User contributions for AlexEng

22 August 2024

• 04:0404:04, 22 August 2024 diff hist −2 m Concerns and controversies at the 2024 Summer Olympics →Fake threat videos: remove WP:SCAREQUOTES
• 04:0004:00, 22 August 2024 diff hist +411 Talk:Tim Walz →Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 21 August 2024: it's appropriate for this section
• 03:5503:55, 22 August 2024 diff hist +22 Tim Walz →Military service: wikilink stolen valor

2 August 2024

• 07:4707:47, 2 August 2024 diff hist −389 Stormy Daniels–Donald Trump scandal →Alleged 2006 encounter: Unnecessary WP:MANDY. This isn't a newspaper.
• 07:4107:41, 2 August 2024 diff hist +478 List of nicknames used by Donald Trump →Other people: The payment was proven in Prosecution of Donald Trump in New York. See WP:ALLEGED and WP:BLPCRIME. The affair itself is more murky, so we can err on the side of caution and refer to that as alleged.
• 06:5006:50, 2 August 2024 diff hist +294 Hannibal Directive →UN Commission report: Previous prose failed verification. Rewording to more specifically outline what the report contains, as described by both sources cited.

14 June 2024

• 02:2202:22, 14 June 2024 diff hist +524 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents →Being harassed by User:Jd101991: Reply Tag: Reply
• 01:5301:53, 14 June 2024 diff hist +824 Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard →Elon Musk: I don't think we need to discuss editor behavior here, or maybe at all. Let the discussion on talk page continue.
• 01:3301:33, 14 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Talk:Hunter Biden →Convicted felon in opening sentence: reformat to bullet rather than indent
• 01:3201:32, 14 June 2024 diff hist +678 Talk:Hunter Biden →Convicted felon in opening sentence: no
• 01:0801:08, 14 June 2024 diff hist −27 Elon Musk Removing wording attributed to Errol Musk but represented as fact in a WP:BLP per my comment on the talk page. Please discuss.
• 01:0601:06, 14 June 2024 diff hist +1,245 Talk:Elon Musk →"In one incident, after having called a boy whose father had committed suicide "stupid", Elon was thrown down concrete steps.": needs to be removed
• 00:4000:40, 14 June 2024 diff hist +85 Misinformation in the Israel–Hamas war →Sexual violence: Adding "See also" template for a more complete discussion of the topic in Sexual and gender-based violence in the 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel outside of just the Screams Without Words report
• 00:3000:30, 14 June 2024 diff hist +19 Misinformation in the Israel–Hamas war →Misrepresentation photos and videos: Modifying statements about ZAKA to better match the source material. Also removed the bit about ultra-orthodox members, since it doesn't seem to be relevant, instead added the word "community" to clarify that it's an NGO, as shown on the subject page ZAKA.

12 June 2024

• 23:4823:48, 12 June 2024 diff hist −11 Cyberpunk 2077: Phantom Liberty The expansion is not standalone; it requires integration with the base game. In fact, you can't even begin the storyline of the expansion until you have progressed to a certain point in the base game. More importantly, I don't see a source refer to this as a standalone expansion, so... WP:OR applies.
• 23:4523:45, 12 June 2024 diff hist +3 Cyberpunk 2077: Phantom Liberty →Development: The source has a typo in the transcript. You can see in the video on the same source link that Amatangelo is referring to "corporations," not "corporals." The latter is not a thing that exists in the Cyberpunk setting.
• 23:0623:06, 12 June 2024 diff hist +1,259 Talk:Rembrandt →Should the lead section state that Rembrandt is a 'Dutch Golden Age painter'?: +change; the sentence could use some clarification.

2 February 2024

• 02:3102:31, 2 February 2024 diff hist −12 m Reneé Rapp →Personal life: Improper use of MOS:BOLD

10 January 2024

• 00:5400:54, 10 January 2024 diff hist +417 Wikipedia:Requests for page protection/Increase →Gull: Requesting semi-protection of Gull. Tag: Twinkle
• 00:5300:53, 10 January 2024 diff hist +880 N User talk:2A00:23C8:9D87:6301:C949:1674:4B9:E90B Warning: Vandalism on Gull. current Tag: Twinkle
• 00:5200:52, 10 January 2024 diff hist −9 m Gull Reverted 2 edits by 2A00:23C8:9D87:6301:C949:1674:4B9:E90B (talk) to last revision by Jacona Tags: Twinkle Undo

5 November 2023

• 07:2207:22, 5 November 2023 diff hist +736 Talk:Al-Shifa Hospital →Survey: reply – that's besides the point
• 07:1507:15, 5 November 2023 diff hist +560 Talk:Who is a Jew? →Last paragraph in Lead: This does not belong in the lead
• 03:0903:09, 5 November 2023 diff hist +4 India–Sri Lanka relations →Development co-operation: wikilink Jayantha Perera as well
• 03:0703:07, 5 November 2023 diff hist +47 India–Sri Lanka relations →Development co-operation: Wikilink title and individual. Change name to proper name.

