User contributions for Yogabear2020

24 May 2024

• 21:3921:39, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 A Number →Characters: ce, changed verb tense to past in "had his son cloned", b/c takes place before action of play Tag: Visual edit
• 21:3721:37, 24 May 2024 diff hist +3 m A Number →Characters: ce, amended "hate" to "to hate" to clarify parallel structure Tag: Visual edit
• 21:3621:36, 24 May 2024 diff hist +5 A Number Changing short description from "Play written by Caryl Churchill" to "2002 play written by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 21:3521:35, 24 May 2024 diff hist +11 A Number tweaked first sentence of lead, added "British playwright" and deleted "English" before "play" (as for other Churchill play lead descriptions) Tag: Visual edit
• 21:2821:28, 24 May 2024 diff hist +57 Blue Heart (play) →Reception: ce, added transitional text to break up long quote in second paragraph, and to clarify the comment about first play (vs second play, in next sentence) Tag: Visual edit
• 21:2321:23, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Blue Heart (play) →Plot: tweaked first sentence, second paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 21:2021:20, 24 May 2024 diff hist −1 Blue Heart (play) →Productions: ce, deleted comma, not needed Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1721:17, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Blue Heart (play) sp "one act" to "one-act", first sentence in lead Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1421:14, 24 May 2024 diff hist +8 Blue Heart (play) tweaked wording of third sentence in lead Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1221:12, 24 May 2024 diff hist +26 Blue Heart (play) Changing short description from "Two one-act plays" to "Two one-act plays (1997) by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 21:1021:10, 24 May 2024 diff hist +6 m Blue Heart (play) →Plot: ce, sp "wish-fulfillment", added verb to second clause (to complete series of indep. clauses) Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5013:50, 24 May 2024 diff hist +171 Blue Heart (play) revised description of second play, to add the idea about repeated random language Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4613:46, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Blue Heart (play) →Reception: replaced curly quotes w/single quotes and space per MOS:QWQ
• 13:3613:36, 24 May 2024 diff hist −2 Blue Heart (play) ce, punc around "Blue Kettle" (comma before to complete parenthetical), and tweaked for wording "women believe him and find ways to confirm that he is indeed their son" (deleted "truly") Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3213:32, 24 May 2024 diff hist +12 Blue Heart (play) tweaked lead, wording, singular object for singular verb, "is two one-act plays" -> "is a series of two one-act plays" Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3013:30, 24 May 2024 diff hist +8 Blue Heart (play) →Productions: tweak clarity "followed" -> "and was followed" Tag: Visual edit
• 13:2913:29, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 Blue Heart (play) →Productions: ce "a" to "the" small British touring company Tag: Visual edit
• 13:2813:28, 24 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Blue Heart (play) →Productions: deleted semicolon, not needed: in context of sentence, "Out of Joint" is essential= which small British touring company? Tag: Visual edit
• 13:2213:22, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 Blue Heart (play) →Plot: ce replaced hyphen with spaced en dash Tag: Visual edit

23 May 2024

• 13:2513:25, 23 May 2024 diff hist +51 Mad Forest Adding local short description: "1990 play by Caryl Churchill", overriding Wikidata description "play written by Caryl Churchill" current Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 13:2513:25, 23 May 2024 diff hist −1 Mad Forest ce, split first sentence in two: written by, in collaboration with
• 13:0713:07, 23 May 2024 diff hist +76 Mad Forest amended lead description of writing process, as per body of article Tag: Visual edit
• 13:0013:00, 23 May 2024 diff hist +21 Serious Money →External links: added template for {{Caryl Churchill}} = nav box list of works
• 12:5612:56, 23 May 2024 diff hist −5 Serious Money Changing short description from "Satirical play by Caryl Churchill" to "1987 play by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 12:5512:55, 23 May 2024 diff hist −8 Top Girls Changing short description from "1982 play written by Caryl Churchill" to "1982 play by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 12:5512:55, 23 May 2024 diff hist +51 Cloud 9 (play) Adding local short description: "1979 play by Caryl Churchill", overriding Wikidata description "play written by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 12:5412:54, 23 May 2024 diff hist +51 Light Shining in Buckinghamshire Adding short description: "1976 play by Caryl Churchill" current Tag: Shortdesc helper
• 12:5412:54, 23 May 2024 diff hist +51 Owners (play) Adding short description: "1972 play by Caryl Churchill" current Tag: Shortdesc helper

