Talk:Moshing/GA1
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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 00:50, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
- I am going to have to fail the article for the following reasons:
- YouTube isn't a reliable source.
- References need cleaning up, as there are bare references, and ref 11 and ref 8 needs more info
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”.
- "Origins of the term" → "Term origins"
- "Origins of the dance" → "Dance origins"
- Too many bold terms throughout the article.
- Surly there is some infobox for the article
- Quotes should have a reference directly after the quote.
- References should only go after punctuation.
- There are several things that go unverified.
- A thorough copy-edit is needed before it can ever pass.
- There are several more problems throughout the page. I suggest a Peer Review.