Talk:Judgment Day (2008)/GA1

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This is a decent article, but the prose needs some work. These are only samples; please go through the text throughout to spot similar issues:

• "The main event was a Steel cage match, a match fought within a cage formed by placing four sheets of mesh metal around, in, or against the edges of the wrestling ring." – "The main event was a Steel cage match, which is fought in a cage with four sheets of mesh metal around, in, or against the edges of the wrestling ring."
• "up on the"?
• "$21.9" – less than thirty bucks?
• "The event featured seven professional wrestling matches, performances with pre-determined outcomes between wrestlers with fictional personalities that are portrayed as real, were featured on the event's card." – "The event featured ... were featured"?

Also, take a look at the prose at an FA such as No Way Out (2004), which flows a bit better. Gary King (talk) 03:40, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Fixed them all for ThinkBlue who is not online right now.--WillC 07:43, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Looks good, passing Gary King (talk) 19:41, 3 December 2008 (UTC)