Talk:Shiori Fujisaki/GA1
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Nominator: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 11:05, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 03:04, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
Six GA Criteria
[edit]1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale.
Lead
[edit]-Mention her game series was made by Konami
-This has earned her the nickname the "Last Boss of Dating Sims". Very unclear, specify that this is among fans of the series.
Appearances
[edit]-Any more information on the idol part? It seems odd that it only covers the first appearance and nothing else.
Concept and creation
[edit]-Looks good
Reception
[edit]-"Shiori's debut single "Oshiete Mr. Sky"," Is this as a virtual idol?
-"Mami Kingetsu's CD debut of Shiori was a particularly exciting moment for Chi Bi" This seems largely unassociated with the points surrounding it regarding Shiori's role in the dating sim.
-Is an academic textbook really a reliable source? This seems mostly for educational purposes for academic institutions, and to my knowledge these don't tend to be usable sources for articles.
Overall
[edit]-@Cukie Gherkin: Not a requirement, but I'd suggest using the sources on the talk page to bolster the current article's coverage. This will help with its depth of coverage. Overall looking decent, let me know if you need any clarification.