Jump to content

Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 16

Add links
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Archive 10←Archive 14Archive 15Archive 16Archive 17Archive 18→Archive 20
This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old.

August 2019

 Done I have gone through the article and fixed any problems that I saw. Tragically, the requesting user has since left Wikipedia over a dispute. PJvanMill)talk( 17:36, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done - fixed spelling and grammatical errors, removed irrelevant sections. werewolf (talk) 05:29, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
Essentially  Done. Struck the above entry. The above has been addressed (diff), and the article is presently a two-sentence stub (link). North America1000 05:15, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
information Note: I do not think this is a deletion candidate. The Jerusalem Post and Bangkok Post articles look to be reliable and significant coverage. This needs a lot of work on ref formatting and NPOV/excessive detail. PJvanMill (talk) 21:33, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
I did some citation cleanup so at least it doesn't look like a bunch of raw URLs. Normal Op (talk) 08:45, 27 August 2020 (UTC)

September 2019

Took a stab at copyediting but the article needs better sourcing and further editing Tvannsprecher (talk) 22:35, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Formatted the third reference somewhat better. The second one redirects to the originating site's mainpage. OwnstheBeagles (talk) 22:52, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done formatted bare urls, and several refs, couldn't find refs to others--Less Unless (talk) 10:33, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

October 2019

 Partly done - crr formatting of 2 bare urls --Less Unless (talk) 23:42, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Deleted large blocks of unreferenced, irrelevant text. Fixed the tone to some extant. The "History" section is yet to be fixed and the validity of its sole reference checked. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 18:09, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Cleaned up Important examples.--MarialeegRVT (talk) 05:38, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done — Removed some red links and fixed major ref errors. Ghostofakina (talk) 11:21, 18 October 2019 (UTC)
 Partly done Ref: Fixed error, added missing archive URL date. — WILDSTARtalk 22:03, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

November 2019

Possibly a FORK of Object-oriented programming. Normal Op (talk) 08:56, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
Red XN I've nominated this for deletion. PJvanMill)talk( 21:20, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
☒N Deleted Turned into a redirect. PJvanMill)talk( 23:08, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed references with bare URLs. Additional fixes made by other users/bots. — WILDSTARtalk 16:15, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Need more info... UB Blacephalon (talk) 15:59, 17 December 2019 (UTC)\
  • Free Territory: This article lacks secondary, scientific sources. The sources listed are almost exclusively political pamphlets that are obviously biased. The article itself was probably written as fanfiction and continues to be used as such. Sourced information on this civil war groups ethnic cleansing against the german-speaking menonite minority was recently replaced with additional quotes from anarchist propaganda literature. The lack of reputable sources and literature points towards another problem with the subject: The articles claim that the thing described was a state seems doubtfull. There may have been a militia and a warlord, but there are apparently no sources that indicate the existence of any institutions or anything else that would constitute a state or any society. tl;dr: This article seems to be fiction from the political fringes. -- Liberaler Humanist (talk) 15:05, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Could anyone proofread Kain Rivers? Basically, the article is about a Ukrainian singer, which, nevertheless supposedly got media coverage for 2018–2019 to be presented on the Wikipedia, is an orphan and a mess. There are several paragraphs about the Jewish film where the subject acted just a cameo or so, such ad-like bold sentences, like «This is an art “bomb” comparable to the "Schindler's List" by Steven Spielberg», with no actual critic references at hand. On top of that, the authors of the all «interwikie» articles about [[Kain Rivers]] are pretty strange newly registered users with minimum edits except as to [[Kain Rivers]] himself, while his article in Russian has been already deleted thrice for being an ad and spam with no encyclopedic notability (https://ru.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kain_Rivers&action=edit&redlink=1). -- pr12402, 14 November 2019
 Partly done I've removed the worst of it. I'm finding it difficult to evaluate whether the subject is even notable, as almost all of the sources are in Russian. PJvanMill (talk) 22:25, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

