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A user with 8,300 edits. Account created on 9 March 2011.
2 October 2024
- 19:1019:10, 2 October 2024 diff hist −6 m List of current heads of state and government →Other states: "another" implies that these states are UN member states as well. current
- 19:0319:03, 2 October 2024 diff hist +8 m Elections in Nicaragua →2011: don't know why 2016 specifically wasn't its own section current
30 September 2024
- 17:2017:20, 30 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Battle of the Salado →Battle: typo current
26 September 2024
- 14:1714:17, 26 September 2024 diff hist +26 m Indian independence movement →Result of movements by Gandhi
24 September 2024
- 00:0700:07, 24 September 2024 diff hist +235 User talk:Pluma →Israel–Hamas war possible malformed link Tag: Reverted
- 00:0600:06, 24 September 2024 diff hist 0 Israel–Hamas war →top: fixing incomplete link from my last edit. Also changing wording from "coalition" to "association" since the actions listed are not all known to be formally coordinated between the Iran-linked parties.
23 September 2024
- 19:1019:10, 23 September 2024 diff hist −13 Conquest of the Canary Islands →top: "and described" is unclear and makes it sound like its missing "is" or "has been" or "can be". Also, I think combining the two periods into the lead sentence flowed a bit more slowly, since it describes the nature of the article's subject itself instead of a categorization of the subject. current
- 18:5318:53, 23 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Israel–Hamas war →top: removing a semicolon I accidentally left when splitting the sentence these used to all be combined into
- 18:5218:52, 23 September 2024 diff hist +154 Israel–Hamas war →top: "axis of resistance" is an informal term that doesn't refer to an agreed-upon or organized set of actors. It also notably is not always described as including Hamas. I kept it in as a link though because I don't want to unilaterally completely override the previous decision to include it.
22 September 2024
- 19:1019:10, 22 September 2024 diff hist −750 m List of U.S. states and territories by GDP having an asterisk indicating that these are all US states or territories on every single item is completely unnecessary. Also removing repeated citation.
20 September 2024
- 16:4416:44, 20 September 2024 diff hist +109 Literary realism →See also: Possibly merits its own subsection under #Sub-genres_of_literary_realism but is arguably more of a blend with another genre than a subgenre proper.
18 September 2024
- 17:2217:22, 18 September 2024 diff hist +4 m Mexican Texas →Immigration current
17 September 2024
- 23:1523:15, 17 September 2024 diff hist −7 m History of San Antonio →Mexican War of Independence and Mexican period: oops
- 23:1523:15, 17 September 2024 diff hist +1,854 History of San Antonio →The Texas Revolution: splitting off section about San Antonio during the Mexican period. Section could use some expansion.
- 22:3622:36, 17 September 2024 diff hist +2 m Juan Bautista de las Casas →Capture and arrest: light copy editing
- 03:3403:34, 17 September 2024 diff hist −134 Cinde Warmington →2024 gubernatorial campaign: information is repeated (I accidentally added the repeated information but I think it fits better in the place I added it due to the election having been completed. current
16 September 2024
- 19:1319:13, 16 September 2024 diff hist +321 Cinde Warmington →2024 gubernatorial campaign: updating for election loss
- 19:0919:09, 16 September 2024 diff hist −5 m Cinde Warmington →Political positions: correcting tense
- 19:0819:08, 16 September 2024 diff hist −100 Cinde Warmington →top: not anymore
12 September 2024
- 21:1121:11, 12 September 2024 diff hist +82 Pax Britannica →top: previous lead sentence had several problems. 1: it said pax britannica was the time period itself instead of referring specifically to the peace between great powers. 4: not mentioning Britain until the next sentence excludes its critical part of the direct definition. 3: Saying it was the period of relative peace between great powers is very vague and doesn't specify a time period except for through the link. Changed to better match content in article. Not sure if "roughly" is needed.
3 September 2024
- 13:5313:53, 3 September 2024 diff hist +611 Lists of most common surnames in European countries →Spain: adding missing origin of name
30 August 2024
- 16:1816:18, 30 August 2024 diff hist −13 Tamale →top: Previous link was for "nacatamal", which didn't explicitly contained the information cited. This link is for the word "tamal" itself and contains the corresponding information.
29 August 2024
- 00:5700:57, 29 August 2024 diff hist −2 m Cohabitation in the United States →Legal status: oops, formatting error from my last edit current
- 00:5600:56, 29 August 2024 diff hist +102 Cohabitation in the United States →Legal status: Giving each state its own subsection because some states had one while the first bit of the section was just about a hodgepodge of various states.
