Feedback from New Page Review process
editI left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Please add sourcing. Thank you.
I dream of horses (Hoofprints) (Neigh at me) 23:00, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
Rewrite necessary
editThis article comes eerily close to copyvio (see here) and the corresponding speedy deletion. There is nothing wrong with using sources but copy and paste is not okay. Please rewrite the text from the source in your own words. The Banner talk 12:26, 17 November 2024 (UTC)