December 2019

 Not done I've proposed deletion. PJvanMill (talk) 12:41, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
information Note: The PROD tag has been contested, someone found 2 sources. PJvanMill (talk) 19:07, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done added more refs, slightly rephrased --Less Unless (talk) 12:51, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
Comment Looking at the user page of the creator, I see a pattern: ALL the seasons, each article consisting almost entirely of tables, sourced mostly to 'coludata.co.uk'. PJvanMill)talk( 00:54, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

January 2020

 Comment: Struck part of the above, as the article presently has nine inline citations (diff). North America1000 23:30, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Finished removing duplicate references. Ghostofakina (talk) 02:27, 27 January 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done - Fixed bare URL, replaced short blacklisted YouTube URL with full URL. -- WILDSTARtalk 21:56, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed bare external URLs, removed dead external link. -- WILDSTAR talk 12:53, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

Miscellaneous entries

 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:50, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 16:01, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done corrected reference errors Less Unless (talk) 13:06, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 18:56, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done by Andcentra Less Unless (talk) 14:07, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:07, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed references with bare URLs, plus general formatting cleanup. — WILDSTARtalk 13:07, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed reference with bare URL. — WILDSTARtalk 13:07, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done PJvanMill)talk( 22:49, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed references with citation errors, flagged deleted YouTube videos as dead links — WILDSTARtalk 03:45, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Not done Seems pretty neutral - I've removed what little non-neutral content I saw. Zezen: per Wikipedia's talk page guidelines, we cannot remove the word "FUCKING" from someone else's comments (at least not if it's used for emphasis). Also, this WikiProject deals primarily with content problems - we clean up articles, not talk pages, and screaming IPs are well outside of our scope. Kind regards from PJvanMill)talk( 12:35, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you for the detailed feedback, PJvanMill. I have thus learnt something wiki today. Bows, Zezen (talk) 18:11, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 09:30, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done by other editors - RJFJR and MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 18:45, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed by Dtt1 using reFill v2 — WILDSTARtalk 03:19, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed by Can I Log In using reFill v2 — WILDSTARtalk 03:19, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 13:39, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed References were there from day 1 (15:33, October 14, 2015). Can I Log In (talk) 17:24, 6 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done by Can I Log In.Less Unless (talk) 14:35, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
HLHJ, I'd say from looking at a few edits that the solution for most of this is simply the "undo" button (and manual undoing when the "undo" button doesn't work), with "please provide a source for this" resp. "adding the age at death there is not necessary" in the edit summary. If they keep doing it and being non-responsive, that would eventually be cause for a block. Suspiciously similar editors, by the way. Not sure if I'm helping, you've been here way longer than I have. ​​ PJvanMill)talk( 18:46, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, PJvanMill. Having been here a long time is not a guarantee of experience; I know little about cleanup. I'll wait a week for a response (that's tomorrow) and then look at some sort of semi-automated mass revert. Possibly a sock check would be in order too, I'm not sure. HLHJ (talk) 03:43, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi, PJvanMill. I went through all of Mr kindheart's edits you hadn't gone over, and fixed or reverted all but the age-at-death ones, and de-WP:COPYVIO'd Priscilla Baltimore and created it. Still more to go. HLHJ (talk) 15:14, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
 Done, that is the damage these accounts have done has been repaired. It remains to be seen if they can be convinced to give sources for the information they insert. PJvanMill)talk( 20:19, 22 August 2020 (UTC)
minus Removed Ghostofakina (talk) 08:59, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
 Completed — The BattyBot took care of the punctuation (apostrophes). — WILDSTARtalk 23:47, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Other improvements
Green tickY Removed red links from references, removed links to disambiguation pages, reduced no. of duplicate links. — WILDSTARtalk 00:07, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done by Tom.Reding and myself. Less Unless (talk) 20:56, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:35, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:35, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:35, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done TimSmit (talk) 14:44, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Malabo has some very inaccurate dates under History, e.g., that Equitorial Guinea was colonized in the 1960's and that Queen Isabel tried to regain control of the colony from the UK in 2018.
Djibrilla, the dates were changed in the latest edit by an account named Davvec, seemingly vandalism. Just go to the page history, click "undo" for that edit, and save. Kind regards from PJvanMill)talk( 17:09, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done Miriumjenkins (talk) 11:31, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:04, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
