Talk:Impossible Remixes/GA1

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:23, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Starting review.

Impossible Remixes is the fifth remix album by Australian singer-songwriter Kylie Minogue --> Minogue is not a singer-songwriter per definition of the term. Change it to singer and songwriter
The album was materialized while on her Intimate and Live Tour --> Give the tour year here in braces
Mushroom released it after the UK counterpart Mixes was released on a two-CD set instead of a planned vinyl set --> This line is not clear, please rephrase it making it clear which album you are talking about
A cover sleeve shot by British photographer Simon Emmett, Minogue had personally commended the cover sleeve for showing "a lot of heart" --> The cover sleeve for the album was shot by British photographer Simon Emmett; Minogue had personally commended the cover sleeve for showing "a lot of heart"
from limited music critics, where they viewed the release as tedious and the material as repetitive --> from music critics, who viewed the release as tedious and the material as repetitive
reaching thirty-seven on the Australian ARIA Albums Chart --> reaching number 37 on the Australian ARIA Albums Chart
Deconstruction and Mushroom confirmed the release of two remix albums entitled Mixes and Impossible Remixes --> add the word respectively, otherwise its not clear who is releasing which album
but initially pressings were on sale two months earlier --> initial pressings
The album shares majority of the tracks from Mixes.[7] The album features remixes of three singles --> The album shares majority of the tracks from Mixes and features remixes of three singles --> simply join them
The remixes have all been previously --> The remixes had all been previously
Emmett commented on the "Cowboy Style" and Impossible Remixes photo shoot; "Shot on a shoestring [...] There are no fashion constraints with Kylie --> Emmett commented on the "Cowboy Style" and Impossible Remixes photo shoot;: "There are no fashion constraints with Kylie...
walks an unrelenting line -- with ten versions of four songs -> Here in the quote you are using two dashes in-between, you should use em-dash like this: "walks an unrelenting line—with ten versions of four songs"
You can use Reference #20 in the prose also, unnecessary extra referencing should be deleted.
The track listing needs a source. iTunes link will do.

On hold for 7 days. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:59, 18 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: >> Done all requirements above. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:33, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]