28 August 2024
- 23:2223:22, 28 August 2024 diff hist +8 m Octonion →History
26 August 2024
- 13:2713:27, 26 August 2024 diff hist −94 Virginia →top: making sentences a bit clearer and simpler
9 August 2024
- 22:1422:14, 9 August 2024 diff hist −4 m 2024 United States presidential election →top: "has led" implies that there are still calls for him to drop out, which I imagine are few since he already dropped out.
- 16:0816:08, 9 August 2024 diff hist +7 m 2024 Kursk offensive →top
- 01:0601:06, 9 August 2024 diff hist +7 Bangladesh →top: the linked page is of native language speakers, not total language speakers.
8 August 2024
- 01:0101:01, 8 August 2024 diff hist +12 m Party leaders of the United States House of Representatives →top
7 August 2024
- 18:4618:46, 7 August 2024 diff hist −33 2026 United States Senate elections →Kentucky: The politico article given as a source only mentioned the information about McConnell in passing, so I replaced it with another source that addressed the topic directly. Also made some minor copy edits.
- 18:1518:15, 7 August 2024 diff hist −302 Women in the Mexican–American War →In the United States: trying to make the language a bit more biased. Also removed unsourced content that reads like the writer projecting their own views on the topic. current
26 July 2024
- 15:4715:47, 26 July 2024 diff hist −7 m 1980 Democratic Party presidential primaries →top: saying 2024 twice is redundant
24 July 2024
- 16:0916:09, 24 July 2024 diff hist −33 Monad (Gnosticism) The overview should just be the lead section, with parts moved into ==Historical background== Tag: Disambiguation links added
23 July 2024
- 18:4318:43, 23 July 2024 diff hist +17 Self-coup →top: correcting date to match that of the source
21 July 2024
- 19:0519:05, 21 July 2024 diff hist +24 2024 United States presidential election →Political violence: "the target" fits better than "the victim" since there were other victims of the assassination attempt but not other targets. Added reference to injuries to indicate the progress of the attempt.
11 July 2024
- 12:5412:54, 11 July 2024 diff hist −9 Ivory Coast →top: listing Côte d'Ivoire first since it's the name of the article.
29 June 2024
- 18:2518:25, 29 June 2024 diff hist −34 m Angu →First contact with the Toulambi: I don't see how a citation is needed here when this sentence already arguably has too many citations
23 June 2024
- 19:3619:36, 23 June 2024 diff hist +81 m Sam Houston →Texas Revolution: correcting based on information in the Treaty of Velasco article
19 June 2024
- 15:4015:40, 19 June 2024 diff hist −5 m Federal holidays in the United States →List of federal holidays: to better match the spacing in equivalent Independence day cell
- 15:3815:38, 19 June 2024 diff hist +926 Federal holidays in the United States →List of federal holidays
- 15:3215:32, 19 June 2024 diff hist +166 Thanksgiving (United States) →Bibliography: adding archived source due to deadlink
21 May 2024
- 04:0304:03, 21 May 2024 diff hist +555 Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 May 20 →⚔ Tag: Disambiguation links added
- 03:5603:56, 21 May 2024 diff hist +330 Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 May 20 →Get out
3 April 2024
- 06:5906:59, 3 April 2024 diff hist −11 Southern Athabaskan languages →Family division: intext citation was not needed, and "recent years" is no longer a particularly accurate (or precise) description for the time period between 1968 and 1998. Also edited a bit for clarity and neutrality. current
27 March 2024
- 22:4622:46, 27 March 2024 diff hist −4 m John William Smith (politician) →top: the Edward Dwyer linked was born in 1895 and appears to have never left Europe, and so I'm pretty sure he isn't the Edward Dwyer this is meant to link to
11 March 2024
- 02:0702:07, 11 March 2024 diff hist −63 Christopher Nolan updating Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
6 March 2024
- 23:5323:53, 6 March 2024 diff hist −10 Nikki Haley saying “in US history” is redundant since it’s clear what country a US Republican Party primary would take place in Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
25 January 2024
- 06:1406:14, 25 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Killing of David Henry Breaux →top: forgot a comma
- 06:1406:14, 25 January 2024 diff hist +499 Killing of David Henry Breaux →top: "unhoused man" doesn't describe the most notable thing about him or his primary identity