4 November 2023

• 23:3423:34, 4 November 2023 diff hist −56 Kupat Holim Meuhedet Delete phone extension (?) and copyedit. Also remove invalid reference and replace with cn.
• 23:2823:28, 4 November 2023 diff hist +7 Majdal Shams →Demography: Unnecessary paragraph break removed + copyedit.
• 23:2223:22, 4 November 2023 diff hist −109 Majdal Shams →Demography: This is an encyclopedia... relocating link to section hatnote. I'm also removing the dead link to the non-existent section in favor of a link to the base article.
• 23:1923:19, 4 November 2023 diff hist +1 m Majdal Shams →Demography: "adopted" -> "had opted"
• 23:1923:19, 4 November 2023 diff hist −6 Majdal Shams Doesn't make sense to describe the town as Druze. The residents are largely Druze, which is indicated in the following sentence.
• 23:0623:06, 4 November 2023 diff hist +736 Talk:Al-Shifa Hospital →Survey: the new option provided by Novem Linguae is the most reasonable

2 November 2023

• 06:0506:05, 2 November 2023 diff hist +77 Israel–Hamas war →11 October: Attributing white phosphorus use claim to HRW. Neither WP nor Reuters provided independent verification, but reported on HRW's analysis.

23 October 2023

• 05:0705:07, 23 October 2023 diff hist +3 m United Nations Security Council Resolution 242 →Interpretations: missing "of"

14 October 2023

• 09:1009:10, 14 October 2023 diff hist +974 Talk:List of major terrorist incidents →Discussion: definitely yes, and I'm not convinced by any of the counter points.
• 08:5808:58, 14 October 2023 diff hist +434 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →Neither side has "Support"?: patience
• 08:5608:56, 14 October 2023 diff hist −20 Israel–Hamas war →Unconfirmed eyewitness reports: Just realized that the prior article by CNN is not even mentioned in this section, so removed the start of the sentence to preserve meaning.
• 08:5208:52, 14 October 2023 diff hist +4 Israel–Hamas war →Unconfirmed eyewitness reports: Reword to match phrasing in the source. We do not have a source that claims specifically that CNN "backtracked". We can't infer that based on the content of another CNN article without violating WP:OR.
• 08:4708:47, 14 October 2023 diff hist +31 Israel–Hamas war →Unconfirmed eyewitness reports: reword to match phrasing in the source
• 08:1508:15, 14 October 2023 diff hist +17 Israel–Hamas war Table of contents is getting out of hand...
• 07:0907:09, 14 October 2023 diff hist −9 Lions' Den (militant group) Correct surname to al-Nabulsi. Source also says he was shot in August, not July, so we can remove the month entirely.
• 06:4806:48, 14 October 2023 diff hist +4 Israel–Hamas war →Name: Inadvertently broke wikilink and italics. Not actually sure if italics are appropriate here, so feel free to check my work.
• 06:4606:46, 14 October 2023 diff hist +7 Israel–Hamas war →Name: First, remove over-bolding per WP:AVOIDBOLD. Second, the cited sources are not calling the conflict the third intifada. They are speculating about whether or not it could lead to a third intifada. Previous language was functionally WP:OR.
• 06:4006:40, 14 October 2023 diff hist −8 m Israel–Hamas war fix link to modified section name
• 06:4006:40, 14 October 2023 diff hist −15 Israel–Hamas war →Nomenclature: Nomenclature -> Name. Copyedit for readability as well
• 06:3106:31, 14 October 2023 diff hist −1 Israel–Hamas war Rockets are the not the same thing as missiles (e.g. missiles can change trajectory mid-flight). The source specifically says "3,000 rockets".
• 06:2506:25, 14 October 2023 diff hist +12 Israel–Hamas war More readable language considering the context of the previous sentence

8 October 2023

• 02:1302:13, 8 October 2023 diff hist −28 m User:AlexEng/COI →External Relationships: Reword intro current
• 02:1102:11, 8 October 2023 diff hist +8 m User:AlexEng/Bias →Known Biases: Reword entry about the Holocaust current
• 02:0802:08, 8 October 2023 diff hist +16 m User:AlexEng/Bias →Statement of bias: reword intro
• 02:0602:06, 8 October 2023 diff hist +87 Weeping Wall Used also to refer to the Western Wall (see article body) current