  • 2038 FIFA World Cup – It was changed from a redirect to an article only a couple days ago. It has been heavily edited by only one user, who only made their account in July, and has received multiple notices in their talk page regarding the articles they created, including copyright violations among the many problems. -boldblazer (talk) 07:25, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
Page reverted to redirect as per Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/2038 FIFA World Cup (2nd nomination). I consider it  Done--P1221 (talk) 08:55, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done Tinton5 (talk) 23:39, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
Done Wikibijay1 (talk) 10:26, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
Now it is done. PJvanMill)talk( 11:25, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done Andcentra (talk) 08:17, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
 Fixed Tinton5 (talk) 23:40, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 18:59, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD and Tinton5.--Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:52, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 19:02, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 19:02, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 19:02, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done — WILDSTARtalk 16:21, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done - the cleanup work at least. As for notability, I've left the tag up for now; I'm thinking it might be borderline notable (emphasis on might), but it depends on how AfD participants would evaluate the reliability and independence of certain sources, and there might be better sources out there. PJvanMill)talk( 21:08, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done User:Jeffreydavidspeck
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:33, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Streamelements - streaming platform. The tone of the article is promotional and the sources need proper evaluation (esp. at "CEO Doron Nir is frequently cited for his data-related industry observations, including being quoted by publications such as CNN, Bloomberg, Wall Street Journal, Washington Post, WIRED, and Los Angeles Times"). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbarmadillo (talk • contribs)
minus Removed, soft-deleted per WP:Articles for deletion/StreamElements. PJvanMill)talk( 19:29, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done TheAwesomeAtom (talk) 20:59, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Striking entry, as it is now quite neutral. I've done some further cleanup. I was going to point TheAwesomeAtom to the list at WP:PRESERVE, but nearly all of the deleted content failed independent verification. PJvanMill)talk( 20:40, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 18:34, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done - References with bare URLs converted; additional minor fixes. — WILDSTARtalk 21:16, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:46, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:46, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done - References with bare URLs converted. — WILDSTARtalk 20:11, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done someone has fixed this. jamacfarlane (talk) 23:03, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done by Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 09:20, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done issues resolved, looks good to me. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:10, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
This is done too Wikibijay1 (talk) 10:26, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
 Done per Wikibijay1 above. — WILDSTARtalk 15:58, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 15:37, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:37, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:46, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Not done yet, still some bare URLs found in references section. Tinton5 (talk) 22:15, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done for now. The article is being actively edited, there will be more urls.Less Unless (talk) 12:00, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Rievebug (talk) 19:48, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
information Note: Article was nominated for speedy deletion at 15:52, 21 November 2020 (UTC). — WILDSTARtalk 14:53, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
information Note: Article has been deleted. — WILDSTARtalk 15:54, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done Wikibijay1 (talk) 13:58, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
I'm going to disagree and say it's  Partly done. I feel like the tone of the history and the federal court case sections could be improved still. But, it does look better. I do have a question for @Wikibijay1:, though: when you uploaded the logo for the NSAI, you put the copyright for it as CC0. Are you sure that it is copyright free? Jcb cummings (talk) 18:33, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: I reviewed History section, but I feel it still requires additional check, in particular more sources and citations --P1221 (talk) 15:55, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done per Wikibijay1 above. information Note: This project no longer accepts requests for additional sources or citations be added to articles. — WILDSTARtalk 15:23, 24 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done This was already completed by another editor. Rievebug (talk) 19:51, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