22 May 2024

• 15:1815:18, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Seven Jewish Children →Other productions: ce, tweaked quote for Heneghan, to avoid mixing present/past verbs and Caps in quote, and deleted errant full stop Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0415:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −2 Seven Jewish Children →Criticism: ce, grammar, changed from "said it was" to "said that", b/c followed by full complex clause, needs "that" Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0115:01, 22 May 2024 diff hist +13 Seven Jewish Children →Criticism: ce, verb tense "calls" to "called", amended with spaced en-dashes in Goldberg quote (rather than double-hyphen), adding nbsp after ellipsis in Phillips quote
• 14:4514:45, 22 May 2024 diff hist +31 m Seven Jewish Children →Criticism: ce, tweaked sentence for punctuation, adding "this negative assessment" to create full clause after semicolon Tag: Visual edit
• 14:3914:39, 22 May 2024 diff hist +6 Seven Jewish Children →Criticism: ce for clarity, order of ideas (moved parenthetical to beginning, to push together subject and verb), amended "typical" to "that is typical" (full phrase for restrictive clause, rather than elided), and moved punc outside quotes per MOS:LQ
• 14:1414:14, 22 May 2024 diff hist +39 Seven Jewish Children →Praise: ce, reordered sentence for clarity, added parenthetical "that critiqued the play as antisemitic" to provide context for "comments" (which were described in lede, but are actually discussed later in article), the reference for this is quote by Kushner/Solomon (and its ref)
• 14:0414:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Seven Jewish Children →Praise: moved full-stop outside quotation, per MOS:LQ Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4813:48, 22 May 2024 diff hist −18 m Seven Jewish Children →Praise: removed piped alt-text for link, for context/clarity (what 'Board of Directors'?), as full link-context given later in article
• 13:4213:42, 22 May 2024 diff hist +33 Seven Jewish Children →Praise: ce tweak for readability, added text to byline-transition, to break up blue links and provide context Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3913:39, 22 May 2024 diff hist +40 Seven Jewish Children →Praise: added transition words to provide context for direct quote (who said?), "The journalist Robert Mackey wrote that" Tag: Visual edit
• 13:2913:29, 22 May 2024 diff hist +1 Seven Jewish Children →Mission: updated pdf link, the previous was not found
• 13:2613:26, 22 May 2024 diff hist −3 Seven Jewish Children →Description: ce, adding semicolons for clauses in series, tweaked verbs, "another wondering" -> "another wonders", and "next are speaking" -> "next is speaking" (each antecedent is the singular 'family') Tag: Visual edit
• 13:1913:19, 22 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Seven Jewish Children →Description: ce verb tense, singular "family is hiding" Tag: Visual edit
• 12:4912:49, 22 May 2024 diff hist +91 Seven Jewish Children ce punctuation for run-on sentences (misplaced commas), adding transitional words to clarify opposing argument, changed indirect quote to direct (Kushner), and added text to first direct quote (same ideas, modified syntax) Tag: Visual edit
• 12:3812:38, 22 May 2024 diff hist +14 Seven Jewish Children more accurate, parag argues both critical views "of some", and supportive views 'of others' Tag: Visual edit
• 12:3412:34, 22 May 2024 diff hist +59 Seven Jewish Children Adding local short description: "2009 play written by Caryl Churchill", overriding Wikidata description "play written by Caryl Churchill" Tag: Shortdesc helper

8 May 2024

• 23:1523:15, 8 May 2024 diff hist 0 The Crack-Up →Essays: corrected order of letter titles current

30 April 2024

• 14:0914:09, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Global Slavery Index →Criticism: moved initial "however" inside sentence Tag: Visual edit
• 14:0714:07, 30 April 2024 diff hist +87 Global Slavery Index →Criticism: tweaked prose, in first paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 14:0014:00, 30 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Global Slavery Index →Criticism: tweaked, "Its" to "These" Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5913:59, 30 April 2024 diff hist +3 Global Slavery Index →Criticism: tweaked first sentence Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5713:57, 30 April 2024 diff hist +5 m Global Slavery Index →Criticism: tweaked intro to quote, from "writes" to "writes that" Tag: Visual edit