User contributions for W E Hill

2 November 2009

• 19:1319:13, 2 November 2009 diff hist +38 m The Population Bomb grammar
• 18:4318:43, 2 November 2009 diff hist −1 The Population Bomb →Restatement of Malthusian Theory: typos, grammar
• 18:4018:40, 2 November 2009 diff hist −29 The Population Bomb removing "too short" lead tag - I expanded the lead & length of lead is appropriate for an article of this length, fixed typos
• 18:2718:27, 2 November 2009 diff hist −1,476 The Population Bomb moved templates to top of article - they apply to the whole article anyway, reorganized article completely, kept content
• 16:3716:37, 2 November 2009 diff hist +607 The Population Bomb restored paragraph which tells how population is growing - it is relevant to criticisms that predictions didn't come true & Malthusian arguments which are discussed 2 x, moved metals bet to See Also
• 16:1116:11, 2 November 2009 diff hist +179 Historical rankings of presidents of the United States No edit summary
• 15:5115:51, 2 November 2009 diff hist −1 Historical rankings of presidents of the United States →Scholar survey results: moved paragraph re. # of president to immediately under the table
• 15:4915:49, 2 November 2009 diff hist −879 Historical rankings of presidents of the United States →Scholar survey results: rm Rasmussen 2007 from this table - it was NOT a scholar survey

31 October 2009

• 13:0413:04, 31 October 2009 diff hist −100 David Souter No edit summary
• 12:2712:27, 31 October 2009 diff hist +105 David Souter Moved a sentence for better chronological flow, fixed a citation, and made a few grammar changes, commented out access dates
• 12:0112:01, 31 October 2009 diff hist −308 David Souter →U.S. Supreme Court appointment: same sources and information, but a more chronological order
• 11:0511:05, 31 October 2009 diff hist −409 David Souter No edit summary
• 10:4210:42, 31 October 2009 diff hist +548 David Souter →U.S. Supreme Court appointment
• 09:2609:26, 31 October 2009 diff hist +5 Sonal Shah (economist) No edit summary

30 October 2009

• 20:4220:42, 30 October 2009 diff hist +10 Julian Simon repl ALL CAPS with Title Case, moved honorary degree frome education to honors
• 19:5019:50, 30 October 2009 diff hist +95 Julian Simon Typo and grammar.

28 October 2009

• 14:1614:16, 28 October 2009 diff hist +468 The Population Bomb improved readability, marked where cites are needed, substituted a few neutral terms for POV terms
• 12:4812:48, 28 October 2009 diff hist −12 m Paul R. Ehrlich formatting problem
• 12:2712:27, 28 October 2009 diff hist +10 m Paul R. Ehrlich No edit summary
• 12:2212:22, 28 October 2009 diff hist +3 m Paul R. Ehrlich No edit summary
• 12:1412:14, 28 October 2009 diff hist +20 Paul R. Ehrlich minor fixes
• 11:4011:40, 28 October 2009 diff hist +345 Paul R. Ehrlich + links, cats, pic
• 07:4407:44, 28 October 2009 diff hist +650 Talk:Paul R. Ehrlich →Watchlist request
• 07:3707:37, 28 October 2009 diff hist +26 Paul R. Ehrlich restored POV tag, it was discussed on talk page @19:34, 21 October 2009 - I will make it more obvious by creating a new section
• 07:3107:31, 28 October 2009 diff hist −560 Paul R. Ehrlich reorganize
• 06:2706:27, 28 October 2009 diff hist +1,239 Paul R. Ehrlich clean up & neutral some POV, correct errors in cites, + to infobox, expand slightly, rem "that followed due to the specificity of the dates in his predictions" POV & not supported by source.
• 04:4304:43, 28 October 2009 diff hist +1 Paul R. Ehrlich minor clean up
• 04:3504:35, 28 October 2009 diff hist −298 Paul R. Ehrlich removed a sentence which was a misstatement of Knudsen's analysis - she does not state there is a cause and effect relationship between the book and the "blame"
• 04:2604:26, 28 October 2009 diff hist −717 Paul R. Ehrlich rem quote which is cherry picked illustration of "central argument" of Population Bomb, & which is inaccurate - WP:Cherry, remove verbiage, combined two sentences with same thought for conciseness
• 03:3203:32, 28 October 2009 diff hist −134 Paul Ehrlich (disambiguation) No edit summary
• 03:3103:31, 28 October 2009 diff hist +1 Paul Ehrlich (disambiguation) removed Paul S. Ehrlich of Students for Democratic Society, no such person
• 03:1803:18, 28 October 2009 diff hist +100 Paul Ehrlich No edit summary
• 00:0100:01, 28 October 2009 diff hist +64 Paul R. Ehrlich fixed typo, added fields to infobox

27 October 2009

• 12:1212:12, 27 October 2009 diff hist −60 Blackface →Cape "Coon" Carnival: copy edit
• 10:5310:53, 27 October 2009 diff hist +47 Robert H. Michel No edit summary
• 10:5010:50, 27 October 2009 diff hist −208 Robert H. Michel rem sentence which merely repeated a thought already expressed in the article, and which was ambigious as to cause and effect, fixed disamb link
• 10:3810:38, 27 October 2009 diff hist 0 m Michel (name) →Surname
• 10:3610:36, 27 October 2009 diff hist +189 Michel (name) added surnames
• 08:1308:13, 27 October 2009 diff hist +37 Blackface →United States: cite needed tags added
• 08:1208:12, 27 October 2009 diff hist +138 Blackface →U.S.: copy edit - not sure incident with Australian troupe in Australia is in the correct section of this article
• 07:5207:52, 27 October 2009 diff hist −24 Blackface →"Coons" of Cape Town: rename section - it is not about the "coons" of Cape Town, it is about the carnivals
• 07:4207:42, 27 October 2009 diff hist +17 Blackface updated link from an archived single page to a live site - by the way, "coon festival" was renamed several years ago
• 07:3607:36, 27 October 2009 diff hist −148 Blackface →External links: sites used in creation of article and cited in the article should not be duplicated in the external link section, WP:External links
• 07:3307:33, 27 October 2009 diff hist −165 Blackface →External links: rem external link to archived out-of-date page, website itself is no longer operative [http://www.sanztrust.org.nz/]

26 October 2009

• 21:4921:49, 26 October 2009 diff hist −781 Blackface →"Displaying Blackness" and the shaping of racist archetypes: rem racially offensive quote - adds nothing to the article except a gratuitous 5 x repetition of the n word
• 21:2421:24, 26 October 2009 diff hist −281 Al Jolson →Performing in blackface: copy edit
• 21:0721:07, 26 October 2009 diff hist 0 m Al Gore format all caps to title case, alphabetize cats

21 October 2009

• 22:4322:43, 21 October 2009 diff hist +90 Paul R. Ehrlich No edit summary
• 22:3322:33, 21 October 2009 diff hist −687 Paul R. Ehrlich cite work
• 21:2521:25, 21 October 2009 diff hist 0 The Population Bomb No edit summary