Wikipedia:Peer review/Girlschool discography/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I think to have compiled a fairly complete list of all recordings by the band Girlschool. I need advice on formatting the article and on eventual mistakes for a future FA List candidature.
Thanks, Lewismaster (talk) 18:33, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
Hello Lewis. Here are my comments:-- ♫Greatorangepumpkin♫ T 16:14, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Infobox
Why no caption?- added caption
- Lead
Avoid bolding: The discography of Girlschool,- fixed
"studio albums" should be "studio albums"- fixed
So as compilation and EP and single- fixed
Their greatest success came with the split EP St. Valentine's Day Massacre, recorded with Motörhead, which reached number five on the UK Single Chart. delink EP- fixed
Girlschool's songs appear also on many heavy metal compilations published all over the world, often associated with other notable bands of the NWOBHM, like Motörhead, Tygers of Pan Tang, Saxon, Angel Witch, Tank, etc. delink compilations, remove "etc."- fixed
- Albums
<ref>{{cite web | url = http://charts.org.nz/showinterpret.asp?interpret=Girlschool | title = Discography Girlschool | accessdate = 8 December 2010 | publisher = charts.org.nz}}</ref>''publisher is "Hung Medien"- veryfied and fixed
<ref name="Billboard Albums">{{cite web|url={{Allmusic|class=artist|id=girlschool-p4369/charts-awards/billboard-albums|pure_url=yes}}|title=Girlschool > Charts & Awards > Billboard Albums|work=[[Allmusic]]|publisher=Macrovision|accessdate=10 December 2010}}</ref>publisher is "Rovi Corporation"- veryfied and fixed
The abbreviation of "Compact Cassette" is "CC"- Are you sure about this? In the FA discography articles Nirvana discography, Megadeth discography, Slipknot discography and in other discography articles the abbreviation used is CS and so it is in the example shown on Wikipedia:WikiProject Discographies/style. Lewismaster (talk) 21:12, 21 January 2011 (UTC)
Extended Plays are albums and belongs to the "Albums" section.- As above, FA discography articles list EPs on separate sections.
- Singles
Why is"—" denotes singles that did not chart, have not charted yet, or were not released.small written, and the other not?- fixed
- Selected other releases
- I think this should be deleted
- I'm not sure how or where to list the split albums done by Girlschool, what do you suggest? Lewismaster (talk) 21:12, 21 January 2011 (UTC)
- Explain what do you mean with "selected other releases"; it sounds to me like "non-official releases" or "unreleased albums and songs" or "bootlegs" or "session recordings". An explanation would be fine.
- I'll try to expand the section and make it an "Other appearances" one.
- Explain what do you mean with "selected other releases"; it sounds to me like "non-official releases" or "unreleased albums and songs" or "bootlegs" or "session recordings". An explanation would be fine.
- I'm not sure how or where to list the split albums done by Girlschool, what do you suggest? Lewismaster (talk) 21:12, 21 January 2011 (UTC)
- Music videos
- deserves a table with "director" column with references
- I would love do do so, but at the moment I could not retrieve any info about the directors. Should i keep the section or delete it? Lewismaster (talk) 21:12, 21 January 2011 (UTC)
- Keep, if directors are found. Have you tried MTV or VH1?-- ♫Greatorangepumpkin♫ T 10:38, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
- There's nothing on MTV or VH1. Girlschool never published their videos on VHS or DVD and it's hard to find references about them. I found only one director at the moment. Lewismaster (talk) 21:07, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
- Keep, if directors are found. Have you tried MTV or VH1?-- ♫Greatorangepumpkin♫ T 10:38, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
- I would love do do so, but at the moment I could not retrieve any info about the directors. Should i keep the section or delete it? Lewismaster (talk) 21:12, 21 January 2011 (UTC)