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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:57, 19 March 2018 (UTC).

  • Article is new and long enough. It is neutral, and cite sources inline. However, the last sentence of the first paragraph under subsection "Career" misses a citation.(#1) "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports only low-rate similarities. The hook is well-formatted, neutral, interesting and its length is within limit. The phrase in the hook "an award-winning conductor" does not exist in the article.(#2) Other facts of the hook are cited inline. QPQ is missing.(#3) I will aprove after the three issues are addressed. CeeGee 13:54, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
Thank you for looking so fast, - please have a little patience ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:00, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
CeeGee, I managed to add the award. The tours with the MCO - mentioned on the German Wikipedia - are no longer mentioned in recent biographies. We can comment that out until after DYK. I like to mention some notable conductors who may have influenced him. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:03, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your efforts. However, 1) the text added for "award winning" relates to an award given to the orchestra and not to the person. 2) The sentence beginning with "The orchestra made several tours in Europe, ..." still lacks a citation. 3) Waiting for the realization of the QPQ required. CeeGee 06:32, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
Don't wait, look (for the qpq I mean). - I'll drop the sentence without ref until after DYK. - When an opera recording gets an award, all singers participating get it, - I'd think a conductor even more so, he is the one who shapes an orchestra to being "orchestra of the year". But here you go:
ALT1: ... that Antonello Manacorda, who made an award-winning recording of Schubert's symphonies with his Kammerakademie Potsdam, conducted Mozart operas at La Fenice and Meyerbeer's grand opera in Frankfurt? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:41, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
  • ALT1 is OK. Its facts are cited inline. Its length is within limit. The sentence without citation is removed. QPQ was done. Sorry, I missed to check it above, and you did not mention it explicitly. Everything is fine now. Good to go. CeeGee 09:58, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
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