User contributions for H.G.Milliner

25 June 2011

• 15:2215:22, 25 June 2011 diff hist +7 Gazeta Tema Simplied 2nd para of into and para on pricing by using Anglophone English vocabulary and grammar

20 June 2011

• 10:2610:26, 20 June 2011 diff hist −26 Chuka Umunna In Infobox, changed leader of Labour Party from 'Gordon Banks' to 'Gordon Brown'. Reason: Fact

23 May 2011

• 14:2614:26, 23 May 2011 diff hist −4 m Joe Meek Made TV programme titles consistently italicised. Removed redlinks. Added wikilinks.

12 May 2011

• 10:4610:46, 12 May 2011 diff hist +278 Yutong In 'Places of operation', changed 'Macedonia (since 2011)' to 'Macedonia ((from 2011)'. It reads better in English in 2011 and will not be awkward in (for example) 2021. Expanded with ref.
• 00:5600:56, 12 May 2011 diff hist +339 Mongolian People's Party Updated party's name with reversion to the priginal & ref.

24 April 2011

• 20:3820:38, 24 April 2011 diff hist +15 m Murray Gold Updated broadcast of 'Kafka the Musical'

19 April 2011

• 11:5811:58, 19 April 2011 diff hist +115 First Folio Insrted ref required for compilation of first folio. Fixed redlink on Meisei Copy. Removed 'so called' - reason: meaningless as the words are italicised.

6 April 2011

• 18:5218:52, 6 April 2011 diff hist +1,063 Leonid Korotkov Removed redlink to defeated election opponent (para 1). Added Korotkov's acquittal+ref. And sacking of Korotkov's successor+ref.

3 April 2011

• 16:4516:45, 3 April 2011 diff hist +1,243 Caisse des dépôts et consignations Removed currently from 'is currently chairman...' Added ref for history para. Updated with Transdev merger with Veolia Environnement. Added English corporate website.

2 April 2011

• 08:2808:28, 2 April 2011 diff hist −71 Agentura.Ru Changed tenses to past where appropriate - the Wikipedia's meant to be in Anglophone English. Fixed grammar etc. Fixed redlink tp non-existent entry. Made spelling of Agentura.Ru consistent.
• 06:1706:17, 2 April 2011 diff hist +84 Agentura.Ru Added Agentura's Facebook account

21 March 2011

• 19:2719:27, 21 March 2011 diff hist +1,530 Dupuytren's contracture Added ref to replace 'citation required' Epanded Vitamin E under 'Alternative therapies' with ref.

19 March 2011

• 19:1519:15, 19 March 2011 diff hist +465 Dupuytren's contracture Expanded on roll-out of Xiapex. Removed Garrod's knuckle redlink.
• 16:5516:55, 19 March 2011 diff hist +563 Dupuytren's contracture Renamed 'Collagenase' as 'Drug Therapy' - means more. Removed Xiaflex from 'Alternative therapies' - it is a licensed drug. Added European licence.

12 March 2011

• 11:3711:37, 12 March 2011 diff hist −10 Misha Glenny Second thoughts on McMafia sentence - readability
• 11:3411:34, 12 March 2011 diff hist −18 Misha Glenny Removed 'His latest book' (reads like promotional matter and changed tense of references to to the preterite - this is an enclyopedia.

1 March 2011

• 11:2711:27, 1 March 2011 diff hist +7 m Radio Slovakia International Changed broadcaster's own website to current url
• 11:2311:23, 1 March 2011 diff hist −296 Radio Slovakia International Updated with end of shortwave broadcasting in last para (with ref). Added reflist and heading

8 February 2011

• 11:4711:47, 8 February 2011 diff hist +28 Executive arrangements changed ref for local government act from polish website to full text at national archive - reason: official text

1 February 2011

• 12:2212:22, 1 February 2011 diff hist −75 Balkan Mountains In first para of Geography section, replaced 'In geological term Stara Planina is a young mountain...' with 'Geologically, Stara Planina a 'young' part of the [[Alps...' Reason: English+accuracy.

31 January 2011

• 09:0709:07, 31 January 2011 diff hist +31 Denise Black Second thoughts on grammar.
• 08:5308:53, 31 January 2011 diff hist +2,527 Denise Black Tidied up a bit. Expanded with biographic details and 2010 activities (and refs). Added External Link

30 January 2011

• 15:0215:02, 30 January 2011 diff hist +6 Selfridges Removed 'famous' from into para. Reason: If it's famous, there's no need to say so.) Removed red wikilink to Francis Swales

