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AfC notification: Draft:Sarbans has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sarbans. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 13:19, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sarbans (April 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Devonian Wombat was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sarbans and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Sarbans, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Devonian Wombat (talk) 09:53, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jaspreetkaur24! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Devonian Wombat (talk) 09:53, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Harjeet singh (innovator) moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Harjeet singh (innovator), is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. DMySon (talk) 04:28, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Corrected sir Jaspreetkaur24 (talk) 07:52, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Citation overkill

Hi. On your draft, there are five citations after the person's name. I don't think this needs that many citations. See Wikipedia:CITEKILL for more information. Thanks! I.hate.spam.mail.here (talk | contributions) 06:17, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Corrected sir Jaspreetkaur24 (talk) 07:52, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harjeet Singh (innovator) (April 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bonadea was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

WP:CITEKILL, and almost all the sources are based on the same press release, so almost none of them can be used.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Harjeet Singh (innovator) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Harjeet Singh (innovator), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

bonadea contributions talk 15:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

April 2022

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate your contributions; however, it appears you may have written a Wikipedia article, or a draft for a Wikipedia article, about yourself. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – please see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). If you wish to add to or change an existing article about yourself, you are welcome to propose the changes by visiting the article's talk page. Please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. If your article has already been deleted, please see: Why was the page I created deleted?, and if you feel the deletion was an error, please discuss this with the deleting administrator. Thank you. bonadea contributions talk 16:00, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sarbans robotics moved to draft space as Draft:Sarbans Robotics

An article you created, Sarbans robotics, doesn't appear to be ready for publication on Wikipedia yet. I've moved it to Draft:Sarbans Robotics and it can be worked on there. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and other standards and thus is ready to be moved back into article mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. --Flopsy Mopsy and Cottonmouth (talk) 05:35, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Harjeet Singh (innovator)

Hello, Jaspreetkaur24. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Harjeet Singh (innovator), a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:04, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Harjeet Singh (innovator)

Hello, Jaspreetkaur24. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Harjeet Singh".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:04, 25 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Sarbans Robotics

Hello, Jaspreetkaur24. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Sarbans Robotics, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 06:01, 6 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Sarbans Robotics

Hello, Jaspreetkaur24. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Sarbans Robotics".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 05:55, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]