Technically  Done, though I'm not happy leaving it as a one-sentence stub. PJvanMill)talk( 21:21, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done  A S U K I T E   18:46, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - TimSmit (talk) 18:50, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - TimSmit (talk) 18:41, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - TimSmit (talk) 22:23, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:04, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:04, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:04, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Cleaned up the article — DestinationFearFan (talk) 17:38, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Style/layout and additional miscellaneous fixes. — WILDSTARtalk 23:20, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed References with errors. — WILDSTARtalk 17:49, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Radovan Sloboda: Apparently, the existing article about the ice hockey player (born 1982) was simply overwritten by an article about another person (politician, born 1966). I'm unfamiliar with procedures for this in the English Wikipedia, so please forgive me for just posting this here to alert someone more familiar to take a look on that matter --Memorino 00:03, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Reverted edits. — WILDSTARtalk 01:13, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed References. — WILDSTARtalk 17:21, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Converted References with bare URLs. — WILDSTARtalk 15:58, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Minor style/layout fixes, deleted extra column in Freight Equipment table, others appear OK on my screen. — WILDSTARtalk 16:44, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Converted bare urls, formatted images for a better look Less Unless (talk) 16:32, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Converted References with bare URLs. — WILDSTARtalk 23:51, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed Reference with bare URL, and replaced redlink. — WILDSTARtalk 23:51, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 23:09, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done SnazzyInfinity (talk • contribs) 20:22, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed some brackets. Wynn Liaw (talk) 03:30, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Considering this one done, since this project no longer accepts requests for additional sources. — WILDSTARtalk 16:36, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
This was a translation from the German WP. The article was translated, the sources not carriewd over. This is a common problem, because the deWP handles sources a little differently and the CITE macros don't translate properly. So I fixed a few and added them. Everyone working with articles on a figure from a non-English speaking country should check the WP for that country's language. DGG ( talk ) 21:12, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Completed uniform citation styling and date formatting. — WILDSTARtalk 18:18, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - though the second one just goes to a search page and could use improvement. MarnetteD|Talk 01:07, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Converted References with bare URLs. — WILDSTARtalk 08:50, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Converted References with bare URLs. — WILDSTARtalk 10:13, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 Not done Moved to draft space by Mccapra. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:53, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Santadas Kathiababa - The most critically deprived article I've ever seen that isn't nominated for deletion. I have tried to correct some grammar here and there but I really need help. It has no sources and is poorly written. I sometimes try to correct something but I sometimes see that the context changes and I have no clue what the writer meant. Wretchskull (talk) 14:40, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: @Wretchskull: Maybe because the contributor(s) is removing tags (including {{notability}}); he is also doing so in another (Bengali) wiki. He has been warned several times by several wikipedians, but he never listens. And now he is doing the same here. Meghmollar2017 • Talk • 14:17, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 Not done Moved to draft space by John B123. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:54, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done - I was not able to find that without buying the issue in question, but I did find a different source. Thankfully it was just sourcing a claim as to the subject matter and location, which seems to be easy enough to find.  A S U K I T E   21:34, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done  A S U K I T E   16:19, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
question mark Suggestion: 1ctinus, best to post your cleanup request here. — WILDSTARtalk 17:46, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
Not done – empty request — WILDSTARtalk 19:10, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done by Bbarmadillo. Bbarmadillo (talk) 16:08, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done. extensive rewrite. DGG ( talk ) 21:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done. to be exact, done to the small amount needed, Most of the history section is fully justified by the detailed material that follows. DGG ( talk ) 21:50, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Chia Pet - Terracotta figurines, often in the shape of characters, people or animals, on which chia is grown. Excessive product descriptions, reads as a collector's guide as opposed to a wikipedia article. Waxworker (talk) 20:13, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