7 January 2011

• 16:2916:29, 7 January 2011 diff hist −10 QVC (British TV channel) Inserted comma
• 16:2416:24, 7 January 2011 diff hist +476 QVC (British TV channel) Updated HQ and studios location with ref.Tried to cut some of the worst PR gloss - clarified ownership and introduced early losses - but ran out of time.
• 15:2615:26, 7 January 2011 diff hist +793 Marco Polo House Expanded last para
• 14:2214:22, 7 January 2011 diff hist +29 Marco Polo House Added area aof Chiswick Park Building 8 to be occupied by qvc
• 11:5611:56, 7 January 2011 diff hist +37 Marco Polo House →Possible demolition
• 11:5011:50, 7 January 2011 diff hist +1 Marco Polo House →Possible demolition: Corrested spelling of Discovery Channel
• 11:4611:46, 7 January 2011 diff hist +1,129 Marco Polo House Expanded para 1 of 'Possible demolition' with occupant's destination after 2011 move. Added ref needed for possible demolition in same section's para 2. Expanded para. Added reflist.

30 December 2010

• 11:0911:09, 30 December 2010 diff hist +145 Rola Added 'Rolling highway' to Rola disambiguation. 'Rola' is becoming more common in describing freight transport. Deleted redlink to Rola, Bangladesh

25 December 2010

• 14:4514:45, 25 December 2010 diff hist +521 Thought for the Day Updated pope's broadcast para to from future tense to past tense. Reason: date. Added refs.
• 13:5213:52, 25 December 2010 diff hist +304 Indarjit Singh Fixed redlinks. Added ref for 'best known Sikh in the country'

24 December 2010

• 20:1320:13, 24 December 2010 diff hist +168 Marmalade Records Fixed my own style for consistency.
• 19:5219:52, 24 December 2010 diff hist +2,879 Marmalade Records Reworded the only pargraph to make it closer to English - reason: record labels don't 'close'. Added reason for end (and ref). Corrected 'The Blossom Toes' to 'Blossom Toes' - reason: fact.

17 December 2010

• 17:4517:45, 17 December 2010 diff hist +187 Yle TV1 Fixed redlinks.
• 17:3317:33, 17 December 2010 diff hist +292 Yle TV1 Corrected YLE from being 'corporation' to a 'public broadcaster' - for consistency with other YLE Wikipedia entries. Tidied up History section (with ref)

15 December 2010

• 19:2619:26, 15 December 2010 diff hist −24 Peter Bazalgette Deleted 'resultantly' - reason: no such word. Deleted 'a series of' - reason: unneeded verbiage. Besides, the programmes were all separate series - and ran to a number of series each.

7 December 2010

• 18:2118:21, 7 December 2010 diff hist +284 Altai Krai Inserted refs for Barnaul and foundation. No visible 'citation neededs' to delete. Fixed red links to 'Coat of Arms', 'Governor', 'Altai Krai Leg... Assembly' and 'Charter...Altai Krai'

6 December 2010

• 18:3918:39, 6 December 2010 diff hist +1,473 Brian Cox (physicist) Updated Infinite Monkey Cage reference - with refs. Replaced (broken) ref 3. Tidied up reference to Huw Wheldon lecture - 2 'issues' in sentence. Added Stargazing +ref. & iBook ref.

5 December 2010

• 13:3713:37, 5 December 2010 diff hist +1 Gazprom-Media →Paper publications
• 13:3713:37, 5 December 2010 diff hist +44 Gazprom-Media Reworded 'Seven Days TV Program' to Seven Days (TV guide). Reason: Sense in English. Removed red wikilinks. Reason: Visual. Corrected 'Director Generals' to 'Directors General'

31 October 2010

• 20:2120:21, 31 October 2010 diff hist +546 Transnistria Simplified word order in para 1. Simplified first sentence of para 2 to obviate the repetition of initials. Reason: readability. Expanded on opposition 'problems'

25 October 2010

• 12:2812:28, 25 October 2010 diff hist −46 Ulaanbaatar Removed city's name in undisplayable characters. It is shown in the info block next to the intro para.
• 12:2312:23, 25 October 2010 diff hist +104 Ulaanbaatar Updated ID of Ulan Bator's mayor. With ref. Cleaned up English at end of para.

14 October 2010

• 18:0018:00, 14 October 2010 diff hist +102 T.K. Maxx Moved ref to end of list of countries in which the company has stores - rather than after the penultimate country - after checking that ref covers Poland). Updates no. of stores.
• 13:2613:26, 14 October 2010 diff hist +2 INS Viraat No edit summary
• 13:2313:23, 14 October 2010 diff hist +307 INS Viraat Added required ref. Reworded 'current round of repairs' to 'that year's round of repairs'.

10 October 2010

• 16:1316:13, 10 October 2010 diff hist +2 Tbilisi Changed 'services the city...' to 'serves the city...' Reason: English - 'to service' means to maintain equipment or of a bull to have sexual intercourse with a cow.
• 13:4813:48, 10 October 2010 diff hist +58 Orange UK Added wikilinks to T Mobile UK and Deutsche Telekom