable bitrate →Multi-pass encoding and single-pass encoding: minor edit - grammar, inappropriate use of article "the" before "constant bitrate encoding" ("CBR" is general, not specific--i.e. doesn't refer to some specific sort of "CBR")

16 November 2012

• 14:1814:18, 16 November 2012 diff hist 0 Balefire →Description: " "After", the slain...at seeing them alive" is a run-on sentence; edited for grammar and readability. (Nice content otherwise, though. Great series.)
• 14:1314:13, 16 November 2012 diff hist −1 Balefire →Description: correct grammatical usage is "example of" not "example for"
• 14:1214:12, 16 November 2012 diff hist −6 Balefire →Description: "Use present tense to describe the events that take place within the literary texts" (ref: http://www.uscupstate.edu/academics/arts_sciences/languages_literature/default.aspx?id=35154)
• 13:3013:30, 16 November 2012 diff hist 0 Balefire →Description: minor grammatical: punctuation for readability (too many commas--what my teacher used to call 'comma-crazy')

27 October 2012

• 20:2820:28, 27 October 2012 diff hist +112 Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe Undid revision 519770069 by Isoruku (talk)

26 October 2012

• 18:3718:37, 26 October 2012 diff hist +1 Cinderella →After Happy Ever After: grammatical: 'whom' not 'who'; as in, 'with whom they flirt'