 DoneTheAwesomeAtom (talk) 10:11, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:41, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 22:33, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done by Arigatō tokoro. Less Unless (talk) 22:34, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done The article for this unsigned entry had a few style/layout errors, which I fixed. North America1000 12:07, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Trimmed links, added proper headings.ThinkHat (talk) 19:58, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done - Fixed External link with bare URL. — WILDSTARtalk 08:55, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:35, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: Per a cursory review, the references are well formatted, and this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of references, so struck part of the nomination above. North America1000 23:26, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: Striking my formal cleanup request, as I ran this article by the GoCE in July and the result was satisfactory. — Goszei (talk) 23:54, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Not done turned to Draft:Edward Mark Druce Whitehead. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 15:55, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done I have shortened the article, removed more puffery, reorganized a bit. Less Unless (talk) 13:52, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
 Doneshortened the exhibitions section Less Unless (talk) 14:03, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 18:17, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 16:32, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:18, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done [[MarialeegRVT (talk) 20:55, 1 February 2021 (UTC)]]
 Done, shortened, added more sections. Less Unless (talk) 14:06, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
Comment I have removed inappropriate sourcing and also have nominated it for deletion - I don't think he passes the guidelines.Less Unless (talk) 14:48, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 Not done the article was deleted. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:21, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 Not done - the article was deleted.Less Unless (talk) 15:51, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done (diff). North America1000 16:57, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:43, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 Not done the article was moved to Draft:Kevin McMahon (filmmaker)
 Done: Another user has addressed this matter (diff, diff). North America1000 03:44, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
☒N Deleted PJvanMill)talk( 21:10, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done I have 'fixed' this, but in a rather brutal way (not much is left of it). PJvanMill)talk( 21:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
information Note: I have proposed to merge it into the main article here. Your input would be appreciated. PJvanMill (talk) 13:24, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done This and another article have been merged into the article on the series, which I've rewritten as well as the articles on the seven individual books. PJvanMill)talk( 19:07, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done The article still has issues like extraneous and unreferenced info, but it no longer reads like a CV. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 18:04, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Additional grammar and style cleanup. werewolf (talk) 03:53, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Removed remaining non-notable and non-neutral text and fixed some style issues. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:36, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed bare URLs, tagged Washington Post citations with "Subscription Needed". -- WILDSTAR talk 12:53, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Since the listing appeared here, several volunteer editors have straightened out the article and removed the promotional language. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:22, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done by Ghostofakina and Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:34, 13 March 2020 (UTC)
 Done - Removed a lot of non-neutral professional minutiae and non-neutral promotional prose. Article would still benefit from a few more sources. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:19, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done The article has been improved via dozens or edits by a wide variety of contributors since this request 10 months ago. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 23:58, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Kathy Griffin - I edit on a smartphone so moving texts around is a challenge:
    • this BLP might need to integrate Controversies sections into career sections.
    • Mark any statements needing sourcing.
    • Mark any sections needing expanding.
    • open to any suggestions to improve the overall article. Many thanks in advance! Gleeanon409 (talk) 22:43, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: - I would consider this request to be outdated or moot because Griffin's article is frequently edited by many contributors, so the above issues have slowly been tackled over time while new ones have arisen. I see few passages that need better sourcing or expansion, while the call to generally improve the article or combine sections are matters of opinion that can be discussed at its Talk page. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 23:56, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Elvira Fortunato - Inventor of the paper transistor and pioneer of paper electronics. I drafted this article and it's my first article. It's partly translated from the Portuguese Wikipedia page, I added new information and more relevant sources and links to scientific papers. --IsabelAllegro (talk) 10:17, 10 May 2020 (GMT+1)
information Note: The cleanup this seems to need is: improving the formatting of the awards section, some copyediting and citing in the first paragraph of the career section, and removing/rewriting/re-citing some statements based on non-independent sources. PJvanMill (talk) 22:02, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done Based on the recommendations from the author and the commenter above. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 00:11, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive_16&oldid=1138416939"