Talk:Yecheon

Please review my article

I am a Korean university student.

As a school project, I wrote a tour guide to introduce Yecheon, one of the Korean regions.

I want you to give me feedback.

Is it enough for you to understand the Yecheon area?

Does the banner picture I chose interest you in the Yecheon area?

If you give me feedback, I will revise it in the future and make it a better article.

(UTC)Jeong seolahYdaeun0306 05:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Wow, even though Yecheon is a small city, it contains a lot of information.

I think it will be a more complete page if more information about restaurants is added! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:07, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

It contains a variety of information on climate and maps, and it's good to understand the Yecheon area. It would be helpful to add more photos of each place!Parksungeun (talk) 06:14, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

The banner was not chosen by you, I did it with this edit. FredTC (talk) 01:06, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

@Ydaeun0306: Here are some ways you can make it better:

1. the first paragraph of an article should explain why a reader would want to visit a place. What makes it interesting, beyond just that it is a resort town?
2. We know that the places listed are in Yecheon, Gyeongsangbuk-do, because the article is called "Yecheon". In English Wikivoyage, it is wrong to include the city name in the address tabs of listings, unless the listing is in a different city (i.e., not in Yecheon). I explained this already on your talk page.

Please make these changes. Thank you. Ground Zero (talk) 15:59, 6 November 2024 (UTC)